内容正文:
【综合提升篇】
第19讲 万能模板套用
第一部分:中考英语写作精讲
19.1 三套通用模板
模板一:观点论述型
开头:引出话题,表明自己的观点。
In recent days, the topic of [话题关键词] has been brought into focus. As far as I am concerned, [自己的观点].
主体段落1:阐述支持观点的第一个理由,并举例说明。
Firstly, [理由1]. For example, [具体例子1]. This example clearly shows that [理由1与观点的联系].
主体段落2:阐述支持观点的第二个理由,并举例说明。
Secondly, [理由2]. A good case in point is [具体例子2]. It is obvious that [理由2与观点的联系].
结尾:总结观点,强调重要性或提出建议。
In conclusion, based on the above - mentioned reasons, I firmly believe that [再次强调观点]. It is high time that we [提出建议,如采取行动、改变观念等].
模板二:问题解决型
开头:描述问题现状,引起读者关注。
Nowadays, [问题关键词] has become a serious problem that we have to face. It has brought about a series of negative effects. For instance, [列举一些负面影响].
主体段落1:分析问题产生的原因。
There are several reasons accounting for this problem. First of all, [原因1]. What's more, [原因2]. Last but not least, [原因3].
主体段落2:提出解决问题的措施或建议。
In order to solve this problem, we should take some effective measures. Firstly, [措施1]. Secondly, [措施2]. Only in this way can we [解决问题后达到的效果].
结尾:总结解决问题的重要性,呼吁行动。
To sum up, it is urgent for us to solve the problem of [问题关键词]. We should all make joint efforts to [采取行动解决问题].
模板三:书信/邮件型
开头:表明写信目的,提及对方或相关事件。
Dear [称呼],
I am writing to [写信目的,如 express my gratitude, ask for help, give advice 等]. I hope this letter finds you well. [提及与对方相关的事情,如 “I was very glad to receive your letter last week.”].
主体段落1:阐述主要内容,根据写信目的展开。
[详细说明写信目的相关内容,如感谢的具体事情、求助的具体问题、建议的具体方面等]. For example, [举例说明].
主体段落2:进一步补充相关信息或表达自己的期望、感受。
Besides, [补充内容]. I sincerely hope that [表达期望,如 “you can consider my advice”“you can help me as soon as possible” 等].
结尾:表达祝福、感谢或期待回复等。
Best regards/Warm wishes,
[你的名字]
19.2 主题词替换技巧
1. 明确主题核心:拿到题目后,准确把握主题的核心内容,确定关键主题词。比如主题是关于 “环境保护”,关键主题词就是 “environmental protection”。
2. 同义词、近义词替换:寻找与主题词意思相近的词汇进行替换,使表达更丰富。例如 “environmental protection” 可以替换为 “environmental conservation”“preservation of the environment” 等;“problem” 可以用 “issue”“matter”“dilemma” 替换。
3. 相关词汇拓展:围绕主题词,拓展相关的词汇。以 “校园生活” 为例,除了 “campus life”,还可以使用 “school activities”“academic life”“extracurricular activities” 等词汇来丰富表达。
4. 结合语境灵活替换:在替换主题词时,要考虑句子的语境和语法结构,确保替换后的词汇使用恰当。比如在 “The government has taken many measures to solve the environmental problem.” 中,将 “problem” 替换为 “issue” 时,句子变为 “The government has taken many measures to solve the environmental issue.” 语法和语义都通顺。
19.3 跨题型范文示范
观点论述型题目:
Is it necessary to learn a foreign language?
普通版
Nowadays, learning a foreign language is becoming more and more popular. I think it is very necessary to learn a foreign language.
First, learning a foreign language can help us communicate with people from all over the world. For example, if we learn English, we can talk to people from the US, the UK and other English - speaking countries. It can make our world bigger.
Second, learning a foreign language can also help us learn different cultures. We can read foreign books and watch foreign movies to know more about other countries.
In conclusion, learning a foreign language is very important. We should all learn a foreign language.
模板套用高级版
In recent days, the topic of whether it is necessary to learn a foreign language has been brought into focus. As far as I am concerned, learning a foreign language is of great necessity.
