UNIT 4 Section Ⅳ Writing（课件PPT）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册（人教版2024）

SHARING UNIT 4 Section Ⅳ　Writing—Make a speech about China's aid to other countries 目 录 Contents 课时作业(十二) 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 we have seen build a national civilized city We see And we see maintaining the traffic order from all walks of life 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 but for me 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 To be frank/honest Hearing about the story 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 to relay to you that the girl trapped in the burning house 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 because it shows that you have the courage to do so 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 It is my great honor to are capable of helping is also a developing country 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 they link the cities and rural areas and they also promote the development of economy what our country has done be a volunteer 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 Pakistan is also a developing country, which is rather poor. Many highways have been built, linking the cities and rural areas, which promote the development of economy. I am so proud of what our country has done in Pakistan that I have decided to be a volunteer. 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 课时作业(十二)　读后续写专项 返回目录 　 英语　选择性必修　第四册 制 作 者：状元桥 适用对象：高中学生 制作软件：Powerpoint2010、 Photoshop cs3 运行环境：WindowsXP以上操作系统 本单元的写作项目属于应用文体类别中的“演讲稿”。演讲稿分为欢迎/送辞和宣讲词两种。前者属于在正式场合接待或欢送客人时，为了表达欢迎、感谢或祝愿而进行的发言。后者属于向听众讲述一些道理，希望对方接受自己的见解。演讲稿语言一定要准确简明、通俗易懂、层次清楚、条理分明。 跟课文学写作范式 (一)课文范式提炼 (二)写作要点指津 1．演讲稿应开篇点明主题，使听众能立即了解演讲的主题，激发听众关注正文的兴趣。 2．演讲稿应采用表现力强且易于听众理解的语言，可使用设问、引用、明喻、暗喻、反复、拟人等修辞手法，以增强演讲的感染力。 3．演讲稿既要向听众说清问题或讲明道理，同时又要说服听众，这就要求在写演讲稿时要突出主题、观点鲜明。 跟课文学亮点表达 阅读文章第一自然段，习得以下素养 ★学亮点表达 本段使用“all of us have seen…” “We see…”和“And we see…”列举大家熟悉的援助事例，三个并列句式的使用凸显了作者使用高级句式表达的功底。 [微写作1]——语段填空 Nowadays, (1)________________ many citizens on the streets, cleaning the city to (2)_________________________. (3)__________ the citizens cleaning in the park, in the community and in the workplaces.(4)______________ the police (5)_____________________________ and the workers (6)___________________________ picking up rubbish. 最近，我们已经看到很多市民为了创建全国文明城市在大街小巷清洁城市。我们看到市民们在公园、在社区、在工作场所打扫卫生。我们还看到警察在维持交通秩序，各行各业的工作人员在捡拾垃圾。 阅读文章第二至四自然段，习得以下素养 ★学写作手法 演讲者讲述自己的故事，从个人角度展现自己从一开始不理解母亲的工作，到后来的完全认同并引以为傲的心路历程，引起读者的兴趣。使用了“I had the same questions myself.” “But for me…” “You see…” “To be honest…” “But then I began to hear about…”等句式使得此篇演讲信息量较大的同时也更具说服力。 [微写作2]——补全句子 (1)有人说回馈社会是你的责任。确实是，但对我来说，我想做一些志愿工作，这样我就能感到(自己)是有用的。 Some people say that it is your duty to give back to your community.That's true, ______________, I want to do some voluntary work so that I can feel useful. (2)老实说，长城不仅是用石头和泥土建造的，而且是用数百万人的血肉建造的。 ______________________, the Great Wall was made not only of stone and earth, but of the flesh and blood of millions of men. (3)我第一次听说史蒂芬·霍金的故事时，就被他对研究的奉献精神所感动。 ___________________________ of Stephen Hawking for the first time, I was moved by his devotion to the research. ★学逻辑衔接 作者在第四段中运用But, and, while, Prior to this, Since, In addition等连接词和短语，使句子之间层次清晰，逻辑鲜明，语意连贯。 阅读文章第五自然段，习得以下素养 ★学亮点表达 第一句运用宾语从句(I want to relay to you that…)；第二、三句运用设问(Is her work worth it？Yes，…)；第四句运用过去分词短语作后置定语(we are global citizens interested in world stability)，并列的宾语从句(because it shows that…， and that…)等高级句式凸显出作者较强的语言功底。 [微写作3]——补全句子 (1)我很荣幸地通知你，你在比赛中获得了第一名。 I am privileged ________________________ you have won the first prize in the competition. (2)那名士兵正试图营救被困在燃烧的房子里的女孩。 The soldier was trying to save _____________________ ____________________. (3)嘲笑别人可能会伤害他们的感情，即使你不是故意的，而嘲笑自己却不会——你甚至可能会给他们带来微笑。人们会喜欢它，因为这表明你有勇气这样做，你在认真对待自己的不完美。 Laughing at someone else may hurt their feelings even if you didn't intend to, while laughing at yourself does not—you might even bring a smile to their faces.People will like it, _________________________________________ and you're being real about your imperfections. (一)首段：点明要演讲的主题 1．I am honored to have a chance to speak to you today.今天我很荣幸有机会跟大家讲几句。 2．My name is Li Ping.Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation.I shall be speaking about what we can do to protect the environment.