09 选择类议论文-2025年中考英语考前冲刺作文必背(模板、素材、分类押题范文)(通用版)

【观点论述类】 第9讲 选择类议论文 第一部分：中考英语写作精讲 一、二选一结构模板（五段式） 1. 引言段 (Introduction) 【核心公式】背景句 + 争议句 + 立场句 例句： With the development of technology, a heated debate arises about whether... (背景句). While some people firmly believe that..., others argue that... (争议句). From my perspective, ... is a wiser choice (立场句). 2. 正方观点段 (Supporting View) 【论证逻辑】 主题句 → 理由1 (举例/数据) → 理由2 (对比) → 小结 常用短语： First and foremost... Take...as an example According to a survey by... 3. 反方观点段 (Opposing View) 【让步技巧】 主题句 → 承认优点 → 转折指出缺陷 实用句型： Admittedly, ... has its merits such as... However, we cannot ignore the fact that... What's worse... 4. 深化论证段 (Deepening) 【进阶方法】 时间维度：Nowadays... → In the future... 群体差异：For teenagers... / For working people... 条件假设：If everyone chooses..., there would be... 5. 结论段 (Conclusion) 【高分公式】重申立场 + 建议展望 示范表达： All things considered, although both options have their advantages, I'm convinced that... (重申). It is suggested that... so that... (展望). 二、对比论证句型宝库 1. 比较级结构 ...far outweigh... in terms of... Nothing can compare with... when it comes to... 2. 转折对比 While it's true that..., the reality is... On the surface..., but in essence... 3. 数据对比 Statistics show that 78% of... compared to only 22%... A recent experiment revealed that Group A using... achieved 30% higher... than Group B. 4. 条件对比 Were there no..., ...would be impossible Only when... can we truly... 三、高频话题范文精析 1. 纸质书 vs 电子书 核心论点： 纸质书：护眼专注/收藏价值/仪式感 电子书：便携环保/互动功能/即时获取 亮点句式： "The tactile pleasure of turning real pages creates irreplaceable reading experiences, as Nobel laureate Mo Yan mentioned in his lecture."（权威引用） 2. 住校 vs 走读 论证层次： 独立能力 ↔ 亲情维系 集体生活 ↔ 个性空间 时间成本 ↔ 安全隐患 过渡技巧： "Admittedly, day students enjoy home-cooked meals every day. Nevertheless, boarding students develop stronger self-discipline through managing laundry and schedules independently." 3. 线上 vs 线下学习 对比维度： 教学效果：实时反馈 vs 录播回顾 社交互动：面对面交流 vs 弹幕讨论 自律要求：课堂监督 vs 自主规划 数据论证： "A 2024 UNESCO report indicates hybrid learning increases knowledge retention by 40%, combining the strengths of both modes." 四、实战提升技巧 1. 话题迁移训练：将"纸质书vs电子书"的论证逻辑迁移到"传统信件vs电子邮件" 2. 反常识立意：在"住校vs走读"中提出"阶段性选择"新观点 3. 复合型对比：处理三选一题目如"直播课/录播课/面授课"时采用"淘汰制"论证 4. 时事结合：在线上学习论证中融入AI技术发展（如ChatGPT辅导） 五、避坑指南 1. 避免"一边倒"：即使选择A，也要客观承认B的优点 2. 拒绝模糊表述：不说"some people think"，要具体说明群体如"educational experts" 3. 数字陷阱：不使用模糊数据"many"，改用"three out of five teenagers" 4. 文化误用：对比中外案例时注意准确性，如芬兰走读比例≠中国 附：自测清单 □ 是否完成"观点-论据-结论"闭环 □ 每段是否有明确连接词（Furthermore/Conversely） □ 是否使用至少3种高级句型（倒装/虚拟调） □ 结尾是否给出建设性意见 掌握本内容后，建议进行"限时对比写作训练"：随机抽取两个物品（如自行车/电动车），在15分钟内完成完整议论文框架搭建。 第二部分：中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背 1．书面表达 随着网络的普及，越来越多的年轻人喜欢在网上点外卖。最近你所在的班级在班会课上就“年轻人是否应该在网上点外卖”展开了讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一篇文章介绍讨论的情况，并表达自己的看法。 赞成 反对 你的看法 1. 方便、快捷、节省时间 2. 味道好、有时尚感   1. 不健康、不环保 2. 不便宜 …… 注意：1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2. 短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Recently, our class had a discussion about whether we should order food online. Opinions are divided on the topic. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．目前“电子书包”（electronic schoolbags）开始在一些学校试用。假如你班就“电子书包”的利弊展开了一次调查。下表是你们小组的情况，请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，发表在某英语论坛上。 要求： 1.短文必须包括下列提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.词数80左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Names Different ideas Lily Not heavy, easy to carry; get information easily Peter Bad for eyes; can 't replace textbooks（课本） Tina Expensive but can protect the environment You … In some schools，students begin to use electronic schoolbags in class. Is it good or bad？Here are my group members' ideas about it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．今年我市多所高中外迁，即将成为一名高中生的你，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。请你以“ A boarding school or a day school ”为标题，写一篇80-120词的短文，内容包括： 1.读寄宿学校的利和弊各一点； 2.读走读学校的利和弊各一点； 3.你的选择和理由（理由不得与上述两点内容重复） 注意：短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 A boarding school or a day school? Recently several high school in our city have moved to suburban area from downtown. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．书面表达 随着科技的发展，电子书（e-books）逐渐进入校园，但对于电子书的争论一直没有停息。你班同学发起了一次主题为“E-books, good or bad?”的讨论，假如你是李明，请你给某英文报社写一封信，介绍一下讨论的情况及你自己的观点。 赞成意见 反对意见 环保，节约纸张 长时间使用对眼睛有害 易于携带，便于查找资料 不利于记笔记 你的观点:       要求： （1）词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）覆盖所有信息点；（3）注意合适的连接词的应用；（4）你的观点至少两条；（5）不能出现真实姓名和校名。 Dear Editor, I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we’ve had about whether e-books are good or bad. _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Ming 5．春节贺岁片《热辣滚烫》备受关注，女主角杜乐莹的扮演者贾玲成功减掉整整100斤，付出了巨大的艰辛和努力，苦苦坚持练习拳击，最终成功减肥，她实现了“我想赢一次”的愿望。银幕最后字幕部分展现了贾玲一年中减肥日记，再次把减肥话题带到人们日常聊天中。英语课上，大家也就减肥这个话题进行了讨论，是通过节食减肥好呢？还是通过锻炼减肥好？请你用英语以“Will you lose weight by dieting or by exercising?”为题写一篇短文，表达一下你的观点，以及你打算怎样减肥。 要求：120词左右，文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。 Will you lose weight by dieting or by exercising? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．听音乐或观看电影是一种很好的消遣方式，能够让我们在忙碌的生活中放松身心。当然，不同的人喜欢的音乐或电影种类不同，同一个人在不同的心情下也会选择不同的音乐或电影。你喜欢什么样的音乐或电影？请以“Music/Movies that I like”为题写一篇短文表达自己的观点。 写作要求： 1. 音乐或电影，请选择其中之一； 2. 100字左右，可适当发挥。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．如今，科学技术正在以一种前所未有的速度向前发展，各类科学产物已经渗透到人类生活的方方面面。比如手机的使用给我们带来了诸多便利，也引发了不少争议。为了让同学们能客观、理性地看待科技两面性的问题，九年级 (1) 班围绕“学生是否可以借助学习APP来解决学习中的问题”展开了辩论。 假设你是正方或反方的一员 (只需选择一方)，请围绕你的观点，结合自己的亲身经历并说明理由来说服同学们。 I think students can solve the problems in their study with the help of learning apps. I don’t think students can solve the problems in their study with the help of learning apps. Word Bank learn … by oneself online lessons and resources effective (有效的) independent instant feedback (即时反馈) rely on (依赖) critical thinking (批判性思维) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．体育考试有无必要纳入高中入学考试？对此有的人表示支持，有的人表示反对。同学们刚刚经过高强度的体育训练，也参加了体育考试。作为体育考试的亲历者，对于体育考试是否应该纳入中考，你持有什么观点？请从“赞成”与“反对”这两个观点中选择一个，说明你的看法，并结合自身经历陈述至少三条理由。 （注：中考：Senior High School Entrance Exam) Should PE Test be Included in SHSEE? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．这些年，随着大家环保意识越来越浓厚，加上地铁的建成，选择绿色出行上班的人们越来越多。路近的会去选择步行或者公共自行车，因为自行车不仅美观免费，而且可以锻炼身体。那些曾经以“有车一族为荣”的人们，也慢慢放弃私家车而去选择地铁或者公交。手机滴滴打车的兴起也让人们多了一种选择。请根据自己身边的情况，写写5年前人们选择某种交通工具的理由（可以是优点也可以是缺点），再写写现在人们主要选择的交通工具和理由。 要求：（1）字数不少于80字；（2）可适当发挥，必须提到5种交通工具。 In the past 5 years, many things have changed. So has the way people choose to their workplace. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．今天英语课上你班同学就“课间是否该放音乐”这一话题进行了讨论。请你就该讨论结果(见下表)以“Should music be played between classes?”为题目写一篇英语短文张贴在你班的“英语习作园地”上。 有人赞同 音乐使他们觉得快乐、放松；音乐使他们的课间生活丰富多彩。 有人反对 吵闹的音乐使他们更兴奋，不利于课间休息。 你的看法 …… 要求：1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，但不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加一些细节，以使行文连贯。 Should music be played between classes? This morning the students in my class had a discussion about whether music should be played between classes. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．某英文杂志中学生专栏正在征集“二孩政策”放开后孩子们的意见。请根据下表提示，以“Do you agree with your parents having a second child？为题，写一篇英语短文。谈谈你的看法。 观点 赞成 反对 理由 1.不会孤单； 2.轮流照顾父母； 3.…… 1.担心父母过于关注弟弟妹妹； 2.害怕与弟弟妹妹相处不好； 3.…… 要求：1）语言表达准确；短文连贯通顺； 2）赞同或反对只能选择一种，短文必须包括以上内容要点，可以适当发挥； 3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 4）词数100左右。 Do you agree with your parents having a second child？ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．近日，几个城市提出了"两天半周末"的计划。该计划顿时引起了同学们的热议。有的同学非常赞同，觉得两天半时间足够进行一次周末旅行，也有了更多的休闲时间；有的同学提出异议，担心自己的课业负担会更沉重。 请根据要点提示，用英文写一篇短文，阐述你的观点和理由。 要点： 1、你的观点(赞成或反对) 2、你的理由(至少2点) 提示词：2. 5-dayweekend 两天半周末 要求： 1、词数：60-80词。 2、短文应包括所选观点中的要点，可适当发挥。 3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 These days, some cities worked out a plan about a "2. 5-day weekend". In that way, people will have an extra half-day off every Friday afternoon. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．近期 ，一儿童因痴迷电脑游戏重度用眼，导致病变失明；一17岁少年边玩手机边骑车，遭遇车祸并高位截瘫……。好多惨痛案例再次把青少年是否能使用智能手机(smart phone)的话题推到了风口浪尖。请根据下列表格信息写一篇100词左右的短文。 赞同者观点 1. 通过QQ、WeChat(微信）和家人朋友联系更方便。 2. 看教学视频，帮助学习。 3.  ...... 反对者观点 1. 闲聊过多，贻误学业。 2. 