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11 材料作文之社会实践与志愿服务类 近三年考情分析 年份 地区 话题 命题形式 2024年 内蒙古包头 分享自己在社区进行志愿活动的经历 材料作文 2022年 内蒙古呼和浩特 新冠疫情封闭的小区做志愿者 材料作文 吉林长春 讲述一段疫情期间的故事 材料作文 黑龙江齐齐哈尔 冰雪专项训练招聘志愿者 材料作文 山东泰安 “My Volunteer Work Plan” 材料作文 写作方法指导 一、题型核心特征 1. 命题三大方向 志愿服务类 社区服务经历(如2024包头"社区志愿活动") 特殊时期服务(如2022呼和浩特"疫情期间志愿者") 专项活动参与(如2022齐齐哈尔"冰雪专项训练志愿者") 社会实践类 职业体验(如参观工厂/模拟法庭) 社会调查(如环保问题调研) 公益活动(如义卖/募捐) 未来规划类 志愿服务计划(如2022泰安"My Volunteer Work Plan") 社会实践设想 公益项目设计 2. 材料呈现形式 活动照片(如志愿者工作场景) 日程安排(如志愿服务时间表) 对话片段(如志愿者间讨论工作) 数据图表(如志愿服务参与率) 3. 高频能力要求 √ 活动流程的清晰描述 √ 参与体验的生动表达 √ 活动意义的深刻提炼 √ 语言的情景感与画面感 二、近三年命题规律 1. 话题热度排行 志愿服务:占比60%(如2024包头/2022呼和浩特) 社会实践:占比25%(如职业体验/社会调查) 未来规划:占比15%(如2022泰安) 2. 考查能力进阶趋势 基础层级:经历复述(2020年前主流) 例:描述一次志愿活动 发展层级:意义阐释(2021-2022重点) 例:从志愿活动中学到责任感 高阶层级:创新建议(2023后新增) 例:设计更有效的志愿服务方案 三、写作策略框架 1. 黄金结构模板 志愿服务类 背景引入:The ______ volunteer activity was held on ______ (时间/地点). 过程描述:First, ______. Then, ______. Finally,... 亮点时刻:The most touching part was ______ (如helping an elderly person). 感悟收获:This experience taught me ______ (如the value of giving). 社会实践类 活动介绍:Our class visited ______ to learn about... 体验过程:We observed ______ and tried ______ ourselves. 知识收获:This deepened my understanding of ______. 未来应用:I plan to use this knowledge to ______. 未来规划类 现状分析:Currently, our community needs help with... 计划内容:I will organize ______ to address this issue. 实施步骤:First, ______. Then, ______. Finally,... 预期效果:This will benefit ______ by... 2. 必备活动词库 服务类:community service(社区服务), charity work(慈善工作), environmental protection(环保) 实践类:field trip(实地考察), social survey(社会调查), career exploration(职业探索) 规划类:volunteer recruitment(志愿者招募), activity design(活动设计), impact assessment(影响评估) 写作模板 【模板一:志愿服务经历型】 适用题目:描述志愿活动(如2024包头"社区志愿活动") 结构示范: 开头: "The most meaningful volunteer experience was..." (活动引入:helping at a community center) 主体: 任务分配:I was responsible for... (如organizing books) 服务过程:At first, ______. Then, ______. Finally,... 感人时刻:The most touching part was... (如a child's thank-you note) 结尾: "This experience not only... but also..." (双重收获:skills + fulfillment) 真题应用:2024包头题 活动:community clean-up 任务:collecting recyclables 过程:sorted materials, educated residents 时刻:seeing cleaner streets 收获:learned environmental responsibility 【模板二:特殊时期服务型】 适用题目:疫情期间服务(如2022呼和浩特"疫情期间志愿者") 结构示范: 背景引入: "During the COVID-19 lockdown, I volunteered to..." (具体任务:deliver groceries) 服务过程: 准备工作:Wore protective gear, prepared delivery lists 执行细节:Navigated empty streets, followed safety protocols 感人互动:Received heartfelt thanks from elderly residents 感悟升华: "This taught me that in times of crisis..." (如community bonds strengthen) 【模板三:专项活动参与型】 适用题目:专项志愿服务(如2022齐齐哈尔"冰雪专项训练志愿者") 结构示范: 活动介绍: "The winter sports training program needed volunteers for..." (具体任务:equipment maintenance) 参与过程: 技能学习:Learned to... (如sharpen skates) 团队合作:Worked with coaches and athletes to... 挑战克服:Adapted to... (如freezing temperatures) 个人成长: "This experience shaped me into..." (如a more resilient person). 【模板四:社会实践体验型】 适用题目:职业体验/社会调查 结构示范: 活动背景: "Our class visited ______ to learn about..." (地点/主题:a recycling plant/environmental protection) 体验过程: 观察学习:Witnessed... (如waste sorting process) 实践操作:Tried... ourselves (如operating a conveyor belt) 知识收获:Understood the importance of... 未来应用: "I plan to use this knowledge to..." (如promote recycling at school). 【模板五:志愿服务计划型】 适用题目:未来规划(如2022泰安"My Volunteer Work Plan") 结构示范: 现状分析: "Currently, our community faces challenges like..." (具体问题:lonely elderly residents) 计划内容: 活动设计:Organize... (如weekly companionship visits) 实施步骤:Recruit volunteers, train them in... 资源安排:Partner with... (如local senior centers) 预期效果: "This will benefit... by..." (如reducing elderly loneliness) 呼吁行动: "Let's work together to..." (如build a more caring community). 常用表达 写作方法指导 一、开篇表达 背景引入 Looking back at my volunteer experiences, one activity stands out... The moment I ______, I realized ______. Like a bridge connecting hearts, service brings people together. 观点陈述 From my perspective, volunteering is essential because... I firmly believe that ______ enriches our lives. There is no doubt that ______ shapes who we are. 真题例句: "The day I joined the community clean-up, I understood what true service means."