读后续写--万圣节：从落叶到创意服装的奇妙旅程 讲义-2025届四川省自贡市蜀光中学高三下学期二模英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Every October, my neighborhood has a Halloween costume contest. And every October, my neighbor Ollie and I race to the announcement board in the park to find out the theme. One year, the theme was “Dress up as your favorite book character.” Another year, it was “Be something scary.” But this year, the theme was kind of, well, themeless. “Be creative?” I said, reading the announcement board. “That’s not really a theme, is it?” Ollie hopped off his skateboard s to get a closer look. “You’re right,” he agreed. “I think my favorite theme ever was ‘Superheroes’. I loved my Super-Force Flying Eagles costume so much, I kept that thing hanging in my close t for years!” “My favorite theme was ‘Farm Animals’.” I giggled. “Remember how you insisted on being a Stegosaurus (剑龙)?” “When I was five, dinosaurs were my world.” Ollie laughed. “I would have loved to see a Stegosaurus out grazing with the cows.” “Now that’s the creative spirit we need for this challenge!” I said. “Maybe, since we don’t know exactly what we want to be yet, we should start by choosing some cool costume-making materials. ” “I’ve got it!” Ollie said, scooping up a bunch of fallen leaves. “Really?” I said. “You’re going to make an entire costume out of leaves?” “Why not?” he said, scooping up some more. “They’re totally free, and I can guarantee, no one will be a tree as great as me.” “Don’t you mean, a tree as great as we?” I grinned. “Um, first, that grammar doesn’t sound right,” said Ollie. “And second, no way! Think of your own creative ideas.” “Aw, come on,” I said. “You should be flattered that I like your idea so much. Plus, I just thought of the perfect way to make branches.” Finally, Ollie said OK. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: We ended up filling two jumbo bags with different kinds of leaves. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Then the big moment came. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意： 每年十月，邻里会举办万圣节服装比赛。主人公和邻居 Ollie 会去公园公告板查看主题。过去主题丰富，如 “扮成最喜欢的书中角色”“扮成恐怖的东西” 等。今年主题是 “发挥创意”，比较宽泛。Ollie 提出用落叶制作服装，主人公起初质疑，后觉得可行并想加入，最终 Ollie 同意。两人决定收集不同种类的落叶，准备制作独特的服装参加比赛，在这个过程中展现出对比赛的期待和积极探索创意的热情。​ 故事山分析​ 开头：介绍每年邻里举办万圣节服装比赛，引出今年比赛主题 “发挥创意”，这是故事的背景铺垫，为后续情节发展提供舞台。​ 中间：主人公和 Ollie 回忆过去比赛主题，Ollie 提出用落叶制作服装，主人公从质疑到请求加入，最终两人达成一致，开始收集落叶，这是故事的发展阶段，推动情节向前发展，展现两人的互动和对比赛的准备。​ 结尾（续写前）：两人装满两大袋不同种类的落叶，留下悬念，引出续写部分，即他们如何用这些落叶制作服装以及比赛的情况。​ 伏笔以及在续写中的回应​ . 伏笔 1：每年都有不同主题的万圣节服装比赛。续写中可回应，因为之前主题明确，今年 “发挥创意” 的主题让他们格外兴奋，有机会尝试全新的创意，与以往比赛形成对比，突出今年比赛的特别。​ . 伏笔 2：Ollie 提出用落叶制作服装。续写中可展现落叶在制作过程中的作用，比如不同形状、颜色的落叶如何被巧妙组合，像宽大的枫叶做树冠，细长的柳叶做树枝，回应 Ollie 的创意来源。​ . 伏笔 3：主人公质疑 Ollie 用落叶制作服装的想法后又请求加入。续写中可体现两人在制作过程中的合作，主人公提出的制作树枝的想法得以实施，两人互相配合，共同完善服装，回应主人公加入的情节。​ . 伏笔 4：提到过去主题下两人的有趣装扮。续写中可让其他参赛者受过去主题启发，有不同风格的创意装扮，与他们的落叶服装形成多样的比赛场景，丰富故事内容。​ . 伏笔 5：强调今年主题是 “发挥创意”。续写中他们的落叶服装充分展现创意，在比赛中获得认可，体现主题对参赛者的影响，以及创意在比赛中的重要性。​ 续写要点（两段）​ . 第一段：详细描述两人收集完落叶回家后，开始制作服装的过程。描述落叶的分类，如按颜色、形状分类。展示他们如何将落叶固定在服装框架上，用什么材料固定，在制作过程中遇到的小问题，如落叶易碎，以及如何解决这些问题。两人还可以互相交流创意，完善服装细节，比如给 “树” 加上用藤蔓做的 “果实”。 . 第二段：描述比赛当天的场景。两人穿着精心制作的落叶服装来到比赛现场，引起其他参赛者和观众的注意。可以描述他们的服装在行走时，落叶沙沙作响的效果。评委对他们的服装进行点评，突出创意和细节。最后公布比赛结果，无论是否获奖，两人都因为这次独特的经历而开心，强调创意带来的乐趣。​ 情感线​ 从一开始对今年无主题比赛的疑惑，到 Ollie 提出落叶服装创意时主人公的质疑，再到主人公请求加入后两人达成一致的兴奋，在制作服装过程中，面对困难时的坚持，以及比赛当天的期待和紧张，到最后无论结果如何都能享受创意带来的快乐，情感经历了从疑惑到兴奋，再到紧张期待，最后回归快乐的过程，突出创意带来的积极情感体验。​ 故事线​ 邻里每年举办万圣节服装比赛，今年主题是 “发挥创意”。​ 主人公和 Ollie 回忆过去比赛主题，Ollie 提出用落叶制作服装。​ 主人公从质疑到请求加入，两人装满两大袋落叶。​ 两人回家用落叶制作服装，过程中解决各种问题。​ 比赛当天，两人穿着落叶服装参赛，引起关注。​ 评委点评，公布结果，两人享受创意带来的乐趣。​ 主旨升华句​ . This Halloween costume contest taught us that true creativity lies in turning ordinary things into extraordinary masterpieces, just like our leaf - made costumes.​ . Through the process of creating our costumes, we realized that with an open mind and a bit of imagination, the possibilities are endless, no matter the theme.​ . The experience of this contest showed us that the joy of participation comes not only from winning but from the journey of exploring our creativity and having fun along the way.