内容正文:
Section 5 Writing a Letter to the Editor
题型解读
谋篇思路
本单元要求给编辑写一封关于生活方式的信,要求包括具体的生活方式、这样做的利弊以及解决办法。
首段:描述不健康的生活习惯(即提出问题)
主体段落:改掉不健康的生活习惯的措施(即采取行动)
尾段:个人感受
必背短语
1. skip breakfast 不吃早饭
2. be addicted to 对……入迷,对……上瘾
3. sugary drinks 含糖饮料
4. be particular about 对……挑剔
5. do harm to 对……有害
6. physical and mental health 身心健康
7. in response to 为了应对,响应
8. stay dynamic 保持精力充沛
9. get rid of bad habits 摆脱坏的习惯
10. take action 采取行动
11. have a negative influence on 对……有不良影响
12. lead a healthy life 过健康生活
满分佳句
■ 夺人眼球开头句
1. Just as the saying goes, the first wealth is health.
正如俗语所说,最大的财富是健康。
2. Developing healthy living habits is of great importance to our physical and mental health.
养成健康的生活习惯对我们的身心健康至关重要。
■ 亮点出彩篇中句
1. Many students are addicted to snacks and sugary drinks while others are particular about food.
许多学生沉迷于零食和含糖饮料,而另一些学生则挑食。
2. Mobile phones not only have seriously affected their normal study and rest, but also have affected other students.
手机不但严重影响了他们正常的学习和休息,也影响到其他同学。
3. Some people get addicted to computer games, which will do great harm to their physical and mental health.
一些人对电脑游戏上瘾,这对他们的身心健康造成巨大的损害。
4. Never should we skip breakfast, which is of vital importance to us to stay dynamic.
我们永远不要不吃早餐,早餐对于我们保持精力充沛非常重要。
■ 韵味无穷结尾句
1. Only if we eat a healthy diet and do some exercise every day can we lead a healthy life.
只有我们吃健康的饮食,并且每天做运动,我们才能过上健康的生活。
2. Our physical and mental health relies on both a healthy diet and moderate exercise.
我们的身心健康有赖于健康的饮食和适当的锻炼。
写作规范
假定你是李华,你校英语校报编辑正在就“Healthy Lifestyle”这一主题面向全体学生征稿。请你根据以下内容给编辑写一封信。写作要点:1.指出不良习惯:熬夜玩手机;2.作出决定;3.提出具体行动;4.表达预期结果。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
第一步:认真审题 谋篇布局
体裁
人称
时态
要点结构图
开头点题
指出自己不良的生活方式及其影响
应用文
第一人称
一般过去时,
一般现在时
主体段落
作出决定,提出具体行动
尾段
表达预期结果
第二步:核心词汇 想周全
1.熬夜 stay up
2.沉溺于 be addicted to
3.玩手机游戏 play phone games
4.没精力做某事 have no energy to do sth
5.下定决心 make up ones mind
第三步:由词及句 雏形现
1.我写信告诉你我被一个很严重的问题困扰着。
I am writing to tell you Im troubled by a serious problem.
2.最近我上课时很困,没精力做任何事。
Recently I have been very sleepy in class and have had no energy to do anything.
3.这严重影响了我的健康和学习。
It has greatly affected my health and study.
4.升入高中以后,我感到压力很大,经常熬夜玩儿手机游戏来放松。
After starting high school, I felt stressed out and always got relaxed by staying up to play phone games.
5.结果,白天我没有精力和热情。
As a result, I lacked energy and passion in the daytime.
6.现在我下定决心改变这种情况。
Now I have made up my mind to change this situation.
7.我会合理安排使用手机的时间。
I will arrange the time of using my mobile phone reasonably.
8.睡觉前我会读一些令人放松的书籍,洗个热水澡,这些会帮助我睡个好觉。
I will read some relaxing books and take a warm bath before going to bed, which may help me get a sound sleep.
9.我相信我会再次充满活力,像以前一样享受学习和生活。
I believe I will become energetic again and
enjoy my study and life as before.
第四步:句式升级 造亮点
利用which引导的非限制性定语从句合并句2,3
I have been very sleepy in class and have had no energy to do anything, which has greatly affected my health and study.
第五步:合理过渡 完美卷面
答案
Dear Editor,
I am writing to tell you Im troubled by a serious problem. Recently I have been very sleepy in class and have had no energy to do anything, which has greatly affected my health and study. After starting high school, I felt stressed out and always got relaxed by staying up to play phone games. As a result, I lacked energy and passion in the daytime.
But now I have made up my mind to change this situation. I will arrange the time of using my mobile phone reasonably. In addition/Besides, I will read some relaxing books and take a warm bath before going to bed, which may help me get a sound sleep.
I believe I will become energetic again and enjoy my study and life as before.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
单元考点美文全记
根据汉语提示用本单元词汇的正确形式填空。
As teenagers grow up, they ①are easy to(容易) form bad habits. For example, they become addicted to ②alcohol (酒) or ③tobacco(烟草). The ④abuse(滥用) of them can harm their ⑤physical(身体上的) health. And they can not ⑥dominate(支配,控制) themselves. Then bad habits form. In fact, bad habits can be changed if you know about the “habit cycle”.
For young people, if they ⑦make up their minds(下定决心) to change themselves, they shouldnt believe ⑧magic pills(魔力药片). Instead, they should ⑨examine(审查) themselves and get rid of ⑩negative(消极的) minds straight away(立即,马上). They can take part in summer camps. Maybe at first, they feel dizzy(头晕目眩的) and worn out(筋疲力尽的). But soon they will feel dynamic(充满活力的) after playing bowling(打保龄球) and playing skateboard(滑滑板). So repeat some meaningful activities, which can help you get away from bad habits.
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