读后续写 龙卷风紧急情况故事续写 讲义 2025届福建省厦门市高三下学期第二次质检英语试题

读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 This morning, I asked Mom to take me to the pool. But she reminded me I’d watch kids for her as she got a job interview at the radio station. Still, I asked, “Couldn’t Julie watch them instead?” “She can help, Jess, but she’s only ten. I’ll feel better with a fifteen-year-old in charge, honey.” Mom gave me a hug and off she went. So there I was, stuck watching my five year-old sister Lyssa and three-year-old brother Dougie. I usually don’t mind watching the kids, but the problem was our little rented trailer house (拖车房屋). It’s like living in a barbecue cooker in hot days. Well, as is said, “What is, is.” and I decided to make the best of it. We moved out into the front yard and I filled a paddling pool for the kids. I noticed that the sky looked a little strange—greenish-yellow, with gray clouds rising for miles—but I didn’t think anything of it. As kids jumped in the pool, I settled down to read my magazine. I put on headphones and turned the volume up loud enough to block out their noise. Before long I got lost in a cool story. I was almost at the end when Julie came over to me, dropping water on my article. I took my headphones off, “Hey, what’s wrong with you?” She pointed upwards. That’s when I saw the sky and about fell off my chair. Not only had the clouds moved toward us, they were swirling (打旋). I hadn’t realized how much the wind had picked up. A huge, gray-black funnel (漏斗) snaked down from the sky to the ground—a real, live tornado! And it headed our way at a high speed! Though I had learned about tornado safety, at that moment, the only thing I could remember was that a tornado develops fast and that trailer houses are the worst place to take shelter. I tried hard to remember other safety tips. Get low. Yeah. If you’re caught outside, find the lowest spot. Scanning around, my eye stopped on a line of bushes. 注意： (1) 续写词数应为 150 个左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 There was a ditch (沟渠) there for shelter, a hundred yards off. But in a couple of minutes, the tornado was over. 龙卷风紧急情况故事续写 续写要点（两段）​ 第一段续写要点：​ 行动细节：着重描述主角决定带弟弟妹妹前往沟渠避险时的果断行动。详细刻画主角抱起 Dougie 和拉住 Lyssa 的动作，展现其急切与坚定。例如，“我迅速蹲下，用有力的手臂一把将 Dougie 揽入怀中，同时紧紧攥住 Lyssa 的小手，那力度仿佛要将她与自己融为一体。”​ 环境描写：深入描绘前往沟渠途中恶劣的环境。狂风呼啸，可描述为 “狂风如同一头暴怒的野兽，发出震耳欲聋的嘶吼，仿佛要将整个世界掀翻。” 四处飞溅的杂物，如 “碎木板、塑料片像暗器一般在空中横飞，随时可能击中我们。” 主角在艰难前行中保持平衡的挣扎，“每迈出一步，我都感觉像是在狂风中逆水行舟，身体被风肆意拉扯，脚下的土地似乎也变得松软不稳。”​ 到达后的状态：细致描写到达沟渠后众人的状态。大家紧紧挤在一起，“我们如同受惊的小鸟，紧紧依偎在沟渠底部，彼此的身体因恐惧而微微颤抖。” 双手护住头部的动作，“我用颤抖的双手死死护住弟弟妹妹的头部，仿佛这样就能为他们筑起一道坚不可摧的防线。” 对龙卷风恐怖声响的进一步渲染，“龙卷风的咆哮声震得耳膜生疼，仿佛整个世界都在这股强大的力量下颤抖。”​ 第二段续写要点：​ 龙卷风过后的场景：生动描绘龙卷风过后的灾难景象。拖车房屋的严重损坏，“拖车房屋已面目全非，原本的结构支离破碎，铁皮被撕开，像一片片破败的树叶散落在四周。” 周围环境的狼藉，“院子里一片狼藉，树木被连根拔起，花草被蹂躏得不成样子，到处都是残骸和尘土。”​ 人物情感：细腻展现主角的情感变化。从紧张恐惧到劫后余生的庆幸，“我心中紧绷的那根弦终于松开，一种劫后余生的庆幸涌上心头，眼眶不自觉地湿润了。” 对妈妈的担忧，“我突然想起还在外面的妈妈，心中一阵揪紧，默默祈祷她能平安无事。” 与弟弟妹妹的互动，“我紧紧拥抱着弟弟妹妹，感受着他们的体温，仿佛这样才能确认我们真的都还活着。”​ 后续行动：清晰描述主角和弟弟妹妹回到房屋残骸等待妈妈的行动。他们的脚步沉重而缓慢，“我们迈着沉重的步伐，小心翼翼地穿过这片废墟，每一步都踩在破碎的梦想和未知的担忧上。” 回到房屋残骸后的状态，“我们坐在废墟旁，眼睛紧紧盯着路口，期待着妈妈的身影出现，心中充满了对未来的忐忑。”​ 情感线​ 第一段情感线：主角在发现龙卷风逼近时，瞬间从悠闲转变为极度的紧张与恐惧。意识到危险后，果断决定带弟弟妹妹避险，此时的情感是坚定与决绝的。在前往沟渠的艰难过程中，恐惧不断加剧，同时夹杂着对弟弟妹妹安全的担忧，每一步都充满了挣扎。到达沟渠后，恐惧达到顶点，在龙卷风的肆虐下，只能无助地祈祷。​ 第二段情感线：龙卷风结束后，主角首先感受到的是劫后余生的庆幸和喜悦，紧绷的神经终于得以放松。看到周围的灾难景象，对家园的惋惜之情油然而生。紧接着，对妈妈的担忧占据了心头，开始为妈妈的安危而焦虑。与弟弟妹妹相拥时，又流露出对亲情的珍视和对未来的期许。​ 故事线​ 主角原本满心期待去泳池，却因妈妈要面试而不得不留在家中照看五岁的妹妹 Lyssa 和三岁的弟弟 Dougie。​ 孩子们在院子里的充气泳池玩耍，主角戴着耳机看杂志，此时天空出现异样，绿色泛黄且乌云密布，但主角并未在意。​ Julie 提醒主角，主角发现天空中出现龙卷风，且正高速朝他们袭来。主角想起龙卷风安全知识，意识到拖车房屋危险，决定带弟弟妹妹前往一百码外的沟渠躲避。​ 主角抱着 Dougie，拉着 Lyssa，在狂风和四处飞溅的杂物中艰难地向沟渠跑去，最终到达沟渠，众人紧紧挤在一起，躲避龙卷风。​ 几分钟后，龙卷风结束，主角和弟弟妹妹看到周围一片狼藉，拖车房屋严重受损，主角庆幸大家都平安无事，同时开始担心妈妈的安危。​ 主角带着弟弟妹妹回到房屋残骸处，坐在废墟旁，焦急地等待妈妈归来，共同经历这场灾难后，更加珍惜彼此。