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专题04 书面表达15篇 (上海中考真题+中考模拟) 中考真题练 1．（2023·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 你所在的社区计划举办名为“时间管理 (time management)”的培训，现就培训方案征求意见。假设你是初三学生李华，请阅读以下培训方案，写一封邮件给社区负责人王先生，邮件须包含以下内容： (1) 你是否会参加此培训，并简述理由； (2) 针对方案中的一项内容，提出修改建议。 培训方案 (training plan) 目的 教授时间管理的方法 对象 (participant) 13~17岁的学生 形式 (way of training) 阅读 时间 七月每周六上午7~10点 地点 社区广场 注意： 1.邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄本卷语篇不得分。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2022·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 你校将增设一间学生活动室（student activity room），现有以下六种关于活动室用途的设想： 读者之家（Reading corner）    劳技工坊（Mini workshop）  艺体天地（Arts and sports centre） 义卖集市（Charity market）    科创小屋（High-tech lab）    心灵驿站（Heart-to-heart room） 学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，表明你最喜欢的一种设想，并说明理由。 （注意：1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2021·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 你的学校正在为以下活动课招募教学小助手(teaching assistant)： 球类(Ball Games)      演讲(Speech)      器乐(Instrumental Music) 戏剧(Drama)      手工(Handicrafts)      摄影(Photography) 假设你是李华，请给教导处张老师写封信，结合你的兴趣和特长，说明你想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。 注意： 1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2020·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情况填写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 雕刻家Willard的成长经历告诉我们：人无完人，但每个人都有自己的独特之处，在Willard的主页上有一个留言区，每位浏览者都可以写下自己的故事和感想． 请以"Everyone can be special （天生我才）"为题，在留言区分享你的经历或见闻． （注意： 1．短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分． 2．照抄阅读语篇不得分．） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2019·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given information（根据以下材料，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 以下是几位同学在以貌取人、盲从朋友、看待谎言、抉择人生等方面的感悟。请从中选择你比较有感触的一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。 Don't judge people by their looks. Someone could be bad-looking and still be nice. —Katie When your friends do something stupid，you don't have to follow.—Jackie Don't tell a teacher your dog ate your homework，especially if you don't have a dog.—Alex Life is like a“choose your own ending” book-you can take whatever adventures you want.—Sally ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                           (注意: 1. 先将你选择的一条感悟抄写在答题纸带有引号的横线上。) 6．（2018·上海·中考真题）Writing(作文. ) 94. Write at least 60 words on the topic" My progress(以“进步了”为题,写一信不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格) 你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步,比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成。请选取其中一个方面,结合自身经历,谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的。 （注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。） The following is for reference only(以下表达仅供参考) used to do/be… try my best to do… make progress in( doing.… 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7．（2017·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words on the topic “There’s always hope”（以“常怀希望”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 面临困惑的时候、经历变化的时候、感觉挫败的时候、遭遇逆境的时候……来自内心的坚持、他人的帮助、社会的关爱和科技的发展等，总能让人常怀希望。请选取一个方面谈谈你的理解（可结合自身或他人的经历）。 The following is for reference only （以下表达仅供参考）  get out of difficulty  give … a hand  never lose hope 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8．（2016·上海·中考真题）Writing（作文） 94．Write at least 60 words on the topic“I’m ready”（以“我准备好了”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 你对明天一定有着美好的憧憬．为此，你已经做好了哪方面的准备？请结合你的经历或特长等，选取一个角度具体谈谈你是如何做准备的． （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．） independent     be good at… responsible      take part in… hardworking     it helps me to… ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 中考模拟真题练 9．（2024·上海·模拟预测）Write a passage in at least 60 words on the topic of “The progress I’ve made” 以“我所取得的进步”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 请结合自己的经历，选取一两个方面来聊一聊你取得过哪些进步？如何取得进步 的？(注意文章中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。) _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2025·上海金山·一模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Activities on spreading the culture of Spring Festival”(以“传播春节文化的活动”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文。标点符号不占格) 最近联合国教科文组织 (the UNESCO) 宣布将中国的春节列入世界非物质文化遗产名录 (the list of Intangible Cultural Heritage)。