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Period 5
Using Language(2)—Reading for Writing
Unit 1
Science fiction
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1.blurred A.hold sth tightly
2.superior B.advise or try hard to persuade sb to do sth
3.grip C.as large,fast,etc.as is possible,or the most that is
possible or allowed
4.fetch D.better in quality than sb/sth else;greater than sb/sth else
5.urge E.not clear; without a clear outline or shape
6.random F.done,chosen,etc.without sb deciding in advance what is
going to happen,or without any regular pattern
7.maximum G.go to where sb/sth is and bring them/it back
Ⅰ.匹配单词
1.He often his classmates,which makes his mother anxious.
2.He made me angry and I hit him.
3.This model is its competitors,so it will be the best one.
4. you study hard,you will make much more progress.
5.Despite our worries,everything well and we could control the whole situation.
Ⅱ.选词填空
superior to,conflict with,turn out,have an urge to,so long as
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Read the text and do the following exercises.
1.Para.1 Beginning(故事开端)
How did the Time Traveller first know he had travelled through time?
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Activity 1 情节把握
He saw the clock move forwards.
2.Paras.2-4 Development(故事发展)
(1)What happened when the Time Traveller pushed the lever forwards the second time?
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(2)How did the Time Traveller feel when travelling through time?
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(3)Why was the Time Traveller worried about stopping the machine?
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His niece moved like a rocket.Night came as if a lamp was being turned out,and in another moment came the day.
He felt strange and unpleasant.
If he stopped and the same space was being occupied by something else,they would be forced together and explode like a bomb.
3.Para.5 Climax(故事高潮)
Where did the Time Machine arrive when the Time Traveller finally stopped it?
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4.How many times the Time Traveller started the machine?
The Time Traveller started the machine .
In some mud in the rain.
twice
Activity 2 分析结构
Ⅰ.读文章并找出下列细节描写的内容
1.操作机器过程中的动作描写
(1)I it a last check,and myself in the leather seat.I the starting lever on the main panel forwards an inch then immediately backwards again.
(2)I a breath, the lever and it forwards.
(3)I the lever further.
(4)Like an impatient fool,I the lever backwards hard.
Activity 3 增分靓句
gave
sat
pushed
drew
gripped
pushed
pushed
pulled
2.心理活动描写
(1)I I was being pushed through time at hundreds of years a minute.
(2)I look at the random things that were being flashed before my eyes!
(3)I of stopping the Time Machine many times.
calculated that
had a strong urge to
had thought about the risk
3.视觉感知描写
(1)夜幕降临: ___________
(2)白昼来临: ____________
(3)跃进到白天: ______________
(4)树木似青烟升起: _____________________________
(5)大楼拔地而起: _____________________
Night came
came the day
skipped to day
trees growing like puffs of smoke
huge buildings rise up
4.在空中见证地球沧海桑田变幻的句子
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5.与心理感受相关的描写
(1)It probably took her a minute,but to me she !
(2)It is hard to explain the of time travelling.
(3)I was for a moment...
The whole surface of the earth was being changed,melting and flowing before my eyes.
