高中建议信写作How to write a letter of advice 课件-2025届高三下学期英语一轮复习专项

2021/3/1 1 How to write a letter of advice Listen carefully and find out what Mary’s problems are. Problems in our growth(成长) feel sleepy in class fight with friends play too much phone parents friends daily life school work ... What is the advice letter? Problems and advice 假定你是李华，请阅读笔友Mike的邮件并回复。给他至少3条建议且说明理由。 Dear Li Hua, Is everything going well with you? I have to share a room with my little brother, and he’s driving me mad! He has a habit of playing the guitar when I’m studying, and he always takes my things without asking. I try to keep my room tidy, but he doesn’t. I love my brother, but sometimes he’s making me so angry! What should I do? Would you please give me some advice? Yours, Mike tense：一般现在时 person：第二人称 topic：Give advice Tip1: Figure out the writing purpose before you start. 1 2 3 outline part 1 part 2 part 3 I am writing to give you some advice on.....(表明目的） Tip 2: Figure out what should be written in each part. I’m so sorry to hear that you have such a problem. Now, I'd like to give you some suggestions. （给出建议） I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help for you（希望建议有用） Read and choose 1. If you follow（听从）my advice, your problems will be solved (解决) soon. 2. I believe（相信） that if you follow my advice, you'll get on well （相处好）with your little brother. Please let me know how you get on（进展）. Tip3:Use proper tone. outline part 1 part 2 part 3 Showing writing purpose(Beginning) Showing expectation(Ending) Giving advice(Body) How? 首段常用句式：表明意图，称述理由。 1. I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my suggestions about how to 很高兴收到你的来信，询问我关于......的建议。 2. I am sorry to hear that you are having difficulty with your 很遗憾你在.......方面有困难。 3.I have learned that you have some trouble in....after reading your letter 阅读了你的信件之后，我了解到你在....上遇到了困难 I’m writing to offer you some advice on.... 我写信来是为了向你提供关于......的建议 中间段常用句式：针对具体情况提出建议。 1. Firstly, Why not do ... If you do this首先，为什么不...?如果你这么做 2. Secondly, it would be a good idea if you...其次，如果你.....将是个好主意 3. Thirdly/last but not least, You’d better do...最后，你最好做... 4. It’s necessary(有必要的) to do... 做...是有必要的 5. I advise you to do.../I suggest doing... 我建议你做... 1.I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration 如果你考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激 3. 结尾段：礼貌地总结或表示期盼回复。 2.I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 我希望你会发现这些建议是有用的 Conjunctions(连接词) for listing points Firstly,... Secondly,... Finally,... To begin with,... In addition,... Last but not least,... In the first place,... What’s more,... In the end,... First of all,... Besides,... At last,... 假定你是李华，请阅读笔友Mike的邮件并回复。给他至少3条建议且说明理由。 Dear Li Hua, Is everything going well with you? I have to share a room with my little brother, and he’s driving me mad! He has a habit of playing the guitar when I’m studying, and he always takes my things without asking. I try to keep my room tidy, but he doesn’t. I love my brother, but sometimes he’s making me so angry! What should I do? Would you please give me some advice? Yours, Mike What should Mike do when his little brother takes his things without asking? Is Mike's little brother allowed to play the guitar? If yes,when? 1 2 3 Discussion How can Mike make a deal with his little brother? 假定你是李华，请阅读笔友Mike的邮件并回复。给他至少3条建议且说明理由。 Dear Li Hua, Is everything going well with you? I have to share a room with my little brother, and he’s driving me mad! He has a habit of playing the guitar when I’m studying, and he always takes my things without asking. I try to keep my room tidy, but he doesn’t. I love my brother, but sometimes he’s making me so angry! What should I do? Would you please give me some advice? Yours, Mike 1 2 3 tense：一般现在时 person：第二人称 Dear , I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my suggestions about . Now, I'd like to . Firstly, Why not Secondly, it will be a good idea if you . Last but not least, You’d better_______ All in all,I hope you will find these suggestions useful. , . Yours, Li Hua 建议信写作模板 维度 评分标准 分数 内容（5分） 结构完整、信息齐全 语言（5分） 语言准确、好词好句 逻辑（5分） 逻辑正确、衔接自然 Exchange your draft with your partner Dear Mike, I’m so sorry to hear that you have such a problem. Now, I'd like to give you some suggestions. First of all, you can have a communication with your little brother and tell him to play the guitar when you aren’t studying. Second, it's necessary for you to tell him not to take others’things without asking because it’s not polite. Third, it's a good idea to take turns to do some cleaning to let him keep good habits. All in all, I believe that if you follow my advice, you'll get on well with your little brother. Please let me know how you get on. Yours, Li Hua What makes a good letter of advice? 假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己是高一的学生，在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。 建议:1.上课认真听课，课后及时复习 2.大声朗读 3.看英语电影和听英语歌 2021/3/1 18 Dear Li Hua, I'm sorry to hear that you are having difficulty in learning English after reading your letter. I am writing to give you some advices. My suggestions are as follows. Firstly, Why not listen to the teachers carefully in the class?. Secondly, the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it. In addition , It’s necessary to speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can im your listening and speaking abilities. Last but not least, you’d better read English books before the class and after the class. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 2021/3/1 19 32352.0 $$