12 亲情与友情-2025年中考英语考前冲刺作文必背(模板、素材、分类押题范文)(通用版)

【情感表达类】 第12讲 亲情与友情 第一部分：中考英语写作精讲 12.1 情感类叙事结构 1. 开头引入：通过回忆某个场景、一句话或者一个特别的时间点，引出与亲情或友情相关的主题。比如 “It was a rainy evening, and the sound of raindrops hitting the window brought back a memory that I will never forget - the story of a special gift from my best friend.” 以一个具体的环境描写，迅速将读者带入到回忆的氛围中。 2. 中间叙述：详细讲述事件的经过。如果是关于朋友间的误会，就要描述误会产生的原因，双方当时的反应和心情。比如 “One day, I found my favorite book missing from my desk. I asked everyone in the class, and when I saw my best friend reading a book that looked exactly the same, I got really angry. I thought she had taken my book without asking.” 按照事情发展的顺序，清晰地呈现误会的起始。在讲述父母的爱时，可以列举具体事例，像 “Once, I was seriously ill in the middle of the night. Without hesitation, my parents rushed me to the hospital. My father carried me all the way to the car, and my mother held my hand tightly, her eyes full of worry.” 通过细节描写，展现父母在关键时刻的关爱。 3. 结尾升华：总结从这段经历中获得的感悟，强调亲情或友情的珍贵。比如 “This misunderstanding taught me that communication is the key to maintaining a good friendship. We should always listen to each other's explanations before making judgments.” 点明从朋友间误会中得到的教训，让文章更具深度。关于父母的爱可以这样结尾 “Their love is like a lighthouse in the vast ocean of life, always guiding me through the storms and darkness. I will always be grateful for their selfless love.” 用比喻的手法，表达对父母爱的感恩以及亲情的重要性。 12.2 情感描写佳句 1. 描写友情： “A true friend is someone who knows all about you and still loves you.” （真正的朋友是那个了解你的一切却依然爱你的人。） “Friendship is not about who you have known the longest... It's about who came, and never left your side.” （友谊不在于你认识谁最久，而在于谁来了，就再也没离开过你的身边。） “When we are together, even the dullest things become fun. That's the magic of our friendship.” （当我们在一起时，即使是最无趣的事情也变得有趣起来。这就是我们友谊的魔力。） 2. 描写亲情： “Parents' love is the most selfless love in the world. They give without asking for anything in return.” （父母的爱是世界上最无私的爱，他们付出却不求任何回报。） “Home is not just a place, but a feeling of warmth and security brought by the love of family.” （家不仅仅是一个地方，更是一种由家人的爱带来的温暖和安全感。） “No matter how far I go, my parents' love is always with me, like a shadow that never fades away.” （无论我走多远，父母的爱永远与我同在，就像一个永不消逝的影子。） 12.3 范文 ①难忘的礼物 题目： A Special Gift 范文： I have received many gifts in my life, but the most special one was a handmade photo album from my best friend, Lily. It was my 14th birthday. I was expecting some usual gifts like books or toys. When Lily handed me a small, beautifully wrapped box, I was curious. Inside was a photo album filled with pictures of us together - pictures from our school trips, birthday parties, and even the simple moments of just hanging out. Each photo had a sweet note beside it, recalling the memories we shared. I was deeply touched. This gift wasn't expensive, but it was full of love and thoughtfulness. It showed me how much she cherished our friendship. Every time I look at that photo album, I am reminded of the wonderful times we spent together. It is not just an album; it is a treasure that holds our precious friendship. ②朋友间的误会 题目： A Misunderstanding between Friends 范文： Last month, a misunderstanding almost ended my friendship with my best friend, Tom. We were working on a group project for our science class. I was in charge of collecting data, and Tom was supposed to make the presentation slides. One day before the presentation, I found that the data I had collected was all messed up. I was so angry that I thought Tom had accidentally deleted it while using my computer. Without asking him, I shouted at him, saying that he was irresponsible. Tom looked shocked and tried to explain, but I was too angry to listen. Later, I found out that it was my little brother who had played with my computer and caused the problem. I felt extremely guilty. I immediately apologized to Tom. He forgave me with a smile, saying that he knew I didn't mean it. This experience taught me that jumping to conclusions without knowing the truth can hurt our friends, and communication is the bridge that keeps our friendship strong. ③父母的爱 题目： Parents' Love 范文： My parents' love is like a warm shelter that always protects me. Last winter, I caught a bad cold. The fever made me feel so weak that I could hardly get out of bed. My parents were extremely worried. My mother stayed by my side all night, constantly checking my temperature and giving me medicine. She even made me some warm soup in the middle of the night, hoping it would make me feel better. My father, on the other hand, went out in the cold to buy more medicine and fresh fruits for me. Their care and love made me recover quickly. I realized that no matter how big the difficulties are, as long as I have my parents' love, I can overcome anything. Their love is the most precious thing in my life, and I will always be grateful for it. 第二部分：中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背 1．（24-25九年级下·河南驻马店·开学考试）在成长过程中，我们会遇到形形色色的人，经历许许多多的事。可能是一个特别的人，可能是一本有影响力的书，也可能是一次难忘的经历，甚至只是一句引人深省的话……他们助力着我们的成长，使我们成为更好的自己。请以“______ helped me grow”为题，结合图示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 补全标题； 2. 包含思维导图所有要点； 3. 重点谈谈你的改变及感受。 要求：词数100词左右。注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。 ______ helped me grow ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.（24-25九年级下·全国·课堂例题）电影《你好，李焕英》讲述了妈妈和女儿之间的故事。影片将母爱诠释得恰到好处，令观众感动不已。我们总以为自己已经很爱妈妈了，但妈妈远比你想象中还要爱你。