Firstly, one of the significant advantages of learning a foreign language lies in its ability to facilitate global communication. For example, mastering English, which is widely spoken around the world, enables us to have in - depth conversations with people from diverse English - speaking regions such as the United States, the United Kingdom, and Australia. This not only broadens our social circle but also enriches our life experiences.
Secondly, learning a foreign language serves as a key to unlocking different cultures. By reading original foreign literature and watching foreign - language movies, we can gain a profound understanding of the unique traditions, values, and ways of life in other countries. A case in point is that when we study French, we can explore the romantic French culture, including its exquisite cuisine and world - renowned art.
In conclusion, based on the above - mentioned reasons, I firmly believe that learning a foreign language is indispensable in today's globalized world. It is high time that we attached great importance to foreign - language learning and made continuous efforts to improve our language skills.
问题解决型题目:
The Problem of Traffic Jam
普通版
Traffic jam is a big problem in many cities. It makes people late for work and school. It also causes air pollution.
There are some reasons for this problem. More and more people buy cars, and the roads are not wide enough.
To solve this problem, the government should build more roads. And people should take public transport more often.
In short, we need to work together to solve the traffic jam problem.
模板套用高级版
Nowadays, the issue of traffic jam has become a serious problem that we have to confront. It has given rise to a series of negative impacts. For instance, it leads to significant time - wasting, making commuters and students frequently late for work and school. Moreover, the continuous idling of vehicles in traffic jams contributes to severe air pollution, endangering public health.
There are several factors accounting for this dilemma. First of all, the rapid growth of the economy has led to a substantial increase in people's purchasing power, resulting in a soaring number of private cars on the roads. What's more, the urban road - planning system has not kept pace with the growth of the vehicle population, with many roads being too narrow to accommodate the heavy traffic flow. Last but not least, the lack of effective traffic management measures also exacerbates the problem.
In order to address this issue, we should adopt some effective countermeasures. Firstly, the government should invest more in infrastructure construction, such as building new roads, subways, and overpasses to improve the traffic capacity. Secondly, it is essential to encourage the public to use public transportation more frequently. This can be achieved by improving the quality and convenience of public transport services, such as increasing the frequency of buses and subways, and reducing the ticket prices. Only in this way can we effectively relieve traffic congestion and create a more efficient and sustainable urban traffic environment.
To sum up, it is urgent for us to solve the problem of traffic jam. We should all make joint efforts to promote the healthy development of urban transportation.
书信型题目:
Write a letter to your friend to give advice on how to prepare for an English exam
普通版
Dear Tom,
I am glad to write to you. You asked me how to prepare for the English exam.
First, you should review the words and grammar. Make sure you know all the important knowledge.
Second, do more exercises. You can buy some exercise books.
I hope you can do well in the exam.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
模板套用高级版
Dear Tom,
I am writing to offer you some advice on how to prepare for the upcoming English exam. I was delighted to receive your letter and am more than willing to share my experiences with you.
Firstly, a solid foundation in vocabulary and grammar is crucial. You should set aside dedicated time each day to review the words and grammar points that you have learned in class. For example, you can create flashcards with new words on one side and their definitions on the other, and review them regularly. This will help you reinforce your memory and ensure that you have a good grasp of the basic knowledge.
Besides, practice makes perfect. Solving a sufficient number of exercises is an effective way to improve your test - taking skills. You can purchase some high - quality English exercise books that are specifically designed for the exam you are preparing for. By doing so, you can familiarize yourself with the exam format, question types, and the level of difficulty. Additionally, analyzing your mistakes after each practice session is equally important. It will enable you to identify your weak areas and focus on improving them.
I sincerely hope that you can make full use of these suggestions and achieve excellent results in the English exam.
Best regards,
Li Hua
第二部分:中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背
1.(2024·云南·中考真题)你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Getting Close to Nature”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,叙述一次你接近自然的经历及感悟(如郊游、研学、劳动实践等),或谈谈接近自然的好处。
要求:
1. 根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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【优秀满分范文】
Getting Close to Nature
Last summer, I had a chance to go hiking in the mountains near my hometown. It was an unforgettable experience getting close to nature.
