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专题06 应用文写作20篇 考查范围：主题 题号 难度 知识点 一、书信写作 1 适中 申请/请求/建议 2 适中 学校活动,旅游观光 3 适中 日常生活 ,个人保健 4 适中 信息技术 ,申请/请求/建议 5 适中 学校活动 6 适中 学校生活,申请/请求/建议 7 适中 学校生活,语言与文化 8 适中 学校活动 9 适中 语言学习策略,申请/请求/建议 10 适中 学校活动,邀请 11 适中 方法/策略,申请/请求/建议 12 适中 学校生活,课程 13 困难 申请/请求/建议 14 适中 学校活动 15 适中 学习,社会问题与社会现象 16 适中 旅游观光 17 适中 职业内容,美术与摄影 18 适中 学校活动,人工智能 二、书面表达 19 适中 学校活动,道德与品行 20 适中 方法/策略,个人经历 一、书信写作 1．（23-24高二下·内蒙古呼和浩特市回民区·期中）假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你校组织了一场安全讲座，请你就此写一则通知。内容包括： ①讲座的时间、地点； ②讲座的主要内容； ③其他注意事项。 注意：①词数80左右； ②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24高二下·内蒙古名校联盟·期中）假定你是李华，你班上周举办的英语演讲比赛取得了圆满成功。请你给外教Mr Smith写封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 介绍演讲比赛的情况；2. 感谢他的指导和帮助。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr Smith, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua 3．（23-24高二下·内蒙古自治区赤峰市红山区赤峰第四中学·期中）假定你是李华，就读于北京某国际学校，你校将开展一次急救知识宣传活动。请你根据这项活动的主题，向全校同学发出倡议，内容包括： 1.掌握急救知识的重要性； 2.动员大家学习急救知识。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear students, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Students’ union 4．（23-24高二下·内蒙古通辽市科尔沁左翼中旗实验高级中学·期中）假定你是学生会的李华，你的外教Jim老师打算在学校举行一次英文诗歌创作大赛，他希望你能写一份公开信号召各位同学踊跃参加，内容包括： 1. 举行英文诗歌大赛的目的 2. 参加比赛的好处 3. 期待大家的踊跃参与 注意: 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear my fellow students, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Student Union 5．（23-24高二下·内蒙古自治区通辽市科尔沁区通辽市第一中学·期中）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jackson最近在考虑是否要出国留学，他来信征求你的意见。请你就此用英语给他写一封电子邮件，阐述你的观点，并给出理由(不少于三个)。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jackson, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6．（23-24高二下·内蒙古赤峰市第二实验中学·期中）假定你是李华,你准备参加学校举办的英文歌曲大赛。请给你班交换生Anna写一封邮件,请她给予指导。内容包括: 1. 说明比赛要求；2.请她推荐歌曲；3.请求陪同练习。 注意: 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行行文连贯。 Dear Anna , ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours , Li Hua 7．（23-24高二下·内蒙古自治区兴安盟·期中）上周，你所在的班级组织了一次户外旅行活动。请你给你的外国朋友Joe写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.旅行的经历； 2.收获和感受。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Joe， ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8．（23-24高二下·内蒙古阿拉善盟第一中学·期中）你在浏览学校英文论坛时，发现同学们就“互联网是一把双刃剑”这一主题展开了讨论。请你发一则帖子，发表自己的看法，内容包括： 1.你对互联网的观点；  2.对你的观点进行解释。 题目：The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（22-23高二下·内蒙古呼伦贝尔市满洲里市第一中学·期中）你是李华，两周前你从网上购买了一套书虫系列读物（Bookworm Series）昨天才到货，且包装破损，数量不足。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下： 1. 介绍购物情况 2. 反映存在问题 3. 提出解决方案 注意： 1. 词数100词左右 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯 3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词 可能用到的生词：投诉complaint n. To whom it may concern, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua 10．（23-24高二下·内蒙古乌兰浩特市第四中学·期中）假定你是李华，三周前你从网上买的一箱水果昨天才到货，且部分水果已经腐烂。请你就此向网店客服写邮件投诉，内容包括： 1. 投诉问题； 2. 解决方案； 3. 期待回复。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（21-22高二下·内蒙古通辽市开鲁县第一中学·期中）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack准备参加学校一年一度的越野赛，写信征求你的意见。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1.表示支持； 2.对此项运动的理解； 3.给出建议。 参考词汇：cross-country running race越野赛 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 12．（20-21高二下·内蒙古自治区赤峰第四中学·期中）假设你是王林，你的美国笔友John来信说他最近每天晚上玩手机到深夜，导致白天没有精神且食欲不振。他对此很担心，但又管不住自己，因此写信向你求助。请你用英语给John写一封回信，谈谈你的想法并给他一些建议。 要求： 1. 介绍你对“每天晚上玩手机到深夜”这个问题的看法； 2. 给出你对解决这个问题的建议； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（23-24高二下·内蒙古鄂尔多斯西部四校·期中）近年来，随着科技发展，电子产品越来越多，学生的汉子书写能力大大降低。假如你是校书法协会的会长，为了让他们重视书写，写一封倡议信。 内容包括： 1. 减少对电子产品的依赖，多动手写笔记。 2. 养成练书法和写日记的习惯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（23-24高二下·内蒙古通辽市科左后旗甘旗卡第二高级中学·期中）假如你是李华.你的英国笔友Peter在孔子课堂(the Confucius Academy)了解到了中国古典四大名著(China's four great classic novels)的知识并写信与你交流。作为一名古典文学爱好者，你读之后很高兴。回信给他，介绍你最爱的四大名著中的某个人物(character)以及原因。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以增加适当的细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 15．（20-21高二下·辽宁省鞍山市·期中）假设你是李华，上周四下午，你学校学生会举办了“世界地球日”活动。作为学校英语报社的记者，请你就本次活动写一篇题目为 “Earth Day, Take Action” 的英文报道。内容要点如下： 1.活动的时间、地点； 2.活动内容： (1)打扫教室卫生； (2)校园捡垃圾； (3)检查水龙头等； 3.活动的意义。 注意：词数80 左右；可适当增加细节使行文连贯 Earth Day, Take Action __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．（20-21高二下·辽宁省鞍山市·期中）假定你是学校英语杂志社记者, 上周你校开展了给贫困地区学生捐赠 “爱心包裹”的活动。请写一篇新闻报道。内容包括： 1. 活动时间与地点；2. 活动过程；3. 活动意义。 注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 Loving Parcels for Students in Need __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17．（23-24高二下·内蒙古包头市北方重工业集团有限公司第三中学·期中）假设你是李华，你上周刚刚参加了你校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛，并从三十名选手中脱颖而出，荣获“十佳奖”。在准备参赛期间，你的外教Mr.Craige对你提供了很多指导和帮助。现请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1.获奖情况及感受；    2.回顾准备过程；   3.感谢他的帮助；    4.邀他来家做客。 注意：1．词数100词左右；   2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 提示：十佳奖：Top Ten Prize    Dear Mr. Craige, The Internet ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 18．（19-20高二下·内蒙古通辽市·期中）假如你叫李华,你的朋友Jenny 来信向你询问如何保持健康.请你给她发一封e-mail 提出建议.内容如下: 1.注意合理饮食 2.保证充足睡眠 3.坚持锻炼身体,多参加体育活动 注意: 1.词数100左右. 2.可适当增添细节,以使行文连贯. Dear Jenny: ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 19．（19-20高二下·辽宁省鞍山市·期中）假定你是李华,你班的美国交换生Tom结束了在你校一年的学习，即将回国。你和同学打算于7月10日下午在班上为他开一个欢送会（farewell party），特写信邀请他参加。要点包括： 1.欢送会的时间和地点； 2.感谢Tom的帮助； 3.美好祝愿。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How time flies! It’s one year since you came to study Chinese in our school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 二、书面表达 20．