(2024包头题) 二、论点展开 分论点引导 First and foremost, ______. Another crucial aspect is ______. What's equally important is ______. 举例论证 Take ______ as a typical example. Let me share my personal experience: ______. A case in point is ______. 数据引用 According to a survey, over 70% of volunteers feel ______ when ______. Statistics show that ______. Recent research has revealed that ______. 对比论证 On the contrary, ______. While some people ______, others argue that ______. Unlike ______, ______. 真题例句: "While many focus on personal gain, I find true fulfillment in helping others through ______."(2022呼和浩特题) 三、过渡衔接 逻辑递进 Moreover, / Furthermore, / Additionally, What's more, ______. Not only that, but also ______. 转折对比 However, / Nevertheless, / On the other hand, Despite this, ______. While it's true that ______, we must not forget ______. 总结过渡 In conclusion, / To sum up, Taking all these factors into account, ______. From what has been discussed above, ______. 四、谚语引用 高频适用谚语 Many hands make light work. (志愿服务类适用) A small act of kindness can make a big difference. (公益活动类适用) Unity is strength. (团队合作类适用) Actions speak louder than words. (实践行动类适用) 灵活化用 Just as the old saying goes, "______". This reminds me of a famous proverb: "______". The wisdom "______" is especially meaningful for us volunteers. 真题例句: "As the saying goes, 'The best way to find yourself is to lose yourself in the service of others.' This perfectly describes my experience during ______."(2022泰安题) 五、结尾升华 建议呼吁 It's high time that we ______. Let's take action now to ______! Why not start with small steps, such as ______? 展望未来 If everyone makes an effort, ______. I believe a brighter future will be achieved if ______. Only in this way can we ______. 情感共鸣 Nothing is more important than ______. What a meaningful/powerful lesson it is! This experience will always remind me that ______. 真题例句: "If we all follow these steps, our community will become stronger and more caring."(2024包头题) 六、万能句式 强调结构 It is ______ that makes ______ possible. What really matters is ______. There is no denying that ______. 条件假设 Without ______, we would never ______. Imagine a world where ______. Suppose ______, what would happen? 高级句型 Not until ______ did I realize ______. So + 形容词 + be + 主语 + that... 例:So profound was this lesson that it changed my perspective on service. 中考真题精讲 (一)(2024·内蒙古包头·中考真题) 你校英语报社组织同学们分享自己在社区进行志愿活动的经历,请你根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿。内容包括: 1.简要描述; 2.体验和感受。 Topic Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community Time last Sunday Activities made eco-friendly (环保的) products gave out reusable water bottles and bags worked at the learning stalls (摊位) 注意: 1.词数为80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4.短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version, Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer. Before the event began, we gathered at the entrance of Hongxing Park at 9 o’clock. We volunteers were then divided into groups. Some made eco-friendly products. Others gave out reusable water bottles and the bags we made. I went all out to work at the learning stalls, teaching neighbors how to properly recycle and how to reduce trash here in town. I shared what I know with others through the activity. Sharing is caring. Wish everyone could care about our community and earth. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文; ②时态:以“一般过去时”为主; ③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,着重突出“活动”部分,可适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步,首先介绍志愿者活动的时间、地点、人物等; 第二步,具体介绍志愿者活动内容; 最后一步,表达个人感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①be divided into被分成 ②give out分发 ③go all out全力以赴 ④care about关心 [高分句型] ①Before the event began, we gathered at the entrance of Hongxing Park at 9 o’clock.(before引导时间状语从句) ②I went all out to work at the learning stalls, teaching neighbors how to properly recycle and how to reduce trash here in town.(疑问词+动词不定式) ③I shared what I know with others through the activity.(what引导宾语从句) (二)(2022·内蒙古呼和浩特·中考真题) 新时代党的教育方针强调,教育必须为社会主义现代化建设服务、为人民服务,必须与生产劳动和社会实践相结合,培养德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。社会实践是实现这一目标的重要途径之一。假如你是李华,三个月前你为因新冠疫情封闭的小区做志愿者。请写一篇英语短文,向学校“英语园地”投稿,描述你此次经历。 内容包括: 1.