11 数据图表分析-2025年中考英语考前冲刺作文必背(模板、素材、分类押题范文)(通用版)

【图表作文专题】 第11讲 数据图表分析 第一部分：中考英语写作精讲 11.1 图表描述模板 在描述图表时，我们可以遵循一定的结构和思路，让文章更加清晰有条理。 开头段：引入图表主题，简要说明图表的类型（如柱状图、饼状图、表格等）以及图表所反映的大致内容和时间范围。 常用表达： The bar chart / pie chart / table shows / illustrates / presents...（柱状图/饼状图/表格展示了……） As can be seen from the bar chart / pie chart / table,...（从柱状图/饼状图/表格中可以看出……） The bar chart / pie chart / table above gives information about...（上面的柱状图/饼状图/表格给出了关于……的信息） 主体段：详细描述图表中的数据和趋势。对于不同类型的图表，描述重点有所不同。在描述过程中，要选取关键数据进行对比和分析，避免罗列所有数据。 对于柱状图，重点描述柱子的高度代表的数据量以及不同柱子之间的对比情况，突出数据的差异。 对于饼状图，着重描述各部分所占的比例，以及占比较大或较小的部分。 对于表格，关注不同行列的数据关系，找出数据的变化规律和特点。 常用表达： According to the chart / table,...（根据图表/表格……） It can be clearly seen that...（可以清楚地看到……） The figure / number of... reached...（……的数字达到了……） The percentage of... is...（……的百分比是……） 结尾段：总结图表的主要内容，得出结论或提出自己的看法和建议。结论要基于对图表数据的分析，看法和建议要合理且具有针对性。 常用表达： In conclusion / To sum up / All in all,...（总之……） From the above analysis, we can draw the conclusion that...（从以上分析，我们可以得出结论……） Based on the data, it is advisable to...（基于这些数据，建议……） 11.2 趋势变化表达 在描述图表中数据的趋势变化时，需要掌握一些常用的词汇和短语，以便准确表达。 上升趋势： 动词：rise, increase, grow, climb, ascend 名词：rise, increase, growth, climb, upward trend 副词：steadily, gradually, rapidly, sharply, significantly 例句： The number of students who like reading English novels has been steadily increasing in recent years.（近年来，喜欢读英文小说的学生数量一直在稳步增长。） The price of houses in this area rose rapidly last year.（去年这个地区的房价迅速上涨。） 下降趋势： 动词：fall, decrease, decline, drop, reduce, descend 名词：fall, decrease, decline, drop, reduction, downward trend 副词：steadily, gradually, rapidly, sharply, significantly 例句： The percentage of people using public transportation decreased slightly last month.（上个月使用公共交通的人数比例略有下降。） The sales of this product have been falling steadily due to the fierce competition.（由于激烈的竞争，该产品的销量一直在稳步下降。） 保持不变： 动词：remain stable, stay the same, keep constant 名词：stability, constancy 例句： The population of this small town has remained stable for the past five years.（在过去五年里，这个小镇的人口一直保持稳定。） The price of this commodity has stayed the same for a long time.（这种商品的价格长期保持不变。） 波动： 动词：fluctuate, wave 名词：fluctuation, wave 例句： The temperature in this region fluctuates greatly throughout the year.（这个地区全年的气温波动很大。） The stock price has been fluctuating wildly in the past few days.（过去几天股票价格一直在大幅波动。） 11.3 范文 ①柱状图分析 题目：The bar chart below shows the number of students in different clubs in a middle school. Write a short passage to describe the chart. 范文： The bar chart presents the number of students in different clubs in a middle school. As can be seen from the chart, there are four clubs in total, namely the art club, the music club, the sports club, and the reading club. The sports club has the largest number of students, reaching 80. It is obvious that students in this school are quite interested in sports. The art club comes second, with 50 students. This indicates that a considerable number of students have a passion for art. The music club has 35 students, while the reading club has the fewest students, only 20. In conclusion, the sports club is the most popular among students, and the school could consider providing more resources and activities for it. Also, efforts could be made to promote the reading club to encourage more students to develop the habit of reading. ②饼状图解读 题目：The pie chart below shows the ways students in a class go to school. Write a composition to analyze the chart. 范文： As can be seen from the pie chart, it gives information about the ways students in a class go to school. There are four main ways: by bike, by bus, on foot, and by car. The percentage of students going to school by bike is the highest, accounting for 40%. This may be because riding a bike is convenient and can also help students keep fit. Students who go to school by bus make up 30%. It is a common and relatively economical way for them. The proportion of students walking to school is 25%. For those who live near the school, walking is a good choice. Only 5% of the students go to school by car, which may be due to the high cost or traffic congestion. To sum up, most students prefer to go to school by bike or bus. The school can encourage students to choose green and healthy ways to go to school, such as setting up more bike - parking areas. ③表格数据 题目：The table below shows the changes in the number of tourists visiting a city from 2020 to 2024. Write a passage based on the table. Year Number of Tourists (in millions) 2020 2.5 2021 3.0 2022 3.5 2023 4.0 2024 4.5 范文： The table above gives information about the changes in the number of tourists visiting a city from 2020 to 2024. According to the data, the number of tourists has been on a continuous upward trend during these five years. In 2020, the number of tourists was 2.5 million. Then it increased steadily year by year. By 2021, the figure reached 3.0 million. In 2022, it grew to 3.5 million. In 2023, the number of tourists climbed to 4.0 million, and in 2024, it reached 4.5 million. From the above analysis, we can draw the conclusion that the city has become more and more attractive to tourists. The local government could take advantage of this trend and further improve the tourism facilities and services to attract more tourists. 第二部分：中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背 1．（2014·上海徐汇·二模）请仔细阅读以下关于初三学生睡眠时间调查结果的数据图表，以图表为依据简单分析初三学生的日常作息情况，谈谈你的感想，并就如何安排好复习迎考提些建议， 写一篇不少于60个词的短文。（标点符号不占格） Write a passage based on the given graphic with at least 60 words （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） 2．（24-25九年级上·河南南阳·期末）在班会上，你们班就同学们在英语阅读方面存在的问题进行了一次调查并展开讨论。请你根据图表内容写一篇调查报告，并针对所出现的问题提出至少两点建议。 要点： 1. 青少年存在的问题，尤其是英语阅读问题； 2. 文章必须包括图表中的所有要点，语句通顺，层次清晰，意思连贯； 3. 给出的建议具有合理性、建设性、可行性； 4. 班上同学的其它问题及建议。 要求： 1. 字数：100词左右； 2. 不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校相关信息； 3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Recently, we have done a survey of students’ English reading status in our class, but the results are not pleasing. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（24-25八年级上·山东济宁·期末）Ai-Da机器人在英国议会上发言，引起了大家极大的关注。为此，你们班在上周五的英语课上就AI机器人能做什么进行了热烈的讨论。请根据下表的数据写一份调查报告。同时，对老师提出的问题“Will robots take the place of (替代) humans (人类)”表达自己的观点并给出至少一点理由。 注意: 1.文中需全面涵盖图表信息； 2.文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校； 3.注意文章的结构完整,表达准确,过渡自然,书写工整； 4.词数：80词左右。 Last Friday we had a heated discussion about what AI robots can do in our English class. Here are the results. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．（25-26九年级上·福建泉州·期末）寒假即将来临，如何过一个快乐而有意义的假期呢？假定你是李华，请你根据以下图表提示，用英语给新西兰交换生Jenny写一封电子邮件，和她分享你的寒假计划。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 Dear Jenny, The winter vacation is coming. How excited I am! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best Wishes! Yours. Li Hua 5．（2024·广东广州·二模）数据显示，我国家庭智能机器人的市场需求正在增强。针对这一现象，你以“Is home robot a good idea?”为主题在班里进行了一项调查并在英语活动课上就此发言。请你根据图表中的调查结果写一篇发言稿，陈述同学们的观点及理由并表达你的个人看法。 要求： (1)词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2)包含上述提示要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； (3)文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。 Is home robot a good idea?      As society develops, more and more families use home robots in their daily lives. Is it a good idea?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·湖北襄阳·三模）中国古诗词是中华文化的凝结，蕴含着国人几千年的感悟，寥寥几句却胜过世间千言万语。随着“国学热”的兴起，越来越多的人开始学习古诗词。英语课上学生们在班内进行了“如何学习中国古诗词”的调查。下图为相关的统计结果。 假如你是该校的学生，请根据以上图表信息，写一篇英语短文。 参考:①fall in love with ②as for ③share… with… ④treasure ⑤pass on 传递内容包括： 1.简要说明图表内容； 2.从图表中选择一种你喜欢的方式，结合亲身经历，谈谈你对学习古诗词的建议。 要求： 1.词数80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 How do the Students Learn Chinese Poems? We did a survey in our class about how students learn Chinese poems(中国诗词). Here are the results.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2023·山东济南·中考真题）新时代英语课堂的语言实践活动丰富多彩。学校英语社团开展了以Students’ Favorite English Class Activities为主题的调查，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。 内容包括： 1.描述并评价调查结果； 2.陈述你的选择并说明理由。 注意： 1.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 There are many practical learning activities in English class. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（24-25九年级上·陕西铜川·阶段练习）这是一份某市某中学九年级三班学生（共50人）对一些在校生活看法的调查表。请描述图表内容，然后针对图表中的话题发表自己的意见，并说明赞成或不赞成的理由。 要求: 1, 内容必须包含所有写作要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文章不得出现真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数） We did a survey of students’ opinions on school rules. Here are the results. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（24-25九年级上·江苏苏州·期中）假如你校“阳光心理驿站”对全校学生进行了问卷调查。结合图表信息，以“I Find Myself Really Good”为题，写一篇短文。首句已给出，不计入总词数。 内容包括： 1．简要说明图表内容； 2．从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的积极影响。 要求： 1．词数不少于90词； 2．文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 I Find Myself Really Good Our school did a survey on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（24-25九年级上·山东济南·期中）假定你是李华。上周你们学校开展了“弘扬中国传统文化”活动。 请你根据下面的图表提示，为学校英文网站写一篇活动报道，介绍活动情况以及同学们参与活动的感受。 写作要求：1. 文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 3. 词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Spreading Chinese Traditional Culture Recently our school held an activity on spreading Chinese traditional culture. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（2024·山西晋城·一模）在我们前行的路上，有风有雨是常态。只有经历了风雨洗礼，我们才能看到美丽的风景。为了引导同学们积极面对人生路上的“风雨”，某校以“The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Faced”为主题，对600名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。 假如你是该校的一名学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1.简要说明图表内容； 2.从图表中选出你所面临的一个挑战，结合自己的经历，谈谈你是如何克服的，并说明你从中获得的启示。 要求： 1.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Faced Recently, a survey was done among 600 students in our school about the biggest challenges they have ever faced. Here are the results. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（23-24九年级下·广东深圳·开学考试）为了了解中学生与父母沟通状况，深圳某校对中学生与父母沟通频率进行了调查。请你根据下列图表和相关文字提示，以“Communicating with parents”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点 具体内容 调查数据 某校中学生亲子沟通频率调查 分析原因 父母过于强调成绩；……（补充一至两点） 你的建议 就如何改善亲子沟通，提出你的建议。 要求： 1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.标点正确，书面整洁。 Communicating with parents Recently, a school has carried out a survey about how often students communicate with their parents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（2024·江苏宿迁·一模）积极锻炼是非常重要的，为此，宿迁市开展了一次关于初中生锻炼情况的调查活动。请你根据下列图表和相关文字提示，以“Exercising is important!”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点 具体内容 调查数据 锻炼的意义 有益身体健康；变得自信快乐 你的建议 就如何更好地开展锻炼，提出你的建议 做一名优秀的宿迁市学生 注意： （1）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （2）词数90左右； （3）短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。 Exercising is important! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（2024·江苏宿迁·一模）阳光中学九年级的学生进行了一次主题为“我的业余时间我做主”的问卷调查。假如你是学校学生会主席王松，请结合下面所给的图表1和图表2，将问卷调查的结果向全体学生汇报，并简要谈一谈作为一名中学生，该如何正确看待不同的娱乐类型以及如何培养自己良好的审美情操。 Types of entertainment 类型 占比 理由 Music 26% 使人放松；帮助睡眠；…… Books 44% 增长知识；思想活跃；…… Films 10% 铭记历史；感受生活；…… TV programmes 20% 开阔视野；激发创新；…… 图表1 图表2 要求：1.结合图表内容，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包含表格中所有相关信息，并有适当发挥； 3.词数100字左右(作文所给词汇不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：增长  increase Hello, everybody! I’m Wang Song. I’m in Year 9 at Sunshine Middle School. Last week, we performed a survey. Now let me tell you something about it. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Entertainment can make us grow up happily, but spending too much time on it will be bad for our health and study. We must manage our time wisely! 15．（24-25九年级上·广东广州·期末）学校要举行英语演讲比赛，作为一名参赛者，请你根据下面图表，结合自己的想法，写一篇关于” 如何成为一个身心健康的人” 的演讲稿。 要求： （1）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （2）可适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 Hello, everyone. Today I’m going to talk about how to be a healthy person. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．（24-25九年级上·安徽淮南·开学考试）同学们在成长的过程中，经常会收到礼物，有浪漫、惊喜、时尚的礼物，也有炫酷、实用、有新意的礼物。你最喜欢的礼物是什么？某校就“What is your favorite gift?”做了一个调查，参与调查的学生有200人，调查结果如图所示。请你用两段话写一篇短文，第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容，第二段介绍你最喜欢的礼物是什么，并讲述它背后的故事。 注意： 1. 文中必须包括全部内容要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3. 词数：80—100；开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 A school did a survey among 200 students about “What is your favorite gift?”. Here are the results._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）假如你是李华，你校校刊以“How often do you help do chores at home?”为主题对学生在家做家务情况进行了调查。请根据下列图表简要描述学生在家做家务的调查结果，并分析原因，最后谈谈你对做家务的看法。 Reasons: 1. don’t have enough time; 2. ... Opinion: 1. develop one’s independence; 2. ... 要求： 1. 文章需包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Doing chores is important for students and we learn a lot from it. According to a survey from our school,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18．（2024·山西朔州·三模）书籍是人类的精神食粮，它们能滋养我们的身心，陶冶我们的情操。古今中外，不同种类的书籍都有自己的特点，总会有一本吸引你，让你爱不释手。为了引导同学们学会选择恰当的书籍，某校针对“我喜欢的书籍类型”，对300名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。 假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1.简要说明图表内容； 2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的书籍，结合自己的阅读经历，谈谈阅读这种书籍的好处。 要求： 1.词数不少于80，首句已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Our school did a survey among 300 students on the topic of “My Favorite Kind of Books”. Here are the results. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 19．