（23-24高二下·内蒙古赤峰市敖汉旗箭桥中学·期中）网络在我们的日常生活中发挥着重要作用，它为我们带来很多便利，同时也有危害。请你谈谈网络的利与弊，以及你对网络使用的看法。 注意：1．词数80词左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Internet ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题06 应用文写作20篇 考查范围：主题 题号 难度 知识点 一、书信写作 1 适中 申请/请求/建议 2 适中 学校活动,旅游观光 3 适中 日常生活 ,个人保健 4 适中 信息技术 ,申请/请求/建议 5 适中 学校活动 6 适中 学校生活,申请/请求/建议 7 适中 学校生活,语言与文化 8 适中 学校活动 9 适中 语言学习策略,申请/请求/建议 10 适中 学校活动,邀请 11 适中 方法/策略,申请/请求/建议 12 适中 学校生活,课程 13 困难 申请/请求/建议 14 适中 学校活动 15 适中 学习,社会问题与社会现象 16 适中 旅游观光 17 适中 职业内容,美术与摄影 18 适中 学校活动,人工智能 二、书面表达 19 适中 学校活动,道德与品行 20 适中 方法/策略,个人经历 一、书信写作 1．（23-24高二下·内蒙古呼和浩特市回民区·期中）假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你校组织了一场安全讲座，请你就此写一则通知。内容包括： ①讲座的时间、地点； ②讲座的主要内容； ③其他注意事项。 注意：①词数80左右； ②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】NOTICE A safety lecture will be held in the school hall at 3:30 this Friday afternoon and it will last two hours. Everyone is welcome to attend the lecture. The lecture is believed to be meaningful and practical because you will get to know potential safety problems and how to avoid them. Besides, you will get the chance to learn first aid skills for emergencies. During the lecture, you will be encouraged and instructed to practise some of these skills. If you are interested in the lecture, please enter the school hall ahead of time and keep quiet during the lecture. The Students' Union 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为某国际学校的学生会主席，你校组织了一场安全讲座这一情况，就此写一则通知。 【详解】1.词汇积累 有意义的：meaningful→ significant 此外：Besides→ What’s more 机会：chance→ opportunity 对……感兴趣：be interested in→ be keen to 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：A safety lecture will be held in the school hall at 3:30 this Friday afternoon and it will last two hours. 拓展句：A safety lecture will be held in the school hall at 3:30 this Friday afternoon, which will last two hours. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The lecture is believed to be meaningful and practical because you will get to know potential safety problems and how to avoid them.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） 【高分句型2】If you are interested in the lecture, please enter the school hall ahead of time and keep quiet during the lecture.（运用了If引导的条件状语从句） 2．（23-24高二下·内蒙古名校联盟·期中）假定你是李华，你班上周举办的英语演讲比赛取得了圆满成功。请你给外教Mr Smith写封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 介绍演讲比赛的情况；2. 感谢他的指导和帮助。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr Smith, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mr Smith, I am delighted to inform you that our English speech contest was a success. My classmates showcased their talents and delivered outstanding speeches, expressing their aspirations and dreams with confidence. I want to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable guidance and support. Your expertise and assistance helped shape the students’ speeches and improve their English speaking skills. The students have gained a lot from this experience, and it would have been impossible without your help. Thank you again for your valuable contribution to the contest’s success. Sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr Smith写封电子邮件，介绍你班上周举办的英语演讲比赛的情况，并对他的指导和帮助表示感谢。 【详解】1.词汇积累 展示：showcase→present 做演讲：deliver speeches→address speeches 获得：gain→obtain 宝贵的：valuable→precious 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I want to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable guidance and support. Your expertise and assistance helped shape the students’ speeches and improve their English speaking skills. 拓展句：I want to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable guidance and support because your expertise and assistance helped shape the students’ speeches and improve their English speaking skills. 【点睛】【高分句型1】My classmates showcased their talents and delivered outstanding speeches, expressing their aspirations and dreams with confidence.（运用了现在分词作状语） 【高分句型2】The students have gained a lot from this experience, and it would have been impossible without your help.（运用了虚拟语气） 3．（23-24高二下·内蒙古自治区赤峰市红山区赤峰第四中学·期中）假定你是李华，就读于北京某国际学校，你校将开展一次急救知识宣传活动。请你根据这项活动的主题，向全校同学发出倡议，内容包括： 1.掌握急救知识的重要性； 2.动员大家学习急救知识。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear students, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Students’ union 【答案】Dear schoolmates In our daily life, it’s unavoidable that sometimes accidents happen or we fall ill suddenly. Therefore, it’s important for us to learn some first aid. First aid refers to simple medical treatment that is given as soon as possible to someone who is injured or who suddenly becomes ill. Let’s master first aid, which makes a great difference to our own lives as well as other people’s lives In many cases, it’s a matter of life and death. Learn how to respond to specific situations when someone is in danger and is waiting for medical professionals to arrive. Only in this way can we help those in need. Li Hua 【导语】这是一封倡议信。要求考生以李华的身份，就你校将开展一次急救知识宣传活动一事，根据这项活动的主题，向全校同学发出倡议。 【详解】词汇积累 重要的：important→ essential 不可避免的：unavoidable→ inescapable 受伤的：injured→ wounded 掌握：master→ grasp 句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：Therefore, it’s important for us to learn some first aid. 拓展句：Accordingly, it is paramount for us to acquire knowledge in basic emergency care. 