为了庆祝这一重要时刻， 你所在的社区向居民们征集在社区内传播春节文化的活动方案，诸如，举办春节美食分享会、春节故事演讲比赛、制作传统手工艺品 (handicrafts）如窗花剪纸和红灯笼、写福字 (write the Chinese character Fu)、贴春联 (paste the Spring Festival couplets)、表演舞龙 (dragon dances) 或舞狮等等。你作为一名社区志愿者，请设计至少二种活动，并结合自己的擅长和活动的意义说明理由。 说明：文中不得出现真实的地名和人名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（2025·上海浦东新·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 为了庆祝春节申遗成功，学校决定举办“非物质文化遗产节”（Intangible Cultural Heritage Festival）, 增进学生对中国非遗文化的了解和学习。学生发展中心精选了六项非遗文化项目，现向全校学生征集宣传创意。 假设你是学生李华（Li Hua），请写一封邮件给活动负责人王老师表达你的想法。邮件内容须包含：（1）从以下非遗传承人中选择一个身份，并简述选择的理由；（2）以此身份谈谈你打算如何宣传这项非遗文化。 小书法家（Little calligrapher） 中国剪纸工艺师（Chinese paper cutting artist） 小茶艺师（Little tea culture introducer/ tea maker） 龙舟队员（Dragon boat player） 中国武术表演者（Kung fu performer） 中医草药宣传者（TCM introducer）（注意：1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） 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(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是李枫，你们学校计划寒假开展主题为“感受春节”(Feeling the atmosphere of the Spring Festival)的项目，现向学生征求一个小队活动设想。请给负责人Miss Zhang写一封邮件。邮件需包含以下内容： (1)你对此项目的看法； (2)小队活动内容简介及设计意图。 以下活动内容供参考： 包饺子(making jiaozi) 贴窗花(sticking paper-cut) 写春联(writing Spring Festival couplets) 扫尘 (sweeping the dust) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（2025·上海杨浦·一模）你是学校图书馆的志愿者李枫，负责每周一下午的图书馆整理工作。这周你因为某个原因而忘记了图书馆的任务。你需要写一封道歉信给你的图书馆负责人Mr. Wang，表达你的歉意。 道歉信内容须包括： ·表达歉意； ·解释缺席的原因； ·提出补救措施。 注意： 1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分； 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（2025·上海宝山·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。) 假设你是李华，你在学校的国际交流活动中结识了一位英国留学生Michael。他对中国学校的校园生活很感兴趣。你决定写一封邮件给他，向他介绍你的校园生活。你可以从校园环境(campus environment)、学校午餐(school lunch)、传统节庆活动(traditional festivals and celebrations)、社团活动(club activities)中选择1-2个方面进行介绍，让Michael感受到中国校园的独特魅力。 注意： 1.信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。 Dear Michael, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 15．（2025·上海嘉定·一模）你觉得学校组织的心理讲座（lectures on mental health）是否有助于缓解压力（reduce pressure）？为什么？你还希望学校开展一个什么活动来有效缓解压力？说说你的理由，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。 （注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题04 书面表达15篇 (上海中考真题+中考模拟) 中考真题练 1．（2023·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 你所在的社区计划举办名为“时间管理 (time management)”的培训，现就培训方案征求意见。假设你是初三学生李华，请阅读以下培训方案，写一封邮件给社区负责人王先生，邮件须包含以下内容： (1) 你是否会参加此培训，并简述理由； (2) 针对方案中的一项内容，提出修改建议。 培训方案 (training plan) 目的 教授时间管理的方法 对象 (participant) 13~17岁的学生 形式 (way of training) 阅读 时间 七月每周六上午7~10点 地点 社区广场 注意： 1.邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄本卷语篇不得分。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Dear Mr Wang, I want to participate in this activity very much, because time is very important for all of us. As for the activity form, I think it should be improved. For example, we can find some experienced celebrities to share their stories. Of course, we can also ask classmates or teachers around us to share their stories. Because I think only reading form is too simple and boring. I hope my advice is helpful to you. I look forward to attending this training and gaining valuable insights that will help me manage my time more efficiently. Thank you for considering my feedback. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，注意不要有遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，想参加此次培训； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。简述自己参加培训的理由，并针对活动方案提出建议； 第三步，书写结语。期待此次培训。 [亮点词汇] ①improve提高 ②share分享 ③ask ab. to do sth.请某人做某事 ④helpful有用的 ⑤look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①I want to participate in this activity very much, because time is very important for all of us. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②Because I think only reading form is too simple and boring. (宾语从句) 2．（2022·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 你校将增设一间学生活动室（student activity room），现有以下六种关于活动室用途的设想： 读者之家（Reading corner）    劳技工坊（Mini workshop）  艺体天地（Arts and sports centre） 义卖集市（Charity market）    科创小屋（High-tech lab）    心灵驿站（Heart-to-heart room） 学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，表明你最喜欢的一种设想，并说明理由。 （注意：1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Mr Zhang,      I am writing to you to share my ideas about the use of the student activity room. I prefer to make it a heart-to-heart room.      