你所做的事情(至少四件); 2.参与社会实践的感受及意义; 3.发出号召。 要求: 1.要点齐全(包括所有参考词汇),语言流畅,书写规范,可适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等; 3.80—100词左右,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:收集信息 collect information  分发hand out  骄傲的proud Three months ago, the lockdown (封锁) started in my community because of COVID-19, and I chose to be a volunteer. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: Three months ago, the lockdown started in my community because of COVID-19, and I chose to be a volunteer. The first thing I did was to collect the neighbors’ information early in the morning. And then I helped the doctors take the temperature. At the same time, I often tried my best to help keep in good order during the tests. Although it was cold outside, I still thought it meaningful. In the afternoon, it was time to hand out vegetables and fruits door to door so that people in the community could have enough to eat in time. Besides, I sometimes went to talk with some old people in order to comfort them. Now we all stay healthy and happy, but I’ll never forget such an experience. I am so proud of myself. What’s more, I find volunteer work makes me develop social skills, and I feel more confident than ever before. I hope more volunteers can join us to fight against COVID-19 together! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的“描述疫情期间做志愿者的经历”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图。借用“因为疫情,选择做志愿者”来引出重点介绍的内容; 第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“所做的事情,参与社会实践的感受及意义和发出号召”几个方面重点介绍; 第三步,书写结语。表达“希望更多的志愿者加入,一起抗击新冠”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①because of因为 ②at the same time与此同时 ③keep in good order保持良好的秩序 ④be proud of以……而骄傲 [高分句型] ①Although it was cold outside, I still thought it meaningful.(although引导让步状语从句) ②What’s more, I find volunteer work makes me develop social skills, and I feel more confident than ever before.(and连接并列句) (三)(2022·吉林长春·中考真题) 疫情(the COVID-19 pandemic)期间,总有些特别的事使你心存感恩。某英文网站正在开展以“疫情故事”为主题的征文活动,请用英文写一篇不少于80词的短文投稿,讲述一段疫情期间的故事(人与人的互助或自身的成长等),写出你的感受与收获。 要求:1.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     Because of the COVID-19, we had to stay at home. During the COVID-19 pandemic, there were many helpful persons around us.     When we stayed at home, we had little food to eat. Ordering food online was very difficult at first. At that time, my neighbor Mr Huang knew everything happened to my family. He sent many vegetables and fruit to me. Our family were moved by what he had done. We also realized that we should pass this love one by one. Small actions can make a big difference.     From this experience, I realize that we should help others in need. Helping others is helping yourself. 【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。介绍疫情期间发生的一个故事。 2.写作指导:本文采用一般过去时,人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段讲述发生在自己身边的故事;最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。 (四)(2022·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·中考真题) 2022北京冬奥会的成功举办,掀起了全民对冰雪运动的热爱。SOS儿童村为了给孩子们进行冰雪专项训练,现招聘10名志愿者。请为SOS儿童村写一则招聘广告。 招聘条件:1.擅长冰雪运动(滑冰,滑雪ski)2.善于和孩子们相处 3.周六上午工作 联系人:丁老师(电话号码0542-5985211) 要求:1.字迹工整,表达清楚,语法正确;2.词数:30-50词。 Volunteers Wanted for SOS Village ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文: Volunteers Wanted for SOS Village SOS Village needs 10 volunteers for the children. Are you good at skating or skiing? Are you good with children? Are you free on Saturday morning? Please call Mr. Ding at 0542-5985211. 【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,写招聘广告,要点要包括题目中提到的所有,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导:写作时要紧扣主题,本文应该用第二人称来展开描述;时态采用一般现在时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确精炼,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。 (五)(2022·山东泰安·中考真题) 让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动,对其成长具有重要意义,可以帮助他们学习新技能,增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至,请根据下面表格中的内容提示,以 “My Volunteer Work Plan” 为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划,并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。 Volunteer Work ◎Help in the city library              ◎Clean up the city parks ◎Hold a charity bazaar(义卖)       ◎Do volunteer work in a hospital ◎Visit the old people’s home          ◎… 要求: 1. 