【点睛】【高分句型1】First aid refers to simple medical treatment that is given as soon as possible to someone who is injured or who suddenly becomes ill.（使用了以medical treatment为先行词、关系代词that为引导词的定语从句以及以someone为先行词、关系代词who为引导词的定语从句） 【高分句型2】Only in this way can we help those in need.（使用了倒装句结构“only+介词短语”） 4．（23-24高二下·内蒙古通辽市科尔沁左翼中旗实验高级中学·期中）假定你是学生会的李华，你的外教Jim老师打算在学校举行一次英文诗歌创作大赛，他希望你能写一份公开信号召各位同学踊跃参加，内容包括： 1. 举行英文诗歌大赛的目的 2. 参加比赛的好处 3. 期待大家的踊跃参与 注意: 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear my fellow students, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Student Union 【答案】Dear fellow students, Our English teacher, Jim, is organizing an exciting poetry contest at school. It’s an opportunity to express ourselves through poems and showcase our creativity. Participating in this contest will help us improve our English language skills and gain recognition for our talents. It will also bring us closer together as a community through our love for literature. Whether you’re an experienced poet or just starting out, I encourage all of you to join. Let’s unleash our imaginations, pour our hearts into our poems, and create something beautiful. Let’s make this contest a success and witness the magic of poetry. Best regards! Student Union 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的外教Jim老师打算在学校举行一次英文诗歌创作大赛，他希望你能写一份公开信号召各位同学踊跃参加，由此要求考生写一封倡议信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 比赛：contest→competition 组织： organize→conduct 参与：participate in→take part in 提高： improve→enhance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Our English teacher, Jim, is organizing an exciting poetry contest at school. 拓展句：Our English teacher, Jim, is organizing an exciting poetry contest at school, which is greatly meaningful for everyone. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Participating in this contest will help us improve our English language skills and gain recognition for our talents. （运用了动名词作主语） 【高分句型2】Whether you’re an experienced poet or just starting out, I encourage all of you to join.（运用了whether...or引导的让步状语从句） 5．（23-24高二下·内蒙古自治区通辽市科尔沁区通辽市第一中学·期中）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jackson最近在考虑是否要出国留学，他来信征求你的意见。请你就此用英语给他写一封电子邮件，阐述你的观点，并给出理由(不少于三个)。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jackson, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jackson, I’m more than delighted to share my opinion, which I hope will be of some help to you. Frankly, I hold the view that it makes good sense to study abroad. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, exposure to a foreign language setting while we are studying abroad makes learning process engaging and effective. Moreover, bathed in a different culture of a foreign country, we can gain great insights into the world because cross-cultural experiences can give us a global perspective. Studying abroad takes us out of our comfort zone and changes us for the better, which is the most important from my perspective. All things considered, I hope you can choose to study abroad and start a new life. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Jackson写一封电子邮件，阐述关于留学的观点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 认为：hold the view that→think/believe 有帮助的：be of some help→be helpful 高兴的：delighted→glad 重要的：important→vital 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Moreover, bathed in a different culture of a foreign country, we can gain great insights into the world because cross-cultural experiences can give us a global perspective. 拓展句：Moreover, if we can be bathed in a different culture of a foreign country, we can gain great insights into the world because cross-cultural experiences can give us a global perspective. 【点睛】[高分句型1] To begin with, exposure to a foreign language setting while we are studying abroad makes learning process engaging and effective. (运用了while引导时间状语从句) [高分句型2] Studying abroad takes us out of our comfort zone and changes us for the better, which is the most important from my perspective. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 6．（23-24高二下·内蒙古赤峰市第二实验中学·期中）假定你是李华,你准备参加学校举办的英文歌曲大赛。请给你班交换生Anna写一封邮件,请她给予指导。内容包括: 1. 说明比赛要求；2.请她推荐歌曲；3.请求陪同练习。 注意: 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行行文连贯。 Dear Anna , ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours , Li Hua 【答案】Dear Anna, I’m writing to ask for your help. Our school will hold an English Singing Contest next weekend. I have signed up for it. It is required that the theme should be about nature. Each contestant is given up to five minutes to sing the song. So, would you please give me some recommendations on which song to choose？ Besides, what I need are the skills of singing, including pronunciation and intonation, which will perfect my performance. I’d appreciate it if you could practice it with me. Looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yours , Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Anna写信对学校举办的英文歌曲大赛给予指导。 【详解】1.词汇积累 要求：required→demanded 选手：contestant→competitors 建议：recommendations→suggestions 此外：Besides→Additionally 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：So, would you please give me some recommendations on which song to choose？ 扩展句：So, would you please give me some recommendations which are about  which song I should choose. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It is required that the theme should be about nature. Each contestant is given up to five minutes to sing the song. (运用了It作形式主语) 【高分句型2】Besides, what I need are the skills of singing, including pronunciation and intonation, which will perfect my performance. (运用了what引导的主语从句及which引导的非限制性定语从句) 7．（23-24高二下·内蒙古自治区兴安盟·期中）上周，你所在的班级组织了一次户外旅行活动。请你给你的外国朋友Joe写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.旅行的经历； 2.收获和感受。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Joe， ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Joe, I hope you're doing great. I'm writing to share about the amazing class trip we had last week, which was a nice break from our usual routine. We hiked through a forest filled with greenery, played various games, and enjoyed a picnic by a peaceful lake. This experience was not only enjoyable but also helped us bond more as a group. I realized how teamwork matters and how friendships grow stronger during such activities. The trip left a lasting impression on me, making me appreciate the great outdoors and the friendships among classmates even more. I'm looking forward to more trips like this in the future. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。请考生给你的外国朋友Joe写一封电子邮件，告知你所在的班级组织了一次户外旅行活动的情况。 【详解】1.词汇积累 充满：be filled with→be full of 帮助：help→assist 意识到：realize→be aware 令人惊讶的：amazing→astonishing 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：We hiked through a forest filled with greenery, played various games, and enjoyed a picnic by a peaceful lake. 拓展句：We hiked through a forest which was filled with greenery, played various games, and enjoyed a picnic by a peaceful lake. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I'm writing to share about the amazing class trip we had last week, which was a nice break from our usual routine.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】The trip left a lasting impression on me, making me appreciate the great outdoors and the friendships among classmates even more.（运用了现在分词作状语） 8．（23-24高二下·内蒙古阿拉善盟第一中学·期中）你在浏览学校英文论坛时，发现同学们就“互联网是一把双刃剑”这一主题展开了讨论。请你发一则帖子，发表自己的看法，内容包括： 1.你对互联网的观点；  2.对你的观点进行解释。 题目：The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet As we all know, the Internet is getting more and more important in our life, which makes our life easier and more convenient. The Internet meets our different needs. We can communicate with our friends on social media, go shopping and play games on the Internet. It is quite helpful. However, some of us are getting addicted to it, playing video games, which has a bad influence. Even worse, someone are cheated by Internet traps. In a word, when using the Internet, we should be wise and careful so that we can benefit from it. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于在浏览学校英文论坛时，发现同学们就“互联网是一把双刃剑”这一主题展开了讨论这一情况，写一则帖子，发表自己的看法， 【详解】1.词汇积累 重要的：important→ vital 满足：meets →satisfies 对……上瘾，沉迷：be addicted to→ be obsessed with 影响：influence→ effect 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The Internet meets our different needs. We can communicate with our friends on social media, go shopping and play games on the Internet. 拓展句：The Internet, where we can communicate with our friends on social media, go shopping and play games, meets our different needs . 【点睛】【高分句型1】As we all know, the Internet is getting more and more important in our life, which makes our life easier and more convenient.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】In a word, when using the Internet, we should be wise and careful so that we can benefit from it.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句中的省略用法) 9．（22-23高二下·内蒙古呼伦贝尔市满洲里市第一中学·期中）你是李华，两周前你从网上购买了一套书虫系列读物（Bookworm Series）昨天才到货，且包装破损，数量不足。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下： 1. 介绍购物情况 2. 反映存在问题 3. 提出解决方案 注意： 1. 词数100词左右 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯 3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词 可能用到的生词：投诉complaint n. To whom it may concern, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】To whom it may concern, I am one of your customers(顾客). I ordered（订购）a set of(一套) Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing. I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint. Looking forward to your reply. Sincerely, Li Hua 【来源】2022-2023学年高二下学期期中考试英语试题 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件，投诉商家。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.    介绍购物情况 2.    反映存在问题 3.    提出解决方案 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） a set of; not…until; to one’s disappointment; pack; cover; torn; complete; missing; poor service; right; deal with; either…or…; process; complaint 第三步：连词成句 1. I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago…. 2. …I didn’t receive them until yesterday… 3. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. 4. …it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing… 5. I am sorry to have received such poor service… 5. I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem… 6. I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me. 7. I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：I didn’t receive them until yesterday和the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn以及it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing运用了状语从句；I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem.和I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me.