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热考话题3 助人为乐
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语段赏析语段赏析
给予
We appreciated it so much that we got a gift from the kind stand owner. What's the most impressive is that Robby passed on the kindness to a homeless man too. We never know what happiness a simple act of kindness will bring. By giving, we also teach others how to give. Remember: The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose. 我们非常感激,从好心的摊主那里得到了一份礼物。最让人印象深刻的是,Robby也把这份善意传递给了一个无家可归的人。我们永远不知道一个简单的善举会带来什么样的幸福。通过给予,我们也教会别人如何给予。记住:赠人玫瑰,手留余香。
感激
Hanging up, he turned to Steve and Mike and sincerely thanked both of them. Cold as the rain was, great warmth filled his heart as never before. "Life is really sweet with love and care. Getting help from others is a kind of happiness and I'd like to pass my happiness to others," he talked to himself. 挂断电话,他转向史蒂夫和迈克,真诚地感谢他们二人。尽管雨很冷,但他心中充满了前所未有的温暖。"生活中有了爱和关怀,真的很甜蜜。得到别人的帮助是一种幸福,而我想把我的幸福传递给别人,"他自言自语道。
善良传递
"Kindness is free. Take care." Stunned and moved, I gobbled up the food, staring at the note, feeling guilty about my previous thought that all people were indifferent. It eventually dawned on me that a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference. From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that the Mexican family offered me."善良是免费的。保重。"我既震惊又动容,大口大口地吃着食物,盯着纸条,对我以前认为所有人都漠不关心的想法感到内疚。我终于明白,一个小小的善举可能足以强大到产生巨大的影响。从那天起,每次我遇到需要帮助的人,我都会向他们伸出援手,希望把那个墨西哥家庭给予我的善意传递下去。
佳作欣赏佳作赏析
[2020新高考I]The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy — his name was Bernard — had interested her very much.
"I wish you could see him," she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. "He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't see what he can do."
After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. "I wish we could help him to earn money," said Clara. "His family is suffering so much."
"So do I," said Harry. "We really should do something to assist them."
For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, "I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成). "
The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. "I tell you what we can do," said John. "You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it."
When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too.
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.
佳作1
When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too. Bearing in mind the principle of"Better tell him how to make a buck than just give him one(授人以鱼不如授人以渔)", not only did they bring popcorn, but also they brought the machine, going directly to Bernard's home, ready to teach him how to make popcorn. Upon their arrival, looking at Bernard's confused eyes, Clara explained excitedly to Bernard what they intended to do for him. After figuring out what had happened, Bernard seized Clara's hands tightly with tears in his eyes(紧紧抓住Clara的双手,满眼泪水).
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. He walked around the neighborhood, selling popcorn. Gradually there were an increasing number of people coming and having a go at it. With bags of popcorn sold out, his face lit up with a sense of achievement(脸上洋溢着成就感). Eventually, thanks to the money he made, his father received good treatment in the hospital and recovered soon. He knew it was kindness and love of the Meredith family that saved his family(正是Meredith一家的善良和爱拯救了他的家人).
佳作2
When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too. Having got the approval of his mother, John began to carry out his plan happily. Early in the morning, he couldn't wait to call on(迫不及待地去拜访) the Bernard family, telling them their plan. So touched was Bernard's mother that she burst into tears(Bernard的母亲感动得热泪盈眶). Afterwards, John got down to making preparations together with Bernard. Soon after, they succeeded in making popcorn and packed it with paper bags. Looking at what they had done, children clapped their hands for Bernard.
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. He went from door to door around the community where he lived, nervous and anxious along the way(一路上既紧张又不安). Much to his astonishment, his popcorn was very popular because of its low price as well as the nice flavor. It was not long before bags of popcorn were sold out, which was far beyond his expectations(远远超出了他的预期). Seizing the money he earned tightly in hand, he knew without the Meredith family's kindness and assistance, his family would still be suffering in years to come.
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