可选择表格中的1-2个活动项目,也可自拟活动项目; 2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,词数80-100; 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 My Volunteer Work Plan ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Volunteer Work Plan The summer holiday is coming. I am going to do some volunteer work. I will help to clean up the city park. Of course, I will ask more people to join me. I will call up my friends and ask them to come. We will pick up the litter, the plastic bags and other waste things. I hope our city will be more beautiful. Besides, I am going to visit sick kids in hospital. I love children and enjoy getting along with them. I will sing for the kids at the city hospital to cheer them up. I hope they can be better soon. Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but also I get to spend time doing what I love to do. All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday. 【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的暑假期间的志愿者计划。 2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时,人称采用第一人称为主。分为两段式:第一段介绍自己的志愿者计划以及打算做些什么事情;第二段表达自己做志愿者的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。 名校模拟题提升练 1.(2023·甘肃陇南·一模)不论是大事件还是小场合,每个需要帮助的地方都能看到志愿者服务的身影。他们用一颗颗爱心,温暖和帮助着他人,进行着爱的传递,同时也收获着成长。 某英文网站正在开展以“我的志愿服务经历 (My Volunteering Experience)”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你最难忘的一次志愿服务经历,你做了哪些工作,以及有什么收获。 提示词语:help, tired, happy, benefit, grow up 提示问题: ●What is your most unforgettable volunteering experience? ●What did you do? ●What have you learned from the experience? 要求: 1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥; 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整; 3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名; 4.词数:不少于70词。开头已给出,但不计入总词数。 I have done a lot of volunteer work. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     I have done a lot of volunteer work. My most unforgettable volunteering experience was taking part in Waste-sorting Activity in our community with my friend. First, we introduced the importance of waste-sorting in our daily life. Second, we told the grandparents in our community the differences among the dustbins. Third, we told them how to sort out different kinds of waste and put them into different dustbins. We were busy all the afternoon. We were tired but we were happy because we thought we did something meaningful. I have learnt a lot from the experience. If we sort out recyclable things before throwing them away, the amount of waste will be reduced and less waste will be burned or buried. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步,开门见山,写明自己最难忘的志愿服务经历; 第二步,描述志愿服务活动自己做了什么; 第三步,讲述自己从此次经历中学到的内容。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②sort out整理,分类 ③throw away扔掉 [高分句型] ①We were tired but we were happy because we thought we did something meaningful. (原因状语从句) ②If we sort out recyclable things before throwing them away, the amount of waste will be reduced and less waste will be burned or buried. (条件状语从句) 2.(2024·贵州黔东南·一模)生活中往往有一些不经意的小事,拨动我们的心弦,给我们带来别样的温暖。你接受过来自他人的什么帮助吗?它给你带来了怎样的影响呢?请你以“An Act of Kindness”为题,写一篇英语短文。 提示: 要求: 1. 文章须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 词数80个左右。 An Act of Kindness ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文      An Act of Kindness I felt so upset when I failed the math exam. As I was about to cross the street to go back home, I dropped all the exam papers and books at the crossing. I hurried to pick them up, but some papers blew away in the wind. At that moment, a young girl gave me a hand. After I stood up with all the papers and books under my arm, I wanted to thank her. She just smiled at me and left quickly. I suddenly felt the warmth of the world. That girl’s small act of kindness changed me and encouraged me to help others in need. I will remember that forever. 【详解】①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文; ②时态:“一般过去时”为主; ③提示:根据题干中的提示要点介绍一个小小的善举,可适当增加细节。写作时,注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,详细介绍别人对自己的帮助; 第二步,介绍自己的感想。 [亮点词汇] ①pick up捡起 ②blow away吹走 ③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①I felt so upset when I failed the math exam. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②After I stood up with all the papers and books under my arm, I wanted to thank her. (after后引导的时间状语从句) 3.(2023·陕西西安·模拟预测)人们常说:”服务他人,快乐自己”。你准备利用即将到来的暑假做一些志愿者工作。请根据以下表格提示内容,给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文,介绍你的计划。 Places Activities Children’s Hospital sing songs, tell stories, ... The Old People’s Home talk with, read newspapers, ... City Sports Park pick up rubbish, water trees, ... ... ... 要求:1.须使用提示词汇,并适当发挥;     2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;     3.文章中不能出现你的任何真实信息(姓名,校名和地名等):     4.词数:不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数) As we all know, “Helping others can make us happy.” The summer holiday is coming. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday this summer. 【答案】例文: As we all know, “Helping others can make us happy.” The summer holiday is coming. I plan to spend it doing various volunteer activities. First, I’ll visit the Children’s Hospital. I’ll sing songs, tell stories, and even organize fun games to cheer up the children because I hope to make them happy during their recovery. Then, I’ll go to the Old People’s Home. I’ll chat with the elderly, read newspapers, and help them with simple exercise. I hope to bring them some joy. In the City Sports Park, I’ll pick up rubbish and water trees. This way, I can ensure a clean and safe environment for everyone to enjoy. By doing these activities, I believe I can bring happiness to others and myself. I’m sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday this summer. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ② 时态:时态为“一般将来时”; ③ 提示:根据表格内容,逐一详细列出了将要进行的志愿者工作及期望产生的影响。 [写作步骤] 第一步,阐释自己未来的志愿者计划; 第二步,依次详细描述每个计划,包括在哪里、做什么及期待的结果; 第三步,最后是一个对此计划的期许,以及通过这些活动给自身带来的影响和感受。 [亮点词汇] ① volunteer activities 志愿者活动  ② cheer up 鼓舞,使振奋 ③ make sb. happy 让某人高兴 [高分句型] ① I’ll sing songs, tell stories, and even organize fun games to cheer up the children because I hope to make them happy during their recovery. (because引导原因状语从句) ② By doing these activities, I believe I can bring happiness to others and myself. (省略了that的宾语从句) 4.(2024·贵州黔东南·二模)“青少年志愿者”意味着光荣的责任与使命。为发扬志愿者精神,学校正在举行主题为“帮助别人,成长自己”的征文活动。请以“Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me ________”为题,结合自身经历,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文投稿至校刊专栏。 要求:1. 补全标题; 2. 短文需包含思维导图中的所有信息; 3. 重点谈谈你参加的志愿者工作的经历和感受; 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me __________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me Happy I have done a lot of volunteer work. My most unforgettable volunteering experience was taking part in Waste-sorting Activity in our community with my friend. First, we introduced the importance of waste sorting in our daily life. Second, we told the grandparents in our community the differences among the dustbins. Third, we told them how to sort out different kinds of waste. We were busy all the afternoon. We were tired but we were happy because we thought we did something meaningful. If we sort out recyclable things before throwing them away, the amount of waste will be reduced. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,引出自己的志愿工作以及和谁一起参加的; 第二步,介绍自己在志愿工作中做了什么; 第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①sort out分类 ②throw away扔掉 ③the amount of……的数量 [高分句型] ①We were tired but we were happy because we thought we did something meaningful. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②If we sort out recyclable things before throwing them away, the amount of waste will be reduced. (if引导的条件状语从句) 5.(2024·山西忻州·三模)三年的初中时光里,我们参加了各种各样丰富且有意义的活动,如志愿者活动、俱乐部活动、艺术节、劳动实践(labor practice)、运动会等,这些活动不仅让我们收获了快乐,掌握了技能,更让我们提升了综合素养。你校官网的英语栏目English World正在开展征文活动邀请同学们分享活动体验,请你写一篇短文进行投稿。 内容包括: ●an activity that makes you grow ●an experience you had ●your understanding of taking part in the activity 要求: 1.