读后续写--忠诚小狗Bubbles：绝境中的生命守护者 讲义-海南省东方市东方中学2023-2024学年高一下学期第一次月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a day just like every other day. I woke up early in the morning and went to run on Mount Gracious with my dog, Bubbles. As I ran up the mountain, with my dog following close behind, I felt energetic and refreshed. Running in a natural environment never failed to make me feel alive. When I reached the top, I drank some water and enjoyed the beautiful sunrise. This scene always took my breath away, no matter how many times I had seen it. Having rested enough, Bubbles and I made our way back down the mountain. As we were running downhill, I saw an unfamiliar path and decided to explore the area. The path was full of rocks. It was not easy to walk. Suddenly, I slipped on a muddy patch, rolling down five meters before I managed to grab hold of an exposed root of a huge tree. I was safe for now. However, I was seriously injured. My knees were badly hurt. My right foot was also dislocated (脱臼). I knew for sure I would be unable to make my way up or down the mountain without help. I called out to Bubbles and he barked loudly from above. It seemed like he understood that I needed help. He looked down at me pitifully before disappearing from sight. As night fell, panic (恐慌) set in and scary thoughts went through my mind. There were many things that I had got to do. I couldn't die! This would not have happened if I had stuck to my usual path. I was losing hope when I heard barking. It was Bubbles. I rubbed my eyes as I struggled to keep awake. But there was silence. Who could it be? Was I hallucinating (产生幻觉)? Then I heard some voices and more barking. Yes. Help was near, I knew. I could count on my dog to get help. 注意： 1．续写词数应150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Soon, I heard my parents calling my name. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Later, my parents told me what Bubbles had done to get help. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 文章讲述了 “我” 像往常一样带着狗狗 Bubbles 去 Mount Gracious 跑步，在到达山顶休息后下山途中，因探索一条陌生小路而滑倒受伤，无法自行上下山。狗狗 Bubbles 似乎明白 “我” 需要帮助，在 “我” 绝望之时，Bubbles 带着人声和狗叫声再次出现，给 “我” 带来了希望。 故事山分析 1. 开端：“我” 清晨带 Bubbles 去 Mount Gracious 跑步，到达山顶欣赏日出后准备下山。 2. 发展：下山时 “我” 选择探索陌生小路，结果滑倒受伤，无法行动，Bubbles 似乎明白情况，随后离开。 3. 高潮：夜晚降临，“我” 陷入恐慌，在绝望之际听到 Bubbles 的叫声以及其他声音，意识到救援将至。 4. 结局：救援人员赶到救了 “我”，后续揭示 Bubbles 为获得帮助所做的努力。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应 1. “我” 与 Bubbles 关系亲密：续写中 Bubbles 积极寻找帮助，体现它对 “我” 的关心，回应了亲密关系。 2. Bubbles 离开去寻求帮助：后续 Bubbles 带着救援人员回来，证实它成功找到了帮助。 3. “我” 受伤严重无法自行下山：救援人员的到来解决了 “我” 的困境，对应受伤无法行动的伏笔。 4. “我” 后悔未走寻常路：可以在获救后反思，回应此伏笔，体现教训。 5. 夜晚降临 “我” 陷入恐慌：救援人员到来后恐慌解除，前后呼应。 续写要点 1. 第一段：着重描写父母和救援人员到来后的场景，如父母的焦急神情、救援人员的救助过程，“我” 的心理变化，从绝望到安心。 2. 第二段：详细讲述 Bubbles 为获得帮助所采取的行动，比如它如何回到家，怎样引起父母注意，是否有引导救援人员前往 “我” 所在位置等，展现狗狗的聪明与忠诚。 情感线 1. 受伤后 “我” 从起初的冷静到夜晚的恐慌、绝望，在听到 Bubbles 叫声及救援声音时重燃希望，获救时感到安心与感激。 2. 父母从发现 “我” 未归的焦急，到看到 “我” 受伤的心疼，最后是对 Bubbles 的欣慰与赞赏。 故事线 1. 父母和救援人员到达：父母呼喊 “我”，救援人员展开救援，将 “我” 带下山。 2. 讲述 Bubbles 的行动：Bubbles 跑回家，通过各种行为引起父母注意，带领救援人员找到 “我”。 3. “我” 的获救过程：描述 “我” 被救助时的状态，被抬下山后的后续处理。 4. 家人的反应：父母看到 “我” 后的情绪表现，对 Bubbles 的夸赞。 5. “我” 的反思：“我” 对此次冒险的反思，意识到不能随意偏离常规路线。 6. 对 Bubbles 的感谢：“我” 和家人对 Bubbles 的感激，以及 Bubbles 与 “我” 关系的进一步升华。 主旨升华句 1. In times of crisis, the loyalty and intelligence of our animal companions can be a true lifesaver, reminding us of the deep bonds we share. 在危机时刻，我们动物伙伴的忠诚和智慧真的能拯救生命，让我们想起彼此间深厚的情感纽带。 2. This experience taught me that even in the face of unexpected danger, hope can emerge from the most unlikely sources, like the unwavering devotion of a beloved pet. 这次经历让我明白，即使面对意外危险，希望也能从最意想不到的地方出现，比如心爱宠物坚定不移的付出。 3. Our pets are not just animals; they are part of our family, capable of heroic acts when we are in need, strengthening the connection between humans and animals. 