运用了宾语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如to one’s disappointment ;either…or…; deal with等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 10．（23-24高二下·内蒙古乌兰浩特市第四中学·期中）假定你是李华，三周前你从网上买的一箱水果昨天才到货，且部分水果已经腐烂。请你就此向网店客服写邮件投诉，内容包括： 1. 投诉问题； 2. 解决方案； 3. 期待回复。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Sir/Madam, I am one of your customers. I ordered a box of fruits from your online store three weeks ago, but I didn't receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, some fruits were rotten. I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have the right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money or deliver another box of fruits to me. In addition, I'd like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint. Looking forward to your reply! Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给网店客服写邮件，投诉从网上买的一箱水果昨天才到货，且部分水果已经腐烂。 【详解】1.词汇积累 沮丧失望：depression→disappointment 处理：handle→deal with 糟糕的：terrible→poor 此外：besides→in addition 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I ordered a box of fruits from your online store three weeks ago, but I didn't receive them until yesterday. 拓展句：Although I ordered a box of fruits from your online store three weeks ago, I didn't receive them until yesterday. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I hope that you either return my money or deliver another box of fruits to me. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] In addition, I'd like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint. (运用了动名词的复合结构作宾语) 11．（21-22高二下·内蒙古通辽市开鲁县第一中学·期中）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack准备参加学校一年一度的越野赛，写信征求你的意见。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1.表示支持； 2.对此项运动的理解； 3.给出建议。 参考词汇：cross-country running race越野赛 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【答案】Dear Jack, I am very delighted to know that you are going to take part in the cross-country running race held usually in our school. I am proud of you and admire you so much. Long-distance running benefits us a lot. Not only can it build up our body but it can also strengthen our will. Besides, finishing the hard race will help us obtain self-confidence and motivation, which are essential qualities in our future success. To make it, it’s necessary to train regularly and make full preparations for it. Also, there is no doubt that you should take enough nutritious food and valuable instructions from your coach. Go for it and wish you success. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jack回信，就他准备参加学校一年一度的越野赛给出适当的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：take part in→participate in 获得：obtain → gain/get 基本的：essential→basic 宝贵的：valuable→precious/worthwhile 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To make it, it’s necessary to train regularly and make full preparations for it. 拓展句：If you want to make it, it’s necessary to train regularly and make full preparations for it. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only can it build up our body but it can also strengthen our will.（运用了not only…but also的倒装结构。） 【高分句型2】Besides, finishing the hard race will help us obtain self-confidence and motivation, which are essential qualities in our future success.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。） 12．（20-21高二下·内蒙古自治区赤峰第四中学·期中）假设你是王林，你的美国笔友John来信说他最近每天晚上玩手机到深夜，导致白天没有精神且食欲不振。他对此很担心，但又管不住自己，因此写信向你求助。请你用英语给John写一封回信，谈谈你的想法并给他一些建议。 要求： 1. 介绍你对“每天晚上玩手机到深夜”这个问题的看法； 2. 给出你对解决这个问题的建议； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear John, I’m pleased to receive your letter seeking my proposals on how to overcome the awful habit of staying up late. Therefore, I’m writing to give you a helping hand. From my point of view, there are two accounts for this. For one thing, a habit is easy to form but hard to get rid of. For another, since mobile phones have become an indispensable part in our daily life, it is absolutely difficult to resist, especially for us adolescents. Here are some humble suggestions for your consideration. First and foremost, you are supposed to switch off your phone and keep your phone away from you before going to bed so that it will not attract your attention. Additionally, if I were you, I would work out properly before going to bed to relax myself both physically and mentally. Last but not least, it is high time you enhanced your awareness of early sleep. As a classic proverb goes that early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. Whichever suggestion you will take, please persevere in it. Hopefully, your problem would be solved soon. Best wishes! Yours, Wang Lin 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的美国笔友John来信说他最近每天晚上玩手机到深夜，导致白天没有精神且食欲不振。他对此很担心，但又管不住自己因此写信向你求助，要求考生用英语给John写一封回信，谈谈你的想法并给他一些建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 高兴的：pleased→delighted 建议：proposal→suggestion 观点：view→opinion 另外：additionally→furthermore 2. 句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：For another, since mobile phones have become an indispensable part in our daily life, it is absolutely difficult to resist, especially for us adolescents. 拓展句：Another reason why it is difficult to resist mobile phones, especially for us adolescents, is that they have become an indispensable part of our daily life. 【点睛】[高分句型1]First and foremost, you are supposed to switch off your phone and keep your phone away from you before going to bed so that it will not attract your attention.