词数不少于80; 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 In our daily lives, we usually take part in some meaningful activities that make us grow, such as volunteer work, labor practice, sports meetings and so on. I want to share one of my volunteer experiences with you. Last Sunday, I headed to the old people’s home with my friends. We cleaned the rooms for the old people. After that, we shared many interesting things with them. Lucy and I offered to sing for them. The elderly were so happy that they gave us a thumbs-up. When it was time for us to leave, they thanked us for our kindness. Tired as we were, we thought it was a really meaningful experience. As we can bring warmth to old people, we can also learn to love and share in this way. In a word, volunteering activities not only help people in need, but also offer us chances to experience social life and develop our abilities and skills. If you want to have a try, please take action from now on. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图,点明让自己成长的活动; 第二步,具体阐述这段经历; 第三步,表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②share...with...与……分享…… ③offer to do sth.主动提出做某事 ④in a word总之 ⑤not only...but also...不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①In our daily lives, we usually take part in some meaningful activities that make us grow, such as volunteer work, labor practice, sports meetings and so on.(that引导的定语从句) ②The elderly were so happy that they gave us a thumbs-up.(so...that引导的结果状语从句) ③If you want to have a try, please take action from now on.(if引导的条件状语从句) 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究!3 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$ 11 材料作文之社会实践与志愿服务类 近三年考情分析 年份 地区 话题 命题形式 2024年 内蒙古包头 分享自己在社区进行志愿活动的经历 材料作文 2022年 内蒙古呼和浩特 新冠疫情封闭的小区做志愿者 材料作文 吉林长春 讲述一段疫情期间的故事 材料作文 黑龙江齐齐哈尔 冰雪专项训练招聘志愿者 材料作文 山东泰安 “My Volunteer Work Plan” 材料作文 写作方法指导 一、题型核心特征 1. 命题三大方向 志愿服务类 社区服务经历(如2024包头"社区志愿活动") 特殊时期服务(如2022呼和浩特"疫情期间志愿者") 专项活动参与(如2022齐齐哈尔"冰雪专项训练志愿者") 社会实践类 职业体验(如参观工厂/模拟法庭) 社会调查(如环保问题调研) 公益活动(如义卖/募捐) 未来规划类 志愿服务计划(如2022泰安"My Volunteer Work Plan") 社会实践设想 公益项目设计 2. 材料呈现形式 活动照片(如志愿者工作场景) 日程安排(如志愿服务时间表) 对话片段(如志愿者间讨论工作) 数据图表(如志愿服务参与率) 3. 高频能力要求 √ 活动流程的清晰描述 √ 参与体验的生动表达 √ 活动意义的深刻提炼 √ 语言的情景感与画面感 二、近三年命题规律 1. 话题热度排行 志愿服务:占比60%(如2024包头/2022呼和浩特) 社会实践:占比25%(如职业体验/社会调查) 未来规划:占比15%(如2022泰安) 2. 考查能力进阶趋势 基础层级:经历复述(2020年前主流) 例:描述一次志愿活动 发展层级:意义阐释(2021-2022重点) 例:从志愿活动中学到责任感 高阶层级:创新建议(2023后新增) 例:设计更有效的志愿服务方案 三、写作策略框架 1. 黄金结构模板 志愿服务类 背景引入:The ______ volunteer activity was held on ______ (时间/地点). 过程描述:First, ______. Then, ______. Finally,... 亮点时刻:The most touching part was ______ (如helping an elderly person). 感悟收获:This experience taught me ______ (如the value of giving). 社会实践类 活动介绍:Our class visited ______ to learn about... 体验过程:We observed ______ and tried ______ ourselves. 知识收获:This deepened my understanding of ______. 未来应用:I plan to use this knowledge to ______. 未来规划类 现状分析:Currently, our community needs help with... 计划内容:I will organize ______ to address this issue. 实施步骤:First, ______. Then, ______. Finally,... 预期效果:This will benefit ______ by... 2. 必备活动词库 服务类:community service(社区服务), charity work(慈善工作), environmental protection(环保) 实践类:field trip(实地考察), social survey(社会调查), career exploration(职业探索) 规划类:volunteer recruitment(志愿者招募), activity design(活动设计), impact assessment(影响评估) 写作模板 【模板一:志愿服务经历型】 适用题目:描述志愿活动(如2024包头"社区志愿活动") 结构示范: 开头: "The most meaningful volunteer experience was..." (活动引入:helping at a community center) 主体: 任务分配:I was responsible for... (如organizing books) 服务过程:At first, ______. Then, ______. Finally,... 感人时刻:The most touching part was... (如a child's thank-you note) 结尾: "This experience not only... but also..." (双重收获:skills + fulfillment) 真题应用:2024包头题 活动:community clean-up 任务:collecting recyclables 过程:sorted materials, educated residents 时刻:seeing cleaner streets 收获:learned environmental responsibility 【模板二:特殊时期服务型】 适用题目:疫情期间服务(如2022呼和浩特"疫情期间志愿者") 结构示范: 背景引入: "During the COVID-19 lockdown, I volunteered to..." (具体任务:deliver groceries) 服务过程: 准备工作:Wore protective gear, prepared delivery lists 执行细节:Navigated empty streets, followed safety protocols 感人互动:Received heartfelt thanks from elderly residents 感悟升华: "This taught me that in times of crisis..." (如community bonds strengthen) 【模板三:专项活动参与型】 适用题目:专项志愿服务(如2022齐齐哈尔"冰雪专项训练志愿者") 结构示范: 活动介绍: "The winter sports training program needed volunteers for..." (具体任务:equipment maintenance) 参与过程: 技能学习:Learned to... (如sharpen skates) 团队合作:Worked with coaches and athletes to... 挑战克服:Adapted to... (如freezing temperatures) 个人成长: "This experience shaped me into..." (如a more resilient person). 