沉迷手机游戏，损害健康，耽误学习，影响同家人朋友沟通。 3.   ...... 你的观点 ...... 注意: 1. 可以适当发挥。 2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 3. 所给开头不计入总字数。 Nowadays, more and more young children use smart phones to do different kinds of things. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 【观点论述类】 第9讲 选择类议论文 第一部分：中考英语写作精讲 一、二选一结构模板（五段式） 1. 引言段 (Introduction) 【核心公式】背景句 + 争议句 + 立场句 例句： With the development of technology, a heated debate arises about whether... (背景句). While some people firmly believe that..., others argue that... (争议句). From my perspective, ... is a wiser choice (立场句). 2. 正方观点段 (Supporting View) 【论证逻辑】 主题句 → 理由1 (举例/数据) → 理由2 (对比) → 小结 常用短语： First and foremost... Take...as an example According to a survey by... 3. 反方观点段 (Opposing View) 【让步技巧】 主题句 → 承认优点 → 转折指出缺陷 实用句型： Admittedly, ... has its merits such as... However, we cannot ignore the fact that... What's worse... 4. 深化论证段 (Deepening) 【进阶方法】 时间维度：Nowadays... → In the future... 群体差异：For teenagers... / For working people... 条件假设：If everyone chooses..., there would be... 5. 结论段 (Conclusion) 【高分公式】重申立场 + 建议展望 示范表达： All things considered, although both options have their advantages, I'm convinced that... (重申). It is suggested that... so that... (展望). 二、对比论证句型宝库 1. 比较级结构 ...far outweigh... in terms of... Nothing can compare with... when it comes to... 2. 转折对比 While it's true that..., the reality is... On the surface..., but in essence... 3. 数据对比 Statistics show that 78% of... compared to only 22%... A recent experiment revealed that Group A using... achieved 30% higher... than Group B. 4. 条件对比 Were there no..., ...would be impossible Only when... can we truly... 三、高频话题范文精析 1. 纸质书 vs 电子书 核心论点： 纸质书：护眼专注/收藏价值/仪式感 电子书：便携环保/互动功能/即时获取 亮点句式： "The tactile pleasure of turning real pages creates irreplaceable reading experiences, as Nobel laureate Mo Yan mentioned in his lecture."（权威引用） 2. 住校 vs 走读 论证层次： 独立能力 ↔ 亲情维系 集体生活 ↔ 个性空间 时间成本 ↔ 安全隐患 过渡技巧： "Admittedly, day students enjoy home-cooked meals every day. Nevertheless, boarding students develop stronger self-discipline through managing laundry and schedules independently." 3. 线上 vs 线下学习 对比维度： 教学效果：实时反馈 vs 录播回顾 社交互动：面对面交流 vs 弹幕讨论 自律要求：课堂监督 vs 自主规划 数据论证： "A 2024 UNESCO report indicates hybrid learning increases knowledge retention by 40%, combining the strengths of both modes." 四、实战提升技巧 1. 话题迁移训练：将"纸质书vs电子书"的论证逻辑迁移到"传统信件vs电子邮件" 2. 反常识立意：在"住校vs走读"中提出"阶段性选择"新观点 3. 复合型对比：处理三选一题目如"直播课/录播课/面授课"时采用"淘汰制"论证 4. 时事结合：在线上学习论证中融入AI技术发展（如ChatGPT辅导） 五、避坑指南 1. 避免"一边倒"：即使选择A，也要客观承认B的优点 2. 拒绝模糊表述：不说"some people think"，要具体说明群体如"educational experts" 3. 数字陷阱：不使用模糊数据"many"，改用"three out of five teenagers" 4. 文化误用：对比中外案例时注意准确性，如芬兰走读比例≠中国 附：自测清单 □ 是否完成"观点-论据-结论"闭环 □ 每段是否有明确连接词（Furthermore/Conversely） □ 是否使用至少3种高级句型（倒装/虚拟调） □ 结尾是否给出建设性意见 掌握本内容后，建议进行"限时对比写作训练"：随机抽取两个物品（如自行车/电动车），在15分钟内完成完整议论文框架搭建。 第二部分：中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背 1．书面表达 随着网络的普及，越来越多的年轻人喜欢在网上点外卖。最近你所在的班级在班会课上就“年轻人是否应该在网上点外卖”展开了讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一篇文章介绍讨论的情况，并表达自己的看法。 赞成 反对 你的看法 1. 方便、快捷、节省时间 2. 味道好、有时尚感   1. 不健康、不环保 2. 不便宜 …… 注意：1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2. 短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Recently, our class had a discussion about whether we should order food online. Opinions are divided on the topic. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Recently, our class had a discussion about whether we should order food online. Opinions are divided on the topic. Some students think it’s good to order food online. They think the food online is more delicious than what they cook. They also like tasting different kinds of food. Besides, they can save time. But other students hold a different opinion. They say some resturants may have food safety problems and it’s bad for our health and our environment. What’s more, it’s more expensive. I think we should take good care of our health by cooking by ourselves and keeping a healthy diet. 【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，记录我的班级就“年轻人是否应该在网上点外卖”展开讨论的情况，并表达自己的看法。 