内容正文:
【实用写作技巧】
第15讲 材料作文应对
第一部分:中考英语写作精讲
15.1 关键词提炼法
1. 全面阅读材料:拿到材料后,通读全文,理解材料的主旨大意。无论是名言警句、新闻报道还是寓言故事,都要把握其核心内容。比如对于名言 “Where there is a will, there is a way.”,要明确它强调的是意志和成功之间的关联。
2. 标注关键信息:在阅读过程中,用铅笔圈出或在旁边标注出重要的词汇、短语或句子。如果是新闻评论材料,像 “A new policy has been implemented in our city to encourage garbage classification. The aim is to improve the city's environment and save resources.”,关键信息就包括 “new policy”“garbage classification”“improve environment”“save resources” 等。
3. 分析关键词逻辑关系:思考关键词之间的内在联系,确定写作的重点方向。以寓言故事 “The Tortoise and the Hare” 为例,关键词 “tortoise”“hare”“slow but steady”“over - confidence”,它们之间的逻辑关系是乌龟凭借缓慢但坚定的步伐战胜了过于自信的兔子,由此可提炼出坚持、不骄傲等写作方向。
4. 确定核心关键词:从标注的关键信息中,挑选出最能体现材料主旨、对写作起关键引领作用的词汇。如上述新闻评论材料,“garbage classification” 可作为核心关键词,围绕它展开对垃圾分类意义、实施情况及个人看法的论述。
15.2 材料转述技巧
1. 变换表达方式:不要直接抄袭材料原文,可通过同义词替换、句式转换等方式进行转述。例如材料中说 “The students are very interested in the science experiment.”,转述时可以改为 “The science experiment arouses great interest among the students.” 使用 “arouse interest” 替换 “be interested in”。
2. 概括归纳:对于较长、较复杂的材料内容,进行概括总结。若材料是关于一场校园活动的报道,包含活动流程、参与人员、活动效果等多方面内容,转述时可概括为 “Last week, our school held a campus activity involving many students. Through various activities, it achieved good results in enhancing students' comprehensive abilities.” 提取关键信息,简化表述。
3. 融入个人观点过渡:在转述材料后,自然地加入自己的观点,实现从材料到论述的过渡。比如转述完名言 “Practice makes perfect.” 后,可以说 “This simple yet profound saying has always inspired me and made me deeply understand the significance of continuous practice in achieving success.” 既表明对名言的理解,又开启下文关于实践重要性的论述。
4. 注意语言简洁连贯:转述过程中,要保证语言简洁明了,避免冗长复杂的表述。同时,注意句子之间的衔接,使用恰当的连接词,如 “however”“therefore”“moreover” 等,使文章逻辑连贯。例如 “The government has taken measures to promote education equality. However, there are still some challenges to be overcome.”
15.3 范文
①名言启示
题目:
The Power of Persistence
范文
There is a well - known saying, “Constant dripping wears away the stone.” This simple sentence conveys a profound truth: persistence is the key to achieving great things.
The saying implies that even the seemingly impossible can be achieved through continuous and patient effort. Just like the water drop that, over time, can penetrate a hard stone, our consistent actions, no matter how small, can lead to significant results. In our daily lives, we often encounter difficulties and setbacks. Learning a new language, for example, can be a tough task. There are countless words to memorize and complex grammar rules to understand. But if we persist in studying a little every day, listening to English podcasts, reading English stories, and practicing speaking, we will gradually make progress.
I once decided to learn how to play the guitar. At first, my fingers hurt from pressing the strings, and I couldn't play even the simplest chords smoothly. I was on the verge of giving up. However, the thought of this famous saying inspired me. I kept practicing every day, and after months of hard work, I could play several beautiful songs. This experience taught me that as long as we have the will to persevere, we can overcome any obstacle.
In conclusion, “Constant dripping wears away the stone.” serves as a timeless reminder that with unwavering persistence, we can turn our dreams into reality.
②新闻评论
题目:
My Views on the New Garbage Classification Policy
范文
Recently, I read a news report stating that our city has implemented a new garbage classification policy. The policy aims to improve environmental quality and promote resource recycling.
The new policy requires residents to separate their garbage into four categories: recyclables, kitchen waste, hazardous waste, and other waste. It also provides specific guidelines on how to dispose of different types of waste. This is a significant step towards building a more sustainable city. By classifying garbage properly, we can reduce pollution, save energy, and protect natural resources. For example, recycling paper can save trees, and recycling plastic can reduce the use of raw materials.
However, the implementation of this policy also faces some challenges. Some people are not used to the new classification rules and find it inconvenient. In addition, the lack of sufficient publicity and education makes some residents unaware of the importance of garbage classification.
In my opinion, to ensure the successful implementation of this policy, the government should strengthen publicity and education. They can organize community activities, distribute brochures, and use social media to popularize garbage classification knowledge. At the same time, individuals should also actively cooperate and develop good garbage - sorting habits. Only when everyone takes responsibility can we make our city cleaner and more beautiful.
③寓言故事
题目:
The Lesson from “The Ant and the Grasshopper”
范文
The fable “The Ant and the Grasshopper” tells a simple but thought - provoking story. In the story, while the ant works hard all summer to store food for the winter, the grasshopper spends its days singing and playing, without any thought for the future. When winter comes, the ant has enough food to survive, while the grasshopper is left hungry and cold.
