Unit4 Section Ⅳ Writing 写一篇关于非现金支付的文章-【正禾一本通】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书（外研版2019）

Section Ⅳ　Writing——写一篇关于非现金支付的文章 本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于非现金支付的文章。关于非现金支付利弊的文章属于议论文，在写议论文时，可以对某种事物从优势与弊端两个方面进行介绍，在写作的结尾陈述个人观点。写作中重要的是要做到立意清晰，论证充分，有说服力。 【写作指导】 Ⅰ.谨记写作范式 Ⅱ.积累话题素材 [常用词汇] ①conduct a discussion/survey 进行讨论/调查 ②advantages and disadvantages 利弊，优缺点 ③divide...into... 把……分成…… ④lead to 导致 ⑤get access to 获得，可以使用 ⑥personally speaking/as far as I'm concerned 就我个人而言 [出彩佳句] 第一部分：提出话题或现象 ①Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over online payments. 如今，人们普遍关注在线支付。 ②Nowadays，non­cash payments are becoming increasingly popular, with fewer and fewer people using cash. 如今，非现金支付越来越受欢迎，使用现金的人越来越少。 第二部分：阐述正反面 ③One of the advantages is that we don't have to carry cash while shopping and we needn't worry about..., which is more convenient for us. 优点之一是我们购物时不必携带现金，我们不必担心……这样对我们来说更方便。 ④Besides, the payment can be completed immediately so that we won't have to wait long in line. 此外，付款可以立即完成，这样我们就不用排很长的队了。 ⑤More importantly, it helps...and is more environmentally friendly. 更重要的是，它有助于……而且更环保。 ⑥However, every coin has two sides and its disadvantages are also obvious. 然而，任何事物都有两面性，它的缺点也是显而易见的。 ⑦It might not be as safe as we hope because sometimes... 它可能不像我们希望的那样安全，因为有时…… 第三部分：总结 ⑧To sum up, we should take its strengths and weaknesses into consideration. 总之，我们应该考虑它的优缺点。 ⑨In a word, we should make the best of its advantages and meanwhile try to avoid the disadvantages. 总之，我们应该充分利用它的优点，同时尽量避免它的缺点。 ⑩Only in this way can we make better use of it. 只有这样，我们才能更好地利用它。 【实战演练】 目前越来越多的人使用移动支付(mobile payment)，移动支付改变了人们的生活。请根据以下要点写一篇短文： 1．移动支付的优缺点； 2．你的看法。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Step 1　审题谋篇·定框架 定人称 以第三人称为主 定时态 以一般现在时为主 定框架 第一段：介绍社会现象； 第二段：从正反两方面说明该社会现象； 第三段：得出结论，表明自己的观点 Step 2　要点翻译·用佳句 1．现在，移动支付变得日益受欢迎，越来越少的人使用现金。 Nowadays, the mobile payment is becoming increasingly popular, and fewer and fewer people use cash. [升级]　用with 复合结构改写句1 Nowadays, the mobile payment is becoming increasingly popular, with fewer and fewer people using cash./ Nowadays, with the mobile payment becoming increasingly popular, fewer and fewer people use cash. 2．我们没必要带钱包。 There is no need for us to carry a wallet. 3．我们绝不会担心收到假币，也不用再去数零钱。 We will never worry about/be worried about/be concerned about getting fake notes or have to count change. [升级]　用倒装句改写句3 Never will we worry about/be worried about/be concerned about getting fake notes or have to count change. 4．移动支付很容易导致过度消费。 The mobile payment can easily lead to over­consumption. 5．只有这样，移动支付才能在我们的日常生活中发挥它的重要作用。 Only in this way can the mobile payment play its important role in our daily life. Step 3　连句成篇·达美文 Nowadays, the mobile payment is becoming increasingly popular, with fewer and fewer people using cash. There is no need for us to carry a wallet.Besides, never will we worry about getting fake notes or have to count change.In short, the mobile payment has greatly changed people's life in China.However, the mobile payment also has its disadvantages.First, phones can be stolen or hacked easily, which will make our bank accounts unsafe.Second, the mobile payment can easily lead to over­consumption. Personally, the mobile payment is really convenient for us all but we should be careful.Only in this way can the mobile payment play its important role in our daily life. 情感 描写 ①blank 　　　　 adj.无表情的，木然的 ②dizzy adj.头晕目眩的 ③sorrow 　　　 n.令人悲伤的事，不幸 ④frustration n．懊丧，懊恼，沮丧 动作 描写 ①purchase v.购买 ②discriminate v．不公正地区别对待，歧视 ③accumulate v．积累，积聚 ④hire v．(短期的)租用，租借 ⑤be in debt 欠债 ⑥interfere with 妨碍，阻止 ⑦go into debt 陷入债务之中，负债 ⑧rent out 出租(房屋、房间、土地等) 人物 描写 ①guidance n.指导，引导 ②consultant n．顾问 ③conventional adj.传统的，常规的 ④mild adj.不浓烈的，淡的 ⑤freshman n.(高中或大学的)一年级学生 ⑥enterprising adj.有创业精神的;有事业心的; 有进取心的 [语段情景用]　小女孩家庭负债累累，路过面包店时，她感到快要饿晕了。然而她找不到去买一片面包的钱…… The little girl was very poor and her family 1.was heavily in debt (负债累累).Walking past the bakery，she felt so hungry and 2.a little dizzy (有点头晕).However，she couldn't find money to buy(用本单元词汇替换黑体词汇：3.purchase) a piece of bread and she was full of 4.frustration and sorrow (沮丧和悲伤).She hated theft.She told herself that when she had money，she would pay back.She held out her hand，grabbed the bread，and was about to turn around 5.when she found the owner standing in front of her (发现店主站在她面前).Her mind went empty (用本单元词汇替换黑体词汇： 6.blank)，and she had no idea how to respond.However，the owner told her the bread was put there for customers to have a taste and requested her to taste and make a comment! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$