专题08 材料作文之个人成长与感悟类-【高分·技能】2025年中考英语写作常考题型全面突破

08 材料作文之个人成长与感悟类 近三年考情分析 年份 地区 话题 命题形式 2024年 四川广元 分享你的美好经历 材料作文 山东聊城 Take care of yourself 材料作文 内蒙古通辽 谈谈如何做新时代的好学生 材料作文 吉林 向他人寻求帮助 材料作文 2023年 浙江湖州 谈谈你对幸福的理解 材料作文 辽宁朝阳 Labor makes me a better person 材料作文 青海西宁 “Doing Chores Makes Me Better” 材料作文 2022年 山东东营 “I made it” 材料作文 江苏淮安 “梦想” 材料作文 浙江衢州 “To Learn, To Grow” 材料作文 写作方法指导 一、题型核心特征 1. 命题三大方向 成长经历类 分享具体经历（如2024广元"美好经历"） 克服困难的故事（如2022东营"I made it"） 学习/生活技能的获得（如2023西宁"做家务"） 品质塑造类 新时代学生标准（如2024通辽） 劳动/责任意识培养（如2023朝阳/西宁） 自我关爱与心理健康（如2024聊城） 价值观感悟类 对幸福的理解（如2023湖州） 梦想与追求（如2022淮安） 学习与成长的关系（如2022衢州） 2. 材料呈现形式 名言警句（如"幸福是奋斗出来的"） 图表数据（如青少年心理健康调查） 故事片段（如某人克服困难的经历） 问题引导（如"What makes you happy?"） 3. 高频能力要求 √ 个人经历的生动描述 √ 成长感悟的深刻提炼 √ 价值观的多角度阐释 √ 语言的情感共鸣力 二、近三年命题规律 1. 话题热度排行 成长经历：占比45%（如2024广元/2022东营） 品质塑造：占比35%（如2024通辽/2023朝阳） 价值观感悟：占比20%（如2023湖州/2022淮安） 2. 考查能力进阶趋势 基础层级：经历复述（2020年前主流） 例：描述一次成功经历 发展层级：感悟提炼（2021-2022重点） 例：从成功中学会坚持 高阶层级：价值观升华（2023后新增） 例：将个人成长与社会责任结合 三、写作策略框架 1. 黄金结构模板 经历分享类 背景引入：It was ______ when I ______ (时间/场景). 过程描述：At first, ______. Then, ______. Finally,... 困难挑战：The biggest challenge was ______. 感悟收获：This experience taught me ______. 品质塑造类 定义阐释：Being a ______ person means ______. 具体做法：In daily life, I ______ (如help others). 成长变化：Before, I ______. Now, I ______. 未来展望：I will continue to ______. 价值观感悟类 观点陈述：True happiness comes from ______. 例证支持：Take ______ as an example... 对比分析：Some people think ______, but I believe... 升华主题：This value not only ______ but also ______. 2. 必备成长词库 品质类：perseverance（坚持）, responsibility（责任）, self-discipline（自律） 情感类：grateful（感恩的）, confident（自信的）, fulfilled（充实的） 行动类：overcome difficulties（克服困难）, step out of comfort zone（走出舒适区） 感悟类：Every cloud has a silver lining（黑暗中总有一线光明） 写作模板 【模板一：成长经历型】 适用题目：分享具体经历（如2024广元/2022东营） 结构示范： 开头： "The most unforgettable experience in my life happened when..." （时间/场景引入：Last summer/During the math competition） 主体： 困难描述：At first, I struggled with... (具体问题：stage fright/weak English) 转折事件：Everything changed when... (关键人物/事件：teacher's advice/team support) 行动过程：I practiced... every day (具体行动：reciting speeches 2 hours daily) 结尾： "Though it was challenging, this journey taught me..." (感悟升华：courage comes from action) 真题应用：2022东营"I made it" 困难：failed piano exam twice 转折：new teacher's fingering techniques 行动：3-month 6am practice 感悟：Success blooms where effort and patience meet. 【模板二：品质培养型】 适用题目：新时代学生标准（如2024通辽） 结构示范： 定义： "A good student in the new era should be..." (三要素：responsible, innovative, compassionate) 实践路径： 学习维度：balance study and hobbies (案例：using apps to manage time) 品德维度：help community (案例：organize recycling program) 创新维度：join robotics club (案例：design AI trash classifier) 展望： "I believe by..., we can..." (社会价值：build better future with youth power) 【模板三：价值观感悟型】 适用题目：幸福理解/梦想（如2023湖州/2022淮安） 结构示范： 破题： "True happiness is not..., but..." (对比定义：having money vs feeling loved) 多维度论证： 个人层面：finishing marathon → pride in persistence 家庭层面：cooking for sick parents → warmth of giving 社会层面：volunteering at animal shelter → joy of responsibility 升华： "Like sunlight through leaves, happiness shines when..." (诗意总结：we create meaning) 【模板四：技能成长型】 适用题目：劳动/家务成长（如2023朝阳/西宁） 结构示范： 技能学习： "Learning to... was harder than I expected" (具体技能：cook/fix bikes) 错误尝试： "My first... ended up..." (幽默自嘲：burnt eggs/loose screws) 掌握过程： 观察学习：watched Grandma's hand movements 反复练习：failed 7 times before success 应用创新：created new recipe/repair toolkit 感悟： "Now I understand... is the mother of skill" (引用谚语：Practice). 【模板五：求助反思型】 适用题目：寻求帮助（如2024吉林） 结构示范： 困境描述： "I used to believe... until..." (错误观念：asking for help = weakness) 转折事件： "The day I..., everything changed" (具体场景：math problem confusion) 求助过程： 心理突破：clenched hands, whispered "Can you help me?" 他人反应：teacher's encouraging smile 解决效果：understood logarithmic curves 认知转变： "Reaching out isn't failure, but..." (新认知：wisdom to gain strength) 【模板六：自我关爱型】 适用题目：心理健康（如2024聊城） 结构示范： 问题呈现： "I was once trapped in..." (压力源：exam anxiety/social fear) 觉醒时刻： "The mirror showed me..." (意象描写：pale face/dark circles) 改变策略： 身体关怀：30-min jogging at sunset 心理调节：5-min daily gratitude journal 社交重建：joined book club 新生宣言： "Now I whisper to myself every morning:..." (正能量口号：I deserve care and joy) 常用表达 写作方法指导 一、开篇表达 背景引入 Looking back at my journey of growth, one experience stands out... The moment I ______, I realized ______. Like a seed breaking through the soil, my understanding of ______ began to grow. 观点陈述 From my perspective, true growth means ______. I firmly believe that ______ is the key to ______. There is no doubt that ______ shapes who we are. 真题例句： "The day I stepped onto the stage, trembling but determined, I understood what courage truly means."（2024广元题） 二、论点展开 分论点引导 First and foremost, ______. Another crucial aspect is ______. What's equally important is ______. 举例论证 Take ______ as a typical example. Let me share my personal experience: ______. A case in point is ______. 数据引用 According to a survey, over 70% of students feel ______ when ______. Statistics show that ______. Recent research has revealed that ______. 对比论证 On the contrary, ______. While some people ______, others argue that ______. Unlike ______, ______. 真题例句： "While many chase after material success, I find true happiness in simple moments like ______."（2023湖州题） 三、过渡衔接 逻辑递进 Moreover, / Furthermore, / Additionally, What's more, ______. Not only that, but also ______. 