内容正文:
【社会热点类】
第5讲 环境保护主题类作文
第一部分:中考英语写作精讲
一、现象-问题-解决模板(Phenomenon-Problem-Solution)
1. 现象描述段
With the rapid development of..., ... has become increasingly serious.
(过渡句)Take...as an example, it is reported that...
(数据论证)According to a recent survey, ...% of...
常用句式:
- The problem of...has aroused wide public concern
- Shocking statistics show that...
- It's common to see...
2. 问题分析段
The root causes can be summarized as follows. Firstly,... Secondly,...
(影响论证)If this situation continues, it will lead to...
(举例说明)For instance,...
常用句式:
- Human activities are largely responsible for...
- The lack of environmental awareness is another key factor
- This not only...but also...
3. 解决措施段
To tackle this issue, joint efforts are needed.
(政府层面)The government should...
(个人层面)As individuals, we ought to...
(展望未来)Only by...can we...
常用句式:
- It's high time that stricter laws were implemented
- Simple daily actions can make a big difference
- Let's join hands to create a greener future
二、环保术语中英对照表
| 环境问题类 | 解决方案类 | 政策类 |
|------------|------------|--------|
| climate change 气候变化 | renewable energy 可再生能源 | carbon neutrality 碳中和 |
| plastic pollution 塑料污染 | waste sorting 垃圾分类 | sustainable development 可持续发展 |
| deforestation 森林砍伐 | low-carbon lifestyle 低碳生活 | environmental protection law 环保法 |
| water contamination 水污染 | eco-friendly products 环保产品 | green policy 绿色政策 |
| air quality index 空气质量指数 | energy conservation 节能 | emission standard 排放标准 |
| endangered species 濒危物种 | public transportation 公共交通 | environmental tax 环境税 |
三、分类押题范文
范文1:垃圾分类
Waste Sorting: A Small Step for Big Change
The problem of garbage disposal has reached alarming levels in cities. Statistics show that each person generates 1kg of waste daily, with less than 30% being recycled.
Three main factors contribute to this crisis. Excessive packaging creates unnecessary waste, while improper disposal leads to soil pollution. Most seriously, many citizens still mix different types of trash.
To address this, governments should install color-coded bins in communities. Schools ought to include environmental education in curricula. As individuals, we must develop sorting habits. Remember, every correctly sorted banana peel is a step towards a cleaner Earth.
亮点分析:
- 数据论证(1kg, 30%)
- 排比结构(Three main factors...)
- 呼吁式结尾(every...step)
范文2:低碳生活
Embracing Low-Carbon Lifestyle
Carbon emissions have increased by 50% compared to 2000 levels, making low-carbon living urgent. Many still rely heavily on private cars and disposable products.
This lifestyle causes multiple problems. It accelerates global warming and depletes natural resources. Air pollution from vehicles also damages public health.
Solutions are within reach. Cycling instead of driving reduces carbon footprint. Using reusable shopping bags prevents plastic waste. Even small acts like turning off lights matter. Together, these green choices will build an eco-friendly society.
亮点分析:
- 对比数据(50% increase)
- 动名词主语(Cycling...Using...)
- 递进式措施(small acts...together)
范文3:河流保护
Saving Our Rivers
Once clear waterways now flow with industrial waste. A recent study found 60% of urban rivers are polluted, threatening aquatic life and drinking water safety.
The primary culprits are factory discharges and littering. Chemicals kill fish populations, while plastic waste forms floating garbage patches. These pollutants eventually enter the food chain.
Immediate actions are crucial. Authorities must strengthen water quality monitoring. Companies should adopt cleaner production methods. Citizens can participate in river clean-up events. Protecting waterways means safeguarding our future.
亮点分析:
- 数据支撑(60%)
- 专业表达(aquatic life, food chain)
- 比喻修辞(safeguarding our future)
四、备考锦囊
1. 熟记3-5组环境数据备用
2. 准备2个环保人物事例(如Greta Thunberg)
3. 掌握5种环保标志英文表达(可回收♻️→recyclable)
4. 重点练习"should/shouldn't"句式提建议
5. 背诵3个万能结尾句:
- Small steps today will lead to giant leaps tomorrow.
- The Earth is our only home; let's protect it like our mother.
- Green choices today promise a bluer sky tomorrow.
第二部分:中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背
1.(2025九年级·北京·专题练习)保护环境,从身边做起,作为学校的一份子,我们应该要有主人翁意识,为打造环保校园贡献自己的力量,请你结合上文,根据以下思维导图内容提示, 以“How to Make Our School Greener?”为题,写一篇小短文。
为打造环保校园
1.校园常见的环保问题。(乱丢垃圾,不节约用水……)
2.打造环保校园。(1...., 2....)
3.呼吁:行动起来,保护校园环境。
要求:
1.文中勿提及真实姓名和学校,80-100词左右(短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
2.短文必须包含要点提示中的所有信息;并在此基础上适当发挥;
3.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
There are many environmental problems in our school. For example,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.(24-25九年级上·山东聊城·期末)地球是我家,责任你我他。随着人们生活水平的不断提高,产生的垃圾也越来越多。为保护我们的环境,作为中学生的你在日常生活中该注意些什么?请以“How to be a green teenager”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:1.环境状况及危害;
2.你打算采取什么措施来保护环境;
3.你对于保护环境的看法。
注意:1.短文词数:80左右;
2.短文必须包含以上内容,但可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名或地名。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.(24-25九年级下·陕西西安·开学考试)“绿水青山就是金山银山”,这句话在今天的时代背景下显得尤为深刻。近年来,全球自然灾害频发,环境恶化的警钟已然敲响。地球,这片广袤无垠的蓝色星球,是全人类共同的家园,每个人都是命运共同体的一部分。假如你是李华,作为一名学生,应该为环境保护做出哪些贡献呢?请你写一篇演讲稿发出倡议,呼吁大家从小事做起,一起保护环境。
提示:
1.节约用水,节约能源;
2.学会垃圾分类;
3.绿色出行;
4.……
要求:
1.必须包含所给写作要点,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺;逻辑清晰,书写规范;
3.不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名、地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:sort garbage 垃圾分类
Let’s protect the environment.
Dear friends,
I’m a student from Grade 9. My name is Li Hua. The environment problems are getting more and more serious nowadays. As students, what should we do?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.(24-25九年级上·山东德州·期末)“中华民族具有5000多年连绵不断的文明历史,创造了博大精深的中华文化,为人类文明进步作出了不可磨灭的贡献。”(选自习近平总书记《在第十二届全国人民代表大会第一次会议上的讲话》)近几年来,我国在各领域(例如,新能源汽车等)更是取得了史诗般的成就。
学校正在举办“厉害了,我的国!”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示,以“China makes me feel surprised!”为题,写一篇英语短文。
注意:
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名;
2. 包含表中所有要点;
3. 至少表达出一条自己的观点;
4. 字迹工整,100字左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:新能源汽车new energy vehicles
China makes me feel surprised!
