13 成长感悟写作-2025年中考英语考前冲刺作文必背(模板、素材、分类押题范文)(通用版)

【情感表达类】 第13讲 成长感悟写作 第一部分：中考英语写作精讲 13.1 夹叙夹议模板 1. 开头引入：可以通过一个具体的场景、事件或者一句引人深思的话来引出主题。比如：“Last summer, I participated in a challenging mountain - climbing activity, which turned out to be a life - changing experience.” 用一次具体的活动经历开篇，迅速吸引读者的注意力，同时为后文的夹叙夹议做铺垫。 2. 叙述部分：详细讲述事情的经过，按照时间顺序或者事情发展的逻辑顺序进行描述。在描述过程中，要加入细节描写，使故事更加生动。例如在讲述失败经历时，可以这样写：“As I started climbing, I was full of confidence. However, halfway up the mountain, I felt extremely tired. My legs were so heavy that every step seemed to be a struggle. And then, due to my carelessness, I slipped and fell, scraping my knees badly.” 这样的细节描述能让读者感同身受。 3. 议论部分：在叙述完事件后，适时地发表自己的看法和感悟。可以分析事件产生的原因，或者阐述从中学到的道理。接着上面的例子，议论部分可以是：“This failure made me realize that confidence alone is not enough. Preparation and caution are equally important. In life, we often face difficulties, and it's how we handle them that determines our success or failure.” 通过对事件的分析，升华主题，让读者明白其中蕴含的人生哲理。 4. 结尾总结：总结全文，再次强调自己的感悟，或者提出对未来的展望。例如：“From then on, I have always reminded myself to be well - prepared before taking on any challenge. I believe that with this lesson in mind, I will be more likely to succeed in the future.” 这样的结尾既呼应了开头，又给读者留下思考的空间。 13.2 人生哲理名言 1. “Failure is the mother of success.” - Thomas Paine（失败乃成功之母。——托马斯·潘恩） 2. “When one door of happiness closes, another opens; but often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one which has been opened for us.” - Helen Keller（当一扇幸福之门关闭时，另一扇就会打开；但我们常常久久地盯着那扇关闭的门，却看不到为我们打开的另一扇门。——海伦·凯勒 ） 3. “The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.” - Eleanor Roosevelt（未来属于那些相信自己梦想之美好的人。——埃莉诺·罗斯福） 4. “Gratitude is not only the greatest of virtues, but the parent of all others.” - Marcus Tullius Cicero（感恩不仅是最大的美德，也是其他一切美德之母。——马库斯·图留斯·西塞罗） 5. “Courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the judgment that something else is more important than fear.” - Ambrose Redmoon（勇气不是没有恐惧，而是认为有比恐惧更重要的东西。——安布罗斯·雷德蒙） 13.3 范文 ①失败经历 题目： My Experience of Failure 范文： Last term, I took part in a math competition. I was very confident because I had always done well in math. I thought it would be a piece of cake for me. As soon as the competition started, I began to work on the problems quickly. However, things didn't go as smoothly as I expected. Some of the questions were much more difficult than I had imagined. I started to feel nervous, and my mind went blank. I made a lot of mistakes in a hurry. In the end, I didn't even finish all the questions, and the result was disappointing - I failed. This failure was a huge blow to me. But after a few days of reflection, I realized that over - confidence and lack of preparation were the main reasons for my failure. I learned that no matter how good we are at something, we should always take it seriously and be fully prepared. This experience has taught me a valuable lesson and will surely help me in future competitions. ②学会感恩 题目： Learn to Be Grateful 范文： In my life, I have received a lot of help from many people, which makes me realize the importance of being grateful. Last year, I was in a difficult situation. I was struggling with my English studies, especially my spoken English. I was so worried that I almost lost confidence. My English teacher noticed my problem. She spent a lot of her free time helping me. She corrected my pronunciation patiently, taught me useful expressions, and encouraged me to speak English as much as possible. With her help, my English improved greatly. I am really grateful to my teacher. Her kindness and patience have not only helped me improve my English but also inspired me to be a helpful person. I have learned that we should always be grateful for the help we receive from others. A simple “thank you” can not only express our gratitude but also bring warmth to others. From now on, I will always remember to be grateful and try to help those in need. ③勇气的重要性 题目： The Importance of Courage 范文： Courage plays a significant role in our lives, and I deeply understand this through my own experience. Once, our school organized a speech contest. I was really interested in it, but I was extremely afraid of speaking in public. I was worried that I would forget my words or make mistakes in front of so many people. For a long time, I hesitated and didn't know whether to sign up or not. However, after much thought, I finally summoned up the courage to participate. When it was my turn to give the speech, my heart was pounding fast. But as I started speaking, I gradually calmed down. Although I wasn't perfect and made a few small mistakes, I still managed to finish the speech. The applause from the audience at the end made me feel a great sense of achievement. This experience taught me that without courage, we may miss many wonderful opportunities in life. Courage gives us the power to face our fears and step out of our comfort zones. It is the key that unlocks the door to new challenges and self - improvement. 