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）俗话说“赠人玫瑰，手留余香”。“助人为乐”是中华民族传统美德。为了引导同学们保持善意，传承美德，上周第五中学的老师们以“Helping Others”为主题，对1000名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。 假如你是该校学生，请结合以下图表信息，以“Helping Others”为主题，写一篇短文。内容包括：1、简要说明图表内容；2、从图表中选择一项，结合自己的经历，从who、when、what、why四个方面简单描述，并谈谈它对你和他人的生活产生了什么积极的影响。3、号召更多人帮助他人，传播善意。 要求： 1.词数80左右 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.文章必须包括表格中所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Helping Others Last week our school teachers asked us about how we usually help others _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 【图表作文专题】 第11讲 数据图表分析 第一部分：中考英语写作精讲 11.1 图表描述模板 在描述图表时，我们可以遵循一定的结构和思路，让文章更加清晰有条理。 开头段：引入图表主题，简要说明图表的类型（如柱状图、饼状图、表格等）以及图表所反映的大致内容和时间范围。 常用表达： The bar chart / pie chart / table shows / illustrates / presents...（柱状图/饼状图/表格展示了……） As can be seen from the bar chart / pie chart / table,...（从柱状图/饼状图/表格中可以看出……） The bar chart / pie chart / table above gives information about...（上面的柱状图/饼状图/表格给出了关于……的信息） 主体段：详细描述图表中的数据和趋势。对于不同类型的图表，描述重点有所不同。在描述过程中，要选取关键数据进行对比和分析，避免罗列所有数据。 对于柱状图，重点描述柱子的高度代表的数据量以及不同柱子之间的对比情况，突出数据的差异。 对于饼状图，着重描述各部分所占的比例，以及占比较大或较小的部分。 对于表格，关注不同行列的数据关系，找出数据的变化规律和特点。 常用表达： According to the chart / table,...（根据图表/表格……） It can be clearly seen that...（可以清楚地看到……） The figure / number of... reached...（……的数字达到了……） The percentage of... is...（……的百分比是……） 结尾段：总结图表的主要内容，得出结论或提出自己的看法和建议。结论要基于对图表数据的分析，看法和建议要合理且具有针对性。 常用表达： In conclusion / To sum up / All in all,...（总之……） From the above analysis, we can draw the conclusion that...（从以上分析，我们可以得出结论……） Based on the data, it is advisable to...（基于这些数据，建议……） 11.2 趋势变化表达 在描述图表中数据的趋势变化时，需要掌握一些常用的词汇和短语，以便准确表达。 上升趋势： 动词：rise, increase, grow, climb, ascend 名词：rise, increase, growth, climb, upward trend 副词：steadily, gradually, rapidly, sharply, significantly 例句： The number of students who like reading English novels has been steadily increasing in recent years.（近年来，喜欢读英文小说的学生数量一直在稳步增长。） The price of houses in this area rose rapidly last year.（去年这个地区的房价迅速上涨。） 下降趋势： 动词：fall, decrease, decline, drop, reduce, descend 名词：fall, decrease, decline, drop, reduction, downward trend 副词：steadily, gradually, rapidly, sharply, significantly 例句： The percentage of people using public transportation decreased slightly last month.（上个月使用公共交通的人数比例略有下降。） The sales of this product have been falling steadily due to the fierce competition.（由于激烈的竞争，该产品的销量一直在稳步下降。） 保持不变： 动词：remain stable, stay the same, keep constant 名词：stability, constancy 例句： The population of this small town has remained stable for the past five years.（在过去五年里，这个小镇的人口一直保持稳定。） The price of this commodity has stayed the same for a long time.（这种商品的价格长期保持不变。） 波动： 动词：fluctuate, wave 名词：fluctuation, wave 例句： The temperature in this region fluctuates greatly throughout the year.（这个地区全年的气温波动很大。） The stock price has been fluctuating wildly in the past few days.（过去几天股票价格一直在大幅波动。） 11.3 范文 ①柱状图分析 题目：The bar chart below shows the number of students in different clubs in a middle school. Write a short passage to describe the chart. 范文： The bar chart presents the number of students in different clubs in a middle school. As can be seen from the chart, there are four clubs in total, namely the art club, the music club, the sports club, and the reading club. The sports club has the largest number of students, reaching 80. It is obvious that students in this school are quite interested in sports. The art club comes second, with 50 students. This indicates that a considerable number of students have a passion for art. The music club has 35 students, while the reading club has the fewest students, only 20. In conclusion, the sports club is the most popular among students, and the school could consider providing more resources and activities for it. Also, efforts could be made to promote the reading club to encourage more students to develop the habit of reading. ②饼状图解读 题目：The pie chart below shows the ways students in a class go to school. Write a composition to analyze the chart. 范文： As can be seen from the pie chart, it gives information about the ways students in a class go to school. There are four main ways: by bike, by bus, on foot, and by car. The percentage of students going to school by bike is the highest, accounting for 40%. This may be because riding a bike is convenient and can also help students keep fit. Students who go to school by bus make up 30%. It is a common and relatively economical way for them. The proportion of students walking to school is 25%. For those who live near the school, walking is a good choice. Only 5% of the students go to school by car, which may be due to the high cost or traffic congestion. To sum up, most students prefer to go to school by bike or bus. The school can encourage students to choose green and healthy ways to go to school, such as setting up more bike - parking areas. ③表格数据 题目：The table below shows the changes in the number of tourists visiting a city from 2020 to 2024. Write a passage based on the table. Year Number of Tourists (in millions) 2020 2.5 2021 3.0 2022 3.5 2023 4.0 2024 4.5 范文： The table above gives information about the changes in the number of tourists visiting a city from 2020 to 2024. According to the data, the number of tourists has been on a continuous upward trend during these five years. In 2020, the number of tourists was 2.5 million. Then it increased steadily year by year. By 2021, the figure reached 3.0 million. In 2022, it grew to 3.5 million. In 2023, the number of tourists climbed to 4.0 million, and in 2024, it reached 4.5 million. From the above analysis, we can draw the conclusion that the city has become more and more attractive to tourists. The local government could take advantage of this trend and further improve the tourism facilities and services to attract more tourists. 第二部分：中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背 1．（2014·上海徐汇·二模）请仔细阅读以下关于初三学生睡眠时间调查结果的数据图表，以图表为依据简单分析初三学生的日常作息情况，谈谈你的感想，并就如何安排好复习迎考提些建议， 写一篇不少于60个词的短文。（标点符号不占格） Write a passage based on the given graphic with at least 60 words （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） 【满分优秀范文】 Most students need about 8 to more than 9 hours of sleep every night. Unfortunately, many students don't get enough sleep. recent studies show that 30 percent of the students sleep 6 hours every night ; 55 percent of the students sleep 6 to 7 hours every night ; 12 percent of the students sleep 8 hours every night and only 4 percent of the students sleep more than 10 hours every night. Your entrance examination at once, and I expect you to be very busy preparing for it and a little nervous. But I believe that you will do well.I am going to give you a few practical hints. It is no good to go on studying until the last minute of examination. What you need in the exam is a clear mind. If you tire yourself out before the examination, you will not be mentally and physically ready for it. So a day or two before the examination just relax-leave your books shut and try some other things: get out into the open air;do some physical exercises; see a film; have fun. 　　　