考题猜想09 英语作文【精选名校试题】-2024-2025学年高一下期中考点大串讲（上海通用）

专题09 英语作文（精选名校试题） 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海复旦大学附属中学2023-2024学年高一下学期期中考试英语试题 假如你是明启中学的李华，即将在英语周的演讲活动中以“三十岁，我的成功我定义”（How I define my successful life when I am thirty）为题进行演讲。你的演讲稿必须包括： 1）描绘自己心目中成功的场景 2）计划为了实现这个目标的准备 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in English. 【来源】上海市闵行区上海师范大学附属中学闵行分校2023-2024学年高一下学期4月期中英语试题 生活在网络发达，信息爆炸的当下，碎片化的学习（fragmented learning）变得越来越普遍。有些人认为碎片化学习是对时间的合理利用，而另一些人认为碎片化学习使人丧失了静心学习的动力，会适得其反。请结合生活中的实例，谈谈你的看法并说明理由。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市普陀区宜川中学2023-2024学年高一下学期英语期中考试卷 学校即将开展的班会上会要求学生对于“What leads to success”这个话题来谈谈看法。 请你就此话题表达自己的观点，内容包括： 1. 描述你所认为成功的要素；2. 请结合自己或他人的经历来说明你的观点。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市浦东新区2023-2024学年高一下学期期中考试英语试题 假设你是明启中学高一学生李华，最近你发现在体育锻炼期间，很多同学在学习或聊天，并没有进行体育锻炼，请你写一封邮件给学生会，信件必须包含以下内容： 1. 简要描述该现象； 2. 谈谈你的观点； 3. 给出合理建议和理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市嘉定区第二中学2023-2024学年高一下学期期中英语试卷 学校要求高一年级在期中考试后举行“读书分享”活动，作为班级代表，你将结合事例或自身经历，分享对海明威名言“But man is not made for defeat.”的解读。请准备一篇演讲稿，字数在120-150之间，(开头已为你写好，不计入总字数) Ladies and gentlemen, my fellow students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市复兴高级中学2022-2023学年高一下学期期中英语试卷 假设你是明启中学高一学生李明，你在The Evening News这份报纸上看到一篇关于改造你所在的城市的文章，文中提到了将河边的一块空地改造成自然保护区（nature reserve）。你认为这个改造方案的提议不受年轻人欢迎，请写一封信给该报的编辑，谈谈你的看法，你的文章必须包括： 1. 你不赞同建自然保护区的原因； 2. 提出一个替代的方案并说明原因。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市曹杨第二中学2022-2023学年高一下学期期中考试英语试卷 Nowadays more and more people stress the importance of music education. Some students suggest having one more music class every week. Suppose you were Li Hua from Senior One, write an essay to your school newspaper and express your opinions on the topic “Should students have one more music class every week?” Dear editor,               ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully, Li Hua 8．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海大学附属嘉定高中2023-2024学年高一下学期期中质量监测英语试题 最近学校将举办一场主题为“成功”的英语演讲比赛，Amy很感兴趣，但她不知道准备什么内容，也觉得自己的英语口语不太好，内心充满焦虑；请你给她写一封信，谈谈你的看法， 内容必须包括： 1.你对她存在问题的分析； 2.你针对她这些问题对应的建议与理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市嘉定区封浜高级中学2023-2024学年高一下学期期中考试英语试卷 请以“A letter to a hobby”写一篇100到120字的文章，讲述你有关这项兴趣爱好的经历和感受。 你的文章必须包含以下内容： 1.这项爱好的具体内容； 2.有关这项爱好的经历和你的感受。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市杨浦区2023-2024学年高一下学期4月模拟质量调研英语试题 上海许多公园开始实行24小时向公众开放，你赞成这种做法吗?请谈谈你的看法和理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 4 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题09 英语作文（精选名校试题） 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海复旦大学附属中学2023-2024学年高一下学期期中考试英语试题 假如你是明启中学的李华，即将在英语周的演讲活动中以“三十岁，我的成功我定义”（How I define my successful life when I am thirty）为题进行演讲。你的演讲稿必须包括： 1）描绘自己心目中成功的场景 2）计划为了实现这个目标的准备 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 How I Define My Successful Life When I Am Thirty Ladies and Gentlemen, I am Li Hua from Mingqi High School, and today, I stand before you to share my vision of what success looks like when I turn thirty. In my mind, success is not merely about material wealth or high-flying positions. Instead, I envision myself at thirty, surrounded by a loving family, filled with laughter and warmth. I see myself as a respected professional in my field, but more importantly, as a mentor and a friend to those around me. To achieve this goal, I am committed to continuous learning and growth. I plan to invest in my education, both academically and personally, to ensure that I am well-prepared for the challenges ahead. I will also cultivate meaningful relationships, as I believe that true success is built on the foundation of strong interpersonal connections. In conclusion, my definition of success at thirty is not about reaching a particular milestone, but rather about being happy, fulfilled, and making a positive impact on the world. Thank you for listening. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“三十岁，我的成功我定义”（How I define my successful life when I am thirty）为题写一篇演讲稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 想象：envision→picture 确保：ensure→make sure 影响：impact→effect 总之：in conclusion→in short 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To achieve this goal, I am committed to continuous learning and growth. 拓展句：If I want to achieve this goal, I will be committed to continuous learning and growth. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I am Li Hua from Mingqi High School, and today, I stand before you to share my vision of what success looks like when I turn thirty. (运用了what引导宾语从句和when引导时间状语从句) [高分句型2] I plan to invest in my education, both academically and personally, to ensure that I am well-prepared for the challenges ahead. (运用了that引导宾语从句) 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in English. 