内容正文:
【热点押题预测】
第16讲 新兴文化现象
第一部分:中考英语写作精讲
16.1 现象分析模板
1. 开头引入现象:以一个引人注目的事实、数据或有趣的场景引出要讨论的新兴文化现象。比如在写短视频影响时,可以这样开头:“In recent years, short - video platforms like TikTok have become extremely popular. According to a recent survey, millions of people around the world spend hours every day watching and creating short videos, which has brought about a significant cultural shift.” 用具体的数据突出短视频的火爆程度,引发读者兴趣。
2. 现象描述:详细阐述该文化现象的具体表现形式、参与人群、传播范围等。对于汉服复兴,可描述为:“Nowadays, the revival of Hanfu is gaining momentum. On the streets of many Chinese cities, especially during festivals or cultural events, you can often see young people dressed in beautiful Hanfu. They not only wear the traditional clothing but also participate in various Hanfu - themed activities, such as Hanfu parades, tea - tasting ceremonies in Hanfu, and traditional cultural lectures in Hanfu.” 让读者对汉服复兴的具体场景有清晰的认识。
3. 原因分析:深入分析该文化现象兴起的原因,可从社会、经济、文化、科技等多个角度入手。以国潮兴起为例,原因可分析为:“Firstly, with the development of China's economy, consumers' purchasing power has increased, and they are more willing to invest in high - quality domestic products. Secondly, the rise of national pride among the younger generation makes them more interested in traditional Chinese culture. Thirdly, technological progress has enabled better design and production of products with Chinese cultural elements, making them more appealing.” 从经济、文化、科技三个维度全面分析国潮兴起的原因。
4. 影响探讨:探讨该文化现象带来的积极和消极影响。如短视频的影响:“On the positive side, short - videos provide a platform for people to showcase their talents, share their daily lives, and gain knowledge in an easy - to - understand way. They also promote cultural exchange and creativity. However, there are also some negative impacts. For example, excessive use of short - video platforms may lead to addiction, and the spread of some low - quality content may have a negative impact on the mental health of viewers.” 客观全面地分析短视频的利弊。
5. 结尾总结与展望:总结全文,再次强调新兴文化现象的重要性或影响,并对其未来发展进行合理展望。如在结尾处可以写:“In conclusion, the rise of these new cultural phenomena, such as the popularity of short - videos, the revival of Hanfu, and the boom of guochao, reflects the dynamic development of our society and culture. We should embrace these changes with an open mind, and at the same time, take measures to address the potential problems. Looking ahead, we believe that these new cultural phenomena will continue to thrive and bring more positive changes to our lives.”
16.2 流行文化词汇
1. 短视频相关:short - video(短视频)、TikTok(抖音国际版,可指代类似短视频平台)、vlogger(视频博主)、influencer(网络红人,有影响力的人)、content creator(内容创作者)、live - streaming(直播)、douyin(抖音)、like(点赞)、comment(评论)、share(分享)、trending topic(热门话题)
2. 汉服相关:Hanfu(汉服)、cheongsam(旗袍,也可作为中国传统服饰的一种代表提及)、traditional Chinese clothing(中国传统服饰)、Hanfu community(汉服社群)、Hanfu culture(汉服文化)、Hanfu enthusiasts(汉服爱好者)、robe(长袍,汉服的一种常见款式描述)、sash(腰带,汉服配饰)、hairpin(发簪,汉服发型搭配配饰)
3. 国潮相关:guochao(国潮,可直接用拼音,也可解释为 “the trend of domestic fashion with Chinese cultural elements” )、domestic brands(国产品牌)、Chinese cultural elements(中国文化元素)、cultural creativity(文化创意)、national trend products(国潮产品)、cultural heritage(文化遗产,国潮常与传统文化遗产结合)、traditional patterns(传统图案,如龙凤纹、云纹等用于国潮设计)
16.3 范文
①短视频影响
题目:
The Influence of Short - videos
范文
In recent years, short - videos have swept the globe, becoming an inseparable part of people's daily lives.
Short - video platforms offer a diverse range of content. From hilarious comedy skits to educational science experiments, from heart - warming family stories to stunning travel vlogs, there is something for everyone. People of all ages, especially the younger generation, are actively involved in this short - video craze. They not only enjoy watching but also take the initiative to create and upload their own short - videos.
There are several reasons for the popularity of short - videos. First, in this fast - paced modern society, people have limited time for entertainment. Short - videos, with their short duration, can quickly meet people's need for relaxation. Second, the development of mobile technology and the popularization of high - speed networks have made it convenient for people to shoot, edit, and share short - videos anytime and anywhere.
The influence of short - videos is far - reaching. On the positive side, they have provided a platform for countless ordinary people to show their talents and gain popularity. Many talented individuals have become well - known vloggers overnight through short - videos. Moreover, short - videos have promoted cultural exchange. People can learn about different cultures from all over the world through short - video platforms. However, we also cannot ignore the negative impacts. Some people, especially teenagers, may get addicted to short - videos, wasting a lot of time that could have been spent on more meaningful things like studying or exercising. Additionally, the spread of false or low - quality information in some short - videos may mislead viewers.
In conclusion, short - videos have brought both opportunities and challenges. We should make good use of this powerful tool while being cautious about its potential negative effects, so as to make the most of the short - video era.
②汉服复兴
题目:
The Revival of Hanfu
范文
In recent years, the revival of Hanfu has emerged as a remarkable cultural phenomenon in China.
Hanfu, the traditional clothing of the Han ethnic group, has a long history spanning thousands of years. Now, it is making a strong comeback. On weekends and holidays, in historical scenic spots, cultural festivals, and even on the streets of some big cities, you can see people, mainly young people, wearing elegant Hanfu. These beautiful outfits come in various styles, with delicate embroidery, flowing sleeves, and unique collars, fully demonstrating the charm of traditional Chinese aesthetics.
The revival of Hanfu is driven by multiple factors. Firstly, with the continuous enhancement of national cultural confidence, people are increasingly interested in exploring and promoting traditional Chinese culture, and Hanfu serves as an important carrier of this culture. Secondly, the development of the Internet and social media has provided a platform for Hanfu enthusiasts to communicate and share. Through online communities, they can exchange knowledge about Hanfu, organize Hanfu - related activities, and attract more people to join the Hanfu - loving group.
