Unit2 Section Ⅳ Writing——介绍具有工匠精神的人-【正禾一本通】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第三册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书（外研版2019）

Section Ⅳ　Writing——介绍具有工匠精神的人 高考中有关人物介绍的常见书面表达主题是：介绍同学、朋友、老师、父母、名人等。本单元侧重介绍大国工匠式人物，属于说明文。写作时应注意以下两个方面： 1．写作思路：概括介绍人物的基本情况→介绍人物品质，叙述生平事迹→评价人物形象 2．时态选用：时态多用一般过去时，也可灵活穿插使用其他时态。 【写作指导】 Ⅰ.谨记写作范式 Ⅱ.积累话题素材 [常用词汇] ①first­ever adj.首次的 ②innovation n．创新；改革 ③prominent adj.显著的，突出的 ④intelligent adj.聪明的；有才智的 ⑤craftsman n．工匠 ⑥profound adj.意义深远的 ⑦ever­lasting adj.永恒的 ⑧devote oneself to 献身于 ⑨maintain a peaceful mind 保持平和的心态 ⑩be popular with 受欢迎 ⑪be born in a poor family 出生在一个贫穷的家庭 ⑫a means of earning a living 谋生手段 ⑬all walks of life 各行各业 ⑭think outside the box 创造性思考 ⑮the spirit of craftsmanship 工匠精神 ⑯pass down 把……往下传 ⑰acquire in­depth knowledge of 深入了解 ⑱by trial and error 反复试验 ⑲be honoured as 被尊为 ⑳play a very important role in... 在……中起着非常重要的作用 [出彩佳句] 开头语部分常用表达 ①The popular object is made by an old craftsman named... 这个受欢迎的物品是由一位名叫……的老工匠制作的。 ②When he/she was very young, he/she began to learn... 当他/她很小的时候，他/她就开始学习…… ③When it comes to a person with the spirit of craftsmanship, ...springs to mind. 说到一个有工匠精神的人，……出现在脑海中。 主体部分常用表达 ①He/She had much difficulty (in) improving this skill, but he/she never... 他/她在提高这项技能方面遇到很大的困难，但他/她从来没有…… ②For craftsmen, they need knives and gravers of various types to make complicated patterns. 对于工匠来说，他们需要各种类型的刀和雕刻器来制作复杂的图案。 ③No mistake can be made during the process, otherwise the work would fail. 在这个过程中不能犯任何错误，否则工作就会失败。 结尾部分常用表达 ①It was the qualities of diligence, innovation...that made him/her... 是勤奋、创新的品质使他/她成为…… ②Successful as he/she is, he/she seldom cares about the fame. 尽管他/她很成功，但他/她很少关心名气。 ③His/Her spirit of craftsmanship is ever­lasting. 他/她的工匠精神是永恒的。 【实战演练】 你校英文社近日将举办分享活动，邀请同学们介绍一位具有工匠精神的人。请你根据下列汉语提示用英语写一篇发言稿。 1．毕昇，北宋人，中国发明家，活字印刷术(movable­type printing)的发明者。 2．受雇于一家印刷厂，深知雕版印刷术(woodblock printing)的局限性。 3．发明活字印刷术，这一创新对书籍的出版产生很大影响。 4．对中国古代印刷术影响深远，被誉为“印刷鼻祖”。 注意：词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)。 Dear fellow students， 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Thank you. Step 1　审题谋篇·定框架 定人称 以第三人称为主 定时态 以一般过去时为主 定框架 第一部分：总体介绍该人物(生活时代、职业等)； 第二部分：介绍其主要贡献； 第三部分：简要评价。 Step 2　要点翻译·用佳句 1．这个人就是毕昇，他在北宋时期发明了活字印刷术。 This person is Bi Sheng.He invented the movable­type printing during the Northern Song Dynasty. [升级]请用定语从句改写句1。 This person is Bi Sheng, who invented the movable­type printing during the Northern Song Dynasty. 2．毕昇受雇于一家印刷厂，对雕版印刷有深入的了解。 Bi Sheng was employed in a printing shop and acquired in­depth knowledge of woodblock printing. 3．他深知雕版印刷术的局限性，跳出固有的思考框架，反复实验，从而创造了活字印刷术。 He knew the limitations of woodblock printing, so he thought outside the box and created the movable­type printing by trial and error. [升级]请用现在分词改写句3。 Knowing the limitations of woodblock printing, he thought outside the box and created the movable­type printing by trial and error. 4．这一创新导致了书籍的首次大规模生产。 This innovation led to the first­ever mass production of books． 5．毕昇对中国古代印刷技术影响深远，被誉为“印刷鼻祖”。 Due to his profound impact on printing technology in ancient China, Bi Sheng is honoured as the“Ancestor of Book Printing”． Step 3　连句成篇·达美文 Dear fellow students， I am very glad to introduce to you a person with the spirit of craftsmanship.This person is Bi Sheng, who invented the movable­type printing during the Northern Song Dynasty. Bi Sheng was employed in a printing shop and acquired in­depth knowledge of woodblock printing.Knowing the limitations of woodblock printing, he thought outside the box and created the movable­type printing by trial and error.This innovation led to the first­ever mass production of books. Due to his profound impact on printing technology in ancient China, Bi Sheng is honoured as the “Ancestor of Book Printing”． Thank you. 人物 描写 ①sedately 　 adv.安静地；慢悠悠地 ②modest adj.谦虚的，谦逊的 ③celebrity n．名人，明星 ④acclaim 　　 n.& v．表扬，赞赏 ⑤ambitious adj.宏大的，艰巨的；有野心的 ⑥artisan n．工匠 动作 描写 ①pose v.(使)摆好姿势 ②associate v．与……有关 ③dominate v.支配，控制，主宰 ④break new ground 开辟新的领域 描述 词汇 ①harsh adj.恶劣的，艰苦的，严峻的 ②prosperous adj.富裕的，繁荣的，兴旺的，发达的 ③painstaking adj.小心的；费尽心思的；精心的 ④precious adj.珍稀的；贵重的 [语段情景用]　他是焊接火箭“心脏”的中国第一人，他是“悍将”高凤林。 Gao Fenglin is a seasoned technician with decades of experience specializing in welding rocket engines.1.Recognized as the best artisan (被公认为最佳工匠) in welding this crucial part, Gao has successfully welded engines for more than 140 Chinese rockets. Gao Fenglin's remarkable contributions to China's aerospace industry have earned him national praise (用本单元词汇替换黑体词汇：2.acclaim), yet he always 3.remains modest (保持谦虚).In recent years, China has been 4.breaking new ground (开辟新的领域) in the aerospace industry, thanks in large part to the efforts of various technical professionals, especially skilled technicians like Gao Fenglin.Strongly believing that rich and successful (用本单元词汇替换黑体词汇：5.prosperous) China needs more talents for future aerospace advancements, Gao actively engages in training and leading younger generations, 6.bringing (bring) dozens of outstanding technical experts to the industry. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$