内容正文:
【基础篇】
第2讲 校园生活主题类作文
第一部分:中考英语写作精讲
——以“校园生活”为核心,打造高分叙事框架
一、对比式写作模板(三段式结构)
Paragraph 1: 引言
Recently, there has been a heated discussion about ______. Different people hold different opinions. Some believe... while others argue... As for me, I think...
Paragraph 2: 对比论证
On one hand, [观点A + 理由1/例子]. For example, ______. What's more, [理由2]. This shows that...
On the other hand, [观点B + 理由1/例子]. Take ______ as an example. ______. However, [反驳观点B的局限性].
Paragraph 3: 结论
In conclusion, both sides have their advantages. But considering ______, I firmly believe ______. We should ______ to make our school life better.
二、万能素材库(分类整理)
1. 课程学习
Core subjects: mathematics, physics, literature, geography
Learning methods: take notes carefully, review key points, ask questions actively
高分短语:
▶︎ broaden my horizons 拓宽视野
▶︎ develop critical thinking 培养批判性思维
▶︎ achieve academic progress 取得学业进步
2. 校园活动
Common activities: sports meeting, art festival, science fair
动作描写:
▶︎ cheer for teammates 为队友加油
▶︎ break the school record 打破校记录
▶︎ cooperate with classmates 与同学合作
3. 师生关系
互动场景:
▶︎ give patient guidance 耐心指导
▶︎ respect teachers' suggestions 尊重老师建议
▶︎ build trust through communication 通过沟通建立信任
三、分类押题范文
1. 最喜欢的科目
My Favorite Subject
Recently, there has been a heated discussion about choosing favorite subjects. Some prefer science while others like arts. As for me, English is my top choice.
On one hand, English helps broaden my horizons. Through reading Shakespeare's plays, I learn about different cultures. What's more, it improves my communication skills. Last month, I successfully chatted with foreign visitors at the school fair.
On the other hand, some say math is more useful for exams. However, memorizing formulas all day makes me feel bored.
In conclusion, both subjects are important. But considering my interest in global communication, I firmly believe English is the best choice. (118 words)
2. 运动会经历
An Unforgettable Sports Meeting
Our school sports meeting left a deep impression on me.
When I first joined the relay race, I felt nervous. My hands were shaking while passing the baton. Surprisingly, our team cooperated perfectly and finally won second place! The moment we crossed the finish line, all classmates cheered for us loudly.
Some students think sports events are tiring. However, I learned the value of teamwork. Now I exercise daily to stay healthy.
This experience taught me: success comes from both effort and cooperation. (86 words)
3. 校园规则讨论
Should We Wear Uniforms?
There are different opinions about school uniform rules.
Some students argue uniforms make everyone equal. For example, no one feels poor because of cheap clothes. What's more, it saves time choosing outfits every morning.
However, others believe it limits personal style. My friend Lily, who loves fashion design, feels unhappy about this rule.
In my view, uniforms have more advantages. They create a sense of belonging and keep us focused on study. Maybe schools could allow free dress days monthly to balance both sides. (85 words)
四、提分技巧
1. 对比句式升级:
While it is true that..., we cannot ignore...
Admittedly, ...; nevertheless, ...
2. 衔接词活用:
转折:however, on the contrary
递进:more importantly, additionally
3. 数据增强说服力:
A recent survey shows 75% of students...
According to my math teacher, students who... improve 30% faster
4. 情感表达:
To my great delight,...
I was overwhelmed with excitement when...
五、常见错误提醒
⚠️ 避免中式英语:
❌ "I very like English." → ✅ "I like English very much."
❌ "Join the sports meeting" → ✅ "Participate in the sports meeting"
⚠️ 时态统一:描述过去经历时全篇保持一般过去式
🔔 建议:每日背诵2个素材短语,并用其造句强化记忆
第二部分:中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背
1.(24-25九年级上·四川成都·期末)一年一度的年级英语演讲比赛 (speech competition) 即将开始,假如你是 Linda,请你代表班级给外教Black写一封邀请函,并在1月25日前回复。
要求:1.包含表格中所有内容;2.字数:100字左右。
参考单词:开幕式 opening ceremony 评分 grade v.
颁奖仪式 award ceremony 致辞 give a speech 音乐厅 auditorium
活动
英语演讲比赛
时间
1月26日周二下午
地点
音乐厅
活动流程
15:15进入会场:由学生带领入座
开幕式:观看表演 (dancing,…)
比赛:观看比赛,无需评分
18: 00颁奖仪式:嘉宾 (Black)
注意事项
入场时请出示邀请函
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【满分优秀范文】
Dear Black,
As you know, our school’s English speech competition is coming soon. It is my great honor to invite you to the opening ceremony. Our English competition will be held on Tuesday afternoon, January 26th. It will be in the school auditorium. A student will lead you to your seat in the auditorium at 3:15 p.m. Next, there will be an opening ceremony. We can watch wonderful shows, such as dancing and singing. After that, it will be time for speech competitions, but you don’t need to grade. At 6:00 p.m, there will be an award ceremony, and you will be expected to give us a speech.