第二部分：中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背 1．（24-25九年级上·山东济宁·期末）强国有我！作为祖国未来的建设者和接班人，青少年学生要努力成长为堪当大任的栋梁之材。假如你是李华，你校校园网站开展了以“How to be a civilized (文明的) student”为题的征文活动，请你根据下列提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。     参考表达：wait in line, communicate with, volunteer to,...     注意：     （1）短文须包括上述全部要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；     （2）文中不要出现真实的姓名和校名；     （3）词数：80-100左右。 How to be a civilized student As we all know, our school is building a civilized school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： How to be a civilized student As we all know, our school is building a civilized school. As students, we should try to be civilized students. First, we need to be polite at school. When we meet teachers, we should greet them politely. Also, it is important to wait in line during the lunch time. At home, we should be nice kids. We can communicate more with our parents and make them happy. Besides, we’d better help do some housework like doing the dishes. At society, it is a good idea to be a volunteer and help clean up the street. As long as we try our best, we can be civilized students and our school will be proud of us! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出本文主题； 第二步，具体介绍如何成为一名文明学生； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①need to do需要做某事 ②help do some housework帮助做一些家务 ③clean up the street清理街道 [高分句型] ①When we meet teachers, we should greet them politely. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②As long as we try our best, we can be civilized students and our school will be proud of us! (as long as引导条件状语从句) 2．（24-25九年级上·河北保定·期末）每个人都是在不断的学习中成长的。在我们的生活中，不可避免地会遇到困难和挑战，犯错是我们人生中常有的经历。作为一名学生，你是如何改正的？请根据以下提示，以“My Mistake Made Me Grow up”为题。 (1)What was the mistake? (2)How did you correct the mistake with your parents’ help/ with your teacher’ s help? (3)What did you learn from the experience? 要求： (1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 (2)词数 80 个左右。 My Mistake Made Me Grow up ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My Mistake Made Me Grow Up Once, I made a big mistake. I forgot to finish my homework because I played video games all night. The next day, I was very worried when the teacher asked for it. My teacher helped me correct the mistake. She talked to me kindly and told me the importance of time management. With her help, I made a plan to finish my homework first and then play games. I also talked to my parents about it, and they supported me by checking my homework every night. From this experience, I learned that making mistakes is not bad, but we should learn from them and try not to repeat them. I also learned to be responsible for my own actions and manage my time better. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍犯的错误是什么； 第二步，具体介绍纠正方法； 第三步，总结经验教训。 [亮点词汇] ① make a big mistake犯一个大错误 ② talk to sb和某人聊天 ③ plan to do sth计划做某事 ④ be responsible for对……负责 [高分句型] ①I forgot to finish my homework because I played video games all night. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②The next day, I was very worried when the teacher asked for it. (when引导时间状语从句) 3．（24-25九年级上·海南省直辖县级单位·期末）读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请以“Reading is Very Important”为题写一篇短文，号召大家多阅读。 提示： 1．要点齐全，适当拓展； 2．行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 4．100词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Reading is Very Important It’s important and necessary for everyone to read. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Reading is Very Important It’s important and necessary for everyone to read. Reading helps us learn new things and understand the world better. I like to read adventure and science fiction books because they are exciting and full of imagination. I usually read in the evening at home or in the library. I often buy my favorite books online because it’s convenient and I can find many good deals.   I plan to read at least one book every month. I will set aside time each day to read, even if it’s just for a few minutes. I will also join a book club to discuss books with others and share my thoughts.   