03 书信与邮件写作类作文-2025年中考英语考前冲刺作文必背(模板、素材、分类押题范文)(通用版)

【应用文专项】 第3讲 书信与邮件写作类作文 第一部分：中考英语写作精讲 一、书信五要素模板（3.1） 1. 标准书信格式 [发信人地址]（可省略） [日期]（顶格右对齐） Dear [称呼], [正文] Yours sincerely/faithfully/truly, [签名] [打印姓名] 2. 五要素答案解析 ① 称呼 (Salutation) 熟悉：Dear Tom/Mary 正式：Dear Mr. Smith/Dear Professor Wang 未知：Dear Sir/Madam ② 开头段 (Opening) 寒暄问候：How are you? / I hope this email finds you well. 写信目的：I'm writing to... / The purpose of this letter is to... ③ 主体段 (Body) 逻辑分层：First... Second... Finally... 时态把控：邀请/建议用将来时，感谢用完成时 ④ 结尾段 (Closing) 重申目的：Looking forward to your reply. 礼貌收尾：Best wishes / Warm regards ⑤ 签名 (Signature) 私人：Yours, 正式：Yours sincerely, 商务：Best regards, 二、场景用语宝典（3.2） 1. 邀请信高频表达 发出邀请 We would be honored if you could join us... It would be a great pleasure to have you at... 活动详情 The event will take place at [地点] on [日期]. Activities include... followed by... 请求回复 Kindly let us know your availability by [日期]. Please RSVP at your earliest convenience. 2. 感谢信黄金句型 表达感激 I can't thank you enough for... Your generous help meant the world to me. 具体细节 The [具体物品/帮助] you provided was exactly what I needed when... Without your guidance on..., I would never have... 后续承诺 I look forward to returning the favor someday. This experience has inspired me to... 3. 建议信必备框架 问题分析 I understand you're having trouble with... From what you described, the main challenge seems to be... 分层建议 First and foremost,... Another effective approach would be to... You might also consider... 鼓励结尾 I'm confident these suggestions will help... Don't hesitate to ask if you need further advice. 三、满分范文精析（3.3） 范文1：给笔友的信 Dear Alex, How's everything going in Sydney? I'm excited to share that I've just returned from a cultural exchange program in Xi'an, where I... (详述2个文化体验) The most fascinating part was... (具体细节描写). I'm attaching some photos where you can see... (自然过渡到附件) Looking forward to hearing about your summer adventures! Best, Li Hua ``` 得分点： 自然的生活化语气 感官细节描写（sights/sounds/tastes） 照片附件作为互动契机 范文2：活动邀请函 Dear Professor Wilson, On behalf of the Student Union, I'm writing to cordially invite you to be the keynote speaker at our Youth Innovation Forum on March 15th. The event will focus on... (说明3个议题). Your expertise in sustainable development would greatly inspire... (具体联系领域). Please let us know your topic preference by February 20th. We sincerely hope you can join us in shaping young minds! Yours respectfully, Zhang Ming 得分点： 正式而不失热情的语气 明确时间节点 突出受邀者的重要性 范文3：环保建议信 Dear Neighbors, I'm writing to propose some ecofriendly practices for our community. Recently I noticed... (具体现象描述). Firstly, setting up recycling stations by the... (具体位置建议). Secondly, organizing monthly swap meets could... (举例说明). Lastly,... (创新性建议). Together, we can make our neighborhood a greener place! Warm regards, Wang Lin 得分点： 问题观察具体化 建议分层次且可操作 呼吁性结尾增强感染力 四、提分实战技巧 1. 格式避坑指南 日期写法：June 5, 2025 (美式) / 5 June 2025 (英式) 标点规范：美式冒号Dear Mr. Smith: 英式逗号Dear Mr. Smith, 段落控制：45段为佳，每段不超过5句 2. 语言升级策略 基础表达 → 升级表达 I think → From my perspective You should → It would be advisable to Want → Would like to Help → Be of assistance 3. 常见错误预警 中式直译：把"好好学习"写成"good good study" 时态混乱：邀请信中误用过去时 代词滥用：在同一段落重复使用"I"超过3次 五、2025预测话题 备考话题清单 1. 国际文化节志愿者招募信 2. 给校长的图书馆改进建议 3. 感谢防疫工作人员的慰问信 4. 邀请外教参加传统节日活动 5. 网络交友安全建议信 应急写作锦囊 遇到陌生话题时： 1. 用"五要素模板"搭框架 2. 从"场景用语"中选适配句型 3. 通过具体例子扩展内容（如建议信中的"for example..."） 附：中考书信评分标准速记 内容完整度（5分）+ 语言准确性（5分）+ 连贯得体性（3分）+ 格式规范（2分）= 总分15分 建议每日精练1篇，重点修改： ① 检查所有动词时态 ② 替换3个基础词汇为高级表达 ③ 添加1个复合句（定语从句/状语从句）``` 第二部分：中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背 1．（2025·广东江门·二模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jackson来信询问你未来的人生规划，请你回信，内容包括： 1.你的人生规划； 2.解释原因； 3.请他提出建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.注意书信格式。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Jackson, I’m writing to share with you my life plan in the future. When I grow up, I want to be a journalist. The reasons are as follows. First of all, in my opinion, working for a newspaper and reporting news globally would be really exciting. What’s more, journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people. Hence I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills. And of course, absorbing as much knowledge as possible at this stage in my life is what I must do. What do you think of my life plan? Any suggestions are welcome. Yours, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍你的人生规划的具体详情、解释原因并请他提出建议。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①share sth with sb与某人分享某事 ②first of all首先 ③communicate with与……交流 ④try to do sth努力做某事 [高分句型] When I grow up, I want to be a journalist. (When引导的时间状语从句) 2．（24-25九年级上·江苏连云港·期末）假设你是李华，收到了交换生Paul的信件，请你根据他的书信内容，用英文写一封回信。 Dear Li Hua, I heard about your school’s Art Show. It includes Music World, Film World, Literature World and so on. As an art fan, I’m really interested. Which would you like to recommend me to take part in? And why? I’m looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Paul 要求： （1）回信应涵盖所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （2）词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Paul, I’m glad to hear that you’ re interested in our school’s Art Show! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Paul, I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in our school’s Art Show! Among these art worlds, I’d like to recommend Film World to you. It shows us different film cultures around the world. And wonderful films always bring us both good stories and life lessons. There are colourful activities for you to take part in. There will be a film festival at the school cinema. Some documentaries, science fiction films and action films will be shown there. You can also write down reviews and share with us after watching films. Come to join us! You’ll enjoy the show. Hope to see you. Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作句式已给出，考生应对推荐的艺术展的项目进行详细的介绍。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。用“我很高兴听到你对我们学校的艺术展感兴趣！”引出下文。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。推荐艺术展的项目并说明原因。 第三步，书写结语。表达“期待见到你”，进行情感升华。 [亮点词汇] ①recommend 建议 ②take part in 参加 ③share with 与……分享 [高分句型] ①Come to join us!（祈使句） 3．（23-24九年级下·湖北黄冈·开学考试）假如你是Li Lei，你的笔友Tom准备春节后到中国旅游和拜访他的好朋友，但是他不知道中国访友和餐桌风俗礼仪，请你回信告诉他有关注意事项。 书信内容： 1. 介绍中国访友习俗； 2. 介绍中国餐桌礼仪； 3. 祝愿旅游快乐。 