【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一、三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式如“Some students think…”，“they can…”，“it’s bad for…”，“I think…”等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们班就“年轻人是否应该在网上点外卖”展开了讨论，接下来介绍讨论的情况，最后表达我的看法。此处like doing sth.、be bad for、 what’s more、take good care of、by doing sth.等这些词组的运用，也让文章增色不少。 2．目前“电子书包”（electronic schoolbags）开始在一些学校试用。假如你班就“电子书包”的利弊展开了一次调查。下表是你们小组的情况，请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，发表在某英语论坛上。 要求： 1.短文必须包括下列提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.词数80左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Names Different ideas Lily Not heavy, easy to carry; get information easily Peter Bad for eyes; can 't replace textbooks（课本） Tina Expensive but can protect the environment You … In some schools，students begin to use electronic schoolbags in class. Is it good or bad？Here are my group members' ideas about it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 In some schools，students begin to use electronic schoolbags in class. Is it good or bad？ Here are my group members' ideas about it. Lily thinks an electronic schoolbag is not heavy and easy to carry. We can get information easily. And it also makes us more interested in lessons. Peter says if he uses it all day，it will be bad for his eyes. And he doesn't think it can replace textbooks. Tina thinks it is expensive but it can protect the environment because people don't need to cut down trees to make paper books. In my opinion，it's easier for teachers to find each student's problem and help them. 【详解】这是一篇给定材料的调查。调查内容是小组内不同人对电子书包的不同看法。组内三个同学的看法题目中已经给出，我们只需要用准确的语言表达出来就可以，在介绍自己的看法时，可以根据自己的想法及词汇量适当发挥。根据内容可知主要使用一般现在时态。写作时注意人称的变化，同时还要注意语言的准确性和连贯性。 【点睛】文章语言规范，叙述清晰，词汇及时态运用正确，语句通顺，是一篇不错的文章。短文中大量复合句的使用为文章添彩，如：Peter says if he uses it all day，it will be bad for his eyes；Tina thinks it is expensive but it can protect the environment because people don't need to cut down trees to make paper books.等。 3．今年我市多所高中外迁，即将成为一名高中生的你，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。请你以“ A boarding school or a day school ”为标题，写一篇80-120词的短文，内容包括： 1.读寄宿学校的利和弊各一点； 2.读走读学校的利和弊各一点； 3.你的选择和理由（理由不得与上述两点内容重复） 注意：短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 A boarding school or a day school? Recently several high school in our city have moved to suburban area from downtown. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 A boarding school or a day school? Recently several high school in our city have moved to suburban area from downtown. We are going to graduate from our middle school, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school.Both kinds of schools have their advantages and disadvantages. If we choose a boarding school,we will save more time to study.However ,we may have less time staying with our family.If we choose a day school,parents can know more of our studies.At the same time,computer games may take a bad influnce on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school.We should concentrate on our study to get good grades in high school. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作，开头已给出。后面的内容需要讲述读寄宿学校的利和弊各一点以及走读学校的利弊，最后还需要阐述自己的观点。 2.点评：本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 3.高分亮点： 短语：moved to；graduate from；make a choice；at the same time；as for；get good grades 句型：if…句型； 4．书面表达 随着科技的发展，电子书（e-books）逐渐进入校园，但对于电子书的争论一直没有停息。你班同学发起了一次主题为“E-books, good or bad?”的讨论，假如你是李明，请你给某英文报社写一封信，介绍一下讨论的情况及你自己的观点。 赞成意见 反对意见 环保，节约纸张 长时间使用对眼睛有害 易于携带，便于查找资料 不利于记笔记 你的观点:       要求： （1）词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）覆盖所有信息点；（3）注意合适的连接词的应用；（4）你的观点至少两条；（5）不能出现真实姓名和校名。 