内容正文:
英语
人教版
2025甘肃
话题写作进阶册
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话题十
文体活动
(2024兰州)
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分析甘肃近6年中考真题的书面表达可知, 针对“文体活动”这一话题,
共考查了1次:2024年兰州卷要求考生以“Marathon in My Eyes”为题,
发表自己对此项赛事的看法。分析全国近3年中考真题可知, 此话题通常
还有以下命题角度:1.描述一次自己参加学校运动会的经历及收获; 2.如
何组织一场校园文化活动节; 3.介绍中国特色的文体活动(如舞龙舞狮、
武术等)。
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[2024兰州]马拉松于5月26日在金城兰州圆满落幕,来自国内外的
四万名选手共跑 “百里黄河风情线”,感受 “交响丝路·如意甘肃”的独特
魅力。此次赛事的成功举办,不仅提升了兰州的知名度和美誉度,更激发
了市民的自豪感和归属感。
请你以“Marathon in My Eyes”为题写一篇英文短文,在班级英语沙
龙活动中分享对此项赛事的看法。
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要求:1.短文应包括以上思维导图中所有提示内容;
2.提出个人看法及观点。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等个人信息;
4.文章标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Marathon in My Eyes
This year, 2024 Lanzhou Marathon was successfully held. I feel
proud of my hometown. I'd like to share my ideas with you.
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第一步 审题
1.定主题:________________
2.定人称:描述政府、跑者及志愿者在活动中的做法为__________;描述
自己对此项赛事的看法为__________
3.定文体:________
4.定时态:描述政府、跑者及志愿者在活动中的一些做法为____________;
描述自己对此项赛事的看法为____________
5.定要点:根据题干信息可知需从______、______、________共三个方面
展开叙述
我眼中的马拉松
第三人称
第一人称
说明文
一般过去时
一般现在时
政府
跑者
志愿者
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第二步 列提纲
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第三步 填细节,巧升格,成篇章
连句成篇 句子升格
Marathon in My Eyes
This year, 2024 Lanzhou Marathon was
successfully held. I feel proud of my
hometown. I'd like to share my ideas with
you.
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连句成篇 句子升格
To begin with, the government organized
the event well. ①It provided excellent services.
The purpose was to make sure that all
runners could have a perfect and unforgettable
experience. In the second place, the runners
were welcome. ①用动词不定式作目
的状语升格:
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It provided excellent services to make sure that all runners could have a perfect and unforgettable experience.
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连句成篇 句子升格
②They tried their best to finish the marathon.
Their spirit encouraged more people. After the
event, they tasted some delicious foods. ②用短语not
only…but also升格:
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Not only did they try their best to finish the marathon, but their spirit also encouraged more people.
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连句成篇 句子升格
③Finally, the volunteers were also important
in the event. They worked hard to support the
runners. What they did showed the true
meaning of selflessness.
In my opinion, the event was a great
success. We should hold it every year. It is not
only good for our health, but also a wonderful
way to bring people closer together. ③用短语last but not
least和play an
important role升格:
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Last but not least, the volunteers also played an important role in the event.
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第四步 誊写
Marathon in My Eyes
This year, 2024 Lanzhou Marathon was successfully held. I feel
proud of my hometown. I'd like to share my ideas with you.
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To begin with, the government organized the event well. It
provided excellent services to make sure that all runners could have
a perfect and unforgettable experience. In the second place, the
runners were welcome. Not only did they try their best to finish the
marathon, but their spirit also encouraged more people.
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After the event, they tasted some delicious foods. Last but not least,
the volunteers also played an important role in the event. They
worked hard to support the runners. What they did showed the true
meaning of selflessness.
In my opinion, the event was a great success. We should hold it
every year. It is not only good for our health, but also a wonderful
way to bring people closer together.
【开头亮句】(开篇表意,引出话题)
【文化活动】
1.Have you ever joined any cultural activities?
2.Cultural activities make our lives more colorful.
3.Last Friday, a club festival was held in our school.
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【体育活动】
1.Sports play an important role in my life.
2.Doing sports makes me healthy and strong.
3.There are many different sports to choose from.
4.As is known to all, doing sports is good for our body and mind.