词汇提示：make a plan, drop by, point at, make noise 要求： （1）回信需包括提示的全部内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； （2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； （3）词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, Thank you for your letter! I am glad that you will travel to China soon. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Lei 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Tom, Thank you for your letter! I am glad that you will travel to China soon. And I know you have no idea about the customs of visiting friends and table manners in China. Don’t worry, let me tell you something about them. In China, we usually make plans to visit our friends, and we seldom drop by a friend’s home without calling first. It’s also a good idea to take some small gifts when visiting our friends. As for the table manners, I think they may be a bit different from those in your country. Firstly, we use chopsticks instead of forks and knives while eating, and you’re not supposed to point at anyone with your chopsticks, it is considered to be impolite. Secondly, it’s impolite to make noise while eating. Thirdly, you’re not supposed to start eating first if there are older people at the table, that’s very important. Anyway, I’m sure you’ll get used to all these things in China. Have a good time! Yours, Li Lei 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容给Tom写一封信，可适当增添细节，并突出重点写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，并引出介绍中国访友和餐桌风俗礼仪； 第二步，介绍中国访友习俗； 第三步，介绍中国餐桌礼仪； 第四步，书写结语，祝愿对方旅游快乐。 [亮点词汇] ①be a bit different from与……有点不同 ②instead of而不是 ③be supposed to应该 ④make plans制定计划 [高分句型] ①And I know you have no idea about the customs of visiting friends and table manners in China. (宾语从句) ②you’re not supposed to start eating first if there are older people at the table, that’s very important. (if引导条件状语从句) 4．（2024·安徽阜阳·一模）假如你是李辉，你的外国笔友Sam给你发了一封电子邮件，他表示暑假想要来你的家乡旅游。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封邮件，向他表示欢迎并介绍你家乡的一些情况。 注意： 1.短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数80—100 (书信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：scenery (n. 风景)；whitebait (n. 银鱼)；white shrimp (n. 白虾) Dear Sam, I am very glad to receive your letter and know that you want to visit my hometown—Chaohu. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your visit. Yours, Li Hui 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Sam, I am very glad to receive your letter and know that you want to visit my hometown—Chaohu. Chaohu Lake is the fifth largest freshwater lake in the country. I live in a small village by the lake. The lake is famous for its beautiful natural scenery. The Mushan Island and Crape Myrtle Cave attract thousands of tourists from all over the country every year. Generally speaking, the weather here is as warm and wet as that in other cities in South China. So there are many wetland parks around the lake. As for delicious food, Chaohu whitebait and its white shrimp are known far and wide. I’ll cook some for you by myself when you come. I’m looking forward to your visit. Yours, Li Hui 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要有遗漏，适当增加细节，突出写作的重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，简单介绍巢湖及自己的居住位置； 第二步，具体介绍巢湖的景点、天气情况等； 第三步，介绍巢湖的美食，并表达对笔友的欢迎。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for因……而出名 ②generally speaking一般来说 ③as for至于 ④be known far and wide远近闻名 [高分句型] ①Generally speaking, the weather here is as warm and wet as that in other cities in South China.（“ as+形容词或副词原级+as...”结构） ②I’ll cook some for you by myself when you come.（when引导时间状语从句） 5．（24-25九年级上·甘肃定西·期末）假设你是李华，今天正逢端午节，你的英国笔友Jack对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下内容提示，给他写一封回信。 1. 中国的传统节日之一，已有2000 多年的历史 (the Dragon Boat Festival; one of the Chinese traditional festivals; two thousand years of history)； 2. 为了纪念著名诗人屈原 (honor the great poet, Qu Yuan)； 3. 中国南方有赛龙舟的习俗 (Dragon Boat races)； 4. 家人团聚吃粽子和其他美食 (eat zongzi and other delicious food)； 5. 有三天假期，可以外出旅游 (a 3-day holiday)。 要求： 1. 80词左右，书信格式； 2. 内容合理，要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。 注意：不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息 (除所给身份外)。 Dear Jack, How’s it going? I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Jack, How’s it going? I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. It is one of the Chinese traditional festivals which has about two thousand years of history. The festival is celebrated to honor the great poet, Qu Yuan. On that day, people often get together with their family. And they eat zongzi and other delicious food. In the southern parts of China, people often have the Dragon Boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a 3-day holiday during the festival. So we can have a short journey to relax ourselves. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is and I like it very much! Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析]   题材：本文是一篇介绍节日的书信作文； 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”，因为是介绍节日的常规活动和意义；   提示：需要根据给出的要点，以书信形式向笔友介绍端午节的文化和习俗。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简单问候，并引出话题，即介绍端午节；   第二步，详细说明端午节的由来、纪念对象、主要习俗(赛龙舟、吃粽子等)以及节日的假期安排； 第三步，表达对节日的喜爱之情，并祝福笔友。 [亮点词汇] ①the Dragon Boat Festival 端午节 ②honor the great poet 纪念伟大诗人 ③Dragon Boat races 赛龙舟 [亮点句型] ①It is one of the Chinese traditional festivals which has about two thousand years of history. (定语从句) ②So we can have a short journey to relax ourselves. (动词不定式做定语) 6．（24-25九年级上·湖北十堰·期末）假如你是李明，最近和父母的关系不太好，你向校心理医生王医生咨询，请根据王医生的信件给你的父母写一封信。 Dear Li Ming, Sorry to hear your problem. Parents are those person who love you most in this world. However, sometimes you may disagree with each other about the family rules. The first step to solve it is to communicate with them. You need to let them know the rule you disagree with, your opinion about it, and the way you deal with it. Yours, Doctor Wang 要求： （1）你的书信要包含信中提到的三个方面； （2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； （3）词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear parents, I know you love me most and family rules can help me grow best, but I still have some disagreement about it.