If you can make it, please reply in writing to this invitation by January 25th. Also, please don’t forget to bring your invitation when you come. Look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Linda
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍写信意图;
第二步,根据题干表格的要点,介绍英语演讲比赛的举办时间,活动流程等;
第三步,介绍注意事项并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①Next, there will be an opening ceremony. (there be句型)
②If you can make it, please reply in writing to this invitation by January 25th. (if引导的条件状语从句)
2.(24-25九年级上·河南郑州·期末)读万卷书,行万里路。近年来,参观博物馆、看工厂、访农村等形式多样的研学活动,极大地丰富了中学生的课余生活。请你根据以下要点及要求,描述自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历。
要点:
(1)研学地点、时间、交通工具、研学过程;
(2)研学旅行的收获和感受;
(3)研学旅行的重要性。
要求:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Study tour is more and more popular these days. Now, let me tell you one of my study tours.
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【满分优秀范文】
Study tour is more and more popular these days. Now, let me tell you one of my study tours.
A school tour is a good way to put what you have learnt into practice. We went to Zhengzhou Science and Technology Museum last Sunday first. We got there by bus. We saw many fantastic inventions and did some scientific experiments. Then we went to the Wildlife Park. We got close contact with different kinds of wild animals and birds and learned a lot about their living habits. It took us a day to take part in this activities.
We were tired but happy. This activity not only made us relaxed, but also made us learn something new and meaningful.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接上文,介绍自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历;
第二步,具体阐述研学的地点、时间、交通工具、研学过程以及收获和感受;
第三步,书写结语,总结研学的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①fantastic极好的
②take part in参加
③meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]
①A school tour is a good way to put what you have learnt into practice.(what引导的宾语从句)
②It took us a day to take part in this activities.(it固定句式)
3.(24-25九年级上·安徽合肥·期末)随着科技的发展,未来社会必将产生巨大的变化,而学校生活也将与现在有很多不同之处。假如你是李华,你们学校即将举行以“未来的学校生活”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你结合以下图示信息,写一篇演讲稿。
注意:
1. 词数:80~100词;
2. 内容涵盖所有要点,合理拓展;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
School Life in the Future
Hello, everyone. It’s my great honor to stand here and give my speech. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【满分优秀范文】:
School Life in the Future
Hello, everyone. It’s my great honor to stand here and give my speech. Today, I want to talk about “School Life in the Future”.
With the rapid development of technology, our school life will undergo tremendous changes. In the future classroom, teaching will be more interactive and fun. We will use augmented reality to explore historical events or scientific experiments as if we were right there. After-class activities will also be enriched by virtual reality sports or art clubs where we can create and play without limits. Learning will no longer be confined to textbooks; it will be an immersive experience.
I feel excited about these changes. They promise to make learning more engaging and personalized. The blend of technology and education will surely open doors to endless possibilities.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:主要时态为“一般将来时”,用于描述未来的情况;
③提示:写作要点已明确,包括未来学校生活的两个方面(课堂教学与课后活动)以及个人感受。考生需结合图示信息,全面覆盖要点,同时进行合理拓展,确保内容丰富且有条理。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明演讲主题;
第二步,具体阐述未来学校生活的特点;
第三步,书写结语。以简洁有力的语言结束演讲,再次感谢听众的聆听,并留下深刻印象。
[亮点词汇]
①rapid development快速发展
②undergo tremendous changes经历巨大变化
③more interactive and fun更具互动性和趣味性
④augmented reality增强现实
[高分句型]
After-class activities will also be enriched by virtual reality sports or art clubs where we can create and play without limits.(被动语态)
4.(24-25九年级上·辽宁本溪·期末)学校的英语角正在举行征文比赛,让大家写一写对目前校园生活的感受,你也来参加吧!下面来看一下具体要求:
1. 对于现在的校园生活,你喜欢和不喜欢的部分分别是什么?请说出你的原因或看法;
2. 对于不喜欢的部分,你希望学校做出怎样的改变?
注意:
1. 内容完整,语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
3. 词数80~100,短文开头已给出,不记入总词数。
I’m a student in Grade 9. Now I’d like to talk about what I feel about my school life.
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【满分优秀范文】
I’m a student in Grade 9. Now I’d like to talk about what I feel about my school life.
I like my teachers even though they are strict to me sometimes. They are really kind and helpful. They work hard to make their classes easy and full of fun. They also encourage us to believe in ourselves and improve ourselves. And I’m really happy that we take a 15-minute break now. I like playing sports with my friends and we have a lot of fun.