Dear Editor, I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we’ve had about whether e-books are good or bad. _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Ming 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Editor, I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we’ve had about whether e-books are good or bad. Some of the students prefer e-books because they think that using e-books is good for the environment and it can save a lot of paper. What’s more, e-books are also very nice and small. And they are easy to carry. People can search for information conveniently. However, other students have different ideas. They think if they use e-books for a long time, it is bad for their eyes. While having classes, students can’t take notes directly in the e-books. In my opinion, I love to read paper books. On the one hand, paper books are easier for us to see and memorize the knowledge. On the other hand, they are more comfortable to read and they won’t hurt our eyes. Yours truly, Li Ming 【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段描写持赞成意见的观点；第三段描写持反对意见的观点；最后一段写作者个人的观点。 2、点评：采用4段式；用第三人称和第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时；叙述完整且条理清晰。 3、高分亮点： 短语：is good for；are easy to；is bad for；take notes；In my opinion。 句型：because引导的原因状语从句；While省略句；On the one hand, on the other hand。 【点睛】利弊类作文如何写。 拿到作文后应确定主题、写作结构以及材料选择。此类文章可以分4个步骤。 1）开头段，简述事件。 2）阐述提纲中列举的第一种看法，给出理由或者举例说明：主题句+理由/举例1+理由/举例2+理由/举例3。 3）表明自己的观点，结束全文。 5．春节贺岁片《热辣滚烫》备受关注，女主角杜乐莹的扮演者贾玲成功减掉整整100斤，付出了巨大的艰辛和努力，苦苦坚持练习拳击，最终成功减肥，她实现了“我想赢一次”的愿望。银幕最后字幕部分展现了贾玲一年中减肥日记，再次把减肥话题带到人们日常聊天中。英语课上，大家也就减肥这个话题进行了讨论，是通过节食减肥好呢？还是通过锻炼减肥好？请你用英语以“Will you lose weight by dieting or by exercising?”为题写一篇短文，表达一下你的观点，以及你打算怎样减肥。 要求：120词左右，文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。 Will you lose weight by dieting or by exercising? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Will you lose weight by dieting or by exercising? When it comes to weight loss, I firmly believe that losing weight by exercising is a more suitable way. Because getting more exercise not only makes us healthier and stronger, but also keeps our mind healthy. It is a good way to help with our studies and help us overcome difficulties in daily life as well. However, losing weight by dieting will make people get sick easily, which will influence our normal life. In the new year, I decide to do more exercise to keep in good shape. First, I plan to play basketball with my classmates after school at least three times a week. Second, I will take part in some outdoor activities on weekends, such as going hiking, climbing the mountains and so on. In a word, if I want to lose weight, I will do more exercise. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。 ②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时。 ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明你的观点。 第二步，具体阐述在新的一年里你打算怎样保持一个健康的体型。 第三步，书写结语。再次强调自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also...不仅……而且…… ②at least至少 ③take part in参加 ④in a word总而言之 [高分句型] ①However, losing weight by dieting will make people get sick easily, which will influence our normal life. (which引导非限制性定语从句) ②In a word, if I want to lose weight, I will do more exercise. (if引导条件状语从句) 6．听音乐或观看电影是一种很好的消遣方式，能够让我们在忙碌的生活中放松身心。当然，不同的人喜欢的音乐或电影种类不同，同一个人在不同的心情下也会选择不同的音乐或电影。你喜欢什么样的音乐或电影？请以“Music/Movies that I like”为题写一篇短文表达自己的观点。 写作要求： 1. 音乐或电影，请选择其中之一； 2. 100字左右，可适当发挥。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Movies That I Like When I’m free, I love watching movies to relax. My favorite kind of movies are animated ones, and Kung Fu Panda is my top pick. In Kung Fu Panda, a regular panda named Po learns Kung Fu from his master. At first, he doesn’t have any special skills, but he keeps practicing hard and never gives up. Finally, he becomes really good at Kung Fu and beats Tai Lung. This movie is both funny and meaningful. It teaches me to believe in myself, work hard, and never quit. Besides animated movies, I also like dramas and comedies. Dramas make me think deeply about life, and comedies bring laughter to my life. No matter what type of movie it is, I appreciate it when it has a good story, interesting characters, and a bit of humor or inspiration. So, when I want to watch a movie, I usually choose something fun and uplifting, like Kung Fu Panda or any other animated film that makes me feel good. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有提示信息，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一、三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己空闲时喜欢看电影放松，最喜欢的电影类型是动画片，其中《功夫熊猫》是首选； 第二步，介绍最喜欢的电影的主要内容以及主人公的情况，适当拓展； 第三步，介绍自己还喜欢的其他类型的电影及原因； 第四步，表达自己选择电影类型的原因及感受。 [亮点词汇] ①believe in oneself 相信自己 ②give up 放弃 [高分句型] ①No matter what type of movie it is, I appreciate it when it has a good story, interesting characters, and a bit of humor or inspiration. (no matter what引导的让步状语从句) ②When I’m free, I love watching movies to relax.  (when引导时间状语从句) 7．如今，科学技术正在以一种前所未有的速度向前发展，各类科学产物已经渗透到人类生活的方方面面。比如手机的使用给我们带来了诸多便利，也引发了不少争议。为了让同学们能客观、理性地看待科技两面性的问题，九年级 (1) 班围绕“学生是否可以借助学习APP来解决学习中的问题”展开了辩论。 假设你是正方或反方的一员 (只需选择一方)，请围绕你的观点，结合自己的亲身经历并说明理由来说服同学们。 I think students can solve the problems in their study with the help of learning apps. I don’t think students can solve the problems in their study with the help of learning apps. Word Bank learn … by oneself online lessons and resources effective (有效的) independent instant feedback (即时反馈) rely on (依赖) critical thinking (批判性思维) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 In our class, we’re having a debate about whether students should use learning apps to help with their studies. I firmly believe that students should use learning apps to tackle academic problems.   Despite concerns about distractions, my own experience has shown that these apps provide quick access to reliable information and detailed explanations, which have helped me understand complex concepts better. Moreover, they offer personalized learning plans tailored to individual needs, making study more efficient.   In my math study, for instance, I often got stuck on difficult problems. But with a learning app, I could get detailed explanations and similar examples instantly. It not only saved my time but also deepened my understanding.   In a word, learning apps really boost our learning efficiency and are reliable helpers. Let’s embrace technology and use it wisely to boost our academic performance! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍最近班级围绕“学生是否可以借助学习APP来解决学习中的问题”这一问题进行了讨论，表明自己的观点； 第二步，阐述原因； 第三步，结合自身经历证明自己的观点； 第四步，写总结。 [亮点词汇] ①get stuck on 被困住 ②tailor to 根据……调整…… [高分句型] ①It not only saved my time but also deepened my understanding. (not only … but also … ) ②I firmly believe that students should use learning apps to tackle academic problems. (宾语从句) 8．体育考试有无必要纳入高中入学考试？对此有的人表示支持，有的人表示反对。同学们刚刚经过高强度的体育训练，也参加了体育考试。作为体育考试的亲历者，对于体育考试是否应该纳入中考，你持有什么观点？请从“赞成”与“反对”这两个观点中选择一个，说明你的看法，并结合自身经历陈述至少三条理由。 （注：中考：Senior High School Entrance Exam) Should PE Test be Included in SHSEE? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Should PE Test be Included in SHSEE? In my opinion. I agree with the reform plan regarding the physical education examination for high school entrance. It is reported that most young people are getting unhealthy. Without regular exercise students are getting weaker and weaker. If the total score of PE exam is increased, both teachers and students will undoubtedly attach greater importance to physical education, and the phenomenon that PE is neglected will disappear. Students will be healthier and more energetic in their study. It is helpful to improve students comprehensive ability and quality. I think every school should make a plan to cultivate students’ interest in sports so as to improve students’ physical quality. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，是一篇话题作文； ②时态：本文要用一般现在时； ③提示：考生要在“赞成”和“反对”两个观点中选择一个来论述，给出理由，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明自己的观点，支持纳入中考； 第二步，给出三条理由； 第三步，提出一些相关的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①in my opinion 在我看来 ②regular 有规律的 ③undoutbtedly 毋庸置疑地 ④attach…to… 把……系在……上 [高分句型] ①It is reported that most young people are getting unhealthy. (it作形式主语，that后为真正主语) ②If the total score of PE exam is increased, both teachers and students will undoubtedly attach greater importance to physical education. (if引导条件状语从句) 9．这些年，随着大家环保意识越来越浓厚，加上地铁的建成，选择绿色出行上班的人们越来越多。路近的会去选择步行或者公共自行车，因为自行车不仅美观免费，而且可以锻炼身体。那些曾经以“有车一族为荣”的人们，也慢慢放弃私家车而去选择地铁或者公交。手机滴滴打车的兴起也让人们多了一种选择。请根据自己身边的情况，写写5年前人们选择某种交通工具的理由（可以是优点也可以是缺点），再写写现在人们主要选择的交通工具和理由。 要求：（1）字数不少于80字；（2）可适当发挥，必须提到5种交通工具。 