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 【优秀满分范文】 Dear parents, I know you love me most and family rules can help me grow best, but I still have some disagreement about it. First, I think the rule that I have to go home before 8 p.m. is too strict. I think I should be allowed to come home a little later, like 9 p.m., because sometimes I need to study with my classmates or attend some after-school activities. Second, I don’t think I should be forbidden to watch TV or play computer games. I believe it’s good for me to relax in this way after a day’s hard work. Finally, I hope you can trust me more and give me more freedom. I promise I will manage my time well and be responsible for my own actions. Yours, Li Ming 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要介绍对家规的看法； 第二步，具体说明自己的观点及理由； 第三步，提出希望许下承诺。 [亮点词汇] ①should be allowed to do sth.应该被允许做某事 ②play computer games玩电脑游戏 ③be good for对……有益 [高分句型] ①I think the rule that I have to go home before 8 p.m. is too strict.（宾语从句） ②I think I should be allowed to come home a little later, like 9 p.m., because sometimes I need to study with my classmates or attend some after-school activities. （宾语从句，原因状语从句） 7．（24-25九年级上·四川成都·阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Emma对中文和中国文化非常感兴趣。她想要向你寻求学习中文的方法，并了解一项中国的传统节日。请根据下面的思维导图写一封书信。 要求： 1. 书信要包括思维导图中的所有信息； 2. 语言通顺, 并有逻辑； 3. 字数：100 词左右； 4. 书写工整，格式规范。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Emma, I am very happy to know that you are very interested in the Chinese language and Chinese culture. Now let me tell you some ways to learn Chinese. First of all, you should watch more Chinese movies or read more Chinese magazines. By doing so, you can learn a lot of useful vocabulary and grammar. What’s more, you should make more Chinese friends because they can help you improve your spoken Chinese. As for Chinese traditional festivals, I think the Spring Festival is the most important one. It usually comes in January or February. During the Spring Festival, dumplings are the most traditional food. They are eaten for wealth, unity, luck, and tradition. People get together and have a big meal. People also like to set off firecrackers to celebrate the Spring Festival. For Chinese people, nothing is more important than the Spring Festival because it’s a time when families can be together. Good luck with your Chinese studies! Yours, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括思维导图所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二、三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达心情——很高兴对方对中国语言和文化感兴趣；引出话题：分享学习中文的方法； 第二步，介绍学习中文的两个方法； 第三步，介绍一个传统的中国节日，包括时间、食物、活动等； 第四步，表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①get together 团聚 ②be interested in 对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ①As for Chinese traditional festivals, I think the Spring Festival is the most important one. (宾语从句) ②What’s more, you should make more Chinese friends because they can help you improve your spoken Chinese. (because引导原因状语从句) 8．（24-25九年级上·重庆沙坪坝·期中）在你身边是否有一些陪伴你成长、在你心中留下了特殊回忆的老物件？如今，或许你不再使用这个老物件，但它却承载了你的很多珍贵回忆——思亲的寄托、家风的传承、乡愁的依凭……你校校刊英语专栏以“时光里的宝贝”为话题发起征文，请你介绍一个你心中珍贵的老物件，分享关于它的回忆，并谈谈它对你的影响。要求： 1. 80-120词； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： hand-knitted sweater手工编织的毛衣 stuffed toy 毛玩具 handicraft 手工艺品 photo album 相册 letter or postcard书信或者明信片 …… wool羊毛 leather 皮革 porcelain 陶瓷 metal金属 plastics塑料 …… precious memories 珍贵的回忆 remind… of the childhood 使……想起童年 pass down... through generations 把……世代相传 bridges for emotional communication情感交流的桥梁 …… As time goes by, we have collected many old objects in our lives. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 As time goes by, we have collected many old objects in our lives. One of the most precious old objects in my life is a hand-knitted sweater made by my grandmother. This sweater, made of soft wool, reminds me of my childhood days spent at my grandparents’ house. Every time I wear it, I feel the warmth and love my grandmother put into every stitch. Although I no longer wear it often, it holds a special place in my heart as a symbol of family love and tradition. This sweater has taught me the importance of cherishing family bonds and passing down love through generations. It serves as a bridge for emotional communication, connecting me to my roots and reminding me of the values my family holds. 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，介绍你心中珍贵的老物件； 第二步，分享关于它的回忆，并谈谈它对你的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①no longer不再 ②a symbol of ……的象征 ③serves as 用作 [高分句型] ①Although I no longer wear it often, it holds a special place in my heart as a symbol of family love and tradition.（让步状语从句） ②It serves as a bridge for emotional communication, connecting me to my roots and reminding me of the values my family holds.（并列结构） 9．（2024·浙江绍兴·二模）你校英语俱乐部将举行“劳动教育”主题活动，现向全校学生征求活动建议。假如你是李华，请根据下图内容用英语给负责人写一封书信，谈谈自己的劳动经历并提供建议。 注意： 1. 短文必须包括上图所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 补充内容至少各一条； 3. 词数：80—100； 4. 文章的开头仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。 Dear sir, Labor is a very important part of our life. Here is my experience and some advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear sir, Labor is a very important part of our life. Here is my experience and some advice. I usually help with housework, such as doing the dishes, cleaning my bedroom, sweeping the floor and so on. Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits, but also helps to develop my life skills. Also, sharing housework can help our parents free from heavy chores after work. And then they can relax themselves. For the coming Labor Education Theme Activity, I have some suggestions. I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea. We can encourage students to clean up and decorate our school as well. Students will learn about the importance of hard work and the value of labor. Yours, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括思维导图中的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，开篇点题，介绍劳动很重要性，并引入自己的经验和建议； 第二步，介绍自己所做的家务劳动及收获； 第三步，对主题活动提出建议并总结。 ［亮点词汇］ ① clean up 打扫干净 ② form good habits 养成好习惯 ［高分句型］ ① Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits, but also helps to develop my life skills. (动名词作主语，not only … but also…连接并列成分) ② I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea. (宾语从句) 10．（2024·浙江台州·二模）为丰富校园文化，学校腾出一个教室作为活动场所，校英语栏目组正向全校学生征求建议。