For some students, they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy. They can turn to this place for help if there is one. Besides, students are likely to suffer from mental problems. If these problems aren’t solved well, they may bring bad results. The heart-to-heart room can offer help to these students in time.      Thank you for reading my e-mail.                                                                                                                                                                          Yours,                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。 ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：首先选择其中你最喜欢的一种设想，发邮件给校报张老师，并说明理由。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，介绍自己喜欢的设想； 第二步，介绍喜欢的理由； 第三步，表示感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①prefer to do更喜欢做某事 ②turn to求助于 ③suffer from遭受 [高分句型] ① they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy.（含有when引导的时间状语和who引导的定语从句） ②They can turn to this place for help if there is one.（if引导的条件状语从句） 3．（2021·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 你的学校正在为以下活动课招募教学小助手(teaching assistant)： 球类(Ball Games)      演讲(Speech)      器乐(Instrumental Music) 戏剧(Drama)      手工(Handicrafts)      摄影(Photography) 假设你是李华，请给教导处张老师写封信，结合你的兴趣和特长，说明你想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。 注意： 1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Mr. Zhang,   I am writing to you to apply for the teaching assistant for our instrumental music lesson. The reason why I am interested in this job is that I love music and I have got the level-10 certificates of both piano and guitar. Besides, music is a way to deepen our understanding of the world as well as a way to relax ourselves. I hope more students will find its beauty through this course, which is certainly my goal. Being the teaching assistant is exactly what I am good at and what I desire. I really hope you can give me this opportunity. Sincerely,   Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据所给情境，给教导处张老师写封信，结合自己的兴趣和特长，说明自己想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。 2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称写作，时态为一般现在时。结合自己的兴趣和特长，选择一门活动课，表明选择担任这一门课的小助手的理由；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。 4．（2020·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情况填写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 雕刻家Willard的成长经历告诉我们：人无完人，但每个人都有自己的独特之处，在Willard的主页上有一个留言区，每位浏览者都可以写下自己的故事和感想． 请以"Everyone can be special （天生我才）"为题，在留言区分享你的经历或见闻． （注意： 1．短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分． 2．照抄阅读语篇不得分．） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Everyone can be special No one is perfect，but everyone is unique in their own way． I saw a film yesterday．The main character of the film is an unusual boy．When he was born，he grew four times as fast as a normal person，which means that when he is 10，he looks 40．The other children always laughs at him，so he is very sad and feels lonely．One day，his mother said gently to him that no one was perfect，but everyone was unique in their own way．From then on，he and his classmates became good friends． Everyone can be special as long as you don't give up yourself． 【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于话题写作。写作时要注意文章的要求分享经历或见闻。 2.例文点评：例文采用三段式，第一大段人无完人，但是又是特别的；第二大段陈述自己的经历；第三大段呼吁大家不要放弃成为特别的人，结构清晰，段落分明。用第三人称来进行写作分析；时态采用一般过去时为主。 3.高分亮点： 短语：laugh at, as long as, be born, give up. 句型：when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的宾语从句，定语从句。 【点睛】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务． 5．（2019·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given information（根据以下材料，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 以下是几位同学在以貌取人、盲从朋友、看待谎言、抉择人生等方面的感悟。请从中选择你比较有感触的一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。 Don't judge people by their looks. Someone could be bad-looking and still be nice. —Katie When your friends do something stupid，you don't have to follow.—Jackie Don't tell a teacher your dog ate your homework，especially if you don't have a dog.—Alex Life is like a“choose your own ending” book-you can take whatever adventures you want.—Sally ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                           (注意: 1. 