专题09 书面表达15篇（上海市高考模拟真题）（第一期）-备战2025年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(上海专用)

专题09 书面表达15篇 (上海市高考模拟) 基础语篇巩固练 1．（2025·上海·二模）假如你是浦汇中学的学生会主席李华。下周德国Bayern中学的师生将在来沪访问的期间，造访学校半天。学校打算安排一次文化交流活动。现在拟从三个备选方案中选一个： （1）剪纸教学；（2）舞龙（Dragon Dance）表演；（3）足球友谊赛。 请写一封信给校长，信的内容包括：①你推荐的方案；②你推荐的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（24-25高三上·上海金山·阶段练习）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在开展主题为“居家上课期间我学会了……”的征文活动。你有意参加，写一篇短文，内容须包括： 1）你学会的技能； 2）学会这项技能对你的帮助。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2025·上海·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是未来中学的高三学生小星，正在完成一份英语学科的跨文化研习课题。请根据以下给出的报告提纲，撰写一篇文章阐述研究所得。 Festivals in China and Western CountriesReporter: Xiao Xing Steps 1. Choose one typical festival from each of China and Western Countries. 2. Compare the two festivals in at least two aspects, whether in common or different. (Such as the cultural background, ways to celebrate, etc.) 3. Analyze why these features are in common or different. 4. Find commonalities or differences between Chinese and Western cultures the festivals reflect. (if any, or can be omitted) Main Text ………… ………… ………… _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2025·上海崇明·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生徐晶，近期你居住的社区打算在社区微信平台上开展一个“和谐社区”的短视频展评活动，并要求配上介绍。你对该活动很感兴趣，写一篇短文作为你参展短视频的介绍，内容须包括： 你参展短视频的名称和内容； 你选择这些内容的理由。 注：邮件中不得透露你的真实信息。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2025·上海青浦·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青，你校英语报面向高三学生开辟了“未来之路”的专栏，征集学生对于大学专业选择和未来职业规划的想法，请你投稿，你的文章须包括： (1)简要描述你心仪的大学专业和未来职业规划； (2)陈述你的理由。 (注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2025·上海普陀·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学高三学生李明，收到你英国笔友Mike的来信 (内容如下) 。请你给Mike写一封回信，提供建议。你的回信须包含以下内容： (1) 你推荐的博物馆或美术馆，以及其中的某件展品； (2) 你去该场所的经历以及推荐的理由。 Hi Li Ming, I’m going to visit China this summer. I’m particularly interested in exploring some of the museums or galleries you’ve enjoyed. Could you recommend one? Looking forward to your suggestions! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks, Mike 7．（2025·上海闵行·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是高三学生李华，你校这学期邀请外教Tim做系列的英语讲座，上周Tim做了关于英语词汇学习的讲座，同学们感觉很有收获。请你给Tim写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.表达感谢并说明原因； 2. 建议下周讲座的内容。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2025·上海浦东新·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 明启中学将组织学生开展为期三天的研学活动，现有三个主题，分别为：“访问友校” “走进大学” “深入企业”。假如你是该校学生李华，请写一封申请信给负责人，报名参加其中一项活动，内容须包括： 1. 你选择的主题； 2. 你希望学到的内容； 3. 你学这些内容的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2025·上海徐汇·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below. 你是明启中学高三学生王华，你的好友李明来信邀请你和他一起创办一个公众号（a public account），通过文字、图片、视频等多种形式向国内外读者推广和传播中国文化。请你给他回信，内容须包括： (1)你对该想法的支持和赞赏； (2)你对合作的期待和对分工的建议。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2025·上海宝山·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是民启中学的学生李明，学校最近要接待一批外国学生，正在招募陪同解说员，给外国学生介绍学校的体育馆、图书馆和食堂，每个场所需要一个陪同解说员。请选择其中一个场所应聘解说，写一份解说稿。你的文章必须包括： ·你所选场所的名称及其特点； ·你的同学最喜欢这个场所的哪些方面及其原因。 （文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（24-25高三上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是启明中学的王磊，你校学生会即将组织“中国传统节日文化体验与交流”系列活动，目前系列中的第一个活动的方案已在校园网发布，该活动将在4月2日举行，并面向全校师生征求意见。请写一封邮件，你的邮件必须包括以下内容： 1. 提出你觉得需要进行改进的地方和改进意见 2. 你的具体理由 活动方案： ✧  主题：介绍清明节 ✧  形式：讲座 ✧  内容：介绍清明节的由来、传统以及其重要性 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（2025·上海长宁·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。你校英语节即将举行主题为“爱的传递”的捐书活动，旨在为边远地区的贫困学生募集一批图书。活动要求每位同学捐出一本自己最喜爱的书，并写一篇短文，内容须包括： （1）对该书内容的简单介绍； （2）你最喜爱该书的理由； （3）你希望通过该书传递给边远地区贫困学生怎样的爱和希望。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（24-25高三上·上海静安·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是高三学生李华，你所属的学校本学期实行午餐自助餐制（buffet lunch），目前发现了食物浪费和饮食不均衡等问题，有人建议取消自助餐制。给校长写电子邮件，谈谈你的看法。邮件中必须包括： 1. 你是否赞成取消自助餐制； 2. 你的理由； 3. 如赞成，你建议的新就餐形式/如反对，你建议的改进措施。 （邮件中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 重难语篇拔高练 14．（24-25高三上·上海金山·阶段练习）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 如下为央广网8月6日的一则消息。请你向校报投一篇稿子，简要描述“买谷子”现象，分析现象背后可能的原因，并提出相应的措施或建议。 On August 6, Beijing news from CNR (China National Radio) (reported by Guo Jiali) “WeChat payment received 411 yuan,” “Payment received 59 yuan”. During the summer vacation, the sound of payment notifications kept ringing in a “goods shop” (a shop selling anime-related products, translated as “gu zi” in Chinese) in Beijing. A group of middle school students, dressed in their school uniforms and carrying schoolbags, skillfully took out their phones to settle the bill at the cashier’s desk and then tore open the packaging. Very quickly, a box of blind-boxed badge featuring a certain anime sold out in the shop. 注：“谷子”是英语goods的音译，涵盖种类广泛，包括“吧唧”(badges)、钥匙扣(keychains)、挂件(pendants)、卡片、拍立得(instant cameras)、玩偶等制品，可以广义地理解为漫画、动漫(anime)、游戏等版权作品衍生出的周边产品。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（2025·上海虹口·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生王磊，在一本英语文化类杂志上读到一则“我家的传统”的征稿通知(内容如下)。