内容正文:
选择性必修第三册
Unit 1 Wish you were here
Period Ⅳ Writing
内容索引
NEIRONGSUOYIN
单元写作 能力提升
单元写作 能力提升
Part 1 单元写作任务:制订旅行计划
[文体分析]
本单元的写作任务是制订旅行计划。旅行计划是对即将发生的事情进行规划,故时态以一般将来时为主,有时也可以用现在进行时或一般现在时代替一般将来时。 写旅行计划时应按照游览的先后顺序写,有时为了增加文章的饱满性,可以对文章内容进行适当的拓展。写作时需要灵活使用衔接词以及高级短语和句型,使整篇短文意思连贯,表达流畅。
[写作要求]
假定你是上海市某中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Peter打算在寒假时来上海游玩,请你给他做导游并制订一份旅行计划。 请根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件,内容主要包括:
1.出发的时间;
2.活动内容:参观上海科技馆,登东方明珠塔欣赏上海全貌等。
注意:
1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: Shanghai Science and Technology Museum上海科技馆;Oriental Pearl Tower东方明珠塔;metropolis大都会。
Dear Peter,
Welcome to Shanghai.I'd like to show you around Shanghai.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What do you think of the plan? Let me know if you have got any suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hua
[审题谋篇]
体裁 电子邮件
时态 以一般将来时为主
人称 以第一人称为主
框架 本文可分为三个部分:
第一部分:提出计划;
第二部分:旅行计划的具体安排;
第三部分:征求对方意见
[词句推敲]
1. 词汇
①________________ 参观
②________________ 打算做
③________________ 开车接某人
④______________________ 欣赏全景
⑤____________________ 对……印象深刻
visit/pay a visit to
intend to do
pick sb.up
enjoy the whole view of
be impressed with/by
2.句式
(1)完成句子
①下个星期六,我打算上午9点到你的旅馆去接你。
Next Saturday, I ______________________ at your hotel at 9:00 a.m.
②下午我们将登上东方明珠塔,在那里我们可以欣赏上海的全景。
We will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon and ________________________ Shanghai there.
intend to pick you up
enjoy the whole view of
③上海是一个现代化的大都会,你会对它留下深刻印象的。
Shanghai is known as a modern metropolis, and you'll ________________________ it.
be impressed with
(2)句式升级
④利用非限制性定语从句升级句②。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑤利用非限制性定语从句升级句③。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon,from which
we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai.
You'll be impressed with Shanghai, which is known as a modern
metropolis.
[妙笔成篇]
Dear Peter,
Welcome to Shanghai.I'd like to show you around Shanghai. Now I'm writing to tell you my plan for your trip.
Next Saturday, I intend to pick you up at your hotel at 9:00 a.m.We will visit Shanghai Science and Technology Museum in the morning, and we will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon, from which we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai.You'll be impressed with Shanghai, which is known as a modern metropolis.
What do you think of the plan? Let me know if you have got any suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,打算暑假和你的美国朋友Lucy一起去旅游,请你根据提示给她发一封电子邮件,告知她旅游安排和注意事项。
目的地 海南岛
时间 7月18日—7月26日
活动 岛上远足,海上冲浪,岛上露营
注意事项 携带护照
注意:
1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
I'm writing this email to tell you the plan for the summer holidays.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Lucy,
I'm writing this email to tell you the plan for the summer holidays.
We will travel to the south of China where Hainan Island, a world-famous tourist attraction, is located.We're spending our holiday there from July 18 to July 26.The reason why we have chosen Hainan Island for our trip is that it has the beautiful blue sea and wonderful golden sands.We will take part in a wide variety of activities including hiking on the island, surfing on the sea, and camping overnight on the island.By the way, please don't forget to bring your passport with you.I'm so excited because I'm sure we will have a wonderful holiday on the island.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Part 2 读后续写日积月累
读后续写专练之动作描写“嘴(mouth)”
积累常诵 词汇 open-mouthed 目瞪口呆的
cup/cover one's mouth 捂住某人的嘴
open one's mouth wide张大嘴巴
one's heart in one's mouth 提心吊胆
积累常诵
佳句 1.She opened her mouth to say something.
她张开嘴要说什么。
2.A smile played around his mouth.
他的嘴角闪过一丝笑意。
3.She froze,with her mouth open.
她呆住了,嘴张开着。
4.He straightened up and looked at me,open-mouthed.
他直起身,目瞪口呆地看着我。
5.My mouth started watering when I smelled the food.
闻到食物的香味,我的嘴开始流口水了。
按要求用与“mouth”相关的表达补全以下各句
1.闻到三明治的香味,饥饿的小女孩开始流口水了。
_______________________________________ when she smelled the sandwich.
2.她刚要拿起三明治咬一口,突然一只手捂住了她的嘴。
She _____________________________________________________
____________________________.
The hungry girl's mouth started watering
was about to pick up the sandwich and take a bite when suddenly
a hand cupped her mouth
3.她的哥哥一把抢走了她的三明治放入自己口中。
It was her brother who grabbed her sandwich and ________________________.
4.她抬起头,目瞪口呆地看着他。(形容词作状语)
She looked up at him, __________________.
put it into his own mouth
openmouthed
5.三明治没了,当泪水顺着脸颊流下来时,她咬住她的下嘴唇以免嘴唇发抖。
With the sandwich gone, she _________________________________
____________________________.
bit her lower lip to keep it from trembling
as tears ran down her cheeks
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