Let’s all make reading a part of our daily lives. It can bring us knowledge, joy, and a better understanding of ourselves and the world around us. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 本文是一篇材料作文。 ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接给出的开头，说明读书的好处； 第二步，介绍自己喜欢读什么样的书，在哪里读书以及获取书的方式等； 第三步，介绍自己的读书计划； 第四步，呼吁大家一起读书。 [亮点词汇] ①understand the world better更好地了解世界 ②many good deals很多好的交易 ③set aside time留出时间 ④bring us knowledge给我们带来知识 [高分句型] ① I like to read adventure and science fiction books because they are exciting and full of imagination. (because引导的原因状语从句) ② Let’s all make reading a part of our daily lives. (祈使句) 4．（2025九年级·山东·专题练习）在多彩的初中校园生活中，你可能学会了一项体育技能，发展了一项艺术才能；也可能进行了一次精彩的演讲，参加了一次有意义的研学……这些都助力了你的成长，让你终身受益。假如学校公众号以My Story in Junior High School为题征稿，请选择1—2项内容，讲述你的成长故事，并谈论你的感受以及相关的发展计划。 要求： 1. 词数80—100； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My Story in Junior High School Last term, our teacher took us to a farm for a study tour. In the activity, we not only learned how to plant crops, but also experienced the importance of labor. At the same time, it also allowed us to experience the hardships of farmers. After this event, although we were tired, we were very happy. I think the school trip is really meaningful for us. We can not only relax ourselves but also learn a lot from it. I will take part in more such activities in my future free time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示信息讲述你的成长故事，并谈论你的感受以及相关的发展计划，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，讲述你的成长故事； 第二步，谈论你的感受以及相关的发展计划。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also不但……而且…… ②allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事 ③take part in参加 [高分句型] ①After this event, although we were tired, we were very happy. (although引导的让步状语从句) ②I think the school trip is really meaningful for us. (宾语从句) 5．（24-25九年级上·山东青岛·期末）改变是成长的必经之路。学校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“My biggest change”为主题的征稿活动，请根据提示写一篇英语短文投稿，讲述你学习或生活中的重大改变。 My biggest change ☆What’s the change? ☆How did it happen? 要求： 1．文中不得出现真实人名或校名； 2．可适当增加细节使行文流畅； 3．词数80～100。 My biggest change ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My biggest change The biggest change in my life was when I moved to a new city and started attending a different school. I used to be very shy and introverted, but the move forced me to step out of my comfort zone. At first, I was scared and felt lonely in the new environment. However, joining various school clubs and making new friends helped me open up and become more confident. My teachers and classmates were supportive, which made the transition smoother. Now, I am more outgoing and ready to face new challenges. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示信息进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述生活中的重大改变； 第二步，具体介绍在这种改变中的心路历程； 第三步，介绍这个改变给作者带来的变化。 [亮点词汇] ①step out of踏出 ②comfort zone舒适区 ③be ready to准备好做某事 [高分句型] ①The biggest change in my life was when I moved to a new city and started attending a different school. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②My teachers and classmates were supportive, which made the transition smoother. (which引导的定语从句) 6．（24-25九年级上·河北张家口·期末）在我们的学习生活中，会遇到各种问题，解决这些问题就是我们成长的体现。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇以 “Problems help us grow up” 为主题的短文。和同学们分享你遇到的问题以及解决问题的经历，并谈谈你从中得到的收获。 提示： 1） What problems did you meet in study / in life? 2） How did you deal with the problems? 3） What do you get from your experience? 要求： 1）短文须包括所有提示内容。可适当发挥。 2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3）词数80个左右。 Problems help us grow up __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Problems help us grow up Life is full of uncertainties and we may meet various kinds of problems. One problem that stands out in my memory is when I struggled with a tough subject at school. At first, failing the subject made me upset. However, those negative feelings didn’t trouble me for too long. Instead, I decided to deal with the difficulty head-on. I started by asking help from my teachers and classmates. They provided guidance and support, which encouraged me to improve my understanding of the subject. Gradually, I made progress. I learned that difficulties are a part of life and should be seen as opportunities for growth. By facing this challenge, I gained valuable insights into my strengths and weaknesses. In the end, overcoming this obstacle not only improved my academic performance but also taught me important life lessons. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态为一般过去时。 ③提示：根据提示内容介绍你在生活中曾经遇到的一个问题，你是如何面对并解决这个问题的，以及这次经历给你带来的收获。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍遇到的问题是什么。 第二步，介绍你是如何面对并解决这个问题的。 第三步，介绍这次经历给你带来的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①at first 首先 ②decide to do sth. 决定做某事 ③make progress 取得进步 ④not only...but also 不但......而且 [高分句型] ①One problem that stands out in my memory is when I struggled with a tough subject at school. (that引导定语从句，when引导表语从句) ②They provided guidance and support, which encouraged me to improve my understanding of the subject. (which引导定语从句) 7．（24-25九年级上·江苏扬州·期末）榜样如同标杆，指引正确的方向，激发责任和激情。青少年的成长需要榜样的引领。请根据下图提示，以 “My role model”为题，谈谈你的榜样人物。 role model：榜样 注意事项：1.词数100左右，不计入总词数； 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 My role model ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you. 【满分优秀范文】 My role model My role model is my Maths teacher Miss Li. She is tall and slim and she always has a smile on her face. Miss Li teaches us Maths. She is so smart that she can work out difficult problems quickly. As a result, all of us admire her very much. Miss Li is also patient. Whenever we have questions, she is ready to explain them to us with great patience. She tries different methods to make it easier for us to understand. With her help, I have made great progress in Maths. To me, Miss Li is more than a teacher. She is a good friend who cares about us all the time. She often listens to my problems and offers me valuable suggestions. I am really lucky to have a teacher like her. Miss Li has influenced me a lot. I would like to be a teacher like her when I grow up. I have decided to work hard and become a teacher with both much knowledge and kindness. 【详解】[总体分析] ①本文为一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，介绍自己心中的榜样，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称和第三人称进行叙述。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍自己心中的榜样是李老师； 第二步，具体阐述她为什么是自己的榜样； 第三步，书写结尾，自己长大后也想成为她那样的老师。 [亮点词汇] ①work out 解出 ②as a result 因此 ③be ready to 准备 ④make great progress 取得很大进步 [高分句型] ①She is so smart that she can work out difficult problems quickly. (so…that…引导结果状语从句) ②She is a good friend who cares about us all the time.(who引导限制性定语从句) ③I would like to be a teacher like her when I grow up.(when引导时间状语从句) 8．（24-25九年级上·河南郑州·期末）“青春没有售价，夜行开封拿下”。前阵子在郑州，无数大学生如繁星般涌上街头，骑上共享单车，在夜色中向着开封奔赴而去，这注定成为他们生命中一段难以忘怀的璀璨经历。在你的人生中是否也有一次经历，让你在回忆时，或嘴角不禁泛起微笑，或内心充满温暖……让你在成长的道路上，收获了珍贵的感悟。请以“An unforgettable experience”为题，根据下列提示，写一篇英语短文。 要点包括： 1. What did you do? 2. How did you feel? 3. What did you learn from the experience? 要求： 1.短文不少于100词。 2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 An unforgettable experience One unforgettable experience in my life was when I took part in an English speech contest last year. It was an excellent journey that made a big difference to me. Before the arrival of the English speech contest, I spent weeks preparing my speech, practicing my pronunciation and gestures every day. When the day of the contest came, I was really nervous. Standing on the stage, looking at the audience, my heart was beating fast. But as I started speaking, I gradually became more confident. I felt extremely proud of myself when I finished the speech. You couldn’t imagine how excited I was when I heard that I won the first prize. And the applause from the audience made me feel that all my efforts paid off. From this experience, I learned that no matter how difficult the task is, as long as we work hard and don’t give up, we will achieve something. And we should also have the courage to step out of our comfort zone (舒适区) and show ourselves. 【详解】［总体分析］ ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 ［写作步骤］ 写作时，可分三段进行叙述。 第一段点题，即引领全文； 第二段描述自己的经历，什么事情让你如此难忘。在叙述故事时，要注意从句的使用，如when引导的时间状语从句以及that, how等引导的宾语从句； 最后一段描写自己的感受或收获。 ［亮点词汇］ ①take part in 参加 ②make a big difference 产生重大影响 ③pay off 回报 ［高分句型］ ①It was an excellent journey that made a big difference to me. (that引导定语从句） ②I spent weeks preparing my speech, practicing my pronunciation and gestures every day. (spend sometime doing sth句型） ③You couldn’t imagine how excited I was when I heard that I won the first prize. (when引导时间状语从句） 9．（24-25九年级上·北京昌平·期末）某英文网站正在开展以“Guiding Star”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍引领或启发你的人，描述他/她如何影响了你以及你的成长。 