The fresh air, green trees, and the sound of birds singing all around made me feel relaxed and happy. As I climbed higher, I saw a breathtaking view of the valley below. It was like a painting that I could step into.
This trip taught me that nature is our best friend. It heals our minds and gives us strength. I learned to appreciate the beauty of nature more and to protect it for future generations.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:要求以“Getting Close to Nature”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的接近自然的经历;
第二步,具体介绍亲近自然的好处;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①an unforgettable experience一段难忘的经历
②breathtaking view令人叹为观止的景色
③step into走进去
④heals our minds治愈心灵
[高分句型]
①It was like a painting that I could step into.(定语从句)
②This trip taught me that nature is our best friend.(宾语从句)
2.(2024·湖北武汉·中考真题)本周英语课学习围绕主题“Tomorrow’s Life”展开。请你根据以下提示问题从生活、工作、家庭等方面,写一篇英语作文,描绘25年后你的生活。
Where do you want to live and work?
What will your family be like?
How are you going to spend your free time?
Something more about your future life.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My life will be very different in 25 years.
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【优秀满分范文】
My life will be very different in 25 years. I think I’ll be a reporter in Beijing. I will live in an apartment with my sister because I don’t like living alone. And I can play with her in my apartment. My parents will travel around the world and enjoy themselves. I will meet a lot of interesting and famous people and I will go to another place on business. I will have many different pets. Maybe I will keep a pet turtle. I think I will go shopping with my sister and do some reading as long as I have time. And I will go to London on my vacation.
I’ll work hard to achieve my dream. I’m sure my life in 25 years will be better and better!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体描述写作内容,介绍未来的工作、生活等;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① live in 住在
② play with 和……玩
③ as long as只要
④ better and better 越来越好
[高分句型]
① I will live in an apartment with my sister because I don’t like living alone. (原因状语从句)
② I think I will go shopping with my sister and do some reading as long as I have time.(宾语从句和条件状语从句)
3.(2024·陕西·中考真题)假如你是李斌,开学初老师在劳动实践课(labor class)上布置了一项作业,内容是栽培一种植物(绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等),观察并记录它(们)的生长变化。你完成了这项作业并且觉得很有趣,打算写一封邮件和你的笔友Tom分享此次经历和感受。
参考词汇:
grow, look after, watch, record (v.记录), a feeling of satisfaction, fun, learn, …
要求:
1.邮件应包含题目要求所给的关键信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.邮件中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Hi Tom,
How’s it going? I’d like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you.
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Can you share your interesting experience with me? Looking forward to your reply.
Li Bin
【优秀满分范文】
Hi Tom,
How’s it going? I’d like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you.
This term, my teacher assigned me a project to grow a plant and record its changes. I chose a sunflower and named it Sunny. I put the seed to a nice container and carefully recorded its changes. Each day, I watered and looked after Sunny with care. It was fascinating to see how it slowly grew taller and stronger. When I saw the sunflower grow well, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. And the funny shape of the sunflower made me deeply interested in it.
The interesting experience taught me patience and the beauty of nature. I hope you try this too! Can you share your interesting experience with me? Looking forward to your reply.
Li Bin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:主要记录栽培一种植物(绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等),观察并记录它(们)的生长变化。适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,说明栽种的种子和种子的变化;
第二步,分享感受。
[亮点词汇]
①looked after照顾
②interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
When I saw the sunflower grow well, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction.(时间状语从句)
4.(2024·江苏无锡·中考真题)传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动,今年的主题是“交朋友,传文化”。假设你是李华,请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件,向他介绍一个中国传统节日(时间、庆祝方式等)。注意事项:
1. 邮件内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数不少于90个,邮件开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称;
4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture.
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Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country?
Yours truly
Li Hua
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. I’m writing to tell you something about the Spring Festival.
Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. Before the spring festival, people usually have a thorough cleaning and put up couplets on their doors. No matter how faraway people are, they’ll try to return to their home. On the New Year’s Eve, people have a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the first day of the New Year, people set off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year. People usually visit their relatives each other. I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money.
Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country?
Yours truly
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:本文主要介绍一个中国传统节日,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出“最喜欢的节日是春节”的话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、庆祝方式”等方面进行介绍;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①put up couplets贴春联
②set off the fireworks燃放烟花
[高分句型]
①Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. (and连接的并列句)
②I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money. (because引导的原因状语从句)
5.(2024·山西·中考真题)随着全球互联互通,青少年之间的交流日益增加。一个主题为“Youth is a time for fighting”的国际青少年交流沙龙将要在线上进行,你作为中国青少年代表将进行发言。请用英语写一篇发言稿。
内容包括:
·your idea about what young people should be like
·one of your stories about fighting
·the meaning of fighting
要求:
1.词数不少于80词;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【优秀满分范文】:
As young people, we should be brave, confident and creative, but the most important thing is to be willing to fight.
Last year, I often made mistakes when I did English reading exercises. Remembering the teacher had ever told us the more we read, the higher our reading ability would be, I decided to try. I spent all my free time on English reading. Whenever I read, I made every effort to understand the articles thoroughly and wrote down my own understanding of them. Gradually, I made great progress in reading comprehension.
It’s fighting that makes us better and better. Fighting is the brightest color of youth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:以“一般过去时”为主,多种时态综合运用;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述个人观点,认为青少年应该是什么样子的,具备什么样的品质;
第二步,具体介绍个人的经历,阐述自己是如何奋斗的;
第三步,表达个人感悟,阐述奋斗的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①be willing to do sth愿意做某事
②make mistakes犯错误
③decide to do sth.决定做某事
④spend some time on sth.花费时间做某事
⑤make great progress in sth.在某方面取得巨大进步
[高分句型]
①Last year, I often made mistakes when I did English reading exercises.(when引导时间状语从句)
②Remembering the teacher had ever told us the more we read, the higher our reading ability would be, I decided to try.(the+比较级,the+比较级)
③Whenever I read, I made every effort to understand the articles thoroughly and wrote down my own understanding of them.(whenever引导让步状语从句)
6.(2024·广东广州·中考真题)你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛,主题是“An unforgettable school trip”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文。
注意:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右;
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
An unforgettable school trip
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【优秀满分范文】
An unforgettable school trip
Our school organized a trip to the Science Museum last Saturday. I went there with all the students and teachers of Grade 9 together.
We got together at 8:00 a.m. at the school gate and left for the museum by bus. We took a lecture by the guide as soon as we got there. After that, we took a visit around the different halls of the museum. A variety of advanced inventions had been displayed, from the appliance to industry, education and life. What impressed me most was the experience of the usage of them, which made me have a better understanding of the knowledge of AI. We also enjoyed the delicious food cooked by an AI robot. How amazing!
At the end of the visit, we said goodbye to the AI guide. It is a meaningful trip which not only broadens our horizon of the creation world, but also builds up our national confidence. I made up my mind to study hard and make a contribution to my motherland.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:一般过去时;
③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,考生需要按照要点写出相应的内容,不得遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直入主题,介绍学校旅行的时间、地点和人物;
第二步,具体介绍这次旅行中你们都做了什么;
第三步,表达对于此次经历的感想以及收获。
[亮点词汇]
①take a lecture听讲座
②A variety of各种各样的
③have a better understanding of更好地理解……
④make a contribution to对……做出贡献
[高分句型]
①We took a lecture by the guide as soon as we got there. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句)
②What impressed me most was the experience of the usage of them, which made me have a better understanding of the knowledge of AI. (which引导的定语从句)
7.(2024·福建·中考真题)假设你是李华,学校上周五开展了为期一天的实践活动。你的笔友Henry对这次活动很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示,用英语给他写一封信,谈谈活动过程及你的感想。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Henry,
I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last Friday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Henry,
I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last Friday. Let me tell you something about it.
In the morning, we visited the History Museum. We learned about the history of the Long March. Then we listened to the stories of the Red Army, which greatly touched us. After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center, where we enjoyed paper cutting art. We also watched local opera performances that are educational.