我们的宠物不仅仅是动物，它们是我们家庭的一部分，在我们需要时能够做出英勇之举，强化了人类与动物之间的联系。 4. Through Bubbles' heroic efforts, I learned the value of trust and the remarkable abilities of those we hold dear, and I will forever be grateful for his loyalty. 通过 Bubbles 的英勇努力，我明白了信任的价值以及我们所珍视之人的非凡能力，我将永远感激它的忠诚。 5. This incident serves as a powerful reminder that nature can be both beautiful and treacherous, and the love and help from our furry friends can guide us through the darkest of times. 这件事有力地提醒我们，大自然既美丽又危险，而来自我们毛茸茸朋友的爱与帮助能引领我们度过最黑暗的时刻。 写作示范 第一篇 Soon, I heard my parents calling my name. Their voices were filled with anxiety. I tried my best to shout back, my voice hoarse from hours of waiting. Moments later, I saw the flashlights of the rescue team. My parents rushed towards me, their faces full of worry. The rescuers carefully examined my injuries and gently placed me on a stretcher. As they carried me down the mountain, I felt a sense of relief wash over me. All the fear and panic I had been feeling disappeared, replaced by gratitude for my rescuers and my dear dog. Later, my parents told me what Bubbles had done to get help. He had run all the way back home, his tongue hanging out. When he reached the front door, he barked non - stop, scratching at the door frantically. My parents, alarmed by his unusual behavior, opened the door. Bubbles immediately grabbed my running shoes in his mouth and ran out, looking back as if urging them to follow. He led them straight to the park rangers' office. With the help of the rangers, they were able to find me. I was deeply touched by Bubbles' actions. From that day on, our bond grew even stronger. 第二篇 Soon, I heard my parents calling my name. Tears welled up in my eyes as I shouted for them. The rescue team quickly located me. My mother rushed to my side, crying with relief, while my father thanked the rescuers. The rescuers carefully bandaged my wounds on the spot and then slowly carried me down the mountain. I was so grateful to be safe and in the arms of my family. Later, my parents told me what Bubbles had done to get help. He sprinted home as fast as his legs could carry him. Once home, he jumped on my parents' bed, barking loudly and tugging at the covers. When they woke up, confused, Bubbles ran to the door, barking insistently. My parents, realizing something was wrong, followed him. He led them to a neighbor who often went hiking and knew the mountain well. The neighbor called the park rangers, and together they set out to find me. I was amazed at how intelligent and determined Bubbles was. This experience made me cherish him even more. 【答案】One possible version: Soon, I heard my parents calling my name. So I began calling back. A moment later, I saw the light of a flashlight. Following my voice and with Bubbles leading the way, my parents finally found me. They looked nervous and worried. After learning I was badly hurt, my parents quickly climbed down to me. They examined my cuts and my foot and decided that I had better not walk. Then, my father carried me on his back, down the mountain and to the nearest clinic, where a doctor was waiting for us. Later, my parents told me what Bubbles had done to get help. He quickly ran home and waited until my parents came home from work. He barked loudly at my parents. They were confused and thought the dog might be hungry at first. So they gave Bubbles some food, but he didn't stop harking. Suddenly, they realized I hadn't come back home with Bubbles as usual and that I must have been in trouble. At that moment, Bubbles ran out and my parents followed him closely. Bubbles remembered the way and led my parents to the spot. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$