先将你选择的一条感悟抄写在答题纸带有引号的横线上。) 【答案】例文 Don’t Judge a Book by Its Cover by Michelle As an old saying goes, don’t judge a book by its cover. I didn’t recognize the true meaning of it until last year. In my neighborhood came a man with a scary face. The first several times I came across him, I always ran away quickly, with hands covering my eyes. Later, I knew from my parents that he made a lot of effort to keep our neighborhood clean as a volunteer, which provides a better living environment for us. Realizing the mistake I made, I went to say sorry to him. And I really appreciated him for helping me learn that a person’s internal beauty is always the most valuable part instead of his appearance. 【详解】以下是几位同学在以貌取人、盲从朋友、看待谎言、抉择人生等方面的感悟。请从中选择你比较有感触的一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。 【点睛】这是一篇比较不错的作文。这篇短文层次非常的清晰，文中用到了一些好的句型：As we all know, we can't judge people by their clothing . Because the clothes do not reflect what is inside the human.；I think if you juge a person by his clothes you only can get his taste of clothes, but taste of clothes not equal to the taste of life这些给文中增色不少。 6．（2018·上海·中考真题）Writing(作文. ) 94. Write at least 60 words on the topic" My progress(以“进步了”为题,写一信不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格) 你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步,比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成。请选取其中一个方面,结合自身经历,谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的。 （注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。） The following is for reference only(以下表达仅供参考) used to do/be… try my best to do… make progress in( doing.… _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I used to write badly, especially in English. It affected my performance every composition. I felt annoyed because I didn’t know how to do it. Several months ago, our English teacher reminded us to pay attention to our English Writing. He prepared a copybook for each student. We were asked to practice every day. I tried my best to copy well. The teacher encouraged me and kept on telling me what to do next. With the help of my English teacher, I made progress in writing. No pains no gains. I will study hard to achieve greater progress and I believe I will do better and better. 【详解】作文要求以“My progress”为题，叙述自己一次进步的过程。故取得怎样进步是描述的重点，以前怎样，以后怎样也需要简单叙述。时态以一般过去时为主，人称为第一人陈。可以借鉴所提供的词组，另外，写作时还需注意语句间的衔接，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 高分句型： 1. We were asked to practice every day. 我们被要求每天练习。此句用的是一般过去时的被动语态。 2. The teacher encouraged me and kept on telling me what to do next. 老师鼓励我并不断告诉我下一步该怎么做。keep on doing sth.不断地做某事。 3. No pains no gains. 没有付出就没有收获。谚语的使用，为作文增添了亮点。 7．（2017·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words on the topic “There’s always hope”（以“常怀希望”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 面临困惑的时候、经历变化的时候、感觉挫败的时候、遭遇逆境的时候……来自内心的坚持、他人的帮助、社会的关爱和科技的发展等，总能让人常怀希望。请选取一个方面谈谈你的理解（可结合自身或他人的经历）。 The following is for reference only （以下表达仅供参考）  get out of difficulty  give … a hand  never lose hope _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】（One possible version） There’s always hope In the growth, we will inevitably encounter some setbacks.When adversity comes, the help of others and the insistence from the heart, always brings us hope.Because hope is like a dose of a stimulant; it gives us courage when we are tired.Facing challenges from adversity, we must be hopeful and recognize our brief defeat, then keep moving forward toward hope. No matter where you are, how embarrassed you are, please believe that everything will be over.We can not give up hope for life, and believe that a good day will come.Everything will be over, as long as people live, there is no step but to become.Keep hoping! It can help us out of difficulties and succeed. 【详解】本文要求考生围绕“希望”这个话题，以《常怀希望》为题目写一篇考场作文，所以一定要认真审题，确定短文的体裁和表达的中心。在作文时，要注意上下文的衔接过渡，适当地使用些高级词汇及句式，给文章增添些许亮色。 写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：In the growth,在成长的过程中；the insistence from the heart源于内心的坚持；keep doing,坚持做；give up.放弃；as long as.只要。巧妙地运用连词and把两个短句结构成长句，如We can not give up hope for life, and believe that a good day will come.增加了文章的亮点色。 8．（2016·上海·中考真题）Writing（作文） 94．Write at least 60 words on the topic“I’m ready”（以“我准备好了”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 你对明天一定有着美好的憧憬．