The tour not only deepens our love for our country but also enriches our understanding of Chinese traditional art!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:结合所给图示完成写作,注意不要遗漏信息;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,告诉对方自己去了历史博物馆场进行实践活动;
第二步,具体介绍活动的时间以及过程;
第三步,谈谈此次活动带给自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① learn about了解到
② not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①Let me tell you something about it.(祈使句)
②After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center, where we enjoyed paper cutting art.(定语从句)
8.(2024·江苏扬州·中考真题)端午节是中国四大传统节日之一。为加深中华文化理解,激发爱国主义情怀,某英语报“Culture”专栏正面向中学生举行以“Duanwu Festival—A celebration of patriotism”为题的征文比赛。请根据以下问题提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示:
(1) What is Duanwu Festival?
(importance, date, rice dumplings, dragon boat races)
(2) Why is Duanwu Festival also widely accepted as a celebration of patriotism?
(spirit behind the story of Qu Yuan, spirit of dragon boat racing)
(3) As a teenager, how can we practise the spirit of patriotism?
(1. …;2. …)
参考词汇:patriotism n.爱国主义; patriotic adj.爱国的; poet n.诗人;
all ethnic groups 全民族; the lunar May fifth 农历五月初五
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism
Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【优秀满分范文】
Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism
Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important and traditional festivals in China. It falls on the lunar May fifth. People all across China eat rice dumplings and dragon boat races are held in many places to remember a great ancient patriotic poet Qu Yuan.
Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism. People’s dragon boat racing is closely related to honor Qu Yuan.
As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. First, By working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies, we can make a significant impact on the development of our country. Second, By dedicating ourselves to protect the earth, we also can be a better person and it is good for our country.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍端午节;
第二步,介绍屈原故事的精神和赛龙舟的精神;
第三步,说明如何实践爱国。
[亮点词汇]
①is closely related to息息相关
②strive for奋发图强
[高分句型]
①Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism.(定语从句)
②As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland.(宾语从句)
9.(2024·江苏苏州·中考真题)你校English Reading Club正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会,本周阅读内容为Auggie’s Story(阅读D篇)。请从以下两个标题中任选一个,写一篇英文读后感。
选择一:以Sometimes people surprise us为题,内容包括:
1.你对这句话的理解;
2.结合实际生活举例说明;
3.你得到的启发。
选择二:以Trouble is a friend为题,内容包括:
1.你对这句话的理解;
2.结合实际生活举例说明;
3.你得到的启发。
注意:
1.词数:100左右;
2.请先填写你所选的标题,再写文章;
3.照抄阅读语篇不得分;
4.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Title: ____________
After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【优秀满分范文】
Title: Trouble is a friend
After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. And I think trouble is a friend.
The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.
In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score. But thanks to the help of my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hour studying grammar every day. In the end, my grammar improved greatly.
In my opinion, trouble is bad, but it sometimes makes us better. It reminds us not to give up when facing difficulties and to face them bravely.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:选择一个话题完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解;
第二步,结合实际生活举例说明;
第三步,最后表达你得到的启发。
[亮点词汇]
① thanks to多亏
② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③ in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.(表语从句,让步状语从句)
②That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score.(原因状语从句)
10.(2024·湖南·中考真题)英语课上老师要求以“Sports make us better”为话题开展三人一组的讨论。假定你是李华,将代表小组在全班发言,请根据以下信息写一篇英文发言稿,内容包括:
1. 介绍你们各自喜欢的运动;
2. 谈谈运动对你们的影响。
注意:
1. 文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
2. 写作词数为80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone,
I’m Li Hua from Group One. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
【优秀满分范文】
Hello, everyone,
I’m Li Hua from Group One. Below, on behalf of our group, I will report on our discussion. Cindy’s favorite sport is volleyball. She often plays volleyball with her friends. By playing volleyball, she has become more confident and healthy. Frank loves riding a bicycle best. By riding a bicycle, his body has become stronger and stronger. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends. Playing basketball has taught me the spirit of teamwork and never giving up.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题介绍组内交流结果;
第二步,细节介绍组员们喜爱的运动以及运动带来的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①on behalf of代表
②stronger and stronger越来越强壮
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①If I have time, I will go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends.(条件状语从句)
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第19讲 万能模板套用
第一部分:中考英语写作精讲
19.1 三套通用模板
模板一:观点论述型
开头:引出话题,表明自己的观点。
In recent days, the topic of [话题关键词] has been brought into focus. As far as I am concerned, [自己的观点].