①Invention
the four great inventions of ancient China; the four great inventions of modern China
④Environment
more and more green industries; environmental policies and standards
②Education
fairer, higher quality, and more comprehensive (全面的) education
⑤Culture
the Terracotta Army, one of the eight wonders of the world; the Spring Festival, World Intangible Cultural Heritage (非物质文化遗产)
③Sport
the 2024 Paris Olympics, 40 gold medals, 27 silver medals, and 24 bronze medals; two Olympics and three Asia Games held in China
⑥…
The ancient Chinese civilization has attracted worldwide attention. In recent years, great changes have taken place in China and many achievements have also attracted the attention of the world.
The four great inventions of ancient China have played an important role in human civilization. And the new four great inventions of modern China are also world-famous.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
As Chinese, we are really proud. Also we feel surprised and excited for the strength of our motherland.
5.(24-25九年级上·北京门头沟·期末)地球是人类赖以生存的家园。让我们守护地球生态,共筑绿色未来。
某英文网站正在开展以“How to Be Green”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你平时的做法、理由以及感受。
提示词语:reduce, reuse, recycle, protect, proud
提示问题:
●What do you often do to be green?
●Why do you do so?
●How do you feel?
How to Be Green
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.(2024·山东德州·中考真题)纸袋在生活中被广泛使用。学校英语社团要开展主题调研成果展示活动,请你根据提示写一篇主题为“advantages and disadvantages of paper bags”的演讲稿,从不同角度辩证陈述其优缺点并说明原因,除提示内容外,须各补充一条,并简要概括。
Points
Sides & Reasons
Conclusion (结论)
environment protecting
1. friendly to the environment; recycled easily; 2. ...
1. a waste of wood; cut trees;
2. ...
experience of using
l. convenient to carry; light and thin;
2. ...
1. not strong enough to hold heavy things; easy to break;
2. ...
要求:
1. 语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3. 80~100词,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.
We’ve done a survey on “advantages and disadvantages of paper bags” and collected different ideas. On the point of environment protecting, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.(24-25九年级上·河南南阳·期中)假设你是某双语学校环保社团的成员李华,为倡导绿色环保新时尚,你校将举办以“创建绿色校园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据提示内容写一篇英语演讲稿,号召全体同学行动起来,共建绿色校园。
写作要求:
1) 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3) 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua, a member of the Environmental Protection Club. I want to talk about how we can all help make our school a greener place.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all, thanks for listening!
8.(2024·四川雅安·三模)每年的4月22日是世界地球日(Earth Day)。它专为环境保护而设立,目的是提高人们对于现有环境问题的意识,并动员每一个人都参与到环境保护中来,通过绿色低碳的生活改善地球的整体环境。
请以“The Greener, the Better”为题,写一篇80—100词的英语短文,分享你对环境保护的认识和感受。
内容要点:
(1)你对环境保护的认识和感受;
(2)你生活中发现的一个环境问题;
(3)你认为该如何改善这个问题?
(4)你将如何做出自己的贡献?
注意:
1.必须包括所有要点,可以适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
The Greener, the Better
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.(2024·安徽合肥·二模)如今旅游深受欢迎,但在旅游中我们常会看到一些不文明行为(uncivilized behaviors)。假设你是李华,请结合表格信息,以“Traveling in Good Manners”为题,写一篇短文向某英文报刊投稿,倡导文明旅游。
Uncivilized behaviors
Your opinions
Your advice
throw rubbish everywhere
impolite ...
...
pick flowers in a park
...
...
speak loudly in public places
...
...
...
...
...
注意:
1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Traveling in Good Manners
Dear editor,
Nowadays, traveling is getting more and more popular. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li hua
10.(2024·四川乐山·二模)2024年元旦,国家主席习近平讲话做出宣示: “我们要营造温暖和谐的社会氛围,拓展包容活跃的创新空间,创造便利舒适的生活条件,让大家心情愉悦,人生出彩、梦想成真。 ”鉴于此,学校的英语报正以“Doing Our Part”(从自身做起)为题举行征文活动,请根据下列表格提示的内容,用英语写一篇作文。
在家庭
①帮助父母做家务,让父母不要太累
4 分
②和父母多交流,可以更好地互相理解
4 分
在学校
①与同学互帮互助,建立友好环境
4 分
②努力学习,使梦想实现
4 分
在社会
①不要乱丢垃圾,让环境变得更美
4 分
②……
3 分
展望:我们每个人都从自身做起,世界将会更加美好!
2 分
要求:
1. 表达清楚,上下连贯;
2. 必须包括所有相关信息,可适当发挥;
3. 词汇:100 词左右,开头已给出,不计入字数;
4. 不得使用真实姓名、学校等。
Doing Our Part
As we have grown up, it’s time for us to do something for our family, school and society.
At home, we should ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11.(2024·四川内江·中考真题)假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Alan上周来你校参观。回去后,他给你发来邮件想了解一些信息。请根据以下内容,给他回复一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
I had a good time in your school last week. It is so beautiful and clean. I want to know as students,
1.how you make the school green;
2.how you keep the school clean;
3.how you reuse waste;
4.how you save energy.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Alan
参考词汇:plant种植;植物;environment环境;throw扔;bin垃圾桶;sort the rubbish 垃圾分类;turn off 关闭;tap 水龙头
注意:
(1)所写内容应包括以上邮件询问内容,并进行合理拓展;
(2)文章中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
(3)词数100词左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12.(2024·浙江杭州·模拟预测)某校学生会策划了主题为“Walk for Trees”的十公里徒步活动。假设你是该学生会成员,请写一篇英语短文,在校英语报上介绍该活动的内容、益处并给出相关建议。
要点提示如下:
WALK FOR TREES
Activities
Benefits (益处)
Suggestions
●walk for 10 kilometers
●raise money to plant more trees
● …
●be good for health
●…
●wear comfortable shoes
●…
注意:
1.短文必须包含表中所有信息,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 词数:80—100;短文首句仅供参考选择使用,不计入总词数。
On May 6th, we will have an activity called Walk for Trees.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13.(2024·云南昆明·一模)
How to Protect the Rainforests
提示:热带雨林在调节全球气候,防止水土流失,净化空气,保证全球生态循环有序进行等方面发挥着重要的作用。然而,由于人类乱砍滥伐和过度开荒,有很大一部分热带雨林已经遭受了严重的破坏。请以“How to Protect the Rainforests”为题,写一篇短文,谈一谈我们应该如何保护热带雨林。
要求:
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
2.文中不得使用真实的姓名、校名等,否则以零分计;
3.请将短文书写在答题卡上,写在试题卷上无效。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14.(2024·陕西西安·模拟预测)为倡导绿色环保新时尚,学校将开展以创建“绿色校园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Go green at school”为题,根据以下通知,号召全体同学行动起来,共建美好校园。
NoticeDear students,
Our school is not just a place where we come to study. It’s also our second home. A clean and comfortable campus (校园) makes it possible for us to enjoy learning. For this reason, our school will hold an English speech competition named Go green at school. Those who want to take part in it are required to finish the speech within three minutes according to the following information:
◆What problems are there in your school?