The revival of Hanfu has significant positive impacts. It promotes the inheritance and development of traditional Chinese culture. By wearing Hanfu, people can have a deeper understanding of the historical and cultural connotations behind it, such as traditional etiquette and craftsmanship. It also enriches the cultural life of the public. Hanfu - themed events, like Hanfu exhibitions and cultural salons, provide people with new ways to appreciate and experience traditional culture. Moreover, the Hanfu industry has also emerged, creating job opportunities in design, production, and sales.
In short, the revival of Hanfu is not just a fashion trend but a powerful expression of cultural identity and pride. We should support and encourage the healthy development of this cultural phenomenon to let the beauty of Hanfu shine brightly in modern society.
③国潮兴起
题目:
The Rise of Guochao
范文
In recent years, there has been a remarkable upsurge of guochao, a trend that combines traditional Chinese culture with modern consumer goods.
Guochao can be seen in various aspects of life. Fashion brands are incorporating traditional Chinese elements such as dragon patterns, cloud patterns, and traditional colors into their designs. For example, some domestic sportswear brands have launched shoes and sportswear with unique Chinese - style embroidery, which are very popular among young consumers. In the field of cosmetics, some domestic brands use traditional Chinese herbal medicine ingredients and packaging inspired by ancient Chinese aesthetics, winning the favor of many customers.
The rise of guochao is attributed to several factors. Economically, the growth of China's domestic market and the improvement of consumers' purchasing power have provided a solid foundation for the development of domestic brands. Culturally, the increasing national pride and cultural confidence among the younger generation make them more inclined to choose products with Chinese cultural characteristics. Technologically, the progress of design and production technology enables domestic brands to better present traditional cultural elements in modern products.
The influence of guochao is profound. It promotes the development of domestic brands. Many once - little - known domestic brands have become well - known and competitive in the market through the guochao trend. It also plays an important role in cultural inheritance and dissemination. By integrating traditional cultural elements into modern products, guochao makes traditional culture more accessible to the public, especially the younger generation. In addition, guochao has also attracted the attention of the international market, enhancing the international influence of Chinese culture.
To sum up, the rise of guochao is a positive cultural and economic phenomenon. It not only reflects the vitality of traditional Chinese culture but also shows the innovation and development of domestic brands. We look forward to seeing more wonderful guochao products and the further spread of Chinese culture.
第二部分:中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背
1.(23-24九年级上·四川成都·阶段练习)假如你是某中学的学生李华,你的英国网友Jim发来邮件向你询问中国人数字化生活的情况。请你根据以下提示,给他回复一封邮件,详细介绍你生活中的数字科技,并谈谈你对这种生活方式的看法。
注意:
1.须全面涵盖图文内容,可适当增加细节;
2.条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.词数100左右。
参考词语:scan the QR code 扫二维码;beneficiary n. 受益者
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2.(2024·河南周口·二模)随着网络技术和数字技术的高速发展,人们的阅读方式、阅读途径更加多元化,我们还有必要到图书馆去阅读吗?你学校的英文报记者就此问题采访了学生,下面是他们的一些观点。请你根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,向校报投稿。
NO
写作要求:1. 简要叙述同学们的观点;
2. 提出你的看法并说明理由;
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
4. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Should we go to the library to read? Last month, we asked students about their opinions. Here are the results. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.(22-23九年级下·福建福州·期中)假如你是李华,在数字中国建设峰会期间,你的学校倡导你们要做讲文明、懂礼貌的优秀中学生。请根据以下思维导图提示,给你的美国笔友 Michael 写一封邮件,以自己为例,告诉他如何做一名优秀的中学生,并谈谈你的感受。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;
3.词数80左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:civilized文明的;stand in the line排队
Dear Michael,
How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good student.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.(24-25九年级上·河北石家庄·期末)假设你是李飞。初中生活即将结束,学校英语社团发起了毕业感言短视频征集活动。请你根据以下要点并适当增加细节,写一篇英语发言稿,为录制视频做准备。
注意:
1. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
2. 词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear teachers and friends,
I am Li Fei. I am honored to share some of my thoughts and feelings with you.
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Thank you for listening.
5.(23-24九年级上·河南三门峡·期末)你校文化节举办了题为“我为家乡代言”的短视频征集活动,请你先将你的视频以文字稿的形式向大家介绍。
要点:
1. 家乡的地理位置;
2. 家乡的风土人情、历史名胜、饮食文化等;
3. 家乡近年来的变化和发展;
4. 我的感受。
要求:
1.主题突出,层次清晰, 100-120词。
2.书面整洁,书写工整。
I speak for my hometown—Lingbao
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6.(2024·福建厦门·二模)发展新质生产力必须加强科技创新。为此,某地拟举办一次科技创新展览会(Science and Technology Innovation Exhibition)。假定你是李华,请你结合以下图示给你的笔友Tom写一封邀请函,介绍展览会信息并说明至少两个邀请理由。词数80左右。
AI (Artificial intelligence) 人工智能;VR (Virtual reality) 虚拟现实
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所提示的信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
7.(2019·辽宁盘锦·一模)根据要求完成写作。
现在网络越来越发达,中学生上网的利与弊已成为人们讨论的焦点。请参考下面的信息并结合自己的观点写一篇80词左右的文章谈谈你的看法。
利:课后放松,辅助学习,传递信息快捷,交友等等。
弊:长时间上网有害健康,沉迷网络游戏不思学业,虚拟网络真假难辨等等。
Advantages and Disadvantages of Surfing the Internet
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8.九年级上·福建·期末)书面表达 12分
我们应该从不同角度看待一个问题,权衡事物的利弊。现在网络越来越发达,“中学生上网的利弊”
已成为人们讨论的焦点。请以此为话题,根据提示,写一篇80词左右的短文,并谈谈你的看法。
利:课后放松;辅助学习;传递信息快,开拓视野,网络交流。
弊:长时间上网有害健康;沉迷网络,不思学习;不良网站,误导学生进入虚拟空间,真假难辨。
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9.(24-25九年级上·江苏苏州·阶段练习)近日,在公共场所,人们身着汉服拍照,演奏古筝、二胡等传统乐器;校园里,学生吟诵古典诗词,写毛笔字……处处彰显着中国传统文化的魅力。你校英文报正在组织题为“Spreading traditional Chinese culture”的征文活动。请你选择下面方框中的一种传统文化的形式,写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
1.你最喜欢的一种传统文化的形式;
2.你体验该传统文化的经历;
3.你的收获及感受。
①穿汉服 wear han fu
②学习书法 learn calligraphy
③讲中国故事 tell Chinese stories
④演奏中国传统乐器 play traditional Chinese musical instruments
⑤……(自拟)
注意:
1.词数 100左右,已给出部分不计入总词数;
2.短文中不得出现个人信息。
Spreading traditional Chinese culture
Nowadays, with the popularity of Chinese style, more people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture.