你对此很有兴趣，请根据征稿要求写一篇短文。 Call for Submissions: Essays on “A Tradition in My Family”We invite you to share your thoughts on the theme “A Tradition in My Family.” Submission Guidelines: 1. Introduce the most valued family tradition. 2. Explain why this tradition is important for your family. We look forward to your contributions! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题09 书面表达15篇 (上海市高考模拟) 基础语篇巩固练 1．（2025·上海·二模）假如你是浦汇中学的学生会主席李华。下周德国Bayern中学的师生将在来沪访问的期间，造访学校半天。学校打算安排一次文化交流活动。现在拟从三个备选方案中选一个： （1）剪纸教学；（2）舞龙（Dragon Dance）表演；（3）足球友谊赛。 请写一封信给校长，信的内容包括：①你推荐的方案；②你推荐的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear headmaster, I am Li Hua, the president of the student union. Regarding the upcoming half-day visit of the teachers and students from Bayern Middle School in Germany, I would like to recommend the “Dragon Dance performance” as the cultural exchange activity. The Dragon Dance is a very representative traditional Chinese cultural item. It can vividly show the unique charm of Chinese culture. Through the dynamic performance of the Dragon Dance, the German guests can feel the enthusiasm and vitality of the Chinese people. Moreover, compared with paper-cutting and a friendly football match, the Dragon Dance performance can be more easily understood and enjoyed by everyone at once, which can leave a deep and wonderful impression on our foreign friends. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】导语：本文是一篇应用文。要求考生给校长写一封信，从给出的选项中推荐一项文化交流活动并说明推荐的理由。 1. 词汇积累 想要做某事：would like to do → want to do 此外：moreover → what’s more 比赛：match → competition 喜欢：be fond of→ enjoy 2. 句式拓展 合并句子 原句：The Dragon Dance is a very representative traditional Chinese cultural item. It can vividly show the unique charm of Chinese culture. 拓展句：The Dragon Dance is a very representative traditional Chinese cultural item, which can vividly show the unique charm of Chinese culture. 点睛： 【高分句型1】Moreover, compared with paper-cutting and a friendly football match, the Dragon Dance performance can be more easily understood and enjoyed by everyone at once, which can leave a deep and wonderful impression on our foreign friends. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Regarding the upcoming half-day visit of the teachers and students from Bayern Middle School in Germany, I would like to recommend the “Dragon Dance performance” as the cultural exchange activity. （运用了现在分词短语作状语） 2．（24-25高三上·上海金山·阶段练习）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在开展主题为“居家上课期间我学会了……”的征文活动。你有意参加，写一篇短文，内容须包括： 1）你学会的技能； 2）学会这项技能对你的帮助。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    As we all remember, the pandemic stroke Shanghai and we went through a hard time. During that time, we had to have our classes online at home. With all the inconveniences, I gradually obtained a skill — making timetables. Making a timetable enabled me to live a regular life during the lockdown. While sitting still all day in front of the computer, I listed things I should do between every class such as drinking water, doing eye exercises and stretching my bones, thanks to which I kept my body at a healthy level. What’s more, the skill also pushed me more productive. I used to be dilatory in my homework, but with the timetable, I grew self-disciplined little by little. With the new skill I learned, I’ve improved my scores and lifestyle. Now I’m energetic and I’ve got new understandings of the subjects. And I would recommend everyone to cultivate a skill like this. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就校英语报正在开展的主题为“居家上课期间我学会了……”的征文活动写一篇短文参赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 获得：obtain→acquire 由于：thanks to→due to 此外：what’s more→in addition 提高：improve→promote 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：And I would recommend everyone to cultivate a skill like this. 拓展句：And it’s recommended that everyone should cultivate a skill like this. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Making a timetable enabled me to live a regular life during the lockdown. (运用了动名词作主语) 【高分句型2】While sitting still all day in front of the computer, I listed things I should do between every class such as drinking water, doing eye exercises and stretching my bones, thanks to which I kept my body at a healthy level. (运用了状语从句的省略，省略关系代词引导的限制性定语从句和“介词短语+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句) 3．（2025·上海·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是未来中学的高三学生小星，正在完成一份英语学科的跨文化研习课题。请根据以下给出的报告提纲，撰写一篇文章阐述研究所得。 Festivals in China and Western CountriesReporter: Xiao Xing Steps 1. Choose one typical festival from each of China and Western Countries. 2. Compare the two festivals in at least two aspects, whether in common or different. (Such as the cultural background, ways to celebrate, etc.) 3. Analyze why these features are in common or different. 