◆What is a clean and tidy school like?
◆What can you do to create a clean learning environment?
要求:
1. 表达清楚, 语法正确, 上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括通知中提到的所有要点内容, 并适当发挥;
3. 词数:不少于70词 (开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数) ;
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Go green at school
Dear students,
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school? Today it’s my great honor to give a speech about how to build a clean and beautiful campus.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your listening!
15.(2024·安徽合肥·三模)假设你是李辉。你校英文报近期正在开展“保护环境,从我做起”的主题活动,号召全体师生从小事做起,践行环保理念。请你根据下面的图示信息,写一份英文倡议书。
注意:
1.短文必须包含上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
3.词数80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
My fellow students,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your time!
16.(2024·湖南长沙·三模)假设你是李华,为提升学生的环保意识和动手能力,你校将于下周举办“旧物可循环,环境需守护”为主题的环保作品展(Eco-friendly Works Exhibition)。请根据以下图示,用英文给你的交换生好友John写一封电子邮件,介绍这项活动并邀请他参加。
要求:(1)短文必须思维导图中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)80词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
17.(2024·山东淄博·三模)最近雾霾天气较多,这是人类破坏环境造成的结果。保护环境,保卫家园是每个人的责任和义务。请你以“The Green Planet”为题写一篇不少于100词的英语短文,分析一下周围存在的环境问题,谈一下保护环境的主张和做法。
注意:
1.书写规范,表达连贯,可根据内容适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名;
短文的开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18.(2024·重庆北碚·二模)新一轮创建“全国文明城区”(build a national civilized city) 的活动已经拉开帷幕,创建文明城区,校英语广播站正以“What can we do to build a national civilized city?”为主题开展英语征文比赛。请提供至少两条切实可行的建议,并说明原因。
要求: 1. 80—100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
What can we do to build a national civilized city? As we all know, our city is building a national civilized city. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
19.(2024·浙江杭州·二模)假如你是李雷,上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息,写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。
What were on show
What they are made of/from
What you think
clothes
chairs
model planes
…
waste paper
plastic bottles
used wood and glass
…
creative
save …
…
注意:(1)短文须介绍至少两项展品,可以适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:110字左右。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
20.(2024·广东广州·二模)为提升公众环保意识,你校将组织主题为 Protect the Earth, Start from Now公益活动,同学们分组向市民宣传环保知识,请你写一封 e-mail 邀请英国交流生 Mike 参加活动,告知他你所参加的小组的两项具体活动。
Theme (主题): Protect the Earth, Start from Now
Time
June, 29th
Place
The People’s Park
Group
Group 1: Green Consumer
Group 2: Protect Animals
Group 3: Guard the Blue Sky
要求:
1、80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2、涵盖要求的内容并适当拓展。
Dear Mike,
Our school will hold an environmental protection activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Jia Ming
2
原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究!
1 / 1
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
$$
【社会热点类】
第5讲 环境保护主题类作文
第一部分:中考英语写作精讲
一、现象-问题-解决模板(Phenomenon-Problem-Solution)
1. 现象描述段
With the rapid development of..., ... has become increasingly serious.
(过渡句)Take...as an example, it is reported that...
(数据论证)According to a recent survey, ...% of...
常用句式:
- The problem of...has aroused wide public concern
- Shocking statistics show that...
- It's common to see...
2. 问题分析段
The root causes can be summarized as follows. Firstly,... Secondly,...
(影响论证)If this situation continues, it will lead to...
(举例说明)For instance,...
常用句式:
- Human activities are largely responsible for...
- The lack of environmental awareness is another key factor
- This not only...but also...
3. 解决措施段
To tackle this issue, joint efforts are needed.
(政府层面)The government should...
(个人层面)As individuals, we ought to...
(展望未来)Only by...can we...
常用句式:
- It's high time that stricter laws were implemented
- Simple daily actions can make a big difference
- Let's join hands to create a greener future
二、环保术语中英对照表
| 环境问题类 | 解决方案类 | 政策类 |
|------------|------------|--------|
| climate change 气候变化 | renewable energy 可再生能源 | carbon neutrality 碳中和 |
| plastic pollution 塑料污染 | waste sorting 垃圾分类 | sustainable development 可持续发展 |
| deforestation 森林砍伐 | low-carbon lifestyle 低碳生活 | environmental protection law 环保法 |
| water contamination 水污染 | eco-friendly products 环保产品 | green policy 绿色政策 |
| air quality index 空气质量指数 | energy conservation 节能 | emission standard 排放标准 |
| endangered species 濒危物种 | public transportation 公共交通 | environmental tax 环境税 |
三、分类押题范文
范文1:垃圾分类
Waste Sorting: A Small Step for Big Change
The problem of garbage disposal has reached alarming levels in cities. Statistics show that each person generates 1kg of waste daily, with less than 30% being recycled.
Three main factors contribute to this crisis. Excessive packaging creates unnecessary waste, while improper disposal leads to soil pollution. Most seriously, many citizens still mix different types of trash.
To address this, governments should install color-coded bins in communities. Schools ought to include environmental education in curricula. As individuals, we must develop sorting habits. Remember, every correctly sorted banana peel is a step towards a cleaner Earth.
亮点分析:
- 数据论证(1kg, 30%)
- 排比结构(Three main factors...)
- 呼吁式结尾(every...step)
范文2:低碳生活
Embracing Low-Carbon Lifestyle
Carbon emissions have increased by 50% compared to 2000 levels, making low-carbon living urgent. Many still rely heavily on private cars and disposable products.
This lifestyle causes multiple problems. It accelerates global warming and depletes natural resources. Air pollution from vehicles also damages public health.
Solutions are within reach. Cycling instead of driving reduces carbon footprint. Using reusable shopping bags prevents plastic waste. Even small acts like turning off lights matter. Together, these green choices will build an eco-friendly society.
亮点分析:
- 对比数据(50% increase)
- 动名词主语(Cycling...Using...)
- 递进式措施(small acts...together)
范文3:河流保护
Saving Our Rivers
Once clear waterways now flow with industrial waste. A recent study found 60% of urban rivers are polluted, threatening aquatic life and drinking water safety.
The primary culprits are factory discharges and littering. Chemicals kill fish populations, while plastic waste forms floating garbage patches. These pollutants eventually enter the food chain.
Immediate actions are crucial. Authorities must strengthen water quality monitoring. Companies should adopt cleaner production methods. Citizens can participate in river clean-up events. Protecting waterways means safeguarding our future.