生活中，你和妈妈之间肯定发生过很多令你难以忘记的事情，请用英语介绍你的妈妈，讲述一件你们经历过的事情，并说说你会用什么实际行动来报答妈妈。 内容包括： •something about your mother (外表、性格、爱好) •an experience you had with your mother •what you will do to thank her 要求： 1. 词数不少于80； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 2 3. 思维导图 首先，开篇点题，介绍妈妈。My mother is… 3 . 其次，介绍具体时间。I still remember… 4 . 最后，表达对妈妈的感谢。To thank my mother,… 5 . 4．谋篇布局 第一步：审题。人称 6 ；时态 7 第二步：列提纲。 第一段：介绍妈妈的外貌、性格以及爱好等。My mother is a kind and gentle woman. She is a pretty woman with a round face and two big black eyes.… 第二段：具体介绍让自己难忘的经历。when I felt painful in my foot and found that I was bitten by a snake… 第三段：表达自己对妈妈的感谢。My mother loves me so much… 5．第三步：遣词造句。 1. She is a pretty woman. She has a round face and two big black eyes. (用with结构升格) 8 2. She is a great mother. (用感叹句升格) 9 10．（2025九年级·全国·专题练习）假如你是李华，初中生活即将结束，你思绪万千。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一封信表达你对父母的由衷感激及今后的点滴回报。 要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；2. 词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mom/ Dad,      My junior school life is coming to an end.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   Yours love, Li Hua 11．（24-25九年级上·江苏泰州·期末）夏暑才消冬雪至，流光转瞬岁华迁。难忘的2024在我们的身后渐行渐远，不知不觉我们已经沐浴在2025的阳光里。过去的一年，你的身边一定有很多人陪你同行，老师、同学、朋友、家人，亦或是自己内心的榜样，他们都会给你支持、帮助和力量。假如你是李华，请给他、她或者他们写一封信表达我们的感激之情以及祝福。 要点：1. Who do you want to thank? 2. Why do you want to thank him/ her/ them? (Give one or two examples) 3. How do you express your thanks? 4.…. 注意：1.短文应包含所有要点，可适当拓展和补充。 2.观点明确，语意连贯，层次清楚，书写规范。 3.表达中不得提及真实姓名和校名等相关信息。 4.词数100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear ______, How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Yours sincerely, Li Hua 12．（24-25九年级上·吉林长春·期末）生活中总会遇到一些给我们留下深刻印象的人。他们或让人感动、或让人敬佩、或让人心生感慨。校园公众号就“The Person Who Impresses Me the Most”这一主题向同学们征稿。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，描述一位令你印象最深刻的人进行投稿。 要点： 1. 讲述一个你的经历或她/他的事迹； 2. 谈谈他/她带给你带来的影响。 要求： 1. 表达流畅，行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名或校名； 3. 不少于80词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（24-25九年级上·云南昆明·期末）2024年已经过去，我们即将迎来 2025年农历春节。正因为有美好的回忆才会对未来充满期许，你一定有许多和家人、朋友一起庆祝春节的记忆，准备丰盛的晚餐，践行和传承我国传统节日的文化习俗等。请以“A Special Spring Festival”为题写一篇英文短文，描述你的一次难忘的春节经历。 要求：1．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个； 2．文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，校名统一用Guangming Middle School。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期末）我们每个人就像Lily一样拥有自己喜爱的物品，请你根据下面的思维导图，写一篇英文演讲稿，分享你最喜欢的一件物品，如书籍、CD、生活用品、玩具等，以增进同学们对你的了解。 要求： 1.发言稿必须包括思维导图中所给的关键信息，可适当发挥，但不能照搬第一节内容； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.邮件中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。) Dear classmates, I’m glad to be here to share my favorite ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening! 15．（2024·山东淄博·一模）在你成长过程中，你父母一定做过许多令你感动的事，请以“The Most Touching Thing”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，叙述你父母做过的最令你感动的一件事。 注意：  1. 书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．（2024·湖北武汉·模拟预测）学校英语社团举办征文比赛，请根据以下内容提示，写一篇题为 “The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most” 的英语文章。从谁、为什么、从哪些方面影响你等方面介绍一下他 (她)。 内容提示：Who has influenced you most? Why? How has she or her influenced you? What do you learn from him or her? Something more about him or her. 注意：文中不能透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most In my life, I think the person who has influenced me most is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17．（2024·山东滨州·中考真题）生活中有很多值得我们珍惜的东西，如时间、健康、亲人、生命等。假设你是李华，你们学校正在开展以“珍惜”为主题的征文活动，请结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1.你珍惜什么； 2.描述你的一次经历； 3.谈谈这次经历带给你的收获。 要求： 1.要点齐全，并适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名； 3.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 There are many important things that are worth valuing in our daily lives. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18．（2024·安徽淮北·三模）“父亲是儿那登天的梯、父亲是那拉车的牛……”；父亲用他的肩膀支撑起一个家。没有父亲的辛苦付出，就没有我们现在的生活。今天（6月16日）是父亲节。假如你是Fu Xing，请你用英语写一封电子邮件，向父亲表达自己的感谢之情。 要求： 1．内容可以适当发挥，以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅； 2．不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名； 3．词数80—100。作文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Dad, I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks again for everything you have done for me. Love, Fu Xing 19．（2024·广西南宁·三模）为了传承和弘扬中华民族的优良家风，你校英文周刊以“Build good relationships with parents”为题，向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1.与父母建立良好关系的重要性； 2.具体做法； 3.感悟与号召。 注意事项： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：respect (v.尊重); housework(n.家务); communicate(v.交流); patient(adj.耐心的) Build good relationships with parents We are supposed to build good relationships with parents. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 20．（2024·贵州黔东南·二模）俗话说，“家和万事兴”。和睦的家庭能给每一位家庭成员带来温暖、快乐、健康、智慧和前进的力量。英语课上，你们开展了一次以“让家成为一个快乐的地方”为主题的活动，同学们都把自己的想法写在了卡片上。请结合卡片信息，以“What Can We Do to Make Our Home a Happier Place?”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，介绍你和同学们的看法。 要求如下： 1. 内容必须包含卡片上的所有信息； 2. 重点谈谈你的看法； 3. 文中不得出现真实的个人信息。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 21．（2024·山东枣庄·三模）父母是我们的第一任老师。他们不但给了我们生命，还给了我们所需要的一切，包括衣食住行和教育等。作为青少年，你一定有很多话要对父母说，请你根据下面提示给父母写一封信。 1.感谢父母无私的爱；2.感谢父母的辛勤劳动；3.感谢父母对你的教育。 注意：1.短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 2.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。 3.