This fable vividly shows the importance of hard work and foresight. The ant's diligence and planning enable it to live comfortably in the harsh winter. In contrast, the grasshopper's laziness and short - sightedness lead to its downfall. In our real lives, this lesson is also highly applicable. For students, if we waste our time playing games or being idle during the semesters, we may face difficulties in exams and future studies. Just like the grasshopper, we will regret not having made good use of our time.
Take my classmate Tom as an example. He always played around instead of studying during the first two years of middle school. When it came to the final exams of Grade 8, he found that he couldn't understand many knowledge points and failed several courses. After that, he realized his mistake and started to study hard.
In conclusion, the fable “The Ant and the Grasshopper” teaches us that we should work hard and plan ahead to achieve a better life. Laziness and lack of foresight will only bring us trouble in the long run.
第二部分:中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背
1.(2025·陕西·模拟预测)假如你是李明,你校英语报正在开展以“团队合作”为主题的征文活动。请你认真阅读以下通知,并按照要求用英语写一篇短文,参加此次活动。
NoticeDear students,
Teamwork is very necessary in modern society. We all need teamwork in work, study and life. So our newspaper holds a writing competition about teamwork. It aims to explore how teamwork influences you and your life. Write a short passage to send to us!
Here are some questions to help you.
●What is your understanding of teamwork?
●Do you have any experience about teamwork? What’s it?
●What does that experience mean to you?
We are looking forward to your passage.
School English Newspaper
要求:
1. 短文必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等) ;
4. 词数:不少于70。 (开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Teamwork is very important.
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2.(24-25九年级下·广东广州·开学考试)你校将在开学初举行英语征文比赛,主题是“My unforgettable Spring Festival”。请在以下思维导图的基础上,适当选取信息或拓展信息,写一篇文章。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
My unforgettable Spring Festival
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3.(2025·湖北黄冈·模拟预测)在初中三年里,同学们都发生了很大的变化。假如你是来自初三(1)班的学生李华,你校的英语报正在举行以“How I’ve Changed”为主题的征稿活动。请你用英语写一篇文章投稿。
内容包括:
1. 你在初中三年里发生的变化(包括外貌、性格、爱好等方面),灵活运用所学短语used to;
2. 谈谈这些变化给你带来的影响(至少写两点);
3. 期待自己将来有更多更好的变化。
写作要求:
1. 不得在文章中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
How I’ve Changed
In the past few years, my appearance, personality and even my hobbies have changed a lot.
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4.(2025九年级·北京·专题练习)近年来,书法、茶艺、剪纸、古典乐器等传统文化走进校园已成为热潮。假设你校英语报社正就“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Culture”征文,请你根据 以下提示写一篇短文。
写作要点:
1. 你最喜欢的一种中国传统文化的形式及其特点;
2. 你体验该传统文化的经历;
3. 你的收获及感受。
参考词汇: calligraphy 书法: zither 古筝; bamboo flute 竹笛
要求:
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥:
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数80—120,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Nowadays, with the popularity of Chinese style, more people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s treasure, protect and spread our own valuable culture together.
5.(2025九年级·北京·专题练习)中国的泥塑艺术具有独特的东方特色。假如你是来自中国的交换生,现就读于美国一所学校。请你根据下面所给的提示,以“Chinese Clay Art”为题,写一篇介绍中国泥塑艺术的短文。词数:100左右。
特点
器件虽小,但看起来逼真。
颜色
色彩缤纷。
人物形象
可爱的小孩或中国历史故事中的生动角色。
制作流程
由特殊黏土制作成型,然后风干;在高温中煅烧,然后打磨绘画。
现状
在中国各地备受人们欢迎。
参考词汇:
1.clay pieces 泥塑器件
2.air-dry风干
3.at a high heat在高温中
4.polish 打磨
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6.(24-25九年级下·江苏泰州·开学考试)近日,江苏省教育厅下发通知,要求从2025年春学期开始,全省义务教育学校落实15分钟课间时长,保证学生每天综合体育活动时间不低于2小时。体育锻炼引发了广泛关注。为了鼓励同学们积极参与体育运动,你校英文网站开展了主题征文活动。请你根据提示,以“My favourite sport”为题写一篇短文投稿。
My favourite sport※ What is it? ※ How often do you do it?