In the past 5 years, many things have changed. So has the way people choose to their workplace. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 In the past 5 years, many things have changed. So has the way people choose to their workplace. Five years ago, most people used to go to work in their cars. They were convenient and fast. Though it was crowded and sometimes it might be smelly, many people took the bus to work. Only a small number of people took the taxi, for it usually cost a lot. As for the people who lived nearby, they preferred to ride their bikes to work. Now, things have changed. Fewer people drive their cars to work, because they have realized the importance of environmental protection. They prefer to go out in a green away. For example, they usually take subways to travel around. Besides, with the development of technology, some people like calling a car on their phone. It is really wonderful especially when you are in a hurry. No matter how people go to work, safety comes first. And don’t forget to play a part in protecting the environment. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：结合题干介绍五年前人们选择交通工具的情况，以及介绍人们现在选择的交通工具和理由；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍五年前人们选择某种交通工具及理由； 第二步，介绍现在人们主要选择的交通工具和理由； 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事 ②a small number of 少量的 ③as for 至于 [高分句型] ①Though it was crowded and sometimes it might be smelly, many people took the bus to work.（though引导的让步状语从句） ②It is really wonderful especially when you are in a hurry.（when引导的时间状语从句） 10．今天英语课上你班同学就“课间是否该放音乐”这一话题进行了讨论。请你就该讨论结果(见下表)以“Should music be played between classes?”为题目写一篇英语短文张贴在你班的“英语习作园地”上。 有人赞同 音乐使他们觉得快乐、放松；音乐使他们的课间生活丰富多彩。 有人反对 吵闹的音乐使他们更兴奋，不利于课间休息。 你的看法 …… 要求：1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，但不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加一些细节，以使行文连贯。 Should music be played between classes? This morning the students in my class had a discussion about whether music should be played between classes. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Should music be played between classes? This morning the students in my class had a discussion about whether music should be played between classes. Some think listening to music between classes is a good idea. Music can make them feel happy and relaxed. Music can make their lives colorful. However, others are against the idea. They think music may have a bad influence because some music is too noisy and they may get too excited to take a break. In my opinion, it’s good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud noisy music during the class break. In this way, students can enjoy music as well as having a good rest. Besides, I suggest playing music that is suitable for middle school students. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于话题作文写作，议题为“课间是否该放音乐”。写作时注意题干中三个要点，一个是赞同的内容，另一个是反对的内容，还有最后“你”的观点。 2. 写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来表达赞同者和反对者的观点，用第一人称来表达自己的观点；时态采用一般现在时为主。本文采用三段式，第一段写赞同的观点，第二段写反对的观点，第三段表达自己的观点并给出建议。 11．某英文杂志中学生专栏正在征集“二孩政策”放开后孩子们的意见。请根据下表提示，以“Do you agree with your parents having a second child？为题，写一篇英语短文。谈谈你的看法。 观点 赞成 反对 理由 1.不会孤单； 2.轮流照顾父母； 3.…… 1.担心父母过于关注弟弟妹妹； 2.害怕与弟弟妹妹相处不好； 3.…… 要求：1）语言表达准确；短文连贯通顺； 2）赞同或反对只能选择一种，短文必须包括以上内容要点，可以适当发挥； 3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 4）词数100左右。 Do you agree with your parents having a second child？ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Agreement: Do you agree with your parents having a second child? I hope I can have a little brother or sister. I think the baby is the best gift for my family. I like babies. When the baby can’t walk or speak, I can help parents look after him. When he grows up, we can play with each other and share the happiness and sadness with each other. I will not feel lonely any more. When our parents get old and can’t do anything for us, we will be able to look after them together and we can also deal with any trouble we’ll meet in the future together. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Disagreement: Do you agree with your parents having a second child? I disagree my parents having another child. I don’t think it’s good for me to have a brother or sister. I’m afraid if my parents have another child, they will have to pay more attention to the child. So I will get less love. What’s worse, I couldn’t get on well with the little child, we could even fight against each other often. Also, the little child will be sure to touch my objects, my toys, clothes, soccer balls and so on. I don’t want anyone to touch my objects. So I hope I’m the only child in my family. 【详解】1、题干解读：题目是某中学生专栏正在征集“二孩政策”放开后孩子们的意见，根据所给表格提示，针对是否同意父母要二胎写出自己的意见。 2、写作指导：采用一段式；根据表格内容详细介绍了自己赞同还是反对父母要二胎；时态采用一般现在时为主；保证结构清晰；内容完整。 12．近日，几个城市提出了"两天半周末"的计划。该计划顿时引起了同学们的热议。有的同学非常赞同，觉得两天半时间足够进行一次周末旅行，也有了更多的休闲时间；有的同学提出异议，担心自己的课业负担会更沉重。 请根据要点提示，用英文写一篇短文，阐述你的观点和理由。 要点： 1、你的观点(赞成或反对) 2、你的理由(至少2点) 提示词：2. 5-dayweekend 两天半周末 要求： 1、词数：60-80词。 2、短文应包括所选观点中的要点，可适当发挥。 3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 These days, some cities worked out a plan about a "2. 5-day weekend". In that way, people will have an extra half-day off every Friday afternoon. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： These days, some cities worked out a plan about a "2. 5-day weekend". In that way, people will have an extra half-day off every Friday afternoon. I think it's a good way for us to balance schoolwork and free time. First, if we have an extra half-day off, we can spend more time taking a trip in the city nearby. That will help us to be more energetic. Also, at weekends, we will leave more time for hobbies and interests. Besides, we will not be as busy as before and we will have a good rest. I hope we will have a weekend like this, too. I can't wait! 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应紧接文章开头继续写作，根据内容提示讲述你的观点以及理由。 2.点评：主要用第一人称进行写作，主要采用一般将来时态来写作。讲述观点以及理由叙述完整且条理清晰。 3.高分亮点： 短语：worked out a plan；in that way；have an extra half-day off；take a trip；at weekends；as busy as；have a good rest。 句型：if引导的条件状语从句；I think…和I hope…宾语从句；and表示并列的句子。 13．近期 ，一儿童因痴迷电脑游戏重度用眼，导致病变失明；一17岁少年边玩手机边骑车，遭遇车祸并高位截瘫……。好多惨痛案例再次把青少年是否能使用智能手机(smart phone)的话题推到了风口浪尖。请根据下列表格信息写一篇100词左右的短文。 赞同者观点 1. 通过QQ、WeChat(微信）和家人朋友联系更方便。 2. 看教学视频，帮助学习。 3.  ...... 反对者观点 1. 闲聊过多，贻误学业。 2. 沉迷手机游戏，损害健康，耽误学习，影响同家人朋友沟通。 3.   ...... 你的观点 ...... 注意: 1. 可以适当发挥。 2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 3. 所给开头不计入总字数。 Nowadays, more and more young children use smart phones to do different kinds of things. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分优秀范文】: Nowadays, more and more young children use smart phones to do different kinds of things. The Internet brings many advantages to us. First, with the help of the Internet, we can get all kinds of information by watching the news about any country in the world. Second, we can keep in touch with each other by chatting on the QQ or Wechat. Third, we can learn a lot of knowledge from the Internet. What's more, we can have lessons on the Internet. However, every coin has two sides. Some students spend lots of time playing computer games and lost themselves in the games. As a result, they fail to pass the exam and have a poor eyesight. So playing too much on the Internet is bad for their health and study. In my opinion, whether it is good to use the Internet depends on ourselves. We can spare some time to search for the important information online. When we are tired, the music and films on the Internet can also make us relaxed. It's up to you, my friends? 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题写作。在写作时应承接短文开头，按照表格给出的提纲写。尽可能将材料内容都能涉及。结构要清晰，论点明确。最后要阐明自己的观点。 2.点评：结构清楚，材料内容基本都有涉及。时态采用一般现在时为主，描述论据时，描写细致。整篇文章叙述完整且条理清晰。 3.高分亮点： 短语：with the help of…；all kinds of；each other；a lot of；is good to；be up to。 句型：So playing too much on the Internet is bad for their health and study．动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数。be bad for 对……不利；In my opinion，whether it is good to use the Internet depends on ourselves．in one's opinion以某人看来。从句作为主语，谓语动词用单数。 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$