4. Find commonalities or differences between Chinese and Western cultures the festivals reflect. (if any, or can be omitted) Main Text ………… ………… ………… _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Festivals in China and Western Countries Reporter: Xiao Xing In my cross-cultural study on festivals, I have chosen the Spring Festival in China and Christmas in Western countries for comparison. The Spring Festival signifies the beginning of a new year and the hope for a bountiful harvest. It is celebrated with family reunions, fireworks, and red envelopes which are filled with money. In contrast, Christmas commemorates the birth of Jesus Christ. Westerners decorate trees, exchange gifts, and enjoy a feast with family and friends. These differences arise from the distinct cultural and religious backgrounds of China and the West. Chinese culture emphasizes family unity and respect for ancestors, while Western culture focuses more on individuality and religious beliefs. Despite these differences, both festivals highlight the importance of family gatherings and the sharing of blessings. Through this comparison, I’ve observed that while Chinese and Western cultures vary in many ways, they also share a common appreciation for family bonds and festive celebrations. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据给定的提纲，选择中国和西方国家各一个典型节日，从至少两个方面进行对比，分析异同原因，并探讨节日所反映的中西文化的共性或差异。 【详解】1.词汇积累 选择：choose → select 对比：comparison → contrast 意味着：signify → imply 尽管：despite → in spite of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Despite these differences, both festivals highlight the importance of family gatherings and the sharing of blessings. 拓展句：Although there are these differences, both festivals highlight the importance of family gatherings and the sharing of blessings. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It is celebrated with family reunions, fireworks, and red envelopes which are filled with money.(运用了which引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】Through this comparison, I’ve observed that while Chinese and Western cultures vary in many ways, they also share a common appreciation for family bonds and festive celebrations.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和while引导的让步状语从句) 4．（2025·上海崇明·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生徐晶，近期你居住的社区打算在社区微信平台上开展一个“和谐社区”的短视频展评活动，并要求配上介绍。你对该活动很感兴趣，写一篇短文作为你参展短视频的介绍，内容须包括： 你参展短视频的名称和内容； 你选择这些内容的理由。 注：邮件中不得透露你的真实信息。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My video is named “Harmony in Our Community”. The content of my video mainly shows the warm and harmonious scenes in our community. It includes the elderly chatting and laughing in the community park, children playing happily together, and neighbors helping each other. For example, when an old lady has difficulty carrying things, a young neighbor will offer to help immediately. I choose these contents because they can best represent the harmonious atmosphere in our community. The friendly interactions between the elderly, children and neighbors are the foundation of a harmonious community. Everyone here is like a big family, caring for and supporting each other. This is what a harmonious community should look like. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于近期居住的社区打算在社区微信平台上开展一个“和谐社区”的短视频展评活动，并要求配上介绍这一情况写一篇短文作为参展短视频的介绍。 【详解】1.词汇积累 提供：offer → provide 做某事有困难：have difficulty doing → have problem doing 关心：care for → show concern for 立刻：immediately → instantly 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：Everyone here is like a big family, caring for and supporting each other. This is what a harmonious community should look like. 合并句：Everyone here is like a big family, caring for and supporting each other, which is what a harmonious community should look like. 【点睛】【高分句型1】For example, when an old lady has difficulty carrying things, a young neighbor will offer to help immediately.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句。） 【高分句型2】I choose these contents because they can best represent the harmonious atmosphere in our community.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句。） 5．（2025·上海青浦·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青，你校英语报面向高三学生开辟了“未来之路”的专栏，征集学生对于大学专业选择和未来职业规划的想法，请你投稿，你的文章须包括： (1)简要描述你心仪的大学专业和未来职业规划； (2)陈述你的理由。 (注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 As a senior student at Purun High School, I am eager to contribute to the “Path to the Future” column with my vision for my future. I have my sights set on majoring in environmental science at university, because I anticipate preparing myself for a fulfilling career as an environmental consultant. This field, which is dedicated to understanding and safeguarding our planet, resonates deeply with my passion for sustainability, a passion that has been fostered through my active involvement in our school’s environmental club. My decision to pursue this path is fueled by the urgent need to fight climate change, which will have an impact on future generations. Therefore, only through proactive and collective action, can we hope to lessen the environmental harm we’ve inflicted and ensure a healthier planet for future generations. Looking forward to the journey ahead, I am filled with enthusiasm for the opportunities that lie in wait and the exploitation of my potential to make a significant impact. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生投稿，表达对大学专业选择和未来职业规划的想法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 机会：opportunity→chance 期待：anticipate→expect 确保：ensure→make sure 致力于：be dedicated to→be committed to 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：My decision to pursue this path is fueled by the urgent need to fight climate change, which will have an impact on future generations. 拓展句：The reason why I pursue this path is that I was fueled by the urgent need to fight climate change, which will have an impact on future generations. 【点睛】[高分句型1] This field, which is dedicated to understanding and safeguarding our planet, resonates deeply with my passion for sustainability, a passion that has been fostered through my active involvement in our school’s environmental club. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] I have my sights set on majoring in environmental science at university, because I anticipate preparing myself for a fulfilling career as an environmental consultant. (运用了because引导原因状语从句) 6．（2025·上海普陀·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学高三学生李明，收到你英国笔友Mike的来信 (内容如下) 。请你给Mike写一封回信，提供建议。你的回信须包含以下内容： (1) 你推荐的博物馆或美术馆，以及其中的某件展品； (2) 你去该场所的经历以及推荐的理由。 Hi Li Ming, I’m going to visit China this summer. I’m particularly interested in exploring some of the museums or galleries you’ve enjoyed. Could you recommend one? Looking forward to your suggestions! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks, Mike 【答案】Dear Mike, I’m happy to learn that you’ll be visiting China this summer. Among many wonderful museums and galleries here, I highly recommend the National Museum of China. One of its most captivating exhibits is the Bronze Galloping Horse.   I visited this museum last year. As I stepped into the exhibition hall and beheld the Bronze Galloping Horse, I was immediately transfixed. Its dynamic pose, the exquisitely detailed musculature and flowing mane, are a testament to the extraordinary artistry and bronze-casting skills of ancient Chinese craftsmen. The entire collection within the museum spans thousands of years of history, from ancient artifacts to modern artworks, providing a comprehensive and immersive journey through China’s cultural evolution. It’s not just a place to view beautiful objects; it’s a portal to understanding the nation’s soul and heritage. Every corner is filled with stories and knowledge waiting to be discovered. I’m certain you’ll have an unforgettable and enriching experience there. Yours, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给今年夏天将来中国想去博物馆或美术馆的Mike写一封回信，推荐一个博物馆或美术馆，介绍其中的某件展品和你去该场所的经历以及推荐的理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：happy→delighted 拜访：visit→pay a visit to 注视：behold→gaze at 难忘的：unforgettable→memorable 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The entire collection within the museum spans thousands of years of history, from ancient artifacts to modern artworks, providing a comprehensive and immersive journey through China’s cultural evolution. 拓展句：The entire collection within the museum spans thousands of years of history, from ancient artifacts to modern artworks, which provides a comprehensive and immersive journey through China’s cultural evolution. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As I stepped into the exhibition hall and beheld the Bronze Galloping Horse, I was immediately transfixed. (运用了As引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】I’m certain you’ll have an unforgettable and enriching experience there. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句) 7．（2025·上海闵行·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是高三学生李华，你校这学期邀请外教Tim做系列的英语讲座，上周Tim做了关于英语词汇学习的讲座，同学们感觉很有收获。请你给Tim写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.表达感谢并说明原因； 2. 建议下周讲座的内容。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Tim, I’m Li Hua, a senior three student. I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your wonderful lecture on English vocabulary learning last week. The reason why I’m so thankful is that your lecture was truly helpful. You provided us with practical and effective methods for memorizing and understanding English words. Your explanations were clear and easy to follow, which has greatly enhanced our confidence in vocabulary learning. I hope that in next week’s lecture, you could focus on English grammar. Many of us struggle with understanding and applying grammar rules correctly. I believe your guidance will make a big difference to our English learning. Thank you again for your efforts and contributions. Your lectures have been a great source of inspiration and knowledge for us. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的感谢信。要求考生给外教Tim写封信，感谢其上周所做的关于英语词汇学习的讲座，并就下周讲座内容给出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 真诚的：sincere→ genuine 感激的：thankful→ grateful 有帮助的：be helpful→ be of help 提高：enhance→ improve 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your wonderful lecture on English vocabulary learning last week. 拓展句：I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your wonderful lecture whose theme is English vocabulary learning last week. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The reason why I’m so thankful is that your lecture was truly helpful.（运用了why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句） 【高分句型2】Your explanations were clear and easy to follow, which has greatly enhanced our confidence in vocabulary learning.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 8．（2025·上海浦东新·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 明启中学将组织学生开展为期三天的研学活动，现有三个主题，分别为：“访问友校” “走进大学” “深入企业”。假如你是该校学生李华，请写一封申请信给负责人，报名参加其中一项活动，内容须包括： 1. 你选择的主题； 2. 你希望学到的内容； 3. 你学这些内容的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Sir/Madam,   I am writing to apply for the “Visit Universities” program of the three-day study tour organized by our school. I am particularly interested in this theme because I hope to gain a better understanding of campus culture, advanced teaching methods, and university learning environments. Visiting universities will provide me with valuable firsthand experience, allowing me to reflect on my future academic goals and inspire my passion for higher education.   The reason why I want to learn these aspects is that they are crucial for my preparation for college life. By exploring universities, I can develop clearer academic aspirations, improve my self-discipline, and plan my studies more effectively. Also, being exposed to a university setting will motivate me to study harder to achieve my goals.   Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to your approval.                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours sincerely,                                                                                                                                   Li Hua   【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，报名参加一个学校组织的为期三天的研学活动。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 热情：passion→enthusiasm 至关重要的：crucial→vital 志向：aspiration→ambition 实现：achieve→realize 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I am writing to apply for the “Visit Universities” program of the three-day study tour organized by our school. 拓展句：I am writing to apply for the “Visit Universities” program of the three-day study tour which is organized by our school. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Visiting universities will provide me with valuable firsthand experience, allowing me to reflect on my future academic goals and inspire my passion for higher education. (运用了现在分词作结果状语) 【高分句型2】The reason why I want to learn these aspects is that they are crucial for my preparation for college life. (运用了why引导的限制性定语从句和that引导的表语从句) 9．（2025·上海徐汇·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below. 你是明启中学高三学生王华，你的好友李明来信邀请你和他一起创办一个公众号（a public account），通过文字、图片、视频等多种形式向国内外读者推广和传播中国文化。请你给他回信，内容须包括： (1)你对该想法的支持和赞赏； (2)你对合作的期待和对分工的建议。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Li Ming, Thank you for your invitation to start a public account together to promote Chinese culture to domestic and international audiences. I am truly impressed by your idea, and I wholeheartedly support this initiative. I believe that utilizing various media forms like text, images, and videos will effectively showcase the richness and diversity of our culture. I am looking forward to working with you on this exciting project. As for our collaboration, I suggest we divide the tasks based on our strengths. You could handle video production and editing, given your excellent skills in that area, while I focus on creating engaging written content and selecting captivating images. This way, we can complement each other and ensure the quality of our content. I’m excited to embark on this cultural journey with you and can’t wait to see the impact we will achieve together. Best regards, Wang Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。好友李明来信邀请考生和他一起创办一个公众号，通过文字、图片、视频等多种形式向国内外读者推广和传播中国文化，要求考生按照要求给他回信。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 支持：support → endorse 前景：initiative → endeavor 展示：showcase → exhibit 集中注意力于：focus on → concentrate on 2. 句型拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Thank you for your invitation to start a public account together to promote Chinese culture to domestic and international audiences. 拓展句：Thank you for your invitation, which is to start a public account together to promote Chinese culture to domestic and international audiences. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I believe that utilizing various media forms like text, images, and videos will effectively showcase the richness and diversity of our culture.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和动名词作主语） 【高分句型2】As for our collaboration, I suggest we divide the tasks based on our strengths.（运用了省略了引导词that的宾语从句且从句使用了虚拟语气） 10．（2025·上海宝山·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是民启中学的学生李明，学校最近要接待一批外国学生，正在招募陪同解说员，给外国学生介绍学校的体育馆、图书馆和食堂，每个场所需要一个陪同解说员。请选择其中一个场所应聘解说，写一份解说稿。你的文章必须包括： ·你所选场所的名称及其特点； ·你的同学最喜欢这个场所的哪些方面及其原因。 （文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Hello everyone, Welcome to our school! My name is Li Ming, and I am honored to introduce our library to you. Our library is the heart of knowledge on campus. It is a modern, three-story building equipped with thousands of books, covering a wide range of subjects. The library also provides a cozy reading environment with comfortable seats and quiet study areas. Moreover, we have computer facilities and an online database for research, ensuring students can access resources conveniently. What my classmates love the most about the library is its peaceful atmosphere, which helps them concentrate on their studies. Additionally, the varied selection of books allows them to explore different interests, from science to literature. For many of us, the library is not just a place to study but also a haven for inspiration and growth. Thank you for your attention! 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。学校最近要接待一批外国学生，正在招募陪同解说员，给外国学生介绍学校的体育馆、图书馆和食堂，每个场所需要一个陪同解说员，要求考生选择其中一个场所应聘解说，写一份解说稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 荣幸的：honored→privileged 中心：heart→core 设备：facility→equipment 集中：concentrate on→focus on 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The library also provides a cozy reading environment with comfortable seats and quiet study areas. 拓展句：The library also provides a cozy reading environment, which includes comfortable seats and quiet study areas. 【点睛】[高分句型1]What my classmates love the most about the library is its peaceful atmosphere, which helps them concentrate on their studies.(what引导的主语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]Moreover, we have computer facilities and an online database for research, ensuring students can access resources conveniently.(现在分词作结果状语) 11．（24-25高三上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是启明中学的王磊，你校学生会即将组织“中国传统节日文化体验与交流”系列活动，目前系列中的第一个活动的方案已在校园网发布，该活动将在4月2日举行，并面向全校师生征求意见。请写一封邮件，你的邮件必须包括以下内容： 1. 提出你觉得需要进行改进的地方和改进意见 2. 你的具体理由 活动方案： ✧  主题：介绍清明节 ✧  形式：讲座 ✧  内容：介绍清明节的由来、传统以及其重要性 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Students’ Union, My name is Wang Lei, and I have some suggestions for the upcoming “Chinese Traditional Festival Culture Experience and Exchange” event scheduled for April 2. Although the plan to introduce the Qingming Festival is a great idea, I believe improvements could be made. Firstly, instead of just a lecture, including interactive activities such as traditional Qingming festival games or crafting that could enhance engagement. Participants will likely enjoy and remember the event more if they actively partake, rather than only listen. Moreover, inviting a guest speaker who has personal stories or experiences related to Qingming could add depth to the presentation. This personal touch may make the festival more relatable and appealing, especially for those unfamiliar with it. I hope these suggestions will be helpful in making the event a success. Yours sincerely,   Wang Lei 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校学生会写封邮件，针对“中国传统节日文化体验与交流”活动提出改进意见和建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion→ recommendation 参与：participate→ engage 提高：enhance→ improve 此外：Moreover→ Besides 2.句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：Participants will likely enjoy and remember the event more if they actively partake, rather than only listen. 同义句：If participants take an active part rather than merely listen, they will probably enjoy and remember the event better. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Moreover, inviting a guest speaker who has personal stories or experiences related to Qingming could add depth to the presentation. (运用了who引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】Participants will likely enjoy and remember the event more if they actively partake, rather than only listen. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 12．（2025·上海长宁·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。你校英语节即将举行主题为“爱的传递”的捐书活动，旨在为边远地区的贫困学生募集一批图书。活动要求每位同学捐出一本自己最喜爱的书，并写一篇短文，内容须包括： （1）对该书内容的简单介绍； （2）你最喜爱该书的理由； （3）你希望通过该书传递给边远地区贫困学生怎样的爱和希望。