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Section Ⅳ Listening and Talking & Reading for Writing
教材助读2
MY AMAZING NAADAM EXPERIENCE
I experienced the Naadam Festival in China's Inner<1> Mongolia Autonomous<2> Region<3> for the first time<4> this year. The festival falls on<5> the fourth day of the sixth month of the lunar calendar, ①usually lasting for three days. Naadam means“games” in Mongolian, and it is represented<6> by three events: horse racing, wrestling<7>,and archery<8>, ②which are all so exciting to watch!
①usually lasting for three days为现在分词短语作状语,状语中动作last与句子主语festival之间为逻辑上的主谓关系。
②此处为非限制性定语从句,其先行词为three events。
On the first day, I set off<9> to the games early with my friend Burin. I saw a lot of people wearing fancy<10> Mongolian robes<11>. Some were feeding their horses, some were practising archery,and others were chatting or taking photographs<12>. Burin told me ③that Mongolians travel every year from near and far to attend the festival<13>, just as their ancestors had done for centuries.
③此处为that引导的宾语从句,作told的直接宾语。
After the opening ceremony and some amazing performances, the wrestling competition<14> began. Mongolian wrestling is different from the wrestling in the Olympic Games. There are no rounds<15>, and wrestlers<16> are not separated by<17> weight. The wrestler loses if any part of his body above his knee touches the ground. After singing some songs, the competitors danced onto the green field, ④waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles<18>. I was quite moved by<19> their show of strength and grace<20>.
④此处为现在分词短语作伴随状语,其中as if引导方式状语从句,从句使用了虚拟语气。
I absolutely<21> enjoyed the archery, too, but the horse races were my favourite part. However, I was surprised to see ⑤that the riders were boys and girls! ⑥I heard it is because children are lighter and the horses can run faster and farther. At first<22>, I was a little worried about the children's safety, but Burin said, “Don't worry. They'⑦ve been riding horses all their lives. They'll be just fine.” ⑧That was the moment<23> I started to understand why people say “Horses are at the heart of<24> Mongolian culture”.…
⑤that the riders were boys and girls 为that引导的宾语从句。
⑥句中heard后接宾语从句,从句中又包含because引导的表语从句。
⑦have been riding是现在完成进行时,表示一个动作始于过去,到现在刚刚完成,或表示动作会一直持续下去。
⑧句中I started to understand 为定语从句,修饰先行词the moment; why引导宾语从句。
I'm finally back home now, ⑨feeling really tired, but ⑩celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it. He invited me back for the winter to stay in a traditional Mongolian tent<25> and eat hot pot<26>.I can't wait!
⑨feeling really tired 为现在分词短语作伴随状语,状语中动作feel与句子主语I之间为逻辑上的主谓关系。
⑩此处为动名词短语作主语,谓语动词用单数。
<1>inner adj.内部的;里面的;内心的
<2>autonomous adj.自治的;有自治权的
<3>region n.地区;区域;地带
<4>for the first time第一次
<5>fall on落到,轮到
<6>represent vt.象征;代表;相当于
<7>wrestling n.摔跤运动
<8>archery n.射箭术;射箭运动
<9>set off出发;动身;启程
<10>fancy adj.花哨的;精致的;昂贵的vt.想要;倾慕;自认为是
<11>robe n.袍服;礼袍
<12>take photographs照相
<13>attend the festival参加节日
<14>wrestling competition摔跤比赛
<15>round n.轮,回合
<16>wrestler n.摔跤运动员
<17>be separated by被……所分离
<18>eagle n.雕
<19>be moved by被……感动
<20>grace n.优美;优雅;高雅
<21>absolutely adv.绝对地;完全地
※absolute adj.绝对的;完全的
<22>at first起初,最先
<23>moment n.片刻;瞬间
<24>at the heart of位于……的核心
<25>tent n.帐篷
<26>pot n.罐;壶;锅
※hot pot火锅
亲身经历令人惊叹的那达慕盛会
今年我第一次参加了中国内蒙古自治区的“那达慕”大会。这个节日在农历六月的第四天开始,通常持续三天。“那达慕”在蒙古语中是“游戏”的意思,它以赛马、摔跤运动和射箭运动三个项目为代表,它们看起来都很刺激!