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10.(23-24九年级下·四川广安·期中)假设你是李华,你校将举办“感受中国传统文化”的活动,请你结合提示,给在外国的朋友Jim写一封电子邮件,邀请他前来参加。
要求:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥。
2. 80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范。
4. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名学校及提示信息以外的地名。
参考词汇: recite (v. 背诵) Hanfu(汉服)
Dear Jim,
I know that you are a fan of Chinese culture. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
11.(2024·吉林长春·三模)假如你是李华,长春艺术动漫博览会将在6月8日开始,现正在招募志愿者。你想申请做志愿者,请根据以下要点和要求,用英语给负责人格林先生写一封不少于40词的申请书。
要点:1.本人15岁,来自红星中学;
2.擅长说英语,沟通能力强;
3.能够用英语介绍动漫的相关知识,打扫卫生等。
要求:要点齐全,表述通顺,简洁得体。
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12.(2021·湖北武汉·模拟预测)提起动画片,很多人第一时间想到的就是迪斯尼动画和日本动漫。然而自2015年以来,中国国漫开始受到越来越多的关注和肯定,逐渐走出国门。假如你是李明,请以“Sinomation Rises”为题,写一篇短文向英语杂志投稿,谈谈你对国漫崛起这一现象的看法。
内容要点如下:
1. 在2019年,Bilibili网站上播放了104部国产系列动画,占该网站当年播放的系列动画数量的一半;
2. 中国动画以有趣、有创造性的故事情节著称;
3. 很多国产动画和中国文化相关,来源于中国神话和民间传说等;
4. 越来越多的年轻人热爱国漫,对自己的文化感到骄傲;
5. 补充一两点有关信息或想法。
参考词汇:
animated series 系列动画 myth n. 神话 folklore n.[U] 民间传说
Sinomation Rises
Disney films and Japanese anime are probably the world’s most popular forms of animation. However, Chinese animation is starting to make its own mark._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13.(2024·河南·一模)为了丰富学校特色课程内容,你校校刊英语专栏以“丰富特色课程,助力学生成长”为主题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿。
写作要求:
1.介绍学校目前特色课程种类和内容,并简单谈谈你的感受;
2.你对开设什么样的特色课程有什么更好的建议,请写出理由;
3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
4.词数100左右开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:featured course特色课程;opera戏剧;calligraphy书法;hip-hop说唱;martial arts武术
The colorful featured courses can help make teenagers’ life rich and interesting.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14.(2019·广东广州·二模)第三节 书面表达
前段时间有报道一名中国孩子在埃及古建筑上乱涂乱画,此事引发热烈讨论,同时令中国游客形象受损。请你就此用英文写一封倡议信,倡导中学生从自己做起,文明出行。要求不少于80词,内容要点如下:
1. 从埃及涂鸦事件出发,说明写倡议信的原因。
2. 倡导中学生做一个受欢迎的游客:
1)公共场合不大声喧哗
2)上车、入场等自觉排队
3)不乱扔垃圾
4)你的其它建议
文章题目及开头已给出
Recently, it's reported that a teenager from China_______________________
15.(24-25九年级上·福建福州·期中)现在,越来越多的人开始加入提倡低碳生活的行列,并为营造低碳生活做着贡献。假如你是李华,请你根据以下提示,以“What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life?”为题,写一篇“低碳生活”的英语演讲稿。
注意:词数:90词左右。开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:一次性的 disposable
What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life?
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do to live a low-carbon life and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
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Thank you for listening.
16.(2022·贵州铜仁·三模)近期,三名中国宇航员完成了为期六个月的任务,安全返回地球。假如你是阳光中学学生李华,你最钦佩的就是给女儿摘星星的女航天员王亚平大校,请你用英语写一篇短文,向你校英语报投稿,讲述王亚平的故事。要点如下:
1. 王亚平,41岁,再次创造历史,成为在太空待了100多天的第一位女航天员。
2. 王亚平成为中国首位走出太空站的女航天员,迈出了中国女性舱外太空行走第一步。
3. 她站上了“最高讲台”,在太空舱内给学生进行了一场现场直播的科学讲座,成为我国首位在太空上课的女老师。
4. 要继续进行太空探测,还需要几代人的努力。
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数90左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
参考词汇:太空站:space station 太空探测:space exploration 讲台:platform 钦佩:admire 探测:exploration 一代(人):generation
Three Chinese astronauts have completed their six-month mission and returned to the Earth safely. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【热点押题预测】
第16讲 新兴文化现象
第一部分:中考英语写作精讲
16.1 现象分析模板
1. 开头引入现象:以一个引人注目的事实、数据或有趣的场景引出要讨论的新兴文化现象。比如在写短视频影响时,可以这样开头:“In recent years, short - video platforms like TikTok have become extremely popular. According to a recent survey, millions of people around the world spend hours every day watching and creating short videos, which has brought about a significant cultural shift.” 用具体的数据突出短视频的火爆程度,引发读者兴趣。
2. 现象描述:详细阐述该文化现象的具体表现形式、参与人群、传播范围等。对于汉服复兴,可描述为:“Nowadays, the revival of Hanfu is gaining momentum. On the streets of many Chinese cities, especially during festivals or cultural events, you can often see young people dressed in beautiful Hanfu. They not only wear the traditional clothing but also participate in various Hanfu - themed activities, such as Hanfu parades, tea - tasting ceremonies in Hanfu, and traditional cultural lectures in Hanfu.” 让读者对汉服复兴的具体场景有清晰的认识。
3. 原因分析:深入分析该文化现象兴起的原因,可从社会、经济、文化、科技等多个角度入手。以国潮兴起为例,原因可分析为:“Firstly, with the development of China's economy, consumers' purchasing power has increased, and they are more willing to invest in high - quality domestic products. Secondly, the rise of national pride among the younger generation makes them more interested in traditional Chinese culture. Thirdly, technological progress has enabled better design and production of products with Chinese cultural elements, making them more appealing.” 从经济、文化、科技三个维度全面分析国潮兴起的原因。
4. 影响探讨:探讨该文化现象带来的积极和消极影响。如短视频的影响:“On the positive side, short - videos provide a platform for people to showcase their talents, share their daily lives, and gain knowledge in an easy - to - understand way. They also promote cultural exchange and creativity. However, there are also some negative impacts. For example, excessive use of short - video platforms may lead to addiction, and the spread of some low - quality content may have a negative impact on the mental health of viewers.” 客观全面地分析短视频的利弊。
5. 结尾总结与展望:总结全文,再次强调新兴文化现象的重要性或影响,并对其未来发展进行合理展望。如在结尾处可以写:“In conclusion, the rise of these new cultural phenomena, such as the popularity of short - videos, the revival of Hanfu, and the boom of guochao, reflects the dynamic development of our society and culture. We should embrace these changes with an open mind, and at the same time, take measures to address the potential problems. Looking ahead, we believe that these new cultural phenomena will continue to thrive and bring more positive changes to our lives.”
