Unit 5 Section Ⅳ Writing——探险类记叙文-【正禾一本通】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第三册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书（外研版2019）

Section Ⅳ　Writing——探险类记叙文 【写作指导】 Ⅰ.谨记写作范式 Ⅱ.积累话题素材 [常用词汇] ①an adventurous outdoor trip 户外探险旅游活动 ②be determined to do sth.下定决心做某事 ③explore the mysteries of the ancient city Loulan 楼兰古城探秘 ④cross the desert 穿越沙漠 ⑤leave a deep impression on sb.＝impress sb.deeply 使人印象深刻 ⑥a sense of achievement 成就感 ⑦overcome the difficulties 克服困难 ⑧have a positive effect on/upon 给……带来积极的影响 ⑨start out/off 出发 ⑩without delay/hesitation 毫不迟延/犹豫 [出彩佳句] ①It reminded me of a similar experience，which was imprinted on my mind. 这让我想起了一个类似的经历，它深深地印在我的脑海里。 ②As we made our way deeper into the jungle, the sounds of wildlife became intense. 随着我们往丛林深处走去，野生动物的声音越来越大。 ③Fascinated by the beautiful view in the mountain, I couldn't contain my excitement. 我着迷于山间的美景，无法控制自己激动的心情。 ④What surprised/attracted/delighted us most was that the sky was so clear. 最使我们吃惊的/吸引我们的/使我们高兴的是那里的天空万里无云。 ⑤Without hesitation/Without a word, I decided to help him. 二话没说，我决定去帮助他。 ⑥Tired as we were, we learned what we couldn't learn in school. 尽管很累，但我们学到了在学校学不到的东西。 ⑦I benefit a lot from this unforgettable experience and realize that it is honesty that wins us the respect from others. 我从这次难忘的经历中受益匪浅，我意识到正是诚实赢得了别人的尊重。 ⑧Through this meaningful activity，I learn the fact that giving is much happier than receiving. 通过这个有意义的活动，我了解到给予比接受快乐得多。 【实战演练】 假如你是李华，今年暑假去了三亚旅游，生平第一次潜水使你很激动。请写一篇日记，记述潜水的经历。 内容包括： 1．介绍潜水中的所见、所想； 2．说明潜水的感受。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Step 1　审题谋篇·定框架 定人称 以第一人称为主 定时态 以一般过去时为主 定框架 第一段：潜水的时间、地点、人物； 第二段：介绍潜水时的所见、所想； 第三段：说明潜水的感受。 Step 2　要点翻译·用佳句 1．昨天早上我和家人一起去三亚附近的深海潜水。 I went diving beneath the ocean near Sanya with my family yesterday morning. 2．我首先意识到的是我周围所有鲜艳的色彩。 The first thing I became aware of was all the vivid colours surrounding me. 3．给我印象最深的是奇妙的珊瑚，它们的形状像扇子、盘子、蘑菇、树枝和鹿角。 What impressed me most was the fantastic corals which were shaped like fans，plates，mushrooms，the branches of trees and the horns of deer. [升级]　用强调句型改写句3 It is the fantastic corals which were shaped like fans, plates, mushrooms, the branches of trees and the horns of deer that impressed me most. 4．然而，还有一些生物太危险，我是不被允许靠近的，比如鲨鱼。 However, some creatures such as sharks were very dangerous, so I wasn't permitted to get too close to them． [升级]　用so...that...改写句4 However, some creatures such as sharks were so dangerous that I wasn't permitted to get too close to them. 5．从这次经历中，我意识到神奇的水下世界正等着我们去探索。 From the experience, I realize that the amazing underwater world is waiting for us to explore． Step 3　连句成篇·达美文 It was a day of pure magic! I went diving beneath the ocean near Sanya with my family yesterday morning.The first thing I became aware of was all the vivid colours surrounding me.It is the fantastic corals which were shaped like fans, plates, mushrooms, the branches of trees and the horns of deer that impressed me most.And all kinds of small and elegant fish were swimming in and around the corals.However, some creatures such as sharks were so dangerous that I wasn't permitted to get too close to them.From the experience, I realize that the amazing underwater world is waiting for us to explore. 人物 描写 ①charge 　 　 n.主管，负责 ②captain n．船长 ③wrinkled 　　　adj.有皱褶的 ④unaware adj.未觉察到的，未意识到的 情感 描写 ①fascinated adj.被迷住的，被吸引住的 ②astonish v．使吃惊，使惊讶 ③astonishment n.惊讶 ④thrill n．惊险，刺激 动作 描写 ①confirm v.证实，证明 ②consume v．消耗 ③distinguish v．看清；认出 ④bleeding n．流血，失血 ⑤injury n．伤，损害 ⑥injure vt.伤害；使受伤 ⑦injured adj.受伤的 ⑧permit v．允许，准许，许可 ⑨surround v．环绕，围绕 ⑩attempt n．努力，尝试 ⑪failure n．失败 ⑫crowd n．人群 v．涌上心头；拥挤 [语段情景用]　被周围的美景迷住，Tin没有意识到即将到来的危险。一个醉酒的司机把他撞倒，使他受了重伤。他的腿碰破流血了。一群人开始围住他看发生了什么事…… Fascinated by surrounding scenery，Tin 1.was unaware of the approaching danger (没有意识到即将到来的危险).A drunk driver knocked him down，2.making him badly injured (使他受了重伤).His legs split and bled.A crowd of people 3.started to surround him (开始围住他) to see what was happening.They watched in astonishment，open­mouthed.It was then that the first­aid knowledge Mary learned 4.crowded into her mind (涌入她的脑海).She covered the wound with a bandage 5.to stop bleeding (止血).Her timely help made a difference to Tin's survival.The incident confirmed Mary in her decision to become a doctor in the future. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$