我是李萍，今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是我们能为保护环境做些什么。 3．I feel honored to be here to talk to you on regular physical exercise.我很荣幸能在这里和大家谈谈关于规律锻炼的问题。 4．I'm going to talk about something that is vitally important to all of us. 我要谈论的事情对我们大家都至关重要。 (二)中段：演讲的具体内容 1．Although it seems challenging to solve the problem, it is true that face-to-face communication is very important in keeping a good relationship. 虽然解决这个问题似乎有挑战性，但面对面的交流确实在维持良好的关系方面是非常重要的。 2．The topic of my speech today is Family Education Shapes Me.Family education has always deeply influenced me, which has benefited me a lot. 我今天演讲的题目是“家庭教育塑造我”。家庭教育对我的影响一直很深，让我受益匪浅。 3．My honest family upbringing has served me well all my life and has cleared away many obstacles in my life.我诚实的家庭教养使我受益终生，清除了我生活中的许多障碍。 4．I suggest we should fit exercise into our busy schedule, making it part of our daily routine.我建议我们应该在繁忙的日程表中安排锻炼，让它成为我们日常生活的一部分。 5．It is known to all that good living habits are important to our physical and mental health.众所周知，良好的生活习惯对我们的身心健康很重要。 6．It is a pity that many people don't realize the importance of environmental protection.遗憾的是，很多人意识不到环境保护的重要性。 (三)尾段：表达作者自己的观点 1．In conclusion, to realize a dream is not that easy, so we must study hard to fulfill our dreams. 总之，实现梦想不是那么容易的，所以我们必须努力学习来实现我们的梦想。 2．The earth is our common home.Let's take action to build a better one for all of us! 地球是我们共同的家园。让我们采取行动，为我们所有人建立一个更好的世界！ 3．Let's work together to protect our cultural relics. 让我们一起来努力保护我们的文化遗产。 (四)常用结束句 1．That's all.Thank you for your attention/listening. 我的演讲到此结束。谢谢大家的关注/聆听。 2．I hope I have made myself understood. 我希望我已经非常清楚地表达了我的意思。 【写作要求】 假定你是李华， 你们班将举办一场英语演讲比赛， 演讲内容是关于中国对其他国家的援助。内容包括： 1．援助内容； 2.援助意义； 3.你的看法。 注意： 1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。 Good morning, everyone! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【四步成文】 第一步：审题谋篇 第二步：由词扩句 1．很荣幸和你们分享我的观点。(主谓结构) ___________________________ share my opinions with you. 2．我们有能力帮助其他国家。(主谓结构) We __________________________ other countries. 3．巴基斯坦也是一个发展中国家， 相当贫穷。(并列句) Pakistan ________________________________ and it is rather poor. 4．建了很多高速公路， 它们连接了城市与农村， 促进了经济的发展。(并列句) Many highways have been built and ________________ _________________________________________________________________________. 5．我为我们国家在巴基斯坦所做的感到自豪。(复合句) I am so proud of _____________________________ in Pakistan. 6．我决定当一名志愿者。(主谓结构) I have decided to __________________. 第三步：句式升级 1．用定语从句改写第二步中的句3 ________________________________________________________________ 2．用现在分词作结果状语， 非限制性定语从句改写第二步中的句4 ________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．用so…that…连接第二步中的句5和句6 _______________________________________________________________________________________________ 第四步：连句成篇 One possible version： Good morning, everyone！ It is my great honor to share with you my opinions on our country's aid in the development of Pakistan. As our country's economy develops quickly, we are capable of helping other countries.As we all know, Pakistan is still a developing country, which is rather poor.Lately, our country has helped Pakistan build many schools, hospitals and roads.More importantly, many highways have been built, linking the cities and rural areas, which promote the development of economy. I am so proud of what our country has done in Pakistan that I have decided to be a volunteer. Thank you！ 假定你是你校志愿者俱乐部的主席李华，你的俱乐部正在招募新的志愿者队伍，请你根据自己的志愿者经历，写一篇演讲稿。内容包括： 1．表达对志愿者活动的热爱； 2．讲述做志愿者的经历； 3．呼吁更多的人参与志愿者活动。 注意：1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 One possible version： Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua, chairman of the volunteer club.I am enthusiastic about volunteer work.Not only is it beneficial to others but also it is meaningful to myself. I've had several experiences of being a volunteer.What impressed me most was when I was teaching in a primary school in the mountainous area.Though the teaching conditions were very poor, children were eager for knowledge.In addition, villagers were polite as well as friendly to us.Teaching there gives me a sense of achievement. Why not join us？I am sure that we will make the world better with your participation. Thanks for your attention. $$