第一天,我和我的朋友布林很早就出发去看比赛了。我看到很多人穿着华丽的蒙古袍服。有的在喂马,有的在练射箭术,其他人在聊天或照相。布林告诉我,蒙古族人每年都会从四面八方赶来参加这个节日,就像他们的祖先几个世纪以来所做的那样。
在开幕式和一些精彩的表演之后,摔跤比赛开始了。蒙古式摔跤与奥运会摔跤不同。比赛中没有回合,摔跤运动员也没有重量之分。如果摔跤运动员膝盖以上的身体的任何部位接触到地面,他就输了。唱了几首歌后,参赛者们在绿地上跳起了舞,在空中挥舞着手臂,就像老鹰一样。我被他们表现的力量和优雅感动。
我也非常喜欢射箭运动,但赛马是我最喜欢的项目。然而,我惊讶地发现,骑手都是男孩和女孩!我听说这是因为孩子们更轻,马可以跑得更快、更远。起初,我有点儿担心孩子们的安全,但布林说:“别担心,他们一生都在骑马,他们会没事的。”就在那一刻,我开始理解为什么人们说“马是蒙古族文化的核心”。……
我现在终于回家了,感觉真的很累,但是和朋友一起庆祝“那达慕”大会是完全值得的。他邀请我回去过冬,住在传统的蒙古帐篷里,吃火锅。我等不及了!
Ⅰ.文本整体理解:提取语篇关键要素
1.What does the author want to share by writing this passage?
A.The author's first experience at the Naadam Festival in China's Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region.
B.How the author took part in the competition at the Naadam Festival.
C.China's rich festivals.
D.The author's love for China.
答案 A
2.Find out the main idea of each paragraph.
Para.1 A.The wrestling competition at the Naadam Festival.
Para.2 B.Something about the Naadam Festival.
Para.3 C.The horse races and the riders at the Naadam Festival.
Para.4 D.Many people attended the Naadam Festival.
Para.5 E.The author's satisfaction with this experience and longing for another invitation.
答案 Paras.1~5 BDACE
Ⅱ.文本细节理解:探寻语篇细节信息
1.What can we know about Mongolian wrestling?
A.It has little in common with the wrestling in the Olympics.
B.Wrestlers are divided into several groups by weight.
C.Only after three rounds can the winner appear.
D.The wrestler who touches the ground with any part of his body will lose.
答案 A
2.Which of the events at the Naadam Festival does the author like most?
A.Wrestling. B.Horse racing.
C.Archery. D.Dancing.
答案 B
3.What made the author amazed in the horse races?
A.The speed of the horses.
B.The age of the riders.
C.The species of the horses.
D.The height of the riders.
答案 B
4.从文中找出至少3个表达作者的经历和感受的句子:
I experienced the Naadam Festival in China's Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region for the first time this year.
On the first day, I set off to the games early with my friend Burin.
After the opening ceremony and some amazing performances, the wrestling competition began.
I was quite moved by their show of strength and grace.
I'm finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it.
Ⅲ.课文语法填空
This is the first time I have spent the Naadam Festival with my friend Burin in China's Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region this year. The festival 1. represented (represent) by horse racing, wrestling and archery falls on the 4th day of the sixth month of the lunar calendar, 2. which lasts for three days.
Of the three 3. events (event), two have left a deep impression 4. on me: wrestling and horse racing.Mongolian wrestling is different from 5. that in the Olympic Games. There are no rounds and wrestlers are not separated by weight. The wrestler loses if any part of his body above his knee touches the ground. As for horse racing, it was 6. amazing (amaze) to see that the riders were boys and girls. That is because children are 7. lighter (light) and the horses can run faster and farther. There is no need to worry about their safety, for they 8. have been riding (ride) horses all their lives. It is no wonder that people say “Horses are at 9. the heart of Mongolian culture”.
Though I am tired now, celebrating Naadam with my friend was 10. totally (total) worth it.
