读后续写 泰勒、爷爷和亨利故事 讲义-2025届浙江省五校联盟模拟预测英语试题

读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Want to take a walk, Tyler?” Grandpa Charlie called from the front room. “In a minute, Grandpa,” Tyler called back, looking at his mom. “I thought Grandpa wasn’t feeling well, and it’s cold outside. Can he take a walk?” “The fresh air will be good for him. And your grandpa doesn’t want to miss waving at people,” Mama said. “He knows it makes them happy, and when they wave back, it makes him happy, too.” Tyler walked into the front room and saw Grandpa Charlie wrapping a gray scarf around his face and neck. “Hope I don’t look too much like a mummy (木乃伊),” Grandpa Charlie said, his eyes twinkling. He put on his red hat, and they stepped outside. He waved to the first car that passed. A boy stuck his head out the window and yelled, “There’s the man in the red hat!” Grandpa Charlie waved to him and to the people in the next three cars. They all waved back. Grandpa Charlie and Tyler turned a corner. An old man wearing a brown hat and a scarf walked toward them. He was frowning. “Hi, Henry,” Grandpa Charlie said. “I don’t see you out much.” “My doctor is making me take walks for my health, but I don’t like it,” Henry grumbled (抱怨) . “It’s supposed to be autumn, but it feels like the dead of winter.” He pulled his scarf up over his mouth and nose and walked past them. “He’s bad-tempered!” Tyler said in a low voice. “Henry is just lonely. His wife died right after we lost your grandmother.” Suddenly, a gust of wind blew off both men’s hats. The hats flew toward the duck pond, and Henry’s went in. Tyler ran down the hill and grabbed Grandpa Charlie’s hat off the grass and fished Henry’s out of the water. He ran back up the hill, holding out Henry’s hat. “It’s wet. Just throw it away. I’ll have to buy a new hat,” Henry said coldly, walking past Tyler. A car went by, but no one beeped the horn or waved. Grandpa Charlie didn’t seem to notice for he was talking to a neighbor. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Tyler stared at his grandpa’s red hat and came up with a plan. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A car passed, and the people inside waved at Henry. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 泰勒、爷爷和亨利故事的续写 续写要点（两段）​ 第一段：​ 详细描述泰勒看到爷爷红帽子后脑海中计划的形成过程，如回忆爷爷因红帽子受关注，联想到亨利的孤独，从而构思让亨利也拥有红帽子来改变状态，“泰勒看着爷爷的红帽子，思绪飘回到之前人们对爷爷热情挥手的场景。他心想，爷爷因为这顶红帽子给大家带来快乐，自己也收获幸福。而亨利如此孤独，或许一顶红帽子能改变他。这个念头一闪现，泰勒的眼睛亮了起来，一个完整的计划在心中逐渐成型”。​ 具体展现泰勒和爷爷回家制作红帽子的过程，包括挑选颜料、调色、小心翼翼绘画的动作，以及爷爷在旁协助的细节，“回到家，泰勒迫不及待地翻出颜料盒，挑出鲜艳的红色颜料。他和爷爷一起，仔细地将颜料倒入调色盘，慢慢搅拌均匀。泰勒拿起画笔，在爷爷的指导下，一笔一划地给亨利的帽子上色。爷爷不时地提醒他注意边角，两人专注投入，仿佛在创作一件珍贵的艺术品”。​ 深入描写泰勒将红帽子送给亨利时的场景，包括泰勒的真诚话语、表情以及亨利的惊讶反应，“第二天散步时，泰勒紧紧握着红帽子，远远看到亨利，立刻快步上前。他仰着头，眼睛亮晶晶的，真诚地说：‘亨利先生，您说扔掉这帽子，可我觉得红色特别适合您，它能让您心情变好。’亨利愣住了，脸上满是惊讶，一时不知该如何回应，过了好一会儿，才缓缓伸出手接过帽子”。​ 第二段：​ 生动描绘第一辆车向亨利挥手时，亨利的神态、动作，以及内心的震动，“一辆车缓缓驶过，车内的人看到亨利的红帽子，热情地挥手。亨利先是瞪大了眼睛，身体微微一僵，似乎完全没料到会有人向自己打招呼。犹豫了一下，他才慢慢抬起手，轻轻挥了挥，脸上露出一丝不知所措的神情”。