【模板四:社会实践体验型】 适用题目:职业体验/社会调查 结构示范: 活动背景: "Our class visited ______ to learn about..." (地点/主题:a recycling plant/environmental protection) 体验过程: 观察学习:Witnessed... (如waste sorting process) 实践操作:Tried... ourselves (如operating a conveyor belt) 知识收获:Understood the importance of... 未来应用: "I plan to use this knowledge to..." (如promote recycling at school). 【模板五:志愿服务计划型】 适用题目:未来规划(如2022泰安"My Volunteer Work Plan") 结构示范: 现状分析: "Currently, our community faces challenges like..." (具体问题:lonely elderly residents) 计划内容: 活动设计:Organize... (如weekly companionship visits) 实施步骤:Recruit volunteers, train them in... 资源安排:Partner with... (如local senior centers) 预期效果: "This will benefit... by..." (如reducing elderly loneliness) 呼吁行动: "Let's work together to..." (如build a more caring community). 常用表达 写作方法指导 一、开篇表达 背景引入 Looking back at my volunteer experiences, one activity stands out... The moment I ______, I realized ______. Like a bridge connecting hearts, service brings people together. 观点陈述 From my perspective, volunteering is essential because... I firmly believe that ______ enriches our lives. There is no doubt that ______ shapes who we are. 真题例句: "The day I joined the community clean-up, I understood what true service means."(2024包头题) 二、论点展开 分论点引导 First and foremost, ______. Another crucial aspect is ______. What's equally important is ______. 举例论证 Take ______ as a typical example. Let me share my personal experience: ______. A case in point is ______. 数据引用 According to a survey, over 70% of volunteers feel ______ when ______. Statistics show that ______. Recent research has revealed that ______. 对比论证 On the contrary, ______. While some people ______, others argue that ______. Unlike ______, ______. 真题例句: "While many focus on personal gain, I find true fulfillment in helping others through ______."(2022呼和浩特题) 三、过渡衔接 逻辑递进 Moreover, / Furthermore, / Additionally, What's more, ______. Not only that, but also ______. 转折对比 However, / Nevertheless, / On the other hand, Despite this, ______. While it's true that ______, we must not forget ______. 总结过渡 In conclusion, / To sum up, Taking all these factors into account, ______. From what has been discussed above, ______. 四、谚语引用 高频适用谚语 Many hands make light work. (志愿服务类适用) A small act of kindness can make a big difference. (公益活动类适用) Unity is strength. (团队合作类适用) Actions speak louder than words. (实践行动类适用) 灵活化用 Just as the old saying goes, "______". This reminds me of a famous proverb: "______". The wisdom "______" is especially meaningful for us volunteers. 真题例句: "As the saying goes, 'The best way to find yourself is to lose yourself in the service of others.' This perfectly describes my experience during ______."(2022泰安题) 五、结尾升华 建议呼吁 It's high time that we ______. Let's take action now to ______! Why not start with small steps, such as ______? 展望未来 If everyone makes an effort, ______. I believe a brighter future will be achieved if ______. Only in this way can we ______. 情感共鸣 Nothing is more important than ______. What a meaningful/powerful lesson it is! This experience will always remind me that ______. 真题例句: "If we all follow these steps, our community will become stronger and more caring."(2024包头题) 六、万能句式 强调结构 It is ______ that makes ______ possible. What really matters is ______. There is no denying that ______. 条件假设 Without ______, we would never ______. Imagine a world where ______. Suppose ______, what would happen? 高级句型 Not until ______ did I realize ______. So + 形容词 + be + 主语 + that... 例:So profound was this lesson that it changed my perspective on service. 中考真题精讲 (一)(2024·内蒙古包头·中考真题) 你校英语报社组织同学们分享自己在社区进行志愿活动的经历,请你根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿。内容包括: 1.简要描述; 2.体验和感受。 Topic Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community Time last Sunday Activities made eco-friendly (环保的) products gave out reusable water bottles and bags worked at the learning stalls (摊位) 注意: 1.词数为80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4.短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (二)(2022·内蒙古呼和浩特·中考真题) 新时代党的教育方针强调,教育必须为社会主义现代化建设服务、为人民服务,必须与生产劳动和社会实践相结合,培养德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。社会实践是实现这一目标的重要途径之一。假如你是李华,三个月前你为因新冠疫情封闭的小区做志愿者。