假如你是李华，请用英语给栏目组负责人写一封信，从下面的表格中推荐一个名称(或者自拟一个名称)，并阐明理由。 注意： (1)书信内容要点应选自上表，可适当发挥； (2)词数：80—100； (3)书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear sir, I’m glad to have a chance to share my ideas. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice will be helpful. Thank you! Yours Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear sir, I’m glad to have a chance to share my ideas. I think it will be a good place for Book Bar. Here’re my reasons. You know, reading is a long-life journey. We can read what we’re interested in in such a quiet place. Also, we can share the characters and the worlds from the books with our friends, which can help improve our knowledge. The most important is that we will form the habit of reading gradually and make new friends who have the same hobbies. Besides, to enrich our school life, the reading competition can be held in Book Bar. In a word, reading in Book Bar can really make a difference to our school life. I hope my advice will be helpful. Thank you! Yours Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”以及“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：根据所给表格完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，给出理由； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in…对……感兴趣 ②character人物 ③gradually逐渐地 ④hobby爱好 ⑤competition比赛 ⑥make a difference to…对……产生影响 [高分句型] The most important is that we will form the habit of reading gradually and make new friends who have the same hobbies.(that引导表语从句；who引导定语从句) 11．（2024·广西桂林·二模）假设你是复兴中学学生钟华，这学期你加入了学校的英语角并收获颇丰 。最近你收到负责英语角的外教 Peter 的群发邮件，请阅读该邮件，并给他回复 。 回信需包括你收到邮件的感受，以及你对外教所提问题的建议。 Dear members, I am afraid I won’t be able to run our English Corner next term, because I was asked to teach another class on Tuesday afternoon — the same time we usually meet. Besides, it seems we don’t have enough students joining, though few students asked about this club. We need a new manager of the English corner. Who wants to be? If you want to keep this club, can you think of any advice? If not, also tell me your advice. Please write tome soon. Yours, Peter 注意： 1. 内容必须包含所给要点，注意书信格式； 2. 文中不得透露个人信息； 3. 词数 80 左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Peter, I am so sorry to hear that you won’t be able to run our English corner next term. The English Corner is an important part of my life. I really would like to keep this club. Here is some advice. First, I think we can change in order to suit your time. Second, I can ask my English teacher for help to run this club because I am sure that my English teacher will give us valuable suggestions. Third, we can also invite students who are interested in English Corner to join us. Lastly, we could make a schedule and let everyone take turns to lead the club. This way, it won’t be too hard for anyone. I hope we can work this out together. Hope these suggestions will be helpful to run this club. I am looking forward to your reply! Yours, Zhong Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ① 题材：这是一封邮件，主题是如何维持和运营英语角； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，先表达自己的遗憾和对英语角的重视，然后提出具体建议，最后期待对方的回复。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达自己对于不能继续运营英语角的遗憾和对英语角的重视； 第二步，提出具体的建议和解决方案，包括改变时间以适应对方、寻求英语老师的帮助、邀请对英语角感兴趣的学生参与，以及制定轮流主持的时间表； 第三步，表达希望一起解决问题的愿望，并期待对方的回复。 [亮点词汇] ① in order to 为了 ② valuable suggestions 宝贵的建议 ③ look forward to 期待 [高分句型] ① Second, I can ask my English teacher for help to run this club because I am sure that my English teacher will give us valuable suggestions.（because引导原因状语从句，that引导宾语从句） ② Third, we can also invite students who are interested in English Corner to join us.（who引导定语从句） 12．（2024·四川·中考真题）假如你是李平， 夏季是你的家乡最美的季节，请用英文写一封邮件介绍你的家乡，邀请你的英国笔友Peter来旅游。邮件内容包括： Location Sichuan Province, China Population 300, 000 Weather cool in summer Places to visit villages, mountains, lakes, grasslands. Things to eat mushrooms, yak meat (牦牛肉), yogurt.. ... ... 注意： (1)邮件必须包括表格中的信息，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯； (2)不得出现个人真实信息，如姓名、校名等； (3)词数：80~100，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, Have you ever seen a place as beautiful as my hometown in summer? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Li Ping 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Peter,     Have you ever seen a place as beautiful as my hometown in summer? I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown. My hometown is located in Sichuan Province, China. It is a beautiful place, especially during the summer .The weather is cool. It has a population of about 300, 000. There are many wonderful places to visit, such as beautiful villages, wonderful mountains, lakes and vast grasslands. You will love the natural beauty here. Moreover, you can enjoy delicious local foods like fresh mushrooms, yak meat and yogurt. I am sure you will have a wonderful time in my hometown. I would be more than happy to show you around.     Looking forward to your reply. Li Ping 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的家乡，邀请笔友Peter来旅游，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍家乡的位置、人口、天气、景点和当地美食； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②have a wonderful time玩得开心 ③show sb. around 带领某人参观 [高分句型] I am sure you will have a wonderful time in my hometown. (宾语从句) 13．（2024·浙江·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一所合适的学校。 I like sports, and I’m interested in traditional Chinese art. Chinese food is great. My cousin’s school ◆in the city center ◆a good ping-pong team ◆hand-made food classes My school ◆in the countryside ◆a new sports center ◆local art clubs 注意： （1）邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （3）词数80左右：邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 ① Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. I think my school is perfect for you. It is in the beautiful countryside. The local food here is really fresh and delicious. I believe you’ll enjoy it. Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! Also, our school has traditional art classes, and you can learn paper cutting, Chinese painting and so on. I’m sure you’ll love my school. Looking forward to your coming. Yours, Li Hua ② Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin’s school is a good choice. It is in the city center with many restaurants nearby. You’ll find it easy to try different local foods there. In her school, there are some special hand-made food classes. You can learn to make food by yourself. I’m sure you’ll be interested in them. What’s more, the ping-pong team in her school is great. As a ping-pong lover, you can’t miss it! Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] （以①为例） ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容给她推荐一所合适的学校，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，向她推荐一个学校； 第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍推荐学校的信息； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①play basketball打篮球 ②and so on等等 [高分句型] Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! (so连接的并列句) 14．（2024·江苏无锡·中考真题）传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动，今年的主题是“交朋友，传文化”。假设你是李华，请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件，向他介绍一个中国传统节日（时间、庆祝方式等）。注意事项： 1. 邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数不少于90个，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称； 4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Dear Tom, Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? Yours truly Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Tom, Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. I’m writing to tell you something about the Spring Festival. Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. Before the spring festival, people usually have a thorough cleaning and put up couplets on their doors. No matter how faraway people are, they’ll try to return to their home. On the New Year’s Eve, people have a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the first day of the New Year, people set off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year. People usually visit their relatives each other. I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money. Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? Yours truly Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：本文主要介绍一个中国传统节日，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“最喜欢的节日是春节”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、庆祝方式”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①put up couplets贴春联 ②set off the fireworks燃放烟花 [高分句型] ①Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. (and连接的并列句) ②I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money. (because引导的原因状语从句) 15．（2024·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。 （1）上周四，王红在回家途中看到一位上年纪的盲人在街角徘徊。 （2）王红与老人交流后，主动帮他过马路。 （3）路上的司机都停下车耐心等候。 （4）王红将老人带到马路对面并向他告别。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：盲人   blind man           徘徊   wander 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter, It is two weeks since you wrote to me. I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong. Last Thursday,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What do you think of the story? Waiting for your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Peter, It is two weeks since you wrote to me. I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong. Last Thursday, Wang Hong saw an elderly blind man wandering around the street corner on her way home. Wang Hong offered to help him cross the road after communicating with the old man. When they crossed the road, the drivers on the road stopped their cars and waited patiently. Wang Hong took the old man across the road and said goodbye to him. I think Wang Hong is really a very warm-hearted and kind girl. I should learn from her and try my best to help others. What do you think of the story? Waiting for your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体介绍王红所做的好事； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①on her way home 在她回家的路上 ②offer to do sth 主动提出做某事 ③communicate with 沟通 ④learn from 向某人学习 [高分句型] ①When they crossed the road, the drivers on the road stopped their cars and waited patiently.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② I think Wang Hong is really a very warm-hearted and kind girl.（省略that的宾语从句） 16．（2025·陕西·模拟预测）假如你是李华，你在英语学习上遇到一些困难，打算向外教Ms. Miller求助。请你给她写一封邮件，提前沟通相关事宜。邮件须包含以下内容： 要求 ： 1.格式正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整、规范； 2.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 3.词数：不少于70。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Ms. Miller, Hello! This is Li Hua, one of your students in the English class. I’m writing to yot because I am having some problems with my English study and I hope you can help me. I find it really hard to express myself in English, especially in public. I often make mistakes in grammar when I speak English. And I feel like I don’t have enough words to express myself well. I really need your help. Can we meet at 4 p. m. this Tuesday in your office? Is that good for you? If not, please let me know. Thank you very much for your time and help, Ms. Miller. I’m looking forward to meeting you. Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：学生向老师诉说英语学习的困难并请求帮助。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头表明身份和写信目的。 第二步，中间具体阐述英语学习中遇到的表达和语法等问题。 第三步，结尾提出希望在特定时间和地点与老师见面，若不方便请老师告知。 [亮点词汇] ①express表达 ②especially尤其；特别 ③enough足够的 [高分句型] ①I find it really hard to express myself in English, especially in public.（使用“find+it+adj.+to do sth.”结构，it作形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面的动词不定式短语。） ②I’m looking forward to meeting you.（“look forward to doing sth.”为固定短语，“期待做某事”。） 17．（24-25九年级上·浙江杭州·期末）假如你是李华，英国交换生Mike将再次来你学校学习，你的家庭将作为host family再次接待他。他想了解你的变化以及你家现在的家规，以便尽快适应。请根据以下提示信息给Mike写一封邮件。 注意： 1. 邮件需包含所有提示信息，可以适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3. 词数80左右，邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I’m excited to be your host family again for your stay! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Mike, I’m excited to be your host family again for your stay! Since we last met, quite a few things have changed in my life. Used to be a shy kid, I now enjoy chatting with friends and participating in school activities more confidently. I also used to love playing video games all day, but now I focus more on reading and studying to improve myself. Another big change is that I’ve started learning to play the guitar. It’s really fun! As for my family rules, there are a few things you should know. We’re not allowed to stay up late on school nights, which is important to get enough sleep. Everyone is supposed to help with chores around the house. It teaches us responsibility. And, we have a rule to eat dinner together as a family every evening. It’s a great time to catch up and share our day. I’m sure you’ll adapt quickly and enjoy your stay with us again. Yours, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，在描述自己的变化时可能会用到“一般过去时”进行对比； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括“My changes”和“My family rules”两大部分，每部分都有具体的提示信息。