Unit3 Section Ⅳ Writing 写一封推荐景点的信件-【正禾一本通】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书（外研版2019）

Section Ⅳ　Writing——写一封推荐景点的信件 本单元的写作任务是写一封推荐景点的信件。正文通常包括三段：开头段说明要推荐的景点；主体段说明推荐原因，并进一步介绍其地理位置、特点或推荐理由等；结尾段发出邀请。其中，第二段为写作重点，要进行适当拓展，要注意思路清晰和要点之间的独立性；要合理利用衔接词，用词要得体，语气要恰当。 【写作指导】 Ⅰ.谨记写作范式 Ⅱ.积累话题素材 [常用词汇] ①at one's request　　　　 应某人的要求 ②recommend sth.to sb. 向某人推荐某物 ③date back to 追溯到 ④ be considered as 被认为是 ⑤be located in/on 位于 ⑥have a history of 有……的历史 ⑦an unforgetable trip 一次难忘的旅行 ⑧have a good time 玩得愉快 [出彩佳句] 第一部分：引出话题，点明推荐的景点 ①Learning that you are coming to visit China，I would like to recommend several places of interest to you. 得知将来中国访问，我想向你推荐几处名胜。 ②Delighted to know that you are traveling in Shanghai, I think it a good choice to visit the Huangpu River. 很高兴得知你正在上海旅游，我认为参观黄浦江是个不错的选择。 ③I'm more than delighted to know you'll be travelling to China. 得知你要去中国旅行，我非常高兴。 ④Of its numerous cultural centres, the city of Luoyang is highly recommended. 在众多文化中心中，洛阳市非常值得推荐。 第二部分：说明推荐理由 ⑤It is amazing that the ancient people were able to build such a grand construction. 令人吃惊的是，古人居然能够建造出如此宏伟的建筑物。 ⑥Located in central China's Henan Province, Luoyang stands out for its prosperous cultural heritage. 洛阳位于中国中部的河南省，以其丰富的文化遗产而闻名。 ⑦Besides its historical status, Luoyang is also known for delicious local cuisine. 除了历史地位，洛阳还以美味的当地菜肴而闻名。 第三部分：结束语 ⑧If you need further information, don't hesitate to contact me. 如果你需要更多信息，随时联系我。 ⑨I will be overjoyed if you can take my recommendation into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的建议，我会非常高兴。 【实战演练】 (2024·青岛二中高二下期末)假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Jerry将到北京进行为期一周的旅游，发邮件向你了解相关信息。请你回复邮件并给出建议，内容包括： 1．推荐北京的景点(至少两处)； 2．表达祝愿。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Step 1　审题谋篇·定框架 定人称 以第一人称为主 定时态 以一般现在时为主 定框架 开头：引出话题； 主体：推荐旅游景点及推荐理由； 结尾：总结全文，表达祝愿。 Step 2　要点翻译·用佳句 1．得知你要去北京度假，我很乐意给你一些建议。 Knowing that you're going to Beijing for a vacation, I'm more than pleased to give you some advice． 2．我建议你去的第一个地方是长城。 The first place I recommend you to go is the Great Wall. 3．它作为古代中国文明的象征而著名，也是世界上最古老最壮观的人造景观之一。 It is known as a symbol of ancient Chinese civilization and one of the world's oldest and most magnificent man­made scenes. 4．它是一个必去的地方。 It is a must­go place． [升级]　用过去分词短语作状语合并句3和句4 Known as a symbol of ancient Chinese civilization and one of the world's oldest and most magnificent man­made scenes，it is a must­go place. 5．下一处你不能错过的名胜是颐和园——中国最大、保存最好的皇家园林。 The next place of interest you cannot miss is the Summer Palace—the largest and best­preserved royal garden in China. 6．在颐和园你可以体验多元的中国文化。 In the Summer Palace, you can experience diverse Chinese cultures． [升级]　用非限制性定语从句合并句5和句6 The next place of interest you cannot miss is the Summer Palace—the largest and best­preserved royal garden in China，where you can experience diverse Chinese cultures. Step 3　连句成篇·达美文 Dear Jerry， Knowing that you're going to Beijing for a vacation，I'm more than pleased to give you some advice. The first place I recommend you to go is the Great Wall.Known as a symbol of ancient Chinese civilization and one of the world's oldest and most magnificent man­made scenes, it is a must­go place.The next place of interest you cannot miss is the Summer Palace—the largest and best­preserved royal garden in China, where you can experience diverse Chinese cultures. I sincerely hope that my recommendation can be of some help to you.May you have an unforgettable tourist experience! Yours, Li Hua 环境 描写 ①gateway n.通向……的门户 ②oasis n.(沙漠中的)绿洲 ③statue n.雕像；塑像 ④mural n.壁画 ⑤temple n.庙宇，寺院 ⑥glorious adj.辉煌的 ⑦grotto n．小洞穴 ⑧peak n．高峰，顶点 ⑨enormous adj.巨大的；庞大的 动作 描写 ①boast v.(地方、机构等)自豪地拥有 (好的事物) ②strengthen v.加强 人物 描写 ①scholar n.学者 ②shepherd n.牧羊人 ③historian n.历史学家 ④genius n．天才，天赋 [语段情景用]　我出生在一个牧民家庭，但我想成为一名历史学家…… Since I was born into a family of shepherds，my father 1.took it for granted that I would be a shepherd (理所当然地认为我会成为一名牧羊人)，but I didn't think so.When I was a teenager，I watched a TV programme—Dunhuang and Its 2.Glorious (glory) History and from then on a thought crept into my mind that I wanted to become a 3.historian (history).My father happened to take me to Dunhuang once，and it was then that I 4.strengthened my determination (坚定了我的决心).The murals and the statues in the grottoes were very attractive to me.Although I am not an intelligent person(用本单元词汇替换黑体词汇：5.a genius)，I 6.hold the firm belief that (坚信) where there is a will，there is a way. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$