1 (教材P7)But, to be frank, the fireworks going off throughout the night were really annoying.
但是,坦率地说,整晚燃放烟花真令人恼火。
to be frank 坦白说;坦率地说
frankly speaking 坦率地说
to be honest/honestly speaking 诚实地说
generally speaking 一般来说
To be frank with you, I don't think highly of your plan.坦白地说,我对你的计划评价不高。
[融会练通]——单句语法填空
(1) Frankly (frank) speaking, I'd like to be your friend and invite you to come to my house on weekends.
[习作练笔]——补全句子
(2) To be honest/Honestly speaking (诚实地说), I have great hopes for my future and I'd like to share my ideal life in ten years with you.
(3) Generally speaking (一般来说), those who pay attention to physical exercise are in good health.
go off 爆炸;走火;离开;(铃、爆竹等)响; 熄灭;(食物、饮料)变质
[语义感知]——写出下列句中go off的含义
(4)At midnight she was watching an interesting play when the door bell went off. (铃、爆竹等)响
(5)Suddenly all the lights went off. 熄灭
(6)Don't drink the milk!It has gone off! 变质
(7)(2023·全国乙)So she went off about 1,200 miles away from home, to train with a coach from China. 离开
(8)A few minutes later the bomb went off, destroying the vehicle. 爆炸
go by (时间)流逝,过去
go in for 从事;喜欢;参加(考试)
go out (灯光或火)熄灭;过时;出去
go over 复习;检查
go through 通过;仔细检查;经历;浏览
[习作练笔]——补全句子
(9)你无法想象这些年来我所经历的一切。
You can't imagine what I have gone through these years.
(10)随着时间的流逝,三年前他种下的小树长得越来越高。
With time going by/As time goes by , the small tree he planted three years ago grows taller and taller.
2 (教材P7)Anyway, except for that, everything was fine.总之,除此之外,一切都很好。
except for 除……之外
①except “除了……之外”,表示在整体中减去一部分,除去的部分不包括在整体之内;
②except for “除了……之外”,用于引出细节以修正和补充句子的主要意思;
③besides “除了……之外(还有)”,即把除去的部分也包括在整体之内。
[融会练通]——选词填空(except/except for/besides)
(1)Your composition is good except for some spelling mistakes.
(2)The boy usually goes to work on his bike except on rainy days.
(3)Nowadays some people choose jobs for other reasons besides the pay.
3 (教材P8)Naadam means “games” in Mongolian, and it is represented by three events: horse racing, wrestling, and archery, which are all so exciting to watch!“那达慕”在蒙古语中是“游戏”的意思,它有三个代表性项目:赛马、摔跤和射箭,这些项目看起来都非常令人兴奋!
represent vt.象征;代表;相当于
①represent sb/oneself as/to be… 宣称某人/自称是……
represent sth to sb 向某人说明/传达某事
②representative n.代表 adj.有代表性的,典型的
①(2023·1月浙江)Hutongs represent an important cultural element of the city of Beijing.
胡同是北京一个重要的文化元素。
②She represents her mother as the kindest mother in the world.
她把她的母亲描绘成世界上最好的母亲。
[融会练通]——单句语法填空
(1)It is the open day of our school.Some parents represented their concerns to the headteacher.
(2)The painting is not the representative (represent) of his work of the period.
[习作练笔]——补全句子
(3)我非常高兴代表我们班邀请您为我们做一场关于英语写作的在线讲座。
Representing our class , I'm more than delighted to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing.
4 (教材P8)On the first day, I set off to the games early with my friend Burin.第一天,我和朋友布林很早就出发去看比赛了。
set off 出发;动身;启程;引爆;引发;拉响(警报)
set about 开始;着手
set aside 留出;把……置于一旁
set down 写下,记下
set out 动身,启程(+for+地点);开始工作(+to do sth)
set up 建立,创立;竖起;安排;摆放;陈列
①I used to set off the during the Spring Festival when I was young.
小时候我常常在春节期间燃放烟花。
②He set about doing his homework after supper.
