2025届山东省德州市高三下学期一模英语试题读后续写:玩具小狗故事 讲义

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读后续写 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I had always wanted a dog since young. My parents were against the idea, saying that taking care of a dog was a lifetime commitment. On my tenth birthday, Father stepped into the house and announced, “Nancy, you have a new puppy!” I shouted in delight and ran towards Father, only to find it was a toy puppy. My face fell. I turned away. Father explained, “This is a ‘Think-It-Over’ puppy. You should try taking care of it before deciding about a real dog.” The puppy did look like a real dog from a distance and it even had a dog smell. Inside its body was a computer programmed to make barking sounds. Father handed me a key, which could be stuck into its back to stop its barking. I accepted the puppy, which I named Friday since it was Friday that day. That evening, my friends and I decided to take Friday to a dog café. It was freezing cold, so I wrapped it in a blanket as if it were a real dog. The computer inside could tell if someone treated it badly, like shaking or not caring for it, and I did not want that recorded. Having waited in line, we finally got a table. The waiter, not knowing I was carrying a false puppy, asked attentively if I would need a basket with cushion. I told him, “Oh, it’s not a real puppy, but...” Before I could finish my sentence, he gave me an unpleasant look, turned and served other diners who were right there to play with the café’s dogs. I might have seemed unusual to him. During our meal, my friends and I received strange looks from the other dog owners in the café. We ignored them and continued with our own conversation. After dinner, we went to a nearby shopping mall, where customers were selecting their favorites. My friends were looking at clothes, but I couldn’t. The puppy I was carrying was becoming increasingly heavy. Extremely tired of Friday, I put it down in a corner and just wandered around, seeking clothes I could try on. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Suddenly, Friday started to bark like a real dog. The moment I got home, I handed Friday to Father, tears in eyes. 玩具小狗故事的续写 续写要点(两段)​ 第一段:​ 详细描述 Friday 突然大声吠叫时商场里的混乱场景。具体刻画购物者们惊讶的表情、停下脚步的动作,以及孩子们兴奋奔跑过来的样子。​ 着重描写 “我” 在慌乱中寻找钥匙的狼狈状态,如双手颤抖、口袋翻找的细节,以及钥匙掉落时的焦急心情。​ 突出周围人的反应对 “我” 造成的心理压力,通过 “我” 脸红、尴尬等表现,展现 “我” 当时的窘迫。​ 第二段:​ 生动展现 “我” 回家后向父亲坦白时的愧疚神情,如流泪、低头等动作。​ 深入阐述 “我” 从这次经历中对照顾真实小狗的责任有了怎样更深刻的理解,通过具体话语体现 “我” 思想的转变。​ 描绘父亲对 “我” 的理解与鼓励,包括他的微笑、拍头动作以及肯定的话语,最后说明 “我” 为未来照顾真狗所做的准备。​ 情感线(150 字)​ 起初,“我” 带着 Friday 在商场,因它突然吠叫陷入极度窘迫,内心充满尴尬与慌乱,害怕众人异样的目光。回家后,“我” 对自己之前放下 Friday 不管的行为深感愧疚,意识到自己的不负责任。向父亲坦白时,满心懊悔,泪水涌出。听到父亲的理解与鼓励后,“我” 内心转为坚定,决定努力学习宠物护理知识,为未来真正拥有小狗做好准备,情感从羞愧逐步走向积极面对与成长。​ 故事线(6 条)​ “我” 从小渴望养狗,父母因责任问题反对,在 “我” 十岁生日时父亲带来玩具小狗 Friday,让 “我” 体验照顾小狗。​ 当晚,“我” 和朋友带 Friday 去狗咖啡馆,因它是玩具小狗遭服务员和其他顾客异样眼光。​ 饭后去商场,“我” 因携带 Friday 疲惫,将它放在角落,之后 Friday 突然大声吠叫引发商场混乱。​ “我” 慌乱寻找钥匙停止 Friday 吠叫,过程中十分窘迫,周围人反应让 “我” 倍感压力。​ “我” 回家后向父亲坦白,认识到自己的不负责任,表达还未准备好养真狗的想法。​ 父亲理解并鼓励 “我”,“我” 开始学习宠物护理知识,为养真狗做准备。​ 主旨升华句 5 句英文​ This experience with the toy puppy vividly demonstrates that true responsibility is not merely about physical care but also about the emotional and mental commitment to another being.​ 与玩具小狗的这次经历生动地表明,真正的责任不仅关乎身体上的照顾,还涉及对另一个生命的情感和精神投入。​ Through the chaos caused by the barking toy puppy, we learn that understanding the challenges of pet - keeping is essential before taking on the lifelong commitment of having a real pet.​ 通过玩具小狗吠叫引发的混乱,我们明白在承担养一只真正宠物的终身责任之前,了解养宠物的挑战至关重要。​ The journey with Friday teaches us that self - reflection and the recognition of one's own shortcomings are the first steps towards growing into a responsible pet owner.​ 与 Friday 的这段经历告诉我们,自我反思和认识到自己的不足是成长为一个负责任的宠物主人的第一步。