主体段落1:阐述支持观点的第一个理由,并举例说明。
Firstly, [理由1]. For example, [具体例子1]. This example clearly shows that [理由1与观点的联系].
主体段落2:阐述支持观点的第二个理由,并举例说明。
Secondly, [理由2]. A good case in point is [具体例子2]. It is obvious that [理由2与观点的联系].
结尾:总结观点,强调重要性或提出建议。
In conclusion, based on the above - mentioned reasons, I firmly believe that [再次强调观点]. It is high time that we [提出建议,如采取行动、改变观念等].
模板二:问题解决型
开头:描述问题现状,引起读者关注。
Nowadays, [问题关键词] has become a serious problem that we have to face. It has brought about a series of negative effects. For instance, [列举一些负面影响].
主体段落1:分析问题产生的原因。
There are several reasons accounting for this problem. First of all, [原因1]. What's more, [原因2]. Last but not least, [原因3].
主体段落2:提出解决问题的措施或建议。
In order to solve this problem, we should take some effective measures. Firstly, [措施1]. Secondly, [措施2]. Only in this way can we [解决问题后达到的效果].
结尾:总结解决问题的重要性,呼吁行动。
To sum up, it is urgent for us to solve the problem of [问题关键词]. We should all make joint efforts to [采取行动解决问题].
模板三:书信/邮件型
开头:表明写信目的,提及对方或相关事件。
Dear [称呼],
I am writing to [写信目的,如 express my gratitude, ask for help, give advice 等]. I hope this letter finds you well. [提及与对方相关的事情,如 “I was very glad to receive your letter last week.”].
主体段落1:阐述主要内容,根据写信目的展开。
[详细说明写信目的相关内容,如感谢的具体事情、求助的具体问题、建议的具体方面等]. For example, [举例说明].
主体段落2:进一步补充相关信息或表达自己的期望、感受。
Besides, [补充内容]. I sincerely hope that [表达期望,如 “you can consider my advice”“you can help me as soon as possible” 等].
结尾:表达祝福、感谢或期待回复等。
Best regards/Warm wishes,
[你的名字]
19.2 主题词替换技巧
1. 明确主题核心:拿到题目后,准确把握主题的核心内容,确定关键主题词。比如主题是关于 “环境保护”,关键主题词就是 “environmental protection”。
2. 同义词、近义词替换:寻找与主题词意思相近的词汇进行替换,使表达更丰富。例如 “environmental protection” 可以替换为 “environmental conservation”“preservation of the environment” 等;“problem” 可以用 “issue”“matter”“dilemma” 替换。
3. 相关词汇拓展:围绕主题词,拓展相关的词汇。以 “校园生活” 为例,除了 “campus life”,还可以使用 “school activities”“academic life”“extracurricular activities” 等词汇来丰富表达。
4. 结合语境灵活替换:在替换主题词时,要考虑句子的语境和语法结构,确保替换后的词汇使用恰当。比如在 “The government has taken many measures to solve the environmental problem.” 中,将 “problem” 替换为 “issue” 时,句子变为 “The government has taken many measures to solve the environmental issue.” 语法和语义都通顺。
19.3 跨题型范文示范
观点论述型题目:
Is it necessary to learn a foreign language?
普通版
Nowadays, learning a foreign language is becoming more and more popular. I think it is very necessary to learn a foreign language.
First, learning a foreign language can help us communicate with people from all over the world. For example, if we learn English, we can talk to people from the US, the UK and other English - speaking countries. It can make our world bigger.
Second, learning a foreign language can also help us learn different cultures. We can read foreign books and watch foreign movies to know more about other countries.