​ 具体阐述随着更多车挥手，亨利的变化过程，如表情逐渐丰富、从被动挥手到主动挥手，“又有几辆车经过，每一次有人挥手，亨利的眼睛就亮一分。他不再犹豫，开始主动热情地挥手回应，脸上的笑容也越来越灿烂。他的肩膀不再紧绷，整个人显得轻松自在，仿佛变了一个人”。​ 深入描写亨利向泰勒和爷爷表达感谢时的话语、语气，以及后续生活的改变，“散步结束时，亨利转身面向泰勒和爷爷，声音略带颤抖地说：‘谢谢你们，这顶红帽子不仅改变了今天，还让我看到了生活新的一面。’从那以后，亨利每天都期待着散步，他主动和邻居们打招呼，曾经的坏脾气消失不见，成为了邻里间温暖的存在”。​ 情感线（150 字）​ 泰勒看到亨利的孤独，心生怜悯，决心用爷爷红帽子的启发帮助他，从构思计划时的期待，到制作帽子时的专注，再到送帽子时的真诚，情感逐步递进。亨利从最初的冷漠、孤独，对泰勒送帽子感到惊讶，到收到第一辆车挥手时的震惊、犹豫，随着更多车挥手，逐渐变得开心、主动，最后心怀感激，完成了从封闭自我到融入温暖的情感转变。​ 故事线（6 条）​ 爷爷查理身体不适仍坚持散步，通过戴红帽子向过往车辆挥手，给人们带来快乐，自己也收获幸福。​ 泰勒和爷爷散步时遇到孤独、脾气暴躁的亨利，他因妻子去世心情低落，不喜欢散步。​ 一阵风刮走爷爷和亨利的帽子，泰勒帮忙捡起，亨利却冷漠拒绝湿帽子。​ 泰勒看到爷爷红帽子，受到启发，和爷爷回家将亨利的帽子染成红色，并送给亨利。​ 戴着红帽子的亨利开始收到过往车辆的挥手，从惊讶犹豫到主动热情回应，心情逐渐变好。​ 亨利向泰勒和爷爷表达感谢，从此积极面对生活，融入邻里友好氛围。​ 主旨升华句 5 句英文​ This heartwarming story vividly demonstrates that a simple act of kindness, inspired by the power of connection, can break through the walls of loneliness and transform a person's life.​ 这个温馨的故事生动地表明，一个受情感联结力量启发的简单善举，能够突破孤独的壁垒，改变一个人的生活。​ Through Tyler's initiative and the transformation of Henry, we learn that even the smallest gestures of thoughtfulness can have a profound impact on those in need, spreading warmth and hope.​ 通过泰勒的主动行动和亨利的转变，我们明白，即使是最微小的体贴之举，也能对有需要的人产生深远影响，传播温暖与希望。​ The journey from Henry's isolation to his reconnection with the community showcases the magic of kindness and the remarkable ability of a small act to bridge gaps and bring people together.​ 从亨利的孤立无援到重新融入社区的历程，展示了善良的魔力以及一个小举动跨越隔阂、凝聚人心的非凡能力。​ This narrative serves as a poignant reminder that in a world often filled with coldness, our capacity to show compassion and reach out to others can create a ripple effect, brightening lives and building a more harmonious society.​ 这个故事有力地提醒我们，在一个常常充满冷漠的世界里，我们展现同情、向他人伸出援手的能力能够产生连锁反应，照亮生活，构建一个更和谐的社会。​ From the initial encounter with a grumpy neighbor to the final transformation into a friendly figure, we see that every act of kindness is a seed, which, when planted with love, can grow into a tree of joy, bringing warmth and connection to all.​ 从最初与脾气暴躁的邻居相遇，到最终转变为友好的形象，我们看到每一个善举都是一颗种子，当用爱播种时，它能够长成一棵欢乐之树，给所有人带来温暖与联结。​ 写作示范一​ Tyler stared at his grandpa’s red hat and came up with a plan. He remembered how people always waved at Grandpa Charlie because of his red hat. “Grandpa, I think if Henry had a red hat, people would wave at him too, and he might feel better,” Tyler said. Grandpa Charlie smiled and agreed. Back home, they found some red paint. Tyler carefully painted Henry's hat, his tongue sticking out in concentration. The next day, as they saw Henry, Tyler ran up to him. “Mr. Henry, I made this for you. I hope it makes you as happy as Grandpa's red hat makes him,” Tyler said, holding out the bright red hat. Henry was taken aback. He looked at the hat, then at Tyler, and finally took it with a mumbled “thanks”.