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At the time I was living in a small village about 25 miles from London. That was the advantage of living there because you could get to London in half an hour. That was by train of course. If you went by car, it’d take about three times as long especially if you travelled in the morning rush hour. The reason why I was giving you this travel information in detail was that I had to make a choice between the car and the train.
I’d seen an advertisement in a national newspaper, which had asked for someone who had some knowledge of computing, had worked at least for two years in car sales and finally was not afraid of travelling up and down the motorway to London every day from a place not far from where I lived. It seemed interesting work and was quite different from the job I had at the time. The interview was to take place at 10:00 a.m. on a Monday morning in January.
Throughout the weekend I couldn’t make up my mind whether to travel by car or by train. At the end of Sunday I decided to drive my car because after all the job was to do with cars.
On the day of the interview I got up at 6:00 a.m. as I was terrified of being late. I usually woke up early because of the loud noise of the traffic outside my bedroom window in the morning. On this particular morning, everything seemed strangely silent. I looked out of the window and realized why: There was a thick blanket of snow on the road and it was still snowing heavily. I panicked. Clearly now I’d have to go by train. I telephoned the station and asked what time the next train down to London would be. I was informed that all services had been cancelled. I asked by whom they had been cancelled. I never knew the answer to that question because I’d been cut off.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Obviously I would have to rethink of driving for the day.
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However, soon after, my car broke down because of the slippery road.
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雪天求职故事的续写
续写要点(两段)
第一段:
详细描述 “我” 决定开车后匆忙做准备的过程,如翻找厚衣物时的急切动作、在雪地里清理车上积雪的艰难操作,“我在衣柜里疯狂翻找,拽出那件最厚的羽绒服,又匆匆套上笨重的雪地靴。冲到车旁,拿起铲子用力铲着堆积在车顶、车窗的积雪,寒风如刀割般划过脸颊,双手很快被冻得通红,但我一刻也不敢停歇”。
着重刻画开车上路时的紧张状态,包括小心翼翼启动汽车的动作、对路况的密切关注,“我深吸一口气,按下启动按钮,汽车发出几声轰鸣后终于缓缓启动。眼睛紧紧盯着前方,双手死死握住方向盘,每前行一米都像是在挑战极限,车轮在雪地上时不时打滑,我的心也跟着提到了嗓子眼”。
突出 “我” 面对困难时的坚持,如内心的自我鼓励,“尽管困难重重,可我心里只有一个念头:一定要赶上这次面试,不能放弃。每一次车轮的转动,都像是在给自己加油打气”。
第二段:
深入描绘车抛锚后 “我” 的绝望,如眼神中的无助、身体的颓然姿态,“看着汽车彻底熄火,周围车辆一辆辆疾驰而过,我感觉整个世界都陷入了黑暗。瘫坐在驾驶座上,眼神空洞,双手无力地垂着,满心都是挫败感,开始怀疑自己是不是注定要错过这次机会”。
具体展现好心司机出现及帮忙修车的细节,包括司机停车时的举动、检查车辆时的专业动作和沟通的话语,“一辆车缓缓停在我旁边,一位中年男子从车上下来,他拍了拍我的车窗,温和地说:‘别着急,我看看。’他熟练地打开引擎盖,仔细检查线路和零件,边看边安慰我:‘问题不大,很快就能修好。’”。
细致描写 “我” 继续上路及到达面试地点后的复杂心情,如对陌生人的感激、对自己坚持的欣慰,“车修好后,我连声道谢,重新踏上旅程。当看到面试大楼时,心中满是感激,感激那位陌生司机的帮助,也庆幸自己在重重困难下没有放弃,终于抓住了这次机会”。
情感线(150 字)
决定开车时,“我” 从焦虑犹豫转为坚定,满怀希望地应对雪天挑战。车抛锚瞬间,希望破灭,陷入极度绝望,觉得面试无望。好心司机出现帮忙,“我” 重燃希望,内心满是感激。到达面试地点,感恩与欣慰交织,因坚持和陌生人的善举,成功克服困难,完成了从绝望到希望的情感转变。
故事线(6 条)
“我” 看到一份汽车销售相关工作的广告,要求具备计算机知识、两年工作经验且能通勤,决定去面试。
面试在周一上午,整个周末 “我” 纠结是开车还是坐火车前往,最终决定开车。
面试当天清晨,发现下大雪,火车停运,无奈决定开车,匆忙准备后艰难上路。
路上车因路面湿滑抛锚,“我” 陷入绝望,多次尝试启动无果。
一位好心司机停车帮忙,检查并修好车,“我” 继续出发。
“我” 最终及时赶到面试地点,对陌生人的帮助心怀感激,庆幸自己坚持下来。
主旨升华句 5 句英文
This arduous journey vividly demonstrates that perseverance in the face of unexpected obstacles can turn despair into hope, and the kindness of strangers can be the beacon that lights our way forward.