I hope all these suggestions will be helpful to you. Best wishes for your success. 【答案解析】考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般现在时，所以在写作时，要尤其一般现在时的表达方式。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: preparing for ；at once；I am going to give you a few practical hints. do some physical exercises; see a film; have fun;I hope all these suggestions will be helpful to you. Best wishes for your success.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。 2．（24-25九年级上·河南南阳·期末）在班会上，你们班就同学们在英语阅读方面存在的问题进行了一次调查并展开讨论。请你根据图表内容写一篇调查报告，并针对所出现的问题提出至少两点建议。 要点： 1. 青少年存在的问题，尤其是英语阅读问题； 2. 文章必须包括图表中的所有要点，语句通顺，层次清晰，意思连贯； 3. 给出的建议具有合理性、建设性、可行性； 4. 班上同学的其它问题及建议。 要求： 1. 字数：100词左右； 2. 不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校相关信息； 3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Recently, we have done a survey of students’ English reading status in our class, but the results are not pleasing. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Recently, we have done a survey of students’ English reading status in our class, but the results are not pleasing. 23% of my classmates aren’t interested in English reading. 40% of them say they hardly have time to read English because of too much homework. 35% of them have difficulty in reading English and don’t know how to read English in right ways. Besides, half of the students say they don’t have suitable reading materials. In my opinion, we’re supposed to spend more time in reading English. We need to practice reading English every day. As for teachers, I hope that they can give us less homework and teach us how to improve our reading abilities. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步、结合图表描述英语阅读现状； 第三步、给出合理性、建设性、可行性的建议并总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in…对……感兴趣 ②because of因为 ③have difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难 ④in my opinion在我看来 ⑤spend time doing sth.花时间做某事 [高分句型] ①As for teachers, I hope that they can give us less homework and teach us how to improve our reading abilities.(that引导宾语从句) 3．（24-25八年级上·山东济宁·期末）Ai-Da机器人在英国议会上发言，引起了大家极大的关注。为此，你们班在上周五的英语课上就AI机器人能做什么进行了热烈的讨论。请根据下表的数据写一份调查报告。同时，对老师提出的问题“Will robots take the place of (替代) humans (人类)”表达自己的观点并给出至少一点理由。 注意: 1.文中需全面涵盖图表信息； 2.文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校； 3.注意文章的结构完整,表达准确,过渡自然,书写工整； 4.词数：80词左右。 Last Friday we had a heated discussion about what AI robots can do in our English class. Here are the results. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Last Friday we had a heated discussion about what AI robots can do in our English class. Here are the results. We found that most students think robots can help us do housework. 37% of students think that they can help us study, so that we can improve our grades. 23% of students believe that robots can take care of the elderly. We were surprised to find that 12% of students thought that machines could chat and play with us. Only ten percent of the students think they can cook for us. Although robots can do so many things for us, l think robots still can’t take the place of humans because they can never think like humans. Only humans ourselves can be creative. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“上周我们对AI机器人能做什么进行了激烈的讨论”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“帮忙做家务、帮助学习、照顾老人、聊天和做饭等”几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①so that以便，为了 ②take care of照顾 [高分句型] We found that most students think robots can help us do housework. (宾语从句) 4．（25-26九年级上·福建泉州·期末）寒假即将来临，如何过一个快乐而有意义的假期呢？假定你是李华，请你根据以下图表提示，用英语给新西兰交换生Jenny写一封电子邮件，和她分享你的寒假计划。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 Dear Jenny, The winter vacation is coming. How excited I am! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best Wishes! Yours. Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Jenny, The winter vacation is coming. How excited I am! I can’t wait to share my plans with you here. First of all, I’ll have a trip with my family. We plan to visit some places of interest, enjoy the natural scenery and different cultures. I think we can have great fun together. Secondly, to keep making progress in my study, I also set a study plan. I’ll spend some time reviewing the lessons with my friends. What’s more, I hope to do some volunteer work in the community, which can make me more responsible. Last but not least, I will do some sports to keep fit. It will be an interesting and meaningful vacation. Best Wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时注意不要遗漏提示内容，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，从旅行、学习和志愿服务等方面具体阐述寒假计划； 第三步，书写结语，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事 ②places of interest名胜古迹 ③making progress取得进步 [高分句型] ①I think we can have great fun together. (省略that的宾语从句) ②I hope to do some volunteer work in the community, which can make me more responsible. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) 5．（2024·广东广州·二模）数据显示，我国家庭智能机器人的市场需求正在增强。针对这一现象，你以“Is home robot a good idea?”为主题在班里进行了一项调查并在英语活动课上就此发言。请你根据图表中的调查结果写一篇发言稿，陈述同学们的观点及理由并表达你的个人看法。 要求： (1)词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2)包含上述提示要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； (3)文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。 Is home robot a good idea?      As society develops, more and more families use home robots in their daily lives. Is it a good idea?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： Is home robot a good idea? As society develops, more and more families use home robots in their daily lives. Is it a good idea? I’ve made a survey in our class recently. Let’s have a look at the result of my survey. 60% of the students think it’s a good idea. Here are their reasons. First home robots help with housework so that people have more time to do things they enjoy. Second, home robots can act as guards when no one is at home. This gives people a sense of security. Third, they can also make people feel less lonely. Fourth, they can improve the efficiency of work. However, 28% of the students disagree with the following reasons. First, depending on the robots too much may make people lazier. Second, most robots have cameras to collect information. That puts the owners’ private information at a risk of being exposed. Third, it also costs too much to buy a home robot at present. Finally, Home robots are high-energy appliances. As for the rest of the students, they are not sure if it’s a good idea to have a home robot. In my opinion, home robots can make our lives easier. I will surely get one in the future. 