UNIT 2 课时作业6 读后续写专项（Word练习）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册（人教版2024）

课时作业(六)　读后续写专项 (建议用时：50分钟) 情感细节描写之“尴尬”和“羞愧” 形容词 embarrassed, awkward, ashamed, embarrassing, guilty 名词/动词 embarrassment, awkwardness, shame, embarrass 短语 ①in/with embarrassment 尴尬地　②with/in shame 羞愧地　 ③be struck dead with shame 羞愧得要死 ④hide one's embarrassment 掩饰某人的尴尬 1．按要求利用“尴尬、羞愧”的表达或其他烘托人物“尴尬、羞愧”的描述补全以下各句 (1)“她是个贴心的人。”她的丈夫声音颤抖地说，涨红的脸上写满了窘迫。 “She was truly a caring woman，” her husband said with a trembling voice, embarrassment written in his red face .(名词＋独立主格结构) (2)听到这话，女人羞愧地坐在那里，觉得两颊滚烫。 Hearing that, the woman sat there, ashamed, feeling her cheeks burning. (形容词作状语＋非谓语动词) (3)她怎么会对这样一个贴心的男人发怒呢？ How could she be angry with such a caring man？ (4)她从椅子上站起来，迟疑了一会儿，想着如何掩饰内心的尴尬。 She rose from her chair, and hesitated for a moment, wondering how to hide her inner embarrassment .(名词作宾语) (5)她垂下双眸，盯着自己的脚，希望没有人会注意到她有多尴尬。 She dropped her eyes and stared at her feet, hoping no one would notice how embarrassed she was .(形容词作表语) (6)她两颊通红，甚至没有勇气直视丈夫的眼睛。 With the color flooding her cheeks, she even had no courage to look into her husband's eyes .(神态描写) 2．将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文，注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇 One possible version： “She was truly a caring woman，” her husband said with a trembling voice, embarrassment written in his red face.Hearing that, the woman sat there, ashamed, feeling her cheeks burning.How could she be angry with such a caring man? She rose from her chair, and hesitated for a moment, wondering how to hide her inner embarrassment.Then, she dropped her eyes and stared at her feet, hoping no one would notice how embarrassed she was.With the color flooding her cheeks, she even had no courage to look into her husband's eyes. ★即使时间再紧，也要挤时间把范文抄写在这里，体会如何衔接语篇的同时练习书写。 阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 [1]My parents and I had just driven down the narrow mountain road from Marrakesh with all its sharp bends, and had finally arrived at Merzouga.Before us stretched the unending sand dunes(沙丘) that marked the beginning of the Sahara. [2]Our vehicle set off, quietly running over the sand and small stones.It wasn't long before we were surrounded by enormous sand dunes, towering above us on all sides.The wind was blowing grains of sand from the tops of the dunes, the sun was beating down hard and bright, and the sky was a deep shade of blue that I had never seen before.The wild beauty of the desert was about to reveal itself.There was not a plant to be seen.The desert appeared completely empty, which was calming and threatening at the same time. [3]Eventually, as the last rays of sunlight were falling on the sand, we arrived at our desert camp.Stars were already shining brightly in the darkening sky and it was getting cold with the approach of the night.I grabbed my bag and headed towards the warm campfire.I was starving and rushed to put a steak on the barbecue.We enjoyed two days in the camp with camel riding and campfire parties before we set off for Kenya. [4]A few days after our departure from the camp, we were very near to our rest camp in the Amboseli National Park.Mount Kilimanjaro, the highest mountain in Africa, rose up over the plains before us.Tall grass and trees dotted the plains, which were alive with the African wildlife.Giraffes, with their long necks, were pulling leaves from the highest branches.In the distance, elephants were eating grass, ears flapping lazily as they moved slowly over the plains. [5]The rest camp was in sight.Several huts made from brick settle across a large pool of water.The walls reflected the afternoon sun.My father, against my mother's advice, decided to drive through the pool of water that stretched across the dirt road. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 Then, our car was truly stuck in the mud._________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We got out of the car. ________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1．文本分析 主要人物 I and my parents 事件主线 作者和父母到撒哈拉沙漠露营。行车途中，父亲不听劝告，开车进了水潭，结果车陷在里面。 情感表达 (原文依据) [Para.2] calming and threatening 2.线索推测：两段首句定发展，始终不忘“3衔接1呼应” 标出两段首句关键词 续写第一段：Then, our car was truly stuck in the mud. 续写第二段：We got out of the car. 3衔接1呼应 第一段内容和第一段首句密切衔接；第一段结尾和第二段首句密切衔接 ❶根据第一段首句可知，“我们”的车 陷入泥泞之中 。第一段应描写：“我”和父母想办法脱困的过程——自救以及向 营地的工作人员 求救。 ❷根据第二段首句可知，“我们”下车了。第二段应描写：“我们”抵达了目的地： 营地 。抵达之后“我们”同样欣赏到了 美景 。 ❸由此可推测：第一段的结局：“我们”成功未能脱困。第二段的结局：经过这次旅行，“我们”感受到了 大自然的美 。 第二段内容和第二段首句密切衔接；第二段结尾和文章主旨相呼应 3．细节构思：每段三个微情节原则 第一段 情节 ①脱困——自救和向别人求救；②成功未能脱困；③回去的路上，欣赏到了美景，抵达目的地： 营地 动作描写 call for help (打电话求助 )→ come to one's rescue (营救某人)→ be impressed with (对……印象深刻) 心理描写 徒劳无功 in vain ；立即adv. immediately ；焦虑n. anxiety ；轻松，宽慰n. relief 第二段 情节 ①抵达营地之后，“我们”同样欣赏到了美景；②乞力马扎罗山及各种动物创造出一幅 和谐的画面 ；③升华：经过这次旅行，“我们”感受到了 大自然的美 。 动作描写 carry (拿；携带)→ stand (矗立)→ wave (飘扬；摇晃) 心理描写 吃惊的adj. amazed/surprised ；和谐的adj. harmonious ；幸运的adj. blessed/lucky 4．遣词造句：连词成句，连句成篇 高级词汇、词块&熟词生义 ① indicate v．表明；暗示　② anxiety n．焦虑 ③ relief n．轻松；宽慰 ④ broad adj.宽阔的；广阔的 ⑤ fresh adj.新鲜的 ⑥ in vain 徒劳无功 ⑦ come to one's rescue 营救某人 ⑧ be replaced with/by 被……代替 ⑨ be impressed with/by 对……印象深刻 高分句型 (1)v.-ing形式作状语 太阳就要下山，这表明我们需要加快速度。 The sun was setting, indicating we needed to be fast . (2)have no choice but to do sth别无选择只能做某事 我们别无选择，只能打电话给营地经理寻求帮助。 We had no choice but to call the manager of the camp for help. (3)“hardly…when…”结构中hardly置于句首引起部分倒装 我们还没来得及充分欣赏这美丽的景色就到达了营地。 Hardly had we fully enjoyed the great scenery when we arrived at our camp. (4)独立主格结构＋v.-ing形式作状语 乞力马扎罗山高高地矗立在夕阳下，动物们奔跑着，草随风摇曳，创造了一幅和谐的画面。 The Kilimanjaro stood high in the setting sun, the animals running and the grass waving, creating a harmonious picture . (5)v.-ing形式作主语 ①在这样一个美丽而狂野的地方，我们十分幸运！ Being in such a beautiful and wild place made us feel blessed to be alive! ②在这广阔的天空下睡觉，呼吸着新鲜的空气，将是最令人难以置信的冒险。 Sleeping under this broad sky and breathing the fresh air would make the most incredible adventure. (6)make＋宾语＋宾语补足语 我们相视而笑，觉得今晚让一切都值得。 Smiling at each other, we felt the evening just made everything worthwhile . (7)自然而然的升华：反问句 还有比这更好的吗？ What could be better？ 5．成文誊写 One possible version： Then, our car was truly stuck in the mud.Dad tried to drive out of the mud, but in vain.The sun was setting, indicating we needed to be fast.We had no choice but to call the manager of the camp for help.Minutes later, two local men who drove over with necessary equipment came to our rescue and immediately pushed us free.Our anxiety was replaced by relief.On our way to the hut, we were impressed again with what we saw.Hardly had we fully enjoyed the great scenery when we arrived at our camp. We got out of the car.After carrying our suitcases into the hut, we were amazed to find we could see the outside clearly through our windows.The Kilimanjaro stood high in the setting sun, the animals running and the grass waving, creating a harmonious picture.Being in such a beautiful and wild place made us feel blessed to be alive! 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