​ This story serves as a powerful reminder that the path to fulfilling our desires, such as having a dog, requires patience, learning, and the willingness to shoulder the associated responsibilities.​ 这个故事有力地提醒我们,实现我们的愿望,比如拥有一只狗,需要耐心、学习以及承担相关责任的意愿。​ From the initial excitement of getting a toy puppy to the profound realization of responsibility, we see that every experience, even a challenging one, can be a valuable lesson in personal growth and preparation for future commitments.​ 从最初得到玩具小狗的兴奋到对责任的深刻认识,我们看到,每一次经历,即使是充满挑战的经历,都可以成为个人成长和为未来责任做准备的宝贵一课。​ 写作示范一​ Suddenly, Friday started to bark like a real dog. The shrill barking echoed through the mall, instantly halting the bustling activity. Shoppers stared in disbelief, some pointing and whispering. A group of kids rushed over, their eyes sparkling with joy. “Is it a real puppy?” one of them exclaimed. My heart raced as I frantically searched for the key. My hands trembled so much that I dropped it twice. As I bent down to pick it up, I could feel the eyes of the crowd on me. Finally, with a sigh of relief, I managed to insert the key and silence Friday.​ The moment I got home, I handed Friday to Father, tears in eyes. “Dad, I was so irresponsible. I left Friday in the corner and then this happened. I realize now that taking care of a real dog is much harder than I thought. I'm not ready yet,” I sobbed. Father hugged me gently and said, “It's okay, Nancy. This is a learning experience. I'm proud of you for understanding.” From that day on, I dedicated myself to reading books about pet care, determined to be fully prepared when the time for a real dog came.​ 写作示范二​ Suddenly, Friday started to bark like a real dog. The loud barking startled everyone in the mall. People turned their heads, and some even jumped in surprise. A little girl tugged at her mother's hand, saying, “Look, a puppy!” I was mortified, my hands shaking as I dug through my pocket for the key. In my nervousness, I dropped it on the floor. As I scrambled to pick it up, the barking seemed to get louder. Finally, after what felt like an eternity, I managed to stop the noise.​ The moment I got home, I handed Friday to Father, tears in eyes. “I'm sorry, Dad. I was so thoughtless. I didn't take good care of Friday, and today was a disaster. I understand now that having a real dog means being responsible all the time. I need to learn more,” I said. Father smiled warmly and replied, “That's the spirit, Nancy. I know you'll be a great pet owner someday.” With new determination, I enrolled in an online pet - care course, looking forward to the day when I could welcome a real dog into my life.​ 参考答案 Suddenly, Friday started to bark like a real dog. It barked so loudly as if protesting against my previous disrespect, which immediately attracted curious stares of the shoppers. Some even blamed me in annoyance for making the dog produce such a noise. Embarrassed and panicked, I was at a loss what to do. My friends came running to me and urged me to take out the key. Not until then did I think of the solution. The barking ceased but I was overwhelmed with tiredness and depression. With everyone watching, I picked up Friday with a blushing face, racing out of the mall. The moment I got home, I handed Friday to Father, tears in eyes. “So Friday has upset you?” Father asked. Discouraged, I told him everything that had happened. Father listened quietly and said smilingly, “See why I gave you the ‘Think-It-Over’ puppy? Taking care of a real dog is even more challenging. You need to be responsible all the time.” I nodded, realizing I hadn’t been as committed as I thought. I wiped my tears, saying firmly, “Father, I’ll be ready for a real dog. Trust me.” From then on, I did what I could to take better care of Friday, learning how to be a responsible and capable pet owner. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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