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节，使邮件内容丰富且有条理。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。在邮件开头已经明确表明，即再次作为host family接待Mike，并引出接下来要介绍的内容——自己的变化和家规； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。在“My changes”部分，先描述自己过去的状态（used to...），再介绍现在的变化（now...），并补充第三个变化，展示个人成长或生活习惯等方面的不同；在“My family rules”部分，按照提示信息，先介绍被允许或不被允许做的事情（be (not) allowed to...），再介绍应该做的事情（be supposed to...），并补充第三条家规，体现家庭教育的细节和特色； 第三步，书写结语。表达对Mike再次到来的期待，以及愿意帮助他尽快适应新环境的意愿。 [亮点词汇] ①quite a few 相当多的 ②focus on 集中精力于 ③be supposed to 应该 ④catch up 赶上，了解（某人的近况） [高分句型] ①Used to be a shy kid, I now enjoy chatting with friends and participating in school activities more confidently.（非谓语动词短语作状语） ②We’re not allowed to stay up late on school nights, which is important to get enough sleep.（非限制性定语从句） 18．（2025·四川泸州·一模）某山区学校在招聘唱歌跳舞和英语方面有特长的志愿者。假如你是李华，请根据下面的要点提示并结合自己的实际情况，写一封申请邮件。 要点提示： 1. 提出申请； 2. 介绍自己的情况（年龄、性格、兴趣等）； 3. 申请成功后的打算。 要求： 1. 要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容； 2. 词数100左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名。 参考词语：volunteer, outgoing, get on with, come up with Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for spending time reading my letter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                                 Yours truly, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for spending time reading my letter. I’m Li Hua, an outgoing 15-year-old middle school student. I’m really interested in being a volunteer in your mountainous-area school. I have a variety of hobbies. I love singing and dancing, and I’ve won several awards in school talent shows. Also, I’m good at English. I can speak English fluently and I’m eager to share my knowledge with the students there. If I’m lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I plan to organize singing and dancing competitions to bring more fun to the students. I’ll also come up with creative ways to teach English, like using English songs and stories. I believe I can get on well with the students and help them improve in these aspects. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍自己的基本情况并提出申请； 第二步，介绍自己的兴趣爱好、特长等； 第三步，谈谈申请成功后自己会做些什么； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in 对……感兴趣 ②a variety of 各种各样的 ③talent shows 才艺表演 ④be good at 擅长 ⑤come up with 想出 [高分句型] ①I can speak English fluently and I’m eager to share my knowledge with the students there.（and连接的并列句） ②If I’m lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I plan to organize singing and dancing competitions to bring more fun to the students. （if引导的条件状语从句） 19．（25-26九年级上·福建泉州·期末）寒假即将来临，如何过一个快乐而有意义的假期呢？假定你是李华，请你根据以下图表提示，用英语给新西兰交换生Jenny写一封电子邮件，和她分享你的寒假计划。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 Dear Jenny, The winter vacation is coming. How excited I am! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best Wishes! Yours. Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Jenny, The winter vacation is coming. How excited I am! I can’t wait to share my plans with you here. First of all, I’ll have a trip with my family. We plan to visit some places of interest, enjoy the natural scenery and different cultures. I think we can have great fun together. Secondly, to keep making progress in my study, I also set a study plan. I’ll spend some time reviewing the lessons with my friends. What’s more, I hope to do some volunteer work in the community, which can make me more responsible. Last but not least, I will do some sports to keep fit. It will be an interesting and meaningful vacation. Best Wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时注意不要遗漏提示内容，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，从旅行、学习和志愿服务等方面具体阐述寒假计划； 第三步，书写结语，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事 ②places of interest名胜古迹 ③making progress取得进步 [高分句型] ①I think we can have great fun together. (省略that的宾语从句) ②I hope to do some volunteer work in the community, which can make me more responsible. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) 20．（24-25九年级上·北京通州·期末）假设你是李华，你们班准备开展“榜样的力量”分享会，你打算邀请交换生Peter参加。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他分享会的内容、目的及时间和地点。 提示词语：talk, story, influence, classroom 提示问题：● What do you plan to do in this sharing meeting? ● Why do you want to have this sharing meeting? ● When and where will you have this sharing meeting? Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to The Power of Role Models sharing meeting. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to The Power of Role Models sharing meeting. During the meeting, we will introduce who are our role models, tell their stories and talk about how these people have influenced our lives. We will also discuss their similarities with each other. We have this meeting to help us know more about role models, learn from them and improve ourselves. We will have the meeting at 2:00 pm this Friday in our classroom. It will last for about two hours. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【答案解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，邀请对方参加榜样的力量分享会； 第二步，介绍你的计划、参加分享会的原因； 第三步，告诉分享会的时间和地点。 [亮点词汇] ①invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事 ②talk about谈论有关 [高分句型] ①We will also discuss their similarities with each other. (一般将来时) ②We have this meeting to help us know more about role models, learn from them and improve ourselves. (动词不定式表目的) 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 【应用文专项】 第3讲 书信与邮件写作类作文 第一部分：中考英语写作精讲 一、书信五要素模板（3.1） 1. 标准书信格式 [发信人地址]（可省略） [日期]（顶格右对齐） Dear [称呼], [正文] Yours sincerely/faithfully/truly, [签名] [打印姓名] 2. 五要素答案解析 ① 称呼 (Salutation) 熟悉：Dear Tom/Mary 正式：Dear Mr. Smith/Dear Professor Wang 未知：Dear Sir/Madam ② 开头段 (Opening) 寒暄问候：How are you? / I hope this email finds you well. 写信目的：I'm writing to... / The purpose of this letter is to... ③ 主体段 (Body) 逻辑分层：First... Second... Finally... 