为此，你已经做好了哪方面的准备？请结合你的经历或特长等，选取一个角度具体谈谈你是如何做准备的． （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．） independent     be good at… responsible      take part in… hardworking     it helps me to… ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I'm ready I'm ready having prepared with effort for so many years, I'm ready for my high school. Since it would be a period for the youth to experience considerable emotional, mental and physical growth, it's important for me to prepare mentally and physically for the changes ahead. I take part in many activities and develop many hobbies. They both help me become more active and energetic than before. What's more, I have set myself up to the academic side and learnt to ignore any distraction to learning. The accumulation of all kinds of knowledge has already laid a solid foundation for my further study. In my free time, I read a lot of books, which largely broadens my horizon. I have acquired some reading skills that can help me get more information from books. Last but not least, I can arrange my time well now and I have set up my mind to make the most use of time in the high school. I am trying to make myself better and I am really ready for my high school life. 【详解】本文为议论文。题目为“我准备好了”。写作人称主要为第一人称“我”，时态为现在完成时和一般现在时。写作要点包括：1、体能上的准备；2、思想上的准备（知识储备）；3、决心。写作举例需结合经历或特长。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】Since①it would be a period for the youth to experience considerable emotional, mental and physical growth, it’s important for me to②prepare mentally and physically for the changes ahead. 由于高中是青少年经历相当大的情感、精神以及身体变化的时期，做好思想上和体能上的准备对我来说很重要． ②    引导原因状语从句，表示显而易见的原因，语气比because弱，比as强。 ②不定式为真正的主语，it在句子中作形式主语。 【高分句型二】In my free time, I read a lot of books, which largely broadens my horizon. 在我空闲的时间里，我读很多书，这打开了我的视野。 broaden one's horizon/eyes  打开某人的视野 which引导非限制性定语从句，which 指代前面的内容，在从句中作主语。 中考模拟真题练 9．（2024·上海·模拟预测）Write a passage in at least 60 words on the topic of “The progress I’ve made” 以“我所取得的进步”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 请结合自己的经历，选取一两个方面来聊一聊你取得过哪些进步？如何取得进步 的？(注意文章中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。) _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: The progress I’ve made I used to depend on my parents to do everything for me. But now, I become more independent and learn to do something by myself. In the past, I never did any housework at home. However, during the period of Covid-19, my mom was seriously sick and was too weak to take care of me. Since we could not go out, I had to learn how to cook in order not to get hungry. Although the food I cooked was not as delicious as I thought, my mother was very pleased with me. Now I can not only make full use of the time to study, but also help my family to do some housework, such as washing clothes and cleaning the floor. I really learn a lot from the progress I have made. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：题目要求结合自己的经历，选取一两个方面谈谈自己取得的进步，以及如何取得进步的。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步聚] 第一步，总体介绍自己的进步； 第二步，通过描述疫情期间自己不得不学习厨技照顾母亲，谈自己取得的进步； 第三步，最后谈自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①too...to...太……而不能…… ②take care of照顾 ③in order to为了 [高分句型] ①Since we could not go out, I had to learn how to cook in order not to get hungry.（疑问词+动词不定式作宾语） ②Although the food I cooked was not as delicious as I thought, my mother was very pleased with me.（although引导的让步状语从句） 10．（2025·上海金山·一模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Activities on spreading the culture of Spring Festival”(以“传播春节文化的活动”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文。标点符号不占格) 最近联合国教科文组织 (the UNESCO) 宣布将中国的春节列入世界非物质文化遗产名录 (the list of Intangible Cultural Heritage)。为了庆祝这一重要时刻， 你所在的社区向居民们征集在社区内传播春节文化的活动方案，诸如，举办春节美食分享会、春节故事演讲比赛、制作传统手工艺品 (handicrafts）如窗花剪纸和红灯笼、写福字 (write the Chinese character Fu)、贴春联 (paste the Spring Festival couplets)、表演舞龙 (dragon dances) 或舞狮等等。你作为一名社区志愿者，请设计至少二种活动，并结合自己的擅长和活动的意义说明理由。 