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Section Ⅴ Writing——正反观点类议论文
正反观点类议论文通常先提出某观点或某话题,并指出对此话题产生的两种对立观点,进而对正反两方面的论点进行论证,最后给出自己的看法。
【写作指导】
Ⅰ.谨记写作范式
Ⅱ.积累话题素材
[常用词汇]
1.be opposed to 反对
2.be in favor of 赞成, 支持
3.launch a satellite 发射卫星
4.collect data 收集数据
5.explore space 探索太空
6.make a difference 有影响
7.advanced technology 先进的技术
8.meet the requirements 满足要求
9.change our lives 改变我们的生活
10.make contributions to 对……做出贡献
11.pave the way for 为……铺平道路
12.promote technological improvement 促进技术改进
13.benefit from China's space programme 从中国的太空项目中获益
14.make our life more comfortable and convenient 使我们的生活更加舒适、
方便
15.with the development of aerospace science and technology 随着航空航天科技的发展
[出彩佳句]
1.Opinions are divided on space exploration./Different people hold different views on space exploration.
不同的人对太空探索有不同的看法。
2.Some students are for the idea,while others think otherwise.
一些学生赞成这个想法,而另一些人则不这么认为。
3.However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.
然而,有很多人对这个事情持不同的看法。
4.Some people firmly believe that/There is no doubt that we benefit a lot from the scientific advancements in many ways.
有些人坚信/毫无疑问,科学进步使我们在许多方面获益良多。
5.I have long been interested in space exploration.
长期以来我一直对太空探索感兴趣。
6.How I wish I had a chance to travel into space!
我多么希望我有机会去太空旅行!
7.The development of science and technology makes our life more comfortable and convenient.
科技的发展使我们的生活更加舒适、方便。
【实战演练】
最近,你班同学就“太空是否值得探索”这一话题展开了讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息,用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况,并谈谈自己的看法。
有30%的同学认为太空不值得探索
离我们太遥远;浪费金钱。
有70%的同学认为太空值得探索
受益很多,如使用卫星进行通讯、天气预报。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Step 1 审题谋篇·定框架
明确体裁、话题
议论文;太空是否值得探索
定时态、人称
以一般现在时为主;以第三人称为主
布局文章架构
开头:引入辩论的话题;
中间:列举正方观点及理由;列举反方观点及理由;
结尾:表明自己的观点。
Step 2 要点翻译·用佳句
1.最近我们班进行了一次热烈的讨论。讨论的话题是太空是否值得探索。
Recently our class had a heated discussion.The topic is whether space is worth exploring.
[升级] 用whether引导的宾语从句改写句1
Recently our class had a heated discussion on whether space is worth exploring.
2.30%的同学认为太空不值得探索。他们认为太空探索离我们及我们的日常生活太遥远并且浪费金钱。
30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile.They believe that space exploration is too far away from us and our daily life and it's a waste of money.
[升级] 用非谓语动词和belief升级改写句2
30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile, holding the belief that space exploration is too far away from us and our daily life and it's a waste of money.
3.然而,70%的同学认为太空值得探索。我们从中受益很多,如使用卫星进行通讯、天气预报。
However, 70% think space is worth exploring.We have benefited a lot from it, such as using satellites for communication and weather forecast.
[升级] 用because引导原因状语从句改写句3
However, 70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it, such as using satellites for communication and weather forecast.
4.在我看来,探索太空是值得的。
As far as I am concerned, it is worthwhile to explore space.
Step 3 连句成篇·达美文
Recently our class had a heated discussion on whether space is worth exploring.Students hold different ideas about it.
30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile, holding the belief that space exploration is too far away from us and our daily life and it's a waste of money.However, 70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it, such as using satellites for communication and weather forecast.What's more, with further space research, we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day.
As far as I am concerned, it is worthwhile to explore space.Not only can it promote the development of society but it can also enrich our life.
【即学即练】
近年来,人工智能发展迅猛。ChatGPT、文心一言(ERNIE Bot)以及其他各种AI软件层出不穷,给人们带来诸多便利的同时也引发了全球热议:人工智能是否会在未来完全取代人类?请以“Will AI replace humans entirely in the future?”为题发表你的观点。内容包括:
1.人工智能的发展现状;
2.人们对其是否会完全取代人类持有的不同看法;
3.对此你的观点。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Will AI replace humans entirely in the future?
[参考范文]
Will AI replace humans entirely in the future?
Recent years have witnessed the great achievements made by ChatGPT, ERNIE bot and other AI software, which boast their capability to generate texts, art works or even videos.Thus a discussion about whether AI will replace humans entirely in the future becomes heated.
Opinions are divided here.The boundaries of what AI can do seem to be constantly expanding, leading many to believe its potential to take over all the jobs and roles traditionally performed by humans.While others take it that AI is just a tool created to help us solve problems and improve efficiency, naturally lacking the creativity, emotional intelligence, and adaptability that are unique to human beings.
From my perspective, AI still has limitations in the face of tasks that require human interaction, unlikely to completely replace humans.
情感
描写
①determined adj.有决心的;意志坚
定的
②intelligent adj.有智慧的;聪明的;
有智力的
③keen adj.热衷的;渴望的
④desire n.渴望;欲望 vt.渴
望;期望
⑤disappointed adj.失望的;沮丧的
⑥disappoint vt.使失望
⑦disappointing adj.令人失望的
⑧disappointment n.失望;沮丧
动作
描写
①leap vi.& vt.跳过;跃过
②lack vt.缺乏;没有 n.缺乏;
短缺
③argue vt.& vi.论证;争辩;争论
④signal vt.& vi.标志着;标明;
发信号
⑤float vi.浮动;漂流;漂浮
vt.使浮动;使漂流
⑥carry on 继续做,坚持干
⑦run out 用完;耗尽
⑧provide for sb 提供生活所需
[语段情景用] 和妈妈大吵一架之后,我重重地摔上门,冲出房子。既失望又沮丧,我感觉好像漂浮在无限悲伤的海洋里……
Having argued with my mother fiercely,I stormed out of the house,slamming the door heavily.①Disappointed and frustrated (既失望又沮丧),I felt like floating in an ocean of limitless sadness.Later,I stood beside a stand and ②sighed for lack of money (由于缺钱叹了口气).The seller noticed my dilemma,greeted me with a kind smile and ③signalled me to sit down (示意我坐下).I was moved to tears.The seller smiled,“Girl,it is your mother ④who has been providing for you (一直在为你提供生活所需) from when you were born!” I wiped my tears,⑤leapt to my feet (跳了起来) and ran for home like a wind.
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