16.2 流行文化词汇
1. 短视频相关:short - video(短视频)、TikTok(抖音国际版,可指代类似短视频平台)、vlogger(视频博主)、influencer(网络红人,有影响力的人)、content creator(内容创作者)、live - streaming(直播)、douyin(抖音)、like(点赞)、comment(评论)、share(分享)、trending topic(热门话题)
2. 汉服相关:Hanfu(汉服)、cheongsam(旗袍,也可作为中国传统服饰的一种代表提及)、traditional Chinese clothing(中国传统服饰)、Hanfu community(汉服社群)、Hanfu culture(汉服文化)、Hanfu enthusiasts(汉服爱好者)、robe(长袍,汉服的一种常见款式描述)、sash(腰带,汉服配饰)、hairpin(发簪,汉服发型搭配配饰)
3. 国潮相关:guochao(国潮,可直接用拼音,也可解释为 “the trend of domestic fashion with Chinese cultural elements” )、domestic brands(国产品牌)、Chinese cultural elements(中国文化元素)、cultural creativity(文化创意)、national trend products(国潮产品)、cultural heritage(文化遗产,国潮常与传统文化遗产结合)、traditional patterns(传统图案,如龙凤纹、云纹等用于国潮设计)
16.3 范文
①短视频影响
题目:
The Influence of Short - videos
范文
In recent years, short - videos have swept the globe, becoming an inseparable part of people's daily lives.
Short - video platforms offer a diverse range of content. From hilarious comedy skits to educational science experiments, from heart - warming family stories to stunning travel vlogs, there is something for everyone. People of all ages, especially the younger generation, are actively involved in this short - video craze. They not only enjoy watching but also take the initiative to create and upload their own short - videos.
There are several reasons for the popularity of short - videos. First, in this fast - paced modern society, people have limited time for entertainment. Short - videos, with their short duration, can quickly meet people's need for relaxation. Second, the development of mobile technology and the popularization of high - speed networks have made it convenient for people to shoot, edit, and share short - videos anytime and anywhere.
The influence of short - videos is far - reaching. On the positive side, they have provided a platform for countless ordinary people to show their talents and gain popularity. Many talented individuals have become well - known vloggers overnight through short - videos. Moreover, short - videos have promoted cultural exchange. People can learn about different cultures from all over the world through short - video platforms. However, we also cannot ignore the negative impacts. Some people, especially teenagers, may get addicted to short - videos, wasting a lot of time that could have been spent on more meaningful things like studying or exercising. Additionally, the spread of false or low - quality information in some short - videos may mislead viewers.
In conclusion, short - videos have brought both opportunities and challenges. We should make good use of this powerful tool while being cautious about its potential negative effects, so as to make the most of the short - video era.
②汉服复兴
题目:
The Revival of Hanfu
范文
In recent years, the revival of Hanfu has emerged as a remarkable cultural phenomenon in China.
Hanfu, the traditional clothing of the Han ethnic group, has a long history spanning thousands of years. Now, it is making a strong comeback. On weekends and holidays, in historical scenic spots, cultural festivals, and even on the streets of some big cities, you can see people, mainly young people, wearing elegant Hanfu. These beautiful outfits come in various styles, with delicate embroidery, flowing sleeves, and unique collars, fully demonstrating the charm of traditional Chinese aesthetics.
The revival of Hanfu is driven by multiple factors. Firstly, with the continuous enhancement of national cultural confidence, people are increasingly interested in exploring and promoting traditional Chinese culture, and Hanfu serves as an important carrier of this culture. Secondly, the development of the Internet and social media has provided a platform for Hanfu enthusiasts to communicate and share. Through online communities, they can exchange knowledge about Hanfu, organize Hanfu - related activities, and attract more people to join the Hanfu - loving group.
The revival of Hanfu has significant positive impacts. It promotes the inheritance and development of traditional Chinese culture. By wearing Hanfu, people can have a deeper understanding of the historical and cultural connotations behind it, such as traditional etiquette and craftsmanship. It also enriches the cultural life of the public. Hanfu - themed events, like Hanfu exhibitions and cultural salons, provide people with new ways to appreciate and experience traditional culture. Moreover, the Hanfu industry has also emerged, creating job opportunities in design, production, and sales.
In short, the revival of Hanfu is not just a fashion trend but a powerful expression of cultural identity and pride. We should support and encourage the healthy development of this cultural phenomenon to let the beauty of Hanfu shine brightly in modern society.
③国潮兴起
题目:
The Rise of Guochao
范文
In recent years, there has been a remarkable upsurge of guochao, a trend that combines traditional Chinese culture with modern consumer goods.
Guochao can be seen in various aspects of life. Fashion brands are incorporating traditional Chinese elements such as dragon patterns, cloud patterns, and traditional colors into their designs. For example, some domestic sportswear brands have launched shoes and sportswear with unique Chinese - style embroidery, which are very popular among young consumers. In the field of cosmetics, some domestic brands use traditional Chinese herbal medicine ingredients and packaging inspired by ancient Chinese aesthetics, winning the favor of many customers.
The rise of guochao is attributed to several factors. Economically, the growth of China's domestic market and the improvement of consumers' purchasing power have provided a solid foundation for the development of domestic brands. Culturally, the increasing national pride and cultural confidence among the younger generation make them more inclined to choose products with Chinese cultural characteristics. Technologically, the progress of design and production technology enables domestic brands to better present traditional cultural elements in modern products.
The influence of guochao is profound. It promotes the development of domestic brands. Many once - little - known domestic brands have become well - known and competitive in the market through the guochao trend. It also plays an important role in cultural inheritance and dissemination. By integrating traditional cultural elements into modern products, guochao makes traditional culture more accessible to the public, especially the younger generation. In addition, guochao has also attracted the attention of the international market, enhancing the international influence of Chinese culture.
To sum up, the rise of guochao is a positive cultural and economic phenomenon. It not only reflects the vitality of traditional Chinese culture but also shows the innovation and development of domestic brands. We look forward to seeing more wonderful guochao products and the further spread of Chinese culture.