​ A car passed, and the people inside waved at Henry. Henry was startled. He hesitated for a moment, then lifted his hand and waved back tentatively. More cars came, and each time someone waved, Henry's face lit up a bit more. By the end of the walk, Henry was beaming. “You know, this red hat has changed my day. I feel like I'm part of something again,” he said to Tyler and Grandpa Charlie. From then on, Henry was a regular in their walks, his once - grumpy face now a friendly sight in the neighborhood.​ 写作示范二​ Tyler stared at his grandpa’s red hat and came up with a plan. He thought about how the red hat had brought so much joy to Grandpa Charlie. “Grandpa, I want to do the same for Henry. Let's make his hat red,” Tyler exclaimed. Grandpa Charlie nodded in approval. They rushed home and got to work. Tyler mixed the red paint, making sure it was the perfect shade. He painted the hat with care, while Grandpa Charlie gave him tips. The next day, Tyler carried the newly - painted hat. When he saw Henry, he walked over bravely. “Mr. Henry, I painted your hat red. I hope it brings you good luck and makes you happy,” Tyler said with a big smile. Henry was surprised but accepted the hat.​ A car passed, and the people inside waved at Henry. Henry was shocked at first. But then, he slowly waved back. As more cars waved, Henry's confidence grew. He started waving with enthusiasm. At the end of the walk, Henry turned to Tyler and Grandpa Charlie. “Thank you. This red hat has made me feel alive again. I used to be so lonely, but now I feel like I belong,” he said. From that day on, Henry looked forward to their walks, and his new - found friendliness made the neighborhood a warmer place.​ 参考答案 Tyler stared at his grandpa’s red hat and came up with a plan. If waving could bring Grandpa joy, maybe it could make Henry’s day too. Tyler thought to himself. Then he asked Grandpa Charlie if he could give the red hat to Henry since his was wet. Grandpa Charlie readily agreed and immediately, Tyler dashed to catch up with Henry. “Grandpa wants you to have his hat.” Tyler said sincerely, presenting the red hat to Henry, who stared at Tyler for a moment. Then he shrugged, took the hat, and put it on. “Tell him thanks,” Henry said, walking away. A car passed, and the people inside waved at Henry. Soon, another car passed and honked. Henry was confused. When the people in the third car waved at him, he hesitated for a moment and waved back, puzzlement still lingering in his mind. Not until a cheerful voice shouted, “Good morning, grandpa in red hat!” did he realized what was going on. He laughed aloud and decided to do something. “Maybe I’ll take more walks,” he said casually as he caught up with Grandpa Charlie and Tyler, his voice softer. “It’s not so bad out here, especially with good company.” Tyler and Grandpa Charlie exchanged a knowing glance, delighted to see Henry’s spirits visibly rise. They continued the walk, the cold air no longer feeling so chilly, as the warmth of kindness and connection filled the day. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$