UNIT 4 SPACE EXPLORATION 读后续写微讲堂-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第三册（人教版2024）

Ur4 SPACE EXPLORATION 读后续写微讲堂 答案精解P。 读后续写提升篇之塑造人物形象一一通过心理描写塑造人物形象 心理描写是指在文章中,对人物在特定环境 【语篇解读】句中作者运用了反向表达。用A 中的心理状态、精神面貌和内心活动进行的描 sharppleasure 当作主语,come over 当作谓语 写。描写人物的心理活动,能反映人物的性格 颠覆以往思路Isuddenly felt pleased. 展示人物的内心世界,是刻画人物思想性格的重 【典例2】用imagination和reflection表示人物想法 要手段。而人的情绪是心理活动的外在表现,可 Her imagination was busy, her reflections 以通过很多方式进行渲染,如动作、神态、环境 were pleasant, and the pain of a sprained ankle 等。本节我们将从心理描写的角度对情绪的表 was disregarded. 达予以阐述。 译:她浮想联翩,心里觉得喜滋滋的,早把脚踝的 一、心理描写的方法 伤痛抛到九霄云外 从内容上看,心理描写可分为两部分:一是 【语篇解读】该句用imagination和reflection表现人 展示人物内心活动,如“想什么”,常与fee,think 物想法,准确地阐述了“浮想联翩”的心理活动, 等词相连;二是表达人物内心感受,如“感到怎么 强调了人物的欣喜之情 样”,常与表示各种情绪的形容词或该形容词的 (二)悲伤和压抑 名词形式连用. 【典例3】用felt引出人物悲伤的心理感受 心理描写时常见的引出想法、计划、感受的 Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized 词有feel, think, picture, reflect, consider, imagine. by a burst of sadness and couldn't help crying bitterly wonder,guess,suspect,expect,believe,我们应根 译:一听到这个坏消息,悲伤席卷而来,她哭得不 据具体情景尽量选择有特殊意义的词,如refec 能自己。 有反思、回忆的含义,imagine有想象、幻想之意。 【语篇解读】该句用介词结构说明情境(听到坏消 此外,在表示情绪时可以用情绪或与心理有关的 息),然后用felt引出人物心理感受。 身体部位作主语,并辅以比喻、对比、排比、夸张 【典例4】用felt引出心理感受并结合夸张手法描写 等多种修辞手法来生动形象地突出某种情绪。 He felt the whole weight of the world upon 二、心理描写实例 his shoulders. 心理描写并不是越细腻越生动,过多的描述 译:他感到整个世界的重量都落在他的肩上。 有的时候容易把读者弄晕;相反,偶尔抓住几个 【语篇解读】该句用felt引出人物心理感受,但不 恰到好处的细节,便能够一针见血地点出想要表 提任何情绪性的词语,而是通过夸张的手法,把 现的人物心理。以下我们将从微处入手,从词。 内心的压力与整个世界的重量相比,突出了人物 句型、修辞手法三方面来表达人物的心理描写。 心理的重担。 同时选取了心理描写中最常见的喜、悲、怒、惧等 (三)愤怒 经典例句进行赏析。 【典例5】用通感和比喻的修辞手法描写愤怒 (一)喜悦 Her rage swept through her like a tidal 【典例1】用反向表达描述喜悦的心理 wave, surrounding her like a foul stench. A sharp pleasure came over him. 译:她的愤怒像潮水一样席卷了她,像恶臭的气 译:他突然感到一阵愉悦。 味一样将她围裹。 .93. 英语 必修 第三册 同步导学案 【语篇解读】该句运用通感和比喻的修辞手法,将 for a while, and was happy. I was only afraid 无形的怒气比作视觉上有形的浪潮,生动形象地 that my secret hiding-place might be discovered 描绘出怒气之大,结合sweep一词,说明怒气来 译:不过大部分时候,我认真读着书,完全被书中 得突然且猛烈,后又把愤怒比作臭气,从嗅觉上 的图画吸引住了。我沉浸在想象的世界中,暂时 突出怒气包围了整个人。 忘掉了伤心和孤单,只感到快活。我唯一担心的 (四)恐惧和紧张 就是我的秘密藏身处可能会被发现。 【典例6】以人感知情绪的部位为主语并结合拟 【语篇解读】这段描写运用不同的动词来描写主 人手法来描写 人公对读书的痴迷,以及内心对害怕自己被发现 Every nerve in his body warned him not to 的担忧。 go any further. (六)自豪 译:他身体上的每一根神经都警告着他不要走太远。 【典例9】通过swell的反复使用描写自豪 【语篇解读】该句描写人物的恐惧,以人感知情绪 When Mariam thought of this baby, her heart 的部位--神经为主语,结合拟人手法,用神经 swelled inside of her. It swelled and swelled until 道出人物内心真实想法,角度新颖。在描述人恐 all the loss, all the grief, all the loneliness and self-abasement of her life washed away. 惧、害怕、紧张等情绪时,还常与心脏、大脑、胸腔 译:当玛丽亚姆想到孩子的时候,她的内心充满 等身体部位紧密相连,如下所示:Iwassoscared that my heart was hammering in my chest. 我害 了自豪。这种自豪感变得愈来愈强烈,直到所有 的失落、悲伤、孤寂和卑微都被驱散。 怕得心悴悴直跳;His constant moaning was 【语篇解读】本段中第一句前半句用thoughtof beginning to jar on her nerves.他不停的响吟使 表明这时玛丽亚姆的内心活动是想着孩子,紧接 她焦躁不安起来。 着描述她想到孩子的内心感受-一自豪。但本 (五)后悔和担忧 句并不直接用proud来表示,而通过使用swelled 【典例7】用picture结合比喻手法表达内心活动 一词,描述突出自豪感在心里不断膨胀以至驱除 Picturing the merry scene of feeding the 了悲伤孤寂等其他情绪,使无形的自豪有形化。 animals, countless tears lay dormant in her eyes 且通过swell的反复使用,allthe...结构的并列 and she now could do nothing but feel the regret 突出自豪感之强烈。 burning her heart. 【即时训练】--请按下列情景进行相关心理描写。 译:想象着给动物喂食时快乐的画面,无尽的泪水 1.看到凶恶的狼,我非常害怕。 静躺在她眼中。她只能感到后悔灼烧着她的心。 【语篇解读】该句用picture来描述她在心中想象 着喂养动物的场景,给读者一种生动的画面感。 2.听到主持人宣布她得奖后,她心中满是激动。 其后结合神态描写突出人物的情绪,最后用feel 直接点出人物后悔的心理,并运用比喻的手法, 将后悔比作灼烧人心的烈火,从而突出她内心的 3.玛丽抚摸着腹部,内心充满幸福。 煎熬。 【典例8】使用动词体现当时情绪 But most of the time I studied the book ane 4.请试着写一段话来表明焦虑着急的心理活动。 stared, fascinated, at the pictures. Lost in the world of imagination, I forgot my sad, lonely existence .94.IlI.1.exploring 2.are orbiting 3.useful 4.As 5.to grow satellites for communication and weather forecast.Besides, 6.advanced 7.and 8.an 9.rapidly 10.that/which space research will enable us to find new resources to meet 语基输入·助力语言输出 people's needs. 1.