第二部分:中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背
1.(23-24九年级上·四川成都·阶段练习)假如你是某中学的学生李华,你的英国网友Jim发来邮件向你询问中国人数字化生活的情况。请你根据以下提示,给他回复一封邮件,详细介绍你生活中的数字科技,并谈谈你对这种生活方式的看法。
注意:
1.须全面涵盖图文内容,可适当增加细节;
2.条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.词数100左右。
参考词语:scan the QR code 扫二维码;beneficiary n. 受益者
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【优秀满分范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to share with you about the digital life in China. Digital technologies have become an essential part of our daily lives. For example, through a QR code, I can unlock a bike and ride wherever I want. At restaurants, I love scanning the QR codes to order food. Also, I can make payments online to buy things.
In my opinion, this digital lifestyle offers many advantages. It supports education by making resources more accessible and interactive. Moreover, it simplifies daily tasks, making life more convenient and efficient. Overall, I see myself as a beneficiary of this technological advancement and appreciate its impact on society.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节,并注意邮件的格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步,结合图文内容,用简洁语言描述日常数字技术的应用;
第二步,表达自己对数字化生活的观点及原因;
第三步,总结全文,表达对科技发展的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do sth.很高兴做某事
②for example例如
③see…as…把……看作……
[高分句型]
I can unlock a bike and ride wherever I want. (wherever引导状语从句)
2.(2024·河南周口·二模)随着网络技术和数字技术的高速发展,人们的阅读方式、阅读途径更加多元化,我们还有必要到图书馆去阅读吗?你学校的英文报记者就此问题采访了学生,下面是他们的一些观点。请你根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,向校报投稿。
NO
写作要求:1. 简要叙述同学们的观点;
2. 提出你的看法并说明理由;
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
4. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Should we go to the library to read? Last month, we asked students about their opinions. Here are the results. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【优秀满分范文】
Should we go to the library to read? Last month, we asked students about their opinions. Here are the results.
Students who like to read in the library think that the library provides a good environment for reading and they can read many books for free. However, there are some students who think they don’t need to read in the library. They think they can’t read anytime because libraries have opening hours and sometimes it may not be convenient to go to the library.
In my opinion, nothing is better than reading in the library. Sitting with so many book lovers encourages me to read more actively. Moreover, reading in libraries makes me feel good and a good book to read is an important part of my weekend relaxation.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:要点提示已给出,考生应围绕要点来展开写作,注意用词,避免出现单词拼写和语法方面的错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出关于“是否有必要去图书馆阅读”的两种观点;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“应该去图书馆”和“没必要去图书馆”两个方面重点介绍学生们持有该观点的原因;
第三步,书写总结。表达自己对于去图书馆阅读的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① provide sth. for sb. 为某人提供某物
② In my opinion 依我看来
③ an important part of ……的重要部分
[高分句型]
① Students who like to read in the library think that the library provides a good environment for reading and they can read many books for free.(who引导的定语从句)
② Sitting with so many book lovers encourages me to read more actively.(动名词作主语)
3.(22-23九年级下·福建福州·期中)假如你是李华,在数字中国建设峰会期间,你的学校倡导你们要做讲文明、懂礼貌的优秀中学生。请根据以下思维导图提示,给你的美国笔友 Michael 写一封邮件,以自己为例,告诉他如何做一名优秀的中学生,并谈谈你的感受。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;
3.词数80左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:civilized文明的;stand in the line排队
Dear Michael,
How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good student.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Michael,
How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good student.
At school, first we should be polite to our teachers and respect them. Second, we should be helpful to our classmates. We can help them when they have some trouble in learning. Last, we should follow the school rules. We are supposed to go to school on time.
Outside school, we should respect the old and take good care of children. When we wait for the bus, we should stand in line and offer the seats to the old or younger students.
I often feel happy when I do something good. I think being a polite and good student is proud. I hope I can make contributions to our country’s development in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图:我们应该如何做一名好学生;
第二步,结合思维导图,从校内校外谈谈如何做一名好学生;
第三步,谈谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be polite to sb. 对某人礼貌
②be helpful to 对……有帮助
③have trouble in doing sth. 做某事有困难
[高分句型]
①When we wait for the bus, we should stand in line and offer the seats to the old or younger students.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think being a polite and good student is proud.(动名词短语作主语)
4.(24-25九年级上·河北石家庄·期末)假设你是李飞。初中生活即将结束,学校英语社团发起了毕业感言短视频征集活动。请你根据以下要点并适当增加细节,写一篇英语发言稿,为录制视频做准备。
注意:
1. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
2. 词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear teachers and friends,
I am Li Fei. I am honored to share some of my thoughts and feelings with you.
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Thank you for listening.
【优秀满分范文】
Dear teachers and friends,
I am Li Fei. I am honored to share some of my thoughts and feelings with you. I’ve been in this school for three years. The school is beautiful and my school life is really colourful. In the past, I learned a lot from my teachers and classmates and made much progress. I also made a lot of friends who helped me a lot. I want to thank our teachers and parents for their support and help. Not only do they teach us knowledge, but also they help us shape our character. I wish our school would be more beautiful and all of us would have a wonderful future.
Thank you for listening.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述过去的3年生活;
第二步,表达对老师、同学的感谢以及表达美好祝福;
第三步,书写结语,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①in the past在过去
②make much progress取得很大进步
③a lot of许多
[高分句型]
①I also made a lot of friends who helped me a lot. (who引导的定语从句)
②Not only do they teach us knowledge, but also they help us shape our character. (部分倒装句)
5.(23-24九年级上·河南三门峡·期末)你校文化节举办了题为“我为家乡代言”的短视频征集活动,请你先将你的视频以文字稿的形式向大家介绍。
要点:
1. 家乡的地理位置;
2. 家乡的风土人情、历史名胜、饮食文化等;
3. 家乡近年来的变化和发展;
4. 我的感受。
要求:
1.主题突出,层次清晰, 100-120词。
2.书面整洁,书写工整。
I speak for my hometown—Lingbao
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【优秀满分范文】
I speak for my hometown—Longbao
Hello, Friends! I speak for my hometown—Longbao. Today I am happy to introduce it to you. It’s a small city in the west of Henan Province. There are many great places of interest. You can go to visit Hangu Pass, Yawu mountain, Niangniang mountain and so on. It’s famous for apples and dates. You can also enjoy some delicious food, such as Mutton Soap, Bread with Meat and so on. Besides, people here are nice and friendly. Over these year, great changes have taken place in Lingbao. lt’s getting bigger and busier. The roads are much wider and cleaner than before. Tall buildings and trees are on both sides of the roads. People become richer and they live a happier and healthier life .