亮点分析:
- 数据支撑(60%)
- 专业表达(aquatic life, food chain)
- 比喻修辞(safeguarding our future)
四、备考锦囊
1. 熟记3-5组环境数据备用
2. 准备2个环保人物事例(如Greta Thunberg)
3. 掌握5种环保标志英文表达(可回收♻️→recyclable)
4. 重点练习"should/shouldn't"句式提建议
5. 背诵3个万能结尾句:
- Small steps today will lead to giant leaps tomorrow.
- The Earth is our only home; let's protect it like our mother.
- Green choices today promise a bluer sky tomorrow.
第二部分:中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背
1.(2025九年级·北京·专题练习)保护环境,从身边做起,作为学校的一份子,我们应该要有主人翁意识,为打造环保校园贡献自己的力量,请你结合上文,根据以下思维导图内容提示, 以“How to Make Our School Greener?”为题,写一篇小短文。
为打造环保校园
1.校园常见的环保问题。(乱丢垃圾,不节约用水……)
2.打造环保校园。(1...., 2....)
3.呼吁:行动起来,保护校园环境。
要求:
1.文中勿提及真实姓名和学校,80-100词左右(短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
2.短文必须包含要点提示中的所有信息;并在此基础上适当发挥;
3.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
There are many environmental problems in our school. For example,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
How to Make Our School Greener?
There are many environmental problems in our school. For example, throw litter on the ground at school and don’t save water etc. In order to make our campus green, it is suggested that we students should do many things, which can be listed as follows.
How to Make Our School Greener? First of all, never destroy the flowers and trees in our school. Besides, we should keep the school environment neat and clean, thus throwing away the waste should be forbidden. Meanwhile, try to save water if necessary and never forget to turn off the lights in the daytime or when the classroom is empty. What’s more, it is also necessary for school to make some rules about making our campus green.
In short, whatever you do, please remember to lead a green and healthy life. If you understand it, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it. Let’s take action now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,指出学校存在的环境问题。
第二步,提出使学校更环保的具体建议,包括不破坏花草树木、保持校园整洁、节约用水、关灯以及学校制定相关规则等。
第三步,总结呼吁大家采取行动,过上绿色健康生活。
[亮点词汇]
①environmental环境的
②suggest建议;提议
③neat整洁的
④forbid禁止
⑤necessary必要的
[高分句型]
①What’s more, it is also necessary for school to make some rules about making our campus green. (不定式作主语)
②If you understand it, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it. (if引导的条件状语从句)
2.(24-25九年级上·山东聊城·期末)地球是我家,责任你我他。随着人们生活水平的不断提高,产生的垃圾也越来越多。为保护我们的环境,作为中学生的你在日常生活中该注意些什么?请以“How to be a green teenager”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:1.环境状况及危害;
2.你打算采取什么措施来保护环境;
3.你对于保护环境的看法。
注意:1.短文词数:80左右;
2.短文必须包含以上内容,但可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名或地名。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
How to be a green teenager
With the continuous improvement of people’s life, more and more rubbish is produced and we can see it everywhere. It is harmful to our environment. As a teenager, we should do something to protect it.
First, we’d better walk or ride a bike to school. Second, turn off the lights and water when we don’t need them. It saves money and causes less pollution. Third, before we buy something new, think whether it is really necessary because maybe the old one is just as good. Finally, divide our rubbish into plastic, glass, paper and rubber and recycle it, although it takes energy.
We can’t hope for rapid change, but if everyone starts to do something, the world will be saved. Remember: it is our duty to protect our environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示中给出的关键信息,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,介绍环境状况及危害,点明保护环境迫在眉睫;
第二步,介绍保护环境的具体措施;
第三步,呼吁大家行动起来保护环境,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more越来越多的
②had better do最好做
③turn off关掉
[高分句型]
①Second, turn off the lights and water when we don’t need them. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②We can’t hope for rapid change, but if everyone starts to do something, the world will be saved. (if引导的状语从句)
3.(24-25九年级下·陕西西安·开学考试)“绿水青山就是金山银山”,这句话在今天的时代背景下显得尤为深刻。近年来,全球自然灾害频发,环境恶化的警钟已然敲响。地球,这片广袤无垠的蓝色星球,是全人类共同的家园,每个人都是命运共同体的一部分。假如你是李华,作为一名学生,应该为环境保护做出哪些贡献呢?请你写一篇演讲稿发出倡议,呼吁大家从小事做起,一起保护环境。
提示:
1.节约用水,节约能源;
2.学会垃圾分类;
3.绿色出行;
4.……
要求:
1.必须包含所给写作要点,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺;逻辑清晰,书写规范;
3.不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名、地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:sort garbage 垃圾分类
Let’s protect the environment.
Dear friends,
I’m a student from Grade 9. My name is Li Hua. The environment problems are getting more and more serious nowadays. As students, what should we do?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Let’s protect the environment
Dear friends,
I’m a student from Grade 9. My name is Li Hua. The environment problems are getting more and more serious nowadays. As students, what should we do?
First of all, we are supposed to save water and energy in our daily life. Second, in order to reduce air pollution, it is a better way for us to go to school by bus, by bike or on foot. Third, we should learn how to sort garbage. If we divide the garbage into four kinds before putting it into the dustbins, our environment will be better. Last but not least, we also need to protect wild animals, because they are part of the environment.
How important it is for us to protect the environment! If we keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇倡议书,为书信文体;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据提示具体描述应该怎么做;
第二步,最后总结并发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to do应该做
②divide into把……分成……
③keep doing坚持做
[高分句型]
①If we divide the garbage into four kinds before putting it into the dustbins, our environment will be better. (条件状语从句)
②Last but not least, we also need to protect wild animals, because they are part of the environment.(原因状语从句)
4.(24-25九年级上·山东德州·期末)“中华民族具有5000多年连绵不断的文明历史,创造了博大精深的中华文化,为人类文明进步作出了不可磨灭的贡献。”(选自习近平总书记《在第十二届全国人民代表大会第一次会议上的讲话》)近几年来,我国在各领域(例如,新能源汽车等)更是取得了史诗般的成就。
学校正在举办“厉害了,我的国!”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示,以“China makes me feel surprised!”为题,写一篇英语短文。
注意:
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名;
2. 包含表中所有要点;
3. 至少表达出一条自己的观点;
4. 字迹工整,100字左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:新能源汽车new energy vehicles
China makes me feel surprised!
①Invention
the four great inventions of ancient China; the four great inventions of modern China
④Environment
more and more green industries; environmental policies and standards
②Education
fairer, higher quality, and more comprehensive (全面的) education
⑤Culture
the Terracotta Army, one of the eight wonders of the world; the Spring Festival, World Intangible Cultural Heritage (非物质文化遗产)
③Sport
the 2024 Paris Olympics, 40 gold medals, 27 silver medals, and 24 bronze medals; two Olympics and three Asia Games held in China
⑥…
The ancient Chinese civilization has attracted worldwide attention. In recent years, great changes have taken place in China and many achievements have also attracted the attention of the world.