But I think our school life is a little boring. Working hard is not the only thing we should do. I hope our school can plan more fun things for us to make our school life more colorful.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,说明自己对学校生活的总体感受。
第二步,详细介绍自己对老师的看法和课间活动的乐趣。
第三步,提出对学校生活的建议,呼吁学校增加更多有趣的活动。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict to 对……严格
②encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事
③take a break 休息
[高分句型]
①I like my teachers even though they are strict to me sometimes.(even though引导的让步状语从句)
②I hope our school can plan more fun things for us to make our school life more colorful.(省略that的宾语从句)
5.(2025九年级·湖南·专题练习)近日, 多家媒体调查并揭示中小学生“课间10分钟”被约束现象。有的学校规定学生除了喝水、上厕所外, 不许走出教室。午休时间学生也不能到操场等场所玩耍。中小学课间正在变得静悄悄。假如你是学校School Daily的校园小记者, 请你针对上述现象, 并结合自身实际谈谈你的看法。
要点如下:
1. 阐述目前存在的问题;
2. 结合自身实际,谈谈如何更好地开展课间10分钟并讲述这样做的原因。
关键词:课间十分钟 10-minute break between classes
要求:
1. 80词左右, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数内;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名:
3. 可适当增加细节, 以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
4. 标点正确,书面整洁。
Recently, some social media platform (社交媒体平台) began to report the fact that some schools are limiting their students during the 10-minute break between classes.
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【满分优秀范文】:
Recently, some social media platform (社交媒体平台) began to report the fact that some schools are limiting their students during the 10-minute break between classes. As a reporter from the School Daily, I think the reason why some schools ban students from leaving the classroom during the break time is that schools are worried about students’ safety. They are afraid that some students may hurt themselves while chasing in high speed.
In my opinion, schools should set students free by allowing them to do some beneficial activities as the break plays an important role in students’ physical and mental health. Take myself as an example, I prefer to hang out with some close friends and spend most of the time socializing with them, which helps me gain a sense of belonging within school. Meanwhile, it provides an outlet for me to express myself and seek emotional support from friends. What’s more, it is also a good choice to do some exercise during the break time. I show great interest in skipping as it helps to refresh my mind after a long periods of classes. Taking a ten-minute break enables me to step away from my studies, clear my thoughts and prepare myself for the next class.
All in all, 10-minute breaks are of great value. School should make better use of it for the benefit of students’ well-being and happiness.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“要点”中所列举的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,阐述目前存在的问题;
第二步,结合自身实际,具体阐述如何更好地开展课间10分钟并讲述这样做的原因;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①ban sb. from doing sth. 禁止某人做某事
②set sb. free 让某人从束缚中解脱出来
③allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
④take ... as an example 以……为例
⑤seek from 寻求
[高分句型]
①Recently, some social media platform (社交媒体平台) began to report the fact that some schools are limiting their students during the 10-minute break between classes. (名词从句)
②Taking a ten-minute break enables me to step away from my studies, clear my thoughts and prepare myself for the next class. (动名词作主语)
6.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·开学考试)三年的初中学习生活只有几个月就要结束了,你想进入一所什么样的高中?为了让同学们更明确自己将来的学习和生活目标,学校英文报正在以“My Dream High School Life”为题开展征文活动,请你结合以下图示,写一篇短文投稿。
要求:(1)短文必须包括图示中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)80词左右 (标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Word bank: campus 校园
My Dream High School Life
My senior high school life is just around the corner.
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【满分优秀范文】:
My Dream High School Life
My senior high school life is just around the corner. I’m a student in Grade 9. Now I’m working hard in order to enter my dream high school.
My dream school is very big and beautiful. There will be fresh air and many green trees. It is clean and picturesque. I can do different things in different buildings. I can play basketball because I think it is meaningful. It can make me strong. I hope the lessons there will be lively and make me eye-opening. I can do more experiments in my lessons. They will be inspiring. After class, I can take part in different kinds of activities in different clubs to develop my hobbies. Moreover, I hope I can make more friends in the new school and study together.
I hope I can go to my dream high school, live healthily and study happily. I hope my dream will come true someday.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般将来时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己梦想中的高中,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍想进入梦想的高中;
第二步,介绍梦想的高中的具体情况,包括校园、各种活动以及课堂等;
第三步,表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②different kinds of各种各样的
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①I can play basketball because I think it is meaningful. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I hope I can make more friends in the new school and study together. (省略that的宾语从句)
7.(24-25九年级上·湖北武汉·期末)英语老师布置了一项体验式作业,希望你和家人假期时去一次附近的图书馆,然后写一篇英语短文,向同学们介绍图书馆离你家有多远,在图书馆内能够体验的有趣项目 (如:reading salon 阅读沙龙) 以及图书馆周边的公共设施。请你根据以下内容提示完成短文。 How far is it from your home to the library?
What interesting activities can you do in the library?
Are there any bus stops, cafes or anything else near the library? How are they?
Something more about the library.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校;词数 100 词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Visit to the Library
Last weekend, I went to the library near my home with my family.
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【满分优秀范文】
My Visit to the Library
Last weekend, I went to the library near my home with my family. It is about five kilometers away from my home. So we decided to go there by bus.
In the library, there are a lot of interesting things to do. We can read different kinds of books, such as novels, science books and history books. There are also some e-reading areas where we can enjoy e-books. What’s more, the library often holds some reading salons. It’s really exciting to communicate with other book-lovers there.