I love my hometown very much, and I will work hard to make it a better place. Welcome to Lingbao!
【答案解析】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
时态:主要以“一般现在时”为主。
提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容,可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图是介绍自己的家乡灵宝市;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从“地理位置、风土人情、历史名胜、饮食文化、家乡近年来的变化、发展”等方面来描述;
第三步,书写结语,并欢迎大家来灵宝市旅游。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest 名胜古迹
②be famous for因……而闻名
③take place发生
[高分句型]
There are many great places of interest. (There be句型)
6.(2024·福建厦门·二模)发展新质生产力必须加强科技创新。为此,某地拟举办一次科技创新展览会(Science and Technology Innovation Exhibition)。假定你是李华,请你结合以下图示给你的笔友Tom写一封邀请函,介绍展览会信息并说明至少两个邀请理由。词数80左右。
AI (Artificial intelligence) 人工智能;VR (Virtual reality) 虚拟现实
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所提示的信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Innovation Exhibition.
The exhibition will be held on June 6th at the City Science Museum. It will offer a variety of exciting activities. There will be Robot Shows where we can see advanced robots. We can also take part in AI painting and learn how to use technologies create art. Additionally, we can enjoy the amazing VR experience and explore the virtual world.
This exhibition will not only inspire our creativity but also help us learn more about new technologies. I hope you can join us!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信;
②时态:时态为一般将来时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍展览会信息,并邀请对方,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍展览会的相关信息;
第三步,介绍邀请对方的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①a variety of各种各样的
②take part in参加
[高分句型]
①There will be Robot Shows where we can see advanced robots. (where引导的定语从句)
②This exhibition will not only inspire our creativity but also help us learn more about new technologies. (not only...but also结构)
7.(2019·辽宁盘锦·一模)根据要求完成写作。
现在网络越来越发达,中学生上网的利与弊已成为人们讨论的焦点。请参考下面的信息并结合自己的观点写一篇80词左右的文章谈谈你的看法。
利:课后放松,辅助学习,传递信息快捷,交友等等。
弊:长时间上网有害健康,沉迷网络游戏不思学业,虚拟网络真假难辨等等。
Advantages and Disadvantages of Surfing the Internet
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【优秀满分范文】
Advantages and Disadvantages of Surfing the Internet
With the development of the computer technology, the Internet has become more and more popular. However, there are different opinions on surfing the Internet. Some students think it will help them relax themselves and help them with their homework. What’s more, they can also make friends and send messages faster. While some hold the opposite ideas. They think surfing the Internet too much will do harm to our health and study. What’s worse, students can’t tell the information on the Internet. As for me, I think surfing the Internet is ok, because we can gain a lot of useful information from it and students need to get in touch with something new so that they will not be left behind the time.
【分析】本篇文章谈自己关于网上冲浪的看法,材料给的内容,给出了利和弊,学生需要把这些利和弊结合起来说明,然后再分析自己的看法,选择支持一方即可。
【答案解析】首先,说明背景,随着电脑科技的发展,网上冲浪变得越来越流行;然后提出两方人不同的看法,一些人支持,一些人反对,并且说明各自的原因;最后说明自己的立场,自己认为网上冲浪是好的,因为这不仅给我们带来有用的信息,而且学生应该接触新鲜事物,这样才不会被时代落下。文章中运用了However,What’s more,While,What’s worse,As for me等连接词,使文章语句更加通顺,逻辑更加紧密。
【点睛】本文要求根据材料写文章,题目给出了正方和反方的观点,按照要求翻译即可,在翻译过程中,注意中英文之间的差异,注意上下文之间的逻辑,根据逻辑进行连词的使用。例如However,While,What’s worse等的使用。最后,注意点明自己观点的同时,写出原因。
8.(15-16九年级上·福建·期末)书面表达 12分
我们应该从不同角度看待一个问题,权衡事物的利弊。现在网络越来越发达,“中学生上网的利弊”
已成为人们讨论的焦点。请以此为话题,根据提示,写一篇80词左右的短文,并谈谈你的看法。
利:课后放松;辅助学习;传递信息快,开拓视野,网络交流。
弊:长时间上网有害健康;沉迷网络,不思学习;不良网站,误导学生进入虚拟空间,真假难辨。
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【优秀满分范文】
Today the Internet develops more and more quickly.People have different opinions on the influence to students.
Some people think the Internet is good for the students. The students are tired in school and the Internet can make them relax. They can also learn more knowledge from the Internet. They can get the information that they need quickly from the Internet. It makes the students learn more in the world. What's more, the students can make friends and chat with each other on the Internet. This can help them grow up better.
However, some people think the Internet is bad for the students. They think the children spend too much time on it and it's bad for their health.If the children always play it, they don't want to study any more. Some bad websites lead the students to know the bad things. Besides, the Internet is not true. The students are so young that they can't tell which is right or wrong.
【答案解析】试题分析:本次作文为话题类作文,要求根据提示以中学生上网的利弊为话题,写一篇80词左右的短文,并谈谈你的看法。写作要点已经列出,要求明确,故要完成写作任务,务必把各要点表达清楚。
写作亮点:本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务,要点全面,结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动,例如Some people think the Internet is good for the students. The students are tired in school and the Internet can make them relax. They can also learn more knowledge from the Internet.句式The students are so young that they can't tell which is right or wrong.的应用更使得短文表述更准确。总之,该文是一篇不错的短文。
考点:话题类作文
9.(24-25九年级上·江苏苏州·阶段练习)近日,在公共场所,人们身着汉服拍照,演奏古筝、二胡等传统乐器;校园里,学生吟诵古典诗词,写毛笔字……处处彰显着中国传统文化的魅力。你校英文报正在组织题为“Spreading traditional Chinese culture”的征文活动。请你选择下面方框中的一种传统文化的形式,写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
1.你最喜欢的一种传统文化的形式;
2.你体验该传统文化的经历;
3.你的收获及感受。
①穿汉服 wear han fu
②学习书法 learn calligraphy
③讲中国故事 tell Chinese stories
④演奏中国传统乐器 play traditional Chinese musical instruments
⑤……(自拟)
注意:
1.词数 100左右,已给出部分不计入总词数;
2.短文中不得出现个人信息。
Spreading traditional Chinese culture
Nowadays, with the popularity of Chinese style, more people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture.