说明：文中不得出现真实的地名和人名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 As a community volunteer, I am excited to propose two activities to celebrate the inclusion of Chinese New Year in the UNESCO list of Intangible Cultural Heritage. These activities will help spread the rich traditions of Chinese New Year within our community. One of the best ways to experience a culture is through its food. I propose organizing a Chinese New Year Food Sharing Event where community members can bring their favorite traditional dishes, such as dumplings, rice cakes, and spring rolls. Another activity is a workshop for making traditional Chinese handicrafts, such as paper-cutting. This workshop can include both elderly residents, who can share their knowledge and skills, and children. In the end, by participating in these events, residents can gain a deeper understanding of the traditions and values associated with this important festival. Let’s come together to celebrate our rich cultural heritage! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要用一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意至少设计两种活动，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍两个传播春节文化的活动方案； 第三步，说明该活动的意义。 [亮点词汇] ① one of the best ways 最好的方法之一 ② propose doing 提议做某事 ③ associated with 与……相关 [高分句型] ① I propose organizing a Chinese New Year Food Sharing Event where community members can bring their favorite traditional dishes, such as dumplings, rice cakes, and spring rolls. (where引导的定语从句) ② This workshop can include both elderly residents, who can share their knowledge and skills, and children. (who引导的定语从句) 11．（2025·上海浦东新·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 为了庆祝春节申遗成功，学校决定举办“非物质文化遗产节”（Intangible Cultural Heritage Festival）, 增进学生对中国非遗文化的了解和学习。学生发展中心精选了六项非遗文化项目，现向全校学生征集宣传创意。 假设你是学生李华（Li Hua），请写一封邮件给活动负责人王老师表达你的想法。邮件内容须包含：（1）从以下非遗传承人中选择一个身份，并简述选择的理由；（2）以此身份谈谈你打算如何宣传这项非遗文化。 小书法家（Little calligrapher） 中国剪纸工艺师（Chinese paper cutting artist） 小茶艺师（Little tea culture introducer/ tea maker） 龙舟队员（Dragon boat player） 中国武术表演者（Kung fu performer） 中医草药宣传者（TCM introducer）（注意：1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Wang, I am very excited to hear that our school is going to hold an Intangible Cultural Heritage Festival. Among the six intangible cultural heritage projects, I would like to choose the role of a Chinese paper cutting artist. The reason for my choice is that Chinese paper cutting is a very unique and charming art form. It has a long history and can vividly represent various aspects of Chinese culture, such as folk stories, traditional festivals, and beautiful natural scenery. If I were a Chinese paper cutting artist, I would promote this intangible cultural heritage in the following ways. On the one hand, I would hold a paper cutting exhibition on campus. I would display a variety of my paper cutting works, from simple patterns to complex and large-scale works. On the other hand, I would set up a paper cutting workshop. I would teach students how to make simple paper cutting works by themselves. In the process of teaching, I would tell them about the origin, development, and techniques of paper cutting. This way, students can experience the fun of paper cutting and have a deeper understanding of this intangible cultural heritage. I hope my ideas can be helpful for the Intangible Cultural Heritage Festival. Best regards, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时与虚拟语气为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己选择的非遗传承人身份，并说明理由； 第二步，介绍打算如何宣传这项非遗文化。 [亮点词汇] ①vividly生动地 ②set up建立 ③have a deeper understanding of对……有更深的理解 [高分句型] ①The reason for my choice is that Chinese paper cutting is a very unique and charming art form.（表语从句） ②If I were a Chinese paper cutting artist, I would promote this intangible cultural heritage in the following ways.（条件状语从句） 12．（2025·上海闵行·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是李枫，你们学校计划寒假开展主题为“感受春节”(Feeling the atmosphere of the Spring Festival)的项目，现向学生征求一个小队活动设想。请给负责人Miss Zhang写一封邮件。邮件需包含以下内容： (1)你对此项目的看法； (2)小队活动内容简介及设计意图。 以下活动内容供参考： 包饺子(making jiaozi) 贴窗花(sticking paper-cut) 写春联(writing Spring Festival couplets) 扫尘 (sweeping the dust) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Miss Zhang,      I am Li Feng. I am writing to express my ideas about the project of “Feeling the atmosphere of the Spring Festival”. I believe this project is a wonderful opportunity for us to know more about Chinese traditional customs.     For our team’s activity, we plan to make jiaozi, stick paper-cuts on the windows and write Spring Festival couplets. These activities will let us experience the joy of preparing for the Spring Festival and understand its meaning. We hope to spread the festival atmosphere and traditional customs to our classmates.      