(so that引导的结果状语从句) [高分句型2]Additionally, if I were you, I would work out properly before going to bed to relax myself both physically and mentally.(运用含虚拟条件句的虚拟语气) 13．（23-24高二下·内蒙古鄂尔多斯西部四校·期中）近年来，随着科技发展，电子产品越来越多，学生的汉子书写能力大大降低。假如你是校书法协会的会长，为了让他们重视书写，写一封倡议信。 内容包括： 1. 减少对电子产品的依赖，多动手写笔记。 2. 养成练书法和写日记的习惯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear students, With the development of technology, more and more students prefer to use electric products for taking notes and sending messages, rather than write on the paper. Thus, our handwriting is not as good as it was in the past. Facing the problem, we should do as follows. First, we should use less electric products when learning. If so, we can have more opportunities to improve our handwriting. Besides, we must form the habit of practising calligraphy every day. What’s more, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand instead of sending e-mails. Beautiful and neat handwriting, is of great benefit to us students. So, let’s take action right now! I’m sure our efforts will pay off. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。近年来，随着科技发展，电子产品越来越多，学生的汉子书写能力大大降低。你是校书法协会的会长，为了让学生们重视书写，要求考生写一封倡议信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 越来越多：more and more→an increasing number of 面对：face→be faced with 提高：improve→promote 此外：besides→in addition 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Besides, we must form the habit of practising calligraphy every day. 拓展句：Besides, we must form the habit of practising calligraphy every day, which is greatly important. 【点睛】【高分句型1】With the development of technology, more and more students prefer to use electric products for taking notes and sending messages, rather than write on the paper.（运用了介词短语作状语以及prefer to do rather than do的固定结构） 【高分句型2】What’s more, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand instead of sending e-mails.（运用了it作形式主语的结构） 14．（23-24高二下·内蒙古通辽市科左后旗甘旗卡第二高级中学·期中）假如你是李华.你的英国笔友Peter在孔子课堂(the Confucius Academy)了解到了中国古典四大名著(China's four great classic novels)的知识并写信与你交流。作为一名古典文学爱好者，你读之后很高兴。回信给他，介绍你最爱的四大名著中的某个人物(character)以及原因。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以增加适当的细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, How are you doing? Thanks for sharing with me your experience of learning China’s four great classic novels and your personal understanding. There is no denying that so many fantastic characters have been created by ancient Chinese novelists. I am glad to tell you about my favorite character, Sun Wukong in Journey to the West. In the novel, Sun Wukong, also known as the Monkey King, is a monkey born from a stone who acquires supernatural powers through Taoist practices, from which he knows the 72 transformations, allowing him to transform into various animals and objects. That is the most important reason why I consider Sun as my favorite character. Classics open up a window to different worlds and different cultures. I do hope that Chinese classic literature helps you understand China better. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。 【详解】根据提示可知，本篇为一封邮件；假如你是李华.你的英国笔友Peter在孔子课堂(the Confucius Academy)了解到了中国古典四大名著(China's four great classic novels)的知识并写信与你交流。作为一名古典文学爱好者，你读之后很高兴。回信予他，介绍你最爱的四大名著中的某个人物(character)以及原因。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：share with（分享），China's four great classic novels（四大名著），be glad to（高兴）；character（人物）；Journey to the West（西游记）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如There is no denying that so many fantastic characters have been created by ancient Chinese novelists.运用了There is no denying that…句型；In the novel, Sun Wukong, also known as the Monkey King, is a monkey born from a stone who acquires supernatural powers through Taoist practices, from which he knows the 72 transformations, allowing him to transform into various animals and objects.运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 15．（20-21高二下·辽宁省鞍山市·期中）假设你是李华，上周四下午，你学校学生会举办了“世界地球日”活动。作为学校英语报社的记者，请你就本次活动写一篇题目为 “Earth Day, Take Action” 的英文报道。内容要点如下： 1.活动的时间、地点； 2.活动内容： (1)打扫教室卫生； (2)校园捡垃圾； (3)检查水龙头等； 3.活动的意义。 注意：词数80 左右；可适当增加细节使行文连贯 Earth Day, Take Action __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Earth Day, Take Action To celebrate the World Earth Day, April 22nd witnessed a significant activity launched by the Student Union in our school. On the playground, an inspiring speech by the headmaster officially announced its commencement, after which we students got down to work with high spirit and enthusiasm. Some gave the classrooms thorough cleanings, some picked up rubbish scattered about and others ensured all the taps were tightened. Everything done, not only do we beautify our surroundings but also enhance our consciousness of environmental protection. What a day! Take action, and the world will be a better place. 【解析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生就学校学生会举办的“世界地球日”活动写一篇题目为 “Earth Day, Take Action” 的英文报道。 【详解】1.词汇积累 鼓舞人心的：inspiring→encouraging 完全的：thorough→complete 保证：ensure→guarantee 使变紧：tighten→fasten 2.句式拓展 同义句（使用独立主格结构改写） 原句：Some gave the classrooms thorough cleanings, some picked up rubbish scattered about and others ensured all the taps were tightened. 拓展句：Some gave the classrooms thorough cleanings, some picking up rubbish scattered about and others ensured all the taps were tightened. 