Near the library, there are several bus stops, which makes it very convenient for people to get there. And there are some cafes. The coffee there is delicious and the environment is very comfortable.
The library is not only a place for reading, but also a great place to gain knowledge and make friends.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章应该包括中文和英文提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题:介绍去图书馆的时间、人物、以及去图书馆的交通方式;
第二步,列举图书馆活动、介绍特色区域以及讲述文化活动;
第三步,介绍交通情况以及周边休闲设施;
第四步,总结升华:强调图书馆不仅是阅读的地方,更是获取知识和结交朋友的绝佳场所。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth. 决定做某事
②not only … but also … 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①There are also some e-reading areas where we can enjoy e-books. (where引导的限制性定语从句)
②It’s really exciting to communicate with other book-lovers there. (it固定句型)
8.(24-25九年级上·吉林长春·期末)本周日,同学们将去美术博物馆 (the Art Museum) 参观。假如你是学生会主席,请根据下面要点和要求,用英文向你校国际交换生发布一则不少于40词的通知。
要点:
(1) 早7: 30在学校门口集合;
(2) 将会乘坐校车前往美术博物馆;
(3) 将会在中午12: 00返回;
(4) 记得带笔和笔记本;
(5) 参观时做好记录。
要求:要点齐全:表述通顺;简洁得体。
Notice
Dear students,
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Student Union
Li Hua
【满分优秀范文】
Notice
Dear students,
This Sunday we will go to the Art Museum by bus. We will meet at 7: 30 am at the school gate. Please don’t be late. You had better bring a pen and a notebook. There are some English guides in the museum. If you have any question, you can ask them for help. You should take notes carefully, and get ready for further discussion. We will return at 12: 00.
Hope you will have a good time.
Student Union
Li Hua
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一则通知;
②时态:一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:根据提示为学校学生会发布一则通知,写作时注意适当增加细节,不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍去美术博物馆参观的注意事项;
第三步,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①had better bring a pen 最好带一支钢笔
②ask them for help 向他们寻求帮助
③get ready for further discussion 准备进一步讨论
[高分句型]
①Please don’t be late. (否定祈使句)
②There are some English guides in the museum. (there be句型)
③If you have any question, you can ask them for help. (If引导的条件状语从句)
9.(2024·广东广州·中考真题)你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛,主题是“An unforgettable school trip”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文。
注意:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右;
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
An unforgettable school trip
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【满分优秀范文】
An unforgettable school trip
Our school organized a trip to the Science Museum last Saturday. I went there with all the students and teachers of Grade 9 together.
We got together at 8:00 a.m. at the school gate and left for the museum by bus. We took a lecture by the guide as soon as we got there. After that, we took a visit around the different halls of the museum. A variety of advanced inventions had been displayed, from the appliance to industry, education and life. What impressed me most was the experience of the usage of them, which made me have a better understanding of the knowledge of AI. We also enjoyed the delicious food cooked by an AI robot. How amazing!
At the end of the visit, we said goodbye to the AI guide. It is a meaningful trip which not only broadens our horizon of the creation world, but also builds up our national confidence. I made up my mind to study hard and make a contribution to my motherland.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:一般过去时;
③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,考生需要按照要点写出相应的内容,不得遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直入主题,介绍学校旅行的时间、地点和人物;
第二步,具体介绍这次旅行中你们都做了什么;
第三步,表达对于此次经历的感想以及收获。
[亮点词汇]
①take a lecture听讲座
②A variety of各种各样的
③have a better understanding of更好地理解……
④make a contribution to对……做出贡献
[高分句型]
①We took a lecture by the guide as soon as we got there. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句)
②What impressed me most was the experience of the usage of them, which made me have a better understanding of the knowledge of AI. (which引导的定语从句)
10.(2024·广东广州·二模)初中生活即将结束,英语校报计划开展以“回顾初中生活,书写难忘时光”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图的提示,任选一或两点,分享你的成长故事及其对你的启发。
注意:
1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.词数80词左右(稿件的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Growing up
How time flies! My junior high school life is coming to an end. Looking back, I have a lot of unforgettable memories._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Growing up
How time flies! My junior high school life is coming to an end. Looking back, I have a lot of unforgettable memories. One of the the most mermorable experiences was partcipating in the school’s annual science fair. I worked tirelessly on my project about renewable energy sources. Through this experience, I learned the importance of perseverance and teamwork. It also sparked my interest in environmental science, which I plan to pursue in the future. Another unforgettable moment was when I had a speech in front of the classmates, I was so nervous that I couldn’t speak out any words. But after adjusting my mood, I overcame the nervousness and tried to speak. Finally , I won the second prize. Although it was not perfect, I knew how great I was in my mind.
