内容正文:
选择性必修第二册
Unit 3 Fit for life
Period Ⅳ Writing
内容索引
NEIRONGSUOYIN
单元写作 能力提升
单元写作 能力提升
Part 1 单元写作任务——写一篇调查报告
[文体分析]
调查报告是一种常见的应用文体,是根据特定目的,对某一客观事物进行调查研究之后写成的书面报告。一般来说,调查报告由开头、主体和结尾三个部分组成。写作中要注意所运用材料的真实性,叙议结合。
一、常见的写作方法:
1.按调查的先后顺序来写。
2.按事物发展的阶段来写。
3.将两种事物进行对比,以显示其是非、优劣,找出其差异来写。
4.按调查对象的特点分门别类来写。
二、写作步骤(三段论)
1.开门见山,点明图表要反映的主题。
2.中间段落对图表的内容进行分析,可采用分类或对比来表现主题,并阐明必要的理由。在叙述中切忌反复使用同一句型,切忌反复出现图表中的数据。
3.发表自己的观点,对全文进行小结。
三、注意事项
1.认真阅读和掌握图表提供的信息,弄清设计者想通过图表来反映的信息、问题或现象。对于曲线图形式,要认真观察坐标系所显示的数据信息,并密切注意交汇在坐标横轴和纵轴上的数字及单位;对于柱状图和饼状图,要通过宽度相等的柱形的高度差别和各部分所占比例来判断事物的动态发展趋势,关注坐标线的刻度单位及图表旁边的提示说明。
2.在掌握了全部信息的基础上,着手分析这些信息或数据,通过对比分析,找出不同点和相似点。
[常用表达]
1.As is apparently shown in the pie chart/graph/table above...
正如上面饼状图/曲线图/表格所明显呈现的……
2.As far as...concerned,much progress has been made.
就……而言,已经取得了很大进步。
3.There is an increase of about...percent,compared with...
与……相比较,大约增加了……
4.50% of the people surveyed expressed the satisfaction with...,while only 40% of them were satisfied with...
在调查中有50%的人表达了对……的满意,而仅有40%的人对……满意。
5.By comparison with...,it decreased/fell/increased from...to...
和……相比,它从……减少/增加到……
6.It is obvious from the graph/chart that...rank(s) the first/highest,while...turn(s) out to be the lowest.
图表清楚显示……是排在第一位/最高的,而……结果最低。
7.The reason why/for...is that...
……的原因是……
8.One may think of the change as a result of...
人们可能把这种变化认作是……的结果。
9.The change in...largely results from the fact that...
在……上的变化很大程度上是由……的事实造成的。
10.First/Firstly/To begin with/...;Second/Secondly/And then/Next/...;Finally/Last but not least/Apart from the above reasons/...
首先……;其次……;最后/最后但同样重要的是/除了上述原因/……
11.It is because of...that...
由于……才……
12.in a word(总之)/in short(简而言之)/generally speaking (总的说来)/to sum up(总之,概括地说)/in conclusion(总之,最后)/in summary(总之)
13.Obviously/Apparently,if we want to...,it is necessary to do/that...
很明显,如果我们想……,……是有必要的。
14.There is no doubt that attention must be paid to...
毫无疑问,我们必须注意……
15.I suggest the government take effective measures to...
我建议政府应该采取有效措施来……
16.All in all,it was...that led to the phenomenon.
总而言之,是……导致了这种现象。
[写作要求]
假定你是李华,你就你们城市中小学生的近视问题进行了一次调查。请你根据下面表格中的提示数据,用英语写一篇调查报告。
小学 初中 高中
22.8% 56% 72%
内容包括:
1.学生中近视的比例越来越大;
2.分析造成近视的原因;
3.你的建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[审题谋篇]
体裁 应用文——表格类调查报告
时态 一般现在时为主
人称 第三人称为主
框架 介绍调查的内容;
分析造成近视的原因并阐述个人建议
[词句推敲]
1.词汇
①遭受 ____________
②(数量上、比例上)占 ____________
③由……引起 ___________
④例如 ________
⑤靠近 ___________
suffer from
account for
arise from
such as
be close to
⑥就……而言 ________________________
⑦养成良好的习惯 ________________
⑧富含 ____________
as far as...concerned
form good habits
be rich in
2.句式
(1)完成句子
①最近我已在我们的城市进行了一次调查。
Recently I ________________________ in our city.
②调查表明,越来越多的学生患有近视。
The survey shows _________________________________________.
have conducted a survey
more and more students suffer from shortsightedness
③小学生中近视的占22.8%。
The primary school students _______________________________.
④初中生和高中生中近视的百分比为56和72。
____________________________________ among junior and senior school students are 56 and 72.
who're shortsighted account for 22.8%
The percentages of shortsightedness
(2)句式升级
⑤用which引导的非限制性定语从句连接句①和句②
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
⑥用并列连词while连接句③和句④
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Recently I have conducted a survey in our city,which shows more and more students suffer from shortsightedness.
The primary school students who're shortsighted account for 22.8% while the percentages of shortsightedness among junior and senior school students are 56 and 72.
[妙笔成篇]
Recently I have conducted a survey in our city, which shows more and more students suffer from short-sightedness.The primary school students who're short-sighted account for 22.8% while the percentages of short-sightedness among junior and senior school students are 56 and 72.
Short-sightedness among students arises from several factors.As far as I'm concerned, we must take action to protect our eyes.It is necessary to form good reading habits, spend less time in front of screens and relax our eyes from time to time.Furthermore, remember to eat something good for eyesight.
为了解同学们的理想,上周我们在学校的100名学生中进行了一次调查采访。采访主要是围绕“What do you want to be when you grow up?”和“Why?”这两个问题进行的,请你根据以下调查数据写一篇以“The Dream Jobs”为题的调查报告。
内容包括:
1.图表所示全部内容;
2.你的理想及原因。
注意:
1.词数80左右,标题和开头已给出,但不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Dream Jobs
In order to learn about the ideals of the students,____________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
The Dream Jobs
In order to learn about the ideals of the students, we made a survey among 100 students in our school last week.
Here are the results. Most of the students want to be businessmen, because they want to be rich and buy what they need in the future.More students are dreaming of being doctors, because they are proud of saving the sick people.And being good teachers is some students' dream.They think it's a pleasure to make students learn more from them.
Different students have different ideals.As for me, I want to be a policeman and make our society much safer.
Part 2 读后续写日积月累
读后续写专练之“焦虑”“担忧”和“绝望”
积累
常诵 anxious, anxiety, worry, worried, worrying, helpless, helplessness, concern, concerned, anxiously, with anxiety, be concerned about, be worried about, an anxious look/expression
用表示“焦虑”“担忧”和“绝望”的表达完成以下各句。
①他们在山里迷了路,只能焦急地等待救援。
Lost in the mountain, they _________________________________
_________________.
②随着夜色渐深,他们越来越担忧。
As the evening wore on, they ____________________________
____________.
had nothing to do but wait for rescue
anxiously
grew increasingly/more and more
worried
③树林开始起雾了,他们周围的一切都被黑暗吞噬,这无疑使他们更加无助和绝望。
Fog began creeping into the forest.Everything around them was swallowed by the darkness, which undoubtedly left them even more helpless and hopeless.
→Fog began creeping into the forest.Everything around them was swallowed by the darkness, __________________________________
_____________________.(分词短语作状语)
undoubtedly leaving them even more
helpless and hopeless
④托尼无助地站在那里,皱着眉。
Tony ________________________,frowning.
⑤玛丽既担心又害怕,几乎要哭了。
Mary was close to ____________________________.
stood there helplessly
crying with anxiety and fear
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