UNIT 1 Section Ⅳ Writing（Word教参）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第三册（人教版2024）

Section Ⅳ Writing—Write an art exhibition announcement 本单元的写作任务是“写一则艺术展览公告”，其实质是主题展览推介文，属于应用文体中的公告或通知。写作时要注意公告的格式、语言和具体内容的安排，做到格式正确，语言规范，内容客观、真实，具有说服力和吸引力。 跟课文学写作范式 (一)课文范式提炼 (二)写作要点指津 公告或者通知一般分为口头通知和书面通知，常用于下达指示、布置工作、传达事情等，所以语言要规范，时间、地点和展出的内容以及注意事项要交代清楚，切忌使用模糊不清的语言和俗语。在句式写法上必须注意以下几点： 1．多用简单句和祈使句，尽可能用精练的文字明确地表达信息。 2．通知往往着重对活动内容、对象进行说明，多用被动语态。 3．通知中所表明的事情大部分是未进行的，故多用将来时态。 4．发布通知的目的是传达信息，不必过多地使用修饰语言。时间、地点及相关事宜一定要交代清楚。 跟课文学亮点表达 阅读文章第一自然段，习得以下素养 ★学亮点表达 1．本段第一句使用动词present引出了本次展览的主题，第二句借助动词explore说明了本次展览中展品丰富的来源和较高的欣赏价值。 2．本段第二句运用祈使句，表现了本篇文章的性质——一则艺术展览公告，意在告知读者一次艺术展览的相关信息，吸引读者前去观看。最后一句用动词不定式作表语，直接清楚地交代了举办本次展览的目的——展示中国古代人民的艺术天赋。 [微写作1]——补全句子 (1)这幅长528厘米的作品以其合理的布局和完美的构图而闻名。随着画面逐渐展开，首先映入眼帘的是汴京郊外的早春景色。一些旅行者在薄雾中匆匆赶路，呈现出一幅典型的清明画面。 The 528-centimeter-long work is well-known for its reasonable arrangement and perfect composition.With the painting gradually unfolded, the first thing to catch the eye is the early spring scenery outside Bianjing.Some travelers are hurrying on their way in the thin fog, presenting a typical picture of the Qingming Festival . (2)大部分同学对本次展览给予了高度评价，展览为他们提供了一个探索中国之美，感受中国艺术魅力的平台。 Most of the students think highly of this exhibition, which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art. ★学写作手法 本段开门见山引入主题，点明了本次展览的主题和目的，表达了写作意图。 阅读文章第二至第四自然段，习得以下素养 ★学亮点表达 第二段首句使用了highlight突出了这次展览的重头戏，重点突出。第三段第二句使用While引导让步状语从句，引出不为人所知的艺术家的伟大作品，吸引了读者的注意力。第四段第五、六句使用副词highly 和形容词exceptional，有力描述了受到通过丝绸之路从印度和中亚传来的佛教艺术的极大影响的中国雕塑，具有非凡的美感和品质。 [微写作2]——补全句子 (1)中国山水画可以被认为是中国古代艺术的最高表现形式之一。 它和强调与自然世界的和谐的道家哲学有关。 Chinese landscape painting can be considered one of the highest forms of expression in ancient Chinese art.It is linked with the philosophy of Daoism, which highlights the harmony with the natural world . (2)这种情况在13世纪随着乔托·迪·邦多内(1267－1337)而开始改变。虽然他的画仍然有宗教主题，但它们展示了真实的人。 This began to change in the 13th century with Giotto di Bondone (1267－1337)． While his paintings still had religious themes , they showed real people. (3)康熙皇帝对他的画评价很高。在中国，卡斯蒂利奥内以郎世宁的名字出名。 Emperor Kangxi thought highly of his paintings .In China, Castiglione became known under the name of Lang Shining. ★学逻辑衔接 第二段句首的The highlight、第三段句首的Also of primary note和第四段句首的Finally主次分明地介绍了本次展览的最重要的艺术珍品，使得本部分三段之间层次清晰，衔接自然，起到了引导观众关注展览的主要亮点的作用。 阅读文章第五自然段，习得以下素养 ★学亮点表达 1．本段第二句中的动词guarantee和transport，生动有力地描述了本次展览的目的和意义。 2．本段第一句中just a small taste of 突出了本次展览的展品丰富多彩，第二句中的形容词amazing进一步增强了作品对观众的吸引力。 [微写作3]——补全句子 (1)这只是为游客准备的一个小体验，他们保证这次展览将把游客带到一个神奇的世界，历史可能会以一种特殊的方式被带到生活中。 This is just a small taste of what is in store for tourists and they guarantee that this exhibition will transport tourists to an amazing world and history may be brought to life in a special way. (2)这只是贝尔法斯特所供参观的一小部分。每个人都应该花时间在拉甘河畔这座美丽的城市里探索更多。 This is just a small taste of what Belfast has to offer .Everyone should take time to explore more in this beautiful city on the Lagan River. ★学写作手法 本段作者总结了展览的目的和意义，呼应了开头段落。第二人称you的使用表现了写作目的，有助于吸引观众去观看艺术展览。 阅读文章第六至第九自然段，习得以下素养 ★学亮点表达 1．第六段运用动词run介绍了展览的截止日期，表达灵活。run此处意为“持续”，同last。 2．第七和第九段中用了两个否定形式的主语No one和No photos or food and drink以及被动语态，说明了参观期间不被允许的行为，语气严肃，表意清楚。 [微写作4]——补全句子/句式升级 (1)她的上一部音乐剧去年在百老汇连续上演了六个月。 Her last musical ran for six months on Broadway last year. (2)We allow nobody to eat snacks or drink while visiting. → No one is allowed to eat snacks or drink while visiting. ★学写作手法 第六至第九段中，作者运用清晰的分段、短小精悍的句子提供了有关展览的实用信息，包括展览开放时间、售票信息以及观展注意事项等。重点突出，一目了然。 (一)输入好词 1．admission　n．门票费 2．take place 举行；发生 3．pay a visit to 参观 4．a collection of 藏品/收集 5．renowned painter 著名画家 6．have a deep insight into 深入了解 7．ink wash paintings 水墨画 8．artistic genius 艺术天才 9．gain recognition as 得到认可 10．the highlight of the exhibition 展览的亮点 11．on display 在展览中 12．make an appearance in an exhibition at the Palace Museum 在故宫博物院的展览中亮相 (二)输入好句 一、引入话题 1．In order to promote the art of Chinese calligraphy, a lecture will be given by a famous calligrapher in our school.为了推广中国书法艺术，我们学校将举办一场著名书法家的讲座。 2．A Chinese painting exhibition will be held in the Students' Center from 8：00 a．