In conclusion, learning a foreign language is very important. We should all learn a foreign language.
模板套用高级版
In recent days, the topic of whether it is necessary to learn a foreign language has been brought into focus. As far as I am concerned, learning a foreign language is of great necessity.
Firstly, one of the significant advantages of learning a foreign language lies in its ability to facilitate global communication. For example, mastering English, which is widely spoken around the world, enables us to have in - depth conversations with people from diverse English - speaking regions such as the United States, the United Kingdom, and Australia. This not only broadens our social circle but also enriches our life experiences.
Secondly, learning a foreign language serves as a key to unlocking different cultures. By reading original foreign literature and watching foreign - language movies, we can gain a profound understanding of the unique traditions, values, and ways of life in other countries. A case in point is that when we study French, we can explore the romantic French culture, including its exquisite cuisine and world - renowned art.
In conclusion, based on the above - mentioned reasons, I firmly believe that learning a foreign language is indispensable in today's globalized world. It is high time that we attached great importance to foreign - language learning and made continuous efforts to improve our language skills.
问题解决型题目:
The Problem of Traffic Jam
普通版
Traffic jam is a big problem in many cities. It makes people late for work and school. It also causes air pollution.
There are some reasons for this problem. More and more people buy cars, and the roads are not wide enough.
To solve this problem, the government should build more roads. And people should take public transport more often.
In short, we need to work together to solve the traffic jam problem.
模板套用高级版
Nowadays, the issue of traffic jam has become a serious problem that we have to confront. It has given rise to a series of negative impacts. For instance, it leads to significant time - wasting, making commuters and students frequently late for work and school. Moreover, the continuous idling of vehicles in traffic jams contributes to severe air pollution, endangering public health.
There are several factors accounting for this dilemma. First of all, the rapid growth of the economy has led to a substantial increase in people's purchasing power, resulting in a soaring number of private cars on the roads. What's more, the urban road - planning system has not kept pace with the growth of the vehicle population, with many roads being too narrow to accommodate the heavy traffic flow. Last but not least, the lack of effective traffic management measures also exacerbates the problem.
In order to address this issue, we should adopt some effective countermeasures. Firstly, the government should invest more in infrastructure construction, such as building new roads, subways, and overpasses to improve the traffic capacity. Secondly, it is essential to encourage the public to use public transportation more frequently. This can be achieved by improving the quality and convenience of public transport services, such as increasing the frequency of buses and subways, and reducing the ticket prices. Only in this way can we effectively relieve traffic congestion and create a more efficient and sustainable urban traffic environment.
To sum up, it is urgent for us to solve the problem of traffic jam. We should all make joint efforts to promote the healthy development of urban transportation.
书信型题目:
Write a letter to your friend to give advice on how to prepare for an English exam
普通版
Dear Tom,
I am glad to write to you. You asked me how to prepare for the English exam.
First, you should review the words and grammar. Make sure you know all the important knowledge.
Second, do more exercises. You can buy some exercise books.
I hope you can do well in the exam.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
模板套用高级版
Dear Tom,
I am writing to offer you some advice on how to prepare for the upcoming English exam. I was delighted to receive your letter and am more than willing to share my experiences with you.
Firstly, a solid foundation in vocabulary and grammar is crucial. You should set aside dedicated time each day to review the words and grammar points that you have learned in class. For example, you can create flashcards with new words on one side and their definitions on the other, and review them regularly. This will help you reinforce your memory and ensure that you have a good grasp of the basic knowledge.
Besides, practice makes perfect. Solving a sufficient number of exercises is an effective way to improve your test - taking skills. You can purchase some high - quality English exercise books that are specifically designed for the exam you are preparing for. By doing so, you can familiarize yourself with the exam format, question types, and the level of difficulty. Additionally, analyzing your mistakes after each practice session is equally important. It will enable you to identify your weak areas and focus on improving them.
I sincerely hope that you can make full use of these suggestions and achieve excellent results in the English exam.