词数80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mom and Dad, I want to take a moment to express my love and gratitude to both of you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 22．（2024·广西百色·二模）感恩是中华民族的传统美德。初中生活即将结束，一路走来，一定有许多人帮助过你、陪伴过你，此时此刻，你最想感谢谁？假如你是李华，你校英语协会发起以“A person I want to thank”为题的信件穿恩情活动，请根据以下中文提示，写一篇英语投稿。 内容要点： 1．你最想感恩的人； 2．感恩的理由； 3．表达美好祝福。 注意： 1．内容必须包含要点所给的信息 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：help sb. with sth. (在某个方面帮助某人)；have trouble with (遇到麻烦)，appreciate (感激) healthy and happy (健康快乐) A person I want to thank Dear ________, I want to say thank you to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 23．（2024·江苏徐州·三模）每个人一生中都会有很多想做的事，为父母、为朋友、为自己、为班级、为家乡……你校英文报社以“One thing I would like to do for ________”为题开展征文活动，请你用英语写一 篇短文投稿。请补全题目，分享一件你想做的事，并说明你准备怎么做，以及你为什么要做。 提示问题：What would you like to do? How will you do it? Why would you like to do it? 写作要求：1.文中须包含上面提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数90左右。 One thing I would like to do for ________ There are many things we want to do in our lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 【情感表达类】 第12讲 亲情与友情 第一部分：中考英语写作精讲 12.1 情感类叙事结构 1. 开头引入：通过回忆某个场景、一句话或者一个特别的时间点，引出与亲情或友情相关的主题。比如 “It was a rainy evening, and the sound of raindrops hitting the window brought back a memory that I will never forget - the story of a special gift from my best friend.” 以一个具体的环境描写，迅速将读者带入到回忆的氛围中。 2. 中间叙述：详细讲述事件的经过。如果是关于朋友间的误会，就要描述误会产生的原因，双方当时的反应和心情。比如 “One day, I found my favorite book missing from my desk. I asked everyone in the class, and when I saw my best friend reading a book that looked exactly the same, I got really angry. I thought she had taken my book without asking.” 按照事情发展的顺序，清晰地呈现误会的起始。在讲述父母的爱时，可以列举具体事例，像 “Once, I was seriously ill in the middle of the night. Without hesitation, my parents rushed me to the hospital. My father carried me all the way to the car, and my mother held my hand tightly, her eyes full of worry.” 通过细节描写，展现父母在关键时刻的关爱。 3. 结尾升华：总结从这段经历中获得的感悟，强调亲情或友情的珍贵。比如 “This misunderstanding taught me that communication is the key to maintaining a good friendship. We should always listen to each other's explanations before making judgments.” 点明从朋友间误会中得到的教训，让文章更具深度。关于父母的爱可以这样结尾 “Their love is like a lighthouse in the vast ocean of life, always guiding me through the storms and darkness. I will always be grateful for their selfless love.” 用比喻的手法，表达对父母爱的感恩以及亲情的重要性。 12.2 情感描写佳句 1. 描写友情： “A true friend is someone who knows all about you and still loves you.” （真正的朋友是那个了解你的一切却依然爱你的人。） “Friendship is not about who you have known the longest... It's about who came, and never left your side.” （友谊不在于你认识谁最久，而在于谁来了，就再也没离开过你的身边。） “When we are together, even the dullest things become fun. That's the magic of our friendship.” （当我们在一起时，即使是最无趣的事情也变得有趣起来。这就是我们友谊的魔力。） 2. 描写亲情： “Parents' love is the most selfless love in the world. They give without asking for anything in return.” （父母的爱是世界上最无私的爱，他们付出却不求任何回报。） “Home is not just a place, but a feeling of warmth and security brought by the love of family.” （家不仅仅是一个地方，更是一种由家人的爱带来的温暖和安全感。） “No matter how far I go, my parents' love is always with me, like a shadow that never fades away.” （无论我走多远，父母的爱永远与我同在，就像一个永不消逝的影子。） 12.3 范文 ①难忘的礼物 题目： A Special Gift 范文： I have received many gifts in my life, but the most special one was a handmade photo album from my best friend, Lily. It was my 14th birthday. I was expecting some usual gifts like books or toys. When Lily handed me a small, beautifully wrapped box, I was curious. Inside was a photo album filled with pictures of us together - pictures from our school trips, birthday parties, and even the simple moments of just hanging out. Each photo had a sweet note beside it, recalling the memories we shared. I was deeply touched. This gift wasn't expensive, but it was full of love and thoughtfulness. It showed me how much she cherished our friendship. Every time I look at that photo album, I am reminded of the wonderful times we spent together. It is not just an album; it is a treasure that holds our precious friendship. ②朋友间的误会 题目： A Misunderstanding between Friends 范文： Last month, a misunderstanding almost ended my friendship with my best friend, Tom. We were working on a group project for our science class. I was in charge of collecting data, and Tom was supposed to make the presentation slides. One day before the presentation, I found that the data I had collected was all messed up. I was so angry that I thought Tom had accidentally deleted it while using my computer. Without asking him, I shouted at him, saying that he was irresponsible. Tom looked shocked and tried to explain, but I was too angry to listen. Later, I found out that it was my little brother who had played with my computer and caused the problem. I felt extremely guilty. I immediately apologized to Tom. He forgave me with a smile, saying that he knew I didn't mean it. This experience taught me that jumping to conclusions without knowing the truth can hurt our friends, and communication is the bridge that keeps our friendship strong. ③父母的爱 题目： Parents' Love 范文： My parents' love is like a warm shelter that always protects me. Last winter, I caught a bad cold. The fever made me feel so weak that I could hardly get out of bed. My parents were extremely worried. My mother stayed by my side all night, constantly checking my temperature and giving me medicine. She even made me some warm soup in the middle of the night, hoping it would make me feel better. My father, on the other hand, went out in the cold to buy more medicine and fresh fruits for me. Their care and love made me recover quickly. I realized that no matter how big the difficulties are, as long as I have my parents' love, I can overcome anything. Their love is the most precious thing in my life, and I will always be grateful for it. 