内容正文:
Writing
解题步骤:一审二谋三行四查
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“grow up healthy”为题,写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
简述现状
提出建议
发起倡议
一审
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“grow up healthy”为题,写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
简述现状
提出建议
发起倡议
一、审题(仔细仔细再仔细)
体材:小短文 :发言稿
2.人称:I , we
3. 时态:过去、现在、将来
4. 要点:现状、建议、倡议
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“grow up healthy”为题,写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
简述现状
提出建议
发起倡议
二、谋篇布局、列要点
P1 ?
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“grow up healthy”为题,写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
简述现状
提出建议
发起倡议
二、谋篇布局、列要点
P1 问候、介绍、话题
现状:
吃垃圾食品
缺乏锻炼
沉迷网络游戏
P2 建议:
健康饮食
坚持锻炼
少接触电子设备
P3 倡议、期待
三、选词 行文
P1 问候、介绍、话题
现状:
吃垃圾食品
缺乏锻炼
沉迷网络游戏
P2 建议:
健康饮食
坚持锻炼
少接触电子设备
P3 倡议、期待
I feel honored to share with you …
junk food
be short of / lack
be addicted to
healthy /balanced diet
exercise regularly
less exposure to electronic devices
Let’s take action!
Grow Up Healthy
Good morning, everyone!
As we grow up, we are expected to lead a healthy life. However, there is a growing concern that problems like eating junk food, lacking exercise and being addicted to online games still exist among us teenagers.
同位语从句
列举
sample
现状、问题
被动语态
To improve the present situation, I suggest that we stick to a healthy diet and regular exercise, which can work wonders for us. Besides, less exposure to electronic devices will do good to both our mental and physical health. More importantly, we should learn to look at the bright side and stay positive when facing challenges.
定语从句
目的
影响、好处、结果、意义
衔接词
非谓语、时间状语
In conclusion, let’s take action from this very moment to grow up healthy and sound.
That’s all. Thank you.
时间
目的
What makes a good speech writing?
Focus on the topic
Clear structure
Attract the audience
Steps of writing
1.Read the question
2.List the points
3.Make the article
4.Check
How to expand details in writing?
如何拓展细节
背景:Knowing that…, I …
原因 :because, since, as, for
结果(影响,好处/坏处): so that…
目的: in order to, to…, aiming at…
意义: which…
时间: when…
地点: at…,in…
举例: such as, for example, like…
高分表达
被动语态:be done
从句: which… , that…
并列句: not only… but also…
列举: A, B and C
非谓语: to do, doing ,done
Practice
, the Student Union will hold an English speech contest.
增加目的
To enrich our school life
Practice
I plan to help you study some poems of the Tang Dynasty,
增加原因或理由
I plan to help you study some poems of the Tang Dynasty, which is an important part of Chinese civilization. Many of the Tang poems have greatly influenced Chinese literature.
Practice
You can choose to stay with the host family,
增加结果
which will help you experience Chinese culture.
Practice
In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise,
增加举例
such as swimming, running and various ball games
homework
假设你校国际部新招收了一批留学生,为了帮助他们尽快了解中国文化,学生会请你前去同他们交流,请用英语写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1. 选择中国寄宿家庭;
2. 多同中国学生交流;
3. 参加校汉语学习班。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Thanks for your attention!
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