​ 主旨升华句​ This harrowing experience vividly demonstrates that in the face of nature's fury, human courage and the power of family bonds can overcome even the most terrifying of circumstances.（这次痛苦的经历生动地表明，在大自然的愤怒面前，人类的勇气和亲情的力量能够战胜最可怕的困境。）​ Through this ordeal, we learn that when disaster strikes, it is our sense of responsibility and love for our loved ones that drive us to act bravely and protect those in our care.（通过这次磨难，我们了解到当灾难降临时，是我们对亲人的责任感和爱驱使我们勇敢行动，保护我们所关心的人。）​ The story of this tornado encounter serves as a powerful reminder that life can change in an instant, and it is in these moments of crisis that our true strength and resilience are revealed.（这次龙卷风遭遇的故事有力地提醒我们，生活可能在瞬间发生改变，而正是在这些危机时刻，我们真正的力量和韧性才得以展现。）​ This event teaches us that even in the darkest of times, hope and the will to survive can guide us through the storm, and that family is the anchor that keeps us grounded.（这次事件告诉我们，即使在最黑暗的时刻，希望和求生的意志能够引导我们度过风暴，而家庭是让我们坚守的依靠。）​ The experience of facing the tornado together highlights the importance of being prepared, staying calm, and relying on one another in times of adversity, as these qualities can make all the difference between despair and hope.（共同面对龙卷风的经历凸显了在逆境中做好准备、保持冷静以及相互依靠的重要性，因为这些品质能够在绝望与希望之间产生巨大的差异。）​ 写作示范一​ 第一段续写​ There was a ditch there for shelter, a hundred yards off. Panic surged through me, but I knew I had to act fast. I scooped Dougie up into my arms, his small body trembling with fear. Grabbing Lyssa's hand firmly, I shouted at the top of my lungs, “Julie, run!” The wind was a fierce, howling monster, pushing us back with every step. Debris whipped past us, narrowly missing our heads. I stumbled several times, but I refused to let go. My heart pounded in my chest as if it would burst. Finally, we reached the ditch. We huddled together, the cold, damp earth beneath us. The deafening roar of the tornado filled our ears, and I closed my eyes, praying with all my might for our safety.​ 第二段续写​ But in a couple of minutes, the tornado was over. Slowly, I opened my eyes. The world around us was unrecognizable. The trailer house was a mangled mess, parts of it strewn across the yard. I looked at my siblings, their faces pale but alive. A wave of relief washed over me, and I hugged them tightly, tears streaming down my face. Then, I thought of Mom. I hoped she was safe at the radio station. We made our way back to the ruins of our home, our steps heavy. As we sat on the broken porch, waiting for Mom, I realized how precious life was and how strong our family bond was.​ 写作示范二​ 第一段续写​ There was a ditch there for shelter, a hundred yards off. Without a second thought, I snatched Dougie up, his weight heavy in my arms. Lyssa clung to my hand, her tiny fingers digging into my skin. “Julie, follow me!” I screamed against the wind. The air was filled with flying objects, and the wind seemed to be trying to pry us apart. I gritted my teeth and pushed forward, my legs feeling like lead. The noise was overwhelming, making it hard to think. When we finally reached the ditch, we crammed ourselves in, covering our heads. The tornado's roar was like a thousand explosions, and I could feel the ground shaking beneath us. I held my siblings close, praying that this nightmare would end.​ 第二段续写​ But in a couple of minutes, the tornado was over. We lifted our heads, blinking in the sudden silence. The once - familiar yard was now a disaster area. The trailer house was in shambles, its walls collapsed and its roof gone. I was overcome with gratitude that we were all okay. I hugged Lyssa and Dougie, feeling their hearts beating against mine. Thoughts of Mom filled my mind, and I worried about her. We walked back to what was left of our house, the silence broken only by the crunching of debris under our feet. As we waited for Mom, I knew that our family would get through this, no matter what.​ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$