The four great inventions of ancient China have played an important role in human civilization. And the new four great inventions of modern China are also world-famous.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
As Chinese, we are really proud. Also we feel surprised and excited for the strength of our motherland.
【满分优秀范文】
China makes me feel surprised!
The ancient Chinese civilization has attracted worldwide attention. In recent years, great changes have taken place in China and many achievements have also attracted the attention of the world.
The four great inventions of ancient China have played an important role in human civilization. And the four great inventions of modern China are also world-famous. Because they make people’s daily lives more convenient.
Recently, the government has offered fairer, higher quality and more comprehensive education to make everyone have more chances to get better education. In the 2024 Paris Olympics, Chinese athletes won 40 gold medals, 27 silver medals, and 24 bronze medals. That’s so amazing! Besides, two Olympics and three Asia Games were held in China successfully. Besides, we have achieved a lot in protecting the environment. Green industries is becoming more and more and many environmental policies and standards were carried out. In addition to the fact that the Terracotta Army is named one of the eight wonders of the world, here are pieces of good news. The Spring Festival, a traditional Chinese festival is listed as a World Intangible Cultural Heritage. China’s new energy vehicles are already far ahead in the world.
As Chinese, we are really proud. Also we feel surprised and excited for the strength of our motherland.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中我国在各领域的取得的史诗般的成就的介绍。适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总述在最近几年中国发生了巨大的变化,也取得了许多成就;
第二步,具体阐述我国在各领域取得的史诗般的成就。包括:发明、教育、运动、环境和文化等。
第三步,表达“作为中国人,我们真的很自豪”的感情。
[亮点词汇]
① played an important role发挥了重要作用
② the eight wonders of the world世界八大奇迹
③ far ahead遥遥领先
④ the strength of our motherland祖国的力量
[高分句型]
① And the four great inventions of modern China are also world-famous because they make people’s daily lives more convenient. (because引导原因状语从句)
② Besides, two Olympics and three Asia Games were held in China successfully. (一般过去时的被动语态)
5.(24-25九年级上·北京门头沟·期末)地球是人类赖以生存的家园。让我们守护地球生态,共筑绿色未来。
某英文网站正在开展以“How to Be Green”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你平时的做法、理由以及感受。
提示词语:reduce, reuse, recycle, protect, proud
提示问题:
●What do you often do to be green?
●Why do you do so?
●How do you feel?
How to Be Green
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
How to Be Green
Hello, I’m Li Hua. Being green is very important to me.
In my daily life, I often try to reduce waste by using fewer plastic bags and bottles. I also reuse things like bottles and paper whenever I can. Recycling is another way I help the environment. I sort my trash and make sure recyclable materials are properly disposed of. I do these things because I believe it’s our duty to protect the Earth. It’s the only home we have.
By being green, I feel proud that I’m doing my part to make the world a better place. I hope more people will join me in this effort.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态:主要运用“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开头以自我介绍引入话题,强调环保的重要性。
第二步,具体阐述。先介绍减少浪费的做法;再说明重复利用物品;接着讲述回收利用;之后阐述环保的原因,突出地球是唯一家园,每个人都有保护它的责任。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己践行环保的自豪感,并呼吁更多人参与。
[亮点词汇]
①reduce waste 减少浪费
②plastic bag 塑料袋
③reuse 重复使用
④recycling 回收利用
⑤sort trash 分类垃圾
⑥recyclable materials 可回收材料
⑦properly dispose of 妥善处理
[高分句型]
①Recycling is another way I help the environment.(定语从句)
②I do these things because I believe it’s our duty to protect the Earth.(because引导的状语从句)
6.(2024·山东德州·中考真题)纸袋在生活中被广泛使用。学校英语社团要开展主题调研成果展示活动,请你根据提示写一篇主题为“advantages and disadvantages of paper bags”的演讲稿,从不同角度辩证陈述其优缺点并说明原因,除提示内容外,须各补充一条,并简要概括。
Points
Sides & Reasons
Conclusion (结论)
environment protecting
1. friendly to the environment; recycled easily; 2. ...
1. a waste of wood; cut trees;
2. ...
experience of using
l. convenient to carry; light and thin;
2. ...
1. not strong enough to hold heavy things; easy to break;
2. ...
要求:
1. 语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3. 80~100词,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.
We’ve done a survey on “advantages and disadvantages of paper bags” and collected different ideas. On the point of environment protecting, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.
We’ve done a survey on “advantages and disadvantages of paper bags” and collected different ideas.
On the point of environment protecting, they are friendly to the environment and they are recycled easily. They can also be recycled. But they also have disadvantages. To make more paper bags, we need to cut down more forests. They also waste more wood. They are also relatively expensive. In my life, I often carry things in paper bags. They are more convenient to carry. They are also lighter and thinner. When we use them to carry things, it will be more dignified. But sometimes they’re not strong enough to hold heavy things. They are also very easy to break. Of course, if they encounter a lot of water, they can’t hold anything.
In conclusion, protecting the environment is the most important.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍纸袋在环境保护方面的优缺点;
第二步,介绍纸袋在使用体验上的优缺点;
第三步,最后书写小结。
[亮点词汇]
① be friendly to对……友好
② use sth to do sth使用某物做某事
③ in conclusion总之
[高分句型]
①When we use them to carry things, it will be more dignified. (when引导的时间状语从句)
② Of course, if they encounter a lot of water, they can’t hold anything.(if引导的条件状语从句)
7.(24-25九年级上·河南南阳·期中)假设你是某双语学校环保社团的成员李华,为倡导绿色环保新时尚,你校将举办以“创建绿色校园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据提示内容写一篇英语演讲稿,号召全体同学行动起来,共建绿色校园。
写作要求:
1) 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3) 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua, a member of the Environmental Protection Club. I want to talk about how we can all help make our school a greener place.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all, thanks for listening!
【满分优秀范文】:
Dear schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua, a member of the Environmental Protection Club. I want to talk about how we can all help make our school a greener place.
We can start by being careful with the things we use every day. Let’s use both sides of the paper. This way ,we can write more and use useless. Remember to turn off the tap after using it. Also, we can find ways to reuse water for different purposes. Finally, don’t forget to turn off the lights when leaving the classroom.
Besides, let’s think about how we can make our school cleaner. Our school has beautiful trees and flowers. Let’s take care of them. To keep the campus clean, please stop littering.
Remember, being green is not something we do just once. It’s something we do all the time. Let's join hands to create a more environmentally friendly campus.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材:本篇是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题干中要点,可适当增加细节。写作时,注意上下文的语意逻辑关系。
【写作步骤】
第一步,承接文章第一段,明确主题;
第二步,主要谈论为创建绿色校园,在日常的校园生活中的具体做法;
第三步,倡导大家从点滴小事做起,创建绿色校园。
【亮点词汇】
①be careful with对……小心
②turn off关闭
③reuse water循环用水
【高分句型】
①To keep the campus clean, please stop littering.(动词不定式表目的)
②Remember, being green is not something we do just once.(祈使句)
8.(2024·四川雅安·三模)每年的4月22日是世界地球日(Earth Day)。它专为环境保护而设立,目的是提高人们对于现有环境问题的意识,并动员每一个人都参与到环境保护中来,通过绿色低碳的生活改善地球的整体环境。
请以“The Greener, the Better”为题,写一篇80—100词的英语短文,分享你对环境保护的认识和感受。
内容要点:
(1)你对环境保护的认识和感受;
(2)你生活中发现的一个环境问题;
(3)你认为该如何改善这个问题?
