内容正文:
Practical Writing On Advice Letter
更多精美模板请访问卡卡办公网:https://www.kakappt.com
finish an persuasive advice letter to deal with practical problems.
obtain and practice some common expressions.
be familiar with the structure of an advice letter and useful linking words.
Learning Objectives
By the end of the class class, you will be able to:
2
01
Lead - in
3
What’s wrong with him?
A depressed(抑郁的) boy who has just failed an exam. He loses confidence in study.
4
A letter of advice is written to someone who has a problem and doesn’t know how to solve it. You try to help solve the problem by offering useful advice in a letter of advice.
Write a letter of advice
Today’s Task
5
02
A journey of giving advice
6
Station 1 To be a problem finder
7
He feels ____________ because ______________
______________________
considerate
empathy
Station 1 To be a problem finder
upset/stressed/blue/depressed/gloomy…
he didn’t know what to do
/he lost confidence in himself…
8
Station 2 To be a solution seeker
9
Scientific Learning method
Lifestyle & attitude
Learning & relaxation
Time planning
pair
work
Station 2 To be a solution seeker
…
…
10
Solution Pool
Station 2 To be a solution seeker
Make a good self-study plan
Do one’s best in time arrangement
keep a balance between study and relaxation
Be an autonomous learner
Be optimistic and positive
Eat healthy and enough sleep
fitting
down to earth
ideas
11
Station 3 To be a suggestion maker
12
Build your language
1. What would you say to show empathy (共情)?
2. What expressions will you use when you give advice?
3. How would you end the letter of advice?
Station 3 To be an advice giver
13
Build your language
1. What would you say to show empathy?
You have every right to feel upset about that.
I am sorry to hear that you feel lonely and upset when…
It’s totally normal to feel this way.
How can you have such a feeling…
I understand your feelings.
……
Station 3 To be a suggestion maker
nice
14
Build your language
2. What expressions will you use when you give advice?
If I were you, I would…
Try these pieces of advice and see if they help…
You can begin with something like…
Why not…? If you do this, you are likely to …
I feel that it would be helpful if…
You might as well…
……
Station 3 To be a suggestion maker
convincing
15
Build your language
3. What would you end the letter of advice?
I hope my suggestions will be of help to you.
Whatever you decide to do, good luck!
I will be glad if you find my suggestions practical and useful
……
Station 3 To be a suggestion maker
encouraging
16
Part 1: Show your _____________
Part 2: Offer ________________ on how to solve
the problem
Part 3: End the letter with _____________ message
understanding
advice/ solutions
Beginning
Body
Ending
linking words
firstly, secondly, thirdly
above all, besides, finally
to begin with, in addition, eventually
in the first place, what’s more, furthermore
optimistic
organized
Station 3 To be a suggestion maker
Build your language
17
03
Writing
18
19
structure
linking words
handwriting
complex sentences
Dear gloomy boy,
I am sorry to hear that ________ when you __________________. I know how you feel.
But remember,
In addition,
What’s more,
____________________________________________________I wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ideas
Promise to keep a balance between study and relaxation
Do your best in time arrangement
Be an autonomous learner
Make a good self-study plan
Be optimistic and positive
Eat healthily and get enough sleep
Languages
You have every right to feel upset about that.
I am sorry to hear that you feel depressed and frustrated when…
It’s totally normal to feel this way.
If I were you, I would…
Why not…?if you do this, you are likely to …
I feel that it would be helpful if…
You might as well…
I hope my suggestions will be of help to you.
I will be glad if you find my suggestions practical and useful
20
Criteria 3 2 1 0
Subject
(stick to the point)
Structure
(organized & linking words)
Accuracy(准确性)
(grammar & spelling)
Handwriting
Complex Sentences
(proper using)
neat
21
04
Conclusion
22
A practical writing appeared in NMET
Conclusion
considerate
empathy
neat
nice
convincing
encouraging
fitting
down to earth
ideas
optimistic
24
confidence
Conclusion
considerate
empathy
neat
nice
convincing
encouraging
fitting
down to earth
ideas
optimistic
c
o
n
f
i
d
e
n
c
e
If you try your best, you are the best!
人生只有走出来的美丽,没有等出来的辉煌!
25
I still am the one I used to be
我还是从前那个少年
Never change it from begin
没有一丝丝改变
Whenever the time moves on
无论时光怎样流逝
The faith inside my heart never fade away
心中信念丝毫未减
You stand there next to me
你就站在我身边
You can feel it when I speak
当我开口你会感受到
Never fake it about my honesty
我毫不虚假的诚挚
Say never never give up, like a fire
永不言弃,如火如荼
Homework
Please finish or polish your advice letter.
You may exchange it with your group mates and give an evaluation according to the criteria.
Lavf59.27.100
F00000000NXU
Transcoded by Arctime Pro 4.1
null
40803.13
$$