※ Why do you like it? ……
要求:1.100词左右;
2.包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
My favourite sport
My favourite sport is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.(2024·四川广元·中考真题)“小满”遇上“520”,小得盈满,爱逢其时。近日,校园广播站将举办主题为“FindBeauty, Enjoy Life”的分享活动。请结合以下提示,写篇英文短文,分享你的美好经历,并谈谈你的感受。
写作方面:
(1)取得进步时,获得认可的美好;
(2)结交朋友后,一起相处的美好;
(3)环境改善后,幸福生活的美好。
写作要求:
(1)短文须包含以上至少一个方面和你的感受,并举例说明,事例数量不限;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
(3)全文词数80左右。文章开头语已给出,不计入总词数。
Life is never perfect. However, beauty is always found in our life.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.(2024·山东聊城·中考真题)假如你校校报英语专栏正在以“Take care of yourself”为题举办征文活动,请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。
内容要点:1. 我们应从哪些方面做起,比如:身体健康(饮食、锻炼等)、生活技能(洗衣,做饭等)、心理健康(心态,抗挫等)……
2. 具体应该怎么做;
3. 这样做的好处是什么。
要求:
1. 至少从两个方面给出自己的看法;
2. 文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息;
3. 照抄试卷内容不得分。
Word bank
physical health身体健康;life skills生活技能;mental health 心理健康
Take care of yourself
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9.(2024·山东济南·中考真题)假定你是李华,你校与某乡镇希望中学 (Hope Middle School) 是友好学校,上周五两校英语社团在希望中学举行了共演英文课本剧活动。请你为校英文报写一则新闻稿,
内容包括:
1. 时间、地点、参与人员;
2. 活动过程简介;
3. 活动意义。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:英文课本剧 English textbook drama
友好学校 sister school
An English Textbook Drama Show
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10.(2024·内蒙古通辽·中考真题)作为新时代的学生,我们应该注重全面发展,努力成为品德高尚、乐学善思、身心健康、兴趣广泛的人。请根据下面提示,以 “How to Be Good Students”为题目,写一篇英语短文,谈谈如何做新时代的好学生。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,逻辑清晰,书写规范。
2. 要包括图表中所给的提示信息并适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
4. 不少于80词。(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数)
How to Be Good Students
As students in the new era (时代), we are supposed to develop fully. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11.(2024·江苏徐州·中考真题)假定你是徐州的一名九年级学生李华。你校英文报正组织题为“A famous person in the history of Xuzhou”的征文活动,你选择的人物是苏轼(1077—1079年间任徐州知州)。请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文,参加征文活动。
注意:
1. 征文需包括以上三个要点;
2. 词数90左右;
3. 征文中不得泄露个人信息。
提示词:苏堤 Su Causeway 黄楼 Huanglou Pavilion
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12.(2024·山东枣庄·中考真题)为了培养学生的发明和创新精神,学校将举行中学生科技创新大赛。假定你是李华,你准备发明一件物品,参加本次大赛。请你以“I want to invent ________”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你的发明物。内容包括:
注意:(1)请先补全标题;
(2)短文须全面反映图文信息;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(4)词数 80~100。
I want to invent ________
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13.(2024·黑龙江大庆·中考真题)习近平总书记说:“人世间的一切幸福都需要靠辛勤的劳动来创造。”劳动可以增强体质,提升自信,培养责任感。在生活中,你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能,比如洗衣、做饭、打扫教室等。现学校英语报正在征集关于“劳动”的稿件,请你以“Labor(劳动) Makes a Better Life”为题,写一篇稿件。
内容包括:
1. 你擅长哪项劳动技能?
2. 在劳动中你有什么感受?
3. 劳动给你带来了什么益处?
参考词汇:build up one’s body (增强体质)
develop a sense of duty (培养责任感)
写作要求:
1. 词数应为90个左右;
2. 可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 不得泄露个人信息。
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14.(2024·西藏·中考真题)教师是学生的良师益友,是人类灵魂的工程师。在第四十个教师节即将到来之际,我校举办“最美教师”征文活动,请参考所给图示。以“The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart”为题写一篇英语短文。
写作要求:
1.词数不少于70词,短文的标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数:
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3.参考图示完成写作,可适当发挥:
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。
The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart
There are many excellent teachers in our school. I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.(2024·湖北武汉·模拟预测)习近平总书记在全国教育大会上强调,”要努力构建德智体美劳全面培养的教育体系”。劳动教育贯通大中小学各学段,纳入人才培养全过程。假如你是李华,你校英文报社发起了”A Helper of My Class”的主题征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇短文,介绍你常做的事情,并谈一谈你的心得和建议。
写作要点:
1. What do you often do for your class?
2. When do you do that?
3. Do you think it’s necessary? Why or why not?
4. Some suggestions for your schoolmates.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总次数。
A Helper of My Class
I am a good helper of my class.
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【实用写作技巧】
第15讲 材料作文应对
第一部分:中考英语写作精讲
15.1 关键词提炼法
1. 全面阅读材料:拿到材料后,通读全文,理解材料的主旨大意。无论是名言警句、新闻报道还是寓言故事,都要把握其核心内容。比如对于名言 “Where there is a will, there is a way.”,要明确它强调的是意志和成功之间的关联。
2. 标注关键信息:在阅读过程中,用铅笔圈出或在旁边标注出重要的词汇、短语或句子。如果是新闻评论材料,像 “A new policy has been implemented in our city to encourage garbage classification. The aim is to improve the city's environment and save resources.”,关键信息就包括 “new policy”“garbage classification”“improve environment”“save resources” 等。
3. 分析关键词逻辑关系:思考关键词之间的内在联系,确定写作的重点方向。以寓言故事 “The Tortoise and the Hare” 为例,关键词 “tortoise”“hare”“slow but steady”“over - confidence”,它们之间的逻辑关系是乌龟凭借缓慢但坚定的步伐战胜了过于自信的兔子,由此可提炼出坚持、不骄傲等写作方向。
4. 确定核心关键词:从标注的关键信息中,挑选出最能体现材料主旨、对写作起关键引领作用的词汇。如上述新闻评论材料,“garbage classification” 可作为核心关键词,围绕它展开对垃圾分类意义、实施情况及个人看法的论述。
15.2 材料转述技巧
1. 变换表达方式:不要直接抄袭材料原文,可通过同义词替换、句式转换等方式进行转述。例如材料中说 “The students are very interested in the science experiment.”,转述时可以改为 “The science experiment arouses great interest among the students.” 使用 “arouse interest” 替换 “be interested in”。
2. 概括归纳:对于较长、较复杂的材料内容,进行概括总结。若材料是关于一场校园活动的报道,包含活动流程、参与人员、活动效果等多方面内容,转述时可概括为 “Last week, our school held a campus activity involving many students. Through various activities, it achieved good results in enhancing students' comprehensive abilities.” 提取关键信息,简化表述。
3. 融入个人观点过渡:在转述材料后,自然地加入自己的观点,实现从材料到论述的过渡。比如转述完名言 “Practice makes perfect.” 后,可以说 “This simple yet profound saying has always inspired me and made me deeply understand the significance of continuous practice in achieving success.” 既表明对名言的理解,又开启下文关于实践重要性的论述。
4. 注意语言简洁连贯:转述过程中,要保证语言简洁明了,避免冗长复杂的表述。同时,注意句子之间的衔接,使用恰当的连接词,如 “however”“therefore”“moreover” 等,使文章逻辑连贯。例如 “The government has taken measures to promote education equality. However, there are still some challenges to be overcome.”