Growing up is like a race with yourself. I hope that we will try our best to become the best one.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“回首往事,有很多难忘的回忆。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——成长故事及启发等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“希望我们都能努力成为最好的。”的美好。
[亮点词汇]
①the importance of……的重要性
②come to an end结束
③plan to do计划做某事
[高分句型]
①It also sparked my interest in environmental science, which I plan to pursue in the future.(定语从句)
②I was so nervous that I couldn’t speak out any words. (so...that...引导结果状语从句)
11.(2024·山东菏泽·中考真题)假如你是李华,在学校上周举办的毕业典礼上,老师们表演了一个令人惊喜的节目。请你以“A Surprise Brought Us Closer”为题用英语写一篇短文,向某英文报投稿。
内容包括:
1. 描述该节目;
2. 表达你的感受。
写作要求:
1. 100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等个人信息。
A Surprise Brought Us Closer
Last week, we had a graduation ceremony in our school.
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【满分优秀范文】
A Surprise Brought Us Closer
Last week, we had a graduation ceremony in our school.
At the beginning of the ceremony, our headmaster delivered a speech, expressing his praise, encouragement and expectations to us. The most surprising thing was the program that our teacher prepared for all our graduates. Our teachers collected photos of all of the graduates and made a poster of us all, spelling out the words “Happy Graduation.” They also sang an original song for us, wishing us a bright and wonderful future.
I was deeply moved by the teachers’ program. I sincerely thank the teachers for their help and support in the past three years, and I wish everyone the best in the future.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般过去时”为主,“一般现在时”为辅;
③提示:要求以“A Surprise Brought Us Closer”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出对毕业典礼的介绍;
第二步,具体介绍这次典礼中老师们表演的令人惊喜的节目;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①At the beginning of... 在……开始
②deliver a speech 发表演讲
③prepare for 准备
[高分句型]
①The most surprising thing was the program that our teacher prepared for all our graduates.(表语从句和定语从句)
② I sincerely thank the teachers for their help and support in the past three years, and I wish everyone the best in the future.(并列句)
12.(2024·北京西城·二模)假设你是李华。毕业临近,你班正在制作毕业纪念册。每位同学将会在英文寄语区写下最想对同学们说的一句话。请你准备一份英语发言稿,在英语课上分享你的寄语,并谈谈你写这句话的原因。
提示词语: thank, love, friendship, proud, wish
提示问题: ●What would you say?
●Why would you say it? I would say… _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
I would say friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy.
I want to write about friendship because I have gained wonderful friendship over the years. Today we graduate from middle school and will fight for our tomorrow alone, but don’t ever forget our friendship and the beautiful days we have. Maybe 20 years later when we get together again, you’ll find that we are still a family, a whole group that can never be defeated, and the memories we have will be the most precious treasure we’ve ever gained.
Thank you for you all. May our friendship last till the end of the universe.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“描述自己的毕业寄语以及原因”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,分享自己的毕业寄语;
第二步,详细介绍原因;
第三步,表达自己的美好愿望并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①fight for为……而战斗
②get together聚在一起
[高分句型]
①I would say friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy.(定语从句)
②I want to write about friendship because I have gained wonderful friendship over the years. (because引导的原因状语从句)
13.(2022·广东深圳·中考真题)假定你是李华,你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频,打算做成视频日志(vlog),参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlog作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。
内容包括:
1. 海边活动:
下午:①沙滩排球;②……;
晚上:搭帐篷;聚餐和清理垃圾;分享会。
2. 活动感言。
注意:
1. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
参考词汇:冲浪surf 帐篷tent
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thank you.
【满分优秀范文】
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. lt’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, we had a beach volleyball game. Then, we enjoyed the fun of surfing in the sea. Before dark, we picked up the litter on the beach. How meaningful it was! At night, we put up two tents and had a picnic. The food cooked by us was so delicious. Finally, all of us shared our feelings about this fantastic experience. Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience.
So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it.
Thank you.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇解说词,属于演讲稿写作;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,引出话题;
第二步,根据提示的要点介绍在海边的活动,包括下午和晚上的具体活动,要列举具体的事例;
第三步,抒发活动带来的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①pick up the litter捡垃圾
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①How meaningful it was!(how引导的感叹句)
②The food cooked by us was so delicious.(过去分词作定语)
③Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience.(部分倒装结构)
14.(24-25九年级上·河南郑州·期末)我校为弘扬中国传统文化,丰富同学们的课余生活,开设了一系列的中国传统文化社团。假设你是李华,请你根据下面的传统文化课程时间表及写作要点,选择2-3个社团,向同学们推荐社团课程。
Monday
Wednesday
Friday
5 p.m.-6 p.m.
Paper cutting Club
4 p.m.-5 p.m.
Clay Art Club
5 p.m.-6 p.m.
Chinese Painting Club
要点:1) What clubs do you recommend (推荐)?
2) Why do you choose to recommend them?
要求:1) 文中须包含要点提示,可适当发挥;
2) 不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3) 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
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【满分优秀范文】
Dear fellow students,
I am honored to be chosen as the “Recommendation Office” for our school’s traditional culture clubs. Today, I would like to recommend two clubs that I believe will enrich your understanding of Chinese culture and enhance your skills.