Thank you for considering our ideas. Yours, Li Feng 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍对此项目的看法； 第二步，介绍活动内容并说明设计意图； 第三步，对老师表示感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①know more about更好了解 ②prepare for为……做准备 ③festival atmosphere节日氛围 [高分句型] I believe this project is a wonderful opportunity for us to know more about Chinese traditional customs.（宾语从句） 13．（2025·上海杨浦·一模）你是学校图书馆的志愿者李枫，负责每周一下午的图书馆整理工作。这周你因为某个原因而忘记了图书馆的任务。你需要写一封道歉信给你的图书馆负责人Mr. Wang，表达你的歉意。 道歉信内容须包括： ·表达歉意； ·解释缺席的原因； ·提出补救措施。 注意： 1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分； 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Wang, I am Li Feng, the volunteer who assists at the library every Monday afternoon. I am extremely sorry for missing my shift for the library organization work this week. The reason for my absence was a sudden and severe stomachache that prevented me from attending. I was in so much pain that I couldn’t make it to the library. I deeply regret the inconvenience this may have caused. To make amends for my mistake, I would like to volunteer to work extra hours this Saturday. Furthermore, I will be more mindful of my schedule to ensure that this won’t happen again. I sincerely hope you can forgive me for my oversight. Thank you for your understanding and patience. Yours sincerely, Li Feng 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有提示信息，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己，表达写信意图； 第二步，陈述自己缺席的原因； 第三步，提出补救措施； 第四步，表达感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①make amends for my mistake  补过 ②prevent sb. from doing sth.  阻止某人做某事 [高分句型] ①I am Li Feng, the volunteer who assists at the library every Monday afternoon. (who引导限制性定语从句) ②I was in so much pain that I couldn’t make it to the library. (so … that引导结果状语从句) 14．（2025·上海宝山·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。) 假设你是李华，你在学校的国际交流活动中结识了一位英国留学生Michael。他对中国学校的校园生活很感兴趣。你决定写一封邮件给他，向他介绍你的校园生活。你可以从校园环境(campus environment)、学校午餐(school lunch)、传统节庆活动(traditional festivals and celebrations)、社团活动(club activities)中选择1-2个方面进行介绍，让Michael感受到中国校园的独特魅力。 注意： 1.信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。 Dear Michael, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Michael, How are you? I’d like to share my campus life with you. My school is big and beautiful. There is a big playground and a new library. The dining room is big and clean and the school lunch is very delicious. There are different kinds of clubs in my school. I join the basketball club. We often play basketball together. Last month, we won the first prize in the campus basketball competition. New Year’s Day is coming soon, and we will hold a grand party to celebrate it. I like my campus life very much. How about your campus life? Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，可选择1-2个方面介绍。可适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候朋友并表明写作目的； 第二步，详细介绍自己的校园生活； 第三步，表达对校园的喜爱并询问对方的校园生活怎么样。 [亮点词汇] ① share...with...与……分享…… ②take part in参加 ③ win the first prize获得一等奖 [高分句型] ①There is a big playground and a new library. (There be句型，就近原则) ②New Year’s Day is coming soon, and we will hold a grand party to celebrate it. (动词不定式作目的状语) 15．（2025·上海嘉定·一模）你觉得学校组织的心理讲座（lectures on mental health）是否有助于缓解压力（reduce pressure）？为什么？你还希望学校开展一个什么活动来有效缓解压力？说说你的理由，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。 （注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I think lectures on mental health can help reduce pressure. Because we do not quite understand some psychology. Through this discussion, we can better understand ourselves. I suggest that schools should start more extracurricular activities to help us relax ourselves, such as basketball games, singing competitions, etc. Schools should also provide us with fixed time and teachers to help us solve psychological problems. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明学校组织的心理讲座有助于缓解压力，并说明原因。 第二步，介绍希望学校开展一个什么活动来有效缓解压力并说出理由。 [亮点词汇] ①Through this discussion通过这次讨论 ② help us relax ourselves帮助我们放松自己 [高分句型] ①I think lectures on mental health can help reduce pressure. (省略that的宾语从句) 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$