Unit 9 Writing Workshop 课件-2021-2022学年高中英语北师大版（2019）必修第三册

Writing Workshop: A Learning Reflection 2022/12/26 1 Unit 9 Learning 1 What is a reflective journal? What are the common addition linkers? What does a reflective journal often include? A reflective journal is a written record of what someone has learnt. Recalling Reflections on one’s past knowledge about … Reflections on what one has learnt. What one can do to improve … also, not only … but also … what’s more/moreover, in addition Figure out a thing that you have learnt recently/that has changed you the most recently. Reflect on what you have learnt from it. What I’m going to reflect on Why should I reflect on what I have learnt? What makes it special? What does it mean to me? What changes me the most? What have I learnt? Writing Step 1 Brainstorm Writing Step 2 Outlining Complete the outline of your reflection. Exchange the outline with your partner. Check whether each paragraph is clearly organized. Paragraph 1: 概述收获、今昔对比 Paragraph 2: 学到的内容+对此的理解 1) … 2) … 3) … Paragraph 3: 今后计划/后续会发生的改变 1) … 2) … 3) … Writing Step 3 Drafting Use the outline and the Writing Help to write your first draft. Writing Writing a Learning Reflection It’s important to: understand why you should reflect on what you have learnt; choose one topic that you want to reflect on; list what you knew about the topic before learning it, and what you know about it now; include how you will use your new skill/knowledge in the future Writing help Writing Step 4 Peer Editing Form a small group (with 3 to 4 members) Evaluate each other’s learning reflection according to the criteria on P93. Point out each journal’s shining points and things that need improvement. Summarize the common problems in those learning reflections. 1) content 2) coherence and cohesion 3) language accuracy (grammar & spelling) Based on your peers’ feedback, revise/polish your writing. Polish your topic sentences (sandwich paragraph & addition linkers). Correct spelling, punctuation or grammar errors. Revise unclear expressions. S