晚饭后他开始做作业。
[提示] set about/out意为“开始(做)……”时,set about后接名词、动名词形式作宾语,而set out后跟动词不定式作宾语。
[融会练通]——单句语法填空
(1)The moment she arrived home, she set out to clean (clean) the house.
=The moment she arrived home, she set about cleaning (clean) the house.
(2)(2024·新课标Ⅰ改编)Sorry, I hadn't called sooner, but it's been a busy month.We're slowly getting things set up in our new home.
[习作练笔]——补全句子
(3)做好准备,以便有事你可以马上出发。
Get prepared so that you can set off immediately if something happens.
5 (教材P8)After singing some songs, the competitors danced onto the green field, waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles.
唱了几首歌之后,选手们在绿色的场地上跳起了舞,在空中挥舞着手臂,就像鹰一样。
句型:as if引导方式状语从句
①句中as if(好像;仿佛)引导方式状语从句,从句用虚拟语气,表示与现在事实相反。
②as if/as though可以引导方式状语从句和表语从句。若陈述一种事实,从句用陈述语气;若表示一种虚拟、假设情况或不可能实现的情况,则用虚拟语气。虚拟语气形式为:
as if+主语+
It looks as if a snowstorm is going to come soon.暴风雪好像快要来了。
[融会练通]——单句语法填空
(1)Boy as he is, he talks as if he were (be) an adult.
(2)David insisted on running as if he had forgotten (forget) all his weaknesses, though he was tripped over within the a few kilometers.
[习作练笔]——补全句子
(3)我不知道她为什么看着我,好像她认识我似的。
I don't know why she is looking at me as if she knew me .
6 (教材P8)That was the moment I started to understand why people say “Horses are at the heart of Mongolian culture”.从那一刻起,我开始明白为什么人们说“马是蒙古文化的核心”。
moment n.片刻;瞬间
①at the moment 目前
for the moment 目前,暂时
for a moment 片刻,一会儿
from that moment on 从那一刻起
②the moment… 一……就……(引导时间状语从句)
At the moment, the old man is leading a peaceful life.
目前,这位老人过着平静的生活。
[融会练通]——单句语法填空
(1)From that moment on , we have been best friends.
(2)If you think about it for a moment, it makes total sense.
[习作练笔]——同义替换
(3)I will tell the professor the good news as soon as (→ the moment ) he comes back.
7 (教材P8) Give a brief summary of the experience.
对这次经历做一个简短的总结。
brief adj.简洁的;简单的;短暂的
n.摘要;指示
①to be brief简而言之
in brief简而言之
make a brief speech做简短的讲话
②briefly adv.简略地,短暂地
To be brief, she was very satisfied with the result.简而言之,她对结果很满意。
[融会练通]——单句语法填空
(1)To begin with, I'd like to tell in brief the importance of the work.
(2)Please tell me what happened briefly (brief). Don't go into detail.
8 (教材P10)It is a day for people in China to show respect to seniors.在中国,这一天是人们向老人表达尊敬的日子。
respect n.& vt.尊敬;尊重;方面
①show respect to/for sb尊重某人
out of respect (for…)出于(对……的)尊敬;顾及
give/send one's respects to sb 向某人表示敬意
in all/many respects在各个方面/在许多方面
②respect sb for sth因某事而尊敬某人
③respectful adj.恭敬的;表示敬意的
respectable adj.可敬的;值得尊敬的
(2023·新课标Ⅱ)They make me feel valued and respected, no matter my level of artistic ability.无论我的艺术水平如何,他们都让我感受到了被重视和尊重。
[融会练通]——单句语法填空
(1) Out of respect, we'd better ask him for advice on this matter.
(2)China is developing very rapidly in all respects (respect) and we're all proud of our motherland.
(3)All the Chinese people are respectful (respect) towards Yuan Longping who made extremely contributions to the whole world.
[习作练笔]——补全句子
(4)(2023·全国甲写作)孔子的教义强调道德价值观、尊重长辈和社会和谐的重要性。
Confucius' teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders , and social harmony.
