Unit 9 Period Five Part Ⅱ Writing（Word教参）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第三册（北师大版2024）

Part Ⅱ　Writing—A Learning Reflection 如何写学习反思 学习反思属于读书笔记类文章，主要总结归纳自己学习的收获和感想，写作时需要注意以下问题： 1．明白反思的原因，并选择反思的主题。写作前要认真思考、分析，对自己的反思加以提炼。列举读前关于该话题的认识，然后详细描述读后对同一话题更深层地理解。最后写如何把所学到的知识或技能应用到将来的实践中去。 2．注意“读”“思”结合，以“思”为主。学习反思是议论性较强的读书笔记，要用切身体会、实践经验和生动的事例来阐明从“读”中悟出的道理。因此，既要叙述，又必须说理。叙述是议论的基础，议论又是叙述的深化，二者必须结合。可以适当地引用原文，但引用不能太多，应以自己的语言为主。可使用夹叙夹议的手法，议论时应重于分析说理，事例不宜过多。 3．结构安排。一般分为三段，首段写反思的原因，引出话题。做到点题明确，过渡自然。主体段通过对所选话题的读前和读后对比，说明学习的收获，要逐条列举，层次清晰。末段主要阐述如何把所学内容应用到将来的学习和生活中，要紧密结合自身实际，切忌语言空泛，言之无物。 [常用表达] 1．...has helped me better understand... 2．Before reading the text, I didn't know... 3．It struck me most that... 4．What amazes me is that... 5．Now I understand why... 6．I also learnt that... 7．That is to say, everyone can... 8．Compared with...， it is more important that... 9．What's more, it is amazing to know... 10．We should make full use of... 11．Getting to know...not only...but also... 12．As far as I am concerned, if everyone can make most of... 13．I think I will follow the advice that... 14．Moreover, I must also learn to do... 15．In addition, I'm sure I'll apply what I have learned to my future work and study. 你读过《少年维特之烦恼》吗？年轻的维特来到一个小镇，这里的自然风光、淳朴的民风、天真快乐的儿童给予他极大的快乐。一次舞会上他认识了一个叫绿蒂的少女，她的一颦一笑、一举一动都让他倾倒；绿蒂也喜欢他，却不能予以爱的回报，她已与维特好友订婚。维特陷入了尴尬和痛苦，他毅然离开此地，力图从事业上得到解脱，有所成就，然而鄙陋的环境、污浊的人际关系、压抑个性窒息自由的现存秩序，都使他无法忍受，当他怀才不遇地重返绿蒂身边时，发现绿蒂已结婚，决定以死殉情，遂用一支手枪结束了自己的生命。读完之后你有什么收获，根据你的思考写一篇学习反思。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [审题] 写作要求是写一篇学习反思，简介书的主要内容及你的感受，你从书中得到了什么启发及如何面对生活。写作时应注意下面几点： 1．确定文体：这是一篇学习反思，写作中应注意学习反思的结构。 2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。 3．主体人称：由于是学习反思，所以人称应该以第三人称和第一人称为主。 [谋篇] 1．首段：简介书的主要内容及感受； 2．中段：从书中学到了什么； 3．尾段：启发及如何面对生活。 [核心词汇] 1．大声地　 loudly 2．勇敢地 bravely 3．拒绝 refuse 4．选择 choice 5．态度 attitude 6．爱上 fall in love with 7．迷失在……中 be lost in 8．即使；虽然 even if 9．为了；以便 so that 10．事实上；实际上 in fact [连词成句] 1．面对爱情，我们应该保持冷静。 When we face love, we should keep calm. 2．我们作出正确的选择。 We can make right choices. 3．有时候，并不是所有的事情都会变成我们期待的那样。 Sometimes, not everything is about what we want it to be. 4．也许有些事情是我们无法改变的。 Maybe there are some things we couldn't change. [句式升级] 1．请把句1和句2按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。(现在分词作状语，so that) Facing love, we should keep calm so that we can make right choices. 2．请把句3和句4按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。(and连接并列句) Sometimes, not everything is about what we want it to be, and maybe there are some things we couldn't change. 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。 One possible version： My Reflection on The Sorrows of Young Werther The Sorrows of Young Werther written by the famous German author Goethe describes that Werther happened to meet Lotte and fell in love with her，but Lotte had engaged with another man.Werther loved Lotte very much but he dared not tell his love to her.Finally，he shot himself with his sorrows. When I finished reading this book，I felt sad and sorry about his death.Facing love，we should keep calm so that we can make right choices. Sometimes，not everything is about what we want it to be，and maybe there are some things we couldn't change.However，we can change our attitudes toward life. 请以“My Reflection on Roots &Shoots”为题，用英语写一篇学习反思。 注意：1.观点明确，结构完整； 2．词数80左右。 One possible version： My Reflection on Roots & Shoots I have learnt a lot after reading the text Roots & Shoots.It's the name of an international institute which contributes to the protection of the environment. Little did I know about Roots & Shoots before I read the passage.Now I know that it was established in the early 1990s by Dr.Jane Goodall.It is called Roots & Shoots because roots move slowly under the ground to make a firm foundation.Additionally，although shoots seem small and weak，they can break open brick walls.The purpose of Roots & Shoots is to educate young people to protect the environment. It's the duty of everyone to take action to protect the environment from now on.Just as Dr.Jane Goodall says，every individual makes a difference.We should try our best to make the world a better place. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$