这段艰难的旅程生动地表明,在面对意外障碍时坚持不懈能将绝望化为希望,而陌生人的善意可以成为照亮我们前行道路的灯塔。
Through this experience, we learn that life is full of unpredictable challenges, but it's our determination and the helping hands from others that enable us to overcome difficulties and reach our goals.
通过这次经历,我们明白生活充满了不可预测的挑战,但正是我们的决心和他人的援手使我们能够克服困难并实现目标。
The transformation from a seemingly hopeless situation to a successful arrival at the interview showcases the power of never giving up and the profound impact of human kindness in our lives.
从看似绝望的境地到成功到达面试现场的转变,展示了永不放弃的力量以及人性之善在我们生活中的深远影响。
This narrative serves as a poignant reminder that even in the harshest circumstances, a glimmer of hope can emerge, often from the most unexpected sources, inspiring us to keep moving forward.
这个故事有力地提醒我们,即使在最恶劣的环境中,希望的曙光也可能出现,而且往往来自最意想不到的地方,激励我们不断前进。
From the initial decision to brave the snow - covered road to the final achievement of reaching the interview on time, we see that every step of perseverance and every act of kindness contribute to the beauty and resilience of our life journey.
从最初决定勇敢踏上积雪的道路,到最终成功按时到达面试地点,我们看到每一步的坚持和每一个善举都为我们人生旅程的美好和坚韧增添色彩。
写作示范一
Obviously I would have to rethink of driving for the day. Panic set in as I realized the gravity of the situation. I rummaged through my closet, pulling out my heaviest winter gear. Outside, the snow was piling up, making the task of clearing my car a daunting one. After what felt like an eternity, I managed to start the engine. The drive was nerve - wracking. The roads were like ice rinks, and I inched forward, my knuckles white from gripping the wheel. But I was determined not to let the snow stop me.
However, soon after, my car broke down because of the slippery road. Despair washed over me as I watched the world pass by. I tried everything to get the car started, but to no avail. Just when I was on the verge of tears, a car pulled up beside me. A kind - faced man got out. “Let me take a look,” he said. He spent a few minutes under the hood and then, to my relief, the engine roared back to life. I thanked him profusely and continued my journey. When I finally reached the interview, I was filled with gratitude for the stranger's help and proud of myself for not giving up.
写作示范二
Obviously I would have to rethink of driving for the day. Without a moment's hesitation, I sprinted to my car. I grabbed a broom and furiously swept the snow off the windshield and roof. The cold seeped through my gloves, but I ignored it. Once the car was clear, I jumped in and turned the key. The engine sputtered, but finally caught. The drive was terrifying. Every turn was a battle against the slippery road. But I refused to be defeated.
However, soon after, my car broke down because of the slippery road. I sat in my car, feeling completely alone. I called for help, but my phone had no signal. Just as I was about to lose all hope, a pickup truck stopped. The driver, a burly man, came over and asked what was wrong. He quickly diagnosed the problem and fixed it. I was speechless with gratitude. I drove the rest of the way, my heart full of thanks. When I arrived at the interview, I knew that this day would be one I'd never forget, a day of perseverance and the kindness of strangers.
参考答案
Obviously I would have to rethink of driving for the day. After breakfast I managed to brush off all the snow from the car and fortunately I managed to get it started at the third attempt. Before long, I saw an enormous queue of cars one behind the other. I realized I was stuck right in the middle of a huge traffic jam. However, within five minutes the traffic was moving again and for the next two miles I was driving along the motorway at quite a good speed.
However, soon after, my car broke down because of the slippery road. There were still about 10 miles to go. Immediately, I called the car assistance firm, who promised to come soon. I also phoned the firm I was supposed to have an interview with, sincerely apologizing I might be a little late. Eventually I reached my destination at 11:30 a.m. The interviewers asked me some really difficult questions. I sadly thought I’d failed. But two days later, I received an e-mail from them, reading they offered me the job because I still rushed to their company for the interview in such cold and terrible weather and they saw my potential excellent qualities.
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