写作规范练5（课件PPT）-【精讲精练】2026年高考英语一轮复习（外研版）

写作规范练(五) 选择性必修 第二册 选择性必修第二册 1 选择性必修第二册 1 选择性必修第二册 1 选择性必修第二册 1 选择性必修第二册 1 选择性必修第二册 1 选择性必修第二册 1 选择性必修第二册 1 选择性必修第二册 1 选择性必修第二册 1 选择性必修第二册 1 选择性必修第二册 1 选择性必修第二册 1 选择性必修第二册 1 选择性必修第二册 1 谢谢观看 选择性必修第二册 1 Ⅰ.应用文写作——通知 (2024·长沙新高考适应性考试)为了丰富校园生活，你校将组织迎新年音乐会，请你写一则通知，发布在学校英文网站上。内容包括： 1．举办时间和地点； 2．活动的内容； 3．活动的意义。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Notice ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Notice In order to enrich our students' life on campus，our school will organize a concert to welcome the New Year. As scheduled，the concert will take place in the school music hall at 2：30 p.m.next Thursday，lasting two days.During the concert，members from the music club will play a number of great classical masterpieces on different traditional Chinese instruments.Meanwhile，some works created by well­known Western musicians will also be played.You can't miss the golden chance! There is much more waiting for you to explore and it will surely excite your senses. All interested are welcome and we are looking forward to your attending! Ⅱ.读后续写——人间亲情 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·石家庄教学质检)When he was around 5 years old，my brother Ted，who is four years younger than me，suddenly found his legs unable to move one night.What followed was one of the hardest times of my parents' life.Months passed with them meeting various doctors，visiting different hospitals，and knocking at the doorstep of every possible chance—all the time with Ted in their arms，since he wasn't able to walk on his own anymore. There were doubts of permanent paralysis(瘫痪)—the very mention of which was enough to break us down.From finding it extremely painful to walk，to not being able to get up on his own，and to not being able to stand at all，Ted had a problem that was worsening day by day.Most surprisingly，all this while，he was strong.Perhaps only children could be in such difficult times. During this period，it was not unusual for my mother to have sudden breakdowns.Once，she burst into tears while watching Ted playing joyfully. He wiped off her tears，and said，“Don't cry，Mummy.See，I can stand and even run on my own！”Saying this，he tried to get up，stood on shaking legs for just about a few microseconds and fell down，only to be safely caught in the arms of my mom，who hugged him dearly and cried again. This was the most heart­breaking thing that I had ever experienced.But it was also a powerful one for the simple fact that it was my little brother who taught us what life was all about—HOPE. Witnessing my brother's strong will and positive attitude inspired me as well.As a brother，I could not stand by doing nothing at all.Hope was burning in my heart when I had the idea to train my brother to walk again.I firmly believed Ted could stand up and walk as he used to.Whenever school was over，I would put Ted into a pushchair and tell my mom that we'd just go to the park. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。 In the park，I would put Ted one meter away from me，encouraging him to walk.______________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ We agreed to keep this secret from our parents until Mom's birthday. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ [写作思路] 故事梗概：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了弟弟五岁左右的时候突然发现自己不能走路了，随之而来的是作者父母的最艰难的时刻之一…… 续写思路：续写第一段　根据文章信息和续写第一段开头语可知，续写第一段应写作者训练弟弟重新学会走路的过程，着重写弟弟的不懈努力，可写弟弟一开始表现不佳、渐渐有所进步，且根据续写第二段开头语可知，第一段结尾应该写最后弟弟基本上可以独立行走了，这样才能在妈妈生日时给她一个惊喜。 续写第二段　根据续写第二段开头语可推知，续写第二段应首先写妈妈生日当天弟弟出乎意料的表现具体是什么，如独立站起来向妈妈走去，接着可写妈妈看到弟弟能够慢慢地重新走路时的惊喜之情和家庭氛围等。 【参考范文】 In the park，I would put Ted one meter away from me，encouraging him to walk.At first，he could not even move an inch without falling down.But instead of getting discouraged，he would keep trying until he finally managed to take a few steps forward with the support of my hands.Gradually，Ted learned to balance himself and began to walk slowly but steadily.The park became our secret place where we spent hours every day，I patiently guiding him and Ted determined working on his mobility. We agreed to keep this secret from our parents until Mom's birthday.On that day，while everyone was enjoying a family lunch，Ted suddenly stood up from his chair and took a few unsteady steps towards our mother.Her eyes widened as she watched her son，who had been unable to walk for some time，now taking small，confident steps towards her，which was such a heartwarming moment for all of us.From that day on，Ted's progress was nothing short of(无异于)a miracle，and our family was overjoyed to see him regaining his strength and mobility. $$