提示词语：kind, brave, support, encourage, habit 内容提示：● Who is your guiding star? ● How does he/she influence you? Please describe your growth. A guiding star always shines brightly throughout our life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： A guiding star always shines brightly throughout our life. My guiding star is my English teacher, Mr. Smith. Mr. Smith is a kind and brave man. He is always patient and helpful when I have difficulties in English. He often encourages me to be confident and never gives up. His support has been a great motivation for me to keep improving my English. Under his guidance, I have developed many good habits. I read English articles every day, listen to English songs, and practice speaking English with my classmates. I have made great progress in English and become more confident in expressing myself. Mr. Smith’s kindness, bravery, support and encouragement will always inspire me to pursue my dreams and keep growing. He is my guiding star and I will always remember his teachings and follow his example. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：以“Guiding Star”为主题展开写作，根据提示要点完成作文，注意单词拼写要正确，避免出现语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，点明引领或启发自己的人是Mr. Smith； 第二步：介绍Mr. Smith引领或启发自己的具体事迹； 第三步：谈谈自己的收获和体会。 [亮点词汇] ①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某 ②never give up永不放弃 ③made great progress取得很大进步 [高分句型] ①He is always patient and helpful when I have difficulties in English.（when引导时间状语从句） ②He is my guiding star and I will always remember his teachings and follow his example.（and连接的并列句） （24-25九年级下·全国·课堂例题）一、 人非圣贤，孰能无过？作为一名学生，在学习或生活中你是否也曾犯过错误、做过傻事？在认识到自己所犯的错误或明白所做的傻事后，你又是如何改正的呢？请根据写作要点提示，以“The Mistake Made Me Grow Up”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 简述你犯过的一次错误或做过的一件傻事； 2. 谈谈你是如何在他人的帮助下或自己的努力下改正的； 3. 你从中吸取了哪些教训或收获了哪些成长的经验。 注意： 1. 字数：90词左右； 2. 短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 4. 已给标题不计入总字数。 The Mistake Made Me Grow Up 10 4．思维导图 首先，表明当时场景One day, I sat in the classroom alone. 11 . 其次，表达自己想法Then I realized how wrong I was and felt very sorry… 12 . 最后，介绍结果It made me grow up and I learned… 13 . 5．谋篇布局 第一步：审题。人称 14 ；时态 15 第二步：列提纲。 第一段：开门见山，介绍具体发生的事情。One day, I sat in the classroom alone. Suddenly I saw… 第二段：具体自己意识到自己错误。Then I realized how wrong… 第三段：表达自己获得的成长。It made me grow up… 6．第三步：遣词造句。 1. It is a beautiful pen. (用感叹句升格) 16 2. I told my mother about the pen after I got home. (用when引导时间状语从句升格) 17 3. I once made the mistakes. (用which引导定语从句升格) 18 【满分优秀范文】 The Mistake Made Me Grow Up One day, I sat in the classroom alone. Suddenly I saw Lisa’s new pen on her desk. What a beautiful pen! I really wanted to own it. Then I took the pen and put it in my schoolbag. While Lisa was looking for her pen, I was afraid and didn’t have the courage to tell her the truth. When I got home, I told my mother about the pen. She said I made a mistake and told me I should be honest and make up for it. Then I realized how wrong I was and felt very sorry, so I decided to give the pen back to Lisa and say sorry to her. The next day, I did so and Lisa forgave me. That’s the mistake which I once made. It made me grow up and I learned the importance of honesty. 11．Suddenly I saw Lisa’s new pen on her desk 12．so I decided to give the pen back to Lisa and say sorry to her 13．the importance of honesty 14．第一人称 15．一般过去时 16．What a beautiful pen! 17．When I got home, I told my mother about the pen. 18．That’s the mistake which I once made. 【解析】10．[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、简述自己犯过的一次错误或做过的一件傻事； 第二步、介绍自己是如何在他人的帮助下或自己的努力下改正的； 第三步、介绍自己从中吸取了哪些教训或收获了哪些成长的经验。 [亮点词汇] ①want to do sth.想做某事 ②make a mistake犯错 ③make up for弥补 ④say sorry to sb.向某人道歉 [高分句型] ①When I got home, I told my mother about the pen.(when引导时间状语从句) ②That’s the mistake which I once made.(which引导定语从句) 11．思维导图：首先，表明当时场景One day, I sat in the classroom alone. Suddenly I saw Lisa’s new pen on her desk.故填Suddenly I saw Lisa’s new pen on her desk。 12．其次，表达自己想法Then I realized how wrong I was and felt very sorry, so I decided to give the pen back to Lisa and say sorry to her.故填so I decided to give the pen back to Lisa and say sorry to her。 13．最后，介绍结果It made me grow up and I learned the importance of honesty.故填the importance of honesty。 14．人称：第一人称；故填：第一人称。 15．时态：一般过去时。故填：一般过去时。 16．句意：这是一支漂亮的钢笔。变感叹句时，可表达为“这是一支多么漂亮的钢笔啊！”，此处可用感叹句型“What+a/an+形容词+名词+（主谓）”的结构，“一支漂亮的钢笔”a beautiful pen，此处主谓可以省略。故填What a beautiful pen! 17．句意：我回家后把钢笔的事告诉了妈妈。此处用when引导时间状语从句，从句主语为I“我”，get home“到家”，I tell my mother about the pen“我告诉了妈妈钢笔的事”，由于句子时态为一般过去时，故主句和从句的谓语动词都要用过去式。故填When I got home, I told my mother about the pen. 18．句意：我曾经犯过错误。变为用which引导的定语从句时，可表述为“那是我曾经犯的错误。”That’s the mistake“那是错误”，I once made“我曾经犯的”，定语从句引导词为which。