【点睛】[高分句型1] To celebrate the World Earth Day, April 22nd witnessed a significant activity launched by the Student Union in our school. (运用了过去分词作后置定语) [高分句型2] On the playground, an inspiring speech by the headmaster officially announced its commencement, after which we students got down to work with high spirit and enthusiasm. (运用了“介词+关系代词which”引导的非限制性定语从句) 16．（20-21高二下·辽宁省鞍山市·期中）假定你是学校英语杂志社记者, 上周你校开展了给贫困地区学生捐赠 “爱心包裹”的活动。请写一篇新闻报道。内容包括： 1. 活动时间与地点；2. 活动过程；3. 活动意义。 注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 Loving Parcels for Students in Need __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                 Loving Parcels for Students in Need In order to help the students in the poverty-stricken areas, a “Loving Parcels” donation activity was successfully held in our school hall last week. All of the teachers and students took an active part in the activity. They donated their clothes, books and schoolbags to the students in need. In addition, they also wrote down the best wishes on cards, which would be collected and delivered to the schools in the poor areas. Not only did the activity help us express our care for the students and send our sincere wishes to them but it also taught us that we should value what we have. 【来源】2020-2021学年高二下学期期中考试英语试题 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生根据上周学校开展的给贫困地区学生捐赠 “爱心包裹”的活动写一篇新闻报道。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时,少量一般将来时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 活动时间与地点； 2. 活动过程； 3. 活动意义。 第二步：列提纲 （重点词组） in order to；take an active part in；donate sth to sb；write down；be delivered to 第三步：连词成句 1.    In order to help the students in the poverty-stricken areas, a “Loving Parcels” donation activity was successfully held in our school hall last week. 2.    All of the teachers and students took an active part in the activity. 3.    They donated their clothes, books and schoolbags to the students in need 4.    In addition, they also wrote down the best wishes on cards, which would be collected and delivered to the schools in the poor areas. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of+ n/doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】[高分句型1]: In order to help the students in the poverty-stricken areas, a “Loving Parcels” donation activity was successfully held in our school hall last week. 这句话运用了不定式作目的状语。 [高分句型2]：In addition, they also wrote down the best wishes on cards, which would be collected and delivered to the schools in the poor areas.这句话运用了which引导的非谓语定语从句。 [高分句型3]：Not only did the activity help us express our care for the students and send our sincere wishes to them but it also taught us that we should value what we have.这句话运用了not only……but also倒装结构。 17．（23-24高二下·内蒙古包头市北方重工业集团有限公司第三中学·期中）假设你是李华，你上周刚刚参加了你校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛，并从三十名选手中脱颖而出，荣获“十佳奖”。在准备参赛期间，你的外教Mr.Craige对你提供了很多指导和帮助。现请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1.获奖情况及感受；    2.回顾准备过程；   3.感谢他的帮助；    4.邀他来家做客。 注意：1．词数100词左右；   2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 提示：十佳奖：Top Ten Prize    Dear Mr. Craige, The Internet ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mr. Craige, I am writing to express my thanks for your help, without which I could not have got the “Top Ten Prize” out of 30 competitors in the the l0th English Speaking Contest in our school. The final result was totally beyond my imagination. It's thanks to your effort that I have made much more rapid progress in my spoken English. Before the contest, whenever you had free time, you would help me practice my spoken English. You communicated with me as much as possible, and corrected my pronunciation, intonation as well. What's more, you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence. Without your help I couldn't have achieved such a good result. I have benefited from this competition a lot. All in all, I really appreciate your help. Thank you again for your advice and kind help. I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封感谢信。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封感谢信：假设你是李华，你上周刚刚参加了你校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛，并从三十名选手中脱颖而出，荣获“十佳奖”。在准备参赛期间，你的外教Mr.Craige对你提供了很多指导和帮助。现请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1.获奖情况及感受；2.回顾准备过程；3.感谢他的帮助；4.邀他来家做客。特别注意时态应为一般现在时。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：express my thanks for your help（对你的帮助表示感谢）；beyond my imagination（超出了我的想象）；in my spoken English（用我的英语口语）；benefited from this competition a lot（从这场竞争中获益良多）；等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I am writing to express my thanks for your help, without which I could not have got the “Top Ten Prize” out of 30 competitors in the the l0th English Speaking Contest in our school.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句；It's thanks to your effort that I have made much more rapid progress in my spoken English.句中使用强调句型；Without your help I couldn't have achieved such a good result.句中使用虚拟语气。 18．（19-20高二下·内蒙古通辽市·期中）假如你叫李华,你的朋友Jenny 来信向你询问如何保持健康.请你给她发一封e-mail 提出建议.内容如下: 1.注意合理饮食 2.保证充足睡眠 3.坚持锻炼身体,多参加体育活动 注意: 1.词数100左右. 2.