第二部分：中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背 1．（24-25九年级下·河南驻马店·开学考试）在成长过程中，我们会遇到形形色色的人，经历许许多多的事。可能是一个特别的人，可能是一本有影响力的书，也可能是一次难忘的经历，甚至只是一句引人深省的话……他们助力着我们的成长，使我们成为更好的自己。请以“______ helped me grow”为题，结合图示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 补全标题； 2. 包含思维导图所有要点； 3. 重点谈谈你的改变及感受。 要求：词数100词左右。注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。 ______ helped me grow ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My father helped me grow My father always loves me and tries to help me grow. I still remember the experience of him helping me grow. Now let me tell you something about it. When I was seven years old, I started my primary school. I had to get up early and do homework every day. I was so tired that I didn’t like to go to school. Then my father told me a lot of stories on my way to school, and helped me to plan my time properly. Day by day, I knew the importance of learning, and became interested in reading books. No matter what difficulties I meet, my father is by my side. With my father’s help, I am sure I will grow up happily. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，按题目要求填入短文标题“My father helped me grow”； 第二步，首先描述自己开始上小学时的情况，包括早起、做作业很疲惫从而讨厌上学，接着讲述父亲在上学路上讲故事以及帮忙合理安排时间的事情； 第三步，阐述在这个过程中自己逐渐认识到学习的重要性并且对阅读产生兴趣，最后强调无论遇到什么困难父亲都会在身边，自己在父亲的陪伴下会快乐成长。 [亮点词汇] ①primary school小学 ②on my way to school在我上学的路上 ③by my side在我身边 [高分句型] ①I was so tired that I didn’t like to go to school.（so...that...引导结果状语从句） ②No matter what difficulties I meet, my father is by my side.（no matter what引导让步状语从句） （24-25九年级下·全国·课堂例题）电影《你好，李焕英》讲述了妈妈和女儿之间的故事。影片将母爱诠释得恰到好处，令观众感动不已。我们总以为自己已经很爱妈妈了，但妈妈远比你想象中还要爱你。生活中，你和妈妈之间肯定发生过很多令你难以忘记的事情，请用英语介绍你的妈妈，讲述一件你们经历过的事情，并说说你会用什么实际行动来报答妈妈。 内容包括： •something about your mother (外表、性格、爱好) •an experience you had with your mother •what you will do to thank her 要求： 1. 词数不少于80； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 2 3. 思维导图 首先，开篇点题，介绍妈妈。My mother is… 3 . 其次，介绍具体时间。I still remember… 4 . 最后，表达对妈妈的感谢。To thank my mother,… 5 . 4．谋篇布局 第一步：审题。人称 6 ；时态 7 第二步：列提纲。 第一段：介绍妈妈的外貌、性格以及爱好等。My mother is a kind and gentle woman. She is a pretty woman with a round face and two big black eyes.… 第二段：具体介绍让自己难忘的经历。when I felt painful in my foot and found that I was bitten by a snake… 第三段：表达自己对妈妈的感谢。My mother loves me so much… 5．第三步：遣词造句。 1. She is a pretty woman. She has a round face and two big black eyes. (用with结构升格) 8 2. She is a great mother. (用感叹句升格) 9 【满分优秀范文】 My mother is a kind and gentle woman. She is a pretty woman with a round face and two big black eyes. She always has a smile on her face. And she likes cooking and reading. I love my mother very much. I still remember it was the summer vacation in Grade 8 when I felt painful in my foot and found that I had been bitten by a snake. Without saying anything, my mother took me to the hospital in a rush. Thanks to my mother, the doctor saved me in time. It took me a few days to fully recover. What a great mother she is! My mother loves me so much. To thank my mother, I will always listen to her and never do anything that makes her angry. And I will make every effort to do the housework to help my mother reduce the burden. 3．a kind and gentle woman 4．it was the summer vacation in Grade 8 5．I will always listen to her and never do anything that makes her angry 6．第一人称 7．一般过去时；一般现在时 8．She is a pretty woman with a round face and two big black eyes. 9．What a great mother she is! 【解析】2．[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有中英文提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍妈妈的外貌、性格以及爱好等； 第二步，具体介绍让自己难忘的经历； 第三步，表达对妈妈的感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①thanks to 多亏了，由于 ②make every effort 尽一切努力 [高分句型] ①What a great mother she is! (感叹句) ②To thank my mother, I will always listen to her and never do anything that makes her angry. (that引导的限制性定语从句) 3．此处要表达的意思是：我的妈妈是一个善良而温柔的女人。kind“友好的，善良的”，形容词；gentle“温柔的”，形容词，两个形容词是并列关系，应用and连，一起修饰可数名词woman“女性”。故填a kind and gentle woman。 4．此处要表达的意思：我还记得那是八年级的暑假。分析题干可知，考查宾语从句；it作主语，句子时态为一般过去时，be动词用was；the summer vacation“暑假”，名词短语；in Grade 8“在八年级”，介词短语。故填it was the summer vacation in Grade 8。 5．此处要表达的意思是：为了感谢我的妈妈，我将永远听她的话，从不做任何让她生气的事情。分析题干可知，句子为一般将来时；I“我”，作主语；will“将”，后接动词原形；always“总是”，副词；“listen to her”和“never do anything”是并列关系，应用and连接；that makes her angry“让她生气”，定语从句，修饰先行词“anything”。故填I will always listen to her and never do anything that makes her angry。 6．本文应用第一人称。故填：第一人称。 7．时态主要用一般过去时和一般现在时。故填：一般过去时；一般现在时。 8．句意：她是一个漂亮的女人。她有一张圆圆的脸和两只又大又黑的眼睛。要求用with结构升格句子，应使用“with +名词短语”的结构，即with a round face and two big black eyes”在这里作后置定语，修饰名词“woman”。故填She is a pretty woman with a round face and two big black eyes. 9．句意：她是一位伟大的母亲。要求改为感叹句，mother“母亲”，可数名词，为中心词；great“伟大的”，形容词；符合“What + a/an +形容词+可数名词单数+主语 +谓语！”的结构，应用what引导感叹句，位于句首，首字母要大写；she作主语，is作谓语。故填What a great mother she is! 10．（2025九年级·全国·专题练习）假如你是李华，初中生活即将结束，你思绪万千。