【答案解析】[整体介绍] ①体裁：本文是一篇议论文，属于材料作文； ②时态：采用“一般现在时” ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，条理清晰，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引出话题； 第二步：陈述各方观点及理由； 第三步：表达自己的观点及理由。 [亮点词汇] ①make sb. do sth.使某人做某事 ②depend on依赖 ③at a risk of 冒着……的风险 [高分句型] ①First home robots help with housework so that people have more time to do things they enjoy. （目的状语从句） ②As for the rest of the students, they are not sure if it’s a good idea to have a home robot.（宾语从句） 6．（2024·湖北襄阳·三模）中国古诗词是中华文化的凝结，蕴含着国人几千年的感悟，寥寥几句却胜过世间千言万语。随着“国学热”的兴起，越来越多的人开始学习古诗词。英语课上学生们在班内进行了“如何学习中国古诗词”的调查。下图为相关的统计结果。 假如你是该校的学生，请根据以上图表信息，写一篇英语短文。 参考:①fall in love with ②as for ③share… with… ④treasure ⑤pass on 传递内容包括： 1.简要说明图表内容； 2.从图表中选择一种你喜欢的方式，结合亲身经历，谈谈你对学习古诗词的建议。 要求： 1.词数80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 How do the Students Learn Chinese Poems? We did a survey in our class about how students learn Chinese poems(中国诗词). Here are the results.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】：                                                       How do the Students Learn Chinese Poems? We did a survey in our class about how students learn Chinese poems. Here are the results. 48% of the students learn the poems by reading and reciting while 22% of them prefer to use apps. The percentage of the students who join the poetry club is 17% and 13% have other choices. As for me, I would like to learn Chinese poems by joining the poetry club. Two years ago, I was poor at reciting Chinese poems. Then my teacher advised me to join the poetry club at school. Most of the members there were Chinese poem lovers. They usually chose 2 poems to learn together and helped me have a better understanding about each line by sharing their background knowledge with me. And finally, I fell in love with Chinese poems. So learning and sharing is a good way to improve our understanding abilities. Chinese poetry is a treasure and a symbol of Chinese culture. Let’s pass on our culture together! 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态： 时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示： 写作要点已给出，考生应注意避免“信息遗漏”，从加入俱乐部、阅读和背诵以及使用线上设备等方式学习中国古诗词。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。具体阐述图表内容； 第二步，具体介绍自己的亲身经历，并提出自己对学习古诗词的建议； 第三步，书写结语。表达期待文化的传承。 [亮点词汇] ①while然而 ②as for至于 ③share...with...和某人分享 ④treasure财宝 [高分句型] ①The percentage of the students who join the poetry club is 17% and 13% have other choices. (who引导的定语从句） ②So learning and sharing is a good way to improve our understanding abilities. (动名词短语作主语) 7．（2023·山东济南·中考真题）新时代英语课堂的语言实践活动丰富多彩。学校英语社团开展了以Students’ Favorite English Class Activities为主题的调查，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。 内容包括： 1.描述并评价调查结果； 2.陈述你的选择并说明理由。 注意： 1.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 There are many practical learning activities in English class. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： There are many practical learning activities in English class. Recently, our school club has made a survey on students’ favorite English class activities. Here are the results. Of the four activities mentioned, about one third of the students say presentation is their favorite. The number of students who choose discussion and creative writing is almost the same, taking up 25% and 27% each. Only 17% of the students consider debate their favorite as they think it is challenging. As far as I am concerned, presentation is the most useful. On the one hand, I am able to learn a lot while preparing for it. On the other hand, it helps to improve my English speaking ability as well as communication skills. English class activities are important, so we had better make full use of them to make English learning more interesting and colorful. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍以下是关于学生最喜欢的英语课堂活动的调查结果； 第二步，描述并评价调查结果； 第三步，陈述你的选择并说明理由； 第四步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①the number of……的数量 ②as far as就……而言 ③had better do sth.最好做某事 ④make full use of充分利用 [高分句型] ①Here are the results.(倒装句) ②The number of students who choose discussion and creative writing is almost the same, taking up 25% and 27% each.(定语从句) 8．（24-25九年级上·陕西铜川·阶段练习）这是一份某市某中学九年级三班学生（共50人）对一些在校生活看法的调查表。请描述图表内容，然后针对图表中的话题发表自己的意见，并说明赞成或不赞成的理由。 要求: 1, 内容必须包含所有写作要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文章不得出现真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数） We did a survey of students’ opinions on school rules. Here are the results. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 We did a survey of students’ opinions on school rules. Here are the results. Among fifty students in Class 3, 20 of them would like to wear school uniforms at school. But 30 of them wouldn’t. Nearly 40 students agree to surf the Internet, and only 10 students don’t support it. As to studying in groups, 35 students like to study in groups, while 15 students don’t like it, In my opinion, it’s necessary for us students to wear uniforms. Because it looks equal and neat whether we are from poor or rich families. I don’t agree to spend too much time surfing the Internet. But studying in groups is good, for we can learn from others and help each other. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为一般现在时态； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，点明主题，展示对学生调查的结果； 第二步，详细阐述几项调查的详细数据包括校服、上网、学习小组等方面； 第三步，书写结语，发表自己对于所调查内容的个人观点。 [亮点词汇] ①would like想要 ②agree to do sth.同意去做某事 ③learn from向……学习 ④help each other互相帮助 [高分句型] ①In my opinion, it’s necessary for us students to wear uniforms.（it is+adj.+for sb. to do sth.句型） ②But studying in groups is good, for we can learn from others and help each other.(原因状语从句) 9．（24-25九年级上·江苏苏州·期中）假如你校“阳光心理驿站”对全校学生进行了问卷调查。结合图表信息，以“I Find Myself Really Good”为题，写一篇短文。首句已给出，不计入总词数。 内容包括： 1．简要说明图表内容； 2．从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的积极影响。 要求： 1．词数不少于90词； 2．文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 I Find Myself Really Good Our school did a survey on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： I Find Myself Really Good Our school did a survey on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. According to the survey, 47% of the students think they don’t like to complain. 53% think they are positive, while 86% believe they can see the world with kind eyes. For me, I find myself really positive. Last month, I was selected to play a role in an English program. I found it difficult to remember these lines in a short amount of time. However, I believed this was both a challenge and a great opportunity to improve my English proficiency. So I worked hard to practice. Finally, I succeeded and received high praise. In fact, it was my positive attitude that kept me showcasing my best side. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要说明问卷调查的结果； 第二步，选择“积极乐观”这一项，结合自己的经历，详细描述它如何对自己产生积极影响； 第三步，总结，拥有积极乐观的态度的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ① according to 根据 ② play a role in 在……中发挥作用/扮演角色 ③ both...and... 既……又…… ④ in fact 事实上 [高分句型] ① 53% think they are positive, while 86% believe they can see the world with kind eyes. (while引导状语从句) ② However, I believed this was both a challenge and a great opportunity to improve my English proficiency. (省略that的宾语从句) ③ In fact, it was my positive attitude that kept me showcasing my best side. (强调句) 10．（24-25九年级上·山东济南·期中）假定你是李华。上周你们学校开展了“弘扬中国传统文化”活动。 请你根据下面的图表提示，为学校英文网站写一篇活动报道，介绍活动情况以及同学们参与活动的感受。 写作要求：1. 文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 3. 词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Spreading Chinese Traditional Culture Recently our school held an activity on spreading Chinese traditional culture. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】                                                        Spreading Chinese Traditional Culture Recently our school held an activity on spreading Chinese traditional culture. It took place in the school hall from 2:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. on Oct. 26th. There were three activities on that day. A quarter of us students took part in Listening to Beijing Opera. They think it is very charming. 30% of us chose Making Paper-cutting. They made really beautiful cuttings. And the rest of us enjoyed ourselves in Introducing Favourite Chinese Classic because they were fond of those famous books. We spoke highly of the activity. We not only learned a lot through this activity, but also realized the importance of protecting our traditional culture. We hope more and more people can join us to spread our culture and protect our culture. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍我们学校最近举办了弘扬中国传统文化的活动； 第二步，具体介绍活动的时间、内容及参加者； 第三步，表达参与活动的感受及发出呼吁。 [亮点词汇] ①took place发生 ②took part in参加 ③be fond of喜欢 [高分句型] ①And the rest of us enjoyed ourselves in Introducing Favourite Chinese Classic because they were fond of those famous books. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②We not only learned a lot through this activity, but also realized the importance of protecting our traditional culture. (not only...but also句型) 11．（2024·山西晋城·一模）在我们前行的路上，有风有雨是常态。只有经历了风雨洗礼，我们才能看到美丽的风景。为了引导同学们积极面对人生路上的“风雨”，某校以“The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Faced”为主题，对600名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。 假如你是该校的一名学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1.简要说明图表内容； 2.从图表中选出你所面临的一个挑战，结合自己的经历，谈谈你是如何克服的，并说明你从中获得的启示。 要求： 1.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Faced Recently, a survey was done among 600 students in our school about the biggest challenges they have ever faced. Here are the results. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Faced Recently, a survey was done among 600 students in our school about the biggest challenges they have ever faced. Here are the results. 56 percent of the students think the biggest challenge is that they have problems with their schoolwork, while 22 percent believe they can’t get on well with family or friends. And 18 percent think they aren’t confident. 4 percent have faced other challenges. The biggest challenge I’ve ever faced is that I wasn’t confident because I always thought I was too common. But things changed because of a little girl. One day, a little girl was crying on the subway and her mom couldn’t stop her. I was reading a storybook at that time. Seeing this, I shared the book with her and tried to tell the story. To my surprise, she stopped crying and listened. Before she got off the subway, she told me that I was really good at telling stories. That gave me lots of courage. Gradually, I became more confident. I have learned an important lesson from the experience: Everyone is special. Believe in yourself first, and then others will believe you. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作内容包括三部分：图表内容、自己的经历、感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明图表内容； 第二步，介绍自己的相关经历和启发； [亮点词汇] ① get on well with sb与某人相处融洽 ② because of由于 ③ to one’s surprise令某人惊讶的是 [高分句型] ① And 18 percent think they aren’t confident.（that引导的宾语从句） ② The biggest challenge I’ve ever faced is that I wasn’t confident because I always thought I was too common.（because引导的原因状语从句） 12．（23-24九年级下·广东深圳·开学考试）为了了解中学生与父母沟通状况，深圳某校对中学生与父母沟通频率进行了调查。请你根据下列图表和相关文字提示，以“Communicating with parents”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点 具体内容 调查数据 某校中学生亲子沟通频率调查 分析原因 父母过于强调成绩；……（补充一至两点） 你的建议 就如何改善亲子沟通，提出你的建议。 要求： 1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.标点正确，书面整洁。 Communicating with parents Recently, a school has carried out a survey about how often students communicate with their parents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Communicating with parents Recently, a school has carried out a survey about how often students communicate with their parents. The survey shows that many students communicate with their parents less frequently. There are several reasons for this. Firstly, parents often emphasize academic performance too much, which makes students feel stressed and less willing to communicate. Secondly, there may be a generation gap, and both sides may have different views and values. To improve communication with parents, students should be more active. They can start conversations about daily life, hobbies, and feelings. Also, parents should listen more to their children’s ideas and respect their feelings. Only in this way can the relationship between parents and children be improved. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍学生与父母沟通频率的调查结果； 第二步，分析造成这种结果的原因； 第三步，就如何改善亲子沟通，提出你的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①communicate with与……沟通 ②too much太多 ③feel stressed感到压力   [高分句型] ①The survey shows that many students communicate with their parents less frequently.（that引导的宾语从句）   ②Firstly, parents often emphasize academic performance too much, which makes students feel stressed and less willing to communicate.（which引导的定语从句） ③Only in this way can the relationship between parents and children be improved.（倒装句） 13．（2024·江苏宿迁·一模）积极锻炼是非常重要的，为此，宿迁市开展了一次关于初中生锻炼情况的调查活动。请你根据下列图表和相关文字提示，以“Exercising is important!”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点 具体内容 调查数据 锻炼的意义 有益身体健康；变得自信快乐 你的建议 就如何更好地开展锻炼，提出你的建议 做一名优秀的宿迁市学生 注意： （1）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （2）词数90左右； （3）短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。 