(4)你将如何做出自己的贡献?
注意:
1.必须包括所有要点,可以适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
The Greener, the Better
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
The Greener, the Better
Nowadays environmental problems are becoming increasingly serious. People had a habit of littering, which has led to the pollution of the river. Even the bottom of the river is full of rubbish.
We must take immediate action to protect the environment where we live.
As for me, I can try to save energy and electricity, such as turning off the light in time. What’s more, I advise taking the subway or bus instead of riding in cars. Last but not least, it’s of great significance to stop using plastic bags and chopsticks.
If everyone can play a part in protecting the environment from now on, it will greatly change the situation and our home would become more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍你对环境保护的认识和感受,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍对环境保护的认识和感受以及生活中发现的环境问题;
第二步,介绍该如何改善这个问题;
第三步,发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①take action采取行动
②turn off关闭
③be of great importance很重要
④play a part in在做某事方面起作用
[高分句型]
①People had a habit of littering, which has led to the pollution of the river.(which引导的定语从句)
②If everyone can play a part in protecting the environment from now on, it will greatly change the situation and our home would become more beautiful.(if引导的条件状语从句)
9.(2024·安徽合肥·二模)如今旅游深受欢迎,但在旅游中我们常会看到一些不文明行为(uncivilized behaviors)。假设你是李华,请结合表格信息,以“Traveling in Good Manners”为题,写一篇短文向某英文报刊投稿,倡导文明旅游。
Uncivilized behaviors
Your opinions
Your advice
throw rubbish everywhere
impolite ...
...
pick flowers in a park
...
...
speak loudly in public places
...
...
...
...
...
注意:
1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Traveling in Good Manners
Dear editor,
Nowadays, traveling is getting more and more popular. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li hua
【满分优秀范文】
Traveling in Good Manners
Dear editor,
Nowadays, traveling is getting more and more popular. But we can often see some uncivilized behaviors during traveling. For example, some people throw rubbish everywhere when traveling to places of interest. It’s really impolite and also causes much inconvenience for other people. They should put rubbish into dustbins to protect the environment. Secondly, some people like picking flowers in the park just because they are beautiful. This is uncivilized and selfish. We can put up signs to remind people not to do that. Thirdly, there are people speaking loudly in public places. We should also remind them to lower their voice.
In my opinion, we should travel in good manners so that everyone can enjoy the beauty of the world.
Yours,
Lihua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并注意适当添加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对表格中的不文明行为进行描述介绍;
第二步,介绍自己对不文明行为的看法并给出改正建议;
第三步,号召大家文明旅行。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more越来越
②place of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①Some people throw rubbish everywhere when traveling at places of interest. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②We should travel in good manners so that everyone can enjoy the beauty of the world.(so that引导的从句)
10.(2024·四川乐山·二模)2024年元旦,国家主席习近平讲话做出宣示: “我们要营造温暖和谐的社会氛围,拓展包容活跃的创新空间,创造便利舒适的生活条件,让大家心情愉悦,人生出彩、梦想成真。 ”鉴于此,学校的英语报正以“Doing Our Part”(从自身做起)为题举行征文活动,请根据下列表格提示的内容,用英语写一篇作文。
在家庭
①帮助父母做家务,让父母不要太累
4 分
②和父母多交流,可以更好地互相理解
4 分
在学校
①与同学互帮互助,建立友好环境
4 分
②努力学习,使梦想实现
4 分
在社会
①不要乱丢垃圾,让环境变得更美
4 分
②……
3 分
展望:我们每个人都从自身做起,世界将会更加美好!
2 分
要求:
1. 表达清楚,上下连贯;
2. 必须包括所有相关信息,可适当发挥;
3. 词汇:100 词左右,开头已给出,不计入字数;
4. 不得使用真实姓名、学校等。
Doing Our Part
As we have grown up, it’s time for us to do something for our family, school and society.
At home, we should ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】:
Doing Our Part
As we have grown up, it’s time for us to do something for our family, school and society.
At home, we should help our parents do the housework so that they can have a good rest. In order to understand each other better, we should try to communicate more with our parents. At school, we must work hard in order to make our dreams come true. We should help our classmates to help build a friendly environment in the school. In society, do not throw rubbish everywhere. We should throw it into the dustbin. It can make our environment more beautiful. Don’t use plastic bags when going shopping. We’d better use shopping baskets.
In a word, if each of us does our part from now on, our world will become a better place .
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,引出本文主题;
第二步,根据提示材料介绍如何从自身做起;
第三步,总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①each other彼此
②come true实现
③in a word总之
[高分句型]
①At home, we should help our parents do the housework so that they can have a good rest.(目的状语从句)
②In order to understand each other better, we should try to communicate more with our parents.(动词不定式作目的状语)
11.(2024·四川内江·中考真题)假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Alan上周来你校参观。回去后,他给你发来邮件想了解一些信息。请根据以下内容,给他回复一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
I had a good time in your school last week. It is so beautiful and clean. I want to know as students,
1.how you make the school green;
2.how you keep the school clean;
3.how you reuse waste;
4.how you save energy.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Alan
参考词汇:plant种植;植物;environment环境;throw扔;bin垃圾桶;sort the rubbish 垃圾分类;turn off 关闭;tap 水龙头
注意:
(1)所写内容应包括以上邮件询问内容,并进行合理拓展;
(2)文章中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
(3)词数100词左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Dear Alan,
I am pleased to hear from you. I’m also glad you like our school. Firstly, our school plants many trees and flowers every year. Secondly, each of us students is a cleaner. If we see garbage, we will actively pick it up and put it in the bin. Thirdly, to avoid waste, we reuse textbooks. At the same time, we will also use old items to make some reusable items, such as using cans as pen holders. Finally, to save energy, we turn off the tap when brushing our teeth. When we leave the classroom, we turn off the power. These are some of our approaches. Do you usually do this too? I look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对收到对方的来信表示开心,并引出主题;
第二步,根据对方邮件的问题,逐一进行回答。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……的来信
②At the same time与此同时
[高分句型]
①If we see garbage, we will actively pick it up and put it in the bin.(条件状语从句)
②When we leave the classroom, we turn off the power.(时间状语从句)
12.(2024·浙江杭州·模拟预测)某校学生会策划了主题为“Walk for Trees”的十公里徒步活动。假设你是该学生会成员,请写一篇英语短文,在校英语报上介绍该活动的内容、益处并给出相关建议。
要点提示如下:
WALK FOR TREES
Activities
Benefits (益处)
Suggestions
●walk for 10 kilometers
●raise money to plant more trees
● …
●be good for health
●…
●wear comfortable shoes
●…
注意:
1.短文必须包含表中所有信息,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 词数:80—100;短文首句仅供参考选择使用,不计入总词数。
On May 6th, we will have an activity called Walk for Trees.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
On May 6th, we will have an activity called Walk for Trees. During this event, we will walk for 10 kilometers and raise money to plant more trees around our city. As we all know, walking is not only beneficial for our health because it helps enhance our endurance, but also raises environmental protection awareness among students. In order to ensure a pleasant experience, participants are advised to wear comfortable shoes. What’s more, it is recommended to bring enough water. One last thing, avoid overeating before the walk.
