读后续写人际关系类 同学情谊（借油画棒）讲义-2025届高三下学期英语一轮复习专项

读后续写人际关系类 同学情谊（借油画棒） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a sunny day. Anabia, an 11-year-old girl, was excited because today was the drawing contest at her school. Anabia was really good at drawing and usually got the highest marks in art. Her teachers would often ask her to make posters for school plays and call on her during free periods to help with cuttings, drawing, shading, coloring and much more. There was an art competition taking place in school and Anabia had worked really hard and wanted to win it. But there was one thing that was disturbing her today. Recently, a new girl, Rida, had joined her class. She was also interested in art but she was not as good at drawing as Anabia was. Miss Saima, the art teacher, helped Rida and taught her tips and tricks to improve her drawing skill. And now Rida was also considered among the best artists in grade six. Rida was quick, smart and intelligent. Anabia became jealou of Rida’s intelligence and felt that the new girl would be tough to beat. So that day, for the art competition, Miss Saima took all the students to the art room, told them their roll numbers and gave important instructions. Anabia’s roll number was 16, while Rida was number 17. The bell rang, indicating the beginning of the contest. Miss Saima wrote on the board: make a scene of a sunset with a flowing river and a sailing boat. Anabia knew that the best tools to make a sunset were oil pastels (油画棒). Anabia started to look for her oil pastels in her art bag. Then, after looking through the bag, she remembered that she had left them at home. Immediately, she got up to tell Miss Saima. Miss Saima was disappointed at Anabia’s carelessness and told her that she could not help her, as it was her responsibility to be prepared for the contest that had been announced a week in advance. Anabia’s best friends were also there, but none of them offered to share anything, much to Anabia’s surprise and disappointment. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Anabia’s eyes were filled with tears. ▲ ▲ Then Rida held Anabia’s hand, and the two girls waited for the winners to be announced. __________________________________________▲ 一、文章大意 文章描述了Anabia和Rida之间的故事。学校组织的一次绘画大赛，Anabia因为忘记带油画棒而心情低落，Rida则在关键时刻帮助了她。 二、续写视角 第三人称 三、续写主题 主题：人与人----同学情谊(借油画棒) 四、续写情节构建 Para1: Anabia失望、无助、眼含泪水------Rida出手相助------Anabia投入画作 Para2:两人等待获胜者的宣布------宣布后两人的反应------Anabia的感悟 (/两人等待获胜者的宣布时------Anabia为之前想法道歉,并感谢Rida的及时帮助------成为朋友) 五、参考范文 Anabia’ s eyes were filled with tears. She found something hard to swallow(吞咽). To her sadness, she lost the art competition before she even started. Just then, a box of oil painting sticks appeared in front of her eyes. “If you don’t mind, I think we can share these,” Rida, the girl who she once hoped to beat, extended a helping hand. Anabia hesitated, but quickly they were both devoted to their works. Time flied in the blink of an eye. After handing in their works, Anabia reached out her hand. Then Rida held Anabia’s hand, and the two girls waited for the winners to be announced. “I’m sorry. I once became jealous of your intelligence and hoped to beat you,” Anabia apologized sincerely. Rida hugged her delightedly and said she hoped they would be friends in the future. It seemed that who would be the winner was not so important at the moment. The sun shone warm sunlight into the room and also shone on the hearts of the two girls. The world always prepares surprise for the people who like the sun. They both got the first place. (echo) 阿纳比亚的眼睛里充满了泪水。她尽力忍住不哭。令她难过的是，她甚至在开始之前就输掉了绘画比赛。就在这时，一盒油画棒出现在她的眼前。“如果你不介意的话，我想我们可以分享这些，”丽达，那个她曾经希望打败的女孩，伸出了援助之手。阿纳比亚犹豫了一下，但很快她们俩都投入到各自的作品中。时间一眨眼就过去了。交完作品后，阿纳比亚伸出了手。 然后丽达握住了阿纳比亚的手，两个女孩等待着获胜者的宣布。“对不起。我曾经嫉妒你的聪明，希望能打败你，”阿纳比亚真诚地道歉。丽达高兴地拥抱了她，说希望她们以后能成为朋友。此刻看来，谁会是获胜者并不那么重要。温暖的阳光照进了房间，也照在了两个女孩的心上。世界总是为喜欢阳光的人准备惊喜。她们俩儿都获得了第一名。 