Firstly, I recommend the Paper-cutting Club, which meets on Mondays from 5 p.m. to 6 p.m. Paper-cutting is a traditional Chinese art form that requires precision and patience. By joining this club, you will not only learn the techniques of paper-cutting but also appreciate the beauty and depth of this art. It is a great way to improve your fine motor skills and attention to detail. Secondly, I suggest joining the Chinese Painting Cub, which is held on Fridays from 5 p.m. to 6 p.m. Chinese painting, or “guo hua”, is a unique and elegant art form that has been practiced for centuries. In this club, you will learn about the different styles of Chinese painting, such as landscape painting, flower-and-bird painting, and figure painting. You will also have the opportunity to practice using the brush and ink, which will help you to develop your artistic skills and appreciate the beauty of Chinese culture.
In conclusion, I highly recommend the Paper-cutting Club and the Chinese Painting Club. These clubs will not only provide you with a fun and engaging way to spend your afternoons but also give you a deeper understanding and appreciation of Chinese culture. I hope you will consider joining one or both of these clubs and enjoy yourselves.
【答案解析】[总体分析]
① 本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明自己要推荐两个社团;
第二步,介绍剪纸社团和国画社团的详细信息及推荐的原因;
第三步,写出总结,并希望同学们加入这两个社团。
[亮点词汇]
①enhance your skills提高你的技能
②appreciate the beauty and depth of欣赏……的美和深度
③develop your artistic skills发展你的艺术技能
④In conclusion总之
[高分句型]
①Today, I would like to recommend two clubs that I believe will enrich your understanding of Chinese culture and enhance your skills. (that引导的限制性定语从句)
②Firstly, I recommend the Paper-cutting Club, which meets on Mondays from 5 p.m. to 6 p.m. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
15.(24-25九年级上·浙江杭州·期末)假设你是张华,交换生Peter下个月将来你校学习,他想通过加入学校社团了解中国文化。请你根据以下信息,写一封邮件,向他推荐一个合适的社团。
I am interested in Chinese culture. I like drinking tea. I love reading Chinese folk stories.
Tea Club
Place: Tearoom in the school
Time: 3:00—4:00 Wednesday
● Activity: learn about the invention of tea; enjoy tea performance; …
Story Telling Club
Place: Room 304
Time: 3:00—4:00 Wednesday
Activity: learn about Chinese folk stories; get to know some traditional Chinese festivals; ...
注意:
1. 短文需包含所选社团的所有相关信息,可适当发挥;
2. 不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to study in our school, and now you are thinking about choosing a club. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【满分优秀范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to study in our school, and now you are thinking about choosing a club. If you are interested in Chinese culture, I think the Tea Club is a better choice.
This club meets every Wednesday from 3:00 to 4:00 p.m. in the tearoom. Here, you can learn about the origin of Chinese tea and how it spread around the world. This will deepen your understanding of Chinese traditions. You can also enjoy tea performance and taste different kinds of Chinese tea. I believe you will fall in love with their flavors.
I believe joining the Tea Club will not only meet your interest in tea but also help you better understand Chinese culture. It’s a great chance to make new friends and have fun while learning.
I’m looking forward to seeing you! If you have any questions, feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【答案解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括中文和英文提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第二人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇直接表明得知对方要来学校学习以及正在考虑选择社团的事情,引出推荐的社团;
第二步,介绍推荐的社团情况;
第三步,强调加入社团的好处和推荐的理由;
第四步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①feel free to do sth. 随意做某事
②look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事
[高分句型]
①If you are interested in Chinese culture, I think the Tea Club is a better choice. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I believe you will fall in love with their flavors. (宾语从句)
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【基础篇】
第2讲 校园生活主题类作文
第一部分:中考英语写作精讲
——以“校园生活”为核心,打造高分叙事框架
一、对比式写作模板(三段式结构)
Paragraph 1: 引言
Recently, there has been a heated discussion about ______. Different people hold different opinions. Some believe... while others argue... As for me, I think...
Paragraph 2: 对比论证
On one hand, [观点A + 理由1/例子]. For example, ______. What's more, [理由2]. This shows that...
On the other hand, [观点B + 理由1/例子]. Take ______ as an example. ______. However, [反驳观点B的局限性].
Paragraph 3: 结论
In conclusion, both sides have their advantages. But considering ______, I firmly believe ______. We should ______ to make our school life better.
二、万能素材库(分类整理)
1. 课程学习
Core subjects: mathematics, physics, literature, geography
Learning methods: take notes carefully, review key points, ask questions actively
高分短语:
▶︎ broaden my horizons 拓宽视野
▶︎ develop critical thinking 培养批判性思维
▶︎ achieve academic progress 取得学业进步
2. 校园活动
Common activities: sports meeting, art festival, science fair
动作描写:
▶︎ cheer for teammates 为队友加油
▶︎ break the school record 打破校记录
▶︎ cooperate with classmates 与同学合作
3. 师生关系
互动场景:
▶︎ give patient guidance 耐心指导
▶︎ respect teachers' suggestions 尊重老师建议
▶︎ build trust through communication 通过沟通建立信任
三、分类押题范文
1. 最喜欢的科目
My Favorite Subject
Recently, there has been a heated discussion about choosing favorite subjects. Some prefer science while others like arts. As for me, English is my top choice.