Join us and make a difference for our planet!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我们将举办‘为树而行’活动”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“活动、好处、建议等”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①raise money筹钱
②In order to为了
[高分句型]
Join us and make a difference for our planet!(祈使句)
13. (2024·云南昆明·一模)
How to Protect the Rainforests
提示:热带雨林在调节全球气候,防止水土流失,净化空气,保证全球生态循环有序进行等方面发挥着重要的作用。然而,由于人类乱砍滥伐和过度开荒,有很大一部分热带雨林已经遭受了严重的破坏。请以“How to Protect the Rainforests”为题,写一篇短文,谈一谈我们应该如何保护热带雨林。
要求:
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
2.文中不得使用真实的姓名、校名等,否则以零分计;
3.请将短文书写在答题卡上,写在试题卷上无效。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
How to Protect the Rainforests
Tropical rain forest plays an important role in regulating global climate, preventing soil erosion, purifying air and ensuring the orderly progress of global ecological cycle. So, it is necessary for us to protect them. Here are some suggestions to protect the rainforests.
Firstly, we should show and tell people about the importance of protecting the rainforests by some channels, such as advertisement, broadcast and school education etc. Secondly, we should do anything we can. When we eat, we can’t use disposable chopsticks or paper cups. We should use less paper and make sure not to waste paper. Thirdly, the government should also publish some regulations to protect the rainforests.
In a word, it is our duty to protect the rainforests. Let us try our best to leave a green home together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述热带雨林的重要作用,开门见山,引出话题。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“人人们了解保护热带雨林的重要性”、“做我们力所能及的的事情”以及“政府应该发布相关法律法规”展开,适当补充,丰富细节。
第三步,书写结语,倡导大家一起保护热带雨林。
[亮点词汇]
①plays an important role in在……中发挥重要作用
②global climate全球气候
③soil erosion水土流失
④disposable一次性的
⑤make sure确保
⑥indiscriminately任意地
⑦In a word换言之
[高分句型]
①Here are some suggestions to protect the rainforests. (倒装句)
②When we eat, we can’t use disposable chopsticks or paper cups. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③Let us try our best to leave a green home together. (祈使句)
14.(2024·陕西西安·模拟预测)为倡导绿色环保新时尚,学校将开展以创建“绿色校园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Go green at school”为题,根据以下通知,号召全体同学行动起来,共建美好校园。
NoticeDear students,
Our school is not just a place where we come to study. It’s also our second home. A clean and comfortable campus (校园) makes it possible for us to enjoy learning. For this reason, our school will hold an English speech competition named Go green at school. Those who want to take part in it are required to finish the speech within three minutes according to the following information:
◆What problems are there in your school?
◆What is a clean and tidy school like?
◆What can you do to create a clean learning environment?
要求:
1. 表达清楚, 语法正确, 上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括通知中提到的所有要点内容, 并适当发挥;
3. 词数:不少于70词 (开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数) ;
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Go green at school
Dear students,
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school? Today it’s my great honor to give a speech about how to build a clean and beautiful campus.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your listening!
【满分优秀范文】
Go green at school
Dear students,
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school? Today it’s my great honor to give a speech about how to build a clean and beautiful campus.
There are many problems in our school now. Sometimes the faucet is not turned off. Someone did not turn off the lights after leaving the classroom. We still have people who don’t save food. I think a clean and tidy school should be filled with birds chirping and flowers blooming everywhere. Everyone saves energy and cares for the environment. So we all need to take care of the environment.
On one hand, we should save resources. Firstly , we should save paper. We can reuse the textbooks and use both sides of the paper. Secondly, we should save water. We can take short showers and reuse water. Thirdly, we are supposed to save electricity. When we leave from the classroom, we can turn off the light . Also, we needn’t turn on all the lights if enough. On the other hand, we should reduce pollution. We can plant more trees and flowers, choose the public transport and use the cloth bags instead of plastic bags. If we take good care of our earth today, it will be more beautiful tomorrow.
Thank you for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文,为演讲稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生写作时应注意要按演讲稿要求写,不要遗漏表格通知中的校园环保问题,干净整洁的学校应有的样子,以及如何创建一个干净的学习环境等要点,根据实际情况可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,应承接短文开头,在第二段具体说明校园现在存在的环保问题,以及干净整洁的学校应有的样子;
第二步,具体阐述如何创建一个干净的学习环境的方法和建议;
第三步,书写结语,表达对听众的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
① turn off 关闭
② be filled with (被)充满,装满
③ take care of 照顾,照料
④ On one hand, … On the other hand, … 一方面……,另一方面……
⑤ turn on 打开
[高分句型]
① We still have people who don’t save food. (含有定语从句的复合句)
② When we leave from the classroom, we can turn off the light . (含有时间状语从句的复合句)
③ If we take good care of our earth today, it will be more beautiful tomorrow. (含有条件状语从句的复合句)
15.(2024·安徽合肥·三模)假设你是李辉。你校英文报近期正在开展“保护环境,从我做起”的主题活动,号召全体师生从小事做起,践行环保理念。请你根据下面的图示信息,写一份英文倡议书。
注意:
1.短文必须包含上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
3.词数80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
My fellow students,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your time!
【满分优秀范文】
My fellow students,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech.
Protecting the environment is crucial for our survival and the well-being of future generations. It helps to maintain the balance of nature and ensures that we have clean air, water, and soil.
There are many ways we can protect the environment. We can start by reducing waste, recycling, and reusing items. Conserving water and energy, planting trees, and using eco-friendly products are also effective methods.
I hope that each of us can take these small steps to make a big difference. Let’s work together to create a greener and healthier world.