故填That’s the mistake which I once made. 19．（24-25九年级上·内蒙古乌兰察布·期末）在你的成长过程中，母亲会给你的一生带来很大的影响，请根据表格中的提示向读者介绍你的母亲，具体要求如下： age about 40 years old job used to be a worker; is a manager in the local factory now; character be strict in her work; confident, hardworking (举一例) hobby play the piano; prefer…; think… favorite color red, because…(至少一点) my feeling full of kindness; not only my mother, but also my friend,…(至少一点) My mother has influenced me a lot since I was born. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My mother has influenced me a lot since I was born. She is about 40 years old. She used to be a worker. Now she is a manager in the local factory. She works to high standards, so she is very strict in her work. She is confident and hard-working. She always does extra work. She likes playing the piano in her free time. She prefers listening to music because it can help her feel relaxed. She loves red best because it represents power and strength. Wearing red can make it easier for her to make decisions. I think my mother has a heart full of kindness. She is not only my mother but also my good friend. I have learnt a lot from her. She always helps me when I have difficulty with my study. I love her very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的妈妈，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍妈妈的年龄和工作； 第二步，介绍妈妈的性格、爱好和最喜欢的颜色； 第三步，介绍自己对妈妈的感情。 [亮点词汇] ①in her free time在她的空闲时间 ②listen to music听音乐 ③make decisions做决定 ④full of充满 [高分句型] ①She prefers listening to music because it can help her feel relaxed. (原因状语从句) ②I think my mother has a heart full of kindness. (宾语从句) 20．（2024·江苏宿迁·中考真题）唯有不断成长，才能遇见更好的自己。你校正在开展主题为“做更好的自己”的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请以“To be a better self”为题写一篇演讲稿，从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面谈一谈自己的理解。 To be a better self 懂感恩 敬爱父母；服务社区…… 亲自然 保护环境；关爱动物…… 爱自己 健康生活；培养兴趣…… 注意事项： 1．内容必须包括表格中的要点，并适当发挥1-2点； 2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 To be a better self Dear schoolmates, I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for your listening! 【满分优秀范文】 To be a better self Dear schoolmates,   I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”. Being a better self, I think, means more than being excellent in study but being an all-round person. In order to become a better version of ourselves, we should first be grateful. We should love our parents. We also use our spare time to serve the community. If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. Second, we should get close to nature. We should protect the environment and care for animals. We also do volunteer work to promote the importance of animals and plants. Finally, we have to love ourselves. We should live a healthy life and develop our hobbies. We should learn ways to relax ourselves and keep a good mood. I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let’s make changes from now on. That’s all. Thanks for your listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括三个要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，引出话题“做更好的自己”； 第二步，从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面具体阐述怎么做。 第三步，总结话语。 [亮点词汇] ①get close to亲近 ②keep a good mood保持好心情 [高分句型] ①If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let’s make changes from now on. (宾语从句) 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 【情感表达类】 第13讲 成长感悟写作 第一部分：中考英语写作精讲 13.1 夹叙夹议模板 1. 开头引入：可以通过一个具体的场景、事件或者一句引人深思的话来引出主题。比如：“Last summer, I participated in a challenging mountain - climbing activity, which turned out to be a life - changing experience.” 用一次具体的活动经历开篇，迅速吸引读者的注意力，同时为后文的夹叙夹议做铺垫。 2. 叙述部分：详细讲述事情的经过，按照时间顺序或者事情发展的逻辑顺序进行描述。在描述过程中，要加入细节描写，使故事更加生动。例如在讲述失败经历时，可以这样写：“As I started climbing, I was full of confidence. However, halfway up the mountain, I felt extremely tired. My legs were so heavy that every step seemed to be a struggle. And then, due to my carelessness, I slipped and fell, scraping my knees badly.” 这样的细节描述能让读者感同身受。 3. 议论部分：在叙述完事件后，适时地发表自己的看法和感悟。可以分析事件产生的原因，或者阐述从中学到的道理。接着上面的例子，议论部分可以是：“This failure made me realize that confidence alone is not enough. Preparation and caution are equally important. In life, we often face difficulties, and it's how we handle them that determines our success or failure.” 通过对事件的分析，升华主题，让读者明白其中蕴含的人生哲理。 4. 结尾总结：总结全文，再次强调自己的感悟，或者提出对未来的展望。例如：“From then on, I have always reminded myself to be well - prepared before taking on any challenge. I believe that with this lesson in mind, I will be more likely to succeed in the future.” 这样的结尾既呼应了开头，又给读者留下思考的空间。 