转折对比 However, / Nevertheless, / On the other hand, Despite this, ______. While it's true that ______, we must not forget ______. 总结过渡 In conclusion, / To sum up, Taking all these factors into account, ______. From what has been discussed above, ______. 四、谚语引用 高频适用谚语 Where there is a will, there is a way. （2024通辽题可用） Practice makes perfect. （2023西宁题适用） No pain, no gain. （2022东营题适用） A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. （成长类通用） 灵活化用 Just as the old saying goes, "______". This reminds me of a famous proverb: "______". The wisdom "______" is especially meaningful for us teenagers. 真题例句： "As the saying goes, 'The best time to plant a tree was 20 years ago; the second best time is now.' This motivated me to start ______."（2022衢州题） 五、结尾升华 建议呼吁 It's high time that we ______. Let's take action now to ______! Why not start with small steps, such as ______? 展望未来 If everyone makes an effort, ______. I believe a brighter future will be achieved if ______. Only in this way can we ______. 情感共鸣 Nothing is more important than ______. What a meaningful/powerful lesson it is! This experience will always remind me that ______. 真题例句： "If we all follow these steps, personal growth will become a joyful journey rather than a heavy burden."（2024聊城题） 六、万能句式 强调结构 It is ______ that makes ______ possible. What really matters is ______. There is no denying that ______. 条件假设 Without ______, we would never ______. Imagine a world where ______. Suppose ______, what would happen? 高级句型 Not until ______ did I realize ______. So + 形容词 + be + 主语 + that... 例：So profound was this lesson that it changed my life. 中考真题精讲 （一）（2024·四川广元·中考真题） “小满”遇上“520”，小得盈满，爱逢其时。近日，校园广播站将举办主题为“Find Beauty, Enjoy Life”的分享活动。请结合以下提示，写篇英文短文，分享你的美好经历，并谈谈你的感受。 写作方面： （1）取得进步时，获得认可的美好； （2）结交朋友后，一起相处的美好； （3）环境改善后，幸福生活的美好。 写作要求： （1）短文须包含以上至少一个方面和你的感受，并举例说明，事例数量不限； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； （3）全文词数80左右。文章开头语已给出，不计入总词数。 Life is never perfect. However, beauty is always found in our life._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二）（2024·山东聊城·中考真题） 假如你校校报英语专栏正在以“Take care of yourself”为题举办征文活动，请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。 内容要点：1. 我们应从哪些方面做起，比如：身体健康（饮食、锻炼等）、生活技能（洗衣，做饭等）、心理健康（心态，抗挫等）…… 2. 具体应该怎么做； 3. 这样做的好处是什么。 要求： 1. 至少从两个方面给出自己的看法； 2. 文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息； 3. 照抄试卷内容不得分。 Word bank physical health身体健康；life skills生活技能；mental health 心理健康 Take care of yourself ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三）（2024·内蒙古通辽·中考真题） 作为新时代的学生，我们应该注重全面发展，努力成为品德高尚、乐学善思、身心健康、兴趣广泛的人。请根据下面提示，以 “How to Be Good Students”为题目，写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何做新时代的好学生。 要求： 1. 语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范。 2. 要包括图表中所给的提示信息并适当发挥。 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。 4. 不少于80词。（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数） How to Be Good Students As students in the new era (时代), we are supposed to develop fully. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四）（2024·吉林·中考真题） 当我们遇到自己无法解决的问题或烦恼时，应该学会积极向他人寻求帮助。请以“Asking for Help”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： （1）积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性； （2）寻求帮助的益处； （3）结合生活经历，简述你或他人寻求帮助的一个事例； （4）提供寻求帮助的方法(至少两个)。 写作要求： （1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； （2）词数90—100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Asking for Help There might be some problems or worries in life._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五）（2023·浙江湖州·中考真题） 幸福可以是偶得礼物时的欣喜，可以是帮助他人时的愉悦……你觉得幸福是什么呢？请你写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿，分享你的经历，谈谈你对幸福的理解。 参考词汇（仅供选择使用）：achieve，share，have fun，be thankful to 注意：（1）词数：80—100；短文首句已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Happiness is everywhere around us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六）（2023·辽宁朝阳·中考真题） 劳动(Labor)能够使人自信并且可以提升自己。教育部发布了《义务教育劳动课程标准(2022年版)》，从2022年秋季开始劳动课正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。在你的生活中，你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能，比如洗衣、做饭、种花、植树、喂养动物甚至田间劳作等。请你结合自身实际，以“Labor makes me a better person”为题，根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文。 要点： (1) 你所擅长的一项劳动技能是什么？ (2) 这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处？ (3) 你还打算学习其他什么劳动技能？ 要求： (1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名。 (2) 语言通顺、意思连贯、书写工整。 (3) 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Labor makes me a better person As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七）（2023·青海西宁·中考真题） 为提高自理能力，适应未来发展，青少年应学会做日常家务，培养必备生活技能，如烹饪、洗衣、种花、打扫、整理等。请以“Doing Chores Makes Me Better” 为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。 要点提示：1.你会做哪些家务？2.你想学哪些家务？为什么？3.对你有何帮助和意义？ Doing Chores Makes Me Better ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八）（2022·山东东营·中考真题） 在我们的生活中，有些事情看起来很难完成，但是通过我们个人的努力或别人的帮助等，我们做到了。请以“I made it”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。 内容包括： 1. 你做到了什么事情； 2. 你是如何做到的； 3. 做完后你的感受或收获。 要求： 1. 短文中不得出现考生真实姓名、学校及其他相关信息。 2. 照抄试卷内容不得分。 I made it ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （九）（2022·江苏淮安·中考真题） 梦想引领人生，奋斗成就未来。“感动中国”年度人物江梦南，幼年失聪，生活、求学之路充满艰辛，但学医救人一直是她的梦想，她通过读唇语，学会“听”和“说”，凭借刻苦学习、不懈努力，成为一名药学博士。请以“梦想”为话题，写一篇英语短文，内容须包括以下所有要点： 1. 描述江梦南的成长经历（练习读唇语，努力学习，克服困难，实现梦想）； 2. 谈谈你的梦想（教师/志愿者……）、原因及如何实现。 参考词汇：读唇语read lips 注意： 1. 词数80~100，已给出部分不计入总词数； 2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate（命运）. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （十）（2022·浙江衢州·中考真题） 每一次经历都是学习的体验，成长的积淀。近期你校英语社团将举办以“在学习中成长”为主题的征文活动。请以“To Learn, To Grow”为题写一篇英语短文。内容包括： 1. 介绍你在文化、艺术、体育等方面的一次活动经历； 2. 谈谈你的感受。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息； 2. 词数：90-110； 3. 可适当发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯。 参考词汇：activity, pleasure, improve, experience 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名校模拟题提升练 1．（2025·吉林松原·一模）人生，分享快乐，快乐加倍；分享痛苦，痛苦减半。请以“Sharing”为题，根据下面的要求写一篇不少于80词的文章。 要求： (1)讲述一个自己的故事；   (2)表达你的感悟；   (3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2025·湖南长沙·模拟预测）无论是 “一日游四季，十里不同天” 的独库公路，还是异乡街头的诱人美食，都是这个世界上美丽的风景。学校英文校刊主编读了第一节 (回答问题) 中独库公路的介绍后，发起了一场主题为 “Love Travel, Love Life” 的征文活动。请结合以下思维导图内容，并作适当拓展，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： (1) 80词左右 (标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)； (2) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Love Travel, Love Life A travel experience●Time ●Place ●Journey ●… Benefits of travel●See wonderful places ●Enjoy delicious food ●… Love Travel, Love Life Travel opens our eyes to the world’s wonders. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·安徽亳州·模拟预测）发明改变了世界，长大后你想当一名发明家吗？作为一名中学生，你应该怎样做？请根据以下提示，以“How to become an inventor”为题写一篇90词左右的英语短文。 提示： 1.努力学习是基础。 2.兴趣是最好的老师。 3.需要创新(creativity)。 4.持之以恒，永不放弃。 How to become an inventor ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2025·湖北武汉·模拟预测）沟通是一种宝贵的技能，它可以帮助我们建立信任、解决难题或实现目标。初中三年，你一定有许多次和朋友、家人或师长沟通的经历。请以“An Unforgettable Talk”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 Who did you talk with? Why did you talk? What did you talk about? How did you like this talk? 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100左右；标题已给出，不计入总词数。 An Unforgettable Talk ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2025·河南·模拟预测）成长不可能一帆风顺，但在成长的道路上，总有一盏明灯，为我们照亮前进的方向。请你以“A light in my life”为题, 根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向我们介绍一下曾经指引你前行的一盏灯。 写作要求： 1.介绍指引你前行的一盏灯是什么； 2.谈谈你的感悟或收获； 3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 4.词数100左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 A light in my life In the journey of growing up, there is always a light to lighten our path. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！3 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 08 材料作文之个人成长与感悟类 近三年考情分析 年份 地区 话题 命题形式 2024年 四川广元 分享你的美好经历 材料作文 山东聊城 Take care of yourself 材料作文 内蒙古通辽 谈谈如何做新时代的好学生 材料作文 吉林 向他人寻求帮助 材料作文 2023年 浙江湖州 谈谈你对幸福的理解 材料作文 辽宁朝阳 Labor makes me a better person 材料作文 青海西宁 “Doing Chores Makes Me Better” 材料作文 2022年 山东东营 “I made it” 材料作文 江苏淮安 “梦想” 材料作文 浙江衢州 “To Learn, To Grow” 材料作文 写作方法指导 一、题型核心特征 1. 命题三大方向 成长经历类 分享具体经历（如2024广元"美好经历"） 克服困难的故事（如2022东营"I made it"） 学习/生活技能的获得（如2023西宁"做家务"） 品质塑造类 新时代学生标准（如2024通辽） 劳动/责任意识培养（如2023朝阳/西宁） 自我关爱与心理健康（如2024聊城） 价值观感悟类 对幸福的理解（如2023湖州） 梦想与追求（如2022淮安） 学习与成长的关系（如2022衢州） 2. 材料呈现形式 名言警句（如"幸福是奋斗出来的"） 图表数据（如青少年心理健康调查） 故事片段（如某人克服困难的经历） 问题引导（如"What makes you happy?"） 3. 高频能力要求 √ 个人经历的生动描述 √ 成长感悟的深刻提炼 √ 价值观的多角度阐释 √ 语言的情感共鸣力 二、近三年命题规律 1. 话题热度排行 成长经历：占比45%（如2024广元/2022东营） 品质塑造：占比35%（如2024通辽/2023朝阳） 价值观感悟：占比20%（如2023湖州/2022淮安） 2. 考查能力进阶趋势 基础层级：经历复述（2020年前主流） 例：描述一次成功经历 发展层级：感悟提炼（2021-2022重点） 例：从成功中学会坚持 高阶层级：价值观升华（2023后新增） 例：将个人成长与社会责任结合 三、写作策略框架 1. 黄金结构模板 经历分享类 背景引入：It was ______ when I ______ (时间/场景). 过程描述：At first, ______. Then, ______. Finally,... 困难挑战：The biggest challenge was ______. 感悟收获：This experience taught me ______. 品质塑造类 定义阐释：Being a ______ person means ______. 具体做法：In daily life, I ______ (如help others). 成长变化：Before, I ______. Now, I ______. 未来展望：I will continue to ______. 价值观感悟类 观点陈述：True happiness comes from ______. 例证支持：Take ______ as an example... 对比分析：Some people think ______, but I believe... 升华主题：This value not only ______ but also ______. 2. 必备成长词库 品质类：perseverance（坚持）, responsibility（责任）, self-discipline（自律） 情感类：grateful（感恩的）, confident（自信的）, fulfilled（充实的） 行动类：overcome difficulties（克服困难）, step out of comfort zone（走出舒适区） 感悟类：Every cloud has a silver lining（黑暗中总有一线光明） 写作模板 【模板一：成长经历型】 适用题目：分享具体经历（如2024广元/2022东营） 结构示范： 开头： "The most unforgettable experience in my life happened when..." （时间/场景引入：Last summer/During the math competition） 主体： 困难描述：At first, I struggled with... (具体问题：stage fright/weak English) 转折事件：Everything changed when... (关键人物/事件：teacher's advice/team support) 行动过程：I practiced... every day (具体行动：reciting speeches 2 hours daily) 结尾： "Though it was challenging, this journey taught me..." (感悟升华：courage comes from action) 真题应用：2022东营"I made it" 困难：failed piano exam twice 转折：new teacher's fingering techniques 行动：3-month 6am practice 感悟：Success blooms where effort and patience meet. 【模板二：品质培养型】 适用题目：新时代学生标准（如2024通辽） 结构示范： 定义： "A good student in the new era should be..." (三要素：responsible, innovative, compassionate) 实践路径： 学习维度：balance study and hobbies (案例：using apps to manage time) 品德维度：help community (案例：organize recycling program) 创新维度：join robotics club (案例：design AI trash classifier) 展望： "I believe by..., we can..." (社会价值：build better future with youth power) 【模板三：价值观感悟型】 适用题目：幸福理解/梦想（如2023湖州/2022淮安） 结构示范： 破题： "True happiness is not..., but..." (对比定义：having money vs feeling loved) 多维度论证： 个人层面：finishing marathon → pride in persistence 家庭层面：cooking for sick parents → warmth of giving 社会层面：volunteering at animal shelter → joy of responsibility 升华： "Like sunlight through leaves, happiness shines when..." (诗意总结：we create meaning) 【模板四：技能成长型】 适用题目：劳动/家务成长（如2023朝阳/西宁） 结构示范： 技能学习： "Learning to... was harder than I expected" (具体技能：cook/fix bikes) 错误尝试： "My first... ended up..." (幽默自嘲：burnt eggs/loose screws) 掌握过程： 观察学习：watched Grandma's hand movements 反复练习：failed 7 times before success 应用创新：created new recipe/repair toolkit 感悟： "Now I understand... is the mother of skill" (引用谚语：Practice). 