moved like a rocket
strange and unpleasant feeling
stunned
Ⅱ.请选择下列句子使用的修辞手法
A.simile(明喻) B.exaggeration(夸张)
1.It felt like I was being driven fast on a winding road. ___
2.The sun and moon looked as if they were being thrown across the sky... ___
3.Around me I saw trees growing like puffs of smoke... ___
4.I saw huge buildings rise up,then disappear like in a dream. ___
5....we would be forced together and explode like a bomb! ___
6.Like an impatient fool,I pulled the lever backwards hard. ___
7.I calculated that I was being pushed through time at hundreds of years a minute. ___
A
A
B
B
A
A
B
Ⅰ.续写要求
阅读课文The Time Machine,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
The Time Traveller stops in the year 802701._____________________
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The Morlocks then steal the Time Machine and use it as bait to capture and kill the Time Traveller.________________________________
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Activity 4 读后——续写
Ⅱ.技巧点拨
续写关键点拨一:谋布局结构,注重细节描写,巧用修辞
(1)布局结构:beginning—developing—climax—ending;
(2)细节描写:包括动作、感官体验、心理活动等;
(3)修辞:可巧用明喻、暗喻、夸张、比较、对照等。
续写关键点拨二:围绕主题,合理安排续写内容
(1)写目的地(when and where)
(2)写未来与现在的区别
(3)写遭遇 encounters(people/things/adventures)
(4)写回来的问题(challenges)
(5)写感受,写时间旅行带来的担心或危险
(6)写如何证明在进行时间穿越(clock/people),如何操作等
续写关键点拨三:提问题,推断情节发展
Para.1
What does the earth look like in the year 802701?
Who does the author meet and what happens between them?
What adventures does he have and what feelings does he have?
Who are Morlocks and why do they capture him?
Para.2
Have Morlocks captured him?
Does he return to his own time?
If so,how does he return?
How does he feel when coming back?
续写关键点拨四:参考词汇
1.看起来像 ________
2.形状像/形如 ______________________
3.逃走 ______________________
4.死里逃生 ___________________
5.只会给某人丢脸 ________________
6.隐藏了一个可怕的真相 __________________
7.许多…… __________
8.住在地下 _________________
look like
shape like/be shaped like
escape/make one’s escape
have a narrow escape
just embarrass sb
hide a horrible truth
a world of
live underground
9.用……作食物来源 use...__________________
10.爱上…… _______________
11.与……失去联系 _______________
12.然而 ___________________
13.遭到袭击 ____________
14.成功做某事 _____________________________
15.穿越回到他开始的时间 travel back to the time _________________
as a source of food
fall in love with
lose contact with
however/nevertheless
under attack
manage to do/succeed in doing
when he got started
[范文赏读]
The Time Traveller stops in the year 802701.The whole earth looks like a garden with beautiful,happy people called Elois who play all the time,but this hides a horrible truth;there is a whole world of people called Morlocks who live underground in a dark,mechanised society who use the Elois as a source of food.The Time Traveller meets an Eloi woman and falls in love with her.The Time Traveller and the Eloi woman are attacked by Morlocks.He is able to escape,but he loses contact with the woman and perhaps she is killed.
The Morlocks then steal the Time Machine and use it as bait to capture and kill the Time Traveller.However,once he is in the Time Machine,he pulls the lever and begins to travel in time again and is able to make his escape.He travels 30 million years into the future to see the sun cool and the earth turn into a lifeless planet.He then travels back to the time when he started out,only to find that three hours have passed.
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写一篇科幻故事,主题是My Amazing Experience of Time Travel。
要求:1.内容丰富、奇特;
2.情节合理且富于想象力。
注意:词数80左右。
[参考范文]
It was 10 p.m.tonight and I gave my time machine a last check,which is shaped like a watch.I pressed the time button of “Tang Dynasty” and chose the destination—Chang’an.A moment later,I felt dizzy and fell asleep.When I woke up and opened my eyes,I found myself lying outside the Chang’an city gate.Then I walked into the city.It was really a lively city with splendid architecture.People around me were dressed in magnificent Tang costumes.Feeling hungry and curious,I went into a hotel.I said to the waiter like “Da Xia” in the novel:“A plate of beef and a bottle of wine!”
I was waiting for the dishes when I heard a man reciting the poem“Viewing the waterfall at Mount Lu”.I asked him:“A good poem! Who wrote it?” The man answered:“Me.” I couldn’t believe my ears—I came across Li Bai! Then I had a good talk with him and learned a lot about Tang poetry.After one hour,the bell of my time machine rang.It’s time to go back to my age! I pressed the button of “return” and in a few seconds I was lying in my bed.What an amazing experience!
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