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Friends,        As a senior student at Mingqi High School, I am participating in our school’s English Festival by donating my favorite book, “To Kill a Mockingbird” by Harper Lee. “To Kill a Mockingbird” is a novel that explores themes of racial injustice and moral growth. It tells the story of Scout Finch, a young girl growing up in the Deep South of America during the 1930s. Through her eyes, we witness the trials and tribulations of her father, Atticus Finch, as he defends a black man falsely accused of raping a white woman. The book not only provides a vivid picture of historical events but also delves into profound human values such as empathy, justice, and integrity.  I love this book because it teaches us to stand up for what is right, even when it is difficult. By donating this book, I hope to pass on these messages to the children in remote areas, wishing them to find in this book the strength to pursue their dreams and the courage to overcome any obstacles they may face.I want them to know that they are not alone in their struggles and that there are people who care about them and their future. Let us all share the power of knowledge and spread the love through these pages.                                                                                                                                            Yours sincerely,                                                                                                                                               Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高三学生李华的身份，为学校英语节的捐书活动捐赠自己最喜爱的一本书，并撰写一篇短文介绍该书内容、解释喜欢它的理由以及希望通过这本书传递给边远地区贫困学生的爱和希望。 【详解】1.词汇积累 捐赠：donate → contribute 主题：theme → subject 同理心：empathy → compassion 深刻的：profound → deep 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句   原句：As a senior student at Mingqi High School, I am participating in our school’s English Festival by donating my favorite book, “To Kill a Mockingbird” by Harper Lee. 拓展句：As a senior student at Mingqi High School, I am participating in our school’s English Festival by donating my favorite book “To Kill a Mockingbird” ,which was written by Harper Lee. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The book not only provides a vivid picture of historical events but also delves into profound human values such as empathy, justice, and integrity.（运用了not only…but also…连接并列谓语）   【高分句型2】I want them to know that they are not alone in their struggles and that there are people who care about them and their future.（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句） 13．（24-25高三上·上海静安·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是高三学生李华，你所属的学校本学期实行午餐自助餐制（buffet lunch），目前发现了食物浪费和饮食不均衡等问题，有人建议取消自助餐制。给校长写电子邮件，谈谈你的看法。邮件中必须包括： 1. 你是否赞成取消自助餐制； 2. 你的理由； 3. 如赞成，你建议的新就餐形式/如反对，你建议的改进措施。 （邮件中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Principal, I am writing to express my thoughts regarding the suggestion of canceling the buffet lunch system at our school. I do not agree with canceling it, as it provides students with variety and flexibility in choosing their meals, which is valuable for meeting different dietary needs and preferences. However, I acknowledge the issues of food waste and nutritional imbalance. To address these concerns, I suggest implementing educational sessions on balanced diets to guide students in making healthier food choices. Additionally, placing clear portion guidance signs can remind students to take only what they can consume. Monitoring and providing feedback on food waste can also raise awareness. These measures can help maintain the benefits of the buffet system while reducing its drawbacks. Thank you for your attention to this matter. Sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所属的学校本学期实行午餐自助餐制，目前发现了食物浪费和饮食不均衡等问题，有人建议取消自助餐制，要求考生按照要求给校长写电子邮件，谈谈自己的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 表达：express → convey 建议：suggestion → proposal 废除：cancel → abolish 不同的：different → diverse 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To address these concerns, I suggest implementing educational sessions on balanced diets to guide students in making healthier food choices. 拓展句：To address these concerns, I suggest our school implement educational sessions on balanced diets to guide students in making healthier food choices. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I do not agree with canceling it, as it provides students with variety and flexibility in choosing their meals, which is valuable for meeting different dietary needs and preferences.（运用了as引导的原因状语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】 Additionally, placing clear portion guidance signs can remind students to take only what they can consume.（运用了what引导的宾语从句） 重难语篇拔高练 14．（24-25高三上·上海金山·阶段练习）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 如下为央广网8月6日的一则消息。请你向校报投一篇稿子，简要描述“买谷子”现象，分析现象背后可能的原因，并提出相应的措施或建议。 On August 6, Beijing news from CNR (China National Radio) (reported by Guo Jiali) “WeChat payment received 411 yuan,” “Payment received 59 yuan”. During the summer vacation, the sound of payment notifications kept ringing in a “goods shop” (a shop selling anime-related products, translated as “gu zi” in Chinese) in Beijing. A group of middle school students, dressed in their school uniforms and carrying schoolbags, skillfully took out their phones to settle the bill at the cashier’s desk and then tore open the packaging. Very quickly, a box of blind-boxed badge featuring a certain anime sold out in the shop. 