时态把控：邀请/建议用将来时，感谢用完成时 ④ 结尾段 (Closing) 重申目的：Looking forward to your reply. 礼貌收尾：Best wishes / Warm regards ⑤ 签名 (Signature) 私人：Yours, 正式：Yours sincerely, 商务：Best regards, 二、场景用语宝典（3.2） 1. 邀请信高频表达 发出邀请 We would be honored if you could join us... It would be a great pleasure to have you at... 活动详情 The event will take place at [地点] on [日期]. Activities include... followed by... 请求回复 Kindly let us know your availability by [日期]. Please RSVP at your earliest convenience. 2. 感谢信黄金句型 表达感激 I can't thank you enough for... Your generous help meant the world to me. 具体细节 The [具体物品/帮助] you provided was exactly what I needed when... Without your guidance on..., I would never have... 后续承诺 I look forward to returning the favor someday. This experience has inspired me to... 3. 建议信必备框架 问题分析 I understand you're having trouble with... From what you described, the main challenge seems to be... 分层建议 First and foremost,... Another effective approach would be to... You might also consider... 鼓励结尾 I'm confident these suggestions will help... Don't hesitate to ask if you need further advice. 三、满分范文精析（3.3） 范文1：给笔友的信 Dear Alex, How's everything going in Sydney? I'm excited to share that I've just returned from a cultural exchange program in Xi'an, where I... (详述2个文化体验) The most fascinating part was... (具体细节描写). I'm attaching some photos where you can see... (自然过渡到附件) Looking forward to hearing about your summer adventures! Best, Li Hua ``` 得分点： 自然的生活化语气 感官细节描写（sights/sounds/tastes） 照片附件作为互动契机 范文2：活动邀请函 Dear Professor Wilson, On behalf of the Student Union, I'm writing to cordially invite you to be the keynote speaker at our Youth Innovation Forum on March 15th. The event will focus on... (说明3个议题). Your expertise in sustainable development would greatly inspire... (具体联系领域). Please let us know your topic preference by February 20th. We sincerely hope you can join us in shaping young minds! Yours respectfully, Zhang Ming 得分点： 正式而不失热情的语气 明确时间节点 突出受邀者的重要性 范文3：环保建议信 Dear Neighbors, I'm writing to propose some ecofriendly practices for our community. Recently I noticed... (具体现象描述). Firstly, setting up recycling stations by the... (具体位置建议). Secondly, organizing monthly swap meets could... (举例说明). Lastly,... (创新性建议). Together, we can make our neighborhood a greener place! Warm regards, Wang Lin 得分点： 问题观察具体化 建议分层次且可操作 呼吁性结尾增强感染力 四、提分实战技巧 1. 格式避坑指南 日期写法：June 5, 2025 (美式) / 5 June 2025 (英式) 标点规范：美式冒号Dear Mr. Smith: 英式逗号Dear Mr. Smith, 段落控制：45段为佳，每段不超过5句 2. 语言升级策略 基础表达 → 升级表达 I think → From my perspective You should → It would be advisable to Want → Would like to Help → Be of assistance 3. 常见错误预警 中式直译：把"好好学习"写成"good good study" 时态混乱：邀请信中误用过去时 代词滥用：在同一段落重复使用"I"超过3次 五、2025预测话题 备考话题清单 1. 国际文化节志愿者招募信 2. 给校长的图书馆改进建议 3. 感谢防疫工作人员的慰问信 4. 邀请外教参加传统节日活动 5. 网络交友安全建议信 应急写作锦囊 遇到陌生话题时： 1. 用"五要素模板"搭框架 2. 从"场景用语"中选适配句型 3. 通过具体例子扩展内容（如建议信中的"for example..."） 附：中考书信评分标准速记 内容完整度（5分）+ 语言准确性（5分）+ 连贯得体性（3分）+ 格式规范（2分）= 总分15分 建议每日精练1篇，重点修改： ① 检查所有动词时态 ② 替换3个基础词汇为高级表达 ③ 添加1个复合句（定语从句/状语从句）``` 第二部分：中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背 1．（2025·广东江门·二模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jackson来信询问你未来的人生规划，请你回信，内容包括： 1.你的人生规划； 2.解释原因； 3.请他提出建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.注意书信格式。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（24-25九年级上·江苏连云港·期末）假设你是李华，收到了交换生Paul的信件，请你根据他的书信内容，用英文写一封回信。 Dear Li Hua, I heard about your school’s Art Show. It includes Music World, Film World, Literature World and so on. As an art fan, I’m really interested. Which would you like to recommend me to take part in? And why? I’m looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Paul 要求： （1）回信应涵盖所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （2）词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Paul, I’m glad to hear that you’ re interested in our school’s Art Show! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 3．（23-24九年级下·湖北黄冈·开学考试）假如你是Li Lei，你的笔友Tom准备春节后到中国旅游和拜访他的好朋友，但是他不知道中国访友和餐桌风俗礼仪，请你回信告诉他有关注意事项。 书信内容： 1. 介绍中国访友习俗； 2. 介绍中国餐桌礼仪； 3. 祝愿旅游快乐。 词汇提示：make a plan, drop by, point at, make noise 要求： （1）回信需包括提示的全部内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； （2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； （3）词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, Thank you for your letter! I am glad that you will travel to China soon. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Lei 4．（2024·安徽阜阳·一模）假如你是李辉，你的外国笔友Sam给你发了一封电子邮件，他表示暑假想要来你的家乡旅游。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封邮件，向他表示欢迎并介绍你家乡的一些情况。 注意： 1.短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数80—100 (书信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：scenery (n. 风景)；whitebait (n. 银鱼)；white shrimp (n. 白虾) Dear Sam, I am very glad to receive your letter and know that you want to visit my hometown—Chaohu. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your visit. Yours, Li Hui 5．（24-25九年级上·甘肃定西·期末）假设你是李华，今天正逢端午节，你的英国笔友Jack对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下内容提示，给他写一封回信。 1. 中国的传统节日之一，已有2000 多年的历史 (the Dragon Boat Festival; one of the Chinese traditional festivals; two thousand years of history)； 2. 为了纪念著名诗人屈原 (honor the great poet, Qu Yuan)； 3. 中国南方有赛龙舟的习俗 (Dragon Boat races)； 4. 家人团聚吃粽子和其他美食 (eat zongzi and other delicious food)； 5. 有三天假期，可以外出旅游 (a 3-day holiday)。 要求： 1. 80词左右，书信格式； 2. 内容合理，要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。 注意：不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息 (除所给身份外)。 Dear Jack, How’s it going? I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 6．（24-25九年级上·湖北十堰·期末）假如你是李明，最近和父母的关系不太好，你向校心理医生王医生咨询，请根据王医生的信件给你的父母写一封信。 Dear Li Ming, Sorry to hear your problem. Parents are those person who love you most in this world. However, sometimes you may disagree with each other about the family rules. The first step to solve it is to communicate with them. You need to let them know the rule you disagree with, your opinion about it, and the way you deal with it. Yours, Doctor Wang 要求： （1）你的书信要包含信中提到的三个方面； （2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； （3）词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear parents, I know you love me most and family rules can help me grow best, but I still have some disagreement about it.