【模板五：求助反思型】 适用题目：寻求帮助（如2024吉林） 结构示范： 困境描述： "I used to believe... until..." (错误观念：asking for help = weakness) 转折事件： "The day I..., everything changed" (具体场景：math problem confusion) 求助过程： 心理突破：clenched hands, whispered "Can you help me?" 他人反应：teacher's encouraging smile 解决效果：understood logarithmic curves 认知转变： "Reaching out isn't failure, but..." (新认知：wisdom to gain strength) 【模板六：自我关爱型】 适用题目：心理健康（如2024聊城） 结构示范： 问题呈现： "I was once trapped in..." (压力源：exam anxiety/social fear) 觉醒时刻： "The mirror showed me..." (意象描写：pale face/dark circles) 改变策略： 身体关怀：30-min jogging at sunset 心理调节：5-min daily gratitude journal 社交重建：joined book club 新生宣言： "Now I whisper to myself every morning:..." (正能量口号：I deserve care and joy) 常用表达 写作方法指导 一、开篇表达 背景引入 Looking back at my journey of growth, one experience stands out... The moment I ______, I realized ______. Like a seed breaking through the soil, my understanding of ______ began to grow. 观点陈述 From my perspective, true growth means ______. I firmly believe that ______ is the key to ______. There is no doubt that ______ shapes who we are. 真题例句： "The day I stepped onto the stage, trembling but determined, I understood what courage truly means."（2024广元题） 二、论点展开 分论点引导 First and foremost, ______. Another crucial aspect is ______. What's equally important is ______. 举例论证 Take ______ as a typical example. Let me share my personal experience: ______. A case in point is ______. 数据引用 According to a survey, over 70% of students feel ______ when ______. Statistics show that ______. Recent research has revealed that ______. 对比论证 On the contrary, ______. While some people ______, others argue that ______. Unlike ______, ______. 真题例句： "While many chase after material success, I find true happiness in simple moments like ______."（2023湖州题） 三、过渡衔接 逻辑递进 Moreover, / Furthermore, / Additionally, What's more, ______. Not only that, but also ______. 转折对比 However, / Nevertheless, / On the other hand, Despite this, ______. While it's true that ______, we must not forget ______. 总结过渡 In conclusion, / To sum up, Taking all these factors into account, ______. From what has been discussed above, ______. 四、谚语引用 高频适用谚语 Where there is a will, there is a way. （2024通辽题可用） Practice makes perfect. （2023西宁题适用） No pain, no gain. （2022东营题适用） A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. （成长类通用） 灵活化用 Just as the old saying goes, "______". This reminds me of a famous proverb: "______". The wisdom "______" is especially meaningful for us teenagers. 真题例句： "As the saying goes, 'The best time to plant a tree was 20 years ago; the second best time is now.' This motivated me to start ______."（2022衢州题） 五、结尾升华 建议呼吁 It's high time that we ______. Let's take action now to ______! Why not start with small steps, such as ______? 展望未来 If everyone makes an effort, ______. I believe a brighter future will be achieved if ______. Only in this way can we ______. 情感共鸣 Nothing is more important than ______. What a meaningful/powerful lesson it is! This experience will always remind me that ______. 真题例句： "If we all follow these steps, personal growth will become a joyful journey rather than a heavy burden."（2024聊城题） 六、万能句式 强调结构 It is ______ that makes ______ possible. What really matters is ______. There is no denying that ______. 条件假设 Without ______, we would never ______. Imagine a world where ______. Suppose ______, what would happen? 高级句型 Not until ______ did I realize ______. So + 形容词 + be + 主语 + that... 例：So profound was this lesson that it changed my life. 中考真题精讲 （一）（2024·四川广元·中考真题） “小满”遇上“520”，小得盈满，爱逢其时。近日，校园广播站将举办主题为“Find Beauty, Enjoy Life”的分享活动。请结合以下提示，写篇英文短文，分享你的美好经历，并谈谈你的感受。 写作方面： （1）取得进步时，获得认可的美好； （2）结交朋友后，一起相处的美好； （3）环境改善后，幸福生活的美好。 写作要求： （1）短文须包含以上至少一个方面和你的感受，并举例说明，事例数量不限； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； （3）全文词数80左右。文章开头语已给出，不计入总词数。 Life is never perfect. However, beauty is always found in our life._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Life is never perfect, However, beauty is always found in our life. Looking back on the past two years, I have made great progress. First of all, I have made many friends. We share our feelings with each other. When I am in trouble, they give me a hand. I am not shy any longer and become active and confident. With the help of my parents, I have learned to do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so on. I can take care of myself well now. Thanks to my kind and patient teachers, I have developed good learning habits, and done better in study as well. I will make greater efforts to achieve greater success in the future! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己在过去两年内取得很大的进步； 第二步，具体阐述自己的美好经历； 第三步，最后表达意愿。 [亮点词汇] ① first of all首先 ② in trouble陷入麻烦 ③ with the help of在……帮助下 [高分句型] When I am in trouble, they give me a hand.（when引导的时间状语从句） （二）（2024·山东聊城·中考真题） 假如你校校报英语专栏正在以“Take care of yourself”为题举办征文活动，请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。 内容要点：1. 