​ . Our leaf - costume adventure in the contest proved that even when faced with an ambiguous theme, we can still shine by expressing our unique ideas and working together.​ . This Halloween event was a reminder that creativity is the key to making any occasion special, and it has the power to bring joy and a sense of achievement, just like our amazing leaf costumes.​ 写作示范​ 示范一​ Paragraph 1​ We ended up filling two jumbo bags with different kinds of leaves. Once we got home, we spread the leaves out on the floor. Ollie sorted them by color, while I grouped them by shape. We decided to use old T - shirts as the base for our costumes. To attach the leaves, we used glue and thin wires. However, the leaves were quite fragile, and many of them broke during the process. But we didn't give up. We carefully glued the smaller pieces back together and added some artificial vines for decoration. We spent hours crafting, chatting and laughing, and our costumes gradually took shape.​ Paragraph 2​ Then the big moment came. On the day of the contest, we proudly wore our leaf - made costumes to the park. As we walked, the leaves rustled softly, attracting everyone's attention. People were amazed by our creativity. The judges examined our costumes closely, praising the details and the overall concept. Finally, the results were announced. Although we didn't win the top prize, we were given a special mention for our unique and creative entry. We were overjoyed because we had a great time creating our costumes, and that was what mattered most.​ 示范二​ Paragraph 1​ We ended up filling two jumbo bags with different kinds of leaves. Back at my place, we set up a makeshift workshop. Ollie suggested using staples to fasten the larger leaves, which worked much better than glue for some parts. I took charge of designing the branches. I twisted some thin twigs together and covered them with long, thin leaves. We also painted some of the leaves with glitter to add a special touch. While working, we brainstormed ideas on how to make our “trees” stand out. We added acorn - shaped balls made from clay to represent fruits. The whole process was full of trial and error, but our enthusiasm never waned.​ Paragraph 2​ Then the big moment came. At the contest, our leaf - costumes were a hit. The glitter on the leaves sparkled in the sunlight, making our “trees” look magical. Other contestants had equally creative ideas, inspired by past themes or their own imaginations. The judges were impressed by the variety of entries. When the results were announced, we were thrilled to find out that we won the second prize. Holding our certificates, we felt a great sense of accomplishment. This contest not only allowed us to show our creativity but also taught us the value of teamwork and perseverance.​ 【答案】 We ended up filling two jumbo bags with different kinds of leaves. Oak, maple, and sycamore leaves crunched under our feet as we collected them from the park. Ollie was right: there was something thrilling about the idea of creating a costume out of nature’s own supplies. As we walked back to Ollie’s house, our bags rustling with each step. I couldn’t help but feel a surge of excitement for the upcoming contest. This was going to be the most unconventional costume we’d ever made. Then the big moment came. On the night of the contest, the park was transformed into a colorful spectacle of creativity. As we arrived, we saw pirates, princesses, and even a giant jellyfish made entirely of balloons. Amidst the crowd, Ollie and I stood proudly in our leafy attire. When it was our turn to present our costume, we confidently strutted onto the makeshift stage. To our surprise, the crowd erupted into applause. Our innovative choice paid off. As we walked home that night, adorned in our makeshift tree costumes, we couldn’t stop smiling. Sometimes, the best themes are the ones you create yourself. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$