15.3 范文
①名言启示
题目:
The Power of Persistence
范文
There is a well - known saying, “Constant dripping wears away the stone.” This simple sentence conveys a profound truth: persistence is the key to achieving great things.
The saying implies that even the seemingly impossible can be achieved through continuous and patient effort. Just like the water drop that, over time, can penetrate a hard stone, our consistent actions, no matter how small, can lead to significant results. In our daily lives, we often encounter difficulties and setbacks. Learning a new language, for example, can be a tough task. There are countless words to memorize and complex grammar rules to understand. But if we persist in studying a little every day, listening to English podcasts, reading English stories, and practicing speaking, we will gradually make progress.
I once decided to learn how to play the guitar. At first, my fingers hurt from pressing the strings, and I couldn't play even the simplest chords smoothly. I was on the verge of giving up. However, the thought of this famous saying inspired me. I kept practicing every day, and after months of hard work, I could play several beautiful songs. This experience taught me that as long as we have the will to persevere, we can overcome any obstacle.
In conclusion, “Constant dripping wears away the stone.” serves as a timeless reminder that with unwavering persistence, we can turn our dreams into reality.
②新闻评论
题目:
My Views on the New Garbage Classification Policy
范文
Recently, I read a news report stating that our city has implemented a new garbage classification policy. The policy aims to improve environmental quality and promote resource recycling.
The new policy requires residents to separate their garbage into four categories: recyclables, kitchen waste, hazardous waste, and other waste. It also provides specific guidelines on how to dispose of different types of waste. This is a significant step towards building a more sustainable city. By classifying garbage properly, we can reduce pollution, save energy, and protect natural resources. For example, recycling paper can save trees, and recycling plastic can reduce the use of raw materials.
However, the implementation of this policy also faces some challenges. Some people are not used to the new classification rules and find it inconvenient. In addition, the lack of sufficient publicity and education makes some residents unaware of the importance of garbage classification.
In my opinion, to ensure the successful implementation of this policy, the government should strengthen publicity and education. They can organize community activities, distribute brochures, and use social media to popularize garbage classification knowledge. At the same time, individuals should also actively cooperate and develop good garbage - sorting habits. Only when everyone takes responsibility can we make our city cleaner and more beautiful.
③寓言故事
题目:
The Lesson from “The Ant and the Grasshopper”
范文
The fable “The Ant and the Grasshopper” tells a simple but thought - provoking story. In the story, while the ant works hard all summer to store food for the winter, the grasshopper spends its days singing and playing, without any thought for the future. When winter comes, the ant has enough food to survive, while the grasshopper is left hungry and cold.
This fable vividly shows the importance of hard work and foresight. The ant's diligence and planning enable it to live comfortably in the harsh winter. In contrast, the grasshopper's laziness and short - sightedness lead to its downfall. In our real lives, this lesson is also highly applicable. For students, if we waste our time playing games or being idle during the semesters, we may face difficulties in exams and future studies. Just like the grasshopper, we will regret not having made good use of our time.
Take my classmate Tom as an example. He always played around instead of studying during the first two years of middle school. When it came to the final exams of Grade 8, he found that he couldn't understand many knowledge points and failed several courses. After that, he realized his mistake and started to study hard.
In conclusion, the fable “The Ant and the Grasshopper” teaches us that we should work hard and plan ahead to achieve a better life. Laziness and lack of foresight will only bring us trouble in the long run.
第二部分:中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背
1.(2025·陕西·模拟预测)假如你是李明,你校英语报正在开展以“团队合作”为主题的征文活动。请你认真阅读以下通知,并按照要求用英语写一篇短文,参加此次活动。
NoticeDear students,
Teamwork is very necessary in modern society. We all need teamwork in work, study and life. So our newspaper holds a writing competition about teamwork. It aims to explore how teamwork influences you and your life. Write a short passage to send to us!
Here are some questions to help you.
●What is your understanding of teamwork?
●Do you have any experience about teamwork? What’s it?
●What does that experience mean to you?
We are looking forward to your passage.
School English Newspaper
要求:
1. 短文必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等) ;
4. 词数:不少于70。 (开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Teamwork is very important.
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【满分优秀范文】
Teamwork is very important. For me, it means working together with others to achieve a common goal.