我们应从哪些方面做起，比如：身体健康（饮食、锻炼等）、生活技能（洗衣，做饭等）、心理健康（心态，抗挫等）…… 2. 具体应该怎么做； 3. 这样做的好处是什么。 要求： 1. 至少从两个方面给出自己的看法； 2. 文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息； 3. 照抄试卷内容不得分。 Word bank physical health身体健康；life skills生活技能；mental health 心理健康 Take care of yourself ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Take care of yourself As we all know, health is very important in our life. So you should take care of yourself. It is important to have physical health. So you should try to have a healthy diet. Also, you should keep doing exercise. Having enough sleep is necessary as well. They are good for your health and have a strong body. What’s more, learning some life skills is of great importance. You can learn how to wash clothes, cook and so on. They help you be independent. At the same time, you should do your best to keep your mental health. You should have an active attitude when you have failures and problems. In this way, you will have more courage to face the challenges ahead. Take care of yourself and you will have a better future! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“Take care of yourself”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体介绍应该怎么做以及这样做的好处； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①have a healthy diet 饮食健康 ②What’s more 此外 ③At the same time 同时 ④face the challenges ahead 面对未来的挑战 [高分句型] ①You should have an active attitude when you have failures and problems.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Take care of yourself and you will have a better future!（祈使句） （三）（2024·内蒙古通辽·中考真题） 作为新时代的学生，我们应该注重全面发展，努力成为品德高尚、乐学善思、身心健康、兴趣广泛的人。请根据下面提示，以 “How to Be Good Students”为题目，写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何做新时代的好学生。 要求： 1. 语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范。 2. 要包括图表中所给的提示信息并适当发挥。 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。 4. 不少于80词。（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数） How to Be Good Students As students in the new era (时代), we are supposed to develop fully. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： How to Be Good Students As students in the new era (时代), we are supposed to develop fully. Today, I’m glad to share my ideas on how to be good students. First, we should love our motherland as well as our family. We must be honest and helpful to the people around us. We should be friendly to our classmates. These are good qualities of good students. Second, we should form good study habits. We should study hard and think about things carefully. We should help each other and learn from each other. Third, we should take more physical exercise to build up our health. We should be happy and confident students. We should also do housework regularly and learn to be independent. As long as we work hard, we will become excellent students. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示中的内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“新时代的学生要注重全面发展”来引出下文中对如何做新时代的好学生的描述； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“精神品质、学习习惯和身体健康”三方面入手，重点介绍 如何做新时代的好学生； ③第三步，书写结语。要努力学习，成为好学生。 [亮点词汇] ①as well as 和，以及 ②think about 思考，考虑 ③as long as 只要 [高分句型] ①Today, I’m glad to share my ideas on how to be good students.（“how+不定式”作宾语） ②As long as we work hard, we will become excellent students.（as long as引导的条件状语从句） （四）（2024·吉林·中考真题） 当我们遇到自己无法解决的问题或烦恼时，应该学会积极向他人寻求帮助。请以“Asking for Help”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： （1）积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性； （2）寻求帮助的益处； （3）结合生活经历，简述你或他人寻求帮助的一个事例； （4）提供寻求帮助的方法(至少两个)。 写作要求： （1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； （2）词数90—100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Asking for Help There might be some problems or worries in life._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Asking for Help There might be some problems or worries in life. When we encounter problems or troubles that we cannot solve ourselves, we should learn to actively seek help from others. It’s important to ask for help, and it will help you relax. Last year, my English grammar was weak. Because of this problem, my English was not good. So I went to ask my English teacher for help. With the help of my teacher and my own efforts, my English score has gradually improved. Now I’ve really learned how to learn lessons myself. In a word, it is normal to have problems. When we meet problems, we can ask people around us for help, such as teachers, classmates or parents. In addition, we can also search the Internet for solutions. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性以及寻求帮助的益处； 第二步，结合生活经历，简述自己寻求帮助的一个事例； 第三步，最后给出提供寻求帮助的方法。 [亮点词汇] ① ask for help寻求帮助 ② because of因为 ③ in a word总之 [高分句型] When we encounter problems or troubles that we cannot solve ourselves, we should learn to actively seek help from others.（when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的定语从句） （五）（2023·浙江湖州·中考真题） 幸福可以是偶得礼物时的欣喜，可以是帮助他人时的愉悦……你觉得幸福是什么呢？请你写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿，分享你的经历，谈谈你对幸福的理解。 