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【优秀满分范文】
Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture
Nowadays, with the popularity of Chinese style, more and more people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture. My favorite traditional Chinese culture is calligraphy, which has a long history and has influenced many people.
I started to learn calligraphy at eight. At first, it was challenging to use the brush to write Chinese characters. My wrist would ache after holding the brush for a long time. Fortunately, with the help of my teacher, I gradually improved. Now, I can write spring couplets for my family every year. It makes me proud.
Learning calligraphy has a great influence on me. I become more patient and careful thanks to years of practice. I also feel honored to be able to pass down this traditional Chinese culture.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏主要的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己最喜欢的一种传统文化的形式;
第二步,具体阐述体验该传统文化的经历;
第三步,书写结语,表达你的收获及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①at first首先
②with the help of sb在某人的帮助之下
③have a great influence on sb对某人有很大的影响
④thanks to多亏了
⑤pass down传承
[高分句型]
①My favorite traditional Chinese culture is calligraphy, which has a long history and has influenced many people. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②Learning calligraphy has a great influence on me. (动名词作主语)
10.(23-24九年级下·四川广安·期中)假设你是李华,你校将举办“感受中国传统文化”的活动,请你结合提示,给在外国的朋友Jim写一封电子邮件,邀请他前来参加。
要求:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥。
2. 80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范。
4. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名学校及提示信息以外的地名。
参考词汇: recite (v. 背诵) Hanfu(汉服)
Dear Jim,
I know that you are a fan of Chinese culture. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【优秀满分范文】:
Dear Jim,
I know that you are a fan of Chinese culture. So I’m writing to invite you to the activity “Experience traditional Chinese culture”, which will be held on June 26th in our school playground.
You can experience all kinds of traditional Chinese culture in the activity. Some people would recite the ancient poetry, which can help you to learn more about Chinese culture and history. There will be some activities about ancient Hanfu. Besides, you can taste a lot of delicious traditional Chinese food.
It’s a good chance to increase your understanding and love of Chinese culture. And you can make some new friends there. I truly hope you can come and enjoy it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍这次活动的时间、地点、内容和目的等。
第三步,书写结语。表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的……
②learn about了解……
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①Some people would recite the ancient poetry, which can help you to learn more about Chinese culture and history. (定语从句)
②It’s a good chance to increase your understanding and love of Chinese culture. (It作形式主语)
11.(2024·吉林长春·三模)假如你是李华,长春艺术动漫博览会将在6月8日开始,现正在招募志愿者。你想申请做志愿者,请根据以下要点和要求,用英语给负责人格林先生写一封不少于40词的申请书。
要点:1.本人15岁,来自红星中学;
2.擅长说英语,沟通能力强;
3.能够用英语介绍动漫的相关知识,打扫卫生等。
要求:要点齐全,表述通顺,简洁得体。
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【优秀满分范文】
Dear Mr. Green,
I would like to be a volunteer at the Art Animation Expo starting on June 8th. I’m 15 years old. I’m studying at Hongxing Middle School. I’m good at speaking English have strong communication skills. I can introduce knowledge related to animation in English and help with cleaning tasks.
Thank you for your kindness and consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明想要申请做志愿者;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己,重点说明你的优势;
第三步,书写结语。希望能被录用。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to be想要成为
②be good at擅长
③consideration考虑
[高分句型]
①I would like to be a volunteer at the Art Animation Expo starting on June 8th.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②I can introduce knowledge related to animation in English and help with cleaning tasks.(动词短语并列)
12.(2021·湖北武汉·模拟预测)提起动画片,很多人第一时间想到的就是迪斯尼动画和日本动漫。然而自2015年以来,中国国漫开始受到越来越多的关注和肯定,逐渐走出国门。假如你是李明,请以“Sinomation Rises”为题,写一篇短文向英语杂志投稿,谈谈你对国漫崛起这一现象的看法。
内容要点如下:
1. 在2019年,Bilibili网站上播放了104部国产系列动画,占该网站当年播放的系列动画数量的一半;
2. 中国动画以有趣、有创造性的故事情节著称;
3. 很多国产动画和中国文化相关,来源于中国神话和民间传说等;
4. 越来越多的年轻人热爱国漫,对自己的文化感到骄傲;
5. 补充一两点有关信息或想法。
参考词汇:
animated series 系列动画 myth n. 神话 folklore n.[U] 民间传说
Sinomation Rises
Disney films and Japanese anime are probably the world’s most popular forms of animation. However, Chinese animation is starting to make its own mark._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【优秀满分范文】:
Sinomation Rises
In 2019, 104 Chinese animated series were shown on Bilibili, taking up half of the animated series that were shown on the website that year. Chinese animation is famous for its interesting and creative stories. Many works are about Chinese culture. They come from Chinese myths, folklore and so on. More and more young people enjoy watching Sinomation and feel proud of the Chinese culture.
I am a fan of Sinomation, and I’m really glad to see it rise. It shows that not only our country is becoming stronger, but also the Chinese culture plays a more important part in the world.
【答案解析】1.题干解读:题目要求以“Sinomation Rises”为题,根据提示要点及参考词汇,写短文谈谈你对国漫崛起这一现象的看法,要包含所有要点并适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称为主,时态主要用一般现在时。要先结合提示要点写中国动画的崛起,然后再发表自己的看法。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
13.(2024·河南·一模)为了丰富学校特色课程内容,你校校刊英语专栏以“丰富特色课程,助力学生成长”为主题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿。
写作要求:
1.介绍学校目前特色课程种类和内容,并简单谈谈你的感受;
2.你对开设什么样的特色课程有什么更好的建议,请写出理由;
3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
4.词数100左右开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:featured course特色课程;opera戏剧;calligraphy书法;hip-hop说唱;martial arts武术
The colorful featured courses can help make teenagers’ life rich and interesting.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【优秀满分范文】
The colorful featured courses can help make teenagers’ life rich and interesting. The physical education course is one of the most important characteristic courses in the school. The school provides students with a variety of sports, such as football, basketball, table tennis, swimming and so on. By participating in sports courses, students not only exercise and improve their physical fitness, but also develop teamwork, leadership and competitive consciousness.
