内容正文:
高考应用文写作话题之——讨论“汉语热”
写作技巧:
一、文体解读
语言学习是学校生活的一部分,此类写作中往往表达在学习语言的过程中遇到的困难,从而向他人求助,或者学习某门外语的收获,他人给予的鼓励和赞美,并解释学习外语的技巧和方法,强调学习语言的重要性等。此话题写作可以是信件或邮件类应用文、说明文或议论文。
二、篇章结构
第一段:描述现象;
第二段:解释原因;
第三段:发表看法。
写作素材:
一、亮点词汇
1.give advice on... 在……方面给出建议
2.enlarge one’s vocabulary 扩大某人的词汇量
3.take a Chinese course 参加汉语课程
4.communicate with 与 ……交流
5.form the habit of 养成……的习惯
6.translate...into... 把……翻译成……
7.make progress 取得进步
8.have a good command/knowledge of 精通,掌握
9.be fluent in 在……流利
10.be beneficial/of benefit to 对……有益
二、高级句式
1.I’m more than happy to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
我非常高兴收到你的来信,征询我如何学好中文的建议。
2.I’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.
我写信给你一些关于如何学好中文的建议。
3.Talking with people whose mother language is Chinese is a good way to improve your Chinese.
和以汉语为母语的人交谈是提高中文水平的好方法。
4.The way to learn a language is to practice speaking it as much as possible.
学习一门语言的方法就是要尽量多地练习说它。
5.You should seize every opportunity to practise speaking Chinese,not afraid of making mistakes.
你应该抓住一切机会练习说中文,不要怕犯错误。
6.You can also learn more about the culture behind the language,and when you understand the cultural background,you can use the language better.
你也可以了解更多关于语言背后的文化知识,当你理解了文化背景,你就能更好地运用语言。
7.I hope my advice will be of benefit/beneficial to you.
我希望我的建议对你有益。
8.If you have any questions or requests,please don’t hesitate to tell me.
如果你有任何问题或要求,请及时告诉我。
分步写作:
假如你是李华,你校英文报正在以“The popularity of learning Chinese”为主题进行征稿,请你写一篇短文向英文报投稿,内容包括:
1.介绍越来越多的外国人选择学习汉语这一现象;
2.针对这个现象发表你的看法(可分析汉语受欢迎的原因等);
3.阐述你对学习汉语在未来是否会继续流行的看法,并分析原因。
注意:可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第一步 审题谋篇
体裁
说明文
主题
就“汉语热”现象谈看法
人称
以第一、三人称为主
时态
谋篇
以一般现在时为主
第一段:介绍此现象。可以举一两个西方人学习汉语的典型例子;
第二段:就这个现象发表你的看法;
第三段:阐述你对学习汉语在未来是否会继续流行的看法,并分析原因。
第二步 要点翻译
1.学习汉语在外国人中越来越受欢迎。
Learning Chinese is gaining more and more popularity among foreigners.
2.据估计,现在有1亿外国人在学习汉语。
As estimated,100 million foreigners are now learning Chinese.
3.有几个因素可以解释人们对它的热情。
Several factors account for the enthusiasm for it.
4.随着中国经济的快速发展,学习汉语可以帮助人们获得更多的工作机会。
With Chinese__economy__developing__rapidly,learning Chinese may help people get more job opportunities.
5.它提供了了解中国的独特文化和悠久历史的途径。
It provides access to Chinese__unique__culture__and__long__history.
6.由于中国丰富的自然景观和人文景观,越来越多的外国游客开始到中国旅游。
Due__to__the__plenty__of__natural__landscapes__and__scenery__of__humanities in China,more and more foreign tourists start to travel in China.
7.他们对学习汉语表现出浓厚的兴趣。
They show__great__interest__in learning Chinese.
8.随着中国的不断发展,汉语学习的流行度将会保持蓬勃发展。
With the continuous development of China,the popularity of Chinese learning will__keep__booming.
9.它帮助人们从一个新的角度看生活,并开阔他们的眼界,让他们看到外面的世界。
It helps people see__life__from__a__new__perspective__and__broadens__their__
minds to the outside world.
第三步 词句升级
1.用It is estimated that...升级要点2
It__is__estimated__that__100__million__foreigners__are__now__learning__Chinese
2.用not only...but also...的部分倒装句式升级要点4和要点5
With Chinese economy developing rapidly,not__only__may__learning__Chinese__
help__people__get__more__job__opportunities,but__it__also__provides__access__to Chinese unique culture and long history.
3.用定语从句升级要点6和要点7
Due to the plenty of natural landscapes and scenery of humanities in China,more and more foreign tourists start to travel in China,who__show__great__interest__in__
learning__Chinese.
4.用which引导的非限制性定语从句升级要点8和要点9
With the continuous development of China,the popularity of Chinese learning will keep booming,which__helps__people__see__life__from__a__new__perspective__
and__broadens__their__minds__to__the__outside__world.
第四步 连句成篇
In recent years,learning Chinese is gaining more and more popularity among foreigners.It is estimated that 100 million foreigners are now learning Chinese.
From my point of view,several factors account for the enthusiasm for it.Above all,with Chinese economy developing rapidly,not only may learning Chinese help people get more job opportunities,but it also provides access to Chinese unique culture and long history.Furthermore,due to the plenty of natural landscapes and scenery of humanities in China,more and more foreign tourists start to travel in China,who show great interest in learning Chinese.
In my opinion,with the continuous development of China,the popularity of Chinese learning will keep booming,which helps people see life from a new perspective and broadens their minds to the outside world.
第五步 当堂训练
(2023·广东·华南师大附中校考三模)你是高中学生李华,你的英国朋友Anna计划明年夏天高中毕业后来中国游玩,准备提前学一点汉语。她来email询问你关于汉语学习的建议。请给Anna回信,主要内容包括:
1.学习难点;
2.方法建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Anna,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Anna,
It’s wonderful to hear you’re planning to visit China and learning Chinese! I am thrilled to offer some advice that may help you along your language learning journey.
Firstly, one of the biggest challenges of learning Chinese is the pronunciation and tones. The four basic tones in Chinese can be tricky, and even slight variations in tone can change the meaning of a word. Listening to native speakers and practicing with a tutor or language partner can help you to develop your ear for the language and improve your pronunciation. Another challenge is getting used to the grammar. Chinese sentence structure is quite different from that of English, so it may take some time to adjust. I suggest starting with basic sentence patterns and gradually working your way up to more complex structures. It may also be helpful to focus on learning practical vocabulary related to travel, such as directions, transportation, and ordering food. This will enable you to communicate more effectively during your trip.
I hope these tips are helpful to you, and I wish you the best of luck in your language learning journey. Don’t forget to have fun exploring the language and culture of China!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给计划明年夏天高中毕业后来中国游玩并准备学点汉语的英国朋友Anna写一封关于汉语学习建议的信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled→excited
习惯:get used to→become used to
有帮助的:be helpful→be of help
适应:adjust→adapt
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I suggest starting with basic sentence patterns and gradually working your way up to more complex structures.
拓展句:I suggest that you start with basic sentence patterns and gradually work your way up to more complex structures.
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