参考词汇（仅供选择使用）：achieve，share，have fun，be thankful to 注意：（1）词数：80—100；短文首句已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Happiness is everywhere around us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Happiness is everywhere around us. When asked what happiness is, many people will give the answer like making a lot of money because money and fame bring people the great sense of satisfaction. But, in my eyes, staying with my families really makes me happy for the simple and sincere love among us can last forever throughout our life. In the sixth grade of primary school, I had a high fever and had to be hospitalized for two weeks. My father sent me delicious food made by my mother and talked with me every day. My little sister Lucy often called me and cared about my health. When I was awake at night, I found my father sleeping on the chair beside my bed, and I suddenly thought that staying with families was the biggest happiness and I was the happiest person in the world. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤]   第一步，讲述对幸福的理解；   第二步，讲述一件让自己感觉幸福的经历。 [亮点词汇]   ①the sense of……的感觉 ②have to不得不 ③care about关心 [高分句型]   ①When asked what happiness is, many people will give the answer like making a lot of money because money and fame bring people the great sense of satisfaction.（when引导时间状语从句）   （六）（2023·辽宁朝阳·中考真题） 劳动(Labor)能够使人自信并且可以提升自己。教育部发布了《义务教育劳动课程标准(2022年版)》，从2022年秋季开始劳动课正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。在你的生活中，你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能，比如洗衣、做饭、种花、植树、喂养动物甚至田间劳作等。请你结合自身实际，以“Labor makes me a better person”为题，根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文。 要点： (1) 你所擅长的一项劳动技能是什么？ (2) 这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处？ (3) 你还打算学习其他什么劳动技能？ 要求： (1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名。 (2) 语言通顺、意思连贯、书写工整。 (3) 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Labor makes me a better person As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Labor makes me a better person As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. I am very good at cooking. I always cook meals for my parents when I am free on weekends. I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking. I can learn how to take good care of myself instead of making my parents worry about me. In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Labor makes me a better person”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍擅长的一项劳动技能是什么； 第二步，介绍这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处； 第三步，介绍打算学习其他什么劳动技能。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②on weekends在周末 ③take good care of照顾好 ④In the future在未来 [高分句型] ①I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful.（so that引导的目的状语从句） （七）（2023·青海西宁·中考真题） 为提高自理能力，适应未来发展，青少年应学会做日常家务，培养必备生活技能，如烹饪、洗衣、种花、打扫、整理等。请以“Doing Chores Makes Me Better” 为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。 要点提示：1.你会做哪些家务？2.你想学哪些家务？为什么？3.对你有何帮助和意义？ Doing Chores Makes Me Better ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A possible version： Doing Chores Makes Me Better As teenagers, doing chores is one of the most important life skills in our daily life. My mum always encourages me and teaches me to do chores. She wants me to learn more life skills and take good care of myself in the future. Thanks to her help, I can make simple food, tidy my room, wash clothes and take the dog for walks. Recently I have also learned to make cookies in my labor class at school. Later, I hope to learn how to cook beef noodles, because my family are fond of them. Flower arranging is another skill that I want to learn because it can keep me calm and improve my life. During learning, I can have a better communication with my parents. Doing chores makes me more independent, confident and sociable. The more chores I can do, the better life I will have! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍做家务的重要性； 第二步，分享自己会做的家务以及希望学哪些家务，并说说明原因； 第三步，介绍做家务给我带来的好处。 [亮点词汇] ①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 ②take good care of好好照顾 ③be fond of喜欢 [高分句型] ①As teenagers, doing chores is one of the most important life skills in our daily life.（动名词作主语） ②The more chores I can do, the better life I will have!（the+比较级，the+比较级） （八）（2022·山东东营·中考真题） 在我们的生活中，有些事情看起来很难完成，但是通过我们个人的努力或别人的帮助等，我们做到了。请以“I made it”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。 内容包括： 1. 你做到了什么事情； 2. 你是如何做到的； 3. 做完后你的感受或收获。 要求： 1. 短文中不得出现考生真实姓名、学校及其他相关信息。 2. 照抄试卷内容不得分。 I made it ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I made it Since I went to the middle school, my English grades have gone down rapidly. I felt very disappointed. And I didn’t know the way to improve my English grades. “Never give up,” my father said to me. “Look for the methods which belong to you.” After hearing these, I decided to make a studying plan about improving my English. With my father’s help, I made a plan. The plan included doing some English reading, watching English news and so on. Since I made up the plan, I have followed the details of the plan. The following exam was coming. That time I became self-confident. I got nearly full marks. This made me very happy because I defeated myself. My parents congratulated me on this. And they said that they were proud of me. From then on, I have become more and more confident, and I am determined to continue to try my best to study English as well as other subjects. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，讲述自己做到的一件事情； ② 时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，仔细介绍自己所做的事情的前后对比，以及从中感悟到的道理等。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己遇到的困难； 第二步，具体介绍自己是如何改变的，如何做成这件事情的； 第三步，最后介绍自己从此事中取得的收获。 [亮点词汇] ① give up 放弃 ② be proud of 以……而骄傲 ③ be determined to 下决心做…… [高分句型] ① Since I went to the middle school, my English grades have gone down rapidly.（since引导的时间状语从句） ② This made me very happy, because I defeated myself.（because引导的原因状语从句） （九）（2022·江苏淮安·中考真题） 梦想引领人生，奋斗成就未来。“感动中国”年度人物江梦南，幼年失聪，生活、求学之路充满艰辛，但学医救人一直是她的梦想，她通过读唇语，学会“听”和“说”，凭借刻苦学习、不懈努力，成为一名药学博士。请以“梦想”为话题，写一篇英语短文，内容须包括以下所有要点： 1. 描述江梦南的成长经历（练习读唇语，努力学习，克服困难，实现梦想）； 2. 谈谈你的梦想（教师/志愿者……）、原因及如何实现。 参考词汇：读唇语read lips 注意： 1. 词数80~100，已给出部分不计入总词数； 2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate（命运）. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate（命运）.      Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child. The road to life and study is full of hardships, but it has always been her dream to study medicine to save people. So she read lips and studied hard to realize her dream of becoming a Doctor of pharmacy.      I also have a dream. I want to be a teacher when I grow up. It’s been my dream since I was a kid. Because I like playing with children, and I also like to teach my knowledge to others. In order to realize my dream, I must study hard and stick to my dream. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求根据“要点” 描述江梦南的成长经历以及谈谈自己的梦想。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍江梦南的成长经历； 第二步，介绍自己的梦想； 第三步，介绍为什么有这个梦想以及如何实现它。 [亮点词汇] ①be full of充满 ②grow up长大 ③in order to为了 ④stick to坚持 [高分句型] ①Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child.（since引导的时间状语从句） ②The road to life and study is full of hardships, but it has always been her dream to study medicine to save people.（并列连词and以及转折连词but的使用） （十）（2022·浙江衢州·中考真题） 每一次经历都是学习的体验，成长的积淀。近期你校英语社团将举办以“在学习中成长”为主题的征文活动。请以“To Learn, To Grow”为题写一篇英语短文。内容包括： 1. 介绍你在文化、艺术、体育等方面的一次活动经历； 2. 谈谈你的感受。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息； 2. 词数：90-110； 3. 可适当发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯。 参考词汇：activity, pleasure, improve, experience ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 To Learn, To Grow Every experience is a learning experience, and we can always learn something valuable from it. Last term, there was an English speech contest in my school. I decided to take part in it, because I thought I was good at speaking English and I had some experience in giving speeches. I was sure I could win the contest easily, so I spent little time practicing. Did I win? Of course not. The winner was Jim, one of my classmates, who had practiced after school every day. “Practice makes perfect”, as the saying goes. No one can succeed without hard work. This is what I learned from my failure. If there’s another chance, I’ll take it seriously and do my best. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“To Learn, To Grow”为题，结合提示内容进行写作。写作前，可以提前列举出可能需要用到的单词、短语和句型等；写作时注意写作手法要符合英语的表达方式；写作后注意检查。 2.写作指导：这是一篇材料作文，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，在描述过去的经历时用一般过去时。例文采取三段式的写作手法：第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己的经历；第三段描述自己的感受。 名校模拟题提升练 1．（2025·吉林松原·一模）人生，分享快乐，快乐加倍；分享痛苦，痛苦减半。请以“Sharing”为题，根据下面的要求写一篇不少于80词的文章。 要求： (1)讲述一个自己的故事；   (2)表达你的感悟；   (3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Sharing is one of the most precious things in the world. For me, it is great relief that sharing brings to me. After I got into Grade Nine, I often felt stressed out even though I made an effort to study. I never told it to my parents or my friends, so my situation was getting worse and worse. One day, I couldn’t help crying when I got the test paper from the teacher. My world turned grey in my mind until my best friend put his hand on my shoulder. I decided to tell him how I felt. As soon as I shared my feelings with him, I felt extremely relaxed and his encouraging word brought back my confidence. Only then did I realize how important it was to share bad feedings with others! Sharing, which helps me feel better, brings me a lot. I believe that if we learn to share, the world will be a better place. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“写作要点”中包含的关键信息结合写作要求写短文介绍自己的分享经历。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍对分享的理解； 第二步，谈谈自己的分享经历； 第三部，谈谈自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①one of the most precious things 最珍贵的事物之一 ②make an effort to study努力学习 ③couldn’t help cryin情不自禁哭 [高分句型] ①As soon as I shared my feelings with him, I felt extremely relaxed and his encouraging word brought back my confidence. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句) ②Only then did I realize how important it was to share bad feedings with others! (倒装句) 2．（2025·湖南长沙·模拟预测）无论是 “一日游四季，十里不同天” 的独库公路，还是异乡街头的诱人美食，都是这个世界上美丽的风景。学校英文校刊主编读了第一节 (回答问题) 中独库公路的介绍后，发起了一场主题为 “Love Travel, Love Life” 的征文活动。请结合以下思维导图内容，并作适当拓展，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： (1) 80词左右 (标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)； (2) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Love Travel, Love Life A travel experience●Time ●Place ●Journey ●… Benefits of travel●See wonderful places ●Enjoy delicious food ●… Love Travel, Love Life Travel opens our eyes to the world’s wonders. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Love Travel, Love Life Travel opens our eyes to the world’s wonders.     When we travel, we can not only see the most beautiful scenery and breathe the freshest air, but also enjoy the delicious local food.     