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 7．（24-25九年级上·四川成都·阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Emma对中文和中国文化非常感兴趣。她想要向你寻求学习中文的方法，并了解一项中国的传统节日。请根据下面的思维导图写一封书信。 要求： 1. 书信要包括思维导图中的所有信息； 2. 语言通顺, 并有逻辑； 3. 字数：100 词左右； 4. 书写工整，格式规范。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（24-25九年级上·重庆沙坪坝·期中）在你身边是否有一些陪伴你成长、在你心中留下了特殊回忆的老物件？如今，或许你不再使用这个老物件，但它却承载了你的很多珍贵回忆——思亲的寄托、家风的传承、乡愁的依凭……你校校刊英语专栏以“时光里的宝贝”为话题发起征文，请你介绍一个你心中珍贵的老物件，分享关于它的回忆，并谈谈它对你的影响。要求： 1. 80-120词； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： hand-knitted sweater手工编织的毛衣 stuffed toy 毛玩具 handicraft 手工艺品 photo album 相册 letter or postcard书信或者明信片 …… wool羊毛 leather 皮革 porcelain 陶瓷 metal金属 plastics塑料 …… precious memories 珍贵的回忆 remind… of the childhood 使……想起童年 pass down... through generations 把……世代相传 bridges for emotional communication情感交流的桥梁 …… As time goes by, we have collected many old objects in our lives. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·浙江绍兴·二模）你校英语俱乐部将举行“劳动教育”主题活动，现向全校学生征求活动建议。假如你是李华，请根据下图内容用英语给负责人写一封书信，谈谈自己的劳动经历并提供建议。 注意： 1. 短文必须包括上图所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 补充内容至少各一条； 3. 词数：80—100； 4. 文章的开头仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。 Dear sir, Labor is a very important part of our life. Here is my experience and some advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10．（2024·浙江台州·二模）为丰富校园文化，学校腾出一个教室作为活动场所，校英语栏目组正向全校学生征求建议。假如你是李华，请用英语给栏目组负责人写一封信，从下面的表格中推荐一个名称(或者自拟一个名称)，并阐明理由。 注意： (1)书信内容要点应选自上表，可适当发挥； (2)词数：80—100； (3)书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear sir, I’m glad to have a chance to share my ideas. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice will be helpful. Thank you! Yours Li Hua 11．（2024·广西桂林·二模）假设你是复兴中学学生钟华，这学期你加入了学校的英语角并收获颇丰 。最近你收到负责英语角的外教 Peter 的群发邮件，请阅读该邮件，并给他回复 。 回信需包括你收到邮件的感受，以及你对外教所提问题的建议。 Dear members, I am afraid I won’t be able to run our English Corner next term, because I was asked to teach another class on Tuesday afternoon — the same time we usually meet. Besides, it seems we don’t have enough students joining, though few students asked about this club. We need a new manager of the English corner. Who wants to be? If you want to keep this club, can you think of any advice? If not, also tell me your advice. Please write tome soon. Yours, Peter 注意： 1. 内容必须包含所给要点，注意书信格式； 2. 文中不得透露个人信息； 3. 词数 80 左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（2024·四川·中考真题）假如你是李平， 夏季是你的家乡最美的季节，请用英文写一封邮件介绍你的家乡，邀请你的英国笔友Peter来旅游。邮件内容包括： Location Sichuan Province, China Population 300, 000 Weather cool in summer Places to visit villages, mountains, lakes, grasslands. Things to eat mushrooms, yak meat (牦牛肉), yogurt.. ... ... 注意： (1)邮件必须包括表格中的信息，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯； (2)不得出现个人真实信息，如姓名、校名等； (3)词数：80~100，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, Have you ever seen a place as beautiful as my hometown in summer? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Li Ping 13．（2024·浙江·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一所合适的学校。 I like sports, and I’m interested in traditional Chinese art. Chinese food is great. My cousin’s school ◆in the city center ◆a good ping-pong team ◆hand-made food classes My school ◆in the countryside ◆a new sports center ◆local art clubs 注意： （1）邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （3）词数80左右：邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 14．（2024·江苏无锡·中考真题）传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动，今年的主题是“交朋友，传文化”。假设你是李华，请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件，向他介绍一个中国传统节日（时间、庆祝方式等）。注意事项： 1. 邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数不少于90个，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称； 4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Dear Tom, Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? Yours truly Li Hua 15．（2024·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。 （1）上周四，王红在回家途中看到一位上年纪的盲人在街角徘徊。 （2）王红与老人交流后，主动帮他过马路。 （3）路上的司机都停下车耐心等候。 （4）王红将老人带到马路对面并向他告别。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：盲人   blind man           徘徊   wander 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter, It is two weeks since you wrote to me. I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong. Last Thursday,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What do you think of the story? Waiting for your reply! Yours, Li Hua 16．（2025·陕西·模拟预测）假如你是李华，你在英语学习上遇到一些困难，打算向外教Ms. Miller求助。请你给她写一封邮件，提前沟通相关事宜。邮件须包含以下内容： 要求 ： 1.格式正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整、规范； 2.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 3.词数：不少于70。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17．（24-25九年级上·浙江杭州·期末）假如你是李华，英国交换生Mike将再次来你学校学习，你的家庭将作为host family再次接待他。他想了解你的变化以及你家现在的家规，以便尽快适应。请根据以下提示信息给Mike写一封邮件。 注意： 1. 邮件需包含所有提示信息，可以适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3. 词数80左右，邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I’m excited to be your host family again for your stay! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 18．（2025·四川泸州·一模）某山区学校在招聘唱歌跳舞和英语方面有特长的志愿者。假如你是李华，请根据下面的要点提示并结合自己的实际情况，写一封申请邮件。 要点提示： 1. 提出申请； 2. 介绍自己的情况（年龄、性格、兴趣等）； 3. 申请成功后的打算。 要求： 1. 要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容； 2. 词数100左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名。 参考词语：volunteer, outgoing, get on with, come up with Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for spending time reading my letter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                                 Yours truly, Li Hua 19．（25-26九年级上·福建泉州·期末）寒假即将来临，如何过一个快乐而有意义的假期呢？假定你是李华，请你根据以下图表提示，用英语给新西兰交换生Jenny写一封电子邮件，和她分享你的寒假计划。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 Dear Jenny, The winter vacation is coming. How excited I am! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best Wishes! Yours. Li Hua 20．（24-25九年级上·北京通州·期末）假设你是李华，你们班准备开展“榜样的力量”分享会，你打算邀请交换生Peter参加。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他分享会的内容、目的及时间和地点。 提示词语：talk, story, influence, classroom 提示问题：● What do you plan to do in this sharing meeting? ● Why do you want to have this sharing meeting? ● When and where will you have this sharing meeting? Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to The Power of Role Models sharing meeting. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$