On one hand, English helps broaden my horizons. Through reading Shakespeare's plays, I learn about different cultures. What's more, it improves my communication skills. Last month, I successfully chatted with foreign visitors at the school fair.
On the other hand, some say math is more useful for exams. However, memorizing formulas all day makes me feel bored.
In conclusion, both subjects are important. But considering my interest in global communication, I firmly believe English is the best choice. (118 words)
2. 运动会经历
An Unforgettable Sports Meeting
Our school sports meeting left a deep impression on me.
When I first joined the relay race, I felt nervous. My hands were shaking while passing the baton. Surprisingly, our team cooperated perfectly and finally won second place! The moment we crossed the finish line, all classmates cheered for us loudly.
Some students think sports events are tiring. However, I learned the value of teamwork. Now I exercise daily to stay healthy.
This experience taught me: success comes from both effort and cooperation. (86 words)
3. 校园规则讨论
Should We Wear Uniforms?
There are different opinions about school uniform rules.
Some students argue uniforms make everyone equal. For example, no one feels poor because of cheap clothes. What's more, it saves time choosing outfits every morning.
However, others believe it limits personal style. My friend Lily, who loves fashion design, feels unhappy about this rule.
In my view, uniforms have more advantages. They create a sense of belonging and keep us focused on study. Maybe schools could allow free dress days monthly to balance both sides. (85 words)
四、提分技巧
1. 对比句式升级:
While it is true that..., we cannot ignore...
Admittedly, ...; nevertheless, ...
2. 衔接词活用:
转折:however, on the contrary
递进:more importantly, additionally
3. 数据增强说服力:
A recent survey shows 75% of students...
According to my math teacher, students who... improve 30% faster
4. 情感表达:
To my great delight,...
I was overwhelmed with excitement when...
五、常见错误提醒
⚠️ 避免中式英语:
❌ "I very like English." → ✅ "I like English very much."
❌ "Join the sports meeting" → ✅ "Participate in the sports meeting"
⚠️ 时态统一:描述过去经历时全篇保持一般过去式
🔔 建议:每日背诵2个素材短语,并用其造句强化记忆
第二部分:中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背
1.(24-25九年级上·四川成都·期末)一年一度的年级英语演讲比赛 (speech competition) 即将开始,假如你是 Linda,请你代表班级给外教Black写一封邀请函,并在1月25日前回复。
要求:1.包含表格中所有内容;2.字数:100字左右。
参考单词:开幕式 opening ceremony 评分 grade v.
颁奖仪式 award ceremony 致辞 give a speech 音乐厅 auditorium
活动
英语演讲比赛
时间
1月26日周二下午
地点
音乐厅
活动流程
15:15进入会场:由学生带领入座
开幕式:观看表演 (dancing,…)
比赛:观看比赛,无需评分
18: 00颁奖仪式:嘉宾 (Black)
注意事项
入场时请出示邀请函
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2.(24-25九年级上·河南郑州·期末)读万卷书,行万里路。近年来,参观博物馆、看工厂、访农村等形式多样的研学活动,极大地丰富了中学生的课余生活。请你根据以下要点及要求,描述自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历。
要点:
(1)研学地点、时间、交通工具、研学过程;
(2)研学旅行的收获和感受;
(3)研学旅行的重要性。
要求:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Study tour is more and more popular these days. Now, let me tell you one of my study tours.
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3.(24-25九年级上·安徽合肥·期末)随着科技的发展,未来社会必将产生巨大的变化,而学校生活也将与现在有很多不同之处。假如你是李华,你们学校即将举行以“未来的学校生活”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你结合以下图示信息,写一篇演讲稿。
注意:
1. 词数:80~100词;
2. 内容涵盖所有要点,合理拓展;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
School Life in the Future
Hello, everyone. It’s my great honor to stand here and give my speech. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
4.(24-25九年级上·辽宁本溪·期末)学校的英语角正在举行征文比赛,让大家写一写对目前校园生活的感受,你也来参加吧!下面来看一下具体要求:
1. 对于现在的校园生活,你喜欢和不喜欢的部分分别是什么?请说出你的原因或看法;
2. 对于不喜欢的部分,你希望学校做出怎样的改变?
注意:
1. 内容完整,语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
3. 词数80~100,短文开头已给出,不记入总词数。
I’m a student in Grade 9. Now I’d like to talk about what I feel about my school life.
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5.(2025九年级·湖南·专题练习)近日, 多家媒体调查并揭示中小学生“课间10分钟”被约束现象。有的学校规定学生除了喝水、上厕所外, 不许走出教室。午休时间学生也不能到操场等场所玩耍。中小学课间正在变得静悄悄。假如你是学校School Daily的校园小记者, 请你针对上述现象, 并结合自身实际谈谈你的看法。
要点如下:
1. 阐述目前存在的问题;
2. 结合自身实际,谈谈如何更好地开展课间10分钟并讲述这样做的原因。
关键词:课间十分钟 10-minute break between classes
要求:
1. 80词左右, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数内;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名:
3. 可适当增加细节, 以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
4. 标点正确,书面整洁。
Recently, some social media platform (社交媒体平台) began to report the fact that some schools are limiting their students during the 10-minute break between classes.