Exercising is important! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Exercising is important! Recenly, we have done a survey about students’ exercising. According to the survey, 32% of the students spend over one hour doing exercise every day, while 68% of them spend less than one hour. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, 46% of them have too much homework, so they have no time to do exercise. Secondly, 29% of them are not good at exercising. Thirdly, 25% of them are not interested in it. As we all know, exercising is good for our health, which keeps our minds sharp and makes us confident and happy. In my opinion, we should keep a balance between our study and exercising. Besides, we should develop a good habit of doing exercise. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，交代调查结果及原因； 第二步，从两方面介绍锻炼的意义； 第三步，针对如何更好地开展锻炼，提出你的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①according to根据 ②be good at擅长 ③in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①As we all know, exercising is good for our health, which keeps our minds sharp and makes us confident and happy.（动名词作主语；which引导非限制性定语从句） ②Firstly, 46% of them have too much homework, so they have no time to do exercise.（so连接因果并列句） 14．（2024·江苏宿迁·一模）阳光中学九年级的学生进行了一次主题为“我的业余时间我做主”的问卷调查。假如你是学校学生会主席王松，请结合下面所给的图表1和图表2，将问卷调查的结果向全体学生汇报，并简要谈一谈作为一名中学生，该如何正确看待不同的娱乐类型以及如何培养自己良好的审美情操。 Types of entertainment 类型 占比 理由 Music 26% 使人放松；帮助睡眠；…… Books 44% 增长知识；思想活跃；…… Films 10% 铭记历史；感受生活；…… TV programmes 20% 开阔视野；激发创新；…… 图表1 图表2 要求：1.结合图表内容，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包含表格中所有相关信息，并有适当发挥； 3.词数100字左右(作文所给词汇不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：增长  increase Hello, everybody! I’m Wang Song. I’m in Year 9 at Sunshine Middle School. Last week, we performed a survey. Now let me tell you something about it. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Entertainment can make us grow up happily, but spending too much time on it will be bad for our health and study. We must manage our time wisely! 【满分优秀范文】 Hello, everybody! I’m Wang Song. I’m in Year 9 at Sunshine Middle School. Last week, we performed a survey. Now let me tell you something about it. 26% of the students like listening to music in their free time because they think music can make them feel relaxed and help them to sleep better. Nearly half of the students prefer reading books as a way of relaxation, because they believe that reading can help them increase knowledge and keep them active in thinking. What’s more, One can easily find peace in books. A small amount of students would like to watch films in their spare time. Watching some historical films can help them remember some history events. Besides, they can feel their lives in some films. Among them, 20% enjoy watching TV programmes. While watching, their horizons will be broadened and their innovation will be inspired. It’s really a relaxing way to learn more about the world. As a student,  these types of entertainment are all acceptable and you can choose the most suitable way to relax in your free time. More importantly, we should try to cultivate our own good aesthetic sentiment when we are free. For example, we can take up painting as our hobbies or take part in some singing competitions. Entertainment can make us grow up happily, but spending too much time on it will be bad for our health and study. We must manage our time wisely! 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，简要介绍统计的结果； 第二步，简要谈谈学生该如何正确看待不同的娱乐类型以及如何培养自己良好的审美情操； 第三步，畅谈看法并结尾（已给出）。 [亮点词汇] ①a smalll amount of少数的 ②enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事 [高分句型] ①26% of the students like listening to music in their free time because they think music can make them feel relaxed and help them to sleep better. (原因状语从句) ②Watching some historical films can help them remember some history events. （动名词作主语） 15．（24-25九年级上·广东广州·期末）学校要举行英语演讲比赛，作为一名参赛者，请你根据下面图表，结合自己的想法，写一篇关于” 如何成为一个身心健康的人” 的演讲稿。 要求： （1）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （2）可适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 Hello, everyone. Today I’m going to talk about how to be a healthy person. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Hello, everyone. Today I’m going to talk about how to be a healthy person. To be healthy, we must have a healthy body as well as a positive attitude. Do you know how to build a healthy body? First of all, we should have a balanced diet. Eat more vegetables and fruit instead of meat. Then, it’s important for us to have enough sleep. Make sure to sleep more that eight hours every day. At last, doing sports regularly is a good way to keep fit. Besides a healthy body, a positive attitude helps us all keep healthy. On one hand, reading good books is a useful way to keep us positive. Good books motivate and encourage us when we get down. One the other hand, making a number of good friends is important. Good friends are always ready to help when we are in trouble. In addition, we’d better relax ourselves from time to time. We can do something we like such as listening to music or seeing a movie. I hope all of us will be healthy both in body and mind, thank you. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文为一篇演讲稿。 ②时态：一般现在时态。 ③人称：主要以第一人称来叙述内容。 ④提示：考生根据要点提示写出一篇关于“如何成为一个身心健康的人”的演讲稿，包括身体和思想两个方面，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作主题，开门见山直接说明成为“一个身心健康的人”需要有健康的身体和积极的心态； 第二步，重点描写如何拥有健康的身体； 第三步，重点描写如何拥有积极的心态； 第四步，表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①as well as和 ②instead of代替 ③make sure确保 ④a good way to do sth.做某事的好方法 ⑤be ready to do sth.准备好做某事 ⑥such as例如 [高分句型] ①Good friends are always ready to help when we are in trouble.(when引导时间状语从句) ②On one hand, reading good books is a useful way to keep us positive. Good books motivate and encourage us when we get down. One the other hand, making a number of good friends is important.(On one hand... On the other hand...表达观点) 16．（24-25九年级上·安徽淮南·开学考试）同学们在成长的过程中，经常会收到礼物，有浪漫、惊喜、时尚的礼物，也有炫酷、实用、有新意的礼物。你最喜欢的礼物是什么？某校就“What is your favorite gift?”做了一个调查，参与调查的学生有200人，调查结果如图所示。请你用两段话写一篇短文，第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容，第二段介绍你最喜欢的礼物是什么，并讲述它背后的故事。 注意： 1. 文中必须包括全部内容要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3. 词数：80—100；开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 A school did a survey among 200 students about “What is your favorite gift?”. Here are the results._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 A school did a survey among 200 students about “What is your favorite gift?”. Here are the results. 