I think schools should offer art courses, because art courses can cultivate not only aesthetic ability and expression ability, but also imagination and creativity.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍学校目前特色课程的种类和内容,以及自己的感受;
第二步,针对开设什么样的特色课程给出建议,并说明理由。
[亮点词汇]
①provide sb. with sth. 提供给某人某物
②a variety of 各种各样的
③participate in 参加
[高分句型]
①The physical education course is one of the most important characteristic courses in the school.(one of+the+形容词最高级+名词复数 最……之一)
②By participating in sports courses, students not only exercise and improve their physical fitness, but also develop teamwork, leadership and competitive consciousness.(not only ... but also 不仅……而且……)
14.(2019·广东广州·二模)第三节 书面表达
前段时间有报道一名中国孩子在埃及古建筑上乱涂乱画,此事引发热烈讨论,同时令中国游客形象受损。请你就此用英文写一封倡议信,倡导中学生从自己做起,文明出行。要求不少于80词,内容要点如下:
1. 从埃及涂鸦事件出发,说明写倡议信的原因。
2. 倡导中学生做一个受欢迎的游客:
1)公共场合不大声喧哗
2)上车、入场等自觉排队
3)不乱扔垃圾
4)你的其它建议
文章题目及开头已给出
Recently, it's reported that a teenager from China_______________________
【优秀满分范文】Recently, it is reported that a teenager from China scribbled on the wall of an ancient building in Egypt when he was travelling there. This has led to a heated discussion, and the image of the Chinese tourists has been damaged. Therefore, I’m here writing this to ask you to be a welcome visitor when you travel to other countries.
Here is some of my advice.
First, don’t talk too loudly in public places such as restaurants or museums. Second, always remember to stand in a line when you want to get on a bus or get into places like a theatre or a museum. Third, take your rubbish away and don’t just throw it everywhere. Last but not least, follow the traffic lights when crossing the road.
I hope you can keep the above in mind and be a visitor who is welcomed everywhere he goes.
【答案解析】题干分析:这是一篇倡议信,所以要条理与逻辑清楚,首先要引出话题,阐明倡议的原因。最重要的要写明白倡议的具体内容,这点在题干中已有提示。
分析:采取三段式的方式,第一段:描述一名中国孩子在埃及古建筑上乱涂乱画,此事引发热烈讨论的事实,从而引入话题,点明倡议的原因。第二段:详细说明倡议的内容,这里主要写了三点。第三段:表达美好的祝愿。
高分亮点:
短语:lead to导致;remember to do sth记住去做某事;want to do sth想要做某事;get into进入;take away带走;Last but not least最后但并非最不重要;traffic lights交通灯。
句型:(1)don’t talk too loudly in public places such as restaurants or museums. 不要在餐馆或博物馆等公共场所大声说话。祈使句Don’t do sth。(2)Therefore, I’m here writing this to ask you to be a welcome visitor when you travel to other countries. 因此,我在这里写这篇文章是为了请你在去其他国家旅行时做一个受欢迎的访问者。When引导的时间状语从句。I hope you can keep the above in mind and be a visitor who is welcomed everywhere he goes. 我希望你能牢记以上这些,成为一个无论走到哪里都受到欢迎的访客。Who引导的定语从句。
15.(24-25九年级上·福建福州·期中)现在,越来越多的人开始加入提倡低碳生活的行列,并为营造低碳生活做着贡献。假如你是李华,请你根据以下提示,以“What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life?”为题,写一篇“低碳生活”的英语演讲稿。
注意:词数:90词左右。开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:一次性的 disposable
What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life?
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do to live a low-carbon life and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
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Thank you for listening.
【优秀满分范文】:
What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life?
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do to live a low-carbon life and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
First, we should plant more trees instead of cutting down trees, because trees can not only stop the wind from blowing the earth away but also prevent the water from washing the earth away. Second, when we go out or travel a short distance, we had better walk or ride a bike instead of taking a car. Third, we ought to save water and electricity. For example, when we leave the room, we should turn off the light. We should also turn off the tap in time after washing hands. Last, we ought to take a cloth bag when we go shopping. We shouldn’t use disposable chopsticks.We had better recycle waste paper and drink bottles.
Thank you for listening.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求以“What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life?”为题,按照所给提示,完善有关如何过低碳生活的演讲稿,考生应注意不要遗漏所有要点,可适当添加细节,使作文意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出;
第二步,详细讲述过低碳生活的具体方法——植树造林、绿色出行、节能环保等;
第三步,结束全文(已给出)。
[亮点词汇]
① instead of 代替
② not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
③ blow sth. away 把某物吹走
④ stop...from doing sth. 阻止……做某事
⑤ had better do sth. 最好做某事
⑥ ought to do sth. 应该做某事
⑦ turn off 关闭
[高分句型]
① First, we should plant more trees instead of cutting down trees, because trees can not only stop the wind from blowing the earth away but also prevent the water from washing the earth away.(because引导原因状语从句)
② Second, when we go out or travel a short distance, we had better walk or ride a bike instead of taking a car.(when引导时间状语从句)
16.(2022·贵州铜仁·三模)近期,三名中国宇航员完成了为期六个月的任务,安全返回地球。假如你是阳光中学学生李华,你最钦佩的就是给女儿摘星星的女航天员王亚平大校,请你用英语写一篇短文,向你校英语报投稿,讲述王亚平的故事。要点如下:
1. 王亚平,41岁,再次创造历史,成为在太空待了100多天的第一位女航天员。
2. 王亚平成为中国首位走出太空站的女航天员,迈出了中国女性舱外太空行走第一步。
3. 她站上了“最高讲台”,在太空舱内给学生进行了一场现场直播的科学讲座,成为我国首位在太空上课的女老师。
4. 要继续进行太空探测,还需要几代人的努力。
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数90左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
参考词汇:太空站:space station 太空探测:space exploration 讲台:platform 钦佩:admire 探测:exploration 一代(人):generation
Three Chinese astronauts have completed their six-month mission and returned to the Earth safely. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【优秀满分范文】
Three Chinese astronauts have completed their six-month mission and returned to the Earth safely. I admire the woman astronaut Wang Yaping most. She kept her promise that she would be back with stars for her daughter.
Wang Yaping, at the age of 41, has made history again as she is now the first Chinese woman to stay in space for more than 100 days. Moreover, she is also the Chinese female who took the first step onto the space, outside of the space station. Believe it or not, she even stood on the highest platform to give students a live science lecture from space. Students consider her as the first female teacher in space.
For space exploration to continue, it requires the efforts of generations. As a result, all the teenagers should study harder to devote to our country like Wang Yaping, our hero.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍王亚平的个人信息;
第二步,介绍王亚平在太空方面取得的成绩;
第三步,表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①at the age of在……岁时
②more than多于
③consider sb as把某人看作
[高分句型]
①She kept her promise that she would be back with stars for her daughter.(that引导的定语从句)
②As a result, all the teenagers should study harder to devote to our country like Wang Yaping, our hero(动词不定式作目的状语)
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