m.to 5：30 p．m.this Saturday, the theme of which is “Beautiful China”．本周六上午8点至下午5点30分，学生中心将举办一场以“美丽中国”为主题的中国画展。 3．There will be an exhibition of oil paintings in our school, where you can see many works by masters.我们学校将举办一场油画展，在那里你可以看到许多大师的作品。 4．It has been decided that we'll take a trip to an exhibition being held in the city museum. 我们已经决定去城市博物馆参观一场正在举行的展览。 二、陈述具体内容 5．During the exhibition, 100 artworks of Chinese paintings submitted by student painting lovers will be on show.展览期间，将展出由学生绘画爱好者提交的100幅中国绘画作品。 6．The visit includes three parts, first of which is a brief introduction of the history of Chinese painting, traced back to 7,000 years ago. 这次参观包括三个部分，第一部分是对中国绘画历史的简要介绍，可以追溯到7 000年前。 7．They're all typical Chinese paintings with nature as their main theme. 它们都是典型的以自然为主题的中国画。 8．Besides, some great calligraphy works from well-known artists are included.此外，还有一些著名艺术家的伟大书法作品。 三、总结 9．Everyone is welcome to attend/take part in it.欢迎所有人参加。 10．You can't afford to miss it！千万不要错过哦！ 11．Admission is free and all students are welcome to this grand event. 本次活动免费入场，欢迎所有学生参加。 12．This activity was really educational and eye-opening.这次活动真的很有教育意义，(让人)大开眼界。 13．Not only does it arouse students' interest in art, but it also inspires students' love for our country.它不仅激发了学生对艺术的兴趣，而且还激发了学生对国家的热爱。 14．We believe this is a good chance for you to get close to Chinese works of art and get general idea about the Chinese artists. 我们相信这是您接近中国艺术作品，了解中国艺术家的好机会。 【写作要求】 假定你是李华， 你所在的市文化中心要在五一假期期间于美术馆举办一次中国水墨画(Chinese ink wash painting)画展， 请你写一则通知， 内容包括： 1．展览时间、地点； 2．展览内容。 注意： 1.词数80左右， 开头和结尾已写好， 不计入总词数； 2．可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。 An announcement Everyone is welcome to attend it. The City Cultural Center 【四步成文】 第一步：审题谋篇 第二步：由词扩句 1．将于五月一日上午九点到下午五点在当地美术馆举办展览。 An exhibition will be held from 9 a．m.to 5 p．m.on May 1st at the local gallery. 2．展览旨在使人们更好地理解中国水墨画。 The exhibition aims to make people have a better understanding of Chinese ink wash painting. 3．一些著名的艺术家们将当场表演他们的绘画技能。 Some famous artists will give live performances of their painting skills. 4．展览上会有很多不同风格的优秀作品。 There will be many excellent works of various styles on the exhibition. 5．这次展览很值得一看。 The exhibition is well worth a visit. 第三步：句式升级 6．把第二步中的句1和句2合并成简单句。 　In order to make people have a better understanding of Chinese ink wash painting, an exhibition will be held from 9 a．m.to 5 p．m.on May 1st at the local gallery.　 7．用not only倒装和but also连接第二步中的句3和句4。 Not only will some famous artists give live performances of their painting skills, but also there will be many excellent works of various styles on the exhibition. 第四步：连句成篇 One possible version： An announcement In order to make people have a better understanding of Chinese ink wash painting, an exhibition will be held from 9 a．m.to 5 p．m.on May 1st at the local gallery. Not only will some famous artists give live performances of their painting skills, but also there will be many excellent works of various styles on the exhibition.Furthermore, a professor from Beijing will give a lecture about the history of Chinese ink wash painting.The exhibition is well worth a visit. During the visit, do keep quiet and keep the gallery clean please. Everyone is welcome to attend it. The City Cultural Center 假如你是学生会主席李华，你市博物馆将要举行齐白石艺术展览。请根据以下内容写一篇口头通知。 1．简介齐白石； 2．活动免费； 3．时间、集合地点、注意事项。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 One possible version： Attention, please! I have an announcement to make. There will be an exhibition on the works of the painter Qi Baishi in the museum of our city next Saturday.Qi Baishi, recognized as one of the greatest painters in China, enjoys great popularity in the world.His works are well worth enjoying.This activity is free of charge for all the students.However, you'd better keep in mind that no photos or food and drink are allowed in the museum. We will meet at the school gate at 7：30 next Saturday.I hope all of you will have a good time. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$