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6.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·开学考试)三年的初中学习生活只有几个月就要结束了,你想进入一所什么样的高中?为了让同学们更明确自己将来的学习和生活目标,学校英文报正在以“My Dream High School Life”为题开展征文活动,请你结合以下图示,写一篇短文投稿。
要求:(1)短文必须包括图示中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)80词左右 (标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Word bank: campus 校园
My Dream High School Life
My senior high school life is just around the corner.
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7.(24-25九年级上·湖北武汉·期末)英语老师布置了一项体验式作业,希望你和家人假期时去一次附近的图书馆,然后写一篇英语短文,向同学们介绍图书馆离你家有多远,在图书馆内能够体验的有趣项目 (如:reading salon 阅读沙龙) 以及图书馆周边的公共设施。请你根据以下内容提示完成短文。 How far is it from your home to the library?
What interesting activities can you do in the library?
Are there any bus stops, cafes or anything else near the library? How are they?
Something more about the library.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校;词数 100 词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Visit to the Library
Last weekend, I went to the library near my home with my family.
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8.(24-25九年级上·吉林长春·期末)本周日,同学们将去美术博物馆 (the Art Museum) 参观。假如你是学生会主席,请根据下面要点和要求,用英文向你校国际交换生发布一则不少于40词的通知。
要点:
(1) 早7: 30在学校门口集合;
(2) 将会乘坐校车前往美术博物馆;
(3) 将会在中午12: 00返回;
(4) 记得带笔和笔记本;
(5) 参观时做好记录。
要求:要点齐全:表述通顺;简洁得体。
Notice
Dear students,
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Student Union
Li Hua
9.(2024·广东广州·中考真题)你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛,主题是“An unforgettable school trip”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文。
注意:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右;
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
An unforgettable school trip
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10.(2024·广东广州·二模)初中生活即将结束,英语校报计划开展以“回顾初中生活,书写难忘时光”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图的提示,任选一或两点,分享你的成长故事及其对你的启发。
注意:
1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.词数80词左右(稿件的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Growing up
How time flies! My junior high school life is coming to an end. Looking back, I have a lot of unforgettable memories._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11.(2024·山东菏泽·中考真题)假如你是李华,在学校上周举办的毕业典礼上,老师们表演了一个令人惊喜的节目。请你以“A Surprise Brought Us Closer”为题用英语写一篇短文,向某英文报投稿。
内容包括:
1. 描述该节目;
2. 表达你的感受。
写作要求:
1. 100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等个人信息。
A Surprise Brought Us Closer
Last week, we had a graduation ceremony in our school.
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12.(2024·北京西城·二模)假设你是李华。毕业临近,你班正在制作毕业纪念册。每位同学将会在英文寄语区写下最想对同学们说的一句话。请你准备一份英语发言稿,在英语课上分享你的寄语,并谈谈你写这句话的原因。
提示词语: thank, love, friendship, proud, wish
提示问题: ●What would you say?
●Why would you say it? I would say… _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13.(2022·广东深圳·中考真题)假定你是李华,你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频,打算做成视频日志(vlog),参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlog作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。
内容包括:
1. 海边活动:
下午:①沙滩排球;②……;
晚上:搭帐篷;聚餐和清理垃圾;分享会。
2. 活动感言。
注意:
1. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
参考词汇:冲浪surf 帐篷tent
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thank you.
14.(24-25九年级上·河南郑州·期末)我校为弘扬中国传统文化,丰富同学们的课余生活,开设了一系列的中国传统文化社团。假设你是李华,请你根据下面的传统文化课程时间表及写作要点,选择2-3个社团,向同学们推荐社团课程。
Monday
Wednesday
Friday
5 p.m.-6 p.m.
Paper cutting Club
4 p.m.-5 p.m.
Clay Art Club
5 p.m.-6 p.m.
Chinese Painting Club
要点:1) What clubs do you recommend (推荐)?
2) Why do you choose to recommend them?
要求:1) 文中须包含要点提示,可适当发挥;
2) 不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3) 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
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15.(24-25九年级上·浙江杭州·期末)假设你是张华,交换生Peter下个月将来你校学习,他想通过加入学校社团了解中国文化。请你根据以下信息,写一封邮件,向他推荐一个合适的社团。
I am interested in Chinese culture. I like drinking tea. I love reading Chinese folk stories.
Tea Club
Place: Tearoom in the school
Time: 3:00—4:00 Wednesday
● Activity: learn about the invention of tea; enjoy tea performance; …
Story Telling Club
Place: Room 304
Time: 3:00—4:00 Wednesday
Activity: learn about Chinese folk stories; get to know some traditional Chinese festivals; ...
注意:
1. 短文需包含所选社团的所有相关信息,可适当发挥;
2. 不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to study in our school, and now you are thinking about choosing a club. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Hua
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