I had a wonderful experience with teamwork during an English class project. Our task was to create a short film in English. At first, we had different opinions, which caused some problems. However, we got over them by listening to each other. We designed different roles for each member, such as writer, director and actor. We also communicated to make sure everyone was on the same page. Finally, we created a great short film that received high praise. We know that all this success is the result of our team’s hard work.
This experience made me realize that through teamwork, we can learn from each other, improve our skills and achieve more.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏通知中的关键信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你对团队合作的理解;
第二步,谈谈你有关于团队合作的经验;
第三步,谈谈你的经历对你来说学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①got over克服
②each other互相
③make sure确保
[高分句型]
①We know that all this success is the result of our team’s hard work.(宾语从句)
2.(24-25九年级下·广东广州·开学考试)你校将在开学初举行英语征文比赛,主题是“My unforgettable Spring Festival”。请在以下思维导图的基础上,适当选取信息或拓展信息,写一篇文章。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
My unforgettable Spring Festival
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【满分优秀范文】
My unforgettable Spring Festival
This Spring Festival was truly unforgettable. I celebrated it in my hometown with my whole family.
On New Year’s Eve, we gathered to make dumplings. My grandma taught me to shape them. While making dumplings, we shared funny stories, laughing heartily. Later, we had a big dinner together.
The most exciting moment came when we set off fireworks. The sky lit up with colorful lights. I felt extremely happy and warm.
This Spring Festival strengthened our family bond, and I will always cherish these memories.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山。介绍你难忘的春节是和谁、在哪里度过的,引出下文;
第二步,具体阐述。介绍你们做了什么难忘的事;
第三步,书写结语。表达你对这个难忘的春节的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① heartily 尽情地
② set off fireworks 放烟花
③ strengthen 增强
④ cherish 珍惜
[高分句型]
While making dumplings, we shared funny stories, laughing heartily. (时间状语从句)
3.(2025·湖北黄冈·模拟预测)在初中三年里,同学们都发生了很大的变化。假如你是来自初三(1)班的学生李华,你校的英语报正在举行以“How I’ve Changed”为主题的征稿活动。请你用英语写一篇文章投稿。
内容包括:
1. 你在初中三年里发生的变化(包括外貌、性格、爱好等方面),灵活运用所学短语used to;
2. 谈谈这些变化给你带来的影响(至少写两点);
3. 期待自己将来有更多更好的变化。
写作要求:
1. 不得在文章中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
How I’ve Changed
In the past few years, my appearance, personality and even my hobbies have changed a lot.
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【满分优秀范文】
How I’ve Changed
In the past few years, my appearance, personality and even my hobbies have changed a lot.
I used to be small, but now I am taller and stronger. I used to be shy, but now I am outgoing and good at communicating with people. My hobbies have changed, too. I used to like reading books by myself, but now I prefer to take part in sports activities, especially playing football.
These changes are of great importance to me. The change in my appearance has made me more confident and more popular. The change of hobbies makes me make more friends and my life becomes more colorful.
I think these changes have positive meanings for me, and I hope I will have more and better changes in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述变化的细节,对现在和过去进行对比,并详细说明这些变化带来的影响;
第三步,表达这些变化对自己有积极意义,并希望未来有更多更好的变化。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②be good at擅长
③prefer to do sth.更喜欢做某事
④take part in参加
⑤in the future未来
[高分句型]
I think these changes have positive meanings for me, and I hope I will have more and better changes in the future. (宾语从句)
4.(2025九年级·北京·专题练习)近年来,书法、茶艺、剪纸、古典乐器等传统文化走进校园已成为热潮。假设你校英语报社正就“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Culture”征文,请你根据 以下提示写一篇短文。
写作要点:
1. 你最喜欢的一种中国传统文化的形式及其特点;
2. 你体验该传统文化的经历;
3. 你的收获及感受。
参考词汇: calligraphy 书法: zither 古筝; bamboo flute 竹笛
要求:
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥:
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数80—120,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Nowadays, with the popularity of Chinese style, more people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s treasure, protect and spread our own valuable culture together.
【满分优秀范文】
Nowadays, with the popularity of Chinese style, more people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture. My favorite traditional Chinese art form is the Chinese Zither, one of the most ancient Chinese musical instruments. It is sometimes called “the Chinese piano”.
I started learning the Chinese Zither when I was eight. At first, it was challenging for me. My finger would ache after playing for a long time. Luckily, with the help of my teacher, gradually improved. Now, I can play a lot of pieces of music for my family and classmates.
Learning the Chinese Zither has a great influence on me and I become more patient and careful. Also, I feel honored to be able to spread this traditional Chinese culture.
