Unit4 Section Ⅳ Writing——续写故事-【正禾一本通】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第三册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书（外研版2019）

Section Ⅳ　Writing——续写故事 本单元的写作任务是续写故事，是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合，综合考查学生语言表达能力、思维以及创新能力的题型。故事一般有环境、人物、情节以及文学的艺术性。在体裁上属于记叙文，情节的发展多以时间、地点的转移为线索，写作步骤如下： 【典例研析】 阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was in summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm，”he said.After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me.I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Don't be late for supper，”Uncle Paul cried.“And keep to the track so that you don't get lost！”“OK！”my dad cried back.After a while, Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colours of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 【写作步骤】 第一步　通读全文，理清脉络 Who I, Dad, Uncle Paul, Aunt Tina, Ryan and Kyle When an afternoon in summer Where in the mountains of the Wild West What My dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. Why I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride... How After a while, Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight...It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 第二步　依据首句，构思框架 Paragraph 1 小兔子跳到马前。担心弄伤兔子， 作者竭力牵住马。马开始惊慌失措地跑了起来。一切都太突然， 作者十分害怕。作者照父亲的说法牵住缰绳， 马才慢慢停了下来。等到下马时， 作者发现找不到原来的路，他们真的迷路了。 Paragraph 2 天黑了下来， 又迷路了。又饿又累， 作者担心真的找不到回去的路。作者大声喊叫， 但没有回应。父亲有点儿担心， 提醒作者保持冷静。听到了河的流水声， 作者想了想，觉得可以沿着河流找到回去的路。不久他们就看到了远处的灯光。他们安全了。这真是以前没有经历过的一个刺激的假期。 第三步　增加细节，展开续写 1．我担心会伤害到这个可爱的小动物，我不假思索地大叫一声，让马停下来。(形容词作状语) Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.[动作＋心理描写] 2．但是， 在我们跳下马来之前， 我们发现我们已经偏离了走过的路， 迷失了方向。 But before we jumped off the horses, we found that we had been off the beaten track and got lost.[动作描写] 3．我一直大声呼救，希望有人能听到我的喊声，但是没有回应。(分词短语作状语) I kept shouting for help, hoping my shouts could be heard by someone, but there was no reply.[动作描写] 第四步　检查优化，整洁誊写 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.However, it became scared and started to run like crazy.All these coming without warning, I was seized by fear. “Don't let go of the rope! Keep calm！” yelled Dad. I followed what he told me to do. To my relief, it stopped slowly.But before we jumped off the horses, we found that we had been off the beaten track and got lost. We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back.I kept shouting for help, hoping my shouts could be heard by someone, but there was no reply.Dad sounded a little worried as he reminded me to keep calm.It was then that my mind raced.“Listen, Dad, the rushing river water，”I shouted excitedly.“We can return to the farm house down the river.”Before long, we caught sight of the lights in the distance.We knew we were safe.What a thrilling vacation we had, like never before! 人物 描写 ①assistant 　　　 n.助手 ②victim n．受害者 ③capacity n．能力 ④capable adj.有能力的 ⑤agile 　　 　　　 adj.敏捷的，灵活的 ⑥desperate adj.拼命的；绝望的；渴望的 ⑦immoral adj.不道德的 动作 描写 ①analyse v.分析 ②assess v．评价；评定 ③assist v．帮助 ④bank on 指望，依靠 ⑤demand v.要求 ⑥frown v．皱眉 ⑦on the horizon 将要发生 ⑧regulate vt.控制；管理 描写 词汇 ①potentially adv.潜在地 ②tightly adv.紧紧地 ③bound adj.可能的；注定的 ④consistent adj.一致的；一贯的 ⑤artificial adj.人造的；人工的 [语段情景用]　随着科技的发展，人工智能得到了广泛应用…… With the development of science and technology，1.artificial intelligence has been widely used (人工智能已经得到广泛应用) in various fields，and has become an excellent 2.assistant (assist) to human beings.Intelligent robots can be seen everywhere in our life.People increasingly depend on (用本单元词块替换黑体词块：3.bank on) artificial intelligence，so some people think that the world of artificial intelligence is about to happen (用本单元词块替换黑体词块：4.on the horizon).However，artificial intelligence also has potential dangers and faults.5.If not regulated (如果管理不当，if省略句)，it is 6.bound to do some illegal or immoral things (注定要做一些违法或不道德的事情).When people 7.are desperate for (非常渴望) the freedom，convenience and rapidity brought by artificial intelligence，they also require(用本单元词汇替换黑体词汇：8.demand) that its negative effects should be eliminated. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$