写作任务——Write about your festival experience
本单元的写作任务是写一篇记叙文,介绍自己的一次节日经历。写作时需要特别注意以下几点:
1.要以第一人称写;
2.所记叙的事情常发生在过去,所以常用过去时态。如果是描写景色、再现对话引语、议论某事或畅想未来等,可以使用现在时或将来时;
3.一般按照时间顺序或事情发展的经过来写;
4.除了叙事以外,大多还包含作者的心理活动、情绪、感受等。
跟课文学写作范式
(一)课文范式提炼
(二)写作要点指津
完整的记叙文应介绍清楚某一事件的经过,理清事情的五个“w(when, where, who, why和what)”和一个“h(how)”,要条理清楚,内容全面。
其基本写作步骤为:
1.开头段
交代清楚事件的主要内容:人物、时间、地点、背景等。
2.主体段
描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果。
3.结尾段
呼应主题,表达感想、愿望等。
跟课文学亮点表达
阅读文章第一自然段,习得以下素养
★学亮点表达
本段第二句中的fall用词精妙,形象、生动地点明蒙古族传统节日那达慕大会来临的日期。
[微写作1]——补全句子
(1)当夜幕降临,许多孩子装扮成吓人的样子,然后去邻居家索要糖果。
When darkness falls , many children to look scary and then go to their neighbors' home to ask for sweets.
(2)重阳节是在农历九月初九。
The Double Ninth Festival falls on the ninth day of the ninth month.
★学逻辑衔接
本段属于日记的开篇。开头用I experienced…引出文章的主题是参加那达慕大会,接着用The festival falls…介绍了大会举办的时间、意义以及包含的项目,然后用so exciting to watch引出下文。
阅读文章第二至四自然段,习得以下素养
★学亮点表达
1.第二段第三句运用了排比句Some…some…and others…,不仅使表达具有韵律感,还能增强气势。
[微写作2]——补全句子
(1)生活在回忆中,在对过去美好时光的遗憾中,或对逝去朋友的悲伤中,都无济于事。一个人的思想必须指向未来,指向那些可以有所作为的事情。
It does not do to live in memories , in regrets for the good old days, or in sadness about friends who are dead.One's thoughts must be directed to the future, and to things about which there is something to be done.
(2)谁知道你会创造出什么样美丽的艺术品,你会取得什么样的医学进步或你将开创出什么惊人的技术!
Who knows what beautiful works of art you will create, what medical advances you will make or what amazing technologies you will develop!
2.第四段第二句用感叹句表达了作者强烈的惊讶之情;段尾则用省略号表达了作者想要表达的很多,言犹未尽。
[微写作3]——补全句子
(1)光阴似箭!
How time flies!
(2)走在大街上,享受节日的气氛是多么有趣啊!
What great fun it was along the streets, enjoying the festive !
(3)它是一件多么好的礼物啊!
What a nice present it is!
★学写作手法
在这三段中作者分别描写了那达慕大会的节日习俗与开幕仪式、蒙古式摔跤以及赛马活动等,运用了时间顺序描写的方法,使用了On the first day…After the opening ceremony…After singing some songs…等使层次清晰,逻辑鲜明,语意连贯。
阅读文章第五自然段,习得以下素养
本段准确使用了副词finally, really, totally等写出了作者的节日感受,并表达了作者对故地重游的期待。特别是感叹句I can't wait!形象表达了作者迫不及待的心情。
[微写作4]——补全句子
(1)这一刻我在童年时梦想过很多次。但当你最终做到的时候,它和你想象的完全不同。
I had dreamed of this many times in my childhood.But when you finally make it, it's totally different from what you had imagined.
(2)他做的面人儿非常漂亮,我们都迫不及待地想亲自试一试。
The dough figurine that he made was so beautiful that we couldn't wait to have a try ourselves .
第一段:开门见山,提出要介绍的节日
1.Glad to hear from you. Now I'm writing to tell you something about the Qingming Festival.
很高兴收到你的来信。现在我写信告诉你一些关于清明节的事情。
2.I'm glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.