Let’s treasure, protect and spread our own valuable culture together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你最喜欢的一种中国传统文化的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作主题,越来越多的对中国传统文化表现出了极大的兴趣;
第二步,具体介绍自己最喜欢的一种传统文化,阐述自己体验该文化的经历及收获;
第三步,书写结语,发出“让我们一起珍惜、保护和传播我们自己的宝贵文化”的倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①start doing sth.开始做某事;
②with the help of在……的帮助下;
③have a great influence on对……有很大的影响;
④let sb. do sth.让某人做某事。
[高分句型]
①Learning the Chinese Zither has a great influence on me and I become more patient and careful. (动名词作主语)
②Let’s treasure, protect and spread our own valuable culture together. (祈使句)
5.(2025九年级·北京·专题练习)中国的泥塑艺术具有独特的东方特色。假如你是来自中国的交换生,现就读于美国一所学校。请你根据下面所给的提示,以“Chinese Clay Art”为题,写一篇介绍中国泥塑艺术的短文。词数:100左右。
特点
器件虽小,但看起来逼真。
颜色
色彩缤纷。
人物形象
可爱的小孩或中国历史故事中的生动角色。
制作流程
由特殊黏土制作成型,然后风干;在高温中煅烧,然后打磨绘画。
现状
在中国各地备受人们欢迎。
参考词汇:
1.clay pieces 泥塑器件
2.air-dry风干
3.at a high heat在高温中
4.polish 打磨
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【满分优秀范文】
Chinese Clay Art
Chinese clay art is one of the most traditional art forms. It’s famous/known because the clay pieces are so small but they look very real. They are colorful and they are usually cute children or lively characters from Chinese historical stories. The pieces are made of a very special kind of clay, and then allowed to air-dry. After drying, they are fired at a very high heat. They are then polished and painted. These small pieces of clay art show the love that all Chinese people have for life and beauty.
They can be seen in different parts of China and they are becoming more and more popular among the young and the old.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明中国的泥塑艺术是最传统的艺术形式之一;
第二步,具体说明泥塑艺术的特点、颜色、人物形象和制作流程;
第三步,描述泥塑艺术的现状。
[亮点词汇]
① be made of由……制作
② polished and painted抛光和涂漆
③ different parts of China中国的不同地区
[高分句型]
It’s famous/known because the clay pieces are so small but they look very real.(because引导原因状语从句)
6.(24-25九年级下·江苏泰州·开学考试)近日,江苏省教育厅下发通知,要求从2025年春学期开始,全省义务教育学校落实15分钟课间时长,保证学生每天综合体育活动时间不低于2小时。体育锻炼引发了广泛关注。为了鼓励同学们积极参与体育运动,你校英文网站开展了主题征文活动。请你根据提示,以“My favourite sport”为题写一篇短文投稿。
My favourite sport※ What is it? ※ How often do you do it?
※ Why do you like it? ……
要求:1.100词左右;
2.包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
My favourite sport
My favourite sport is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
My favourite sport
My favourite sport is basketball. I play it about three times a week after school. I like basketball because it is exciting and a great way to keep fit. Playing basketball helps me develop teamwork and strategic thinking skills. It also allows me to meet new friends and have fun. During the weekends, I often watch basketball games on TV to learn new techniques. Whether it’s shooting hoops or playing a friendly match with my classmates, basketball brings me joy and energy.
I believe that engaging in sports like basketball not only improves our physical health but also our mental well-being.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我最喜欢的运动是篮球”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“运动是什么、运动频率、喜爱原因”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep fit保持健康
②have fun玩得开心
[高分句型]
I like basketball because it is exciting and a great way to keep fit.(because引导的原因状语从句)
7.(2024·四川广元·中考真题)“小满”遇上“520”,小得盈满,爱逢其时。近日,校园广播站将举办主题为“FindBeauty, Enjoy Life”的分享活动。请结合以下提示,写篇英文短文,分享你的美好经历,并谈谈你的感受。
写作方面:
(1)取得进步时,获得认可的美好;
(2)结交朋友后,一起相处的美好;
(3)环境改善后,幸福生活的美好。
写作要求:
(1)短文须包含以上至少一个方面和你的感受,并举例说明,事例数量不限;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
(3)全文词数80左右。文章开头语已给出,不计入总词数。
Life is never perfect. However, beauty is always found in our life.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Life is never perfect, However, beauty is always found in our life. Looking back on the past two years, I have made great progress.
First of all, I have made many friends. We share our feelings with each other. When I am in trouble, they give me a hand. I am not shy any longer and become active and confident. With the help of my parents, I have learned to do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so on. I can take care of myself well now. Thanks to my kind and patient teachers, I have developed good learning habits, and done better in study as well.
I will make greater efforts to achieve greater success in the future!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己在过去两年内取得很大的进步;
第二步,具体阐述自己的美好经历;
第三步,最后表达意愿。
[亮点词汇]
① first of all首先
② in trouble陷入麻烦
③ with the help of在……帮助下
[高分句型]
When I am in trouble, they give me a hand.(when引导的时间状语从句)
8.(2024·山东聊城·中考真题)假如你校校报英语专栏正在以“Take care of yourself”为题举办征文活动,请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。
内容要点:1. 我们应从哪些方面做起,比如:身体健康(饮食、锻炼等)、生活技能(洗衣,做饭等)、心理健康(心态,抗挫等)……
2. 具体应该怎么做;
3. 这样做的好处是什么。
要求:
1. 至少从两个方面给出自己的看法;
2. 文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息;
3. 照抄试卷内容不得分。
Word bank
physical health身体健康;life skills生活技能;mental health 心理健康
Take care of yourself
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【满分优秀范文】:
Take care of yourself
As we all know, health is very important in our life. So you should take care of yourself.
It is important to have physical health. So you should try to have a healthy diet. Also, you should keep doing exercise. Having enough sleep is necessary as well. They are good for your health and have a strong body. What’s more, learning some life skills is of great importance. You can learn how to wash clothes, cook and so on. They help you be independent. At the same time, you should do your best to keep your mental health. You should have an active attitude when you have failures and problems. In this way, you will have more courage to face the challenges ahead.