13.2 人生哲理名言 1. “Failure is the mother of success.” - Thomas Paine（失败乃成功之母。——托马斯·潘恩） 2. “When one door of happiness closes, another opens; but often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one which has been opened for us.” - Helen Keller（当一扇幸福之门关闭时，另一扇就会打开；但我们常常久久地盯着那扇关闭的门，却看不到为我们打开的另一扇门。——海伦·凯勒 ） 3. “The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.” - Eleanor Roosevelt（未来属于那些相信自己梦想之美好的人。——埃莉诺·罗斯福） 4. “Gratitude is not only the greatest of virtues, but the parent of all others.” - Marcus Tullius Cicero（感恩不仅是最大的美德，也是其他一切美德之母。——马库斯·图留斯·西塞罗） 5. “Courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the judgment that something else is more important than fear.” - Ambrose Redmoon（勇气不是没有恐惧，而是认为有比恐惧更重要的东西。——安布罗斯·雷德蒙） 13.3 范文 ①失败经历 题目： My Experience of Failure 范文： Last term, I took part in a math competition. I was very confident because I had always done well in math. I thought it would be a piece of cake for me. As soon as the competition started, I began to work on the problems quickly. However, things didn't go as smoothly as I expected. Some of the questions were much more difficult than I had imagined. I started to feel nervous, and my mind went blank. I made a lot of mistakes in a hurry. In the end, I didn't even finish all the questions, and the result was disappointing - I failed. This failure was a huge blow to me. But after a few days of reflection, I realized that over - confidence and lack of preparation were the main reasons for my failure. I learned that no matter how good we are at something, we should always take it seriously and be fully prepared. This experience has taught me a valuable lesson and will surely help me in future competitions. ②学会感恩 题目： Learn to Be Grateful 范文： In my life, I have received a lot of help from many people, which makes me realize the importance of being grateful. Last year, I was in a difficult situation. I was struggling with my English studies, especially my spoken English. I was so worried that I almost lost confidence. My English teacher noticed my problem. She spent a lot of her free time helping me. She corrected my pronunciation patiently, taught me useful expressions, and encouraged me to speak English as much as possible. With her help, my English improved greatly. I am really grateful to my teacher. Her kindness and patience have not only helped me improve my English but also inspired me to be a helpful person. I have learned that we should always be grateful for the help we receive from others. A simple “thank you” can not only express our gratitude but also bring warmth to others. From now on, I will always remember to be grateful and try to help those in need. ③勇气的重要性 题目： The Importance of Courage 范文： Courage plays a significant role in our lives, and I deeply understand this through my own experience. Once, our school organized a speech contest. I was really interested in it, but I was extremely afraid of speaking in public. I was worried that I would forget my words or make mistakes in front of so many people. For a long time, I hesitated and didn't know whether to sign up or not. However, after much thought, I finally summoned up the courage to participate. When it was my turn to give the speech, my heart was pounding fast. But as I started speaking, I gradually calmed down. Although I wasn't perfect and made a few small mistakes, I still managed to finish the speech. The applause from the audience at the end made me feel a great sense of achievement. This experience taught me that without courage, we may miss many wonderful opportunities in life. Courage gives us the power to face our fears and step out of our comfort zones. It is the key that unlocks the door to new challenges and self - improvement. 第二部分：中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背 1．（24-25九年级上·山东济宁·期末）强国有我！作为祖国未来的建设者和接班人，青少年学生要努力成长为堪当大任的栋梁之材。假如你是李华，你校校园网站开展了以“How to be a civilized (文明的) student”为题的征文活动，请你根据下列提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。     参考表达：wait in line, communicate with, volunteer to,...     注意：     （1）短文须包括上述全部要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；     （2）文中不要出现真实的姓名和校名；     （3）词数：80-100左右。 How to be a civilized student As we all know, our school is building a civilized school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（24-25九年级上·河北保定·期末）每个人都是在不断的学习中成长的。在我们的生活中，不可避免地会遇到困难和挑战，犯错是我们人生中常有的经历。作为一名学生，你是如何改正的？请根据以下提示，以“My Mistake Made Me Grow up”为题。 (1)What was the mistake? (2)How did you correct the mistake with your parents’ help/ with your teacher’ s help? (3)What did you learn from the experience? 