(1)against;for (2)into (3)argument 实战演练 (4)argued for his idea;argue him into making and selling One possible version: 2.①resulted in②results from 3.①as a result②as a result of Nowadays,WeChat study groups are more and more popular 4.(1)limited (2)learning (3)to (4)should be limited to among people.However,different people hold different opinions. 5.(1)for (2)with (3)provide the public with a better service Some people support studying in WeChat groups.Their 2provide a better service for the public reasons are as follows.Firstly,people can learn new things they 6.(1)running out (2)run out of/used up (3)gave out/ran out can't get from the books.Secondly,learners can make full use (4)①run out/,be used up②run out of/use up of their spare time to study wherever they are. 7.(1)accepted (2)If (it is)necessary (3)having trouble However,others don't think so.They argue that the (4)to (5)is attached groups are poorly managed,which leads to much false (6)attach much more importance to our phones information.Besides,studying by joining the WeChat groups is 以读促写·体现学以致用 a waste of time,which should be spent more meaningfully. 品读课文 In my opinion,using WeChat groups to study is a good [微写作] form,which can bring us great benefit.Not only can we be 1.(1)immediate action exposed to different knowledge but we can exchange ideas with (2)that children share too much information online (3)which/that is easy to reach others instantly.Taking everything into consideration,I approve 2.(1)Listening to music of studying in WeChat groups. (2)that took me through a dark forest 读后续写微讲堂 (3)to be a good student 3.(1)It is widely believed that [拓展训练] (2)paired with someone who 1.At the sight of the ferocious wolf,I was seized by a strong (3)that have happened during the week sense of horror and my palms were sweating. 4.(1)because having a good command of English 【评析】前半句用介词结构描述场景，接着用s沁i心一词表明人物 (2)In order to protect nature 情绪来得突然而强烈，并辅以手心出汗的细节增加画面感。 佳作构建 2.When the host announced that she won the prize,her heart 第二步：由词扩句 was thumping with excitement. 1.have had a heated discussion on whether space exploration is 【评析】以物作主语，从心枰怦跳的角度说明人物的激动 worth exploring 心情。 2.is not worthwhile 3.Mary couldn't keep her hands from drifting to her belly.Happiness 3.is spent on space exploration rushed in like a gust of wind blowing a door wide open. 4.can be used to solve many problems 5.space exploration is necessary 【评析】此句点明人物幸福感的来源一想到腹中孩子，并运 6.have benefited a lot from space exploration 用了比喻的修辞手法，将快乐比作狂风，使无形的情感化为 7.enable us to find new resources to meet people's needs 具体可感的风，生动形象。 第三步：词汇/句式升级 4.At that moment I was very busy trying to unscrew a bolt that 1.A lot of money spent on space exploration can be used to solve had got stuck in my engine.I was very much worried,for it many problems such as pollution and starvation. was becoming clear to me that the breakdown of my plane was 2.The other students think space exploration is necessary extremely serious.And I had so little drinking water left that I because we have benefited a lot from it,such as using had to fear for the worst. satellites for communication and weather forecast. 【评析】“那会儿我正忙着要从发动机上卸下一颗拧得太紧的 第四步：连句成篇 螺丝。我发现飞机故障似乎很严重，饮水也快完了，担心可 One possible version: 能发生最坏的情况，心里很着急。”此句为作者的心理活动， Recently,the students in our class have had a heated discussion on whether space exploration is worth exploring. 更突出了作者当时内心的不安与焦虑。 Some students think space exploration is not worthwhile. UNIT 5 THE VALUE OF MONEY They think space is too far away from us and our daily life.And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve many Section I Listening and Speaking problems such as pollution and starvation. However,the other students think space exploration is 听说突破·技法指导训练 necessary because we have benefited a lot from it,such as using ·、13BCA 181·