Take care of yourself and you will have a better future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求以“Take care of yourself”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体介绍应该怎么做以及这样做的好处;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have a healthy diet 饮食健康
②What’s more 此外
③At the same time 同时
④face the challenges ahead 面对未来的挑战
[高分句型]
①You should have an active attitude when you have failures and problems.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Take care of yourself and you will have a better future!(祈使句)
9.(2024·山东济南·中考真题)假定你是李华,你校与某乡镇希望中学 (Hope Middle School) 是友好学校,上周五两校英语社团在希望中学举行了共演英文课本剧活动。请你为校英文报写一则新闻稿,
内容包括:
1. 时间、地点、参与人员;
2. 活动过程简介;
3. 活动意义。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:英文课本剧 English textbook drama
友好学校 sister school
An English Textbook Drama Show
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【满分优秀范文】
An English Textbook Drama Show
Last Friday, a fantastic English textbook drama show was held on the playground of our sister school, Hope Middle School, with up to 300 teachers and students from the English clubs of the two schools taking part.
The drama show lasted two hours. The members of both clubs performed three short plays of traditional Chinese stories from our textbook, which reflected the good qualities of the Chinese people and our excellent traditional culture. Thanks to the great efforts of all performers and teachers, the 2-hour show was a great success. At the end of the show, all the people present stood up and cheered for their wonderful performance.
We all believe this activity provided a good chance for us to enjoy English plays, improving our English language skills as well as bringing the two schools closer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时为主;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍学校举行的英文课本剧活动,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍时间、地点、参与人员;
第二步,介绍活动的过程;
第三步,介绍活动的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①thanks to幸亏
②stand up站起来
③as well as和
[高分句型]
①The members of both clubs performed three short plays of traditional Chinese stories from our textbook, which reflected the good qualities of the Chinese people and our excellent traditional culture. (定语从句)
②We all believe this activity provided a good chance for us to enjoy English plays, improving our English language skills as well as bringing the two schools closer. (宾语从句)
10.(2024·内蒙古通辽·中考真题)作为新时代的学生,我们应该注重全面发展,努力成为品德高尚、乐学善思、身心健康、兴趣广泛的人。请根据下面提示,以 “How to Be Good Students”为题目,写一篇英语短文,谈谈如何做新时代的好学生。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,逻辑清晰,书写规范。
2. 要包括图表中所给的提示信息并适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
4. 不少于80词。(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数)
How to Be Good Students
As students in the new era (时代), we are supposed to develop fully. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】:
How to Be Good Students
As students in the new era (时代), we are supposed to develop fully. Today, I’m glad to share my ideas on how to be good students.
First, we should love our motherland as well as our family. We must be honest and helpful to the people around us. We should be friendly to our classmates. These are good qualities of good students. Second, we should form good study habits. We should study hard and think about things carefully. We should help each other and learn from each other. Third, we should take more physical exercise to build up our health. We should be happy and confident students. We should also do housework regularly and learn to be independent.
As long as we work hard, we will become excellent students.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏提示中的内容,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,表明写作意图。借用“新时代的学生要注重全面发展”来引出下文中对如何做新时代的好学生的描述;
②第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“精神品质、学习习惯和身体健康”三方面入手,重点介绍 如何做新时代的好学生;
③第三步,书写结语。要努力学习,成为好学生。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as 和,以及
②think about 思考,考虑
③as long as 只要
[高分句型]
①Today, I’m glad to share my ideas on how to be good students.(“how+不定式”作宾语)
②As long as we work hard, we will become excellent students.(as long as引导的条件状语从句)
11.(2024·江苏徐州·中考真题)假定你是徐州的一名九年级学生李华。你校英文报正组织题为“A famous person in the history of Xuzhou”的征文活动,你选择的人物是苏轼(1077—1079年间任徐州知州)。请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文,参加征文活动。
注意:
1. 征文需包括以上三个要点;
2. 词数90左右;
3. 征文中不得泄露个人信息。
提示词:苏堤 Su Causeway 黄楼 Huanglou Pavilion
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【满分优秀范文】
A famous person in the history of Xuzhou
Su Shi, also known as Su Dongpo, was a famous poet, writer, and politician in ancient China. He is widely regarded as one of the greatest poets in Chinese history and his works have been admired for centuries. Su Shi’s contributions to Xuzhou, in particular, are significant and have left a lasting influence on the city.
He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou. Su Shi also discovered coal in the area. Besides his achievements, Su Shi was a productive poet. Su Shi’s time in Xuzhou was a period of great creativity and productivity, and his works reflect his love for the city and its people. When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.
Su Shi’s legacy in Xuzhou lives on through his writings, the structures he helped build, and the memories of the people he touched. He is remembered as a hero and a cultural icon in Xuzhou, and his contributions to the city will never be forgotten.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般过去时为主;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要漏写你的感受,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单阐述苏轼的身份以及成就;
第二步,苏轼在任徐州知州之间的经历;
第三步,说说你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be regarded as被认为
②admire...for...因……羡慕
③contribute to对……做贡献
[高分句型]
①When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.(时间状语从句)
②He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou.(定语从句)
12.(2024·山东枣庄·中考真题)为了培养学生的发明和创新精神,学校将举行中学生科技创新大赛。假定你是李华,你准备发明一件物品,参加本次大赛。请你以“I want to invent ________”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你的发明物。内容包括:
注意:(1)请先补全标题;
(2)短文须全面反映图文信息;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(4)词数 80~100。
I want to invent ________
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【满分优秀范文】
I want to invent a special pen
I want to invent a special pen that can help students learn more efficiently.