要求： (1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 (2)词数 80 个左右。 My Mistake Made Me Grow up ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（24-25九年级上·海南省直辖县级单位·期末）读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请以“Reading is Very Important”为题写一篇短文，号召大家多阅读。 提示： 1．要点齐全，适当拓展； 2．行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 4．100词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Reading is Very Important It’s important and necessary for everyone to read. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2025九年级·山东·专题练习）在多彩的初中校园生活中，你可能学会了一项体育技能，发展了一项艺术才能；也可能进行了一次精彩的演讲，参加了一次有意义的研学……这些都助力了你的成长，让你终身受益。假如学校公众号以My Story in Junior High School为题征稿，请选择1—2项内容，讲述你的成长故事，并谈论你的感受以及相关的发展计划。 要求： 1. 词数80—100； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（24-25九年级上·山东青岛·期末）改变是成长的必经之路。学校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“My biggest change”为主题的征稿活动，请根据提示写一篇英语短文投稿，讲述你学习或生活中的重大改变。 My biggest change ☆What’s the change? ☆How did it happen? 要求： 1．文中不得出现真实人名或校名； 2．可适当增加细节使行文流畅； 3．词数80～100。 My biggest change ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（24-25九年级上·河北张家口·期末）在我们的学习生活中，会遇到各种问题，解决这些问题就是我们成长的体现。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇以 “Problems help us grow up” 为主题的短文。和同学们分享你遇到的问题以及解决问题的经历，并谈谈你从中得到的收获。 提示： 1） What problems did you meet in study / in life? 2） How did you deal with the problems? 3） What do you get from your experience? 要求： 1）短文须包括所有提示内容。可适当发挥。 2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3）词数80个左右。 Problems help us grow up __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（24-25九年级上·江苏扬州·期末）榜样如同标杆，指引正确的方向，激发责任和激情。青少年的成长需要榜样的引领。请根据下图提示，以 “My role model”为题，谈谈你的榜样人物。 role model：榜样 注意事项：1.词数100左右，不计入总词数； 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 My role model ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you. 8．（24-25九年级上·河南郑州·期末）“青春没有售价，夜行开封拿下”。前阵子在郑州，无数大学生如繁星般涌上街头，骑上共享单车，在夜色中向着开封奔赴而去，这注定成为他们生命中一段难以忘怀的璀璨经历。在你的人生中是否也有一次经历，让你在回忆时，或嘴角不禁泛起微笑，或内心充满温暖……让你在成长的道路上，收获了珍贵的感悟。请以“An unforgettable experience”为题，根据下列提示，写一篇英语短文。 要点包括： 1. What did you do? 2. How did you feel? 3. What did you learn from the experience? 要求： 1.短文不少于100词。 2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（24-25九年级上·北京昌平·期末）某英文网站正在开展以“Guiding Star”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍引领或启发你的人，描述他/她如何影响了你以及你的成长。 提示词语：kind, brave, support, encourage, habit 内容提示：● Who is your guiding star? ● How does he/she influence you? Please describe your growth. A guiding star always shines brightly throughout our life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （24-25九年级下·全国·课堂例题）一、 人非圣贤，孰能无过？作为一名学生，在学习或生活中你是否也曾犯过错误、做过傻事？在认识到自己所犯的错误或明白所做的傻事后，你又是如何改正的呢？请根据写作要点提示，以“The Mistake Made Me Grow Up”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 简述你犯过的一次错误或做过的一件傻事； 2. 谈谈你是如何在他人的帮助下或自己的努力下改正的； 3. 你从中吸取了哪些教训或收获了哪些成长的经验。 注意： 1. 字数：90词左右； 2. 短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 4. 已给标题不计入总字数。 The Mistake Made Me Grow Up 10 4．思维导图 首先，表明当时场景One day, I sat in the classroom alone. 11 . 其次，表达自己想法Then I realized how wrong I was and felt very sorry… 12 . 最后，介绍结果It made me grow up and I learned… 13 . 5．谋篇布局 第一步：审题。人称 14 ；时态 15 第二步：列提纲。 第一段：开门见山，介绍具体发生的事情。One day, I sat in the classroom alone. Suddenly I saw… 第二段：具体自己意识到自己错误。Then I realized how wrong… 第三段：表达自己获得的成长。It made me grow up… 6．第三步：遣词造句。 1. It is a beautiful pen. (用感叹句升格) 16 2. I told my mother about the pen after I got home. (用when引导时间状语从句升格) 17 3. I once made the mistakes. (用which引导定语从句升格) 18 19．（24-25九年级上·内蒙古乌兰察布·期末）在你的成长过程中，母亲会给你的一生带来很大的影响，请根据表格中的提示向读者介绍你的母亲，具体要求如下： age about 40 years old job used to be a worker; is a manager in the local factory now; character be strict in her work; confident, hardworking (举一例) hobby play the piano; prefer…; think… favorite color red, because…(至少一点) my feeling full of kindness; not only my mother, but also my friend,…(至少一点) My mother has influenced me a lot since I was born. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 20．（2024·江苏宿迁·中考真题）唯有不断成长，才能遇见更好的自己。你校正在开展主题为“做更好的自己”的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请以“To be a better self”为题写一篇演讲稿，从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面谈一谈自己的理解。 To be a better self 懂感恩 敬爱父母；服务社区…… 亲自然 保护环境；关爱动物…… 爱自己 健康生活；培养兴趣…… 注意事项： 1．内容必须包括表格中的要点，并适当发挥1-2点； 2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 To be a better self Dear schoolmates, I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for your listening! 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$