Module5 大纲法写生日聚会（课件）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（外研版三起）

Module 5 外研版三起五年级下册 大纲法写生日聚会 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 引入话题 突然发生的情况 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 4 01 写作方法指引 主题：描述生日聚会 开头：引入话题 介绍今天是自己的生日 介绍生日派对的举办地点 主体：介绍人物活动 结尾：表达自己在生日派对上的感受 说明家人、朋友的活动 描述意外情况 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 5 01 写作方法指引-示例 Hey, I'm Zhang Hua. Today is my 12th birthday. I'm having a surprise party in our garden. Look! My mom and aunt are hanging colorful balloons on the fence. My dad is grilling sausages and burgers near the patio. My best friends are blowing up party horns and chasing each other with confetti. Two of my cousins are setting up a karaoke machine under the apple tree. I am cutting the chocolate cake when our pet dog, Lucky, suddenly jumps up and licks my face! Everyone bursts into laughter. This is the most unforgettable birthday I've ever had! Hey, I'm Zhang Hua. Today is my 12th birthday. I'm having a surprise party in our garden. Look! My mom and aunt are hanging colorful balloons on the fence. My dad is grilling sausages and burgers near the patio. My best friends are blowing up party horns and chasing each other with confetti. Two of my cousins are setting up a karaoke machine under the apple tree. I am cutting the chocolate cake when our pet dog, Lucky, suddenly jumps up and licks my face! Everyone bursts into laughter. This is the most unforgettable birthday I've ever had! 引入话题 Hey, I'm Zhang Hua. Today is my 12th birthday. I'm having a surprise party in our garden. Look! My mom and aunt are hanging colorful balloons on the fence. My dad is grilling sausages and burgers near the patio. My best friends are blowing up party horns and chasing each other with confetti. Two of my cousins are setting up a karaoke machine under the apple tree. I am cutting the chocolate cake when our pet dog, Lucky, suddenly jumps up and licks my face! Everyone bursts into laughter. This is the most unforgettable birthday I've ever had! 介绍人物活动 Hey, I'm Zhang Hua. Today is my 12th birthday. I'm having a surprise party in our garden. Look! My mom and aunt are hanging colorful balloons on the fence. My dad is grilling sausages and burgers near the patio. My best friends are blowing up party horns and chasing each other with confetti. Two of my cousins are setting up a karaoke machine under the apple tree. I am cutting the chocolate cake when our pet dog, Lucky, suddenly jumps up and licks my face! Everyone bursts into laughter. This is the most unforgettable birthday I've ever had! 突然发生的情况 Hey, I'm Zhang Hua. Today is my 12th birthday. I'm having a surprise party in our garden. Look! My mom and aunt are hanging colorful balloons on the fence. My dad is grilling sausages and burgers near the patio. My best friends are blowing up party horns and chasing each other with confetti. Two of my cousins are setting up a karaoke machine under the apple tree. I am cutting the chocolate cake when our pet dog, Lucky, suddenly jumps up and licks my face! Everyone bursts into laughter. This is the most unforgettable birthday I've ever had! 表达自己在生日派对上的感受 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.引入话题-引出今天是自己的生日以及生日派对的举办地点 参考句型： 介绍自己的名字/生日派对的举办地点: Hi, my name is... Today is my birthday. I'm having a birthday party at... Hello, I'm... Today is my birthday. I'm having a birthday party at...- Hey, I'm... Today is my birthday. I'm having a birthday party at... 参考单词：birthday（生日）；party（派对）；home（家）；garden（花园）；living room（客厅）；backyard（后院） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 8 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2. 详细描述生日派对上家人和朋友们正在进行的活动 参考句型： Look! My... are... My... is/are... Some of my friends are... I am... but suddenly... happens. Look! My... are... My... is/are... Many of my friends are... I am... and then... appears. Look! My... are... My... is/are... A few of my friends are... I am... when... arrives. 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 9 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2. 详细描述生日派对上家人和朋友们正在进行的活动 参考词汇： 家人活动：cook（做饭）decorate（装饰）prepare（准备）draw（画画）set up（搭建） 朋友活动相关：dance（跳舞）take photos（拍照）play games（玩游戏）sing（唱歌）play cards（打牌） 意外事件相关：phone（电话）ring（响铃）knock（敲）door（门）enter（进入）arrive（到达）appear（出现） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 10 02 基础知识精讲-语法 现在进行时和一般现在时 概念与用法 现在进行时：表示现在正在进行的动作或存在的状态，强调动作在说话时正在发生。 例如：I am reading a book.（我正在读一本书。） 一般现在时：表示经常、反复发生的动作或存在的状态，也可表示客观事实、真理等。 例如：I usually get up at 6 o'clock.（我通常在6点起床。） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 11 02 基础知识精讲-语法 现在进行时和一般现在时 概念与用法 现在进行时：常见的时间状语有now（现在），at the moment（此刻），look（看），listen（听）等。 例如：Listen! She is singing.（听！她正在唱歌。） 一般现在时：常与always（总是），usually（通常），often（经常），sometimes（有时），never（从不），every day/week/month/year（每天/每周/每月/每年）等时间状语连用。 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 12 用所给动词的适当形式填空。 1.Look! The children _________（play）in the park. 2. He _________ （go）to school by bus every day. 3.I _________ （read）a book now. 4.She _________ （like）drawing pictures. 02 基础知识精讲-语法 are playing goes are reading likes 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 模拟写作提升1 假设你是李明，今天是你的生日。请依据以下问题，用现在进行时描述你的生日派对情况，文章不少于70词，语法无误，表达流畅，逻辑清晰。 1. Where is your birthday party taking place? 2. What are your family doing at the moment? 3. What are your friends occupied with? 4. What happens when you are in the process of the party? 5. How do you feel about this special day? 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 参考句型: Hey, I'm... Today is my birthday. I'm having a birthday party at... Look! My... are... My... is/are... A few of my friends are... I am... when... arrives. I am really... now. 参考词汇: birthday（生日）party（派对）backyard（后院）set up（搭建）sing（唱歌）；play cards（打牌）neighbor（邻居）join（加入）grateful（感激的）ice cream（冰淇淋）share（分享） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 16 范文3： Hey, I'm Li Ming. Today is my birthday. I'm having a birthday party in the backyard. Look! My father and uncle are setting up a tent. My mother is bringing out some ice cream. My friends are singing and dancing happily. A few of my friends are playing cards under the tree. I am sharing snacks with everyone but my neighbor comes over and joins us. I am really grateful now. This birthday party is full of joy and surprises. 引入话题 介绍人物活动 突然发生的情况 自己在生日派对上的感受 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 17 模拟写作提升2 假如你是王丽，今天迎来了你的生日。请结合下面的问题，运用现在进行时描绘你的生日聚会场景，字数70词以上，书写规范，表达准确，行文连贯。 1. Where are you having the birthday party? 2. What are your parents busy with? 3. What activities are your friends engaged in? 4. What takes place while you are doing something at the party? 5. How do you feel about this birthday celebration? 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 18 参考句型： Hello, I'm... Today is my birthday. I'm having a birthday party at... Look! My... are... My... is/are... Many of my friends are... I am... and then... appears. I am extremely... now. 参考单词： birthday（生日）party（派对）living room（客厅）prepare（准备）play games（玩游戏）draw（画画）cousin（表亲）enter（进入）joyful（喜悦的）candle（蜡烛）wish（许愿） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 19 范文2： Hello, I'm Wang Li. Today is my birthday. I'm having a birthday party in the living room. Look! My parents are busy preparing the birthday cake. My little brother is drawing a picture for me. Many of my friends are playing games together. I am putting candles on the cake but my cousin enters with a big present. I am extremely joyful now. I make a wish and hope all my dreams will come true. 引入话题 介绍人物活动 突然发生的情况 表达自己在生日派对上的感受 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 20 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 假设你是李芳，今天是你的生日。请结合以下问题，用现在进行时描述生日会上的情景。要求语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，标点正确，书写规范，无语法错误，字数不少于70词。 1. Where are you having the birthday party? 2. What are your parents doing? 3. What are your friends doing? 4. What happens when you are doing...? 5. How do you feel now? 真题写作练习-四川成都 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 22 参考句型： Hello, my name is... Today is my birthday. I'm having a birthday party at... Look! My parents are... My... is/are... Some other friends are... I am... but... rings. It's... calling to... I am... now. 参考单词： birthday（生日）party（派对）home（家）cook（做饭）friend（朋友）read（阅读）sing（唱歌）phone（电话）ring（响铃）happy（开心的）eat（吃）cake（蛋糕）drink（喝）cola（可乐）cut（切）apple（苹果）chat（聊天）laugh（笑）dish（菜肴）celebrate（庆祝） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 23 Hello, my name is Li Fang. Today is my birthday. I am having a birthday party at home. Look! My parents are cooking in the kitchen. They are making my favorite dishes to celebrate my special day. My little sister is playing with her dolls. She is talking to them as if they are real friends. My friend Lily is eating a cake. Amy is drinking a cola. Some other friends are chatting and laughing loudly. I am cutting apples but the phone rings. It's my best friend from another city, calling to send his birthday wishes. I am so happy now. 范文3： 引入话题 介绍人物活动 突然发生的情况 表达自己在生日派对上的感受 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 24 Thank you! $$