Best regards,
Li Hua
第二部分:中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背
1.(2024·云南·中考真题)你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Getting Close to Nature”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,叙述一次你接近自然的经历及感悟(如郊游、研学、劳动实践等),或谈谈接近自然的好处。
要求:
1. 根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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2.(2024·湖北武汉·中考真题)本周英语课学习围绕主题“Tomorrow’s Life”展开。请你根据以下提示问题从生活、工作、家庭等方面,写一篇英语作文,描绘25年后你的生活。
Where do you want to live and work?
What will your family be like?
How are you going to spend your free time?
Something more about your future life.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My life will be very different in 25 years.
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3.(2024·陕西·中考真题)假如你是李斌,开学初老师在劳动实践课(labor class)上布置了一项作业,内容是栽培一种植物(绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等),观察并记录它(们)的生长变化。你完成了这项作业并且觉得很有趣,打算写一封邮件和你的笔友Tom分享此次经历和感受。
参考词汇:
grow, look after, watch, record (v.记录), a feeling of satisfaction, fun, learn, …
要求:
1.邮件应包含题目要求所给的关键信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.邮件中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Hi Tom,
How’s it going? I’d like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you.
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Can you share your interesting experience with me? Looking forward to your reply.
Li Bin
4.(2024·江苏无锡·中考真题)传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动,今年的主题是“交朋友,传文化”。假设你是李华,请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件,向他介绍一个中国传统节日(时间、庆祝方式等)。注意事项:
1. 邮件内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数不少于90个,邮件开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称;
4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture.
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Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country?
Yours truly
Li Hua
5.(2024·山西·中考真题)随着全球互联互通,青少年之间的交流日益增加。一个主题为“Youth is a time for fighting”的国际青少年交流沙龙将要在线上进行,你作为中国青少年代表将进行发言。请用英语写一篇发言稿。
内容包括:
·your idea about what young people should be like
·one of your stories about fighting
·the meaning of fighting
要求:
1.词数不少于80词;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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6.(2024·广东广州·中考真题)你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛,主题是“An unforgettable school trip”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文。
注意:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右;
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
An unforgettable school trip
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7.(2024·福建·中考真题)假设你是李华,学校上周五开展了为期一天的实践活动。你的笔友Henry对这次活动很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示,用英语给他写一封信,谈谈活动过程及你的感想。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Henry,
I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last Friday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8.(2024·江苏扬州·中考真题)端午节是中国四大传统节日之一。为加深中华文化理解,激发爱国主义情怀,某英语报“Culture”专栏正面向中学生举行以“Duanwu Festival—A celebration of patriotism”为题的征文比赛。请根据以下问题提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示:
(1) What is Duanwu Festival?
(importance, date, rice dumplings, dragon boat races)
(2) Why is Duanwu Festival also widely accepted as a celebration of patriotism?
(spirit behind the story of Qu Yuan, spirit of dragon boat racing)
(3) As a teenager, how can we practise the spirit of patriotism?
(1. …;2. …)
参考词汇:patriotism n.爱国主义; patriotic adj.爱国的; poet n.诗人;
all ethnic groups 全民族; the lunar May fifth 农历五月初五
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism
Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.(2024·江苏苏州·中考真题)你校English Reading Club正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会,本周阅读内容为Auggie’s Story(阅读D篇)。请从以下两个标题中任选一个,写一篇英文读后感。
选择一:以Sometimes people surprise us为题,内容包括:
1.你对这句话的理解;
2.结合实际生活举例说明;
3.你得到的启发。
选择二:以Trouble is a friend为题,内容包括:
1.你对这句话的理解;
2.结合实际生活举例说明;
3.你得到的启发。
注意:
1.词数:100左右;
2.请先填写你所选的标题,再写文章;
3.照抄阅读语篇不得分;
4.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Title: ____________
After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.(2024·湖南·中考真题)英语课上老师要求以“Sports make us better”为话题开展三人一组的讨论。假定你是李华,将代表小组在全班发言,请根据以下信息写一篇英文发言稿,内容包括:
1. 介绍你们各自喜欢的运动;
2. 谈谈运动对你们的影响。
注意:
1. 文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
2. 写作词数为80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone,
I’m Li Hua from Group One. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
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