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一封信表达你对父母的由衷感激及今后的点滴回报。 要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；2. 词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mom/ Dad,      My junior school life is coming to an end.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   Yours love, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mom/ Dad, My junior school life is coming to an end. Now, I’d like to show my thanks to you for your devotion to me these years. Since I was born, you have been taking good care of me. Every day, you were the first to get up and prepare breakfast for me. On my way to and from school, you were always with me. When I failed an exam and felt stressed, you were the one to encourage me. When I didn’t get along with my friends, you told me to learn to be caring. Now, I have grown up. I’ll spend more time staying and communicating with you. And I’ll try my best to understand you and do what I can for you. Yours love, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达自己对父母的感激之情； 第二步，说明父母为自己的付出，如照顾、陪伴、鼓励等； 第三步，说明自己对父母的回报，如陪伴、沟通、理解； [亮点词汇] ①be born出生 ②take good care of仔细照顾 ③get up起床 ④on one’s way to在去……的路上 [高分句型] ①Since I was born, you have been taking good care of me.（since引导的时间状语从句） ②When I failed an exam and felt stressed, you were the one to encourage me.（when引导的时间状语从句） 11．（24-25九年级上·江苏泰州·期末）夏暑才消冬雪至，流光转瞬岁华迁。难忘的2024在我们的身后渐行渐远，不知不觉我们已经沐浴在2025的阳光里。过去的一年，你的身边一定有很多人陪你同行，老师、同学、朋友、家人，亦或是自己内心的榜样，他们都会给你支持、帮助和力量。假如你是李华，请给他、她或者他们写一封信表达我们的感激之情以及祝福。 要点：1. Who do you want to thank? 2. Why do you want to thank him/ her/ them? (Give one or two examples) 3. How do you express your thanks? 4.…. 注意：1.短文应包含所有要点，可适当拓展和补充。 2.观点明确，语意连贯，层次清楚，书写规范。 3.表达中不得提及真实姓名和校名等相关信息。 4.词数100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear ______, How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mom and Dad, How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. As the days go by, I realize more and more how much you’ve done for me, and I just want to take a moment to express my heartfelt gratitude. Thank you for always being there to support me, whether it’s helping me with my homework, cheering me on at my sports games, or just listening when I’ve had a bad day. You’ve taught me valuable life lessons, like the importance of kindness, hard work, and perseverance. Your love and care are the pillars that hold me up and give me the confidence to face the challenges of life. I know I don’t always say it, but I really do appreciate all the sacrifices you’ve made for me. I promise to study hard and make you proud. I love you both more than words can say. Best regards, Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从你要感谢的人是谁、原因以及怎样表达感谢等方面具体阐述。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感激与祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①go by流逝 ②help sb with sth帮助某人某事 ③cheer sb on为某人加油 ④promise to do sth承诺做某事 [高分句型] ①Your love and care are the pillars that hold me up and give me the confidence to face the challenges of life. (定语从句) ②I know I don’t always say it, but I really do appreciate all the sacrifices you’ve made for me. (并列句) 12．（24-25九年级上·吉林长春·期末）生活中总会遇到一些给我们留下深刻印象的人。他们或让人感动、或让人敬佩、或让人心生感慨。校园公众号就“The Person Who Impresses Me the Most”这一主题向同学们征稿。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，描述一位令你印象最深刻的人进行投稿。 要点： 1. 讲述一个你的经历或她/他的事迹； 2. 谈谈他/她带给你带来的影响。 要求： 1. 表达流畅，行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名或校名； 3. 不少于80词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： The Person Who Impresses Me the Most The person who impresses me the most is my grandfather. When I was a child, he always spent time teaching me how to be patient and persistent. I remember clearly one time when I struggled with a difficult math problem for hours. Instead of giving me the answer, my grandfather sat with me and encouraged me to think through the problem. His persistence and patience taught me the value of hard work. This experience has shaped my attitude towards challenges, making me more determined and resilient. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，并可在内容提示的基础上适当发挥，使文章内容更加丰满。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇引入主题，点出对自己印象最深的人； 第二步，接着具体描述与他的共同经历，以及从他身上学到的品质； 第三步，总结说明这种影响在个人生活和态度中的体现。 [亮点词汇] ①spend time doing sth花费时间做某事 ②struggled with努力解决 ③instead of而不是 ④encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①When I was a child, he always spent time teaching me how to be patient and persistent.（when引导的时间状语从句） 13．（24-25九年级上·云南昆明·期末）2024年已经过去，我们即将迎来 2025年农历春节。正因为有美好的回忆才会对未来充满期许，你一定有许多和家人、朋友一起庆祝春节的记忆，准备丰盛的晚餐，践行和传承我国传统节日的文化习俗等。请以“A Special Spring Festival”为题写一篇英文短文，描述你的一次难忘的春节经历。 要求：1．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个； 2．文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，校名统一用Guangming Middle School。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： A Special Spring Festival The Spring Festival is the most important tradition for Chinese people. It was a special time for our family reunion. In 2024, we had a very special Spring Festival. My family and I went back to our hometown to celebrate the festival with our relatives. We set off fireworks at midnight to welcome the New Year. The sky was filled with colorful fireworks, which was very beautiful. We also gave lucky money to the children, which is a tradition in China. We had a big dinner together, and everyone was happy. We talked about our lives and shared our happiness. This Spring Festival was very special to me, because I could spend time with my family and learn more about our traditions. I will always remember this special Spring Festival. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：描述你的一次难忘的春节经历，注意语句通顺、意思连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明春节对中国人的重要性； 第二步，具体介绍2024年春节的特别之处； 第三步，表达难忘之情。 [亮点词汇] ①go back to返回到…… ②set off燃放 ③be filled with充满…… [高分句型] ①The sky was filled with colorful fireworks, which was very beautiful.（定语从句） ②This Spring Festival was very special to me, because I could spend time with my family and learn more about our traditions.（because引导的原因状语从句） 14．（24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期末）我们每个人就像Lily一样拥有自己喜爱的物品，请你根据下面的思维导图，写一篇英文演讲稿，分享你最喜欢的一件物品，如书籍、CD、生活用品、玩具等，以增进同学们对你的了解。 要求： 1.发言稿必须包括思维导图中所给的关键信息，可适当发挥，但不能照搬第一节内容； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.邮件中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。) Dear classmates, I’m glad to be here to share my favorite ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening! 【满分优秀范文】 Dear classmates, I’m glad to be here to share my favorite book Journey to the West. The book written by Wu Cheng’en is regarded as one of the greatest classics in China. The Monkey King, one of the main characters, keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up. I have had the book since two years ago. My father bought it for me at the beginning of my junior high school. He encourages me to learn from the Money King and not to give up my dream. No matter what difficulty I meet, the book reminds me to keep on working hard and I have made much progress in my study in the past two years. It really has special meaning to me. Thank you for your listening! 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要介绍想要分享的物品是什么； 第二步，具体介绍如何得到、什么时候得到这个物品，以及为什么喜欢它。 [亮点词汇] ①be regarded as被视为 ②give up放弃 ③at the beginning of在……开端 ④remind sb to do sth提醒某人做某事 [高分句型] ①The book written by Wu Cheng’en is regarded as one of the greatest classics in China.（过去分词短语作后置短语） ②No matter what difficulty I meet, the book reminds me to keep on working hard and I have made much progress in my study in the past two years.（No matter what引导的让步状语从句） 15．（2024·山东淄博·一模）在你成长过程中，你父母一定做过许多令你感动的事，请以“The Most Touching Thing”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，叙述你父母做过的最令你感动的一件事。 注意：  1. 书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 The Most Touching Thing My father has done many things for me, but the one he did last month moved me most. After I did badly in my first monthly exam last month, I felt depressed and disappointed. On learning this, my father asked me to have a face-to-face talk with him. First of all, he told me to analyze the causes one by one patiently instead of scolding me seriously as usual. In addition, he made me feel confident again by pointing out the advantages of me. From that day on, whenever and wherever I meet difficulties, I always recall my father’s words, so I can overcome them however hard they are. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据已给出题目进行写作，突出写作的要点，行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明父亲做过很多让人感动的事情； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍父亲做的最让你感动的事情； 第三步，书写结语。总结感受。 [亮点词汇] ①have a face-to-face talk进行面对面的交谈 ②instead of代替 ③as usual像往常一样 ④point out指出 [高分句型] ①After I did badly in my first monthly exam last month, I felt depressed and disappointed.（after引导的时间状语从句） ②From that day on, whenever and wherever I meet difficulties, I always recall my father’s words, so I can overcome them however hard they are.（so引导的结果状语从句；however引导的让步状语从句） 16．（2024·湖北武汉·模拟预测）学校英语社团举办征文比赛，请根据以下内容提示，写一篇题为 “The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most” 的英语文章。从谁、为什么、从哪些方面影响你等方面介绍一下他 (她)。 内容提示：Who has influenced you most? Why? How has she or her influenced you? What do you learn from him or her? Something more about him or her. 注意：文中不能透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most In my life, I think the person who has influenced me most is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most In my life, I think the person who has influenced me most is my mother. She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems with patience and advises me on how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says that she can’t be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. I hope I can be a person like her in many ways. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示信息进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍对自己最有影响力的人； 第二步，具体介绍影响的方面； 第三步，介绍学到的经验。 [亮点词汇] ①advise on就……提供建议 ②can’t be too+adj. 再……也不为过 ③devote to致力于 ④pay attention to关注 [高分句型] ①As a doctor, she often says that she can’t be too careful. (that引导的宾语从句) ②So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. (运用了not only...but also...句型) 17．（2024·山东滨州·中考真题）生活中有很多值得我们珍惜的东西，如时间、健康、亲人、生命等。假设你是李华，你们学校正在开展以“珍惜”为主题的征文活动，请结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1.你珍惜什么； 2.描述你的一次经历； 3.谈谈这次经历带给你的收获。 要求： 1.要点齐全，并适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名； 3.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 There are many important things that are worth valuing in our daily lives. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 There are many important things that are worth valuing in our daily lives. Let me tell a story about me. Last summer, I wanted a new bike. But my family was too poor to afford it. I was very sad and upset. After three weeks, I saw an old bike standing in front of my house. “I don’t like the bike. It is too old.” My mother didn’t say anything after hearing my words. At that night, my father told me my mother cooked some dishes in the restaurant to buy this bike. Although it was not the one that I wanted, it was my mother’s love. I regretted what I did and apologized to my mother. From this experience, we should value what we have and the persons who love us. 【答案解析】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开头已给出，引出故事；   第二步，分享自己的经历和收获； 第三步，表达感悟。   [亮点词汇]   ①too…to太……而不能   ②in front of在……前面   ③apologize to向……道歉 [高分句型]   ①Let me tell a story about me.（祈使句）   ②Although it was not the one that I wanted, it was my mother’s love.（让步状语从句） 18．（2024·安徽淮北·三模）“父亲是儿那登天的梯、父亲是那拉车的牛……”；父亲用他的肩膀支撑起一个家。没有父亲的辛苦付出，就没有我们现在的生活。今天（6月16日）是父亲节。假如你是Fu Xing，请你用英语写一封电子邮件，向父亲表达自己的感谢之情。 要求： 1．内容可以适当发挥，以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅； 2．不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名； 3．词数80—100。作文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Dad, I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks again for everything you have done for me. Love, Fu Xing 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Dad, I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. All these years, you have done so much. Almost every day, you take me to and from school. When I’m sick, you look after me carefully and patiently. You always trust me and care a lot about my school life and personal feelings. What’s more, you always encourage me when I am in trouble. The advice you have given me has helped me a lot. You’re the strongest person I knew. With your help, I’m sure to become a better person. Happy Fathers’ Day! Hope you can be happy and healthy every day. Thanks again for everything you have done for me. Love, Fu Xing 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：邮件开头及结尾已经给出，按照要求向父亲表达自己的感谢之情，要突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接邮件开头，引出话题； 第二步，结合具体事例，表达对父亲的感激之情； 第三步，抒发对父亲的美好祝愿并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be in trouble陷入麻烦中 ②with one’s help在某人的帮助下 [高分句型] ①When I’m sick, you look after me carefully and patiently.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②The advice you have given me has helped me a lot. （省略引导词that或which引导的定语从句） 19．（2024·广西南宁·三模）为了传承和弘扬中华民族的优良家风，你校英文周刊以“Build good relationships with parents”为题，向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1.与父母建立良好关系的重要性； 2.具体做法； 3.感悟与号召。 注意事项： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：respect (v.尊重); housework(n.家务); communicate(v.交流); patient(adj.耐心的) Build good relationships with parents We are supposed to build good relationships with parents. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Build good relationships with parents We are supposed to build good relationships with parents. Because a good family relationship will make our life happier and easier. Here are some things we can do. First, we can offer to help with housework such as doing the dishes or sweeping the floor so that they can have a rest after a day’s work. Second, we should communicate with our parents often and be patient with them. Share our happiness and sorrow with them. Last but not least, we should respect our parents at all times. Don’t make them angry and try to take their advice when we disagree with each other. Parents give us everything they can give. Let’s build good relationships with parents from now on! 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，阐述与父母建立良好关系的重要性； 第二步，具体介绍怎样与父母建立良好的关系； 第三步，发出号召。 [亮点词汇] ①be supposed to应该 ②such as例如 ③each other彼此 ④disagree with不同意 [高分句型] ①First, we can offer to help with housework such as doing the dishes or sweeping the floor so that they can have a rest after a day’s work.(so that引导目的状语从句) ②Don’t make them angry and try to take their advice when we disagree with each other.(祈使句；and并列句；when引导时间状语从句) 20．（2024·贵州黔东南·二模）俗话说，“家和万事兴”。和睦的家庭能给每一位家庭成员带来温暖、快乐、健康、智慧和前进的力量。英语课上，你们开展了一次以“让家成为一个快乐的地方”为主题的活动，同学们都把自己的想法写在了卡片上。请结合卡片信息，以“What Can We Do to Make Our Home a Happier Place?”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，介绍你和同学们的看法。 要求如下： 1. 内容必须包含卡片上的所有信息； 2. 重点谈谈你的看法； 3. 文中不得出现真实的个人信息。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 What Can We Do to Make Our Home a Happier Place? Recently, we’ve had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place in our English class. We’ve shared different ideas. Some say it’s a good idea to spend more time with our family. They think it’s not good to spend more time on the phone. They believe family members should share happiness and worries. When they meet problems, we can do something to cheer them up. Home is always the first place for us to get help and support. Others think it’s necessary to remember our family’s birthdays and prepare small presents. The feeling of being loved can bring us more pleasure. In my opinion, showing love to our family is really important. Showing love is the first step to feel love. Sometimes, even the smallest things like walking with our family make them happier. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“花更多时间与家人相处，与家人分享快乐和烦恼，记住家人的生日以及我的观点”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“最近，在英语课上，我们讨论了如何让家变得更快乐。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“人们的不同观点，即花更多时间与家人相处，与家人分享快乐和烦恼，记住家人的生日”重点介绍如何让我们的家变得更幸福； 第三步，书写结语。表达“有时候，即使是最微小的事情，比如和家人一起散步，也会让他们更快乐。” [亮点词汇] ① good idea好主意 ② cheer sb up使某人振作起来 [高分句型] ① They think it’s not good to spend more time on the phone.（省略that的宾语从句） ② Others think it’s necessary to remember our family’s birthdays and prepare small presents.（it的特殊句式“It’s+adj.+to do sth”表示“做某事是……的”） 21．（2024·山东枣庄·三模）父母是我们的第一任老师。他们不但给了我们生命，还给了我们所需要的一切，包括衣食住行和教育等。作为青少年，你一定有很多话要对父母说，请你根据下面提示给父母写一封信。 1.感谢父母无私的爱；2.感谢父母的辛勤劳动；3.感谢父母对你的教育。 注意：1.短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 2.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。 3.词数80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mom and Dad, I want to take a moment to express my love and gratitude to both of you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】： Dear Mom and Dad, I want to take a moment to express my love and gratitude to both of you. Your love is like a warm blanket on a cold night, always making me feel safe and loved. You’ve always been there for me, through good times and bad.   I’m so grateful for everything you’ve done for me. You’ve worked hard to give me a good life, and I know I wouldn’t be where I am today without you.   I’m especially thankful for the education you’ve given me. It’s opened up so many doors for me, and I’m excited to see what the future holds.   You’ve taught me so much about life, and I’m so lucky to have you as my parents. I love you both more than words can say. Yours, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，感谢父母无私的爱并进一步阐述； 第二步，感谢父母的辛勤劳动并进一步阐述； 第三步，感谢父母对你的教育并进一步阐述； 第四步，总结全文，再次表达对父母的感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①through度过 ②grateful感激的 ③especially特别地 [高分句型] ①You’ve worked hard to give me a good life, and I know I wouldn’t be where I am today without you. (动词不定式表目的；并列句；宾语从句) ②I’m especially thankful for the education you’ve given me. (定语从句) 22．（2024·广西百色·二模）感恩是中华民族的传统美德。初中生活即将结束，一路走来，一定有许多人帮助过你、陪伴过你，此时此刻，你最想感谢谁？假如你是李华，你校英语协会发起以“A person I want to thank”为题的信件穿恩情活动，请根据以下中文提示，写一篇英语投稿。 内容要点： 1．你最想感恩的人； 2．感恩的理由； 3．表达美好祝福。 注意： 1．内容必须包含要点所给的信息 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：help sb. with sth. (在某个方面帮助某人)；have trouble with (遇到麻烦)，appreciate (感激) healthy and happy (健康快乐) A person I want to thank Dear ________, I want to say thank you to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 A person I want to thank Dear Mum, I want to say thank you to you. You really did a lot for me and taught me a lot. Every morning, you got up much earlier to prepare a delicious breakfast for me. Every time I got a poor mark in my exam, you gave me a hug and told me that I would do better next time, which made me confident. When I had trouble with friendship or my life, you always told me that ways were more than problems. It’s you who brought me up and taught me to love and be confident. I really appreciate that you are always with me. I do hope that you can be healthy and happy forever. Yours, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要感谢谁，表达感谢； 第二步，具体阐述感恩的理由； 第三步，书写结语，表达美好祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①get up起床 ②prepare...for...为……准备 [高分句型] ①Every time I got a poor mark in my exam, you gave me a hug and told me that I would do better next time, which made me confident. (时间状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句) ②When I had trouble with friendship or my life, you always told me that ways were more than problems. (时间状语从句，宾语从句) ③It’s you who brought me up and taught me to love and be confident. (强调句) 23．（2024·江苏徐州·三模）每个人一生中都会有很多想做的事，为父母、为朋友、为自己、为班级、为家乡……你校英文报社以“One thing I would like to do for ________”为题开展征文活动，请你用英语写一 篇短文投稿。请补全题目，分享一件你想做的事，并说明你准备怎么做，以及你为什么要做。 提示问题：What would you like to do? How will you do it? Why would you like to do it? 写作要求：1.文中须包含上面提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数90左右。 One thing I would like to do for ________ There are many things we want to do in our lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 One thing I would like to do for my parents There are many things we want to do in our lives. As for me, one thing I’d like to do is to cook a meal for my parents. To start with, I will search the Internet to decide what to cook and take some notes about the cooking steps. Then I will go to the market to buy what I need. After that, I will prepare and cook following the steps carefully. The reason I want to do this is to show my thanks and love to my parents. They are busy with their work every day and they’ve spent so much time taking good care of me. I think it’s time for me to do something for my parents. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时，一般将来时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯，可适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，说明自己想为父母做一顿饭； 第二步，介绍自己将为父母做一顿饭的具体步骤； 第三步，阐述自己想为父母做饭的原因。 [亮点词汇] ① to start with 首先 ② take some notes 做笔记 ③ follow the steps 按步骤 ④ be busy with 忙于 ⑤ take good care of  照顾好 [高分句型] ① Then I will go to the market to buy what I need.（what引导宾语从句） ② I think it’s time for me to do something for my parents.（It’s time for sb. to do sth.句型） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$