UNIT 3 Section Ⅳ Writing（Word教参）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第三册（人教版2024）

Section Ⅳ Writing—Write a report on an environmental issue 本单元的写作项目要求写一篇“关于环境问题的报告”。报告是一种常见的应用文体。报告正文通常包括： 1．引入话题：什么问题以及解决问题的必要性； 2．问题描述：地点、原因、影响； 3．解决问题的具体措施以及成效； 4．进一步的解决方案(有时根据情况可以省略)。 跟课文学写作范式 (一)课文范式提炼 (二)常用范式推荐 写作时应注意下面几点： 1．确定结构：写作中应注意报告的常见组成部分。 2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。 3．主体人称：人称应该以第三人称为主。 跟课文学亮点表达 阅读文章第一自然段，习得以下素养 ★学亮点表达 本文开篇第一句连用了三个形容词beautiful, amazing和well-known，准确地描述出漓江水的美，让读者身临其境，感同身受。同时也与下文由于繁荣的旅游业给漓江带来污染形成对比。 [微写作1]——补全句子 西湖是一个美丽的必看的旅游景点，那里的水清澈见底，鱼儿欢快地游着。 The West Lake is a beautiful must-see tourist attraction, in which the water is clear and the fish is swimming happily. ★学逻辑衔接 本段使用however表述前后内容的转折，先描述漓江水的美，话锋一转，再提出水污染问题，充分体现出作者对语篇结构的精准把握。 [微写作2]——补全句子 城市的灯光吸引着游客，使气氛温暖而明亮。然而，这些灯并不环保，因为它们总是亮着。 The lights of the city attract tourists and keep the atmosphere warm and glowing. However, these lights are not environmentally friendly because they are always on. 阅读文章第二自然段，习得以下素养 ★学亮点表达 本段两处使用到非限制性定语从句，即： many of whom…； which…，对主句信息进行补充说明，充分凸显出作者较强的语言功底。 [微写作3]——补全句子 6月8日为世界海洋日，旨在提高人们保护海洋的意识。 World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th , is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. ★学写作手法 第二段使用了举例说明的写作手法，逐一表述引起漓江水污染的原因，层次清晰，表达富于条理，更能引发读者的关注和思考。 [微写作4]——根据文本完成思维导图 阅读文章第三、四自然段，习得以下素养 ★学亮点表达 第四段两处使用到现在进行时，即：is also now tackling…；are heading towards…，表达正在进行的拯救漓江水的积极措施，也体现了对治理漓江的重视和决心。 [微写作5]——补全句子 (1)他正在写一篇关于环境污染的论文。 He is writing a paper on environmental pollution. (2)政府正在寻找解决污染物排放的方法。 The government is looking for ways to deal with pollutant discharge. ★学逻辑衔接 第三、四段用Furthermore和 In addition 进一步提出解决水污染问题的方法，体现出作者较强的逻辑思维。表示递进关系的连接词还有moreover, besides, what's more等。 [微写作6]——翻译句子 (1)Furthermore, the local authorities began to use the media to spread environmental awareness and encourage greater use of clean energy. 此外，地方当局开始利用媒体传播环保意识，并鼓励(人们)更多地使用清洁能源。 (2)Although many people doubted it initially, the trash sorting program has achieved great success.Moreover, in the proposal for the 14th Five-Year Plan (2021～2025), the Central Committee said the country should speed up the building of waste recycling systems. 尽管一开始很多人对此表示怀疑，但垃圾分类计划已经取得了巨大的成功。此外，在“十四五”计划(2021年至2025年)的倡议书中，中央委员会表示，我国应加快垃圾回收系统的建设。 (一)输入好词 1．waste　n．废料；垃圾 2．recycle vt.回收；循环利用 3．environmentally-friendly adj.环保的 4．live a low-carbon life 过低碳生活 5．raise the awareness of 提高……的意识 6．alternative energy 替代能源 7．in harmony with nature 与自然和谐相处 8．die out 灭亡；逐渐消失 9．go from bad to worse 每况愈下 10．attach great importance to 十分重视 (二)输入好句 ◎第一段：对环境污染现象进行简要、客观地介绍 1．Many beautiful rivers and lakes have been polluted by the waste water from factories, and the polluted water even does harm to people as well as other living things. 许多美丽的河流和湖泊已经被工厂的废水污染， 被污染的水甚至对人和其他的生物有害。 2．The water of Qingjiang River in the past was clear to the bottom, calm without waves. 过去的清江水清澈见底，平静无浪。 ◎第二段：分析导致环境问题的原因以及采取的应对措施 1．And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution. 我们应该回收、减少和重复使用一些东西， 因为这样能节省钱， 也能减少污染。 2．Sadly, there are still some people who pay no attention to the outcome. 悲哀的是，仍旧有一些人无视这个结果。 3．If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.如果每个人都为保护环境作出贡献， 地球将变得更加美丽。 ◎第三段： 阐述个人的看法和建议 1．I believe in the near future, the earth will become more beautiful! 我相信在不久的将来，地球会变得更加美好！ 2．We need to work together to protect the earth and its ecological environment.我们要共同努力一起保护地球和地球上的生态环境。 3．In a word, it is our responsibility to make our earth more beautiful. 总之，我们有责任使我们的地球更美丽。 【写作要求】 全世界的环境问题正变得越来越严重。请根据这一事实写一篇以保护环境为主题的报告。内容主要包括： 1．污染正威胁着我们的生存； 2．我们有责任保护地球； 3．政府已采取措施应对这些问题； 4．坚信我们的家园会变得越来越好。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。 【四步成文】 第一步：审题谋篇 第二步：由词扩句 1．如今，世界各地污染变得越来越严重，正威胁着我们的生存。 Nowadays, pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world and is threatening our existence . 2．无论走到哪里，我们都能发现人们扔的垃圾。 Wherever we go, we can find rubbish thrown by people . 3．地球是我们的家园，爱护它是我们的责任。 The earth is our home and it's our duty to take care of it. 4．越来越多的人已经意识到这些问题，并为保护环境作出了贡献。 More and more people have realized these problems and have made a contribution to protecting the environment . 5．我们回收、减少和再利用物品，这样既省钱又减少污染。 We recycle, reduce and reuse things .This saves money and reduces pollution. 6．我们的政府已采取严格措施制止污染。 Our government has taken strict immediate measures to stop pollution . 7．希望每个人都应该尽自己的一份力量来保护地球，我们的家园将变得越来越好。 I hope each of us should do our part to protect our earth and our home will become better and better . 第三步：句式升级 把第二步中的句5合并升级为状语从句。 We recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution . 第四步：连句成篇 One possible version： Nowadays, pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world and is threatening our existence.Wherever we go, we can find rubbish thrown by people. The earth is our home and it's our duty to take care of it.Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems and have made a contribution to protecting the environment.We recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution.Our government has taken strict immediate measures to stop pollution. I hope each of us should do our part to protect our earth and our home will become better and better. 请根据以下要点写一篇英语报告。 1．由于你家乡经济的快速发展，当地的环境污染严重； 2．当地政府已经采取了一些措施来应对污染，例如增强人们的环保意识和制定法律法规等； 3．你建议大家共同努力，参与环保。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 One possible version： Nowadays, with the economy developing, the area surrounding my hometown has been badly polluted. Many of us have to breathe in some polluted air and drink some polluted water.In other words, we are nearly surrounded by bad pollution each day.The local government has taken some measures, which has improved the situation, such as strengthening people's awareness of environmental protection and making rules and laws. As far as I'm concerned, each person should do his part to protect the environment.Only in this way will we have a good future. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$