Unit2 Section Ⅳ Writing 概要写作-【正禾一本通】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书（外研版2019）

Section Ⅳ　Writing——概要写作 本单元的写作任务是概要写作，考查的是考生在对他人的信息在充分理解的基础上进行概括表达的能力。完成一篇概要写作需要四个步骤： 第一步：读懂原文，把握大意 在阅读过程中，考生需要准确把握文章大意，弄清不同体裁的文章的内部逻辑关系。阅读的同时，抓住文章的中心，透彻理解全文。 第二步：定位主题句，找到关键信息点 在读懂原文、把握大意的基础上，考生接下来需要逐段定位每个段落的主题句并以提纲的形式记录下来。 第三步：组织语言，转换表达 考生列出主题句和关键信息点后，需要开始组织语言、转换表达。 第四步：组句成篇，认真誊写 根据文章逻辑关系将各句和相关信息联系起来，使之构成一篇短文，并且要字迹清晰，认真誊写。 【实战演练】 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 There are many good reasons for adding recycling to your routine，ranging from a personal level to a global advantage.Recycling your waste makes you more responsible in the way you use and dispose of it.As a result，people end up saving a considerable amount of money while also saving the planet.Individuals，governing bodies and companies can take pride in minimizing their waste as they are helping to reduce global environmental damage and making this earth a better place. Apart from the environmental benefits，think of the employment that it can generate.You put your waste in different bins.The manpower involved in the logistics and processing of your waste is considerable and thus you are helping to keep people in jobs.What could be more helpful in tough economic times as now than keeping people employed? That is not all of the advantages of recycling.Many charities and community groups raise money through reusing and recycling goods.Your city has many charity shops that will take your unwanted clothes，electronics，furniture and other household items to resell as income for these non­profit organizations and these donations are also tax deductible for you.Some other not­for­profit charities will deliver such clothing and other items to underdeveloped communities around the globe.So，think of the people in need in your local community and in other nations before you throw away all those unused or uneaten stuff into the trash can next time. When we talk about recycling household and workplace things，we tend to ignore or are less aware of how to deal with the electrical and electronic waste.E­waste is valuable as a source of secondary raw material but poisonous if disposed of improperly.Due to rapid technology development，obsolescent items have created a fast growing mass of electronic waste around the globe. 【写作步骤】 第一步：读懂原文，抓住大意 本文是说明文，从个人和全球两个层面说明了回收利用的益处。全文共分为四段，因此确定需要归纳的要点为四个。 第二步：定位主题句，找到关键信息点 主题句1 ①There are many good reasons for adding recycling to your routine，ranging from a personal level to a global advantage. ②Individuals，governing bodies and companies can take pride in minimizing their waste as they are helping to reduce global environmental damage and making this earth a better place. 主题句2 Apart from the environmental benefits，think of the employment that it can generate. 主题句3 Many charities and community groups raise money through reusing and recycling goods. 主题句4 E­waste is valuable as a source of secondary raw material but poisonous if disposed of improperly. 第三步：组织语言，转换表达 请运用同义句转述或句子重构来替换以上主题句。 要点1：Recycling is beneficial to the environment in terms of not only every individual but also the overall planet. 要点2：It can also help create jobs and keep people employed，generating employment. 要点3：Charities and community groups can help those in need through people's recycling of goods. 要点4：We should also pay more attention to the problem of e­waste. 第四步：组句成篇，认真誊写 Recycling is beneficial to the environment in terms of not only every individual but also the overall planet.It can also help create jobs and keep people employed，generating employment.In addition，charities and community groups can help those in need through people's recycling of goods.We should also pay more attention to the problem of e­waste. 动作 描写 ①anticipate　　 v.期待；预期 ②weaken v.(使)虚弱 ③cram v.挤满 ④lean v.倚，靠 ⑤possession n.财物，财产 ⑥possess vt.拥有；具有；支配 ⑦recognition n.承认；认可；认出 ⑧recognize v.辨认出；承认；意识到 人物 描写 ①pessimistic adj.悲观的；悲观主义的 ②abnormal adj.不正常的，反常的 ③despair n.绝望 ④instinctively adv.本能地 ⑤absurd adj.荒唐的，愚蠢的 其他描写词汇 ①widespread adj.广泛流传的；分布广的 ②outstretched adj.张开的，伸开的 ③transparent adj.透明的 [语段情景用]　在吉米的酒吧里，一位女士声称她丢了钱包，吉米是如何帮助失主找到的呢？ Jimmy's bar was crammed 1.with people.Suddenly，a woman claimed her wallet was lost，inside which was her most important 2.possession (possess)—a wedding ring.She was 3.in despair (陷入了绝望).Jimmy searched cameras.A boy named Oliver 4.was recognized (recognize).Jimmy leaned back in his chair，5.lost in thought (陷入沉思).It's time to do something，he thought.Finally he found Oliver and asked 6.with his hand outstretched (伸出手，with复合结构)，“Would you like to work in my bar？” The boy widened his eyes，surprise written over his face.“Yes，Jimmy！I will work as hard as you expect (用本单元词汇替换黑体词汇： 7.anticipate).And...sorry for taking the wallet，” Oliver responded with his head lowered. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$