听说你对中国的传统节日感兴趣,我很高兴。
3.I am writing to share with you how the Spring Festival is celebrated in China.我写信是为了和你分享中国是如何庆祝春节的。
第二段:紧扣要点,详细介绍节日
4.Of all the traditional Chinese festivals, the Spring Festival is one of the most traditional festivals.在所有的中国传统节日中,春节是最传统的节日之一。
5.It usually falls in late January or early February and people celebrate the festival in different ways.它通常在一月下旬或二月初,人们以不同的方式庆祝这一节日。
6.On the New Year's Eve, all the family members will get together and have a feast.
在除夕之夜,所有的家庭成员都会聚在一起吃年夜饭。
7.On the first day of New Year, people will visit their relatives and friends and express their best wishes for the new year.在新年第一天,人们会走亲访友,表达他们对新年最美好的祝福。
8.In my opinion, the festival is worth experiencing.
在我看来,这个节日是值得体验的。
第三段:发出邀请或希望对方能通过介绍,继而更好地理解本地文化
9.I do hope you can have a chance to be with us to celebrate the Spring Festival.
我真的希望你能有机会和我们一起过春节。
10.I sincerely invite you to come and spend the Spring Festival with us.
我真诚地邀请你来和我们一起过春节。
11.I hope my introduction can help you have a better understanding of Chinese culture.我希望我的介绍能帮助你更好地了解中国文化。
【写作要求】
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华,根据中国春节的传统,2025年蛇年春节前要装饰房间,根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文。内容如下:
1.你跟祖母学做剪纸;
2.装饰房间;
3.表达你对民间剪纸文化的观点。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:剪纸paper-cut 精美的delicate
On January 20th, I went to visit my grandma. _____________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【四步成文】
第一步:审题谋篇
第二步:由词扩句
1.随着新年的来临,当我进入房间时,我发现她正忙着做剪纸。
When I entered the room, I found her busy making paper-cuts as the Chinese New Year was coming.
2.被她的精美的作品所吸引,我迫不及待地想试一试。
Attracted by her delicate works, I couldn't wait to have a try.
3.在她的耐心指导下,我学会了做剪纸的基本步骤和技巧。
With her patient instruction, I learnt the basic steps and skills of making paper-cuts.
4.我把一些剪纸送给了我们的邻居。
I gave some of our paper-cuts to our neighbors.
5.他们很高兴收到它们。
They were very happy to receive them.
第三步:词汇/句式升级
1.用现在分词作状语和with的复合结构及词汇升级改写第二步中的句1。
Entering the room, I found her busy making paper-cuts with the Chinese New Year approaching.
2.用定语从句合并第二步中的句4、5。
I gave some of our paper-cuts to our neighbors, who were very happy to receive them.
第四步:连句成篇
One possible version:
On January 20th, I went to visit my grandma.Entering the room, I found her busy making paper-cuts with the Chinese New Year approaching.
Attracted by her delicate works, I couldn't wait to have a try. With her patient instruction, I learnt the basic steps and skills of making paper-cuts.Soon my creations were “born”. Then eagerly, we put them up.With different designs on the windows, such as a rabbit and the Chinese character Fu, our room was filled with a festival atmosphere.Besides, I gave some of our paper-cuts to our neighbors, who were very happy to receive them. I felt proud when seeing their smiles.
Paper-cutting is a precious treasure of China so it should be passed on.
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Linda发来一封电邮,询问有关中国的情人节——七夕的相关情况。请你用英语给她回复一封邮件。内容包括:
1.七夕的时间;
2.牛郎织女的传说;
3.节日的风俗习惯。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I am glad to know that you are interested in the Qixi Festival.It falls on July 7th in Chinese lunar calendar. According to the legend, Niulang married Zhinv, a pretty weaver girl who came secretly from heaven. They got married and had their children.However, Zhinv was forced to go back to heaven later. Therefore, they were just allowed to meet on July 7th once a year. Nowadays, this festival is for lovers to celebrate their happy marriage or express their love for each other by giving nice presents and having a romantic dinner.
Yours,
Li Hua
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
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