70% of the students like household goods as gifts, because they are practical and can be used in daily life. 20% of them choose school goods, which can help them with their study. 10% of the students prefer travel as a gift, because they think it can broaden their horizons and enrich their experiences. My favorite gift is a book. It was given to me by my father on my birthday. He told me that reading is very important and can enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizons. Since then, I have developed a good habit of reading. Whenever I have free time, I will pick up the book and read it. It not only brings me joy but also makes me more knowledgeable. I will always cherish this gift and the love from my father. 【答案解析】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，是一篇看图作文。 ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：文章按照要求，第一段用百分比简要说明了图表内容，第二段介绍了自己最喜欢的礼物是一本书，并讲述了它背后的故事，未遗漏题目要求的内容。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。开头说明学校对200名学生进行了关于“你最喜欢的礼物是什么”的调查，并按照图表给出调查结果。 第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的礼物是一本书，是父亲在生日时送的，父亲告诉自己阅读很重要，能丰富知识、拓宽视野。从那以后，自己养成了阅读的好习惯，这本书不仅带来快乐，还让自己更有知识。自己会永远珍惜这份礼物和父亲的爱。 ［亮点词汇］ ①broaden one’s horizons拓宽某人的视野 ②enrich one’s experiences丰富某人的经历 ③develop a habit of养成……的习惯 ［高分句型］ ①He told me that reading is very important and can enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizons.（宾语从句） 17．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）假如你是李华，你校校刊以“How often do you help do chores at home?”为主题对学生在家做家务情况进行了调查。请根据下列图表简要描述学生在家做家务的调查结果，并分析原因，最后谈谈你对做家务的看法。 Reasons: 1. don’t have enough time; 2. ... Opinion: 1. develop one’s independence; 2. ... 要求： 1. 文章需包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Doing chores is important for students and we learn a lot from it. According to a survey from our school,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Doing chores is important for students and we learn a lot from it. According to a survey from our school, most of the students do chores 3—4 times a week. 25% of students do chores twice a week. 20% of the students do chores every day. However, we find that 15% of students never do chores. Students may think they are too tired on weekdays to do chores. Some even think it’s their parents’ job. Others think they don’t have enough time. But I think everyone should share the work and sometimes we can take some break from schoolwork by doing chores. Also, it can develop our independence. So I suggest we should do some basic housework every day, like making our own bed or sweeping the floor. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给图表提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍学生在家做家务的调查结果； 第二步，分析调查结果的原因； 第三步，最后谈谈自己对做家务的看法。 [亮点词汇] ① too...to... 太……而不能…… ② take some break 休息 ③ do some basic housework 做一些基本的家务 [高分句型] However, we find that 15% of students never do chores.（宾语从句） 18．（2024·山西朔州·三模）书籍是人类的精神食粮，它们能滋养我们的身心，陶冶我们的情操。古今中外，不同种类的书籍都有自己的特点，总会有一本吸引你，让你爱不释手。为了引导同学们学会选择恰当的书籍，某校针对“我喜欢的书籍类型”，对300名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。 假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1.简要说明图表内容； 2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的书籍，结合自己的阅读经历，谈谈阅读这种书籍的好处。 要求： 1.词数不少于80，首句已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Our school did a survey among 300 students on the topic of “My Favorite Kind of Books”. Here are the results. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： Our school did a survey among 300 students on the topic of “My Favorite Kind of Books”. Here are the results. Thirty-nine percent of students like novels best. Twenty-seven percent of the students like science fictions best. The students who like biographies take up twenty-three percent and the others take up eleven percent. It’s clear that most students like novels. As for me, I am crazy about biographies. When I read Steve Jobs, I learned that he made a lot of efforts to found Apple Company. It teaches me not to give up when I encounter difficulties. Biographies can help me understand the experiences of those celebrities. When I read the biographies, I can learn how they faced the difficulties, which inspires me a lot. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“调查结果”来引出下文中对自己的阅读经历的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“最喜欢的书籍和阅读经历”两方面入手，重点介绍阅读这种类型的书籍的好处； [亮点词汇] ①take up 占据 ②as for 至于 ③give up 放弃 [高分句型] ①The students who like biographies take up twenty-three percent and the others take up eleven percent.（who引导的定语从句） ②When I read Steve Jobs, I learned that he made a lot of efforts to found Apple Company.（when引导的时间状语从句+that引导的宾语从句） ③When I read the biographies, I can learn how they faced the difficulties, which inspires me a lot.（when引导的时间状语从句+which引导的定语从句） 19．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）俗话说“赠人玫瑰，手留余香”。“助人为乐”是中华民族传统美德。为了引导同学们保持善意，传承美德，上周第五中学的老师们以“Helping Others”为主题，对1000名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。 假如你是该校学生，请结合以下图表信息，以“Helping Others”为主题，写一篇短文。内容包括：1、简要说明图表内容；2、从图表中选择一项，结合自己的经历，从who、when、what、why四个方面简单描述，并谈谈它对你和他人的生活产生了什么积极的影响。3、号召更多人帮助他人，传播善意。 要求： 1.词数80左右 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.文章必须包括表格中所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Helping Others Last week our school teachers asked us about how we usually help others ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Helping Others Last week our school teachers asked us about how we usually help others. Here are the results. 40 percent of students help others by caring for old people in an old people’s home. The percentage of the students who help classmates with their studies is 70%. And 90% choose to help others by raising money for people in need. Once I was on a crowded bus on my way home. It was at that moment that I saw an old woman slowly getting on the bus. Withoug thinking twice, I offered my seat to her. She smiled at me and said “good girl”. When I saw the old woman sit comfortably on the seat, I got a strong feeling of happiness. By helping others, I’ve realized that it’s our duty to do our part in making our society better. Small actions can make a big difference. So let’s help others. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍图表内容，并介绍自己的一段经历，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要说明图表内容； 第二步，介绍自己帮助别人的一段经历以及自己的感想； 第三步，号召更多人帮助他人，传播善意。 [亮点词汇] ①on my way home在我回家的路上 ②get on上车 ③a strong feeling of happiness强烈的幸福感 ④do one’s part in doing sth.在做某事方面尽自己的一份力 [高分句型] ①The percentage of the students who help classmates with their studies is 70%. (who引导的定语从句) ②When I saw the old woman sit comfortably on the seat, I got a strong feeling of happiness. (when引导的时间状语从句) 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$