Thanks for your time!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一和第三人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先强调了保护环境的重要性;
第二步,接着列举了几种保护环境的方法;
第三步,最后表达了希望大家认真采取这些措施,共同创造绿色未来的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be crucial for对……至关重要
②effective有效的
③make a big difference意义重大
[高分句型]
①There are many ways we can protect the environment.(定语从句)
②I hope that each of us can take these small steps to make a big difference.(宾语从句)
16.(2024·湖南长沙·三模)假设你是李华,为提升学生的环保意识和动手能力,你校将于下周举办“旧物可循环,环境需守护”为主题的环保作品展(Eco-friendly Works Exhibition)。请根据以下图示,用英文给你的交换生好友John写一封电子邮件,介绍这项活动并邀请他参加。
要求:(1)短文必须思维导图中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)80词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Dear John,
I am pleased to tell you that our school is going to hold the “Environmental Protection Exhibition”. The exhibition will be held in the school hall on June 23rd. At the exhibition, we will listen to a speech. In addition, we will also enjoy the beautiful works made of waste. The activity aims to help develop students’ life skills and raise everyone’s awareness of environmental protection. I believe it will be a great opportunity for learning and communication. I really hope you can join us. Remember to bring your own works if you come.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时及一般将来时;
③提示:写作要求已给出,考生注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直入主题告诉对方学校将举办环保作品展;
第二步,介绍作品展的时间、活动、意义等具体信息;
第三步,邀请对方参加。
[亮点词汇]
①be pleased to do很高兴做某事
②in addition此外
③aim to旨在
①I believe it will be a great opportunity for learning and communication.(省略that的宾语从句)
②Remember to bring your own works if you come.(if引导的条件状语从句)
17.(2024·山东淄博·三模)最近雾霾天气较多,这是人类破坏环境造成的结果。保护环境,保卫家园是每个人的责任和义务。请你以“The Green Planet”为题写一篇不少于100词的英语短文,分析一下周围存在的环境问题,谈一下保护环境的主张和做法。
注意:
1.书写规范,表达连贯,可根据内容适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名;
短文的开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】:
The Green Planet
Now our environment is becoming worse and worse. More and more people have realized the importance of protecting the environment. It’s our duty to protect our earth.
In my daily life, I always turn off the lights when I leave a room. While I am washing my hair, I usually turn off the shower. Besides, if I want to go shopping, I always take reusable bags instead of using plastic bags. I have decided to do more things to protect our earth, such as recycling books and paper. It’s good for us to ride bikes or walk to school. We can also plant more trees to improve the air around us.
In a word, I think one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it does make a difference. Let’s take action now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主。
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“如何保护地球的环境”并适当补充,使文章内容充实,行文应使用第一人称。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,点明环境越来越糟糕,以及环境的重要性。
第二步,具体阐述内容,介绍自己生活中是如何用具体行动保护环境的。
第三步,书写结语,号召大家行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①daily life日常生活
②make an effort做出努力
③decide to do决定做某事
[高分句型]
①I always turn off the lights when I leave a room.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it does make a difference.(省略that的宾语从句,no matter what引导的让步状语从句)
18.(2024·重庆北碚·二模)新一轮创建“全国文明城区”(build a national civilized city) 的活动已经拉开帷幕,创建文明城区,校英语广播站正以“What can we do to build a national civilized city?”为主题开展英语征文比赛。请提供至少两条切实可行的建议,并说明原因。
要求: 1. 80—100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
What can we do to build a national civilized city? As we all know, our city is building a national civilized city. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】范文:
What can we do to build a national civilized city?
As we all know, our city is building a national civilized city. It’s crucial for each of us to play a part. We can volunteer to clean up the streets, tidy, walking, or the subway, not only reduces congestion but also fosters a safer environment. Furthermore, we should offer the seats to the elderly, demonstrating respect and kindness. These small acts contribute to a warm and harmonious society.
Let’s pull together and take these steps towards creating a more civilized and inclusive city for all.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写作开头已给出,写作时直接写创建全国文明城市,我们能做的事情。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“去清理街道,整理,步行,或坐地铁以及其原因”和“给老人让座位以及其原因”展开,适当补充,丰富细节。
第三步,书写结语,重申主旨,倡议大家一起创建全国文明城市。
[亮点词汇]
①As we all know众所周知
②crucial关键的
③play a part发挥作用
④volunteer to do sth.志愿做某事
⑤clean up打扫
⑥not only…but also…不仅……而且……
⑦offer sth. to sb.提供某物给某人
[高分句型]
①It’s crucial for each of us to play a part. (It+be+adj.+for sb. to do sth.固定句型)
②Let’s pull together and take these steps towards creating a more civilized and inclusive city for all. (Let引导的祈使句)
19.(2024·浙江杭州·二模)假如你是李雷,上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息,写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。
What were on show
What they are made of/from
What you think
clothes
chairs
model planes
…
waste paper
plastic bottles
used wood and glass
…
creative
save …
…
注意:(1)短文须介绍至少两项展品,可以适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:110字左右。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”.
A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made from waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. They are glued together and painted in different colors.
I was most interested in a backpack for computers. It is made out of a pair of old jeans! With the zipper of jeans on the top, two pockets on two sides, the backpack looks both useful and fashionable. It even has a logo!
I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use. It really helps to save energy and build a greener future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时和一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,详细介绍一些展品的信息以及自己最感兴趣的展品;
第三步,介绍自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①a number of大量的
②be made of由……制成
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made from waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. (过去分词作定语)
②Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. (定语从句)
20.(2024·广东广州·二模)为提升公众环保意识,你校将组织主题为 Protect the Earth, Start from Now公益活动,同学们分组向市民宣传环保知识,请你写一封 e-mail 邀请英国交流生 Mike 参加活动,告知他你所参加的小组的两项具体活动。
Theme (主题): Protect the Earth, Start from Now
Time
June, 29th
Place
The People’s Park
Group
Group 1: Green Consumer
Group 2: Protect Animals
Group 3: Guard the Blue Sky
要求:
1、80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2、涵盖要求的内容并适当拓展。
Dear Mike,
Our school will hold an environmental protection activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Jia Ming
【满分优秀范文】
Dear Mike,
Our school will hold an environmental protection activity. The theme of the event is “Protect the Earth, Start from Now”, which aims to raise public awareness about environmental issues.
The activity is scheduled for June 29th at the People’s Park. Our school has been divided into several groups, each focusing on a specific aspect of environmental protection. I am part of Group 1, which is dedicated to promoting green consumption, and we will be educating the public on the importance of sustainable shopping habits. Additionally, we will hold educational workshops. We will be conducting workshops to educate people on the environmental impact of their consumption habits.
I believe this is a great opportunity for us to make a positive impact and contribute to our planet’s well-being. I sincerely hope you can join us for this event.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Jia Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:这是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态应为“一般现在时“和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点包括活动的主题、时间、地点、小组分配和具体活动内容。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点,并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。通过介绍即将举行的公益活动来引出邀请;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。详细介绍活动的主题、时间、地点以及你所在的小组和小组的具体活动内容;
第三步,书写结语。表达希望Mike能够参加的愿望,并结束邮件。
[亮点词汇]
① protect保护
② environmental环境的
③ participate参加
[高分句型]
The theme of the event is “Protect the Earth, Start from Now”, which aims to raise public awareness about environmental issues.(定语从句)
2
原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究!
1 / 1
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
$$