可适当增添细节,以使行文连贯. Dear Jenny: ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jenny: How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give your some advice. As you know, food is very important to us teenagers. Since we grow very fast , we need nutritious food very much, such as fresh vegetables, fruits, fish and meat . I think you’d better not eat food with much sugar or fat .And you should get plenty of sleep. It is necessary for you to have at least 8 hours of sleep every day . Also, you should take physical exercise regularly. It will be good for your health. Only in this way can you keep fit . Best wishes ! Yours, 【分析】本文为一篇应用文，要为Jenny提出如何保持健康的建议。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 写作要求：1.注意合理饮食 2.保证充足睡眠 3.坚持锻炼身体,多参加体育活动 第二步：列提纲 （重点词组） advice; nutrious; plenty of; regularly; be good for 第三步：连词成句 I would like to give your some advice. Since we grow very fast, we need nutritious food very much, such as fresh vegetables, fruits, fish and meat. And you should get plenty of sleep. Also, you should take physical exercise regularly. It will be good for your health. 在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题. 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1. 文章的结构顺序：提出建议；建议具体内容；表达祝愿。 2.表并列补充关系：and; also; only 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰 第五步：修改润色 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了不少高级句型，比如倒装句：Only in this way can you keep fit.还有it+is+adj+to do的固定句型：It is necessary for you to have at least 8 hours of sleep every day.文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。 19．（19-20高二下·辽宁省鞍山市·期中）假定你是李华,你班的美国交换生Tom结束了在你校一年的学习，即将回国。你和同学打算于7月10日下午在班上为他开一个欢送会（farewell party），特写信邀请他参加。要点包括： 1.欢送会的时间和地点； 2.感谢Tom的帮助； 3.美好祝愿。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How time flies! It’s one year since you came to study Chinese in our school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom, How time flies! It’s one year since you came to study Chinese in our school. In the past year, you have helped us a lot, without which we couldn't have made great progress in English. During this year, we have learned lots of cultures about your country that cannot be found in the book. Before you leave, many classmates and I intend to hold a farewell party for you, hoping that you can remember the wonderful time we spent together. By the way the party will be held in our classroom on the afternoon of July 10th. May you have a pleasant journey home and welcome to China again. We are looking forward to your coming. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，邀请美国交换生Tom参加为他举办的欢送会。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：并列结构    将书信的内容按一定顺序写出，没有主次之分，但要包含所有要求的内容并要求语句连贯。 要求：1.欢送会的时间和地点；2.感谢Tom的帮助；3.美好祝愿。 第二步：列提纲（重点词组） study Chinese；help us a lot；make great progress in English；learned lots of cultures；intend to hold a farewell party；on the afternoon of July 10th；a pleasant journey home；welcome to China again；look forward to doing 第三步：连词成句 During this year, we have learned lots of cultures about your country that cannot be found in the book. Many classmates and I intend to hold a farewell party for you. The party will be held in our classroom on the afternoon of July 10th. May you have a pleasant journey home and welcome to China again. We are looking forward to your coming. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n./doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…,while others…, as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。文章对时态的把握非常准确，对过去的回忆用一般过去时，回忆Tom来中国学习有多久，要用现在完成时，描述现在的心情和祝愿用一般现在时，通知即将举行的欢送会用一般将来时。作者在范文中主从复合句和非谓语动词交替使用，如：In the past year,you have helped us a lot, without which we couldn’t have made great progress in English.和many classmates and I intend to hold a farewell party for you, hoping that you can remember the wonderful time we spent together.这些使得行文活泼流畅，显示了很高的英语驾驭能力，为文章增光添彩。 二、书面表达 20．（23-24高二下·内蒙古赤峰市敖汉旗箭桥中学·期中）网络在我们的日常生活中发挥着重要作用，它为我们带来很多便利，同时也有危害。请你谈谈网络的利与弊，以及你对网络使用的看法。 注意：1．词数80词左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Internet ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Internet The Internet is becoming more and more popular. However, the Internet has its advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, the Internet plays an important part in our daily life. It makes our lives more convenient. We can get the most updated information. We can download software, documents and images whenever we need them. On the other hand, surfing the Internet also caused all sorts of problems. Identity theft is a common and serious problem. What’s worse, Internet addition does harm to physical and mental health. In my opinion, as long as we control ourselves properly, we should make good use of the Internet and it will be our useful helper. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生谈谈网络的利与弊，以及对网络使用的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 各种各样的：all sorts of→ all kinds of 观点：opinion→ view 充分利用：make good use of→ take full advantage of 严重的：serious→ severe 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：On one hand, the Internet plays an important part in our daily life. It makes our lives more convenient. 合并句：On one hand, the Internet plays an important part in our daily life, which makes our lives more convenient. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We can download software, documents and images whenever we need them.（运用了连词whenever引导的时间状语从句。） 【高分句型2】In my opinion, as long as we control ourselves properly, we should make good use of the Internet and it will be our useful helper.（运用了连词as long as引导的条件状语从句。） 1 / 37 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$