I once went to Hainan with my parents. It was my first time to see the sea. The weather was pleasant. The sea was as blue as the sky. I picked up many colourful shells and bought many interesting souvenirs. I was very excited.     Travel makes us happy and relaxed. Life is a journey and should be colorful. Let’s enjoy travel and enjoy life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇关于旅行感悟的记叙文； ②时态：主要为一般现在时描述旅行的普遍意义，过去时讲述个人旅行经历； ③提示：围绕旅行展开，从旅行的好处及个人旅行体验出发，自主构建内容完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明旅行的意义，即旅行能让我们见识世界奇观，阐述了旅行对开阔视野的作用； 第二步，通过描述个人去海南旅行的经历，包括看到大海、捡贝壳、买纪念品等，详细呈现了旅行中的具体体验； 第三步，总结旅行让我们快乐放松，强调生活如旅行应丰富多彩，呼吁享受旅行和生活，升华了主题，再次强调旅行对生活的积极影响。 [亮点词汇] ①opens one’s eyes to使某人见识到； ②pleasant令人愉快的； ③colourful丰富多彩的 [高分句型] ①When we travel, we can not only see the most beautiful scenery and breathe the freshest air, but also enjoy the delicious local food. (not only...but also...并列谓语) ②It was my first time to see the sea. (It is/was one’s first time to do sth.某人第一次做某事句式 ) 3．（2024·安徽亳州·模拟预测）发明改变了世界，长大后你想当一名发明家吗？作为一名中学生，你应该怎样做？请根据以下提示，以“How to become an inventor”为题写一篇90词左右的英语短文。 提示： 1.努力学习是基础。 2.兴趣是最好的老师。 3.需要创新(creativity)。 4.持之以恒，永不放弃。 How to become an inventor ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： How to become an inventor Many people want to be an inventor. Would you like to be an inventor? If so, as a student, you need to do these things. First, study hard. Knowledge is the base. If you don’t master any knowledge, it’s possible to invent anything. Second, interest is the best teacher. When you are interested in something, you will do it well. So one should have interest in what you are studying. Third, creativity is very necessary. You need to be creative to come up with new ideas. Finally, you should keep on studying hard and never give up. Don’t be afraid of failure. Then you are on the way to success. Wish your a great inventor one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，根据要点进行写作，注意条理清晰，可以适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步：明确主题； 第二步：具体介绍如何成为发明家，分别说明努力、兴趣、创新和坚持四个方面展开； 第三步：总结全文，表达祝愿。   [亮点词汇] ①come up with提出 ②never give up绝不放弃 ③on the way to success在成功的路上 [高分句型] ①If you don’t master any knowledge, it’s possible to invent anything. (if引导条件状语从句，it的固定句型) ②When you are interested in something, you will do it well. (when引导时间状语从句) 4．（2025·湖北武汉·模拟预测）沟通是一种宝贵的技能，它可以帮助我们建立信任、解决难题或实现目标。初中三年，你一定有许多次和朋友、家人或师长沟通的经历。请以“An Unforgettable Talk”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 Who did you talk with? Why did you talk? What did you talk about? How did you like this talk? 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100左右；标题已给出，不计入总词数。 An Unforgettable Talk ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： An Unforgettable Talk I have quite a few unforgettable talks and the most unforgettable one happened last term. Last term I lost a beautiful watch and felt very sad. After my father knew what had happened, he had a talk with me. He told me that it was common for us to lose something. He also told me that I should learn to protect the things I like so that I could make them stay with me longer. After talking with my father I felt much better and I knew that I should be more careful to protect the things I love. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍谈话对象和背景，说明谈话的原因； 第二步，详细描述谈话的内容，突出主题； 第三步，总结谈话的感受和意义，表达这次谈话对自己的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①have a talk with sb.与某人谈话 ②learn to do sth.学会做某事 [高分句型] ①After my father knew what had happened, he had a talk with me.（after引导的时间状语从句；what引导的宾语从句） ②He told me that it was common for us to lose something.（that引导的宾语从句；it作形式主语） ③He also told me that I should learn to protect the things I like so that I could make them stay with me longer.（定语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句） 5．（2025·河南·模拟预测）成长不可能一帆风顺，但在成长的道路上，总有一盏明灯，为我们照亮前进的方向。请你以“A light in my life”为题, 根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向我们介绍一下曾经指引你前行的一盏灯。 写作要求： 1.介绍指引你前行的一盏灯是什么； 2.谈谈你的感悟或收获； 3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 4.词数100左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 A light in my life In the journey of growing up, there is always a light to lighten our path. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A light in my life In the journey of growing up, there is always a light to lighten our path. For me, the light which helps me go through the dark moments is the love from my parents, teachers and classmates. When I was in Grade 7, I used to be bad at math. When I got poor grades, my parents always encouraged me. My teachers and classmates were always ready to lend me a helping hand. What’s more, they offered me lots of useful advice. With their help, I was full of confidence and had courage to face the problems. Now I have made great progress and got good grades in math. All in all, the light of love from my parents, teachers and classmates is of great importance to me in my life. It has made me stronger and more confident. 【详解】[总体分析］ ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：一般过去时和现在完成时； ③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生不可遗漏要点，不要存在语法错误，注意上下文的衔接。 [写作步骤］ 第一步，点明自己生活中的明灯是父母、老师和同学的爱； 第二步，他们对自己的帮助以及自己从他们那里获得了什么。 [亮点词汇］ ①used to do过去常常做某事 ②encourage鼓励 ③What’s more而且 ④be full of充满 [高分句型］ ①When I got poor grades, my parents always encouraged me. 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