注：“谷子”是英语goods的音译，涵盖种类广泛，包括“吧唧”(badges)、钥匙扣(keychains)、挂件(pendants)、卡片、拍立得(instant cameras)、玩偶等制品，可以广义地理解为漫画、动漫(anime)、游戏等版权作品衍生出的周边产品。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 In a recent report from CNR, a phenomenon known as “buying gu zi” has been highlighted, where middle school students in Beijing are frequently purchasing anime-related products during their summer vacation. These students are seen making payments via mobile platforms like WeChat and eagerly opening their purchases on the spot. The craze for blind-boxed badges featuring anime characters has led to quick sell-outs in stores. The “buying gu zi” trend may stem from the growing popularity of anime culture and the desire for collectibles among young people. It also reflects the ease of mobile payments, which allows for convenient transactions. However, this phenomenon raises concerns about the financial literacy of young consumers and the potential for impulsive spending. To address these issues, it is suggested that schools and parents work together to educate students about responsible consumption. Additionally, implementing measures to limit in-store purchases during school hours could help curb impulsive buying. By fostering a balanced approach to consumer culture, we can ensure that students enjoy their hobbies without compromising their financial well-being. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向校报投稿，简要描述“买谷子”现象，分析现象背后可能的原因，并提出相应的措施或建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 购买：purchase → pick up 导致：lead to → result in 然而：however → nevertheless 解决：address → deal with 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The craze for blind-boxed badges featuring anime characters has led to quick sell-outs in stores. 拓展句：The craze for blind-boxed badges which feature anime characters has led to quick sell-outs in stores. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In a recent report from CNR, a phenomenon known as “buying gu zi” has been highlighted, where middle school students in Beijing are frequently purchasing anime-related products during their summer vacation.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】To address these issues, it is suggested that schools and parents work together to educate students about responsible consumption.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句） 15．（2025·上海虹口·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生王磊，在一本英语文化类杂志上读到一则“我家的传统”的征稿通知(内容如下)。你对此很有兴趣，请根据征稿要求写一篇短文。 Call for Submissions: Essays on “A Tradition in My Family”We invite you to share your thoughts on the theme “A Tradition in My Family.” Submission Guidelines: 1. Introduce the most valued family tradition. 2. Explain why this tradition is important for your family. We look forward to your contributions! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A Tradition in My Family In my family, celebrating the Mid-Autumn Festival is the most valued tradition. This festival, held on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, brings our entire family together. We gather under the full moon to enjoy mooncakes and appreciate the beauty of the night sky. This tradition is important to my family for several reasons. Firstly, it provides a rare opportunity for all family members, regardless of where they are, to reunite and spend quality time together. In today’s fast-paced world, it’s often challenging to find time for family, making these moments even more precious. Moreover, the Mid-Autumn Festival allows us to honor our ancestors and reflect on our family roots and heritage. It fosters a sense of belonging and continuity, connecting us to our past while shaping our future. This cherished tradition strengthens our family bonds and preserves our cultural identity for generations to come. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“我家的传统”为题给一本英语文化类杂志投稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 整个的：entire→whole 欣赏：appreciate→admire 重要的：important→significant 提供：provide→offer 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This festival, held on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, brings our entire family together. 拓展句：This festival, which is held on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, brings our entire family together. 【点睛】[高分句型1]Firstly, it provides a rare opportunity for all family members, regardless of where they are, to reunite and spend quality time together.(where引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]In today’s fast-paced world, it’s often challenging to find time for family, making these moments even more precious.(现在分词作结果状语) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$