六、学生优秀习作 Anabia’ s eyes were filled with tears. A sense of helplessness and despair swept over her. She was about to give up when Rida pushed a box toward her, packed with colorful oil pastels. “If you don’t mind, let’s share these.” Rida said with a warm and comforting smile. Never in her wildest dreams did Anabia think Rida would extend a helping hand. Surprised and happy, Anabia cast a grateful glance at Rida and uttered a silent “thank you”. She then devoted herself to her painting with all her mind. Eventually, the two girls finished their works, their eyes meeting. Anabia got to Rida and reached out her hand. Then Rida held Anabia’s hand, and the two girls waited for the winners to be announced. Miss Saima cleared her throat, put on an excited face and exclaimed, “Here come two marvelous(了不起的) masterpieces from Rida and Anabia, and — Rida wins with a little edge!” Eyes rounded, Rida never thought she would win the gold, thunderous applause and great joy enveloping(笼罩) her. This time, instead of being jealous or envious, Anabia offered Rida a bear hug, showing her heartfelt congratulations. Rida was indeed a perfect person who not only excelled in(擅长) drawing but also helped others unconditionally! Laughter lingering in the air, they beamed brilliant smiles together, while Anabia tasted the sweetness of this pure friendship, which would be cherished and carved in her mind for good. 阿纳比亚的眼睛里充满了泪水。一种无助和绝望的感觉席卷了她。她正要放弃时，丽达把一个盒子推到她面前，里面装满了五颜六色的油画棒。“如果你不介意，让我们分享这些。”丽达带着温暖而安慰的笑容说道。阿纳比亚做梦也没想过丽达会伸出援助之手。又惊又喜，阿纳比亚感激地瞥了丽达一眼，无声地说了一句“谢谢”。然后，她全心全意地投入到绘画中。终于，两个女孩完成了她们的作品，她们的目光相遇了。阿纳比亚走到丽达面前，伸出手。 然后丽达握住了阿纳比亚的手，两个女孩等待着获胜者的宣布。塞玛老师清了清嗓子，露出兴奋的表情，惊呼道：“丽达和阿纳比亚的两件了不起的杰作来了，----丽达以一点点优势获胜！”瞪圆了眼睛，丽达从没想过自己会赢得金牌，雷鸣般的掌声和巨大的喜悦笼罩着她。这一次，阿纳比亚没有嫉妒，而是给了丽达一个大大的拥抱，表示衷心的祝贺。丽达确实是一个完美的人，不仅擅长绘画，而且还无条件地帮助他人！笑声在空气中徘徊，他们一起绽放出灿烂的笑容，而阿纳比亚则品尝到了这种纯洁友谊的甜蜜，这种友谊将永远被珍惜并刻在她的脑海中。 七、续写素材积累 1 伤心（心理、表情、动作） 1)A sense of helplessness and despair swept over him. 2) His eyes brimmed with tears of sorrow. 他的眼里噙满了悲伤的泪水。 3) He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他静静地站着，眼泪流下他的脸颊。 4) When he embraced me with his arms open wide, he felt my throat choke with sob. 当他张开双臂拥抱我时，他觉得自己喉头哽咽。 5) Upon hearing the bad news, he felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly. 一听到这个坏消息，他就被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住伤心地哭了。 2 紧张（心理、表情、动作） 1) Standing in the classroom, he became increasingly nervous and could feel his heart beating fast.  站在教室里，他越来越紧张，能听见自己心跳加速的声音。 2) His face turned pale, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 他的脸煞白，感觉如坐针毡。 3) Before the competition, his palms were sweaty and knees were soft. 比赛前，他手心出汗，膝盖发软。 4) At the sight of the snake, he felt so scared that his throat tightened and his knees felt weak. 看到蛇，他喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。 5) At the sight of the snake, he froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. 看到恶狼，他被吓呆到一动不动。 6) At the sight of the fierce wolf, he was seized by a strong sense of horror and his palms were sweating. 看到蛇，他被一股强烈的恐惧感攫住了，掌心流汗。 3：尴尬/羞愧（心理、表情、动作） 1) His face flushed(通红)/burned(燃烧)with embarrassment/shame.  他因尴尬而满脸通红。/他窘得脸都红了。 2) He hung/dropped/lowered his head in shame.  他羞愧地低下了头。 3) He felt so ashamed that he could feel his face burning.  他感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。 4) So ashamed was he that he could feel the blood rush to his face.  他感到羞愧极了，血液涌上脸颊。 5) So ashamed did he feel that he was close to tears. 他羞愧到快哭了。 6) So embarrassed was h that he wanted the floor to open up and consume (吞没) him. 他是如此尴尬，想要找个地缝钻进去。 4：愤怒（心理、表情、动作） 1) His voice trembled with anger/rage(愤怒).他气得声音发抖。 2) He glared at me with burning eyes.他盯着我，眼里充满怒火。 3) Filled with anger/fury(狂怒)，Tom was unable to utter a single word. Tom气得一句话也说不出。 4) Feeling a surge of anger，Tom shook his fist at me. …，对我挥舞拳头。 5: 感谢（心理、表情、动作） 1) I ran over to my father, reached out my hands and hugged/embraced him tightly/firmly. 我跑向父亲，伸出手，紧紧抱住他。 2) With grateful tears in his eyes, he kept extending（表达）his gratitude(感激）， “Thank you so much!” 他眼中满是感激的泪水，不停地说：“非常感谢！” 3) I stood still, a warm current welling up in my heart.我站着不动，心中涌起一股暖流。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$