It looks like a normal pen. This pen will have a built-in dictionary and translation function, allowing students to look up words and translate sentences instantly. It will also have a voice recording feature, so students can record lectures and listen to them later. The pen will be lightweight and easy to carry, making it perfect for use in classrooms, libraries, and at home.
I believe this pen will greatly enhance students’ learning experiences and make studying more enjoyable and effective.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,想要发明一种特殊的钢笔;
第二步,具体介绍发明这种钢笔的原因、外观和用途、使用场合;
第三步,进行评价。
[亮点词汇]
①look like 看起来像
②look up 查阅
[高分句型]
①I want to invent a special pen that can help students learn more efficiently.(定语从句)
②I believe this pen will greatly enhance students’ learning experiences and make studying more enjoyable and effective.(省略that的宾语从句)
13.(2024·黑龙江大庆·中考真题)习近平总书记说:“人世间的一切幸福都需要靠辛勤的劳动来创造。”劳动可以增强体质,提升自信,培养责任感。在生活中,你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能,比如洗衣、做饭、打扫教室等。现学校英语报正在征集关于“劳动”的稿件,请你以“Labor(劳动) Makes a Better Life”为题,写一篇稿件。
内容包括:
1. 你擅长哪项劳动技能?
2. 在劳动中你有什么感受?
3. 劳动给你带来了什么益处?
参考词汇:build up one’s body (增强体质)
develop a sense of duty (培养责任感)
写作要求:
1. 词数应为90个左右;
2. 可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 不得泄露个人信息。
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【满分优秀范文】
Labor Makes a Better Life
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. I am very good at cooking. I always cook meals for my parents when I am free on weekends. I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking. I can learn how to take good care of myself instead of making my parents worry about me. Labor can also develop a sense of duty.
In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求以“Labor Makes a Better Life”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍擅长的一项劳动技能是什么;
第二步,介绍这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处;
第三步,介绍打算学习其他什么劳动技能。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②on weekends在周末
③take good care of照顾好
④In the future在未来
[高分句型]
①I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
14.(2024·西藏·中考真题)教师是学生的良师益友,是人类灵魂的工程师。在第四十个教师节即将到来之际,我校举办“最美教师”征文活动,请参考所给图示。以“The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart”为题写一篇英语短文。
写作要求:
1.词数不少于70词,短文的标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数:
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3.参考图示完成写作,可适当发挥:
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。
The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart
There are many excellent teachers in our school. I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart
There are many excellent teachers in our school. I think the most beautiful teacher in my heart is Ms. Li.
She is a tall and elegant woman with long black hair and bright eyes. Ms. Li is always kind and patient with her students. Ms. Li is very dedicated to her work. She prepares her lessons carefully and uses various methods to make her classes interesting. Her teaching style is both inspiring and effective.
I admire Ms. Li not only for her teaching skills but also for her positive attitude and strong sense of responsibility. She treats every student with respect and fairness.
Her passion for teaching and her genuine care for her students make her the most beautiful teacher in my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你心中的最美教师是谁;
第二步,介绍这个老师的工作态度和方法;
第三步,介绍你这样认为的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① be patient with对……有耐心
② be dedicated to致力于
③ sense of responsibility责任感
[高分句型]
I think the most beautiful teacher in my heart is Ms. Li.(宾语从句)
15.(2024·湖北武汉·模拟预测)习近平总书记在全国教育大会上强调,”要努力构建德智体美劳全面培养的教育体系”。劳动教育贯通大中小学各学段,纳入人才培养全过程。假如你是李华,你校英文报社发起了”A Helper of My Class”的主题征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇短文,介绍你常做的事情,并谈一谈你的心得和建议。
写作要点:
1. What do you often do for your class?
2. When do you do that?
3. Do you think it’s necessary? Why or why not?
4. Some suggestions for your schoolmates.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总次数。
A Helper of My Class
I am a good helper of my class.
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【满分优秀范文】
A Helper of My Class
I am a good helper of my class.
I often help hand out exam papers and clean the blackboard for my teachers whenever I am free. Sometimes my classmates meet some problems that they can’t solve. I am always ready to help them out during the breaks between classes or in my spare time.
“Helping others is helping ourselves.” Certainly it is necessary for us to do something helpful for our class.
It is not enough to just get good grades, but helping others is also important. So I think we should give them a hand in time without thinking twice whenever our classmates have difficulties. Besides we should also care about their mental health. Let’s take action now.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:一般现在时;
③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,考生需要把所有要点都写进去,但是不能逐条翻译,注意内容的连贯性和逻辑性。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述自己经常在什么时候为班级做哪些事情;
第二步,谈论自己做这些事情的必要性;
第三步,给出建议并号召其他同学为班级做事情。
[亮点词汇]
① hand out分发
② whenever无论何时
③ be ready to do准备好做某事
④ spare time空余时间
[高分句型]
① Sometimes my classmates meet some problems that they can’t solve.(that引导的定语从句)
② Helping others is helping ourselves.(动名词作主语)
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