请写一篇英语短文,向学校“英语园地”投稿,描述你此次经历。 内容包括: 1.你所做的事情(至少四件); 2.参与社会实践的感受及意义; 3.发出号召。 要求: 1.要点齐全(包括所有参考词汇),语言流畅,书写规范,可适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等; 3.80—100词左右,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:收集信息 collect information  分发hand out  骄傲的proud Three months ago, the lockdown (封锁) started in my community because of COVID-19, and I chose to be a volunteer. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (三)(2022·吉林长春·中考真题) 疫情(the COVID-19 pandemic)期间,总有些特别的事使你心存感恩。某英文网站正在开展以“疫情故事”为主题的征文活动,请用英文写一篇不少于80词的短文投稿,讲述一段疫情期间的故事(人与人的互助或自身的成长等),写出你的感受与收获。 要求:1.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (四)(2022·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·中考真题) 2022北京冬奥会的成功举办,掀起了全民对冰雪运动的热爱。SOS儿童村为了给孩子们进行冰雪专项训练,现招聘10名志愿者。请为SOS儿童村写一则招聘广告。 招聘条件:1.擅长冰雪运动(滑冰,滑雪ski)2.善于和孩子们相处 3.周六上午工作 联系人:丁老师(电话号码0542-5985211) 要求:1.字迹工整,表达清楚,语法正确;2.词数:30-50词。 Volunteers Wanted for SOS Village ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (五)(2022·山东泰安·中考真题) 让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动,对其成长具有重要意义,可以帮助他们学习新技能,增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至,请根据下面表格中的内容提示,以 “My Volunteer Work Plan” 为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划,并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。 Volunteer Work ◎Help in the city library              ◎Clean up the city parks ◎Hold a charity bazaar(义卖)       ◎Do volunteer work in a hospital ◎Visit the old people’s home          ◎… 要求: 1. 可选择表格中的1-2个活动项目,也可自拟活动项目; 2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,词数80-100; 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 My Volunteer Work Plan ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 名校模拟题提升练 1.(2023·甘肃陇南·一模)不论是大事件还是小场合,每个需要帮助的地方都能看到志愿者服务的身影。他们用一颗颗爱心,温暖和帮助着他人,进行着爱的传递,同时也收获着成长。 某英文网站正在开展以“我的志愿服务经历 (My Volunteering Experience)”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你最难忘的一次志愿服务经历,你做了哪些工作,以及有什么收获。 提示词语:help, tired, happy, benefit, grow up 提示问题: ●What is your most unforgettable volunteering experience? ●What did you do? ●What have you learned from the experience? 要求: 1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥; 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整; 3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名; 4.词数:不少于70词。开头已给出,但不计入总词数。 I have done a lot of volunteer work. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.(2024·贵州黔东南·一模)生活中往往有一些不经意的小事,拨动我们的心弦,给我们带来别样的温暖。你接受过来自他人的什么帮助吗?它给你带来了怎样的影响呢?请你以“An Act of Kindness”为题,写一篇英语短文。 提示: 要求: 1. 文章须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 词数80个左右。 An Act of Kindness ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.(2023·陕西西安·模拟预测)人们常说:”服务他人,快乐自己”。你准备利用即将到来的暑假做一些志愿者工作。请根据以下表格提示内容,给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文,介绍你的计划。 Places Activities Children’s Hospital sing songs, tell stories, ... The Old People’s Home talk with, read newspapers, ... City Sports Park pick up rubbish, water trees, ... ... ... 要求:1.须使用提示词汇,并适当发挥;     2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;     3.文章中不能出现你的任何真实信息(姓名,校名和地名等):     4.词数:不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数) As we all know, “Helping others can make us happy.” The summer holiday is coming. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday this summer. 4.(2024·贵州黔东南·二模)“青少年志愿者”意味着光荣的责任与使命。为发扬志愿者精神,学校正在举行主题为“帮助别人,成长自己”的征文活动。请以“Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me ________”为题,结合自身经历,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文投稿至校刊专栏。 要求:1. 补全标题; 2. 短文需包含思维导图中的所有信息; 3. 重点谈谈你参加的志愿者工作的经历和感受; 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me __________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.(2024·山西忻州·三模)三年的初中时光里,我们参加了各种各样丰富且有意义的活动,如志愿者活动、俱乐部活动、艺术节、劳动实践(labor practice)、运动会等,这些活动不仅让我们收获了快乐,掌握了技能,更让我们提升了综合素养。你校官网的英语栏目English World正在开展征文活动邀请同学们分享活动体验,请你写一篇短文进行投稿。 内容包括: ●an activity that makes you grow ●an experience you had ●your understanding of taking part in the activity 要求: 1.词数不少于80; 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 写作方法指导 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究!3 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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