【来源】上海市闵行区上海师范大学附属中学闵行分校2023-2024学年高一下学期4月期中英语试题 生活在网络发达，信息爆炸的当下，碎片化的学习（fragmented learning）变得越来越普遍。有些人认为碎片化学习是对时间的合理利用，而另一些人认为碎片化学习使人丧失了静心学习的动力，会适得其反。请结合生活中的实例，谈谈你的看法并说明理由。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】With the rapid development of science and technology in our society, people’s lifestyle has also changed tremendously. The Internet has divided people’s whole time into a great number of fragmented sections. Some people hold a view that they can use fragmented time to learn many things. However, others disagree with them. As far as I’m concerned, I support the former. We waste much time in commuting every day. Using the fragmented time on a subway to read a book, we will save more time to accumulate more knowledge than before. What’s more, it is convenient to read a book on the phone instead of a book. Fragmented learning can not only save time but also increase efficiency. In conclusion, fragmented time is short but much. So we had better make good use of it to do many meaningful things. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，随着网络发达，碎片化的学习变得越来越普遍，有些人认为碎片化学习是对时间的合理利用，而另一些人认为碎片化学习使人丧失了静心学习的动力，会适得其反。要求考生结合实例谈谈自己的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 变化：change→transform 使分开：divide→separate 支持：support→be in favor of 有意义的：meaningful→significant 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Fragmented learning can not only save time but also increase efficiency. 拓展句：Not only can fragmented learning save time but also it increases efficiency. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Some people hold a view that they can use fragmented time to learn many things.（运用了that引导同位语从句） 【高分句型2】Using the fragmented time on a subway to read a book, we will save more time to accumulate more knowledge than before.（运用了现在分词作状语） 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市普陀区宜川中学2023-2024学年高一下学期英语期中考试卷 学校即将开展的班会上会要求学生对于“What leads to success”这个话题来谈谈看法。 请你就此话题表达自己的观点，内容包括： 1. 描述你所认为成功的要素；2. 请结合自己或他人的经历来说明你的观点。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “What leads to success”. I would like to share my opinions on the most important factor of success and that is time management. As in my case, the abilities of time management really benefited me a lot in adapting myself to the new learning model. By prioritizing tasks, every day was in apple-pie order. I arranged for sufficient time for reviewing and previewing, helping boost my study efficiency and consolidate the knowledge. What’s more, with a sensible time schedule, my distraction time also went down and thus my hours of work were spent more efficiently and effectively. Therefore, my studying momentum and vigor is ensured. For reasons above, it’s my firm belief that time management is to an individual what wind is to the sailing boat. Therefore, there is no denying that it is wise time management that will lead to success. Thank you! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于“What leads to success”这个话题表达自己的观点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 观点：opinion →view 适应：adapt oneself to → adjust oneself to 此外：what’s more →moreover 导致：lead to →result in 2.句式拓展 并列句变复合句 原句：I would like to share my opinions on the most important factor of success and that is time management. 拓展句：I would like to share my opinions on the most important factor of success, which is time management. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I arranged for sufficient time for reviewing and previewing, helping boost my study efficiency and consolidate the knowledge.（运用了现在分词短语作状语） 【高分句型2】For reasons above, it’s my firm belief that time management is to an individual what wind is to the sailing boat.（运用了that引导的同位语从句） 4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市浦东新区2023-2024学年高一下学期期中考试英语试题 假设你是明启中学高一学生李华，最近你发现在体育锻炼期间，很多同学在学习或聊天，并没有进行体育锻炼，请你写一封邮件给学生会，信件必须包含以下内容： 1. 简要描述该现象； 2. 谈谈你的观点； 3. 给出合理建议和理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Student Council, I am Li Hua, a student from Grade 1 at Mingqi High School. I am writing to express my concern about a recent trend I have observed during our designated physical exercise sessions. Many of my classmates have been observed engaging in study or casual chats instead of engaging in physical activities. I believe this is a concerning trend, as physical education is crucial for our overall well-being. Not only does it improve our physical fitness, but it also contributes to our mental health and academic performance. To address this issue, I propose that the Student Council organize engaging and fun physical activities that would motivate students to participate. Regular reminders and encouragement from teachers and peers can also help reinforce the importance of physical exercise. Thank you for considering my suggestions. I hope we can work together to make a positive change. Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假设是明启中学高一学生李华，最近你发现在体育锻炼期间，很多同学在学习或聊天，并没有进行体育锻炼，请你写一封邮件给学生会。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参与：engage in→get involved in 考虑：consider→take into account 激励：motivate→stimulate 解决：address→solve 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：To address this issue, I propose that the Student Council organize engaging and fun physical activities that would motivate students to participate. 拓展句：I propose that the Student Council organize engaging and fun physical activities that would motivate students to participate so that we can address this issue. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only does it improve our physical fitness, but it also contributes to our mental health and academic performance. (运用了倒装句部分倒装句，not only...but also连接句子时，not only位于句首，该部分用部分倒装) [高分句型2] To address this issue, I propose that the Student Council organize engaging and fun physical activities that would motivate students to participate. (运用了不定式作目的状语和activities后that引导的限制性定语从句) 5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市嘉定区第二中学2023-2024学年高一下学期期中英语试卷 学校要求高一年级在期中考试后举行“读书分享”活动，作为班级代表，你将结合事例或自身经历，分享对海明威名言“But man is not made for defeat.”的解读。请准备一篇演讲稿，字数在120-150之间，(开头已为你写好，不计入总字数) Ladies and gentlemen, my fellow students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Ladies and gentlemen, my fellow students, Today, standing here as a representative of our class, I would like to share with you my understanding of Hemingway’s famous quote, “But man is not made for defeat.” This profound statement encapsulates the essence of human resilience and perseverance. In my own experience, I faced numerous challenges and setbacks, but it was my refusal to be defeated that propelled me forward. For instance, when I struggled with a difficult math problem, I didn’t give up. Instead, I persevered, seeking help and eventually overcoming the obstacle. Hemingway’s words remind us that our greatest strength lies in our ability to overcome adversity. No matter the obstacles we encounter, we must never surrender. Let us embrace challenges, learn from them, and rise above them. Because, indeed, man is not made for defeat. Thank you. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生结合事例或自身经历，分享对海明威名言“But man is not made for defeat.”的解读。 【详解】1.词汇积累 例如：for instance→for example 许多：numerous→many 本质：essence→nature 放弃：give up→quit 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：In my own experience, I faced numerous challenges and setbacks, but it was my refusal to be defeated that propelled me forward. 拓展句：In my own experience, although I faced numerous challenges and setbacks, it was my refusal to be defeated that propelled me forward. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Hemingway’s words remind us that our greatest strength lies in our ability to overcome adversity. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] For instance, when I struggled with a difficult math problem, I didn’t give up. (运用了when引导时间状语从句) 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市复兴高级中学2022-2023学年高一下学期期中英语试卷 假设你是明启中学高一学生李明，你在The Evening News这份报纸上看到一篇关于改造你所在的城市的文章，文中提到了将河边的一块空地改造成自然保护区（nature reserve）。你认为这个改造方案的提议不受年轻人欢迎，请写一封信给该报的编辑，谈谈你的看法，你的文章必须包括： 1. 你不赞同建自然保护区的原因； 2. 提出一个替代的方案并说明原因。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear editor, I am Li Ming from Mingqi High School. Here I am writing to respond to your article about establishing a nature reserve by the river. Actually, I don’t think it popular among young people. Although a nature reserve can be beneficial in providing habitats for wild animals and plants and protecting our environment, it should be acknowledged that a city with such a large population cannot afford to spare a vast space to function simply as a nature reserve. There may be a more feasible and beneficial plan, which can take into account both the wild lives and the citizens. A recreational wetland park, I believe, is an alternative for you to consider. In this park, for one thing, the wild lives, especially those birds, can seek shelter and the water quality can be improved. For another, the citizens, as they appreciate the natural ecology and gain relief, can have more options to have various activities. To illustrate, teenagers can go biking or hiking and the family with children can go camping. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给报纸的编辑写信，针对河边空地的改造方案提出想法，需说明不赞同建自然保护区的立场和原因，并提出替代方案和原因。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 回应：respond to→reply to, react to 实际上：actually→in fact, in reality, in truth 有益的：beneficial→advantageous, favorable, rewarding 可行的：feasible→viable, practical 考虑：take… into account→take… into consideration, consider 选择：option→choice, selection 例如：to illustrate→for example, for instance, to exemplify 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Actually, I don’t think it popular among young people. 拓展句：Actually, I don’t think that it will be popular among young people. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Although a nature reserve can be beneficial in providing habitats for wild animals and plants and protecting our environment, it should be acknowledged that a city with such a large population cannot afford to spare a vast space to function simply as a nature reserve.（运用了although引导的让步状语从句、that引导的主语从句） 【高分句型2】There may be a more feasible and beneficial plan, which can take into account both the wild lives and the citizens.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市曹杨第二中学2022-2023学年高一下学期期中考试英语试卷 Nowadays more and more people stress the importance of music education. Some students suggest having one more music class every week. Suppose you were Li Hua from Senior One, write an essay to your school newspaper and express your opinions on the topic “Should students have one more music class every week?” Dear editor,               ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【答案】Dear editor,      Writing this letter, I am trying to express my standpoint on whether students should have one more music class every week. I am strongly for the proposal that students should have one more music class every week.      Since music education is a required subject and is helpful in developing students’ ability in appreciating beauty, It is advisable that the school open more than one music class every week for students to attend. Then, students are having too much stress from their study and they need an appropriate time to relax themselves. Singing or just enjoying music in a music class is a good way to free them from heavy study and be more concentrated in the following classes.      I hope my proposal will be helpful to you!                                                                 Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇投稿，要求考生给校报投稿，表明自己关于“学生是否应每周上一节以上的音乐课？”主题的观点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 培养：develop→ cultivate 试图：try to → attempt to 压力：stress→ pressure 有益的：be helpful→ be beneficial 2.句式拓展 同义句转化 原句：Then, students are having too much stress from their study and they need an appropriate time to relax themselves. 拓展句：Having too much stress from their study, students need an appropriate time to relax themselves. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am strongly for the proposal that students should have one more music class every week.（同位语从句） 【高分句型2】Singing or just enjoying music in a music class is a good way to free them from heavy study and be more concentrated in the following classes.（动名词短语做主语） 8．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海大学附属嘉定高中2023-2024学年高一下学期期中质量监测英语试题 最近学校将举办一场主题为“成功”的英语演讲比赛，Amy很感兴趣，但她不知道准备什么内容，也觉得自己的英语口语不太好，内心充满焦虑；请你给她写一封信，谈谈你的看法， 内容必须包括： 1.你对她存在问题的分析； 2.你针对她这些问题对应的建议与理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Amy, I’ve noticed your interest in the “Success” themed English speech competition, and I’m excited for you! It’s natural to feel anxious, especially when you’re stepping out of your comfort zone. Your concern about content preparation is valid. To tackle this, you could start by brainstorming topics that resonate with you personally. Reflect on your own experiences or research success stories that inspire you. This will not only make your speech authentic but also engaging for your audience. As for your spoken English, it’s important to remember that confidence comes with practice. Begin by writing your speech and then rehearse it aloud. This will help you become more fluent and comfortable with the language. Additionally, try to immerse yourself in English by listening to podcasts or watching English-language shows. This exposure will improve your pronunciation and comprehension. Remember, the competition is as much about your message as it is about your language skills. Focus on delivering your thoughts with clarity and conviction. Confidence in your ideas will overshadow any linguistic imperfections. Believe in your potential and embrace the opportunity to grow. You have the ability to inspire and be inspired. Good luck, and I’m looking forward to hearing your speech. Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好朋友Amy写一封信，帮助她克服口语不好的焦虑感，给出相应的建议并说明理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： ① 焦虑：anxiety→worry ② 练习：practice→exercise ③ 信心：confidence→self-reliance ④ 清晰：clarity→distinctness 2. 句式拓展： 简单句变复合句 原句：I’ve noticed your interest in the “Success” themed English speech competition. 拓展句：I’ve noticed your interest in the English speech competition that is themed “Success”. 【点睛】【高级句型1】To tackle this, you could start by brainstorming topics that resonate with you personally.（运用了that引导的定语从句） 【高级句型2】Reflect on your own experiences or research success stories that inspire you.（运用了that引导的定语从句） 9．Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市嘉定区封浜高级中学2023-2024学年高一下学期期中考试英语试卷 请以“A letter to a hobby”写一篇100到120字的文章，讲述你有关这项兴趣爱好的经历和感受。 你的文章必须包含以下内容： 1.这项爱好的具体内容； 2.有关这项爱好的经历和你的感受。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 A letter to a hobby Dear Gardening, As I pen this letter to you, my heart fills with joy and tranquility. Gardening has been a passion of mine for years, and every day spent nurturing plants brings me immense satisfaction. Remember the first time I planted a seed and watched it sprout into a vibrant flower? That moment of wonder and accomplishment is what keeps me coming back. The colors, the smells, and the sense of connection with nature are all part of the magic you bring to my life. Thank you, Gardening, for being a constant source of peace and inspiration. You have taught me patience, resilience, and the beauty of life in its simplest forms. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“A letter to a hobby”写一篇100到120字的文章，讲述你有关这项兴趣爱好的经历和感受。 【详解】1.词汇积累 充满：fill with→be full of 快乐：joy→happiness 爱好：passion→hobby 记得：remember→recall 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Gardening has been a passion of mine for years, and every day spent nurturing plants brings me immense satisfaction. 拓展句：Gardening has been a passion of mine for years, which brings me immense satisfaction. 【点睛】[高分句型1] As I pen this letter to you, my heart fills with joy and tranquility. (运用了as引导时间状语从句) [高分句型2] That moment of wonder and accomplishment is what keeps me coming back. (运用了what引导表语从句) 10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市杨浦区2023-2024学年高一下学期4月模拟质量调研英语试题 上海许多公园开始实行24小时向公众开放，你赞成这种做法吗?请谈谈你的看法和理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I absolutely support the idea of Shanghai's many parks being open to the public 24 hours a day. Not only does it provide more opportunities for people to enjoy the beautiful green spaces that the city has to offer, but it also promotes a healthier and more active lifestyle. With busy work schedules and limited free time, having access to these parks at all hours of the day allows for greater flexibility in incorporating exercise and outdoor activities into our daily routines. Additionally, it can create a safer environment as more people will be using the parks, discouraging criminal activity. However, it is important to ensure that there are adequate security measures in place to maintain the safety of those using the parks at night. Overall, I believe this initiative is a positive step towards creating a more livable and enjoyable city for its residents. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就上海许多公园开始实行24小时向公众开放一事，说出的是否赞成并谈谈你的看法和理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 支持：support → be in favor of 看法：idea → perspective 使用：use→ employ 重要的：be important→ be significant 2.句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：I absolutely support the idea of Shanghai's many parks being open to the public 24 hours a day. 拓展句：I fully endorse the concept of Shanghai's numerous parks maintaining round-the-clock accessibility to the public. 【点睛】【高分句型1】With busy work schedules and limited free time, having access to these parks at all hours of the day allows for greater flexibility in incorporating exercise and outdoor activities into our daily routines.（使用了介词短语作状语和动名词短语作主语） 【高分句型2】However, it is important to ensure that there are adequate security measures in place to maintain the safety of those using the parks at night.（使用了it做形式主语，真正的主语为动词不定式短语和that引导的宾语从句） 1 / 12 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$