(as is known to all众所周知)
5.With the development of sunshine sports, our school has many
changes in sports activities.(with the development of 随着……的发展)
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【中间好句】(具体描述文体活动)
【文化活动】
1.In the after-school activity, we are going to have a painting
competition. Everyone can express their creativity freely.
2.Some volunteers are responsible for guiding at the cultural festival.
3.Last but not least, one of the most relaxing activities is enjoying
traditional music performed by famous musicians.
4.Such is the influence of the volunteers in cultural activities that
more and more people are willing to join them.
5.The government encourages people to take part in cultural activities.
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【体育活动】
1.In my spare time, I enjoy jogging under the blue sky and white
clouds to relax myself.
2.I'm fond of playing basketball with my classmates after school or
on weekends. (be fond of喜欢)
3.When I was a little boy, I took up swimming as my hobby.
(take up sth. as one's… 把某事当作某人的……)
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4.Remember to wear comfortable clothes and sports shoes. They can
help us keep safe while doing exercise.
5.The government provides professional training for athletes to
improve their skills.
6.Volunteers cheer for the athletes loudly to encourage them during
the sports competition.
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【出彩尾句】(总结文体活动的意义)
【文化活动】
1.I am confident that this festival will be a resounding success and a
memorable experience for all.(I am confident that…我深信……)
2.The purpose of this event is not only to learn about Chinese
culture but also to experience it firsthand.(the purpose of… ……的
目的)
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【体育活动】
1.By playing basketball, I become stronger and healthier, even
more outgoing.
2.Not only do they help build strong bodies, but also develop the
teamwork and a positive mind.
3.I hope that every school can make a plan to develop students'
interest in sports so as to improve students' physical quality.
(so as to以便,为了)
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佳句仿写
1.众所周知,做早操是学校体育活动的一个重要部分。(用as is known
to all仿写)
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As is known to all, doing morning exercises is an important part of school sports activities.
2.随着互联网的发展,我们可以在网上观看各种各样的文化表演。
(用with the development of 仿写)
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With the development of the Internet, we can watch all kinds of cultural performances online.
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3.我妹妹喜欢在她的房间里随着音乐跳舞。(用be fond of仿写)
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My sister is fond of dancing to the music in her room.
4.她把篮球当作自己的主要体育运动,每天刻苦训练。(用take up sth.
as one's …仿写)
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She takes up basketball as her main sport and trains hard every day.
5.我有信心这次艺术节会比以往的更加精彩难忘。(用I am confident
that…仿写)
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I am confident that this art festival will be more wonderful and unforgettable than ever before.
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6.做早操的目的是充满活力地开始新的一天。(用the purpose of仿写)
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The purpose of doing morning exercises is to start the day with energy.
7.我阅读大量书籍以便更多地了解不同的文化。(用so as to仿写)
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I read a lot of books so as to learn more about different cultures.
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为讲好中国故事,传播中国声音,推动中国文化更好地走向世界,我
校拟定下周举办中华文化节活动(Chinese Culture Festival)。假设你是
李华,请根据以下图文提示,给外教Bob写一封邮件,向他简要介绍这次
活动,并邀请他参加。
要求:1.内容包括提示中所有的写作要点;
2.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息;
4.词数:80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Dear Bob,
How are you doing? I'm writing to invite you to the Chinese
Culture Festival in our school. Now let me tell you something about
it. _____________________________________________________________
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We know China is a great country with a long history and rich
cultures. In order to tell Chinese stories to more people around the
world and spread Chinese voices, our school plans to hold a Chinese
Culture Festival next week on the playground. I know you're very
interested in Chinese culture, so you must be excited to join us in
this festival. We will have lots of interesting activities during the
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I'm looking forward to getting your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
festival. For example, some students and teachers will read Chinese
poems. You can learn a lot of Chinese history and excellent ancient
poets from the poems. Besides, you can also watch wonderful Chinese
dancing. Dancers will be in beautiful Chinese-style costumes to show
fantastic Chinese dancing. What's more, as you are lost in Chinese
culture, you can enjoy delicious Chinese food. Lastly, our headmaster
will draw the luckiest one from the lottery box. Would you like to
be the lucky dog?
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